Unit7 Food Festival 单元写作指导-2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期易错易混考点精讲精练（仁爱科普版）

Unit7 Food Festival 单元写作指导 ★话题命题角度 五育并举 为了切实落实教育改革要求，促进学生“德智体美劳”全面发展，近几年全国中高考试题不同程度地增加了对“五育”的考查。此类话题有以下命题角度： 1.劳动教育； 2.体育和美育； 3.全面发展。 话题素材 话题词汇： sports运动、exercise锻炼、dance舞蹈、drawing绘画、honesty诚实、beauty美、culture文化、enjoy享受、take out the rubbish 倒垃圾、fold the clothes 叠衣服、sweep the floor扫地、make the bed整理床铺、 share the housework分担家务 something meaningful有意义的事情、respect the old 尊重老人、 look after / take care of 照顾、depend on 依赖、develop one's independence发展某人的独立性、 all-around development全面发展、basic life skills基本生活技能、the importance of ... ……的重要性、 have a better understanding 有更好的理解 二、话题佳句记背 “五育”的重要性 1.It is important for children to learn how to do chores and help their parents with housework. 学习如何做家务和帮助父母做家务对孩子们来说是很重要的。 2.By learning to do chores/housework， we can not only share our parents’ pressure but also develop our independence. 通过学习做家务，我们不仅可以分担父母的压力，而且可以培养我们的独立性。 3.Exercise is good for the body and mind. It also makes our brain smarter and more active. 运动对身心都有好处。它还使我们的大脑更聪明、更活跃。 4.Learning music helps improve children’s memory skills and develop their creativity. 学习音乐有助于提高儿童的记忆能力并培养他们的创造力。 5.Joining the reading club can not only help you to develop your reading habits， but also help you know better about the world. 加入阅读俱乐部不仅可以帮助你养成阅读习惯，还可以帮助你更好地了解世界。 态度方法 1. We should not be afraid of challenges. Instead， we should try our best to solve the problems in our study and life. 我们不应该害怕挑战。相反，我们应该全力以赴去解决学习和生活中的问题。 2. We should regard problems as challenges and spare no effort to deal with them. 我们应该把问题视为挑战，不遗余力地解决它们。 话题句式： 开头句 直接表明观点或点明话题 1. I think it is important for children to learn how to do chores and help their parents with housework. 2. Doing chores helps to develop children's independence and teaches them how to look after themselves. 3. Hello, everyone! I'd like to share my ideas about how to be an excellent teenager. 4. It is a fine tradition in China to respect the old and love the young. 5. It's necessary to do sports because it can help us keep healthy and active. 中间句 具体表现或建议 1.I enjoy myself in the world of colors every time I paint. 2. On weekends, I often help my parents with housework, such as doing the dishes and sweeping the floor. 3. To be excellent teenagers, it is very important for us to study hard and exercise actively. 4.I am outgoing and helpful. As long as others are in trouble, I will try my best to help them. 5.I like watching documentaries because I can learn a lot about nature, history and real life events from them. 结尾句 强调个人观点或升华主题 1. The earlier kids learn to be independent, the better it is for their future. 2. We should try to develop good labour skills and value the importance of labor through our labor experiences. 3. I think labour activities are not only educational but also useful.I'm sure the more life skills I have, the more independent I will be. ＞开头结尾模板 开头段 1.Summer vacation is a great time for family to get together. It’s good to help our parents do some housework. That can help understand each other better and show our love for them. 暑假是家人团聚的好时机。帮助父母做些家务是很好的。这可以帮助我们更好地了解彼此，表达我们对他们的爱。 2.Like Internet or other similar technologies， movies have such a big influence on us. 像互联网和其他类似的技术一样，电影对我们有如此大的影响。 3.As we all know， sports play an important part/role in our daily life. It helps build up our bodies. 众所周知，体育活动在我们的日常生活中起着重要的作用，它有助于增强我们的体质。 4.As we grow up， it is of great importance/ very important for us students to learn life skills to live better. 随着我们长大，对我们学生来说，学习生活技能以便更好地生活非常重要。 结尾段 1.Playing sports has made a big difference to my life. Firstly， it builds up my body and brain and develops my study ability. Secondly， through it I have made many friends who have the same interests. Besides， thanks to it， I become outgoing and active. 运动给我的生活带来了很大的影响。首先，它锻炼了我的身体和大脑，提高了我的学习能力。其次，通过它，我交了很多有相同兴趣的朋友。此外，多亏了它，我变得外向和活泼了。 2. Seeing my parents enjoy the delicious dishes， I am so proud of myself， and so are my parents. Labor not only brings me a lot of pleasure but also helps me reduce the burden of my parents. 看到我的父母享受美味的菜肴，我为自己感到骄傲，我的父母也是如此。劳动不仅给我带来了很多快乐，也帮助我减轻了父母的负担。 3. In a word， doing housework benefits me a lot and makes me better and better. 总之，做家务对我很有好处，让我越来越好。 ＞话题俗语谚语 1. Labor is often the father of pleasure. 勤劳常为快乐之源。 2. No pain， no gain. 不劳则无获。 3. Art gives us wings and leads us far， far away. 艺术给我们插上翅膀，把我们带到很远很远的地方。 4. Labor creates wealth， safety and happiness. 劳动创造财富、安全和幸福。 　为创造美好的生活，青少年在成长的过程中应不断学习新的生活技能（如烹饪、种植、救护方法……）。请根据以下要点和要求，以“Little life skills are a big help”为题，写一篇英语短文，在英语课堂上分享。 1.要点： 1）What life skill do you want to learn？ 2）Why do you want to learn this skill？ 3）How do you learn this skill？ 2.要求： 1）内容须涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥； 2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3）词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Little life skills are a big help Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily， we are supposed to learn more new skills. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ＞写作指导 1.内容：介绍自己想学习的生活技能，解释学习理由，谈论学习计划； 2.人称：第一人称； 3.时态：一般现在时。 ＞写作框架 ＞典例赏析 Little life skills are a big help Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily， we are supposed to learn more new skills. As for me， I would like to choose cooking，which is a basic skill in our daily life. 　(亮点点评：which引导的定语从句)　It’s wonderful to 　(亮点点评：It is ＋adj.＋ to do sth.句型)　create my own dishes. Besides，　(亮点点评：衔接词besides表明逻辑关系)　 learning to look after 　(亮点点评：动名词短语作主语)　my family is also my wish. In order to develop my cooking skill， I will first ask my mother for help. I think the dishes she cooks are the most delicious in the world. And it’s also a good idea to learn from the cooking videos online. I’m going to practice cooking three times a week. Little life skills are a big help. Only by learning them can we live a better life.　(亮点点评：only引导的倒装句)　 Let’s take action now. 1．（2025·云南昭通·一模）习近平主席在全国教育大会上强调，中学生要做德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。请以“How to Be A Good Teenager”为题， 结合实际生活， 从爱国、爱家、诚信、健康等方面阐述如何做一名新时代好少年。 要求： 1.语言流畅，书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80； 2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，如使用姓名，请用 Mike、Gina等英文名字，校名统一用 Guangming Middle School； 3.将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 How to Be A Good Teenager ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Be A Good Teenager In modern society, what does it mean to be a good teenager? First of all, we must love our country and home. We should be honest and keep our promise. And we should also be friendly to the people around us. Secondly, it’s our duty to study hard, and we should try our best to achieve our dreams. Next, taking exercise can make us keep healthy. After that, we are supposed to show love to nature and protect the environment. Animals are our friends, so we should get on well with them. What’s more, we should get into the habit of taking an active part in all kinds of activities, such as tidying up the classroom and helping our parents with housework. Come on! I believe we can make it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：注意语句通顺，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山。点明主题——在现代社会，做一个好青年意味着什么； 第二步，具体阐述。谈谈如何做一名新时代好青少年； 第三步，书写结语。表达决心。 [亮点词汇] ①be friendly with sb.对某人友好 ②be supposed to do sth.应该做某事 ③get on well with sb.与某人友好相处 [高分句型] ①Next, taking exercise can make us keep healthy.（动名词短语作主语） 2．（23-24八年级上·河南南阳·期中）中学生的健康成长需要五育并举，然而近几年来，因为疫情，中学生的身体素质有所下降，甚至心理健康也有问题。为此，学校准备组织一个以“健康”为主题的演讲活动，请你根据以下要点和要求准备一篇题为“How to be a happy and healthy student”的英语演讲稿。 1.要点： (1)如何通过锻炼和饮食保持健康…… (2)有好的生活习惯和兴趣…… (3)学会团队合作…… (4)提出健康生活的希望…… 2. 要求： (1)必须包含所有要点，可根据所学适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名，校名及地名； (3)书写规范，字数100字左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 How to be a happy and healthy student Boys and girls, As students, each of us wants to be a healthy and happy student. Then... ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】例文 How to be a happy and healthy student Boys and girls, As students, each of us wants to be a healthy and happy student. Then how can we be healthy and happy students? First, we should play sports one hour every day and eat healthy food like vegetables and fruit. These are good ways for us to keep healthy. Second, we’d better have good habits and interests in many things, for example, we must go to bed early and never stay up late. They can also make us healthy and happy. Third, we all know one player doesn’t make a team, so we should learn teamwork and help each other. In a word, I hope everyone can do these things. Then all of us will be healthy and happy. Do you think so? That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括四个方面的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述如何通过锻炼、饮食、生活习惯、兴趣和团队合作来保持健康和快乐； 第三步，最后提出希望并总结。 [亮点词汇] ①keep healthy保持健康 ②had better do sth最好做某事 ③make sb adj使某人处于…… [高分句型] ①Third, we all know one player doesn’t make a team, so we should learn teamwork and help each other.（so引导的因果并列句） ②In a word, I hope everyone can do these things.（宾语从句） 3．（23-24八年级下·河南郑州·期末）“恰同学少年，风华正茂；书生意气，挥斥方遒。”为践行国家教育部提出的“五育并举”，培养“德、智、体、美、劳”全面发展的时代新人，学校开展争当“五星少年”的活动。假如你是李平，请你写一份自荐报告。你已得到德智体三颗星，请说明理由。如严于律己，友爱互助；努力学习，多读书，有进步；健康饮食，身强体壮等等。还有美劳两颗星你仍需努力，你将怎么做。如你准备学习一门艺术，并将学会做家务等。 要求： 1.根据思维导图提示，可适当发挥。 2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 3.词数100字左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数) How to Become a Five-Star Student I’m Li Ping, I want to be a five-star student. Here is my report. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Become a Five-Star Student I’m Li Ping, I want to be a five-star student. Here is my report. I have already got three stars. First, I think it’s important for me to study hard. Reading more books is very useful, too. I have made great progress and got good grades. Secondly, I am strict with myself, and I often help my classmates when they have troubles. Thirdly, I eat healthily and exercise often. I think it’s good for my body. But I will still work hard at another two stars. So I want to develop a hobby like drums. I have joined the school drum club. I think I will learn it well. I will also learn to do chores at home, especially keeping my room clean and tidy because my mother often says, “What a mess your room is!” I hope I can become a five-star student. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；   第二步，介绍自己所得到的德智体三颗星，并说明理由； 第三步，还有美劳两颗星仍需努力，介绍将怎么做。 [亮点词汇]   ①make great progress取得巨大进步   ②be strict with对……要求严格   ③be good for对……有好处   ④develop a hobby培养一种爱好 [高分句型]   ①First, I think it’s important for me to study hard.（宾语从句，动词不定式作主语） ②Reading more books is very useful, too.（动名词作主语） 4．（2024·福建泉州·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“五育并举，全面发展”的中学生英语演讲比赛。请结合以下思维导图，以“How we behave (行为) well in our daily life”为题，写一篇英语演讲稿准备参赛。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1.必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 Hello, everyone! My topic today is “How we behave well in our daily life”. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Hello, everyone! My topic today is “How we behave well in our daily life”. First of all, we should be honest and friendly. Helping others also makes us feel good and have a sense of achievement. Secondly, we should work hard. We should enjoy and be good at learning. Thirdly, we should love sports and be active in exercising. Fourthly, we should learn drawing and enjoy music. Finally, we should clean up our school and help with housework. We can only become qualified middle school students if we develop all-round ability in each area. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析]   题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；   时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生需注意不要遗漏提示内容，并适当添加细节，同时注意字母大小写和标点符号的正确使用。   [写作步骤]   第一步：开篇点题，引出话题； 第二步：根据提示，介绍五个方面的良好行为习惯：诚实友善、努力学习、热爱运动、学习艺术、参与劳动； 第三步：号召大家一起养成良好的习惯，书写结语。 [亮点词汇]   ①be honest and friendly 诚实友善 ②have a sense of achievement 有成就感   ③be active in exercising 积极参与锻炼 ④help with housework 帮忙做家务 [高分句型] ①Helping others also makes us feel good and have a sense of achievement.  （动名词作主语）   ②We can only become qualified middle school students if we develop all-round ability in each area.  （if引导的条件状语从句） 5．（2024·江苏宿迁·一模）“立德树人、五育并举”的教育理念在我县落地生花，中学生学习及生活上有了很 大的变化。学校正在组织一个题为“How to Be a Good Youth”的演讲活动，请你根据下面提示，联系实际，写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈如何做一名新时代好少年。 注意： (1)短文要求条理清楚、行文连贯、段落分明； (2)词数90左右，征文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数； (3)文中不得出现真实校名、姓名。 How to Be a Good Youth Good morning, everybody! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you. 【答案】例文 How to Be a Good Youth Good morning, everybody! Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be a good youth. First, we should study hard and be creative. Second, we should take more physical exercise to keep our body and mind healthy. Third, we should be good at discovering the beauty in life and learn to love nature. We must take good care of our home. Fourth, we should also take an active part in all kinds of labor in and out of school. Finally, we should love our country as well as our family. We must keep our promise and be thankful to people who helped us. As long as we work hard, we will be excellent middle school students and good youths. That’s all. Thank you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据思维导图中的内容介绍应该如何成为新时代好少年，可适当添加细节，但要突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出演讲的主题； 第二步，从“学习、锻炼、爱好和劳动等”方面详细阐述如何做一名新时代好少年； 第三步，总结概括。 [亮点词汇] ①study hard努力学习 ②keep healthy保持健康 ③be good at擅长 ④take an active part in积极参与 ⑤all kinds of 各种各样的 ⑥keep our promise遵守承诺 ⑦be thankful to感恩 [高分句型] ①I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be a good youth.(“疑问词+不定式”作宾语) ②We must keep our promise and be thankful to people who helped us.(定语从句) ③As long as we work hard, we will be excellent middle school students and good youths.(条件状语从句) 6．（2024·江苏宿迁·二模）为贯彻“五育并举”的方针，提高学生的个人劳动素质，劳动课已经走进我们的课堂，各个学校都开展了丰富多彩的劳动技能培训和实践活动。最近阳光中学九年级组织学生到阳光农场进行一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的研学活动。假如你是王丽，请根据下面的图示要点，分享一下你的活动经历。 要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 内容必须包含表格中所有相关信息，并适当发挥； 3. 词数100字左右（作文开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 4. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。 Labor is the most glorious Hello, everybody! I’m Wang Li. I’m in Year 9 at Sunshine Middle School. I’m glad to share my study trip to Sunshine Farm. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We really hope that everyone can have chances to go on a study trip like that! 【答案】例文 Labor is the most glorious Hello, everybody! I’m Wang Li. I’m in Year 9 at Sunshine Middle School. I’m glad to share my study trip to Sunshine Farm. On April 5th, 2024, we arrived at the farm. The first thing we did was to learn about agriculture. The farmer showed us different crops and explained how they grow. After that, we got our hands dirty by digging the soil and planting some vegetables. For lunch, we didn’t just eat—we cooked! We picked fresh vegetables from the garden and made a delicious salad. After lunch, we cleaned up our mess. We picked up any litter we found and put it in the recycling bins. Then, we got to feed the farm animals, and they were so friendly. This trip taught me so much more than what I have learned in school. I realized that labor is not just hard work, but it also has educational value. It helps us understand the importance of teamwork and cooperation. I think every student should participate in labor practice activities like this. We really hope that everyone can have chances to go on a study trip like that! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍研学活动的时间和地点； 第二步，描述做过的活动； 第三步，讲述研学活动的收获和感受。 [亮点词汇] ①arrive at到达 ②show sb. sth.给某人看某物 ③clean up打扫干净 ④participate in参加 [高分句型] ①The farmer showed us different crops and explained how they grow.（how引导宾语从句） ②I think every student should participate in labor practice activities like this.（省略that的宾语从句） 7．（2023·福建三明·二模）“德、智、体、美、劳”五育并举，是我国新时代对青少年的要求，作为中学生，我们不仅要重视课本知识学习，而且要提高个人生活技能。请根据以下图文提示，写一篇题为Life Skills的英语短文，在校报“英语专栏”上发表，词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Life Skills Life skills are important to us. What life skills should we teenagers develop? And how? Here is my opinion. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Life skills Life skills are important to us. What life skills should we teenagers develop? And how? Here is my opinion. First, we should do our best to keep healthy. It’s a good idea to keep a balanced diet and take daily exercise. And be happy every day. Second, working with others is important. We need to work as a team. We should learn to get along well with others. Third, solve problems in different ways. Try to find out the ways alone or with others. Besides, learn to manage time efficiently. We can make a list of things we should do every day. Finally, learn some basic skills, such as cooking and keeping safe. We can ask our family for help or search the Internet. All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills, we will live a happier and healthier life. 【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中“生活技能”的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图。总述生活技能对我们很重要，设问青少年该培养什么生活技能以及如何培养； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“健康饮食、坚持锻炼、学会写作、解决问题”等几个方面重点介绍青少年需要具备的生活技能； 第三步，书写结语。呼吁青少年应该尽最大努力改善生活技能。 【亮点词汇】①do one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大努力做某事 ②get along well with sb.与某人和睦相处 ③find out查明，弄清 ④ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助 【高分句型】①It’s a good idea to keep a balanced diet and take daily exercise.（It作形式主语，动词不定式作真正主语） ②All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills, we will live a happier and healthier life.（if引导条件状语从句） 8．（2023·四川内江·中考真题）你校英语俱乐部将以“五育并举，全面发展”为主题举办中学生英语演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。 1. 德：诚信友善，乐于助人； 2. 智：勤奋努力，乐学善学； 3. 体：热爱运动，积极锻炼； 4. 美：学习绘画，爱好音乐； 5. 劳：清洁校园，分担家务。 注意： 1. 所写内容应包括以上要点，并结合自身情况，选择一至两点重点阐述，合理拓展； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! My topic today is on how students behave well in our daily life. First of all, we should be honest and friendly. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone! My topic today is on how students behave well in our daily life. First of all, we should be honest and friendly. Helping others also makes us feel good and have a sense of achievement. Secondly, we should work hard. We should enjoy and be good at learning. Thirdly, we should love sports and be active in exercising. Fourthly, we should learn drawing and enjoy music. Finally, we should clean up our school and help with housework. We can only become qualified middle school students if we develop all-round ability in areas such as morals, intelligence, physical fitness, work and aesthetics. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“五育并举，全面发展”为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出学生如何在日常生活中表现良好的主题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从德智体美劳五个方面重点介绍； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①in our daily life在我们的日常生活中 ②have a sense of achievement有成就感 ③be active in积极参与 ④such as例如 [高分句型] We can only become qualified middle school students if we develop all-round ability in areas such as morals, intelligence, physical fitness, work and aesthetics.（if引导的条件状语从句） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit7 Food Festival 单元写作指导 ★话题命题角度 五育并举 为了切实落实教育改革要求，促进学生“德智体美劳”全面发展，近几年全国中高考试题不同程度地增加了对“五育”的考查。此类话题有以下命题角度： 1.劳动教育； 2.体育和美育； 3.全面发展。 话题素材 话题词汇： sports运动、exercise锻炼、dance舞蹈、drawing绘画、honesty诚实、beauty美、culture文化、enjoy享受、take out the rubbish 倒垃圾、fold the clothes 叠衣服、sweep the floor扫地、make the bed整理床铺、 share the housework分担家务 something meaningful有意义的事情、respect the old 尊重老人、 look after / take care of 照顾、depend on 依赖、develop one's independence发展某人的独立性、 all-around development全面发展、basic life skills基本生活技能、the importance of ... ……的重要性、 have a better understanding 有更好的理解 二、话题佳句记背 “五育”的重要性 1.It is important for children to learn how to do chores and help their parents with housework. 学习如何做家务和帮助父母做家务对孩子们来说是很重要的。 2.By learning to do chores/housework， we can not only share our parents’ pressure but also develop our independence. 通过学习做家务，我们不仅可以分担父母的压力，而且可以培养我们的独立性。 3.Exercise is good for the body and mind. It also makes our brain smarter and more active. 运动对身心都有好处。它还使我们的大脑更聪明、更活跃。 4.Learning music helps improve children’s memory skills and develop their creativity. 学习音乐有助于提高儿童的记忆能力并培养他们的创造力。 5.Joining the reading club can not only help you to develop your reading habits， but also help you know better about the world. 加入阅读俱乐部不仅可以帮助你养成阅读习惯，还可以帮助你更好地了解世界。 态度方法 1. We should not be afraid of challenges. Instead， we should try our best to solve the problems in our study and life. 我们不应该害怕挑战。相反，我们应该全力以赴去解决学习和生活中的问题。 2. We should regard problems as challenges and spare no effort to deal with them. 我们应该把问题视为挑战，不遗余力地解决它们。 话题句式： 开头句 直接表明观点或点明话题 1. I think it is important for children to learn how to do chores and help their parents with housework. 2. Doing chores helps to develop children's independence and teaches them how to look after themselves. 3. Hello, everyone! I'd like to share my ideas about how to be an excellent teenager. 4. It is a fine tradition in China to respect the old and love the young. 5. It's necessary to do sports because it can help us keep healthy and active. 中间句 具体表现或建议 1.I enjoy myself in the world of colors every time I paint. 2. On weekends, I often help my parents with housework, such as doing the dishes and sweeping the floor. 3. To be excellent teenagers, it is very important for us to study hard and exercise actively. 4.I am outgoing and helpful. As long as others are in trouble, I will try my best to help them. 5.I like watching documentaries because I can learn a lot about nature, history and real life events from them. 结尾句 强调个人观点或升华主题 1. The earlier kids learn to be independent, the better it is for their future. 2. We should try to develop good labour skills and value the importance of labor through our labor experiences. 3. I think labour activities are not only educational but also useful.I'm sure the more life skills I have, the more independent I will be. ＞开头结尾模板 开头段 1.Summer vacation is a great time for family to get together. It’s good to help our parents do some housework. That can help understand each other better and show our love for them. 暑假是家人团聚的好时机。帮助父母做些家务是很好的。这可以帮助我们更好地了解彼此，表达我们对他们的爱。 2.Like Internet or other similar technologies， movies have such a big influence on us. 像互联网和其他类似的技术一样，电影对我们有如此大的影响。 3.As we all know， sports play an important part/role in our daily life. It helps build up our bodies. 众所周知，体育活动在我们的日常生活中起着重要的作用，它有助于增强我们的体质。 4.As we grow up， it is of great importance/ very important for us students to learn life skills to live better. 随着我们长大，对我们学生来说，学习生活技能以便更好地生活非常重要。 结尾段 1.Playing sports has made a big difference to my life. Firstly， it builds up my body and brain and develops my study ability. Secondly， through it I have made many friends who have the same interests. Besides， thanks to it， I become outgoing and active. 运动给我的生活带来了很大的影响。首先，它锻炼了我的身体和大脑，提高了我的学习能力。其次，通过它，我交了很多有相同兴趣的朋友。此外，多亏了它，我变得外向和活泼了。 2. Seeing my parents enjoy the delicious dishes， I am so proud of myself， and so are my parents. Labor not only brings me a lot of pleasure but also helps me reduce the burden of my parents. 看到我的父母享受美味的菜肴，我为自己感到骄傲，我的父母也是如此。劳动不仅给我带来了很多快乐，也帮助我减轻了父母的负担。 3. In a word， doing housework benefits me a lot and makes me better and better. 总之，做家务对我很有好处，让我越来越好。 ＞话题俗语谚语 1. Labor is often the father of pleasure. 勤劳常为快乐之源。 2. No pain， no gain. 不劳则无获。 3. Art gives us wings and leads us far， far away. 艺术给我们插上翅膀，把我们带到很远很远的地方。 4. Labor creates wealth， safety and happiness. 劳动创造财富、安全和幸福。 　为创造美好的生活，青少年在成长的过程中应不断学习新的生活技能（如烹饪、种植、救护方法……）。请根据以下要点和要求，以“Little life skills are a big help”为题，写一篇英语短文，在英语课堂上分享。 1.要点： 1）What life skill do you want to learn？ 2）Why do you want to learn this skill？ 3）How do you learn this skill？ 2.要求： 1）内容须涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥； 2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3）词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Little life skills are a big help Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily， we are supposed to learn more new skills. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ＞写作指导 1.内容：介绍自己想学习的生活技能，解释学习理由，谈论学习计划； 2.人称：第一人称； 3.时态：一般现在时。 ＞写作框架 ＞典例赏析 Little life skills are a big help Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily， we are supposed to learn more new skills. As for me， I would like to choose cooking，which is a basic skill in our daily life. 　(亮点点评：which引导的定语从句)　It’s wonderful to 　(亮点点评：It is ＋adj.＋ to do sth.句型)　create my own dishes. Besides，　(亮点点评：衔接词besides表明逻辑关系)　 learning to look after 　(亮点点评：动名词短语作主语)　my family is also my wish. In order to develop my cooking skill， I will first ask my mother for help. I think the dishes she cooks are the most delicious in the world. And it’s also a good idea to learn from the cooking videos online. I’m going to practice cooking three times a week. Little life skills are a big help. Only by learning them can we live a better life.　(亮点点评：only引导的倒装句)　 Let’s take action now. 1．（2025·云南昭通·一模）习近平主席在全国教育大会上强调，中学生要做德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。请以“How to Be A Good Teenager”为题， 结合实际生活， 从爱国、爱家、诚信、健康等方面阐述如何做一名新时代好少年。 要求： 1.语言流畅，书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80； 2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，如使用姓名，请用 Mike、Gina等英文名字，校名统一用 Guangming Middle School； 3.将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 How to Be A Good Teenager ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24八年级上·河南南阳·期中）中学生的健康成长需要五育并举，然而近几年来，因为疫情，中学生的身体素质有所下降，甚至心理健康也有问题。为此，学校准备组织一个以“健康”为主题的演讲活动，请你根据以下要点和要求准备一篇题为“How to be a happy and healthy student”的英语演讲稿。 1.要点： (1)如何通过锻炼和饮食保持健康…… (2)有好的生活习惯和兴趣…… (3)学会团队合作…… (4)提出健康生活的希望…… 2. 要求： (1)必须包含所有要点，可根据所学适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名，校名及地名； (3)书写规范，字数100字左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 How to be a happy and healthy student Boys and girls, As students, each of us wants to be a healthy and happy student. Then... ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 3．（23-24八年级下·河南郑州·期末）“恰同学少年，风华正茂；书生意气，挥斥方遒。”为践行国家教育部提出的“五育并举”，培养“德、智、体、美、劳”全面发展的时代新人，学校开展争当“五星少年”的活动。假如你是李平，请你写一份自荐报告。你已得到德智体三颗星，请说明理由。如严于律己，友爱互助；努力学习，多读书，有进步；健康饮食，身强体壮等等。还有美劳两颗星你仍需努力，你将怎么做。如你准备学习一门艺术，并将学会做家务等。 要求： 1.根据思维导图提示，可适当发挥。 2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 3.词数100字左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数) How to Become a Five-Star Student I’m Li Ping, I want to be a five-star student. Here is my report. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·福建泉州·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“五育并举，全面发展”的中学生英语演讲比赛。请结合以下思维导图，以“How we behave (行为) well in our daily life”为题，写一篇英语演讲稿准备参赛。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1.必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 Hello, everyone! My topic today is “How we behave well in our daily life”. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·江苏宿迁·一模）“立德树人、五育并举”的教育理念在我县落地生花，中学生学习及生活上有了很 大的变化。学校正在组织一个题为“How to Be a Good Youth”的演讲活动，请你根据下面提示，联系实际，写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈如何做一名新时代好少年。 注意： (1)短文要求条理清楚、行文连贯、段落分明； (2)词数90左右，征文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数； (3)文中不得出现真实校名、姓名。 How to Be a Good Youth Good morning, everybody! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you. 6．（2024·江苏宿迁·二模）为贯彻“五育并举”的方针，提高学生的个人劳动素质，劳动课已经走进我们的课堂，各个学校都开展了丰富多彩的劳动技能培训和实践活动。最近阳光中学九年级组织学生到阳光农场进行一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的研学活动。假如你是王丽，请根据下面的图示要点，分享一下你的活动经历。 要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 内容必须包含表格中所有相关信息，并适当发挥； 3. 词数100字左右（作文开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 4. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。 Labor is the most glorious Hello, everybody! I’m Wang Li. I’m in Year 9 at Sunshine Middle School. I’m glad to share my study trip to Sunshine Farm. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We really hope that everyone can have chances to go on a study trip like that! 7．（2023·福建三明·二模）“德、智、体、美、劳”五育并举，是我国新时代对青少年的要求，作为中学生，我们不仅要重视课本知识学习，而且要提高个人生活技能。请根据以下图文提示，写一篇题为Life Skills的英语短文，在校报“英语专栏”上发表，词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Life Skills Life skills are important to us. What life skills should we teenagers develop? And how? Here is my opinion. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2023·四川内江·中考真题）你校英语俱乐部将以“五育并举，全面发展”为主题举办中学生英语演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。 1. 德：诚信友善，乐于助人； 2. 智：勤奋努力，乐学善学； 3. 体：热爱运动，积极锻炼； 4. 美：学习绘画，爱好音乐； 5. 劳：清洁校园，分担家务。 注意： 1. 所写内容应包括以上要点，并结合自身情况，选择一至两点重点阐述，合理拓展； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! My topic today is on how students behave well in our daily life. First of all, we should be honest and friendly. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$