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学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 6 Trees 单元主题写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材，分层练习） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．树木是人类的好朋友，为我们付出很多，但我们却经常做出伤害它们的事情。植树节将至，我校举行爱护树木征文大赛，希望借此呼吁人们爱护树木。 要求：1. 条理清楚，语句通顺，可适当发挥； 2. 不少于70词，开头不计入总词数。 要点提示： 1. 树木提供氧气给我们呼吸，净化空气，吸收空气中对人体有害的气体； 2. 树木能防止水土流失； 3. 树木为我们带来很多便利，并举例说明； 4. 阐述保护树木的措施。 参考词汇：soil土壤  blow away流失 Trees are so important for us that we can’t live without them. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Trees are so important for us that we can’t live without them. As we all know, trees are friends of humans. We get a lot from them. They produce oxygen for us to breathe and keep the air cool and clean. Besides, they can also take in the harmful gases from the air. Trees can stop soil and water from blowing away. What’s more, they also make our lives more convenient. For example, a lot of our furniture is made of wood. Therefore, protecting trees becomes really important. We should stop people cutting down trees and plant as many trees as we can. It is something meaningful. We must take action from now on. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点中的“举例说明”；注意行文连贯、条理清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍树木的作用； 第二步，谈谈我们应该如何保护树木。 [亮点词汇] ①take in吸收 ②stop sb./sth. from doing sth.阻止……做某事 ③be made of 由……制成 ④cut down 砍倒 ⑤take action 采取行动 [高分句型] ①Trees are so important for us that we can’t live without them.（so ... that引导的结果状语从句） ②Therefore, protecting trees becomes really important.（动名词作主语） 2．植物对人类、动物以及周围环境都非常重要。假如你叫李华，请你根据以下思维导图的提示，以“The Importance of Plants”为题从三个方面谈论一下植物的重要性，呼吁大家爱护花草树木。 要求： (1)参考提示内容，可适当发挥； (2)语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； (3)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息； (4)词数不少于70。 The Importance of Plants We all know plants are very important for us humans, animals and the environment. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In a word, plants are so important for us. We should protect them and try our best to plant more of them. 【答案】参考范文 The Importance of Plants We all know plants are very important for us humans, animals and the environment. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you. First of all, for people, plants can meet our basic needs. We can get a lot of food from plants. Some plants can be made into medicine and clothing. They are also important for animals. Many animals live in the forest and they live on plants. Finally, trees and other plants help clean the air, so we can breathe the fresh air every day. They can also cover the soil to stop the wind and water from carrying the soil away. In a word, plants are so important for us. We should protect them and try our best to plant more of them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，从人类的角度，谈论植物的重要性； 第二步，从动物的角度，谈论植物的重要性； 第三步，从环境的角度，谈论植物的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①be important for对……重要 ②stop sb. from doing sth.阻止某人做某事 ③try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力做某事 [高分句型] ①We should protect them and try our best to plant more of them.（and连接两个并列成分） 3．为了帮助学生们亲近大自然，认识和了解植物，某中学决定成立植物俱乐部。假如你是该俱乐部的负责人，请你根据下面的提示信息及写作要求写一篇英语短文，介绍一下这个植物俱乐部。 The plant club 时间 每周六上午八点半 活动 ◆参加关于植物的课堂 ◆去野外观察植物 ◆…… 益处 ●学到更多关于植物的知识 ●结交有相同爱好的朋友 写作要求： 1.文中须包含表格中的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Do you love plants? Do you want to learn more about plants? Let me introduce our new club—the plant club to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Do you love plants? Do you want to learn more about plants? Let me introduce our new club—the plant club to you. We meet at 8:30 a. m. every Saturday morning. There are lots of different activities in the club. You can have classes about plants. You can go to the wild to watch different plants. You can even grow some plants yourself! In the club, you can learn more about plants and make new friends with the same hobby. You can also get close to nature and have a good time. Come and join us! Let’s share the joy of learning about plants together. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍植物俱乐部的时间和各项活动； 第二步，介绍参加植物俱乐部的益处； 第三步，对加入俱乐部表示欢迎。 [亮点词汇] ①get close to接近，靠近 ②have a good time玩得开心 ③the joy of ……的快乐 [高分句型] There are lots of different activities in the club. （there be句型） 4．假设你是“绿色家园”环保组织的成员李明，现在正在向初中学生讲述植物的重要性并倡议学生们要保护它们。请根据下列要点写一篇关于植物的重要性(The Importance of Plants)的作文，可适当发挥。 提示： (1)What plants can you see in our daily life? (2)What do plants need to grow well? (3)Why are plants important? (至少三点) 提示词：environment环境；provide提供 要求：1.短文必须包括所有提示内容； 2. 词数：不少于70，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 The Importance of Plants My name is Li Ming. I am lucky to be here. Now, I want to say something about plants. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Importance of Plants My name is Li Ming. I am lucky to be here. Now, I want to say something about plants. Plants are very common in our daily life. There are many trees and flowers around us. Plants need sunlight and rain to grow well. They are very important to us. First, plants can provide us with fruit, medicine, wood and so on. Second, plants provide oxygen for human beings and beautify the environment. Finally, plants can also provide homes and enough food for animals. So we should protect the environment, and we should plant trees every year. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍日常生活中的植物； 第二步，介绍植物需要什么才能长得好； 第三步，最后介绍植物很重要的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①provide sth for sb 为某人提供某物； ②produce oxygen 产生氧气； ③beautify the environment 美化环境。 [高分句型] ①Plants are very important to us for several reasons. (for several reasons 表示原因)； ②They produce oxygen, which is essential for our survival. (which引导的定语从句)。 5．假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Eric听说植物在中国传统文化中具有特殊意义，请你给他写一封信。介绍一种具有文化意义的植物——竹子。请根据导图和如下提示，完成这封信。 注意： 1.书信必须包括所有以下要点，并适当发挥。 2 .文中不得出现真实的人名和校名： 3.词数60左右：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Eric, I'm glad to introduce bamboo to you. In China, bamboo has a special meaning.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Eric, I’m glad to introduce bamboo to you. In China, bamboo has a special meaning. We always see bamboo as the symbol of persistence. Bamboo grows in the south of China. It can grow very tall. In spring, baby bamboo comes out of the earth, and we call it sun. We can cook dishes with it. It is very delicious. In summer and autumn, it grows taller and taller with green leaves. However, it isn’t like other trees. It’s hollow inside its body. People will cut bamboo down to make furniture when it is tall enough. People also like to draw bamboo to show its spirit and use bamboo to represent modesty and honesty. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：写作要点通过导图已给出，考生应根据写作要点，给艾瑞克写一封书信，给他介绍一种具有文化意义的植物——竹子。   [写作步骤]   第一步，承接给出的句子，介绍竹子的意义；   第二步，具体阐述竹子的生长环境、竹子的特点和用途； 第三步，介绍竹子的象征精神。   [亮点词汇]   ①introduce...to把……介绍给…… ②see...as把……视为 ③in the south of在……南部   [高分句型]   People will cut bamboo down to make furniture when it is tall enough. (when引导的时间状语从句) 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出真实的校名和姓名。 某英文网站正在开展以“植物的力量”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的一种植物，并说说你为什么喜欢它。 提示词语：tall, breathe, beautiful, food, joy 提示问题： · What is your favourite plant? Please describe (描述) it. · Why do you like it? The power of plants Plants are very important to us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The power of plants Plants are very important to us. People can breathe fresh air from plants. My favorite plants are trees. There are all kinds of trees. Some trees are tall and some are short. Some trees have beautiful flowers and bring joy to us. Some trees don’t have flowers, but they can provide fresh air for us. The trees are useful to us. Not only can they make food for animals and birds, but also they can protect the soil. Thanks to the plants around us, we can live on earth. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为说明文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中自己喜欢的植物的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的一种植物，并说说你为什么喜欢它。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“植物的重要性、自己喜欢的植物、原因等”几个方面重点介绍自己喜欢的植物的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达“多亏了我们周围的植物，我们才能生活在地球上。”感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①all kinds of各种各样的 ②provide sth for sb给某人提供某事 ③be useful to对……有用 ④thanks to幸亏，由于 [高分句型] ①There are all kinds of trees. (“there be”句型) ②Not only can they make food for animals and birds, but also they can protect the soil. (倒装句) 7．众所周知，树木对人类的生产和生活起着至关重要的作用，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,以“The importance of trees”为题，用英语写一篇短文，说明树木对人类的重要性。 注意： (1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 (2) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。 (3) 语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的标题已经给出，不计入总词数。 The importance of trees _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The importance of trees Trees play a crucial role in our lives and are essential for the health of our planet. First, they are vital for environmental protection. Trees absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen, which is necessary for life. They also help to reduce air pollution by trapping dust and other pollutants. Second, trees have numerous other uses. They provide us with wood, which is used for building homes, making furniture, and creating paper. Third, trees are a source of food and shelter for many animals, keeping the balance of our ecosystem. Let’s protect trees and make our earth more beautiful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总领全文，点明树的重要性； 第二步，说明树重要的原因，从功能、用途方面解释； 第三步，总结，呼吁大家保护树木。 [亮点词汇] ①play a crucial role in在……中起着至关重要的作用 ②absorb carbon dioxide吸收二氧化碳 ③release oxygen释放氧气 ④help to reduce air pollution帮助减少空气污染 ⑤provide us with给我们提供…… [高分句型] ①They provide us with wood, which is used for building homes, making furniture, and creating paper. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②Let’s protect trees and make our earth more beautiful. (祈使句) 8．假如你是李玉，春天来了，你想种植一些你最喜欢的植物。请你以“My Favourite Plant”为题用英语写一篇短文，向你的同学介绍一下这种植物。内容包括： 1．喜欢这种植物的原因（颜色、气味……）； 2．这种植物的特性或对我们的好处（可以作为装饰、药材……）； 3．你的看法。 注意： 1．词数为70左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4．标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：blossom (v. 开花)，lively (adj. 生机勃勃的) My Favourite Plant I’m Li Yu. Spring is coming. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Favourite Plant I’m Li Yu. Spring is coming. I want to grow some flowers. Of all the plants, I like the roses best because they are beautiful and smell sweet. When they blossom, they can make our room colourful, and the house looks very lively. The roses stand for love. Our family is full of love and joy, too. It is also a kind of medicine. My mother likes collecting the petals and making tea with them. All of my family love roses. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：为“一般现在时”； ③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，不可遗漏任何信息提示，适当添加细节，使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接已给出的开头，直入主题，表示自己想种花； 第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的花是玫瑰，并说明原因；介绍玫瑰的好处； 第三步，表达自己及家人对玫瑰的喜爱。 [亮点词汇] ① stand for 代表，象征 ② be full of 充满 ③ all of 所有…… [高分句型] ① Of all the plants, I like the roses best because they are beautiful and smell sweet. (because引导原因状语从句) ② When they blossom, they can make our room colourful, and the house looks very lively. (when引导时间状语从句) 9．同学们，大家都知道植物对我们人类、动物以及周围环境都非常重要，假如你叫李华，请你根据以下思维导图提示，以“The Importance of Plants”为题，从三个方面谈论一下植物的重要性，呼吁大家要爱护花草树木。 要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.词数：60左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 The Importance of Plants ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The Importance of Plants As we all know, plants are very important to humans, animals and the environment. First, plants mean a lot to humans. We can get food, medicine and clothing from them. Second, they are also important to animals. They give animals somewhere to live and food to eat. Third, plants are good for environment. Trees and other plants help clean the air. And they can also stop the wind and water from carrying the soil away. In a word, plants are important to us. Without plants, the natural world would be very different! Let’s protect them and try our best to plant more trees and other plants. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应确保包含所有要点，同时使文章逻辑连贯、结构清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引入主题，简要说明植物对人类、动物和环境的重要性； 第二步，从三个方面详细阐述植物的重要性； 第三步，呼吁大家爱护植物，并简要说明保护植物的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①stop...from doing...阻止……做…… ②carry away带走 ③in a word总而言之 ④try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力做某事 [高分句型] They give animals somewhere to live and food to eat. (动词不定式作后置定语) 10．请以“How important are trees to us?”为题写一篇短文，词数80左右。 应包括以下信息点： 1. 树木对人类很重要。 2. 树木保持空气凉爽和清洁。它们吸进有害的气体，制造氧气供我们呼吸。 3. 树木为我们提供很多东西：很多家具都是用木头做的；茶叶来自树的叶子；有的树木可用于中药，对抗疾病。 4. 我们要爱护树木，阻止人们砍伐树木。 点拨： 谋篇布局 1. 人称：第一、三人称 2. 时态：一般现在时 好词 1. keep the air cool and clean保持空气凉爽和清洁 2. take in吸收 3. produce oxygen制造氧气 4. be made of由……制成 5. Chinese medicine中药 好句 1. We should try our best to protect trees and stop people from cutting down trees.我们应尽力保护树木，阻止人们砍伐树木。 2. We can also use some trees in Chinese medicine to fight against diseases.我们也可以在中药里使用一些树木去对抗疾病。 3. Trees provide us with a lot of things.树木给我们提供很多东西。 牛刀小试 How important are trees to us? Trees are very important in our daily lives. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How important are trees to us? Trees are very important in our daily lives. They help us in many ways. Trees keep the air cool and clean. They take in harmful gases and produce oxygen for us to breathe. They help us fight against air pollution. Trees provide us with a lot of things. A lot of furniture is made of wood, such as tables, chairs, beds, etc. Tea comes from the leaves of trees. We can also use some trees in Chinese medicine to fight against diseases. So we should try our best to protect trees and stop people from cutting down trees. Trees are our friends on the Earth. They are very important to us. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“树木的重要性”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题，介绍树木的重要性； 第二步，详细介绍树木的好处有哪些； 第三步，点评树木的重要程度，首尾呼应。 [亮点词汇] ①take in吸收 ②provide…with给……提供 [高分句型] ①They take in harmful gases and produce oxygen for us to breathe.（and连接并列句） ②We can also use some trees in Chinese medicine to fight against diseases.（不定式作目的状语） 能力综合实践5篇 11．树木是人类的朋友。假如你是学校英语周报的编辑李华，植树节即将来临，请你根据以下提示，写一篇关于树的英语短文，呼吁同学们积极参加植树活动。 1. 植树节时，同学们需要校园里种树，有的人将负责挖坑，有的需要搬树苗，有的浇水。 2. 树木的用途广泛：请列举三点说明树木对人类的益处。 3. 列举一点保护树木的措施。 4. 呼吁同学们爱护树木，多参加植树活动。 注意： 1. 参考词汇：树苗 young tree；浇水 water 2. 词数80词左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何信息，否则不予评分。 Trees are humans’ friends. Tree Planting Day is coming soon.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Trees are humans’ friends. Tree Planting Day is coming soon. On Tree Planting Day, we need to plant trees in the school yard. Some will dig holes, some need to carry young trees and some need to water them. As we know, trees help us a lot. For one thing, they keep the air cool and clean. For another, they produce oxygen for us to breathe. What’s more, they can also stop water and soil from going away. Trees are the home to birds and other animals. They make our lives interesting. We should protect the trees and stop cutting down the trees. To make our Earth become more and more beautiful, let’s take good care of the trees and plant as many trees as we can! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，讲述植树节种树计划。 第二步，列举树木对人类的益处及保护树木的措施。 第三步，呼吁同学们爱护树木，多参加植树活动。 [亮点词汇] ① need to do需要做某事 ②keep the air cool and clean保持空气凉爽和清洁 ③stop sb. from doing sth.阻止某人做某事 [高分句型] ①To make our Earth become more and more beautiful, let’s take good care of the trees and plant as many trees as we can! (动词不定式表目的) ②We should protect the trees and stop cutting down the trees. (and连接两个并列成分) 12．树木在我们的生活中起着举足轻重的作用。它们使我们的生活丰富多彩。请你根据提示内容，写一篇60词以上的英语文章，介绍一下树木在我们生活中的作用。 提示：树木使空气清新。 树木产生氧气供我们呼吸。 我们可以用木头去造纸和铅笔等东西。 树木可以给我们提供美味的果实。 …… ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Trees are very important in our daily life. Trees can make the air fresh. We enjoy walking in the forest, because the air is very clean. We can get our foods from trees. And there are many animals living in the trees. We can use wood to make paper, pencils, and other things. We can build houses with trees. Trees can help us a lot. In a word, trees are very useful in our life. 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中树木在我们的生活中作用的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图借用“简单介绍树木在我们的生活中作用”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“树木使空气清新、树木产生氧气、可以用木头去造纸和铅笔等东西等”几个方面重点介绍树木在我们的生活中作用的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语表达“树木对我们的生活很重要的”的感叹。 [亮点词汇] ①daily life日常生活 ②in a word总而言之 ③ live in居住 [高分句型] ①We enjoy walking in the forest, because the air is very clean. （because引导的原因状语从句） ②And there are many animals living in the trees.（there be句型） 13．3月12日是植树节，假设你们班组织去公园植树。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍此次活动并表达你的感想。 提示： （1）What did you help do in the activity? （2）Why are trees so important?（至少两点） （3）What should you do next? 注意： （1）短文须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 （2）词数70个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 My classmates and I went to the park to plant trees on March 12th. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My classmates and I went to the park to plant trees on March 12th. I helped carry water for the trees and then watered them. I was tired but very happy. As we know, trees are important. Trees can not only make the environment beautiful, but help clean the air. It’s good for our health. What’s more, trees can stop the wind and sand. And, we can use them to build houses and make paper. Next I plan to be a volunteer to tell more people the importance of protecting trees. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍此次植树活动，并表达你的感想，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍在植树活动中你做了什么； 第二步，介绍为什么树很重要； 第三步，介绍接下来你应该做什么。 [亮点词汇] ①be good for对……有好处 ②plan to do sth.计划做某事 ③the importance of……的重要性 [高分句型] Next I plan to be a volunteer to tell more people the importance of protecting trees. (动词不定式作宾语以及目的状语) 14．假如你是张淳，请你给同学们写一封倡议书，号召大家多种树、爱护树。倡议书中要指出树木有很多益处，如净化空气、美化城市、阻挡风沙、吹走泥土等。 要求： 1. 书写规范，语句通顺，行文流畅，结构完整，语法正确； 2. 不少于70词。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear class, Trees are very important to us. They not only provide us with wood and other products, but also can stop the water from carrying the earth away and stop the wind from blowing the earth away. So trees can prevent flood and drought happening. Trees can also clean the air and make our city look more beautiful. All of us must try our best to plant trees every year. Let’s work together to plant more trees and protect them. Yours, Zhang Chun 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍树木得重要性； 第二步，号召多种树。 [亮点词汇] ①be important to对……重要 ②provide sb with sth给某人提供某物 ③stop…from doing sth阻止做某事 [高分句型] ①They not only provide us with wood and other products, but also can stop the water from carrying the earth away and stop the wind from blowing the earth away.（“not only…but also”结构，动名词作宾语） ②Let’s work together to plant more trees and protect them.（祈使句） 15．请根据所给英语提示，以“Tree Planting Day”为题，描述你们学校举办的一次有意义的活动。 提示：1. What do you know about Tree Planting Day? 2. How do you plant trees? 3. How do you feel after planting trees? 要求：1. 内容充实、上下文连贯、用语规范。表达准确。 2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名。 3. 词数80左右。 Tree Planting Day _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Tree Planting Day March 12th is Tree Planting Day. This year our school bought enough trees. On that day, we didn’t have classes. All the teachers and students planted trees around our school. We began to plant trees as soon as we got to school. Some students dug holes. Some students put the trees into the holes. The others put the earth back into the holes. Then we pushed the earth hard with our feet. At last, we watered the trees. It’s pleasant to plant trees. Since then, we have looked after the trees carefully, and the trees grow very well. They make our school more beautiful. In a word, if you want to make the air clean, please try your best to protect the environment and plant more trees. 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出学校组织的有关植树活动的情况以及种树的过程及感受等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时和现在时相结合；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 1 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 6 Trees 单元主题写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材，分层练习） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．树木是人类的好朋友，为我们付出很多，但我们却经常做出伤害它们的事情。植树节将至，我校举行爱护树木征文大赛，希望借此呼吁人们爱护树木。 要求：1. 条理清楚，语句通顺，可适当发挥； 2. 不少于70词，开头不计入总词数。 要点提示： 1. 树木提供氧气给我们呼吸，净化空气，吸收空气中对人体有害的气体； 2. 树木能防止水土流失； 3. 树木为我们带来很多便利，并举例说明； 4. 阐述保护树木的措施。 参考词汇：soil土壤  blow away流失 Trees are so important for us that we can’t live without them. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．植物对人类、动物以及周围环境都非常重要。假如你叫李华，请你根据以下思维导图的提示，以“The Importance of Plants”为题从三个方面谈论一下植物的重要性，呼吁大家爱护花草树木。 要求： (1)参考提示内容，可适当发挥； (2)语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； (3)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息； (4)词数不少于70。 The Importance of Plants We all know plants are very important for us humans, animals and the environment. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In a word, plants are so important for us. We should protect them and try our best to plant more of them. 3．为了帮助学生们亲近大自然，认识和了解植物，某中学决定成立植物俱乐部。假如你是该俱乐部的负责人，请你根据下面的提示信息及写作要求写一篇英语短文，介绍一下这个植物俱乐部。 The plant club 时间 每周六上午八点半 活动 ◆参加关于植物的课堂 ◆去野外观察植物 ◆…… 益处 ●学到更多关于植物的知识 ●结交有相同爱好的朋友 写作要求： 1.文中须包含表格中的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Do you love plants? Do you want to learn more about plants? Let me introduce our new club—the plant club to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假设你是“绿色家园”环保组织的成员李明，现在正在向初中学生讲述植物的重要性并倡议学生们要保护它们。请根据下列要点写一篇关于植物的重要性(The Importance of Plants)的作文，可适当发挥。 提示： (1)What plants can you see in our daily life? (2)What do plants need to grow well? (3)Why are plants important? (至少三点) 提示词：environment环境；provide提供 要求：1.短文必须包括所有提示内容； 2. 词数：不少于70，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 The Importance of Plants My name is Li Ming. I am lucky to be here. Now, I want to say something about plants. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Eric听说植物在中国传统文化中具有特殊意义，请你给他写一封信。介绍一种具有文化意义的植物——竹子。请根据导图和如下提示，完成这封信。 注意： 1.书信必须包括所有以下要点，并适当发挥。 2 .文中不得出现真实的人名和校名： 3.词数60左右：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Eric, I'm glad to introduce bamboo to you. In China, bamboo has a special meaning.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出真实的校名和姓名。 某英文网站正在开展以“植物的力量”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的一种植物，并说说你为什么喜欢它。 提示词语：tall, breathe, beautiful, food, joy 提示问题： · What is your favourite plant? Please describe (描述) it. · Why do you like it? The power of plants Plants are very important to us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．众所周知，树木对人类的生产和生活起着至关重要的作用，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,以“The importance of trees”为题，用英语写一篇短文，说明树木对人类的重要性。 注意： (1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 (2) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。 (3) 语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的标题已经给出，不计入总词数。 The importance of trees _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假如你是李玉，春天来了，你想种植一些你最喜欢的植物。请你以“My Favourite Plant”为题用英语写一篇短文，向你的同学介绍一下这种植物。内容包括： 1．喜欢这种植物的原因（颜色、气味……）； 2．这种植物的特性或对我们的好处（可以作为装饰、药材……）； 3．你的看法。 注意： 1．词数为70左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4．标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：blossom (v. 开花)，lively (adj. 生机勃勃的) My Favourite Plant I’m Li Yu. Spring is coming. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．同学们，大家都知道植物对我们人类、动物以及周围环境都非常重要，假如你叫李华，请你根据以下思维导图提示，以“The Importance of Plants”为题，从三个方面谈论一下植物的重要性，呼吁大家要爱护花草树木。 要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.词数：60左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 The Importance of Plants ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．请以“How important are trees to us?”为题写一篇短文，词数80左右。 应包括以下信息点： 1. 树木对人类很重要。 2. 树木保持空气凉爽和清洁。它们吸进有害的气体，制造氧气供我们呼吸。 3. 树木为我们提供很多东西：很多家具都是用木头做的；茶叶来自树的叶子；有的树木可用于中药，对抗疾病。 4. 我们要爱护树木，阻止人们砍伐树木。 点拨： 谋篇布局 1. 人称：第一、三人称 2. 时态：一般现在时 好词 1. keep the air cool and clean保持空气凉爽和清洁 2. take in吸收 3. produce oxygen制造氧气 4. be made of由……制成 5. Chinese medicine中药 好句 1. We should try our best to protect trees and stop people from cutting down trees.我们应尽力保护树木，阻止人们砍伐树木。 2. We can also use some trees in Chinese medicine to fight against diseases.我们也可以在中药里使用一些树木去对抗疾病。 3. Trees provide us with a lot of things.树木给我们提供很多东西。 牛刀小试 How important are trees to us? Trees are very important in our daily lives. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践5篇 11．树木是人类的朋友。假如你是学校英语周报的编辑李华，植树节即将来临，请你根据以下提示，写一篇关于树的英语短文，呼吁同学们积极参加植树活动。 1. 植树节时，同学们需要校园里种树，有的人将负责挖坑，有的需要搬树苗，有的浇水。 2. 树木的用途广泛：请列举三点说明树木对人类的益处。 3. 列举一点保护树木的措施。 4. 呼吁同学们爱护树木，多参加植树活动。 注意： 1. 参考词汇：树苗 young tree；浇水 water 2. 词数80词左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何信息，否则不予评分。 Trees are humans’ friends. Tree Planting Day is coming soon.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．树木在我们的生活中起着举足轻重的作用。它们使我们的生活丰富多彩。请你根据提示内容，写一篇60词以上的英语文章，介绍一下树木在我们生活中的作用。 提示：树木使空气清新。 树木产生氧气供我们呼吸。 我们可以用木头去造纸和铅笔等东西。 树木可以给我们提供美味的果实。 …… ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．3月12日是植树节，假设你们班组织去公园植树。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍此次活动并表达你的感想。 提示： （1）What did you help do in the activity? （2）Why are trees so important?（至少两点） （3）What should you do next? 注意： （1）短文须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 （2）词数70个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 My classmates and I went to the park to plant trees on March 12th. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．假如你是张淳，请你给同学们写一封倡议书，号召大家多种树、爱护树。倡议书中要指出树木有很多益处，如净化空气、美化城市、阻挡风沙、吹走泥土等。 要求： 1. 书写规范，语句通顺，行文流畅，结构完整，语法正确； 2. 不少于70词。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．请根据所给英语提示，以“Tree Planting Day”为题，描述你们学校举办的一次有意义的活动。 提示：1. What do you know about Tree Planting Day? 2. How do you plant trees? 3. How do you feel after planting trees? 要求：1. 内容充实、上下文连贯、用语规范。表达准确。 2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名。 3. 词数80左右。 Tree Planting Day _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 11 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$