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学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 5 Wild animals 单元主题（野生动物）写作满分范文15篇 （紧贴新教材，分层练习） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．假如中国国宝大熊猫是你最喜爱的动物，请以“My favorite animals—giant pandas”为题，根据下面提示写篇短文。内容包括： 1.你为什么喜欢它们(cute, fiendly)，它们来自哪里(China)； 2.它们有哪些特征(white and black fur，大眼睛、圆耳朵)； 3.特点和爱好(lazy, bamboo，爬树)； 4.大熊猫是中国国宝(national treasure)，友谊(friendship)的象征，目前仅存大约2000只，因此我们会尽力保护(protect)它们； 5.开头已经给出，其他可以适当发挥。70~80词。 My favorite animals—giant pandas There are many kinds of animals in the world, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．You want more people to know about the pygmy blue whale and the zebra shark and do something to help them after reading some materials. Please choose one of them and post an appeal for protecting it on social media. You are supposed to include: （1）Tell your writing purpose clearly. （2）Give at least one piece of advice that people can take to help. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假设你是李华，要参加一个主题为“Animals in Danger”的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁人们保护濒危动物。 内容包括：1. 介绍世界上有哪些濒危动物 （至少两种） 以及它们濒危的原因 （至少两点）； 2. 谈谈保护濒危动物的措施 （至少两点）； 3. 呼吁大家保护濒危动物。 要求：1. 包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得透露个人信息； 3. 词数60左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Animals in Danger Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. Today I am going to talk about animals in danger. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假如你是李文，你的外教罗宾老师 (Mr Robin) 让你用英语向同学们介绍一种动物。以下是你找到的关于金丝猴的资料，请根据下表，写一篇不少于60词的演讲稿，向大家介绍一下金丝猴。 名称 金丝猴 (golden monkey) 颜色 黄色或黑色 分布 中国南部 特点 群居 (live in groups)；食树叶和水果 现状 人类的捕杀导致它们处于危险之中 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假定你是李华，阅读以下邮件并回复。词数80 左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 To： LiHua@mail.com Subject： Let’s protect wild animals in danger Dear Li Hua, How is everything going? I’m working on a project called “Let’s protect wild animals in danger” these days. Are you interested in wild animals? What’s your favourite wild animal? Is it in danger? Do you know why it is in danger and what we can do to help it? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, John Dear John, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．以“My Favorite Animal”为题，写一篇英语短文，内容包括： 1.你最喜欢的动物是什么； 2.它来自哪里； 3.它的外貌特征； 4.你喜欢它的原因。 要求： 1.包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，语法正确； 3.词数60—80词。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如你是刘娜，本周你们学校英语角活动是“介绍并呼吁同学们保护珍惜动物——中国大鲵”。请根据下列图片及提示信息，用英语写一篇短文。词数70-90。 参考词汇：  limb 肢  on land 在陆地上     Do you know the animal in the picture? It is the Chinese giant salamander. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假设你是李明，你的美国笔友Steve上周在报纸上读了关于东北虎 (manchurian tiger) 正濒临灭绝的文章，他想制作一份海报，让更多的人了解保护野生动物的重要性。他写了封邮件向你寻求建议，请你根据Steve的邮件内容向他回复。 Dear Li Ming, How are you? I hope everything goes on well with you. Last week, I read an article about manchurian tigers from the newspaper. I’m terribly sorry to find that they are endangered animals now! I want to design a poster about them. Would you please tell me how to do it if you were me? ●What slogan (标语) will you choose to write? ●Do you think it is meaningful to make such a poster? Why? Please email me whenever you are not busy. Best wishes! Steve ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友 Tom 想了解你最喜欢的动物。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件，介绍你最喜欢的动物 —— 大熊猫。 要点：大熊猫的外貌（黑白相间，圆脑袋，短尾巴等）； 大熊猫的生活习性（喜欢吃竹子，喜欢睡觉等）； 大熊猫面临的问题（栖息地减少，人类捕杀等）； 呼吁大家保护大熊猫。 要求：包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯； 词数：70 - 90 词。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom对中国的动物保护很感兴趣。请你根据以下要点，给他写一封邮件，介绍中国在动物保护方面所做的努力。 要点：1.中国有很多珍稀动物，如大熊猫、扬子鳄(Chinese alligator)等；         2.动物面临的危险，如栖息地丧失、非法捕猎等；         3.中国采取的保护措施，如建立自然保护区(nature reserves)、制定法律(make laws)、开展宣传活动(launch campaigns)等；         4.你的感受或建议 要求： 包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯； 词数：100 词左右。邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I'm glad to tell you something about animal protection in China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 能力综合实践5篇 11．动物是我们的朋友，它们和我们共享一个地球，但有一些野生动物却濒临灭绝。假如你是李明，你们学校的校报正在征集关于“保护野生动物”的文章。请你以“Save the wild animals”为题，根据以下要点和要求，写一篇英语短文进行投稿，呼吁大家保护野生动物。 要点：1. 野生动物的生存现状； 2. 野生动物濒临灭绝的原因； 3. 保护野生动物的建议。 要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 2. 词数80左右。 Save the wild animals _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．英语老师要求同学们在下一节英语课中介绍自己最喜欢的动物。请你根据下面表格的内容提示，以My favourite animals为题，用英语写一篇短文。词数80～100。 名称：白老虎 外貌：皮毛黑白相间；蓝色眼睛 能力：跑得不快；善于游泳 食物：各种动物 看法：数量不多，应该保护它们 My favourite animals ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．假如你叫Linda，请根据下面表格中所提供的信息，给你的笔友John写一封电子邮件，介绍一下我国华南虎的情况。 内容提示： Place to live the south of China Appearance and trait (特点) yellow and black, long tail, strong and fierce (凶猛的) Ability catch small animals, run fast, swim Problem People kill them for their fur. People cut down trees... Solution (解决办法) stop killing, stop cutting down trees... 注意事项： 1.短文应包括所有的内容提示，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息； 3.词数70左右，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear John, Do you know South China tigers? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Linda 14．动物是人类的朋友，然而很多动物却处于危险之中，濒临灭绝。雪豹 (snow leopard) 就是其中之一。请根据提示，写一篇短文倡议人们保护雪豹。 Habitat in the mountains Food sheep, rabbits and other small animals Dangers kill for fur (皮毛) ; forests disappear... Protection set up nature parks... 要求： 1. 条理清晰，意思连贯； 2. 包含所给的所有信息，可适当发挥； 3. 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Boys and girls, Snow leopards are our friends, but how much do you learn about them? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．动物是我们人类的朋友，在我们的生活中占很重要的位置。请你以“Mountain Gorillas”为题，参考以下表格，写一篇英语短文简单介绍一下山地大猩猩，并呼吁人们保护动物。 Mountain gorillas (山地大猩猩) Habitat (栖息地) central Africa Situation in great danger Characters gentle and clever Dian Fossey (a scientist) be interested in mountain gorillas; do a lot for the animals; write books 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)； 3. 词数：不少于70词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Mountain Gorillas The wild mountain gorillas live in the central Africa. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 9 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 5 Wild animals 单元主题（野生动物）写作满分范文15篇 （紧贴新教材，分层练习） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．假如中国国宝大熊猫是你最喜爱的动物，请以“My favorite animals—giant pandas”为题，根据下面提示写篇短文。内容包括： 1.你为什么喜欢它们(cute, fiendly)，它们来自哪里(China)； 2.它们有哪些特征(white and black fur，大眼睛、圆耳朵)； 3.特点和爱好(lazy, bamboo，爬树)； 4.大熊猫是中国国宝(national treasure)，友谊(friendship)的象征，目前仅存大约2000只，因此我们会尽力保护(protect)它们； 5.开头已经给出，其他可以适当发挥。70~80词。 My favorite animals—giant pandas There are many kinds of animals in the world, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: My favorite animals—giant pandas There are many kinds of animals in the world, but I like pandas best. They are from China. I like pandas because they are cute and friendly. They have white and black fur. And they have big eyes and round ears. They look a little lazy but very cute. They like eating bamboo. They also like climbing trees. So they are lovey. Giant pandas are China’s national treasure. They are the symbol of friendship. There are only about 2,000 pandas now. We must try our best to protect them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：题目要求根据提示介绍自己最喜欢的动物——大熊猫，包括它们的外貌、特点、爱好，以及目前的状况等，最后表达对熊猫的保护。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。 [写作步聚] 第一步，开篇点题； 第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍熊猫的外貌、特点、爱好，以及目前的状况； 第三步，最后表达对熊猫的保护。 [亮点词汇] ①like...best 最喜欢…… ②the symbol of ……的象征 ③try one’s best 尽某人最大努力 [高分句型] ①I like pandas because they are cute and friendly.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②There are only about 2,000 pandas now.（用there be句型表示某地有某物） 2．You want more people to know about the pygmy blue whale and the zebra shark and do something to help them after reading some materials. Please choose one of them and post an appeal for protecting it on social media. You are supposed to include: （1）Tell your writing purpose clearly. （2）Give at least one piece of advice that people can take to help. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: Today, I’ve learned about the zebra shark, a species almost died out because of overfishing. Luckily, a project called STAR is helping them return to the ocean. I hope people can protect wild animals instead of killing them for food or money. Animals are our friends. As the smartest creature on the earth, it’s our responsibility to save all the species. Besides, if you’re just a student like me, you can at least tell your parents and friends about this extraordinary project and maybe donate some money to support it. Let’s create a better world together and save more wild animals! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所有要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，明确写作目的，即呼吁保护某种动物； 第二步，提出具体的保护建议； 第三步，书写结语，鼓励读者采取行动。 [亮点词汇] ①die out灭绝 ②at least至少 [高分句型] ①I hope people can protect wild animals instead of killing them for food or money. (省略that的宾语从句) ②Besides, if you’re just a student like me, you can at least tell your parents and friends about this extraordinary project and maybe donate some money to support it.  (if引导条件状语从句) 3．假设你是李华，要参加一个主题为“Animals in Danger”的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁人们保护濒危动物。 内容包括：1. 介绍世界上有哪些濒危动物 （至少两种） 以及它们濒危的原因 （至少两点）； 2. 谈谈保护濒危动物的措施 （至少两点）； 3. 呼吁大家保护濒危动物。 要求：1. 包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得透露个人信息； 3. 词数60左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Animals in Danger Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. Today I am going to talk about animals in danger. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Animals in Danger Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. Today I am going to talk about animals in danger. Many animals are in danger in the world today, such as tigers and pandas and so on. They are in danger because people cut down trees, and there are fewer and fewer places for them to live in. Some people kill animals for their fur and meat. We all need to help animals to live in peace. So it’s very important to protect them. We can raise some money at school to help protect the animals in danger. We can stop people from killing animals. If each of us can love animals, the world will be more beautiful. Thanks for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时态； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出关于濒危动物的话题； 第二步，具体阐述有哪些濒危动物，濒危的原因及采取的措施； 第三步，书写结语，呼吁人们一起保护动物。 [亮点词汇] ①be in danger处于危险之中 ②such as例如 ③cut down砍倒 ④stop sb. from doing sth.阻止某人做某事 ⑤Thanks for为……而感谢 [高分句型] ①They are in danger because people cut down trees, and there are fewer and fewer places for them to live in. (原因状语从句） ②If each of us can love animals, the world will be more beautiful.（条件状语从句) 4．假如你是李文，你的外教罗宾老师 (Mr Robin) 让你用英语向同学们介绍一种动物。以下是你找到的关于金丝猴的资料，请根据下表，写一篇不少于60词的演讲稿，向大家介绍一下金丝猴。 名称 金丝猴 (golden monkey) 颜色 黄色或黑色 分布 中国南部 特点 群居 (live in groups)；食树叶和水果 现状 人类的捕杀导致它们处于危险之中 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Good morning, everyone! Today, I want to tell you one of the animals in China—the golden monkey. Golden monkeys live in the south of China. Some of them are yellow and some are black. They live in groups. They like eating leaves and fruit. People kill many golden monkeys, so they are in great danger now. We must help save them. 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：讲稿 时态：一般现在时 提示：根据提供的关于金丝猴的资料，写演讲稿，介绍金丝猴的特点和现状。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引入话题，介绍金丝猴的名称和分布。 第二步，描述金丝猴的颜色、生活习性和食物。 第三步，说明金丝猴的现状，呼吁保护。 [亮点词汇] ① golden monkey 金丝猴 ② live in groups 群居 ③ in great danger 处于极大危险中 [高分句型] People kill many golden monkeys, so they are in great danger now. (so连接表因果关系的并列句) 5．假定你是李华，阅读以下邮件并回复。词数80 左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 To： LiHua@mail.com Subject： Let’s protect wild animals in danger Dear Li Hua, How is everything going? I’m working on a project called “Let’s protect wild animals in danger” these days. Are you interested in wild animals? What’s your favourite wild animal? Is it in danger? Do you know why it is in danger and what we can do to help it? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, John Dear John, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear John, I’m very interested in wild animals. My favourite wild animal is the panda. It is in danger. The main reason is that their living places are becoming smaller and smaller due to deforestation and human activities. Also, pandas have a low reproduction rate. To help pandas, we can support panda conservation organizations. We can also raise public awareness of panda protection by spreading information about them. And we should try to reduce our impact on their habitats. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先介绍自己喜欢的野生动物为大熊猫； 第二步，具体阐述大熊猫的生存现状； 第三步，阐述应该如何做能帮助野生动物。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②in danger在危险中 ③try to do努力做某事 [高分句型] The main reason is that their living places are becoming smaller and smaller due to deforestation and human activities.（that引导的表语从句） 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．以“My Favorite Animal”为题，写一篇英语短文，内容包括： 1.你最喜欢的动物是什么； 2.它来自哪里； 3.它的外貌特征； 4.你喜欢它的原因。 要求： 1.包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，语法正确； 3.词数60—80词。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favorite Animal My favorite animal is the panda. Pandas are from China. They have black and white fur and round faces. They look very cute with their short tails. Pandas spend most of their time eating bamboo. They are not only cute but also very precious. I like them because they are really lovely and they are a symbol of our country. In a word, pandas are so special that I like them very much. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你最喜欢的动物是什么，它来自哪里以及它的外貌特征； 第二步，说明你喜欢它的原因； 第三步，简单总结。 [亮点词汇] ①cute可爱的 ②precious珍贵的 ③symbol象征 ④in a word总而言之 [高分句型] I like them because they are really lovely and they are a symbol of our country.（because引导的原因状语从句） 7．假如你是刘娜，本周你们学校英语角活动是“介绍并呼吁同学们保护珍惜动物——中国大鲵”。请根据下列图片及提示信息，用英语写一篇短文。词数70-90。 参考词汇：  limb 肢  on land 在陆地上     Do you know the animal in the picture? It is the Chinese giant salamander. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Do you know the animal in the picture? It is the Chinese giant salamander. People also call it wawayu in Chinese. It is usually black or brown. With small eyes, a big mouth and four limbs, it looks cute and quiet. The Chinese giant salamander can live both in water and on land. It sleeps in the day and goes out at night to look for food. The small animals in water are its favourites. There aren’t many Chinese giant salamanders in China now and they are in danger. Let’s save them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，围绕“介绍并呼吁大家保护中国大鲵”这一主题写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明主题并介绍中国大鲵； 第二步，分条介绍中国大鲵的外形、居住地、生活习性以及饮食喜好； 第三步，呼吁大家保护中国大鲵。 [亮点词汇] ①both…and………和…… ②be in danger处于危险之中 [高分句型] ①It sleeps in the day and goes out at night to look for food.（动词不定式作目的状语） 8．假设你是李明，你的美国笔友Steve上周在报纸上读了关于东北虎 (manchurian tiger) 正濒临灭绝的文章，他想制作一份海报，让更多的人了解保护野生动物的重要性。他写了封邮件向你寻求建议，请你根据Steve的邮件内容向他回复。 Dear Li Ming, How are you? I hope everything goes on well with you. Last week, I read an article about manchurian tigers from the newspaper. I’m terribly sorry to find that they are endangered animals now! I want to design a poster about them. Would you please tell me how to do it if you were me? ●What slogan (标语) will you choose to write? ●Do you think it is meaningful to make such a poster? Why? Please email me whenever you are not busy. Best wishes! Steve ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Steve, I’m glad to hear from you. Here are my suggestions. First, I will draw a picture of the manchurian tiger on the poster. Then, I’ll write the number of them to tell people about their terrible situation. Next, I’ll write about why we should protect them. Finally, I’ll write about how to protect them. I will choose the slogan “Everyone should protect manchurian tigers” as the top of the poster. I think it’s very meaningful to make such a poster because more people will pay more attention to protecting them. And protecting animals is our responsibility. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：本文应使用“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，给出建议； 第二步，根据邮件中的问题，给出具体的建议； 第三步，发表自己对保护东北虎的看法，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①the number of……的数量 [高分句型] ①I think it’s very meaningful to make such a poster because more people will pay more attention to protecting them. （because引导的原因状语从句） 9．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友 Tom 想了解你最喜欢的动物。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件，介绍你最喜欢的动物 —— 大熊猫。 要点：大熊猫的外貌（黑白相间，圆脑袋，短尾巴等）； 大熊猫的生活习性（喜欢吃竹子，喜欢睡觉等）； 大熊猫面临的问题（栖息地减少，人类捕杀等）； 呼吁大家保护大熊猫。 要求：包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯； 词数：70 - 90 词。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Dear Tom, How’s it going? My favourite animal is panda. Now let me tell you something about it. Pandas are very cute animals. They are black and white. They have round bodies and big black eyes that look like they are wearing glasses. Pandas love eating bamboo. They are usually lazy and spend most of the day sleeping. However, pandas are in danger now because of less and less living space and being killed by humans. The Chinese government is trying hard to protect them. We hope more and more people can join us to save these lovely animals. Do you want to see pandas one day? I’m looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态是一般现在时； ③提示：文章根据题目要求，包含了大熊猫的外貌特征、生活习性和现状这三个方面的内容，并适当进行了发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头问候并引出话题，即介绍大熊猫； 第二步，详细描述大熊猫的外貌特征、生活习性和现状，按照题目要求的顺序进行阐述； 第三步，结尾询问对方是否希望有一天能看到大熊猫，并表达期待收到回复的意愿。 [亮点词汇] ①look like看起来像 ②most of 大多数…… ③in danger 处于危险中 [高分句型] ①They have round bodies and big black eyes that look like they are wearing glasses.（定语从句） ②We hope more and more people can join us to save these lovely animals.（宾语从句） 10．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom对中国的动物保护很感兴趣。请你根据以下要点，给他写一封邮件，介绍中国在动物保护方面所做的努力。 要点：1.中国有很多珍稀动物，如大熊猫、扬子鳄(Chinese alligator)等；         2.动物面临的危险，如栖息地丧失、非法捕猎等；         3.中国采取的保护措施，如建立自然保护区(nature reserves)、制定法律(make laws)、开展宣传活动(launch campaigns)等；         4.你的感受或建议 要求： 包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯； 词数：100 词左右。邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I'm glad to tell you something about animal protection in China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, I’m glad to tell you something about animal protection in China. China is home to many rare animals, such as pandas and Chinese alligators. However, these animals are facing great dangers. Their habitats are being destroyed due to human activities, and some are hunted illegally. To protect them, China has taken many measures. We’ve built a number of nature reserves to provide safe homes for wild animals. Also, the government has made laws to punish those who harm animals. Besides, many campaigns have been launched to raise people’s awareness of animal protection.     I’m really proud of these efforts. I think we should do more to protect animals. Everyone can play a part, like not buying things made of animals furs. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍中国的各种珍稀动物和它们所面临的危险； 第二步，介绍中国采取的保护措施； 第三部，表达自己的感受或建议。 [亮点词汇] ①be home to……的家园 ②due to因为 ③take measures采取措施 ④raise awareness 提升意识 [高分句型] ①Also, the government has made laws to punish those who harm animals. (who引导定语从句) ②I think we should do more to protect animals. (宾语从句) 能力综合实践5篇 11．动物是我们的朋友，它们和我们共享一个地球，但有一些野生动物却濒临灭绝。假如你是李明，你们学校的校报正在征集关于“保护野生动物”的文章。请你以“Save the wild animals”为题，根据以下要点和要求，写一篇英语短文进行投稿，呼吁大家保护野生动物。 要点：1. 野生动物的生存现状； 2. 野生动物濒临灭绝的原因； 3. 保护野生动物的建议。 要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 2. 词数80左右。 Save the wild animals _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Save the wild animals Animals are our friends, but some of them are in danger. People cut down trees in the mountains. Some wild animals have little food to eat and no place to live. Besides, some people kill them for their meat and fur. So they need our help a lot. First, we should stop cutting down trees. Second, we should stop hunting and killing wild animals. What’s more, we can set up some nature reserves to protect them. All in all, let’s take action to help wild animals together! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，介绍野生动物的现状； 第二步，介绍野生动物濒临灭绝的原因； 第三步，提出保护野生动物的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①cut down砍倒 ②in danger濒临危险 ③set up建立 [高分句型] ①Second, we should stop hunting and killing wild animals.（并列结构） ②All in all, let’s take action to help wild animals together!（祈使句） 12．英语老师要求同学们在下一节英语课中介绍自己最喜欢的动物。请你根据下面表格的内容提示，以My favourite animals为题，用英语写一篇短文。词数80～100。 名称：白老虎 外貌：皮毛黑白相间；蓝色眼睛 能力：跑得不快；善于游泳 食物：各种动物 看法：数量不多，应该保护它们 My favourite animals ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version： My favourite animals Do you know the white tigers? They are my favourite animals and I don’t think they are very scary. We can see them in the zoo. The white tigers look very beautiful. Their fur is black and white, and their eyes are blue. The white tigers can run. However, they can’t run fast. The white tigers are not afraid of water. They are good at swimming. What food do the white tigers eat? Oh, they eat all kinds of animals. There are not many white tigers in the world. We must protect them. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的动物是什么； 第二步，具体介绍白老虎的一些信息； 第三步，最后表达自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ① be afraid of害怕 ② be good at擅长 ③ all kinds of各种各样 [高分句型] ① I don’t think they are very scary.（省略that的宾语从句） ② Their fur is black and white, and their eyes are blue.（and连接的并列句） 13．假如你叫Linda，请根据下面表格中所提供的信息，给你的笔友John写一封电子邮件，介绍一下我国华南虎的情况。 内容提示： Place to live the south of China Appearance and trait (特点) yellow and black, long tail, strong and fierce (凶猛的) Ability catch small animals, run fast, swim Problem People kill them for their fur. People cut down trees... Solution (解决办法) stop killing, stop cutting down trees... 注意事项： 1.短文应包括所有的内容提示，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息； 3.词数70左右，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear John, Do you know South China tigers? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Linda 【答案】例文 Dear John, Do you know South China tigers? They come from the south of China. They are yellow and black with long tails. They are strong and fierce. They can run very fast and catch small animals. They are good at swimming, too. I like them because they are smart. But they are in great danger now. People kill them for their fur. People cut down too many trees, so they’re losing their homes. I think we must save them. People must stop cutting down trees and stop killing the tigers. And we mustn’t buy things made of their fur. Yours, Linda 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先介绍华南虎的居住地，外表，特点，能力。 第二步，再介绍华南虎的危险境地和解决办法。 [亮点词汇] ①come from来自 ②be good at 擅长 ③cut down砍掉 [高分句型] ①I like them because they are smart.（原因状语从句） ②They can run very fast and catch small animals.（and连接并列成分） 14．动物是人类的朋友，然而很多动物却处于危险之中，濒临灭绝。雪豹 (snow leopard) 就是其中之一。请根据提示，写一篇短文倡议人们保护雪豹。 Habitat in the mountains Food sheep, rabbits and other small animals Dangers kill for fur (皮毛) ; forests disappear... Protection set up nature parks... 要求： 1. 条理清晰，意思连贯； 2. 包含所给的所有信息，可适当发挥； 3. 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Boys and girls, Snow leopards are our friends, but how much do you learn about them? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Boys and girls, Snow leopards are our friends, but how much do you learn about them? Snow leopards live in the mountains and feed on sheep, rabbits, and other small animals. Unfortunately, they are in danger. People hunt them for their fur, cut down forests, and leave them with no place to live. We should do something to protect them. First, we can help people learn more about snow leopards. Second, we can set up more nature parks. Let’s work together to save these beautiful animals and ensure they have a safe home. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封倡议书； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头引出雪豹这一主题； 第二步，中间阐述雪豹的生活习性、面临的危险； 第三步，结尾提出保护雪豹的具体措施。 [亮点词汇] ①unfortunately不幸地 ②hunt捕猎 ③ensure确保 ④set up建立 [高分句型] ①Let’s work together to save these beautiful animals and ensure they have a safe home. (祈使句) 15．动物是我们人类的朋友，在我们的生活中占很重要的位置。请你以“Mountain Gorillas”为题，参考以下表格，写一篇英语短文简单介绍一下山地大猩猩，并呼吁人们保护动物。 Mountain gorillas (山地大猩猩) Habitat (栖息地) central Africa Situation in great danger Characters gentle and clever Dian Fossey (a scientist) be interested in mountain gorillas; do a lot for the animals; write books 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)； 3. 词数：不少于70词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Mountain Gorillas The wild mountain gorillas live in the central Africa. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Mountain Gorillas The wild mountain gorillas live in the central Africa. The big animals are in great danger. Many people believe that mountain gorillas are fierce. But in fact, gorillas are both gentle and clever. They use their strength only when they want to protect their families or groups. Dian Fossey is interested in the animals. She has learned a lot about the gorillas. She has done a lot for the animals. She has also written many books so that people can do something to protect the animals. I think we should do something like Dian Fossey to protect the animals. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生写作时注意要按表格提示的要点写，不要遗漏表格中“山地大猩猩的栖息地、现状、性格特点，以及科学家Dian Fossey对它们的关注”等要点，根据实际情况可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍山地大猩猩的栖息地、现状、性格特点等要点，纠正人们对其凶猛的错误认知； 第二步，讲述科学家Dian Fossey对山地大猩猩的关注及所做之事； 第三步，发出呼吁，表明我们应像Dian Fossey一样保护动物。 [亮点词汇] ① in great danger  处于极大危险中 ② in fact  事实上 ③ be interested in  对……感兴趣 ④ learned a lot about  学习大量有关于…… ⑤ so that  以便，为了 [高分句型] ① They use their strength only when they want to protect their families or groups. (时间状语从句) ② She has also written many books so that people can do something to protect the animals. (目的状语从句) ③ I think we should do something like Dian Fossey to protect the animals. (宾语从句) 16 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 21 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$