Unit7 汉堡法介绍最喜欢的节日（课件）-2024-2025学年五年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（译林版三起）

Unit 7 译林版三年级起点五年级下册 汉堡法介绍最喜欢的节日 CONTENTS 目录 写作方法指引 01 基础知识精讲 02 真题写作练习 03 模拟写作提升 04 行业PPT模板http:///hangye/ 模板来自于： 第一PPT https:/// 01 写作方法指引 PART.01 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 介绍最喜欢的节日名称/时间 介绍节日活动 4 01 写作方法指引-汉堡法 介绍最喜欢的节日名称/时间My favourite festival is____. I like ___ best. It is in____. It comes in_____. 介绍节日活动 At this festival, people___. During this festival, people ____. 说明节日心情 They eat ______. People enjoy____. 01 写作方法指引-示例 My favourite festival is the Double Ninth Festival. It is in October or November. It’s a festival full of love for the elderly. At this festival, people visit their parents and grandparents to show care. They also climb mountains to enjoy the view. They eat rice cakes, which are sweet and carry good wishes. It’s a meaningful festival. My favourite festival is the Double Ninth Festival. It is in October or November. It’s a festival full of love for the elderly. At this festival, people visit their parents and grandparents to show care. They also climb mountains to enjoy the view. They eat rice cakes, which are sweet and carry good wishes. It’s a meaningful festival. 介绍节日名称，时间 My favourite festival is the Double Ninth Festival. It is in October or November. It’s a festival full of love for the elderly. At this festival, people visit their parents and grandparents to show care. They also climb mountains to enjoy the view. They eat rice cakes, which are sweet and carry good wishes. It’s a meaningful festival. 介绍节日活动 My favourite festival is the Double Ninth Festival. It is in October or November. It’s a festival full of love for the elderly. At this festival, people visit their parents and grandparents to show care. They also climb mountains to enjoy the view. They eat rice cakes, which are sweet and carry good wishes. It’s a meaningful festival. 介绍节日感受 02 基础知识精讲 PART.02 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.介绍最喜欢的节日名称 参考句型： My favourite festival is__________________. My beloved festival is__________________. I like _____________ best. 参考词汇： Double Ninth Festival（重阳节） Spring Festival（春节）Mid - Autumn Festival（中秋节）Dragon Boat Festival（端午节） 8 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.介绍节日时间 参考句型： It is in_____________________. It comes in___________________. 参考词汇： October（十月）November（十一月） January（一月）February（二月）May（五月）June（六月）September（九月） 9 02 基础知识精讲-句型 3.介绍节日活动 参考句型： At this festival, people_______________. During this festival, people _______________. 参考词汇： visit their parents and grandparents（看望他们的父母和祖父母）climb mountains（爬山） get together（团聚）have a big dinner（吃一顿丰盛的晚餐）look at the moon（赏月）have dragon boat races（举行龙舟赛） 10 02 基础知识精讲-句型 4.介绍节日食物及感受 参考句型： They eat______________. People enjoy______________. 参考词汇： rice cakes（重阳糕） jiaozi（饺子）rice dumplings（粽子）moon cakes（月饼） 11 02 基础知识精讲-语法 节日名称及介词搭配  1.节日名称前的冠词： ①以“Festival”结尾的传统节日，一般需加定冠词“the”， 如“the Spring Festival（春节）”“the Mid - Autumn Festival（中秋节）”，这类节日具有独特性和特定文化内涵； ②而以“Day”结尾的节日， 如“Mother’s Day（母亲节）”“Father’s Day（父亲节）”，通常不加“the”。 02 基础知识精讲-语法 节日名称及介词搭配  2. 介词搭配： 表达节日在某个月份时，用介词“in”，因为月份是较长的时间范畴。例如：The Dragon Boat Festival is in May or June. 端午节在五月或六月。 02 基础知识精讲-语法 月份 1. 拼写与发音： 月份有“January（一月）”“February（二月）”“May（五月）”“June（六月）”“September（九月）”“October（十月）”“November（十一月）”。 这些单词拼写较长，需注意细节，如“January”不要漏写“u”；“February”中间是“ru”；“September”是“pt”组合发音；“October” “November”不要拼错字母顺序。 02 基础知识精讲-语法 月份 2. 缩写形式： 了解常见缩写有助于阅读与书写，如“January - Jan.” “February - Feb.” “June - Jun.” “September - Sept.” “October - Oct.” “November - Nov.”，但写作中一般要求写全称。 02 基础知识精讲-语法 选择正确的冠词或介词 1. My favourite festival is ______ Spring Festival.（a / the / 不填） 2. Children get gifts on ______ Children’s Day.（a / the / 不填） 3. The Mid - Autumn Festival is ______ September or October.（in / on / at） 4. We eat moon cakes ______ the Mid - Autumn Festival.（in / on / at） the 不填 in on 02 基础知识精讲-语法 改错句。 1. The Dragon Boat Festival is on June. （错误：______ 改为：______） 2. We love play games in Children’s Day. （错误：______ 改为：______） 3. My family visits grandparents in the Spring Festival. （错误：______ 改为：______） on in in on in on 03 模拟写作提升 PART.03 模拟写作提升1 看图片，写一写你最喜欢的节日。 要求： 语句通顺，语法正确。 书写工整。不少于五句话。 参考句型： My favourite festival is_____________. It happens in____________. There are____________. People eat____________. 参考词汇： Dragon Boat Festival（端午节）、May（五月）、June（六月）、dragon boat races（龙舟赛）、exciting（令人兴奋的）、rice dumplings（粽子） 20 My favourite festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It is in May or June. There are exciting dragon boat races in some places. People cheer loudly for the races. After that, they eat rice dumplings. These dumplings have different fillings, and each bite is full of festival flavor. 范文1： 介绍节日名称，时间 介绍节日活动 介绍节日感受 21 模拟写作提升2 根据表格信息，介绍你最喜欢的节日。 要求： 1.语句连贯通顺，条理清楚。 2.短文需包括所有信息提示，不少于5句话。 节日名称 时间 活动 特色食物 中秋节 8月、9月 赏月 吃月饼 22 参考句型： My favourite festival is_______________. It comes in______________. People often ______________. The special food is______________. 参考词汇： Mid - Autumn Festival（中秋节）、September（九月）、October（十月）、look at the moon（赏月）、chat（聊天）、moon cakes（月饼）、fruit（水果） 23 My favourite festival is the Mid - Autumn Festival. It is in September or October. Under the bright moon, families sit together, look at the moon and chat happily. The special food is moon cakes. They are delicious, and we also eat fruit. It’s a warm and happy time. 范文2： 介绍节日名称，时间 介绍节日活动 介绍节日感受 24 04 真题写作练习 PART.03 题目要求：请写一写你最喜欢的节日，回答以下问题： 1. What’s your favourite festival? 2. When is it? 3. What do people do at this festival? 4. What’s special to eat? 要求： 语句通顺，表达正确; 注意大小写和标点符号。 真题写作练习-苏州姑苏 参考句型： My favourite festival is____________. It is in____________. People usually ____________. They eat____________. It’s ____________. 参考词汇： Spring Festival（春节）、January（一月）、February（二月）、get together（团聚）、have a big dinner（吃丰盛晚餐）、jiaozi（饺子）、red packets（红包） 27 My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. It is in January or February. People also call it Chinese New Year. At this festival, families get together warmly. They have a big dinner full of delicious food. Many people eat jiaozi, and kids love it because they can get red packets. It’s full of joy. 范文3： 介绍节日名称，时间 介绍节日活动 介绍节日感受 28 Thank you! $$