Unit8仿写法介绍生日（课件）-2024-2025学年五年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（译林版三起）

Unit 8 译林版三年级起点五年级下册 仿写法介绍生日 CONTENTS 目录 写作方法指引 01 基础知识精讲 02 真题写作练习 03 模拟写作提升 04 行业PPT模板http:///hangye/ 模板来自于： 第一PPT https:/// 01 写作方法指引 PART.01 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 生日日期介绍 生日活动描述 心情感受表达 4 01 写作方法指引-仿写法 原句： My birthday is on the fifteenth of July. 句子结构： My birthday is on the… of … . 仿写： My birthday is on the tenth of June. 原句： We have a birthday party at home. 句子结构： We …at home. 仿写： We play games at home. 01 写作方法指引-示例 My birthday is on the fifteenth of July. I celebrate it with my family and best friends. We have a party in our living room. We eat a big birthday cake and yummy cookies. My parents and friends give me nice gifts. One is a new toy, and another is a cool book. Then we play hide - and - seek and sing songs together. We laugh a lot and have so much fun. I’m really happy on my birthday! My birthday is on the fifteenth of July. I celebrate it with my family and best friends. We have a party in our living room. We eat a big birthday cake and yummy cookies. My parents and friends give me nice gifts. One is a new toy, and another is a cool book. Then we play hide - and - seek and sing songs together. We laugh a lot and have so much fun. I’m really happy on my birthday! 生日日期介绍 生日活动描述 心情感受表达 My birthday is on the fifteenth of July. I celebrate it with my family and best friends. We have a party in our living room. We eat a big birthday cake and yummy cookies. My parents and friends give me nice gifts. One is a new toy, and another is a cool book. Then we play hide - and - seek and sing songs together. We laugh a lot and have so much fun. I’m really happy on my birthday! My birthday is on the fifteenth of July. I celebrate it with my family and best friends. We have a party in our living room. We eat a big birthday cake and yummy cookies. My parents and friends give me nice gifts. One is a new toy, and another is a cool book. Then we play hide - and - seek and sing songs together. We laugh a lot and have so much fun. I’m really happy on my birthday! 02 基础知识精讲 PART.02 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.明确指出主人公是谁，并介绍其生日日期 参考句型： ______'s birthday is on ______ (the + 序数词 + of + 月份). The special day of ______'s birthday falls on ______ (the + 序数词 + of + 月份). 参考词汇 人物称谓： I（我），my father（我爸爸），my mother（我妈妈），my grandparent（我爷爷 / 奶奶） 8 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.明确指出主人公是谁，并介绍其生日日期 日期表达： the second of March（三月二日） the seventh of August（八月七日） the nineteenth of December（十二月十九日） 9 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.详细描述生日当天的庆祝方式、参与人员以及具体活动 参考句型： ______ usually celebrate (s) it with ______. They ______ (具体活动，如举办派对、吃大餐等). Together with ______, ______ enjoy (s) celebrating the birthday by ______. After that, they also ______. 参考词汇 参与人员：relatives（亲戚），classmates（同学），colleagues（同事） 10 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.详细描述生日当天的庆祝方式、参与人员以及具体活动 参考词汇 生日活动： hold a party（举办派对），go to the cinema（去看电影），make a birthday card（制作生日贺卡），prepare a surprise（准备惊喜），have a barbecue（进行烧烤） 11 02 基础知识精讲-句型 3.表达主人公在生日过程中的心情，或总结整个生日带来的感受 参考句型： ______ have/has a ______ (good/great/nice) time. Everyone feels ______ and it becomes an unforgettable memory for ______. 参考词汇 心情词汇：happy（开心的），excited（兴奋的），moved（感动的），cheerful（愉快的），delighted（欣喜的） 总结词汇：unforgettable（难忘的），wonderful（美妙的），meaningful（有意义的） 12 02 基础知识精讲-语法 生日日期的表达讲解 在英语中，表达生日日期通常使用 “on + the + 序数词 + of + 月份” 的结构 。 例如： “on the eleventh of May”（在五月十一日） ，这里 “eleventh” 是序数词，表示 “第十一” ，“May” 是月份 “五月” 。 “on the eighth of April”（在四月八日） ，“eighth” 是序数词 “第八” ，“April” 是 “四月” 。 02 基础知识精讲-语法 生日日期的表达讲解 序数词的构成有一定规则： 一般情况下，在基数词后加 - th 构成序数词， 如：four（四）→ fourth（第四） ；six（六）→ sixth（第六） 。 特殊的序数词需要特别记忆： 第一（first / 1st）、第二（second / 2nd）、第三（third / 3rd） 。 第五（fifth）、第八（eighth）、第九（ninth）、第十二（twelfth） 等拼写有变化。 02 基础知识精讲-语法 生日日期的表达讲解 整十的基数词变序数词时，要把 y 变成 ie 再加 - th ， 例如：twenty（二十）→ twentieth（第二十） ；thirty（三十）→ thirtieth（第三十） 。 几十几的序数词，只把个位变成序数词，十位不变， 如：twenty - one（二十一）→ twenty - first（第二十一） 。 02 基础知识精讲-语法 写出下列日期的英文表达 九月十日______________________________ 十二月二十日__________________________ 七月三日______________________________ 单项选择 ( ) When's your birthday? It's ______ the third ______ June. A. in; of B. on; of C. on; in on the tenth of September on the twentieth of December on the third of July B 03 模拟写作提升 PART.03 模拟写作提升1 请用英文描述你的生日。 When is your birthday? Who do you usually celebrate it with? What do you usually do on your birthday? 要求： 语句通顺，语法正确。 书写工整。不少于五句话。 参考句型： My birthday is on the _________ of _________. I celebrate it with ________and ____________. We have a _________at home. We eat _________and ____________. I get ____________from ____________and _________. We ________together. We have a _________ time. 参考词汇： family (家人)；friends (朋友)；have a party (举办派对)；have a big dinner (吃大餐)；eat noodles (吃面条)；eat the birthday cake (吃生日蛋糕)；play games (玩游戏) 19 My birthday is on the tenth of June. I celebrate it with my family and friends. We have a birthday party at home. We eat the birthday cake and some delicious snacks. I get many gifts from my parents and friends. We play some fun games together. We have a great time. 范文1： 生日日期介绍 生日活动描述 心情感受表达 20 模拟写作提升2 根据以下表格信息，用英文描述你爸爸的生日。 要求： 1.语句连贯通顺，条理清楚。 2.短文需包括所有信息提示，不少于5句话。 项目 内容 生日日期 the eighth of July 庆祝人员 our family and his friends 生日活动 dinner; cake; chat; games 21 参考句型: My father's birthday is on ______ the ______ of ______ .He celebrates it with ______. They ______ . He has a ______ (good/great/nice) time. 参考词汇: family (家人)；friends (朋友)；have a big dinner (吃大餐)；buy a birthday cake (买生日蛋糕)；play games (玩游戏)；chat (聊天) 22 My father's birthday is on the eighth of July. He celebrates it with our family and his friends. They have a big dinner at a nice restaurant. Then they buy a delicious birthday cake. After that, they chat and play some simple games. He has a great time. 范文2： 生日日期介绍 生日活动描述 心情感受表达 23 04 真题写作练习 PART.03 观察下方图片，用英文描述你妈妈的生日场景。 要求： 语句通顺，表达正确; 注意大小写和标点符号。 真题写作练习-苏州姑苏 参考句型： My mother's birthday is on ______ the _________of _________. On that day, ______. We ______. She feels______ 参考词汇： family (家人)；birthday cake (生日蛋糕)；noodles (面条)；smile (微笑)；happy (开心的)；celebrate (庆祝) 26 My mother's birthday is on the twelfth of August. On that day, our family gets together. We have a big family together. We sit around the table and enjoy a big birthday cake. There are also some noodles. We all smile and chat happily. She feels very happy and has a wonderful time. 范文3： 生日日期介绍 生日活动描述 心情感受表达 27 Thank you! $$