读后续写--从沮丧到成长：小男孩的赛道心路 讲义-2025届高考英语复习写作专项

读后续写--从沮丧到成长：小男孩的赛道心路 讲义 读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The crowd roared as I took off from the starting line in The Big Race. Through the cheers, I heard Mom shouting, “Run, Sammy, run!” I knew without looking that she was smiling from ear to ear and clapping her hands for me. I kept my eyes straight ahead running as fast as I could. “Run, run, run,” I chanted to myself in my mind as I passed my friend Justin. I saw Justin’s red face out of the corner of my eye and wondered if my own face was that red too? “Run, run, run.” I was on fire, passing Sarah, leaving her in my dust. The coach was waiting for me at the finish line, holding the medal for the fastest runner in kindergarten. I would wear that blue and white ribbon around my neck when we go out for ice cream to celebrate and then hang it in my room. Last night I took the collection of caps off the hook on my wall leaving it ready for my shiny new medal. I couldn’t wait to see it every day when I woke up. Dad was there in the crowd also and would pick me up and put me on his shoulders to carry around. “My son!” He would tell the other fathers, “My son won the race!” I was going to win! Faster than Sarah, I came up behind Mikey, giving my legs that extra burst of energy to pass him by. The winner, Sammy! All that running in the park was worth it! Just as I heard the roar of the crowd welcoming me to the finish line, I saw a blur out of the corner of my eye. What? There was Justin with his tomato cheeks running as fast as humanly possible, huffing and puffing like he was going to blow the house down. And then he was in front of me. I was behind tomato face Justin. Crossing the finish line, I heard the voice over the loudspeaker boom, “Congratulations to the winner, Justin!” Congratulations to Justin? Congratulations to Justin. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: I stood there frozen as Justin was handed his medal. Paragraph 2: Suddenly, strong hands lifted me onto Dad’s shoulders. 解题思路分析 1. 整体情感走向： 开头是“我站在那里发愣”，情绪是震惊+失落+委屈； 最后一段以“爸爸将我高高举起”收尾，要有一个情感升华：尽管没赢比赛，我依然得到了爱和认可。 2. 情节安排建议： 第一段写心理变化+身体反应+爸爸出现的安慰； 第二段写爸爸鼓励、观众反应，Sammy的内心完成“从羡慕别人 ➝ 接纳自己 ➝ 获得温暖”的成长。 写作结构 第一段： 描写失落与转折，情感由低谷到第一波缓解 段首给定句： Paragraph 1: I stood there frozen as Justin was handed his medal. 句序 类型 内容示例 1 固定句① （情感描写） A wave of disappointment washed over me, heavier than anything I had ever felt before. 2 自拟句 （细节描写） I clenched my fists and stared at the ground, trying hard to swallow the lump rising in my throat. 3 固定句② （动作链） I turned slowly, shuffled toward the sideline, and blinked away the tears that threatened to fall. 4 自拟句 （冲突铺垫） Around me, the crowd cheered for Justin, but to me, everything sounded distant and muffled. 5 固定句③ （情节转折） No sooner had I lowered my head than I felt a pair of strong arms lifting me into the air. 第二段： 情绪升华，完成成长性总结 段首给定句： Paragraph 2: Suddenly, strong hands lifted me onto Dad’s shoulders. 句序 类型 内容示例 6 固定句④（情感转变） A strange warmth rose in my chest as Dad carried me high above the crowd like I was the true winner. 7 自拟句（背景渲染） I saw the coach smiling at me, and Mom wiping her eyes while mouthing, “You did amazing.” 8 自拟句（细节描写） From above, I spotted Justin waving at me with his medal swinging from his neck—I waved back, smiling. 9 固定句⑤（结局升华） By the time Dad put me down, I realized that sometimes, not winning teaches you even more. 10 固定句⑥（主题点睛） That day, I learned that true victory lies in effort, courage, and the love that lifts you when you fall. 范文 01 Paragraph 1： I stood there frozen as Justin was handed his medal. A wave of disappointment washed over me, heavier than anything I had ever felt before. I clenched my fists and stared at the ground, trying hard to swallow the lump rising in my throat. I turned slowly, shuffled toward the sideline, and blinked away the tears that threatened to fall. Around me, the crowd cheered for Justin, but to me, everything sounded distant and muffled. No sooner had I lowered my head than I felt a pair of strong arms lifting me into the air. Paragraph 2： Suddenly, strong hands lifted me onto Dad’s shoulders. A strange warmth rose in my chest as Dad carried me high above the crowd like I was the true winner. I saw the coach smiling at me, and Mom wiping her eyes while mouthing, “You did amazing.” From above, I spotted Justin waving at me with his medal swinging from his neck—I waved back, smiling. By the time Dad put me down, I realized that sometimes, not winning teaches you even more. That day, I learned that true victory lies in effort, courage, and the love that lifts you when you fall. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$