专题14读后续写之遇困脱险类-2025年高考英语写作提分秘籍（新高考通用）

专题14读后续写之遇困脱险类 第一部分 题型分析 第二部分 写作方法 第三部分 写作模版 第四部分 语料展示 第五部分 模拟再现 第六部分 题型通关 题型分析 遇困脱险是读后续写中常见话题，涉及人与自然或者人与社会主题语境，会有火灾、洪水、溺水、迷路、交通事故、突发疾病等紧急情况。从最初遇险的惊慌害怕，绝望无助，到想办法救援，到最后获救的宽慰和感激，涉及到一系列的表达。情节线：遭遇危险（恶劣环境/危险描写和情感描写）—出现转机（想到办法和呼救求助）—救援脱险（救援描述和情感描写）—感悟升华（历险者/救援者）。情感线：焦急紧张/恐惧无助—筋疲力尽--欣喜/欣慰感动/感谢/感悟。遇困脱险续写要求：需体现从“困境”到“解决”的合理逻辑，包含行动决策、心理变化、外部帮助等要素。字数150左右。 写作方法 高考英语读后续写中的“遇困脱险类”题目要求考生在紧张的情节中展现人物克服困境的过程，以下是写作方法： 遇险阶段（首段）：用几个细节强化危机（如环境描写、人物动作）。 例：The flashlight flickered and died, plunging the cave into suffocating darkness. Emily's fingers trembled as she groped the slimy walls, her breath echoing louder with each step. 转折点（首段末/次段初）：引入关键道具/人物/灵感。 例：A faint glint caught her eye—the broken compass from her backpack, its needle stubbornly pointing southeast. 脱险高潮（次段中后部）：采用"尝试-失败-成功"递进，增加真实感。 例：Her first attempt to scale the cliff sent rocks tumbling. On the third try, a twisted root held firm beneath her bloodied hands. 升华结尾（末句）：用环境/对话收尾，避免说教。 例：As dawn painted the sky peach, the distant wail of sirens mingled with the rustle of wind through cornfields. 段落分配策略 首段解决核心危机的（如找到逃生线索） 次段完成脱险+主题升华（如领悟合作/勇气） 写作模版 用恶劣环境铺垫 1.The water was deep and running fast from a big rainstorm the night before. 前天晚上下了一场大暴雨，水又深又急。 2.The water twisted and turned him, scraping him against the rocks as he was carried along. Water gushed into his mouth and up his nose. 水流不停地扭动着他，旋转着他，把他蹭在岩石上。水灌进他的嘴里，没过了他的鼻子。 3. What's worse, he didn't have any food or water with him, let alone his cell phone or other supplies.更糟糕的是，他没有任何食物和水，更不要说他的手机和其他日用品。 4. The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds. 天空阴沉，乌云密布。 5.The icy wind started howling, stinging my face. 寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。 6.The wind was howling and the waves smacked repeatedly against her face. 风在呼啸着，海浪不停地拍打着她的脸。 7.But then, as I looked in the distance, I discovered a series of three or four big waves heading towards the shore. 但后来，当我往远处看时，我发现有三四个大浪正在冲向海岸。 8.It swayed violently in a strong wind. Its roadway was damaged by vehicles. Its access was blocked by many people. 它在强风中剧烈摇晃。车辆损坏了道路。许多人堵住了通道。 用心理感受烘托 1.An ominous thought crossed his mind: I’m going to die up here. 一个不祥的念头掠过他的脑海：我要死在这了。 2.Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of fear surging through my whole body. 看着浩瀚的大海，我感到一种恐惧感掠过我的全身。 3.Salt stinging my eyes, I could hardly tell how long I could hold on. 盐刺痛了我的眼睛，我几乎不知道我能坚持多久。 4.Grief comes in waves. 悲伤如潮水一般涌来。 5. With a pounding heart and cold, moist palms, I felt faint. 最后一句话像一颗子弹击中了我的心。 6.Afraid and merely desperate, she rushed towards him. 她害怕而绝望，向他冲去。 用外貌神态烘托 1.Hearing the bad news, Mary froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground.  听到这个坏消息，玛丽吓得愣住了，好像长在了地上。 2.Tears blurred her eyes. 泪水模糊了她的双眼。 3. I sobbed bitterly, tasting the salt from the tears that streamed down my face. 我痛苦地抽泣着，尝到脸上流下泪水咸咸的味道。 4.She calmed down to keep the rhyme of breathing so that she could breathe evenly. 她平静下来，保持呼吸的韵律，以便能够均匀地呼吸。 5.I glanced back over my shoulder to make sure that no one was following me.  我回头瞟了一眼以确保没有人跟踪我。 用谋篇布局起伏情节 1.Ultimately, we were back, safe and sound. 最终，我们又回来了，安然无恙。 2.We jumped into the warm vehicle and the forester drove us to the ranger station, where we were given clothes and were able to call our parents. 我们跳上了温暖的车，森林管理员开车把我们送到护林员站，在那里我们得到了衣服，并可以打电话给我们的父母。 3.Suddenly it occurred to us that we could keep to the track to guide us back.But it was getting darker and darker, thus making it increasingly difficult for us to make out the road. 突然我们想到我们可以坚持小路引导我们回去。但天色越来越暗，使我们走道路越来越困难。 用万能升华点睛 That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever. 那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。 It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with, we mustn’t give up our hope. 正是这种独特的经历让我明白了我们所面临的任何困难，我们都不能放弃希望。 As long as we don’t give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely make a success sooner or later. 只要我们不放弃希望，不尽一切努力克服一切困难，我们迟早一定会取得成功的。 Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way. 直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。 遇到危险后，勇敢面对，才能解决问题。这个句子突出了“勇敢”这个核心，这在“脱险型”的故事里，是非常恰当的。这句话使用了倒装的结构和强调结构结合的方式，也属于高分亮点句。 遇困脱险类语料展示 1.pitch-dark cave（漆黑的洞穴） 2.a sense of claustrophobia（幽闭恐惧之感） 3.vast and desolate desert（广袤荒凉的沙漠） 4.a glimmer of determination（一丝决心） 5.think rationally（理性思考） 6.a hidden passage（隐藏的通道） 7.a strange marking（奇怪的标记） 8.a window of opportunity（机会窗口） 9.newfound energy（新的能量） 10.a test of my resilience（对我韧性的考验） Trapped in the pitch-dark cave, with the walls closing in on me and only a faint glimmer of light from my dying flashlight, a sense of claustrophobia and dread overwhelmed me. 被困在漆黑的洞穴里，墙壁仿佛向我逼近，仅有的手电筒微弱光线也逐渐消逝，幽闭恐惧和恐惧之感将我淹没。 Stranded in the middle of the vast and desolate desert, under the scorching sun that seemed to drain every ounce of energy from my body, I was facing a desperate situation with no sign of rescue in sight. 被困在广袤荒凉的沙漠中央，在炽热的太阳下，它似乎耗尽了我身体的每一丝能量，我面临着绝境，看不到救援的迹象。 Caught in the violent storm at sea, the small boat was tossed around like a toy, with waves crashing over the sides and threatening to capsize it at any moment. 在海上遭遇猛烈风暴，小船像玩具一样被抛来抛去，海浪拍打着船舷，随时可能将其掀翻。 My heart was pounding wildly as I contemplated the seemingly insurmountable odds against me, but a glimmer of determination flickered within me, refusing to give up. 当我思考着看似无法克服的困境时，我的心疯狂地跳动，但内心有一丝决心闪烁，不愿放弃。 Fear gnawed at my insides, yet I forced myself to stay calm and think rationally, knowing that panic would only make the situation worse. 恐惧啃噬着我的内心，但我强迫自己保持冷静并理性思考，因为我知道恐慌只会让情况更糟。 Doubt crept into my mind, wondering if I had the strength and the skills to survive this ordeal, but then I remembered past challenges I had overcome and drew inspiration from them. 怀疑悄悄潜入我的脑海，不知道自己是否有力量和技能度过这场磨难，但随后我想起了过去克服的挑战并从中汲取了灵感。 Scanning the surroundings with a desperate hope, I searched for any possible way out, my eyes straining to detect a hidden passage or a sign of safety. 怀着绝望的希望扫视周围环境，我寻找任何可能的出路，眼睛努力探寻隐藏的通道或安全的迹象。 I rummaged through my backpack, hoping to find something useful, a tool or a device that could help me signal for help or improvise an escape plan. 我在背包里翻找，希望找到有用的东西，一个工具或装置，可以帮助我发出求救信号或临时想出一个逃生计划。 Trying to recall any survival knowledge I had learned, I began to take small but crucial steps, like conserving water and finding shelter from the elements. 努力回忆我所学的任何生存知识，我开始采取虽小但关键的步骤，如节约用水和寻找躲避恶劣天气的地方。 Just when all hope seemed lost, a faint sound in the distance caught my attention, a sound that might be the engine of a passing boat or a search party. 就在所有希望似乎破灭时，远处一个微弱的声音引起了我的注意，这个声音可能是过往船只的引擎声或搜索队的声音。 As I was about to give up, I noticed a strange marking on the wall, which upon closer inspection, led me to a concealed opening that might be the way to freedom. 当我即将放弃时，我注意到墙上有一个奇怪的标记，仔细检查后，它带我找到了一个可能通往自由的隐蔽入口。 Suddenly, the storm began to subside, and the sea became calmer, presenting me with a window of opportunity to repair the damaged boat and make my way back to shore. 突然，风暴开始减弱，海面变得平静，为我提供了一个修复受损船只并返回岸边的机会窗口。 With newfound energy and determination, I followed the faint sound, carefully making my way through the treacherous terrain, every step filled with anticipation and caution. 带着新的能量和决心，我循着微弱的声音，小心翼翼地穿过危险的地形，每一步都充满期待和谨慎。 Using all my strength and the makeshift tools I had fashioned, I pried open the concealed opening and crawled through, not knowing what awaited me on the other side. 用尽我所有的力量和我临时制作的工具，我撬开了隐蔽的入口并爬了进去，不知道另一边等待我的是什么。 I set to work immediately, using the materials at hand to patch up the holes in the boat and rig up a makeshift sail, praying that it would hold until I reached land. 我立即开始工作，用手头的材料修补船上的漏洞并临时搭建了一个帆，祈祷它能坚持到我到达陆地。 Finally, reaching safety, I collapsed on the ground, exhausted but filled with a sense of relief and gratitude, realizing that every difficult moment had been a test of my resilience. 最终，到达安全地带，我瘫倒在地上，疲惫但充满了宽慰和感激之情，意识到每一个艰难时刻都是对我韧性的考验。 Looking back on the harrowing experience, I knew that I had emerged stronger and more resourceful, having learned to trust my instincts and never lose hope even in the darkest of times. 回顾这段可怕的经历，我知道自己变得更强大、更有智谋了，学会了相信自己的直觉，即使在最黑暗的时刻也永不失去希望。 The ordeal was over, but it had left an indelible mark on my soul, a reminder that life was full of unexpected challenges, and it was our ability to overcome them that defined us. 磨难结束了，但它在我的灵魂上留下了不可磨灭的印记，提醒我生活充满了意想不到的挑战，而我们克服它们的能力才定义了我们。 模拟再现 （一） （2025·新疆乌鲁木齐·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In the vast and stony deserts of eastern California, adventure and danger often go hand in hand. For Kevin with a thirst for exploration, this region was perfect. Since college, Kevin had crossed nearly every inch of the United States in search of thrills. For the last few years he had worked as a remote data analyst while traveling. Among his favorite spots was the town of Benton, where he had made a friend named Josh. Josh, a 38-year-old rock climber, had become a brother figure to Kevin. Josh taught Kevin rock climbing skills and showed him where to find the best crystals (水晶) in the mountains. Their friendship was shaped in the spirit of exploration, and together, they sought out the most remote and thrilling locations. One December morning, Kevin returned to Benton with an exciting discovery — a perfect spot, where they could find unique crystals and minerals. Despite the cold weather, Josh decided to join Kevin. They set off across the desert, Kevin carrying most of the equipment — scrapers (铲子), pickaxes(鹤嘴镐), and other tools. After an exhausting hike through sandy streams and over boulders (巨石), they reached a rocky hillside with “cool rocks” buried just in front of a pair of enormous boulders. For nearly two hours, the friends dug enthusiastically, uncovering rocks of all shapes and sizes. Around 3 p.m., Josh stepped aside to rest. Kevin continued to work in the hole they had dug, using a small scraper. Suddenly, Josh yelled, “Look out, Kevin!” Kevin turned back. And in that instant, the boulder rolled toward him, crashing his legs into the sand. His mind went into shock, and he wondered if this was how he would die. Josh grabbed a pickax and squeezed it between the boulder and the ground to prevent it from rolling further. With all his efforts, Josh managed to push the rock slightly. It was enough for Kevin to pull out his left leg, which was numb and severely injured, but his right leg remained trapped. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Josh, an experienced climber, knew the emergency of the situation. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ At around 8 p.m., after five hours of calling 911, the first pair of rescuers arrived on foot. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） （2025·全国·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In November, Michael Cabeldu took a late-night drive along Highway 14, which winds through dense forests and bushes along the southern coast of Vancouver Island. Suddenly, a thick fog enveloped his vehicle, and his car swerved (突然转弯) off the road, rolling down a 45-degree slope. It crashed through bushes and finally came to a stop near the cliff edge. He knew if he went over that, his body might never be found. Michael was severely injured and trapped inside his car. With a broken nose, knees and ribs, he waited in the dark and in pain till dawn to assess his situation. When it was light enough, he tried to move, but every small shift was painful. He had no cellphone and no one knew he’d taken an unplanned drive. Besides, it was cold in the car. He had an extra sweater — ironically (讽刺地), printed with “live the adventure, live the dream”. He was left alone in the bushes and could only hope to be found. He had some food and drinks with him: mini chocolate bars, a bottle of water, half a bottle of sports drink, and some cold coffee. He had to ration these carefully, as they were all he had to eat and drink. In the car, Michael focused on survival. He slept sporadically (断断续续地). To keep his mind occupied, he talked to himself. He thought of different business ideas to make money once he was rescued. By the fourth afternoon, he decided he needed a strategy to attract attention. He tried to make a fire to send smoke signals for help. “I was trying to set the whole hillside on fire so someone would notice,” he said. Instead, rain started pouring down, putting out the flame before a fire could get going. He even tried drinking his own urine to stay hydrated, a survival trick he learned from a TV show. Every small movement was painful, but he kept trying to do what he could to survive. Finally, he heard voices above him. 注意：(1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Two university students, Ethan and Will, spotted his car while on a bike-camping trip. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A month after this accident, Michael invited Ethan and Will to his home to express his deep gratitude. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） （2025·河南·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was unseasonally hot in the Australian state of New South Wales. By mid-afternoon on Thursday, the sun was beating down and the clear blue skies showed no signs of the forecast rain. Adrian Main was doing what he loved, working outside in the bushes (灌木丛) that surround the leafy suburbs of Sydney. Guided by his love of mountain-bike riding, Adrian had founded Synergy Trails, a construction company that specialized in installing narrow, winding dirt-bike trails in the bushes for weekend and competition riders. It was dusty, dirty work at times, but with the trees providing shade and the only noise coming from his team and the local birds, there wasn’t any place he’d rather be. Over the years, the 40-year-old had encountered poisonous creatures while working around in soil, including poisonous spiders and snakes, but he knew how to distinguish the non-threatening ones from the really dangerous ones. Adrian was trained in first aid, though he never seriously thought he’d need it. With the clock ticking down towards the start of the weekend, Adrian had only a few chores left to do. His tool was in his vehicle, parked some 50 metres away. He considered getting it, but the job was small, and only a light dig was necessary to get beneath the shallow soil and leaf litter. So he used his hands instead. However, just as his fingers slid under the pile of leaves, he felt a sharp, deep pain in his left hand. Adrian quickly pulled out his hand, only to see a spider on his left index finger. The five-centimetre-long black creature  had its sharp teeth firmly cut into the skin. The pain felt as if a nail were being hammered into his finger. He shook his hand up and down hard to throw off the spider, and it finally dropped to the ground. It was a fully grown male Sydney funnel-web, the most poisonous spider in Australia. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Adrian’s heart sank when he realized what kind of spider had bitten him. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Within half an hour, they reached the hospital. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 题型通关 （一） （2025·河北保定·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 As I’ve grown older, my connection to nature has become stronger. Recently, I was fortunate to spend a good part of a week in the wilderness, following the teachings of my father from my childhood. Ever since I was 10, my sister, father, and I would load up his canoe (独木舟) with supplies and set off into the heart of Algonquin Park. There were years when I ignored the call of Algonquin, caught up in the busyness of life —graduating from school and raising young children. It all felt incredibly demanding. But as time passed, my children grew older, and the call of Algonquin grew louder. With the support of my family, I finally listened to that call again, and started planning to take part in one of our family trips there. My family's rich experience in the outdoors has been invaluable for such trips. My sister, a teacher, carefully planned our trips while my dad, a skilled outdoorsman, effortlessly handled tasks like setting up camp and preparing meals. And my husband is really strong and good at moving things around. But, as the trip got closer, my husband suddenly hurt his leg. And suddenly, I was faced with managing the first part of the trip as the only adult. Could I drive my daughter, alone, to Algonquin's remote north boundary to meet my dad and mom? Could I steer (驾驶) the canoe? Could I carry the canoe? I had driven across Canada, alone, in my twenties, well before Google Maps. I was pretty sure I could steer if we kept to smaller lakes that were less likely to become windswept. But I feared carrying a canoe. Plus, lifting it onto my shoulders seemed impossible for someone of my strength. But Algonquin was calling me. I recalled the fearless independence of my younger self and called Dad. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “If we shorten the route and find a lightweight canoe, we are coming,” I told him. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When we finally arrived, my parents were waiting with open arms. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） （2025·甘肃兰州·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Jameson Lobb, a 24-year-old investment banker from Toronto, had just started his new job on Wall Street. He was sharing a New York City apartment with his college friend, Raphael Jafri, an artificial intelligence engineer. One lunchtime, while working out on Pier (水上码头) 15, overlooking the East River, Lobb suddenly froze. “Someone’ s in the water,” he said. Without hesitation, he climbed over the rail and jumped into the cold, polluted river, still wearing his shoes. Jafri didn’t see the victim but trusted Lobb’s instincts. “Maybe he saw someone in trouble,” he thought. “Or maybe he needs my help.” Without delay, Jafri kicked off his shoes and dove in after his friend. Lobb reached the unconscious man first. He was middle-aged, well-dressed, and weighed about 200 pounds. The man was sinking fast, already three feet below the surface. Lobb dove down,grabbed him, and kicked upward until they both resurfaced. By then, Jafri had arrived. Together,they floated the man on his back, with Jafri supporting his shoulders and Lobb holding his hips and knees. The water was swirling (旋动), and their muscles burned as they struggled to pull the heavy,lifeless body toward the pier. The man’s skin was blue, and he wasn’t breathing. When they finally reached Pier 15, they faced another challenge: how to get out. The pier’s deck was 10 feet above them, and the water’s surface was covered in sharp shellfish. Jafri, barefoot, couldn’t climb without injuring himself. Suddenly, the man stirred (微动), breathing again. In his confusion, he lashed out, hitting Jafri in the face before slipping back into unconsciousness. The two friends, exhausted and struggling,now had to find a way to save themselves and the man they had risked everything to rescue. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 On the pier, a crowd had gathered. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Lobb and Jafri remained in the water a few minutes more, until they were rescued by theCoast Guard. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） （2025·山东日照·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was the summer of 2019, and I was part of a team of eight climbers attempting to reach the top of Mount Rainier in Washington State. We had been training for over a year, preparing for the physical and mental challenges of the climb. Our team, composed of experienced mountaineers and a few beginners like myself, had grown close during our training sessions. We relied on each other for support, encouragement, and motivation. If someone was struggling, the rest of us would step in to help, whether it was carrying extra sports equipment or offering words of encouragement. The first two days of the climb went smoothly. We made good progress, reaching Camp Muir at 10,000 feet without any major issues. The weather was perfect, and our spirits were high. On the third day, we began our push for the peak. The plan was to start early in the morning, around 2 a.m., to take advantage of the colder, firmer snow. We roped up and began the climb, each of us focused on the task at hand. As we approached Disappointment, Cleaver, a steep and dangerous section of the climb, the weather began to change. The wind picked up, and the temperature dropped significantly. We could barely see more than a few feet in front of us because of the dense fog, and the snow underfoot became unstable. Despite the challenging conditions, we carried on, determined to reach the peak. Then, disaster struck. One of our team members, Sarah, lost her footing and slipped. The force of her fall pulled the rest of us off balance, and we all fell, sliding down the slope (斜坡). I felt a sharp pain in my leg as I hit a rock, and I knew immediately that something was wrong. The rest of the team quickly regained their footing and managed to stop our slide, but I was unable to stand. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “I think my leg is broken,” I said painfully. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The rescue team arrived finally. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） （2025·江西·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Steger grew up in Bellingham, Washington, about an hour’s drive from where he was now, trapped in the Mount Baker Ski Area. The remote place is marked by ropes and signs to warn people that they’re leaving the safe zone. Steger and his three fellows had all the required equipment, a two-way radio and a backpack with a shovel when they started their second skiing in the morning. On that Friday run, Steger’s friends were in front of him when Steger, moving through the trees, ran into trouble. The front of his board hit a small branch hidden under new snow. Steger fell into a tree well (树坑). Before he could call for help, he was upside down in deeper snow than he’d ever been in. All he could see was blackness. One of Steger’s arms was pinned next to his body. Luckily, his other arm had ended up next to his face, so he managed to push the snow away from his mouth, creating a small air pocket. To prevent snow from falling in and covering his mouth, he pulled the tip of his jacket over his face. And now all he could do was stay calm and wait to be rescued. He figured two or so minutes had passed. Then the two-way radio on his shoulder crackled with messages from his friends “Where are you? Let’s know if you’re in front of us!” He replied and mentioned about his situation. He knew that his friends were downhill from where he was stuck. His friends were surprised and convinced him that they were on their long difficult way back up the hill to rescue him. Meanwhile, it was up to Steger to get himself out, or he’d die. Then he felt his snowboard, still attached to his feet, move. Francis Zuber, 28-year-old, had gone to Mount Baker Ski Area that Friday to ski. As he sped down the slope, Zuber caught a glimpse of something red. That’s when he saw that the upside-down snowboard in a tree well was moving. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 “Someone might be trapped under the snow in the tree well,” Zuber thought. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Once they were out, Steger wrapped Zuber in a bear hug. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） （2024·全国·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My story took place in Kansas on Highway 70. It was September 4th, 2014, and I was riding a motorcycle. I was by myself and in a hurry, trying to make it to Hays to take a conference call. I had just passed a group of cars when my motorbike began to wobble (摇晃). I did what I had been taught to do, but in vain. Later, the handlebars of my motorbike turned sharply enough to hit the gas tank. Needless to say, the motorbike and I went down. I don’t remember hitting the highway, but I remember rolling. According to the state police who responded, I rolled 475 feet from where the motorbike hit the road. When I stopped rolling, I was face down. The white stripe (条纹) marking the left side of the road was by my left hand. I was still in the road. I heard the cars I had just passed approaching. Afraid cars would be avoiding the motorbike parts and not see me, I rolled over one more time and off the road. The first car slowed as it passed me. Before it even stopped, the passenger was out the door running back to me. She had already called 911 and was talking to the operator as she got to me. She was calm as she relayed that I was awake and talking. Shortly after that, the next two cars stopped. While some helped take care of me, others gathered my possessions and motorbike parts off the highway. These people stood in the very hot Kansas sun talking to me and keeping me calm. When I had too much sun on my raw arms, they found a blanket and umbrella. They stood in the sun making shade for me. A tow truck (牵引车) came and pulled my motorbike off. As I heard the ambulance approach and realized my leathers would be cut off, I panicked and tried to get up. These strangers calmed me down and figured out how to unzip (拉开拉链) my leather overalls without allowing me to move so the ambulance attendants wouldn’t cut them off. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The kindness of ordinary people didn’t stop there. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I was deeply moved by their kindness. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） （24-25高三上·重庆·期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Joe, a man who was pushed into a desperate situation by the weight of life’s pressures, walked unsteadily back to his rental home. Blood streaming down from his eyes and forehead. The sky was covered with thick darkness. He had only one thought in mind: return home and sink into a deep sleep. His business failed several years ago. Then he was trapped in the hardship of pancreatitis (胰腺炎). Yet, fate did not spare him. One day, after falling down in a faint, he was diagnosed with a deadly brain disease inherited from his father. Keeping it a secret from his parents, he struggled to maintain the false image of a normal life. He injected medicine daily, rented a smaller room, and cut his expenses to the lowest, all to save more money to repay debts. That deep night, he suffered another attack of dizziness and collapsed with his electric bike in a tunnel. His head was injured while falling down, blood shed at the scene. After returning to consciousness, he finally made his way back to his room like a drunk man. He climbed onto the bed and lay motionless, as if waiting for death. At the same time, some people were looking for him. Officer Simon in the local police station had received several emergency calls reporting that someone had fallen down inside a tunnel and was unable to get up. “I guessed he had drunk too much. He looked very dangerous,” said a passerby. Three policemen led by Simon responded to the emergency call. They had handled over 20 emergency cases that day and had only eaten dinner at 11 pm. Despite their tiredness, they rushed to the scene, only to find a broken electric bike and some blood on the scene. Through security cameras, they finally traced Joe’s whereabouts and located his rental room at the end of a dark street. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Hearing a hurried knock, Joe weakly opened the door, surprised to see the police. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The police later shared their rescue experience on social media, drawing more attention. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） （2024·四川绵阳·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Due to a medical misdiagnosis (误诊), Susan, 34, had been left sightless, and was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness, anger, frustration and self-pity. And all she had to depend on was her husband, Mark. Mark was an officer and he loved Susan with all his heart. When she first lost her sight, he watched her sink into despair. He was determined to help his wife gain confidence to become independent and return to her normal life again. But how would he do that? Susan used to take the bus to work, but now she was too frightened to face the whole world. Mark decided to convince Susan to take the bus again. Perhaps one day she could enjoy a city tour all by herself or buy some daily grocery in the supermarket three stops away. But she was still so moody and sensitive. How would she react? One day, Mark summoned up his courage and said “Honey, life shall move on, let’s try taking the bus as the first step, OK?” Just as he predicted, Susan was scared at the idea of taking the bus on her own. “I’m blind!” she responded bitterly. “How am I supposed to know where I am going? I feel like you’re abandoning me.” Mark’s heart broke hearing these words, but he knew what had to be done. He promised Susan he would ride the bus with her until she got the hang of it. And that was exactly what happened. For a whole week, Mark accompanied Susan on the bus. He taught her how to rely on her other senses, specifically her hearing, to determine where she was and how to adapt to her new environment. He helped her befriend the bus drivers who could watch out for her, and save her a seat. Finally, Susan decided to try the trip on her own. Mark encouraged her and decided to continue watching out for her until she got off the bus, only in secret. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 With the help of her walking stick, she slowly made it to the bus stop. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ She asked the driver, “Why do you say that I’m very lucky?” ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） （2024·湖南长沙·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My wife was away for a few days and I hated the thought of leaving my new dog Honey alone. “Come on, Honey. Let’s go.” She jumped into the car and settled down in the passenger seat. I got behind the wheel and started the car. We live in a remote area up in the hills, surrounded by many tall trees. You have to drive up the mountain slowly to get to our driveway, which is barely wide enough for one car. I turned around my car and backed up slowly, just then, a flash of afternoon sunlight blinded me. I put my hand up to protect my eyes. I felt a sudden sharp movement as the left back wheel of the car slipped in the soft soil, and it rolled. I hadn’t put on my seat belt yet and I fell downwards inside the car and the car hit the ground several times as it turned over down the valley, Tree branches broke with great sharp noise. The car rolled faster, four, five, six, … , until it came to a complete stop. We landed upside down and I got stuck completely in the car. I looked over to find Honey. She was still in the passenger seat and fortunately, she was okay. “Sorry, girl,” I took a deep breath. I tried to see if I could remove myself from behind the wheel. I felt a burning pain in my chest and something was wrong with my left leg. I cried out from the pain. I grabbed my cellphone and dialed 911. Just as I had feared, I couldn’t get a signal at the bottom of the valley. I figured we were at least 50 feet down. Robin, my closest neighbor, had his own driveway, living a mile uphill from me. There was no reason he or anyone else would drive to my house. And even if someone did, they wouldn’t see the damaged car here. Painfully, I managed to reach over and pick Honey up. I gently gave her a pat. “Go home, baby.” She jumped to the ground and raced up the side of the valley. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I sat there for hours. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Bang! The noise woke me up; I could recognize it was my neighbor, Robin! _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题14读后续写之遇困脱险类 第一部分 题型分析 第二部分 写作方法 第三部分 写作模版 第四部分 语料展示 第五部分 模拟再现 第六部分 题型通关 题型分析 遇困脱险是读后续写中常见话题，涉及人与自然或者人与社会主题语境，会有火灾、洪水、溺水、迷路、交通事故、突发疾病等紧急情况。从最初遇险的惊慌害怕，绝望无助，到想办法救援，到最后获救的宽慰和感激，涉及到一系列的表达。情节线：遭遇危险（恶劣环境/危险描写和情感描写）—出现转机（想到办法和呼救求助）—救援脱险（救援描述和情感描写）—感悟升华（历险者/救援者）。情感线：焦急紧张/恐惧无助—筋疲力尽--欣喜/欣慰感动/感谢/感悟。遇困脱险续写要求：需体现从“困境”到“解决”的合理逻辑，包含行动决策、心理变化、外部帮助等要素。字数150左右。 写作方法 高考英语读后续写中的“遇困脱险类”题目要求考生在紧张的情节中展现人物克服困境的过程，以下是写作方法： 遇险阶段（首段）：用几个细节强化危机（如环境描写、人物动作）。 例：The flashlight flickered and died, plunging the cave into suffocating darkness. Emily's fingers trembled as she groped the slimy walls, her breath echoing louder with each step. 转折点（首段末/次段初）：引入关键道具/人物/灵感。 例：A faint glint caught her eye—the broken compass from her backpack, its needle stubbornly pointing southeast. 脱险高潮（次段中后部）：采用"尝试-失败-成功"递进，增加真实感。 例：Her first attempt to scale the cliff sent rocks tumbling. On the third try, a twisted root held firm beneath her bloodied hands. 升华结尾（末句）：用环境/对话收尾，避免说教。 例：As dawn painted the sky peach, the distant wail of sirens mingled with the rustle of wind through cornfields. 段落分配策略 首段解决核心危机的（如找到逃生线索） 次段完成脱险+主题升华（如领悟合作/勇气） 写作模版 用恶劣环境铺垫 1.The water was deep and running fast from a big rainstorm the night before. 前天晚上下了一场大暴雨，水又深又急。 2.The water twisted and turned him, scraping him against the rocks as he was carried along. Water gushed into his mouth and up his nose. 水流不停地扭动着他，旋转着他，把他蹭在岩石上。水灌进他的嘴里，没过了他的鼻子。 3. What's worse, he didn't have any food or water with him, let alone his cell phone or other supplies. 更糟糕的是，他没有任何食物和水，更不要说他的手机和其他日用品。 4. The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds. 天空阴沉，乌云密布。 5.The icy wind started howling, stinging my face. 寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。 6.The wind was howling and the waves smacked repeatedly against her face. 风在呼啸着，海浪不停地拍打着她的脸。 7.But then, as I looked in the distance, I discovered a series of three or four big waves heading towards the shore. 但后来，当我往远处看时，我发现有三四个大浪正在冲向海岸。 8.It swayed violently in a strong wind. Its roadway was damaged by vehicles. Its access was blocked by many people. 它在强风中剧烈摇晃。车辆损坏了道路。许多人堵住了通道。 用心理感受烘托 1.An ominous thought crossed his mind: I’m going to die up here. 一个不祥的念头掠过他的脑海：我要死在这了。 2.Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of fear surging through my whole body. 看着浩瀚的大海，我感到一种恐惧感掠过我的全身。 3.Salt stinging my eyes, I could hardly tell how long I could hold on. 盐刺痛了我的眼睛，我几乎不知道我能坚持多久。 4.Grief comes in waves. 悲伤如潮水一般涌来。 5. With a pounding heart and cold, moist palms, I felt faint. 最后一句话像一颗子弹击中了我的心。 6.Afraid and merely desperate, she rushed towards him. 她害怕而绝望，向他冲去。 用外貌神态烘托 1.Hearing the bad news, Mary froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground.  听到这个坏消息，玛丽吓得愣住了，好像长在了地上。 2.Tears blurred her eyes. 泪水模糊了她的双眼。 3. I sobbed bitterly, tasting the salt from the tears that streamed down my face. 我痛苦地抽泣着，尝到脸上流下泪水咸咸的味道。 4.She calmed down to keep the rhyme of breathing so that she could breathe evenly. 她平静下来，保持呼吸的韵律，以便能够均匀地呼吸。 5.I glanced back over my shoulder to make sure that no one was following me.  我回头瞟了一眼以确保没有人跟踪我。 用谋篇布局起伏情节 1.Ultimately, we were back, safe and sound. 最终，我们又回来了，安然无恙。 2.We jumped into the warm vehicle and the forester drove us to the ranger station, where we were given clothes and were able to call our parents. 我们跳上了温暖的车，森林管理员开车把我们送到护林员站，在那里我们得到了衣服，并可以打电话给我们的父母。 3.Suddenly it occurred to us that we could keep to the track to guide us back.But it was getting darker and darker, thus making it increasingly difficult for us to make out the road. 突然我们想到我们可以坚持小路引导我们回去。但天色越来越暗，使我们走道路越来越困难。 用万能升华点睛 That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever. 那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。 It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with, we mustn’t give up our hope. 正是这种独特的经历让我明白了我们所面临的任何困难，我们都不能放弃希望。 As long as we don’t give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely make a success sooner or later. 只要我们不放弃希望，不尽一切努力克服一切困难，我们迟早一定会取得成功的。 Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way. 直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。 遇到危险后，勇敢面对，才能解决问题。这个句子突出了“勇敢”这个核心，这在“脱险型”的故事里，是非常恰当的。这句话使用了倒装的结构和强调结构结合的方式，也属于高分亮点句。 遇困脱险类语料展示 1.pitch-dark cave（漆黑的洞穴） 2.a sense of claustrophobia（幽闭恐惧之感） 3.vast and desolate desert（广袤荒凉的沙漠） 4.a glimmer of determination（一丝决心） 5.think rationally（理性思考） 6.a hidden passage（隐藏的通道） 7.a strange marking（奇怪的标记） 8.a window of opportunity（机会窗口） 9.newfound energy（新的能量） 10.a test of my resilience（对我韧性的考验） Trapped in the pitch-dark cave, with the walls closing in on me and only a faint glimmer of light from my dying flashlight, a sense of claustrophobia and dread overwhelmed me. 被困在漆黑的洞穴里，墙壁仿佛向我逼近，仅有的手电筒微弱光线也逐渐消逝，幽闭恐惧和恐惧之感将我淹没。 Stranded in the middle of the vast and desolate desert, under the scorching sun that seemed to drain every ounce of energy from my body, I was facing a desperate situation with no sign of rescue in sight. 被困在广袤荒凉的沙漠中央，在炽热的太阳下，它似乎耗尽了我身体的每一丝能量，我面临着绝境，看不到救援的迹象。 Caught in the violent storm at sea, the small boat was tossed around like a toy, with waves crashing over the sides and threatening to capsize it at any moment. 在海上遭遇猛烈风暴，小船像玩具一样被抛来抛去，海浪拍打着船舷，随时可能将其掀翻。 My heart was pounding wildly as I contemplated the seemingly insurmountable odds against me, but a glimmer of determination flickered within me, refusing to give up. 当我思考着看似无法克服的困境时，我的心疯狂地跳动，但内心有一丝决心闪烁，不愿放弃。 Fear gnawed at my insides, yet I forced myself to stay calm and think rationally, knowing that panic would only make the situation worse. 恐惧啃噬着我的内心，但我强迫自己保持冷静并理性思考，因为我知道恐慌只会让情况更糟。 Doubt crept into my mind, wondering if I had the strength and the skills to survive this ordeal, but then I remembered past challenges I had overcome and drew inspiration from them. 怀疑悄悄潜入我的脑海，不知道自己是否有力量和技能度过这场磨难，但随后我想起了过去克服的挑战并从中汲取了灵感。 Scanning the surroundings with a desperate hope, I searched for any possible way out, my eyes straining to detect a hidden passage or a sign of safety. 怀着绝望的希望扫视周围环境，我寻找任何可能的出路，眼睛努力探寻隐藏的通道或安全的迹象。 I rummaged through my backpack, hoping to find something useful, a tool or a device that could help me signal for help or improvise an escape plan. 我在背包里翻找，希望找到有用的东西，一个工具或装置，可以帮助我发出求救信号或临时想出一个逃生计划。 Trying to recall any survival knowledge I had learned, I began to take small but crucial steps, like conserving water and finding shelter from the elements. 努力回忆我所学的任何生存知识，我开始采取虽小但关键的步骤，如节约用水和寻找躲避恶劣天气的地方。 Just when all hope seemed lost, a faint sound in the distance caught my attention, a sound that might be the engine of a passing boat or a search party. 就在所有希望似乎破灭时，远处一个微弱的声音引起了我的注意，这个声音可能是过往船只的引擎声或搜索队的声音。 As I was about to give up, I noticed a strange marking on the wall, which upon closer inspection, led me to a concealed opening that might be the way to freedom. 当我即将放弃时，我注意到墙上有一个奇怪的标记，仔细检查后，它带我找到了一个可能通往自由的隐蔽入口。 Suddenly, the storm began to subside, and the sea became calmer, presenting me with a window of opportunity to repair the damaged boat and make my way back to shore. 突然，风暴开始减弱，海面变得平静，为我提供了一个修复受损船只并返回岸边的机会窗口。 With newfound energy and determination, I followed the faint sound, carefully making my way through the treacherous terrain, every step filled with anticipation and caution. 带着新的能量和决心，我循着微弱的声音，小心翼翼地穿过危险的地形，每一步都充满期待和谨慎。 Using all my strength and the makeshift tools I had fashioned, I pried open the concealed opening and crawled through, not knowing what awaited me on the other side. 用尽我所有的力量和我临时制作的工具，我撬开了隐蔽的入口并爬了进去，不知道另一边等待我的是什么。 I set to work immediately, using the materials at hand to patch up the holes in the boat and rig up a makeshift sail, praying that it would hold until I reached land. 我立即开始工作，用手头的材料修补船上的漏洞并临时搭建了一个帆，祈祷它能坚持到我到达陆地。 Finally, reaching safety, I collapsed on the ground, exhausted but filled with a sense of relief and gratitude, realizing that every difficult moment had been a test of my resilience. 最终，到达安全地带，我瘫倒在地上，疲惫但充满了宽慰和感激之情，意识到每一个艰难时刻都是对我韧性的考验。 Looking back on the harrowing experience, I knew that I had emerged stronger and more resourceful, having learned to trust my instincts and never lose hope even in the darkest of times. 回顾这段可怕的经历，我知道自己变得更强大、更有智谋了，学会了相信自己的直觉，即使在最黑暗的时刻也永不失去希望。 The ordeal was over, but it had left an indelible mark on my soul, a reminder that life was full of unexpected challenges, and it was our ability to overcome them that defined us. 磨难结束了，但它在我的灵魂上留下了不可磨灭的印记，提醒我生活充满了意想不到的挑战，而我们克服它们的能力才定义了我们。 模拟再现 （一） （2025·新疆乌鲁木齐·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In the vast and stony deserts of eastern California, adventure and danger often go hand in hand. For Kevin with a thirst for exploration, this region was perfect. Since college, Kevin had crossed nearly every inch of the United States in search of thrills. For the last few years he had worked as a remote data analyst while traveling. Among his favorite spots was the town of Benton, where he had made a friend named Josh. Josh, a 38-year-old rock climber, had become a brother figure to Kevin. Josh taught Kevin rock climbing skills and showed him where to find the best crystals (水晶) in the mountains. Their friendship was shaped in the spirit of exploration, and together, they sought out the most remote and thrilling locations. One December morning, Kevin returned to Benton with an exciting discovery — a perfect spot, where they could find unique crystals and minerals. Despite the cold weather, Josh decided to join Kevin. They set off across the desert, Kevin carrying most of the equipment — scrapers (铲子), pickaxes(鹤嘴镐), and other tools. After an exhausting hike through sandy streams and over boulders (巨石), they reached a rocky hillside with “cool rocks” buried just in front of a pair of enormous boulders. For nearly two hours, the friends dug enthusiastically, uncovering rocks of all shapes and sizes. Around 3 p.m., Josh stepped aside to rest. Kevin continued to work in the hole they had dug, using a small scraper. Suddenly, Josh yelled, “Look out, Kevin!” Kevin turned back. And in that instant, the boulder rolled toward him, crashing his legs into the sand. His mind went into shock, and he wondered if this was how he would die. Josh grabbed a pickax and squeezed it between the boulder and the ground to prevent it from rolling further. With all his efforts, Josh managed to push the rock slightly. It was enough for Kevin to pull out his left leg, which was numb and severely injured, but his right leg remained trapped. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Josh, an experienced climber, knew the emergency of the situation. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ At around 8 p.m., after five hours of calling 911, the first pair of rescuers arrived on foot. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Josh, an experienced climber, knew the emergency of the situation. He quickly assessed Kevin’s condition, realizing that every second counted. He tore strips from his shirt to create a cloth bandage, applying it just above the knee to control any potential bleeding. Meanwhile, he knew they needed professional and fast help. He climbed to a higher point. Luckily, his cellphone had a signal and he called 911, giving their exact location. The operator assured him that help was on the way, but Josh knew it would take time to reach them in such a remote area. At around 8 p.m., after five hours of calling 911, the first pair of rescuers arrived on foot. With another pair finally making their way to the spot, the rescuers immediately began working to free Kevin. They carefully used specialized equipment to lift the massive boulder, finally releasing his trapped leg. Kevin was airlifted to the nearest hospital, where he received emergency medical treatment. After several hours of surgery and months of recovery, he began to heal. He was grateful to those who saved him. Now he knew he wanted to give back and this would be a kind of purpose in his life besides searching for adventure and thrill. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Kevin和Josh两位朋友在加利福尼亚东部沙漠中探险时遭遇意外，Kevin被巨石压住腿部，Josh紧急施救并呼叫救援，最终Kevin被成功救出并送往医院接受治疗的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“Josh是一位经验丰富的攀岩者，他深知情况的紧急性。”以及第二段首句内容“晚上8点左右，在拨打了5个小时的911之后，第一批救援人员徒步赶到了。”可知，第一段可描写Josh评估了Kevin的状况，并拨打了求救电话。 ②由第二段首句内容“晚上8点左右，在拨打了5个小时的911之后，第一批救援人员徒步赶到了。”可知，第二段可描写Kevin得到了援助，慢慢恢复了健康，他很感激这些帮助过他的人。 2.续写线索：Josh是一位经验丰富的攀岩者，他深知情况的紧急性——他迅速评估了Kevin的状况，意识到了事态的重要性——于是他先进行了急救，并拨打了求救电话，告知了确切的位置——5个小时后，救援人员终于到达了——在救援人员的帮助下，Kevin被送到了最近的医院，接受了治疗——Kevin经过了手术后，开始慢慢痊愈，他非常感激自己得到了这些人的帮助   3.词汇激活 行为类 ①意识到：realize/come to know ②开始：begin/start ③寻求：search for/look for 情绪类 ①幸运地：luckily/fortunately ②感激的：grateful/thankful 【点睛】【高分句型1】He quickly assessed Kevin’s condition, realizing that every second counted.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】The operator assured him that help was on the way, but Josh knew it would take time to reach them in such a remote area.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和省略that的宾语从句） （二） （2025·全国·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In November, Michael Cabeldu took a late-night drive along Highway 14, which winds through dense forests and bushes along the southern coast of Vancouver Island. Suddenly, a thick fog enveloped his vehicle, and his car swerved (突然转弯) off the road, rolling down a 45-degree slope. It crashed through bushes and finally came to a stop near the cliff edge. He knew if he went over that, his body might never be found. Michael was severely injured and trapped inside his car. With a broken nose, knees and ribs, he waited in the dark and in pain till dawn to assess his situation. When it was light enough, he tried to move, but every small shift was painful. He had no cellphone and no one knew he’d taken an unplanned drive. Besides, it was cold in the car. He had an extra sweater — ironically (讽刺地), printed with “live the adventure, live the dream”. He was left alone in the bushes and could only hope to be found. He had some food and drinks with him: mini chocolate bars, a bottle of water, half a bottle of sports drink, and some cold coffee. He had to ration these carefully, as they were all he had to eat and drink. In the car, Michael focused on survival. He slept sporadically (断断续续地). To keep his mind occupied, he talked to himself. He thought of different business ideas to make money once he was rescued. By the fourth afternoon, he decided he needed a strategy to attract attention. He tried to make a fire to send smoke signals for help. “I was trying to set the whole hillside on fire so someone would notice,” he said. Instead, rain started pouring down, putting out the flame before a fire could get going. He even tried drinking his own urine to stay hydrated, a survival trick he learned from a TV show. Every small movement was painful, but he kept trying to do what he could to survive. Finally, he heard voices above him. 注意：(1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Two university students, Ethan and Will, spotted his car while on a bike-camping trip. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A month after this accident, Michael invited Ethan and Will to his home to express his deep gratitude. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】    Two university students, Ethan and Will, spotted his car while on a bike-camping trip. Seeing the car was stuck in dense bushes, they decided to check it out. Carefully making their way down, they shouted, “Is anyone there?” A weak “Help!” came in response. They found Michael, who was shaking, cold and underdressed, and immediately gave him their jackets and a woolen hat to keep him warm. They tried to call 911 and fortunately they had cell service. Finally, many people worked together to get Michael out of the car and into a helicopter that flew him to the hospital .     A month after this accident, Michael invited Ethan and Will to his home to express his deep gratitude. As they walked through the door, Michael embraced them tightly. “You two are my heroes, and I’m so grateful to have you here today,” he said, choking with emotion. Ethan smiled, “Just lucky to be there.” Michael then presented both of them with a small gift to show his appreciation. While the accident had been a harrowing experience , it also brought lasting friendships and renewed Michael’s passion for life reminding him of the power of kindness and connections . 【导语】文章以人物为线索，讲述了迈克尔驾车时遭遇浓雾发生车祸并受伤严重被困车内，几日后被两名露营旅行的大学生发现并最终获救。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ① 由第一段首句“两个大学生，伊森和威尔，在一次自行车露营旅行中发现了他的车。”可知，本段可描写伊桑和威尔发现并帮助迈克尔以及迈克尔见到伊桑和威尔之后的反应 ② 由第二段首句“事故发生一个月后，迈克尔邀请伊森和威尔去他家表达他深深的感激之情。”可知，本段可描写伊森和威尔到达后的场景以及伊桑、威尔、迈克尔的互动和迈克尔的感悟 2. 续写线索：发现迈克尔——给予帮助——打911，被直升机送往医院——感激——感悟 3. 词汇激活： 行为类 ①被困：be stuck in/be trapped in ②决定：decide/determine ③喊叫：shout/yell ④表达：express/convey 情感类 ①感激：appreciation/gratitude ②痛心的：harrowing/heart-struck 【点睛】【高分句型1】They found Michael, who was shaking, cold and underdressed, and immediately gave him their jackets and a woolen hat to keep him warm. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Seeing the car was stuck in dense bushes, they decided to check it out. (运用了现在分词作状语) （三） （2025·河南·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was unseasonally hot in the Australian state of New South Wales. By mid-afternoon on Thursday, the sun was beating down and the clear blue skies showed no signs of the forecast rain. Adrian Main was doing what he loved, working outside in the bushes (灌木丛) that surround the leafy suburbs of Sydney. Guided by his love of mountain-bike riding, Adrian had founded Synergy Trails, a construction company that specialized in installing narrow, winding dirt-bike trails in the bushes for weekend and competition riders. It was dusty, dirty work at times, but with the trees providing shade and the only noise coming from his team and the local birds, there wasn’t any place he’d rather be. Over the years, the 40-year-old had encountered poisonous creatures while working around in soil, including poisonous spiders and snakes, but he knew how to distinguish the non-threatening ones from the really dangerous ones. Adrian was trained in first aid, though he never seriously thought he’d need it. With the clock ticking down towards the start of the weekend, Adrian had only a few chores left to do. His tool was in his vehicle, parked some 50 metres away. He considered getting it, but the job was small, and only a light dig was necessary to get beneath the shallow soil and leaf litter. So he used his hands instead. However, just as his fingers slid under the pile of leaves, he felt a sharp, deep pain in his left hand. Adrian quickly pulled out his hand, only to see a spider on his left index finger. The five-centimetre-long black creature  had its sharp teeth firmly cut into the skin. The pain felt as if a nail were being hammered into his finger. He shook his hand up and down hard to throw off the spider, and it finally dropped to the ground. It was a fully grown male Sydney funnel-web, the most poisonous spider in Australia. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Adrian’s heart sank when he realized what kind of spider had bitten him. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Within half an hour, they reached the hospital. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Adrian’s heart sank when he realized what kind of spider had bitten him. He knew the bite of a Sydney funnel web could be deadly. The pain in his finger was spreading rapidly up his arm, and he started to feel dizzy. Despite his fear, he quickly regained his composure. Remembering his first aid training, he immediately applied pressure to the wound and wrapped a tight bandage around his forearm to slow the venom’s spread. He then shouted for his team members. They rushed over, shocked by what had happened. One of them quickly called an ambulance while the others comforted Adrian, telling him that he would be okay. Within half an hour, they reached the hospital. The medical staff was waiting for them. They quickly took Adrian into the emergency room. Doctors examined his wound and started the treatment immediately. They injected the anti-venom, hoping to neutralize the deadly poison in his body. Adrian lay on the bed, his face pale but his eyes full of determination. As time passed, the pain began to ease, and the dizziness gradually subsided. After a few hours of careful observation, the doctors announced that he was out of danger. Adrian was relieved. This experience taught him that no matter how experienced one is, being prepared for emergencies is always crucial. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了澳大利亚新南威尔士州异常炎热，Adrian在悉尼郊区灌木丛工作时，被澳大利亚最毒的悉尼漏斗网蜘蛛咬伤。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“当Adrian意识到咬他的是哪种蜘蛛时，他的心沉了下去。”可知，第一段可描写Adrian虽害怕但迅速冷静，凭借急救知识采取措施，同时呼喊队友，队友赶来后有人叫救护车，有人安慰他。 ②由第二段首句内容“不到半小时，他们就到了医院。”可知，第二段可描写医护人员迅速对Adrian进行救治，注射抗毒血清，随着时间推移，他的症状缓解，最后脱离危险，此次经历让他明白应急准备的重要性。 2. 续写线索：Adrian被咬——采取急救措施——队友帮忙——送医治疗——脱离危险 3. 词汇激活： 行为类 ①开始：start/begin ②恢复：regain/restore/recover ③安慰：comfort/console/reassure 情绪类 ①镇静：composure/calm ②震惊的：shocked/startled/astonished 【点睛】[高分句型1] Remembering his first aid training, he immediately applied pressure to the wound and wrapped a tight bandage around his forearm to slow the venom’s spread.(运用了现在分词作伴随状语) [高分句型2] As time passed, the pain began to ease, and the dizziness gradually subsided.(运用了从属连词as引导时间状语从句) [高分句型3] This experience taught him that no matter how experienced one is, being prepared for emergencies is always crucial.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及no matter how引导的让步状语从句) 题型通关 （一） （2025·河北保定·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 As I’ve grown older, my connection to nature has become stronger. Recently, I was fortunate to spend a good part of a week in the wilderness, following the teachings of my father from my childhood. Ever since I was 10, my sister, father, and I would load up his canoe (独木舟) with supplies and set off into the heart of Algonquin Park. There were years when I ignored the call of Algonquin, caught up in the busyness of life —graduating from school and raising young children. It all felt incredibly demanding. But as time passed, my children grew older, and the call of Algonquin grew louder. With the support of my family, I finally listened to that call again, and started planning to take part in one of our family trips there. My family's rich experience in the outdoors has been invaluable for such trips. My sister, a teacher, carefully planned our trips while my dad, a skilled outdoorsman, effortlessly handled tasks like setting up camp and preparing meals. And my husband is really strong and good at moving things around. But, as the trip got closer, my husband suddenly hurt his leg. And suddenly, I was faced with managing the first part of the trip as the only adult. Could I drive my daughter, alone, to Algonquin's remote north boundary to meet my dad and mom? Could I steer (驾驶) the canoe? Could I carry the canoe? I had driven across Canada, alone, in my twenties, well before Google Maps. I was pretty sure I could steer if we kept to smaller lakes that were less likely to become windswept. But I feared carrying a canoe. Plus, lifting it onto my shoulders seemed impossible for someone of my strength. But Algonquin was calling me. I recalled the fearless independence of my younger self and called Dad. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “If we shorten the route and find a lightweight canoe, we are coming,” I told him. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When we finally arrived, my parents were waiting with open arms. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 “If we shorten the route and find a lightweight canoe, we are coming,” I told him. With his guidance, we chose a more manageable path and rented a lightweight canoe that was easier to handle. Despite my initial doubts, we started our adventure, determined to meet my parents at the appointed spot. The journey was filled with challenges, but with each one we overcame, my confidence grew. Sailing the lake was less frightening than I had expected, and my daughter proved to be a capable and enthusiastic co-pilot. When we finally arrived, my parents were waiting with open arms. Their faces lit up with pride as they saw us paddle in. “You did it!” my dad cried, hugging me tightly. “We knew you could,” my mom added, her voice filled with emotion. Together, we unpacked the canoe and set up camp, sharing stories of our journey around a campfire. That night, under the starry sky, I realized that nature not only called to me but also empowered me. The wilderness helped me become stronger and more independent, reminding me of the strength I carried within. 【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，作者回忆起从小与父亲和妹妹一起在阿尔冈昆公园探险的经历，但曾因生活的忙碌而暂时忽略了这份召唤。随着时间的推移，孩子们长大，作者对阿尔冈昆的向往再次被唤醒。在家人的支持下，作者开始计划再次参与家庭旅行。然而，临近出发时，丈夫突然受伤，作者不得不独自承担起管理旅行初段的责任，包括独自驾车带女儿前往阿尔冈昆公园，以及面对驾驶和搬运独木舟的挑战。尽管作者对独自驾车有信心，但对搬运独木舟感到担忧。但最终，作者对自然的渴望战胜了恐惧，她回想起了年轻时无畏的独立精神，并决定迎接挑战，联系父亲继续前行。 【详解】1.段落续写 ①由第一段首句内容““如果我们缩短路线，找一艘轻便的独木舟，那我们就去，”我告诉他。”可知，第一段可描写作者克服困难，驾驶独木舟与父母会合的经过。 ②由第二段首句内容“当我们终于抵达时，我的父母张开双臂迎接我们。”可知，第二段可描写作者的父母为作者感到自豪，一家人分享旅途中的故事以及作者的感悟。 2.续写线索：选择路线，踏上冒险之旅——克服困难，顺利会合——父母夸赞——分享旅途故事——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①选择：chose/pick out ②决定做某事：determine to do sth/decide to do sth ③充满：be filled with/be full of ④拥抱：hug/embrace 情绪类 ①令人害怕的： frightening/dreadful ②充满热情的：enthusiastic/passionate 【点睛】[高分句型1] With his guidance, we chose a more manageable path and rented a lightweight canoe that was easier to handle.（运用了that引导定语从句） [高分句型2] That night, under the starry sky, I realized that nature not only called to me but also empowered me.（运用了that引导宾语从句） （二） （2025·甘肃兰州·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Jameson Lobb, a 24-year-old investment banker from Toronto, had just started his new job on Wall Street. He was sharing a New York City apartment with his college friend, Raphael Jafri, an artificial intelligence engineer. One lunchtime, while working out on Pier (水上码头) 15, overlooking the East River, Lobb suddenly froze. “Someone’ s in the water,” he said. Without hesitation, he climbed over the rail and jumped into the cold, polluted river, still wearing his shoes. Jafri didn’t see the victim but trusted Lobb’s instincts. “Maybe he saw someone in trouble,” he thought. “Or maybe he needs my help.” Without delay, Jafri kicked off his shoes and dove in after his friend. Lobb reached the unconscious man first. He was middle-aged, well-dressed, and weighed about 200 pounds. The man was sinking fast, already three feet below the surface. Lobb dove down,grabbed him, and kicked upward until they both resurfaced. By then, Jafri had arrived. Together,they floated the man on his back, with Jafri supporting his shoulders and Lobb holding his hips and knees. The water was swirling (旋动), and their muscles burned as they struggled to pull the heavy,lifeless body toward the pier. The man’s skin was blue, and he wasn’t breathing. When they finally reached Pier 15, they faced another challenge: how to get out. The pier’s deck was 10 feet above them, and the water’s surface was covered in sharp shellfish. Jafri, barefoot, couldn’t climb without injuring himself. Suddenly, the man stirred (微动), breathing again. In his confusion, he lashed out, hitting Jafri in the face before slipping back into unconsciousness. The two friends, exhausted and struggling,now had to find a way to save themselves and the man they had risked everything to rescue. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 On the pier, a crowd had gathered. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Lobb and Jafri remained in the water a few minutes more, until they were rescued by theCoast Guard. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Paragraph 1: On the pier, a crowd had gathered. Some shouted for help, some scrambled to throw ropes and life jackets into the water, and even someone called the Coast Guard. The man remained unconscious, his body heavy and lifeless, but Lobb and Jafri refused to give up. Despite their exhaustion, they held onto him tightly, their arms and legs buming from the effort. With the two men pushing from below and the crowd pulling from above, the man’s body slowly rose until helping hands pulled him onto the pier. Paragraph 2: Lobb and Jafri remained in the water a few minutes more, until they were rescued by theCoast Guard. When they were safely brought to the pier, the crowd erupted in cheers. Exhausted and bleeding from shellfish cuts, the two men managed to smile with relief as they watched the nearly drowned man being loaded into an ambulance. Despite their fatigue, they felt a profound sense of pride, knowing they had done something extraordinary. Their courageous and selfless act of saving a life left a lasting impression on all who witnessed it. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，文章主要讲述了来自多伦多的詹姆森·洛布与拉斐尔·贾弗里在水上码头健身时，发现一名中年男子落水。两人先后毫不犹豫地跳入寒冷且污染严重的河中，合力将昏迷的男子救起。尽管过程中面临重重困难，但他们始终不放弃，最终在岸上群众的协助下成功将男子救上岸。他们的英勇无私行为给所有目击者留下了深刻印象。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“在码头上，人群聚集。”可知，第一段可描写人们聚集在码头上，对落水人进行救援，同时洛布和贾弗在码头虽然筋疲力尽，但是仍旧拼尽全力进行救援的经过。 ②由第二段首句内容“洛布和贾夫里在水里又呆了几分钟，直到他们被海岸警卫队救起。”可知，第二段可描写溺水者得到救助后，两人也被救起，现场人们的反应以及两人的心理感受。 2.续写线索：人们焦急——筋疲力竭但是仍坚持救援——成功救援——群众欢呼——感到自豪——留下印象 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①放弃：give up/abandon ②爆发：erupt/burst into ③拯救：save/rescue 情绪类 ①疲惫：exhausted/worn out/tired out ②自豪：feel a sense of pride/take pride/be proud 【点睛】[高分句型1] With the two men pushing from below and the crowd pulling from above, the man’s body slowly rose until helping hands pulled him onto the pier.（运用了含有with的复合结构和until引导的时间状语从句） [高分句型2] Despite their fatigue, they felt a profound sense of pride, knowing they had done something extraordinary. （运用了介词短语作状语以及现在分词作状语的结构） （三） （2025·山东日照·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was the summer of 2019, and I was part of a team of eight climbers attempting to reach the top of Mount Rainier in Washington State. We had been training for over a year, preparing for the physical and mental challenges of the climb. Our team, composed of experienced mountaineers and a few beginners like myself, had grown close during our training sessions. We relied on each other for support, encouragement, and motivation. If someone was struggling, the rest of us would step in to help, whether it was carrying extra sports equipment or offering words of encouragement. The first two days of the climb went smoothly. We made good progress, reaching Camp Muir at 10,000 feet without any major issues. The weather was perfect, and our spirits were high. On the third day, we began our push for the peak. The plan was to start early in the morning, around 2 a.m., to take advantage of the colder, firmer snow. We roped up and began the climb, each of us focused on the task at hand. As we approached Disappointment, Cleaver, a steep and dangerous section of the climb, the weather began to change. The wind picked up, and the temperature dropped significantly. We could barely see more than a few feet in front of us because of the dense fog, and the snow underfoot became unstable. Despite the challenging conditions, we carried on, determined to reach the peak. Then, disaster struck. One of our team members, Sarah, lost her footing and slipped. The force of her fall pulled the rest of us off balance, and we all fell, sliding down the slope (斜坡). I felt a sharp pain in my leg as I hit a rock, and I knew immediately that something was wrong. The rest of the team quickly regained their footing and managed to stop our slide, but I was unable to stand. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “I think my leg is broken,” I said painfully. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The rescue team arrived finally. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】“I think my leg is broken,” I said painfully. The team members gathered around me, their faces filled with worry. Our team leader, Mark, quickly assessed the situation. He gently examined my leg, trying to determine the extent of the injury. Sarah, who felt guilty for causing the fall, was on the verge of tears. “I’m so sorry, this is all my fault,” she sobbed. Everyone comforted her, emphasizing that accidents happen. Mark radioed for help, but due to the poor weather conditions, the rescue team couldn’t reach us immediately. In the freezing cold, the team huddled around me, sharing their body heat to keep me warm. The rescue team arrived finally. They carefully strapped me onto a stretcher and carried me down the mountain. The rest of the team followed closely behind, relieved that I was in professional hands.  Back at the base camp, I received medical treatment. Although my leg was broken, I was filled with gratitude for my teammates. They had not only supported me during the accident but also made the decision to stay with me instead of continuing their journey to the peak. The experience taught me the true meaning of teamwork and friendship. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了2019年夏，作者参与八人团队攀登华盛顿州雷尼尔山，团队训练超一年且成员彼此支持。前两日攀登顺利，第三天接近 “失望之角” 时天气恶化，队员莎拉滑倒致众人摔倒，作者腿部受伤无法站立。队友围拢，队长查伤情，莎拉自责，因天气差救援未及时到，众人保暖。最终救援队至，作者下山接受治疗。虽骨折，但作者感激队友支持及放弃登顶的陪伴，体会到团队合作与友谊的真谛。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我想我的腿断了。我痛苦地说。”可知，第一段可描写队长马克检查了作者的伤情以及用无线电求救。 ②由第二段首句内容“救援队终于到了。”可知，第二段可描写作者接受了治疗以及对这次登山经历的感受。 2.续写线索：我想我的腿断了——队长马克检查了我的腿——用无线电求救——救援队终于到了——得到了治疗——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①评估：assessed / evaluated ②检查：examined /checked ③强调：emphasizing /stressing 情绪类 ①感激：gratitude / appreciation ②内疚的：guilty / compunctious 【点睛】[高分句型1]Sarah, who felt guilty for causing the fall, was on the verge of tears.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句） [高分句型2]Although my leg was broken, I was filled with gratitude for my teammates.（运用了Although引导的让步状语从句） （四） （2025·江西·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Steger grew up in Bellingham, Washington, about an hour’s drive from where he was now, trapped in the Mount Baker Ski Area. The remote place is marked by ropes and signs to warn people that they’re leaving the safe zone. Steger and his three fellows had all the required equipment, a two-way radio and a backpack with a shovel when they started their second skiing in the morning. On that Friday run, Steger’s friends were in front of him when Steger, moving through the trees, ran into trouble. The front of his board hit a small branch hidden under new snow. Steger fell into a tree well (树坑). Before he could call for help, he was upside down in deeper snow than he’d ever been in. All he could see was blackness. One of Steger’s arms was pinned next to his body. Luckily, his other arm had ended up next to his face, so he managed to push the snow away from his mouth, creating a small air pocket. To prevent snow from falling in and covering his mouth, he pulled the tip of his jacket over his face. And now all he could do was stay calm and wait to be rescued. He figured two or so minutes had passed. Then the two-way radio on his shoulder crackled with messages from his friends “Where are you? Let’s know if you’re in front of us!” He replied and mentioned about his situation. He knew that his friends were downhill from where he was stuck. His friends were surprised and convinced him that they were on their long difficult way back up the hill to rescue him. Meanwhile, it was up to Steger to get himself out, or he’d die. Then he felt his snowboard, still attached to his feet, move. Francis Zuber, 28-year-old, had gone to Mount Baker Ski Area that Friday to ski. As he sped down the slope, Zuber caught a glimpse of something red. That’s when he saw that the upside-down snowboard in a tree well was moving. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 “Someone might be trapped under the snow in the tree well,” Zuber thought. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Once they were out, Steger wrapped Zuber in a bear hug. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 “Someone might be trapped under the snow in the tree well,” Zuber thought. Without hesitation, he quickly skied towards the moving snowboard. When he got closer, he shouted, “Is anyone there?” Steger heard his voice and replied loudly. Zuber realized the situation was urgent. He took out the shovel from his backpack and started to dig the snow around the tree well. The snow was hard, but he didn’t give up. After several minutes of hard work, he finally saw Steger’s face. With great effort, he pulled Steger out of the snow. Once they were out, Steger wrapped Zuber in a bear hug. “Thank you so much! You saved my life,” Steger said, his voice full of emotion. Just then, Steger’s friends arrived. They were shocked to see Steger safe and sound. They all expressed their gratitude to Zuber, saying that his help was a lifesaver. Zuber smiled and said, “I’m just glad I could help. It’s what anyone would do in that situation.” Then, they all sat down for a while, sharing their experiences and feelings. After that, they skied down the mountain together, with a new friendship formed among them. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Steger在贝克山滑雪时遭遇意外，掉进树坑被困雪中，他通过自救暂时维持生命并与朋友取得联系，此时Zuber看到了他移动的滑雪板，一场救援即将展开的故事。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容 “‘有人可能被困在树井的雪下，’Zuber想到。” 可知，第一段可描写Zuber确定有人被困后，迅速采取行动进行救援的经过。他可能先是大声呼喊确认被困者位置，接着利用自己携带的工具，如铲子，艰难地挖掘积雪，在挖掘过程中遇到积雪坚硬、挖掘空间受限等困难，但他凭借坚定的决心和不懈的努力，最终成功救出斯泰格。 ②由第二段首句内容 “他们一出去，斯泰格就紧紧抱住了祖贝尔。” 可知，第二段可描写Steger获救后对Zuber表达深深感激，随后他的朋友们赶到，大家一起向Zuber致谢，之后他们交流此次经历的感受，最后一起滑雪下山，在这个过程中他们建立起了新的友谊。 2. 续写线索：发现被困——救援行动——成功救出——表达感谢——朋友赶到——交流感受——建立友谊 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①.呼喊：shout / yell ②.坐下：sit down / take a seat / settle down ③.分享：share / exchange / communicate about 情绪类 ①.感激：gratitude / appreciation / thankfulness ②.高兴的：glad / pleased / delighted 【点睛】[高分句型 1]. It’s what anyone would do in that situation.（使用what引导表语从句） [高分句型 3]. They all expressed their gratitude to Zuber, saying that his help was a lifesaver. （使用现在分词短语saying作伴随状语和that引导宾语从句） （五） （2024·全国·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My story took place in Kansas on Highway 70. It was September 4th, 2014, and I was riding a motorcycle. I was by myself and in a hurry, trying to make it to Hays to take a conference call. I had just passed a group of cars when my motorbike began to wobble (摇晃). I did what I had been taught to do, but in vain. Later, the handlebars of my motorbike turned sharply enough to hit the gas tank. Needless to say, the motorbike and I went down. I don’t remember hitting the highway, but I remember rolling. According to the state police who responded, I rolled 475 feet from where the motorbike hit the road. When I stopped rolling, I was face down. The white stripe (条纹) marking the left side of the road was by my left hand. I was still in the road. I heard the cars I had just passed approaching. Afraid cars would be avoiding the motorbike parts and not see me, I rolled over one more time and off the road. The first car slowed as it passed me. Before it even stopped, the passenger was out the door running back to me. She had already called 911 and was talking to the operator as she got to me. She was calm as she relayed that I was awake and talking. Shortly after that, the next two cars stopped. While some helped take care of me, others gathered my possessions and motorbike parts off the highway. These people stood in the very hot Kansas sun talking to me and keeping me calm. When I had too much sun on my raw arms, they found a blanket and umbrella. They stood in the sun making shade for me. A tow truck (牵引车) came and pulled my motorbike off. As I heard the ambulance approach and realized my leathers would be cut off, I panicked and tried to get up. These strangers calmed me down and figured out how to unzip (拉开拉链) my leather overalls without allowing me to move so the ambulance attendants wouldn’t cut them off. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The kindness of ordinary people didn’t stop there. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I was deeply moved by their kindness. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 The kindness of ordinary people didn’t stop there. At about 10 p.m., I was in the hospital when I realized I had left my phone and purse in the saddlebags of the motorbike. My son called the owner of the tow truck company and explained I really had to have the contents of my saddlebags that night. This kind man left his house, drove back to his yard, and placed the contents of the motorbike where my son would be able to get them. It took him almost an hour of his family time. He didn’t have to. He could have said no. I was deeply moved by their kindness. People stopped what they were doing and delayed where they were going to help a stranger. They didn’t have to. They got no recognition. They got no thanks. I don’t even know their names. I was and I am lifted up knowing that some people will take care of a stranger when the stranger can’t care for themselves. What they had done greatly comforted and inspired me. I made up my mind that I would pay their kindness forward whenever it was possible. 【导语】本文以作者骑摩托车发生事故为线索展开，讲述作者在高速路上摩托车失控摔倒，路人们纷纷伸出援手救助，展现了普通人的善良与温暖。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“普通人的善良并没有就此止步。”可知，第一段可描写作者在医院意识到自己的物品遗落在摩托车上后，拖车公司老板无私帮助作者取回物品。 ②由第二段首句内容“我被他们的善良深深打动。”可知，第二段可描写作者对这些陌生人无私帮助的感慨，以及这些行为对作者的深远影响，包括作者决定将这种善良传递下去。 2.续写线索：作者发现物品遗失——联系拖车公司——老板无私帮助——作者感慨万分——决定传递善良 3.词汇激活： 行为类： ①意识到：realize (that)/become aware that ②激励：inspire/motivate ③下定决心：make up one’s mind that/be determined that 情绪类： ①感谢：thanks/gratitude ②安慰，抚慰：comfort/console 【点睛】[高分句型1] My son called the owner of the tow truck company and explained I really had to have the contents of my saddlebags that night. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句) [高分句型2] This kind man left his house, drove back to his yard, and placed the contents of the motorbike where my son would be able to get them. (运用了连接副词where引导地点状语从句) [高分句型3] I made up my mind that I would pay their kindness forward whenever it was possible.(运用了连词that引导同位语从句和whenever引导时间状语从句) （六） （24-25高三上·重庆·期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Joe, a man who was pushed into a desperate situation by the weight of life’s pressures, walked unsteadily back to his rental home. Blood streaming down from his eyes and forehead. The sky was covered with thick darkness. He had only one thought in mind: return home and sink into a deep sleep. His business failed several years ago. Then he was trapped in the hardship of pancreatitis (胰腺炎). Yet, fate did not spare him. One day, after falling down in a faint, he was diagnosed with a deadly brain disease inherited from his father. Keeping it a secret from his parents, he struggled to maintain the false image of a normal life. He injected medicine daily, rented a smaller room, and cut his expenses to the lowest, all to save more money to repay debts. That deep night, he suffered another attack of dizziness and collapsed with his electric bike in a tunnel. His head was injured while falling down, blood shed at the scene. After returning to consciousness, he finally made his way back to his room like a drunk man. He climbed onto the bed and lay motionless, as if waiting for death. At the same time, some people were looking for him. Officer Simon in the local police station had received several emergency calls reporting that someone had fallen down inside a tunnel and was unable to get up. “I guessed he had drunk too much. He looked very dangerous,” said a passerby. Three policemen led by Simon responded to the emergency call. They had handled over 20 emergency cases that day and had only eaten dinner at 11 pm. Despite their tiredness, they rushed to the scene, only to find a broken electric bike and some blood on the scene. Through security cameras, they finally traced Joe’s whereabouts and located his rental room at the end of a dark street. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Hearing a hurried knock, Joe weakly opened the door, surprised to see the police. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The police later shared their rescue experience on social media, drawing more attention. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Possible version 1： Hearing a hurried knock, Joe weakly opened the door, surprised to see the police.“Are you Joe?” Officer Simon asked anxiously, stepping inside and scanning the dimly lit room. Joe nodded weakly, his eyes still half-closed with exhaustion. The policemen quickly assessed his condition, noting the bloodstains on his clothes and he visible injury on his head. They gently guided him on to the couch and called for an ambulance. As they waited, they comforted Joe, reassuring him that he was safe and that help was on the way. Joe, overwhelmed by the sudden concern, began to sob quietly, feeling a warmth he hadn’t experienced in along time. The police later shared their rescue experience on social media, drawing more attention. The post quickly went viral, touching the hearts of many, with netizens praising the officers for their dedication and compassion. Donations poured in for Joe’s medical expenses, and volunteers offered to assist with his daily needs. Strangers reached out, offering words of encouragement and hope. Joe, who had long felt abandoned by fate, was touched by the warmth of strangers. With the help of the police and the kindness of netizens, he began to regain hope, starting to rebuild his life. The dark tunnel he once stumbled through became a passage to a brighter future. Possible version 2： Hearing a hurried knock, Joe weakly opened the door, surprised to see the police. Officer Simon,at the front, immediately noticed Joe’s terrible state.“Sir, are you all right?We received a call about someone in danger and found your bike and blood near the tunnel.”Joe nodded faintly, trying to convey his gratitude. The policemen quickly assessed his condition and insisted on taking him to the hospital. Reluctantly, Joe agreed, realizing that his life was still worth fighting for. As they left, Simon gently reassured him,“Don’t worry, we’ll take care of everything.” The police later shared their rescue experience on social media,draving more attention. They described the miserable scene in the tunnel and Joe’s fragile condition when they found him. The post highlighted the importance of responding to emergency calls promptly and the dedication of the police force in saving lives. Netizens we re moved by Joe's story and the officers' compassion. Donations poured in for Joe’s medical expenses,and messages of encouragement flooded his inbox, reminding him that he was not alone in his battle. The community gathered around him, offering not just financial support but emotional strength,turning Joe’s tale of despair into the story of faith, hope and love. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了被生活压力推入绝境的主人公Joe在深夜回家时，因眩晕骑电动车摔倒在隧道里，头部受伤，现场有流血。Joe醒后独自回到了家中，意志消沉。警察接到隧道有人受伤的举报电话后，经过努力寻找，终于找到了躺在出租屋的Joe，并给予他无微不至的关怀和及时的治疗，并在网上分享了救助过程，吸引了大量网民的帮助和鼓励，使得Joe感受到了温暖，重拾希望，建设新生活。 【详解】以第一篇为例 1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“听到急促的敲门声，Joe无力地打开门，惊讶地发现是警察。”可知，该段可描写警察来后对Joe的帮助。 ②由第二段首句内容“警方随后在社交媒体上分享了他们的救援经历，吸引了更多的关注。”可知，该段可描写网友们对Joe的支持和帮助，以及Joe的感受和行动。 2. 续写线索：警察到来——对Joe情况的查看，给予关怀——叫来救护车送往医院——Joe感动——网上分享——网友们的帮助和鼓励——感动——重拾希望——点题 3. 词汇激活： 行为类： ①评估、评价：assess/evaluate ②带领、引导：guide/lead ③提供：offer/provide ④遗弃、抛弃：abandon/desert 情绪类： ①不安地、忧虑地：anxiously/restlessly ②鼓励：encouragement/inspiration 【点睛】【高分句型1】As they waited, they comforted Joe, reassuring him that he was safe and that help was on the way.（运用了以连词as引导的时间状语从句和两个并列的以连接词that引导的宾语从句。） 【高分句型2】Joe, who had long felt abandoned by fate, was touched by the warmth of strangers.（运用了以关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句。） （七） （2024·四川绵阳·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Due to a medical misdiagnosis (误诊), Susan, 34, had been left sightless, and was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness, anger, frustration and self-pity. And all she had to depend on was her husband, Mark. Mark was an officer and he loved Susan with all his heart. When she first lost her sight, he watched her sink into despair. He was determined to help his wife gain confidence to become independent and return to her normal life again. But how would he do that? Susan used to take the bus to work, but now she was too frightened to face the whole world. Mark decided to convince Susan to take the bus again. Perhaps one day she could enjoy a city tour all by herself or buy some daily grocery in the supermarket three stops away. But she was still so moody and sensitive. How would she react? One day, Mark summoned up his courage and said “Honey, life shall move on, let’s try taking the bus as the first step, OK?” Just as he predicted, Susan was scared at the idea of taking the bus on her own. “I’m blind!” she responded bitterly. “How am I supposed to know where I am going? I feel like you’re abandoning me.” Mark’s heart broke hearing these words, but he knew what had to be done. He promised Susan he would ride the bus with her until she got the hang of it. And that was exactly what happened. For a whole week, Mark accompanied Susan on the bus. He taught her how to rely on her other senses, specifically her hearing, to determine where she was and how to adapt to her new environment. He helped her befriend the bus drivers who could watch out for her, and save her a seat. Finally, Susan decided to try the trip on her own. Mark encouraged her and decided to continue watching out for her until she got off the bus, only in secret. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 With the help of her walking stick, she slowly made it to the bus stop. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ She asked the driver, “Why do you say that I’m very lucky?” ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     With the help of her walking stick, she slowly made it to the bus stop. Hearing the bus arrive, Susan got on alone and sat in the seat that the driver had reserved for her. She was nervous but excited all the way until she got off the bus at the stop smoothly, where Mark was waiting for her. Hugging Susan gently, Mark said he was proud of her. For the rest of the week, Susan went on her own perfectly and she had never felt better. On Friday morning, as she was getting off the bus, the driver said, “Do you know you are very lucky?” Hearing this, Susan felt curious.     She asked the driver, “Why do you say that I’m very lucky?” The driver responded, “You know, every morning for the past week, a gentleman in a military uniform has been watching you as you get off the bus until you safely enter your office building. You are one lucky lady.” Tears of happiness poured down Susan’s cheeks. Although she couldn’t see him physically, she had always felt Mark’s presence. She was so lucky, for her husband had given her a gift she didn’t need to see to believe - the gift of love that can bring light where there is darkness. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Susan因误诊而失明后，她的丈夫Mark帮助她克服了内心的恐惧，使她能够一个人乘坐公交车上下班的故事。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“在手杖的帮助下，她慢慢地走到了公共汽车站。”可知，第一段可描写Susan成功地做到了一个人乘坐公交车上下班，和司机说她很幸运的话让她感到困惑。 ②由第二段首句内容“她问司机：‘你为什么说我很幸运？’”可知，第二段可描写司机解释这么说的原因和Susan知道了丈夫对她的帮助后的表现和感受。 2. 续写线索：Susan独自坐车——成功做到了——Mark为她自豪——司机说Susan很幸运——解释原因——得知真相——感动——感想，点明主题 3. 词汇激活： 行为类： ①拥抱：hug/embrace ②走进：enter/walk into ③相信：believe/trust 情绪类： ①兴奋的：excited/thrilled ②幸福：happiness/blessedness 【点睛】【高分句型1】She was nervous but excited all the way until she got off the bus at the stop smoothly, where Mark was waiting for her. (运用了从属连词until引导的时间状语从句和以关系副词where引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Although she couldn’t see him physically, she had always felt Mark’s presence. (运用了从属连词although引导的让步状语从句) （八） （2024·湖南长沙·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My wife was away for a few days and I hated the thought of leaving my new dog Honey alone. “Come on, Honey. Let’s go.” She jumped into the car and settled down in the passenger seat. I got behind the wheel and started the car. We live in a remote area up in the hills, surrounded by many tall trees. You have to drive up the mountain slowly to get to our driveway, which is barely wide enough for one car. I turned around my car and backed up slowly, just then, a flash of afternoon sunlight blinded me. I put my hand up to protect my eyes. I felt a sudden sharp movement as the left back wheel of the car slipped in the soft soil, and it rolled. I hadn’t put on my seat belt yet and I fell downwards inside the car and the car hit the ground several times as it turned over down the valley, Tree branches broke with great sharp noise. The car rolled faster, four, five, six, … , until it came to a complete stop. We landed upside down and I got stuck completely in the car. I looked over to find Honey. She was still in the passenger seat and fortunately, she was okay. “Sorry, girl,” I took a deep breath. I tried to see if I could remove myself from behind the wheel. I felt a burning pain in my chest and something was wrong with my left leg. I cried out from the pain. I grabbed my cellphone and dialed 911. Just as I had feared, I couldn’t get a signal at the bottom of the valley. I figured we were at least 50 feet down. Robin, my closest neighbor, had his own driveway, living a mile uphill from me. There was no reason he or anyone else would drive to my house. And even if someone did, they wouldn’t see the damaged car here. Painfully, I managed to reach over and pick Honey up. I gently gave her a pat. “Go home, baby.” She jumped to the ground and raced up the side of the valley. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I sat there for hours. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Bang! The noise woke me up; I could recognize it was my neighbor, Robin! _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I sat there for hours. The pain in my chest and leg was unbearable. I closed my eyes, trying to ignore the pain and conserve my energy. Time seemed to stand still as I waited, hoping for a miracle. Just then, I heard a familiar bark. It was Honey! She had returned, but where was she? I craned my neck to see her standing at the top of the valley, barking loudly. She was trying to get someone’s attention. My heart soared with hope. Maybe she could lead someone to me. Bang! The noise woke me up; I could recognize it was my neighbor, Robin! “Help!” I screamed. “I’m here! Down in the valley!” Robin peered over the edge and his eyes widened in horror at the sight of my overturned car. “Don’t worry, I’ll get help!” he yelled before rushing back to his house. Robin had called the emergency services and they were finally able to locate me thanks to Honey’s persistent barking. As the paramedics carefully extracted me from the wreckage, I clung to Honey, tears streaming down my face. I knew I had her to thank for my rescue. She had saved my life. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者带着新养的狗Honey开车外出，却在上山途中因阳光刺眼发生翻车事故，被困车内且受伤。手机无法求救，于是作者让狗回家报信求援。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我在那里坐了好几个小时。”可知，第一段可描写主人公在疼痛中的心理状态，他如何努力保持冷静，同时内心期盼着能够得到救援。 ②由第二段首句内容“砰!喧闹声把我吵醒了；我能认出那是我的邻居Robin!”可知，第二段可具体描写Robin如何被Honey引来，他发现了主人公的困境并迅速采取行动，以及最终如何帮助主人公脱困。 2.续写线索：疼痛中保持冷静——期盼救援——Honey引来Robin——Robin发现并寻求救援——主人公脱困并感激 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①忽视：ignore/neglect ②高声喊：scream/shout ③紧紧抓住：cling to/catch hold of 情绪类 ①希望出现奇迹：hope for a miracle/expect a miracle ②震惊地：in horror/in shock 【点睛】[高分句型1] Time seemed to stand still as I waited, hoping for a miracle.(运用了as引导时间状语从句和现在分词作伴随状语) [高分句型2] I could recognize it was my neighbor, Robin!(运用了省略连词that的宾语从句) [高分句型3] I clung to Honey, tears of gratitude streaming down my face.(运用了独立主格结构) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$