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专题12读后续写之善举助人类
第一部分
题型分析
第二部分
写作方法
第三部分
满分表达
第四部分
金句摘录
第五部分
语段赏析
第六部分
模拟再现
第七部分
题型通关
题型分析
高考英语读后续写中,"善举助人"类题型是高频主题之一,其核心在于通过情节设计体现人性温暖、传递正向价值观。助人为乐是中华民族传统美德,也是读后续写常见的故事类型。由于这类语篇非常适合给学生传达积极向上的正能量,因此颇受出题者的偏爱。助人为乐类语篇在续写中涉及到话题可能涉及到家庭、学校、工作、生活等方方面面,尤其是学生-学生之间,老师-学生之间,邻居之间,陌生人之间等。描写的部分主要有以下情况:遭遇困难的绝望、无助、尴尬、窘迫、苦恼等等,提供帮助的想法、言语、动作等等,受到帮助的感激、感动、温暖,困难得以解决的开心喜悦,以及最后主题升华的意识领悟。
写作方法
在续写善举助人主题时,情节构建可以分为以下三步:
第一步:困难描写--消极情绪+困境场景情感表现:无助、困惑、焦急、失望、恐惧、沮丧肢体动作:握紧双手、眉头紧锁、叹气、双肩垂下、深吸一口气
第二步:助人过程呈现(找到方法+行动细节)助他型:主动发现他人困难——克服障碍——提供帮助他助型:请求援助——寻求指导——得到帮助
第三步:圆满结局(感激+感动+升华)情感表达:欣慰、温暖、感激、开心、满足、释然
满分表达
困难处境来铺垫
1.The water was deep and running fast from a big rainstorm the night before.
暴雨,水又深又急。
2.A thick burning smell filled the air.
空气里弥漫着浓厚灼热的味道。
3.I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass.
我试图从洞里爬出来,但当我的膝盖跪在冰上时,它就像窗户玻璃一样断裂了。
4.As flames shot at his feet, he broke the window’s glass with his bare hand. Blood flowed from between his fingers and he ignored the pain.
当火焰射向他的脚边时,他徒手打破了窗户的玻璃。血从他的手指间流出,他没有理会疼痛。
5.The doorway was sealed by fire. The glass of the window was broken, some smoke ran out of the window, and there was less smoke in the house.
门口被火封住了。窗户的玻璃被打碎了,窗外有一些烟,房子里的烟也少了。
6.Catherine said to her followers with sincerity, “I’ll continue to distribute the cards and bags to the homeless on the street and at local shelter.”
凯瑟琳真诚地对她的追随者们说:“我将继续把这些卡片和包分发给街上和当地收容所的无家可归者。”
消极情绪来烘托
1. Tears rolled down my eyes/cheeks.
泪水模糊了双眼/留下脸颊。
2. Watching the shore in the distance, I felt powerless as if we were broken tiny boats at the mercy of strong waves.
看着远处的海岸,我感到无力(无力的),就好像我们是被强浪摧毁的小船。
3. Exhausted and cold, the thought that we might die here flashed across my mind,which made me quiver with an uncontrollable terror/horror/fright.
疲惫而冰冷,我们可能死在这里的想法在我的脑海中闪现,这使我因一种无法控制的恐惧/恐惧/恐惧而颤抖。
4. Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of fear surging through my whole body .
看着浩瀚的大海,我感到一种恐惧感掠过我的全身。
助人过程来描写
1.As the coat became completely wet, it dragged me down. I was tired of the struggle and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice.
当外套完全湿了,它把我拖了下来。我厌倦了挣扎,伸出双臂在冰上休息。
2.As they drove to the library, Sebastian nervously approached the roofers and offered the water.
当他们开车去图书馆时,塞巴斯蒂安紧张地走近屋顶工人,给了水。
3.Without a moment’s hesitation, Cheemi jumped through the window. Carl was sleeping soundly. Picking him up, Cheemi put him on her back and tied him tightly to herself with a bed sheet.
切米毫不犹豫地跳过了窗户。卡尔睡得很香。切米把他抱起来,把他放在背上,用床单把他紧紧地绑在自己身上。
4.Slowly she scaled the ladder and peeped through the window. Carefully she undid the bed sheet and handed it, with the child, to a policeman.
她慢慢地爬上梯子,从窗户里偷看。她小心翼翼地解开床单,把它和孩子一起交给了一个警察。
5.“We need to think out a way!” I muttered , scratching my head.
“我们需要想个办法!”我抓着头,嘟囔着。
6.Nervous and anxious, John struggled to calm herself down and carried out first aid to Smith.
尽管紧张而焦虑,约翰努力让自己镇静下来,对史密斯进行了急救。
7.Surrounded by fire and smoke, he recognized the direction of the cry and rushed towards it. He felt the child, quickly picked her up, and ran out as fast as he could.
在火和烟雾的包围下,他认出了哭声的方向,就朝它冲去。他感觉到了那孩子,迅速地把她抱起来,尽快地跑了出去。
感激、感动来升华
1. Ensuing their safety, I felt a surge of triumph .
当他们安全下来后,我感到一阵胜利。
2. Ultimately, we were back, safe and sound.
最终,我们又回来了,安然无恙。
3. Hearing the news, I couldn't help restraining my excitement.
听到这个消息,我忍不住抑制住了自己的兴奋。
4. When they left, the dog turned and gave a wink goodbye, seemingly saying that Paul was to be thanked.
当他们离开时,狗转过身,眨眼道别,似乎在说要感谢保罗。
5. On hearing the good news, Tom and I sighed in great relief, grinning merrily at each other.
听到这个好消息,汤姆和我如释重负地叹了口气,愉快地咧着嘴笑。
6. (2023年浙江卷1月真题)I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away.
看到这个声音和感激的生物,我感到一阵欣慰和敬畏,我知道我将永远珍惜我们爬上车开车离开时分享的回忆。
7.“If I had not been given first aid, I would have dead.” Simmons said to Norwood gratefully. Simmons showed her gratitude to Norwood, saying “It was you who came to my aid and saved my life.”
如果我没有得到急救,我就会死了。西蒙斯感激地对诺伍德说。西蒙斯对诺伍德表示了感谢,她说:“是你来帮助我,救了我一命。”
8.Roses given, fragrance in hand.
赠人玫瑰,手留余香。
9.Small kindness can bring/contribute to/give rise to a big difference.
小小的善意可以产生大大的影响。
10.In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words. I felt so warm as if there were nine suns in my chest.
一瞬间,我眼里涌起了泪水,我被言语感动了。我感到很温暖,好像胸口有九个太阳。
11.(2020年山东卷真题) Needless to say, they were deeply moved, especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family.
不用说,他们非常感动,尤其是伯纳德,他终于找到了为家人赚钱的方法。
12.They thanked Sebastian and his dad again and waved them goodbye as they drove away.
他们再次感谢了塞巴斯蒂安和他的父亲,并在他们开车离开时挥手告别。
13.So moved and overjoyed was I that I wanted to give her a big hug, to express my deepest gratitude, but in a COVID world, all I could do was say, “Oh, my goodness! Thank you so much!”
我非常感动,欣喜若狂,我想给她一个大大的拥抱,以表达我最深切的感激之情,但在一个冠状病毒病的世界里,我所能做的就是说:“哦,我的天哪!非常感谢!”
14.I silently thanked Sister Esther in my heart. What a great teacher and a good friend! What she did brought happiness to our dark days!
我在心里默默地感谢以丝特修女。多么伟大的老师和好朋友!她所做的一切给我们黑暗的日子带来了幸福!
金句摘录
1. His heart beat so violently that he felt like sitting on pins and needles.
如此剧烈,他感到如坐针毡。
2. He was about to respond when he felt his tongue tied in and palms sweating.
他正要回答时,感到舌头被绑住了,手掌开始出汗。
3.Fear flooded over her, making her shake all over.
恐惧向他袭来,她吓得浑身发抖。
4.At the sight of the wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.
当看到那只狼时,我吓呆了,不敢动弹。
5.Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.
听到这个消息,他非常绝望,把悲伤淹没在酒中。
6. Desperate and helpless, she knelt down, with tears of regret streaming down her cheeks.
绝望而无助的她跪了下来,悔恨的泪水顺着面颊流了下来。
7. With tears streaming down her face, she thanked him again and again.
她泪流满面,再三感谢她。
8.Tears dropping from his eyes, he ran to Mum’s warm hug, and said gently “Mum, thank you.”
他热泪盈眶,跑到妈妈温暖的拥抱前,温柔地说:"妈妈,谢谢你。"
9.She felt her heart racing and her blood rushing.
她的心跳加速,热血沸腾。
10. A shiver of excitement passed through her stomach when she heard the news.
听到这个消息,她激动得胃里直打颤。
11.With the sparkle of gratitude in her eyes, she handed him a cup of hot tea, the warmth spreading like ripples in a still pond.
12. 她眼中闪烁着感激的光芒,把一杯热茶递给他,温暖像静水中的涟漪一样扩散开来。
13.Carrying a basket of fresh bread, he stepped into the elderly couple’s home, his heart light with the joy of giving.
14. 他提着一篮新鲜的面包,走进了这对老年夫妇的家,心中充满了给予的喜悦。
15.Showered with unexpected kindness, the young boy realized that a small gesture could illuminate someone’s world like a spark in the dark.
16. 在意外的善意中,年轻男孩意识到一个小小的举动可以像黑暗中的火花一样照亮某人的世界。
17.With his voice trembling slightly, he expressed his gratitude, his words flowing like a gentle melody.
18. 他声音微微颤抖,表达了他的感激之情,话语如温柔的旋律般流淌。
19.Encouraged by her neighbor’s support, she embraced the chance to begin again, her determination as firm as an ancient oak.
20. 在邻居的支持下,她抓住了重新开始的机会,她的决心坚定如古老的橡树。
21.With every smile he shared, he planted seeds of joy, each one promising a brighter future.
22. 随着他分享的每一个微笑,他播下了快乐的种子,每一个都承诺着一个更光明的未来。
23.With determination glinting in her eyes, she overcame every obstacle, her spirit acting as a beacon guiding others forward.
24. 她眼中闪烁着决心,克服了每一个障碍,她的精神如同灯塔,引导他人前行。
25.With every encouraging word, he built her confidence, layer by layer, like a craftsman shaping a masterpiece.
26. 随着每一句鼓励的话语,他一点一点地建立了她的自信,就像工匠雕刻一件杰作。
27. Never had I anticipated that a random act of kindness would inject such great power into others.
28. 我从来没有想到,一个随意的善举会给他人注入如此巨大的力量。
29.Not only did he keep in mind the help of Meredith’s family, but he also did whatever he could to help those in need .
30. 他不仅把麦迪斯家人的帮助记在心里了,而且他也尽他所能去帮助其他有需要的人。
语段赏析
给予
We appreciated it so much that we got a gift from the kind stand owner. What's the most impressive is that Robby passed on the kindness to a homeless man too. We never know what happiness a simple act of kindness will bring. By giving, we also teach others how to give. Remember: The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose. 我们非常感激,从好心的摊主那里得到了一份礼物。最让人印象深刻的是,Robby也把这份善意传递给了一个无家可归的人。我们永远不知道一个简单的善举会带来什么样的幸福。通过给予,我们也教会别人如何给予。记住:赠人玫瑰,手留余香。
感激
Hanging up, he turned to Steve and Mike and sincerely thanked both of them. Cold as the rain was, great warmth filled his heart as never before. "Life is really sweet with love and care. Getting help from others is a kind of happiness and I'd like to pass my happiness to others," he talked to himself. 挂断电话,他转向史蒂夫和迈克,真诚地感谢他们二人。尽管雨很冷,但他心中充满了前所未有的温暖。"生活中有了爱和关怀,真的很甜蜜。得到别人的帮助是一种幸福,而我想把我的幸福传递给别人,"他自言自语道。
善良传递
"Kindness is free. Take care." Stunned and moved, I gobbled up the food, staring at the note, feeling guilty about my previous thought that all people were indifferent. It eventually dawned on me that a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference. From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that the Mexican family offered me."善良是免费的。保重。"我既震惊又动容,大口大口地吃着食物,盯着纸条,对我以前认为所有人都漠不关心的想法感到内疚。我终于明白,一个小小的善举可能足以强大到产生巨大的影响。从那天起,每次我遇到需要帮助的人,我都会向他们伸出援手,希望把那个墨西哥家庭给予我的善意传递下去。
给被困路上旅客面包和衣服度过暴风雪
As the winter storm raged, I watched the stranded tourists with a heavy heart, their shivering forms a stark contrast to the cozy warmth of my home. Driven by compassion, I gathered loaves of bread and warm clothes, and offered them with a gentle, "Please, take these to ward off the chill."Their eyes, initially dulled by the cold, brightened with surprise and gratitude. The simple act of sharing taught me the true meaning of empathy and the power of small gestures to bring comfort in the face of adversity.
当冬季风暴肆虐时,我怀着沉重的心情看着被困的游客,他们在寒冷中颤抖的身影与我家的温馨温暖形成了鲜明对比。出于同情,我收集了面包和保暖的衣物,温和地递给他们:"请拿这些来抵御寒冷。"他们的眼睛最初因寒冷而黯淡无光,随后因惊讶和感激而明亮起来。分享这个简单行为教会了我同情的真正含义,以及在逆境中带来安慰的小举动的力量。
清洁工拾金不昧归还戒指
The cleaner's heart overflowed with integrity as she found the glinting ring, knowing its worth yet choosing to return it. "This belongs to someone precious," she thought, handing it back with a humble smile. The lady's eyes glistened with tears of gratitude as she clasped the cleaner's hand, her "Thank you" echoing with sincerity. The act reaffirmed the belief in the purity of kindness, a reminder that honesty is the most valuable treasure one can possess.
清洁工在发现那枚闪闪发光的戒指时,内心充满了正直,知道它的价值却选择归还。“这属于某个珍贵的人,”她想着,带着谦逊的微笑递还戒指。女士的眼睛因感激而闪烁着泪光,她紧握清洁工的手,她的“谢谢你”充满了真诚。这一行为重申了对纯真善良的信仰,提醒着诚实是一个人可以拥有的最宝贵的财富。
同学帮助我适应新学校
Feeling like a fish out of water in the new school, I was greeted by a classmate's warm smile, a lifebuoy in the overwhelming sea of faces. "Welcome, let me show you around," she said, with her voice as a soothing melody amidst the chaos. Her friendly guidance steered me through the corridors, her patient explanations like a map through the unfamiliar territory. I watched her kind eyes, a mirror reflecting the spirit of community. It dawned on me that every new beginning is a chance to find connections and kindness in unexpected places.
在新学校里感到格格不入,我被一位同学温暖的微笑所迎接,就像在令人不知所措的人海中的救生圈。"欢迎,让我带你参观一下,"她的声音在混乱中成为舒缓的旋律。她友好的引导带我穿过走廊,她耐心的解释就像在不熟悉的领域中的地图。我注视着她那仁慈的眼睛,那是反映社区精神的镜子。我突然意识到,每一个新的开始都是一个在意想不到的地方找到联系和善意的机会。
模拟再现
(一)
(2025·四川南充·三模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As the rising sun spread warm light over the thick woods, Alex and his loyal dog Max started their much-anticipated hiking trip. Their destination was a forest on the mountain, which was famous for its fascinating scenery and diverse wild animals. Alex, an enthusiastic nature lover and photographer, had carefully planned this trip, packing his camera with high hopes of taking some truly amazing photos of the landscape and some shy creatures that inhabited this area.
The path was peaceful, filled with sunlight shining through the thick trees above. The only sounds that they heard were birds singing and leaves moving softly as they whispered secrets in the breeze. Max, full of energy, bounded ahead, his tail swinging wildly as he excitedly explored the new surroundings.
When they went around a bend, Alex’s sharp eyes caught a strange flash in the distance. His curiosity got the better of him, and he quickened his pace with Max. As he approached it, he found a large, metal object half-buried in the mud. Its worn metal parts were open wide, with sharp sawteeth (锯齿) on it. The ground around it was disturbed, with broken branches and faint boot prints — signs that someone had been here recently. The sight made Alex feel scared — a warning that even though the forest seemed calm, dangerous things might be hiding nearby.
Alex continued walking forward when suddenly he heard a scream coming from behind him. He turned around and saw a little deer lying on the metal object he had just found. Observing carefully, Alex noticed that its back leg was stuck in the metal object. The deer’s eyes were wide with fear and pain, and every time it tried to get free, the sawteeth around its leg seemed to press even tighter. Alex realized that this metal object was most likely a trap left behind illegal poaching (偷猎) activities.
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Alex’s heart sank at the sight.
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He picked up his camera and took a photo of the deer as it bounded away.
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(二)
(2025·福建漳州·三模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
There lived a ten-year-old boy named Tim in a small town. Though born in a family that struggled to make ends meet, Tim was a bright and lively boy, having a strong passion for music. He held a dream that he could perform music for many people at his own concert in the future.
One day, word reached Tim about a local music competition, the prize of which was a full scholarship to a highly regarded music academy. This was an opportunity that seemed like a golden ticket to his dream, so he made the decision to participate. After hurrying to sign up for the competition, he made a plan to practice, day in and day out, using an old guitar that had been passed down from his grandfather.
When the day of the competition finally arrived, Tim felt a mixture of nervousness and excitement. He stepped onto the stage and poured all his heart, soul, and love into the music. He felt rather satisfied with his performance.
During the following days, he waited for the result anxiously. However, he didn’t win. He completely broke down, feeling all his painstaking efforts were for nothing. A deep sense of discouragement settled over him. His parents knew that his skills are not good enough but didn’t know how to comfort him. Tim was always sitting, playing his old guitar in the park, with nobody to talk with.
A few weeks later, a man named Mr. Thompson moved into the neighborhood. Little did anyone know that Mr. Thompson was a guitar master who once shared the spotlight on stages with well-known bands but now sought the peace of a quiet life. One day, he happened to spot Tim sitting alone, playing the guitar with a disappointed expression. He approached Tim and started a conversation. Tim opened up to him about his experience in the competition.
注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mr. Thompson listened attentively and then took over the guitar.
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Two years later, Tim returned to his hometown for his own concert.
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(三)
(2025·四川宜宾·二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once upon a time, there was a little girl named Jenny. One day, while playing in the woods, she got lost. She was so scared and started to cry. As she was wandering around, hoping to find her way home, she came across an old woman. The old woman, seeing Jenny’s distress, decided to help her. She gave Jenny a magical seven-colored flower.
The flower had seven petals (花瓣), each in a different color: red, orange, yellow, green, cyan, blue, and purple. The old woman told Jenny that each petal could grant her one wish. Jenny was overjoyed. She pulled off the first red petal and said, “I want to go home.” In an instant, she found herself right in front of her own house.
However, Jenny was a curious girl. She thought it would be fun to test the flower’s power. She pulled the orange petal and wished for a big bunch of colorful balloons. Immediately, a huge number of balloons filled the air around her. But they were too many to handle. They started to carry her up into the sky. Frightened, Jenny quickly pulled the yellow petal and wished the balloons would go away. And so they did.
Next, Jenny saw some beautiful cakes in a shop window. She wanted them so much. With the green petal, she wished for all the cakes in the shop. The cakes appeared in front of her, but soon, they started to pile up and made a mess. Jenny used the cyan petal to make the cakes disappear.
Then, Jenny wished to have a cute toy-bear with the blue petal. A toy-bear appeared in front of Jenny. But it was not what Jenny wanted. At this point, Jenny had only one purple petal left. She began to think seriously about what to wish for.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Suddenly, she saw a little boy sitting sadly in the corner who couldn’t walk.
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“I wish he could walk,” Jenny murmured to the last petal.
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题型通关
(一)
(24-25高三下·河北·阶段练习)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a regular day at the smartphone store. The usual crowd of customers came in, each with their own unique issues. My job was to help them all, whether it was something as simple as transferring contacts or as difficult as fixing a phone that wouldn’t turn on.
Then Joe appeared. He looked to be in his early 50s. His hair was slightly graying. He was practically running towards the counter, his eyes wide with panic.
“You need to give me a new phone!” Joe almost shouted. “This one you sold me a few days ago is broken! The photos in my phone are totally messed up!”
Joe’s urgency made me pay closer attention. “Let’s take a look at what’s going on,” I said. Joe thrust (塞) the phone into my hands, nearly dropping it.
“Look at this! Every picture is ruined!” He sounded out of breath. I opened the photo gallery, and sure enough, the selfies (自拍照) he’d taken were quite strange: His forehead was stretched, and his eyes were oddly wide. The pictures looked like something out of a funhouse mirror.
I started checking the settings, detecting there was a heavy filter (滤光器) turned on, which was distorting (扭曲) his face in every picture. “Sir, it’s actually a filter that’s causing the issue. Your phone isn’t broken; it’s just the settings. Resetting the settings of the camera will help.”
“But it’s digital! I didn’t mess with anything! My photos were fine when I took them,”he argued. “I need these pictures to be perfect! Please, just fix it,” his voice had softened, almost like he was begging now.
Then, almost in a whisper, he admitted, “I need these photos for a dating website.”Suddenly, it all made sense. This was not just any photo but was his shot at finding love. The thought of it going wrong had made him completely uneasy.
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Realizing how much this meant to Joe, I knew I had to help him.
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I showed him the results of my shots of him.
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(二)
(24-25高三上·陕西·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When taxi driver Lauren Mulvihill picked up 89-year-old Ronald Dembner from the Veteran’s Hospital in Henry County, Georgia, she immediately sensed it wasn’t going to be a typical passenger. It was obvious that he was struggling and in bad shape. But it wasn’t until they arrived at his home that her worst guess was confirmed.
Expecting to be greeted by family members , she was greeted by something out of a nightmare episode of Hoarders instead. Mr Ronald’s home was covered in a thick layer of waste and littered with trash. Piles of rubbish and dirt covered the counters, carpets, and walls, and the air was filled with an unpleasant smell.
His wife and two sons passed away, and he had no one to assist him. Even the home care nurses had stopped coming to visit as a result of the terrible living conditions. He was completely alone, except for his dog, Homer.
Unable to clean up after himself or Homer but scared of losing his home and his dog, Mr Ronald was too afraid to reach out for help. Mulvihill, however, was not.
Shocked by what she witnessed, the single mom of two decided to take matters into her own hands. She spent hours on the phone, contacting the fire department, adult services and Habitat for Humanity. However, no one could offer any help. “Everybody said mentally he’s fine, and he’s just older. So nobody will help,” she said.
Finally, with all other resources exhausted, she posted a call to arms online, creating the group, Helping Mr Ronald. She explained the situation, writing in part, “I drove him home and he asked me to help him inside. It is scaring. The man lives alone and cannot keep up with his pets. The house is in a mess.”
She went on to explain, “The main issues are piles of rubbish and general disrepair (no handrails on the stairs, soiled carpet and furniture, etc)”.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Luckily, the response to Mulvihill’s call for help flooded in.
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Day by day, the house began to transform.
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(三)
(24-25高三上·山西·阶段练习)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a cold autumn evening in the small town of Willow Creek. The sun had long set, leaving behind a sky painted with orange and purple. In the midst of this quietness, a figure could be seen hurrying down the road, carrying a large backpack.
This was Lily, a senior at Willow Creek High School. Her backpack was filled not with books for her own studies, but with supplies she had collected for the annual “Warm Hearts, Warm Homes” charity drive. The event aimed to provide warmth, care, and support to families in need during the harsh winter months. Lily hoped the donation could ensure that those suffering in the cold receive the comfort and safety they desperately need.
As Lily approached the town square, where the donation drop-off point was set up, she noticed a figure huddled in the corner. It was an elderly woman, shivering in the cold. Lily’s heart went out to her immediately.
“Excuse me, madam,” Lily said gently, approaching the woman. “It’s getting quite cold out here. Is there anything I can do to help?”
The woman looked up, her eyes filled with gratitude and despair. “I’m afraid I’ve lost my way, young lady. I was trying to get to my sister’s house, but I don’t seem to remember how to get there anymore.”
Lily’s sense of duty and sympathy kicked in. She knew she had to help this woman, even if it meant delaying her own plans. Without hesitation, Lily offered her hand to the woman and said, “Let me help you find your sister. We’ll figure this out together.”
As they walked, Lily listened devotedly to the woman’s story, trying to piece together clues that might lead them to her destination. The woman’s memory was hazy, but she remembered a few landmarks and the name of the street where her sister lived. Finally, after what felt like hours of searching, they saw a familiar-looking house, its porch light glowing warmly in the night.
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1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The woman’s face lit up as they approached the house.
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Lily’s backpack was still heavy but now filled with a different kind of weight.
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(四)
(24-25高三上·四川成都·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“This is my first day delivering food.”
“This is my second day of delivery.”
...
Xiaowen posted his daily vlog online, in which he wore a contagious smile and stammered, “It is my 20th day of food delivery and I’m working hard to earn money for my cochlear implantation (耳蜗植入手术) !”
Recognized as the only means to restore hearing and language ability for people with extremely severe neurological deafness, cochlear implantation involves conducting risky surgery where doctors will put a built-in device in the patient’s head behind the ear and fitting the patient with a wearable signal-receiving device, like an earphone, one month after the surgery. Meanwhile, it costs as high as 300,000 yuan, or over 100,000 yuan when social security reimburses part of it. In Xiaowen’s case, it would mean 10 years of delivery when he just made approximately 100 yuan a day.
Worse still, hearing-impaired, Xiaowen had several narrow escapes with death at the intersection on the roads because he couldn’t hear the horn of the cars behind him! He sighed with a heavy heart when customers complained about his inability to speak on the phone to inform them of the arrival of a delivery. Even so, Xiaowen kindly refused people’s fat tips but accepted their apologies when they found out about his disability.
Born in an ordinary family, Xiaowen, the little chubby boy, was diagnosed with congenital hearing impairment. This was like a bolt from the blue, breaking the family’s beautiful vision of Xiaowen’s future. But it didn’t bring down Xiaowen’s mother. Fearing that Xiaowen couldn’t understand teachers’ instructions, she was always patiently there to help him with lip-reading and guide him to express himself bravely. Thanks to mom, Xiaowen has grown into a self-reliant adult who wouldn’t reap without sowing. One day, Xiaowen watched his mother singing and said with a lisp, “Mom, you must have the most beautiful voice in the world!” “Dear, how I wish you could hear mommy and sing with me...” Mom eyed Xiaowen with tender love, a trace of sorrow flashing over her face. It would be just a long, long time before they could pay that much money.
Mr. B, a well-known blogger, is devoted to charity causes. He and his team happened to see Xiaowen’s posts and they followed him online and decided to help him.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mr. B invited Xiaowen and his mom to his office and told them the good news.
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One month later, Xiaowen and his mom went to the hospital to try out the signal-receiving device.
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(五)
(24-25高三上·河南驻马店·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“I must have left my wallet home. I’m so sorry. I’ll have to come back for these things later,” Mary said to the cashier, who started picking up the items and putting them back. Meanwhile, Mary prepared to walk away when the boy behind her in line spoke up.
“Wait, ma’ am. You don’ t have many things anyway. I’ll pay for them,” the boy said. He couldn’t be older than 12, and Mary noticed that he didn’t look particularly well-off so she wanted to refuse his offer. “I insist, ma’ am. Sometimes, we have to do good things, right?” the boy said and paid for everything that Mary had picked out.
After they got their groceries ready, Mary and the boy went outside. “Hey, I’m Mary. What’s your name?” she said conversationally. “I’m Mark,” the boy said. “Thank you so much for what you did, Mark. It saved me a trip to the store. Listen, how about giving me your phone number so I can pay you back as soon as I get my wallet,” Mary suggested, and the kid wrote down his number on the receipt. “Here, but don’t worry about it. There’s no rush. I live nearby anyway,” Mark said. “Although I also believe in paying kindness forward like you, we have to pay off our debts,” Mary added, and they said goodbye.
Mary told her daughter Anastacia about this incident and always thought of the boy who paid for her things, worrying that he might need the money urgently. So the next day, after calling the boy and learning his address, they went to his home. Returning the money, they began to chat. By talking more, Mary learned that Mark’s grandma needed a huge surgery for $23,000. The hospital was keeping her in observation while Mark raised the money. And he just started a GoFundMe but it was not that popular. “You shouldn’t have to do that on your own,” Mary said, concerned. “We don’t have anyone else. It’s only us,” Mark shrugged.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mary and Anastacia looked at each other and came to a wordless decision.
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The GoFundMe project reached far beyond their goal.
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(六)
(24-25高三上·山东青岛·期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
James, a 34-year-old man, had faced many hardships in recent years. After losing his job during the pandemic, he struggled to make ends meet. Following the passing of his mother and an eviction (驱逐) from his apartment, James became homeless, spending his days working odd jobs and his nights in local shelters.
Despite these challenges, James maintained a positive outlook. He often volunteered at a nearby soup kitchen which was designed to provide food for the old and disabled, where he found comfort in helping others. Every day, he would rise with a sense of purpose, a rare quality that seemed to shine through even the darkest of times. James frequently shared his dream of one day having a home to call his own and getting back on his feet, inspiring others with his determination.
Recently, a local news station featured James in a column about homelessness in Seattle, sharing his inspiring story which moved the hearts of many viewers. They made contact with him, wanting to help him realize his dream of having a stable place to live in.
One day, a surprising twist unfolded. A local businesswoman, inspired by James’s perseverance, decided to pay for his first month’s rent and helped him land a job at her organization. But the ultimate surprise came during the rent signing. In an emotional moment, the businesswoman revealed that she had purchased a small house in a nearby neighborhood for James. Tears filled James’s eyes as he realized the power of the kindness returned to him. “I never expected such a thing could happen to me,” James said. But he turned down her offering politely and said: “I appreciate your generosity more than you can imagine, but I need to rebuild my life on my own. There are still many other homeless people needing your help.” Inspired by his words, she set up a non-profit organization in the small house.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
James was invited to take charge of it a few days later.
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James’s efforts did not go unnoticed.
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(七)
(24-25高三上·广东深圳·期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a chilly autumn day in 2009. Megan Atherton and her roommate, Sarah, found themselves standing outside a small mechanic shop in Annapolis, Maryland, with a broken-down car and empty pockets. The two had just been driven out of their apartment and were desperate to find shelter in Megan’s hometown of Pittsburgh. They had hoped that their old, reliable car would get them there, but fate had other plans.
As they stood discussing their next move, a kind voice interrupted their conversation. “Are you two in need of some help?” asked Toni Cranston, a woman with a warm smile and eyes that seemed to hold the wisdom of ages. She had overheard their difficulty while waiting for her own car to be serviced.
After listening to what Megan explained to her about their situation, Toni said, “I can take you to Pittsburgh. But I can’t leave my cat at home because she has diabetes (糖尿病) and needs her medication. You can stay at my house tonight, and we’ll leave first thing in the morning.”
Megan and Sarah exchanged surprised looks but quickly accepted, Toni’s generous offer. They followed her to her home. Toni also prepared a hearty dinner.
The next morning, as the sun began to rise, Toni packed a small bag for the cat and led Megan and Sarah to her car and sent them’ to their destination. Toni refused to accept any payment for her kindness, saying, “Sometimes, people just need a helping hand. Pass it forward when you can.”
After that, Megan and Toni lost touch. But nearly 15 years later, Megan still thought about everything Toni had done for her. She couldn’t remember Toni’s last name, but when Toni’s niece heard Megan’s story of her unsung hero, she reached out to her aunt.
“My niece kept saying there can’t be two Ton is in Ellicott City with a diabetic cat,” Toni said. Megan’s unsung hero had been found.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Years after the two women first met, they finally got together in October this year.
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Before they parted, Megan handed Toni a small envelope.
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(八)
(24-25高三上·辽宁·期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In the bustling city of Harmony, where towering skyscrapers mirrored the ambitions of its inhabitants, lived a young man named Li Ming. He was an ordinary high school student with extraordinary dreams. Li Ming often pondered about his role in society, wondering how he could contribute positively to the world around him. One day, as he walked home from school, he noticed an old lady struggling to carry a heavy bag of groceries. Without hesitation, he rushed to her side and offered his help.
The old lady, Mrs. Zhang, smiled warmly at Li Ming’s unexpected kindness. “Thank you, young man. You’ve made my day much easier,” she said, her eyes twinkling with gratitude. Li Ming, feeling a sense of accomplishment, replied, “It's my pleasure, Mrs. Zhang. We all need a helping hand sometimes.”
As they walked together, Mrs. Zhang shared stories of her youth, how she had volunteered in her community and how those experiences had shaped her into the compassionate person she was today. Li Ming listened intently, realizing that small acts of kindness could ripple through society, inspiring others to do the same.
Inspired by Mrs. Zhang’s words, Li Ming decided to take action. He approached his school’s principal, Ms. Wang, with an idea for a community service club. “Ms. Wang, I believe that by working together, we can make a real difference in our community,” he explained passionately. Ms. Wang, always supportive of her students’ initiatives, agreed and provided the necessary resources to kickstart the club. The club, named “Harmony Helpers”, quickly gained popularity among students. They organized various activities, such as cleaning public parks, visiting local nursing homes, and assisting at food banks. Li Ming and his fellow club members found immense joy in giving back to their community, seeing the smiles on the faces of those they helped.
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1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One particular event stood out.
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Through the program, Li Ming benefited a lot.
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(九)
(24-25高三上·山东济南·期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
For Jake, the journey from high school to college had never seemed so challenging. The real world— the campus life he had heard so much about, the decisions on what to study, what career to pursue, and how to find his place— felt like a heavy weight on his chest. He had no clue what his future held.
One afternoon, Jake’s mom suggested he spend some time volunteering at the community center. “It might be a good way to take your mind off things,” she said. At first, he resisted. Volunteering didn't sound like the right way to prepare for college. He needed to focus on his future, not wasting time helping others. But eventually, he agreed unwillingly.
When Jake first arrived at the center, the atmosphere felt unfamiliar but warm. It was a small, comfortable space with colorful walls, art supplies, and kids playing in the corner. He was assigned to help with the kids’ art class. The first few days were uneventful. Jake just sat back, passing out crayons, organizing the art supplies, and occasionally offering a word of encouragement to the kids.
But one particular day, a girl caught his attention. Her name was Layla, and she was sitting in the corner, quietly staring down at a blank canvas (画布), with her hands wrapped tightly around a paintbrush. Her brush paused above the canvas as if she were waiting for permission to make the first mark.
Jake had no experience with art and didn’t know how to guide Layla. But something about her hesitation touched his heart. He walked over to her and asked, “Hey, Layla, what's going on? Why aren't you painting?” She looked up at him with large brown eyes, then down at her hands, which were holding the paintbrush tightly but not moving. “I’m not good at it,” she replied. “I don’t know how to make it look like what’s in my mind.”
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Jake sat beside her, smiling.
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As Layla’s confidence grew, Jake felt a shift within himself.
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(十)
(2025·宁夏内蒙古·模拟预测)阅读下列材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers-very big, tough-looking bikers. They blocked my only path and their appearance suggested they were part of an infamous street gang (帮派).
I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date of the event?
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater, where I could meet many animal rescue groups. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
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I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.
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When the film began, I realized that the bikers were not what I had feared.
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专题12读后续写之善举助人类
第一部分
题型分析
第二部分
写作方法
第三部分
满分表达
第四部分
金句摘录
第五部分
语段赏析
第六部分
模拟再现
第七部分
题型通关
题型分析
高考英语读后续写中,"善举助人"类题型是高频主题之一,其核心在于通过情节设计体现人性温暖、传递正向价值观。助人为乐是中华民族传统美德,也是读后续写常见的故事类型。由于这类语篇非常适合给学生传达积极向上的正能量,因此颇受出题者的偏爱。助人为乐类语篇在续写中涉及到话题可能涉及到家庭、学校、工作、生活等方方面面,尤其是学生-学生之间,老师-学生之间,邻居之间,陌生人之间等。描写的部分主要有以下情况:遭遇困难的绝望、无助、尴尬、窘迫、苦恼等等,提供帮助的想法、言语、动作等等,受到帮助的感激、感动、温暖,困难得以解决的开心喜悦,以及最后主题升华的意识领悟。
写作方法
在续写善举助人主题时,情节构建可以分为以下三步:
第一步:困难描写--消极情绪+困境场景情感表现:无助、困惑、焦急、失望、恐惧、沮丧肢体动作:握紧双手、眉头紧锁、叹气、双肩垂下、深吸一口气
第二步:助人过程呈现(找到方法+行动细节)助他型:主动发现他人困难——克服障碍——提供帮助他助型:请求援助——寻求指导——得到帮助
第三步:圆满结局(感激+感动+升华)情感表达:欣慰、温暖、感激、开心、满足、释然
满分表达
困难处境来铺垫
1.The water was deep and running fast from a big rainstorm the night before.
暴雨,水又深又急。
2.A thick burning smell filled the air.
空气里弥漫着浓厚灼热的味道。
3.I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass.
我试图从洞里爬出来,但当我的膝盖跪在冰上时,它就像窗户玻璃一样断裂了。
4.As flames shot at his feet, he broke the window’s glass with his bare hand. Blood flowed from between his fingers and he ignored the pain.
当火焰射向他的脚边时,他徒手打破了窗户的玻璃。血从他的手指间流出,他没有理会疼痛。
5.The doorway was sealed by fire. The glass of the window was broken, some smoke ran out of the window, and there was less smoke in the house.
门口被火封住了。窗户的玻璃被打碎了,窗外有一些烟,房子里的烟也少了。
6.Catherine said to her followers with sincerity, “I’ll continue to distribute the cards and bags to the homeless on the street and at local shelter.”
凯瑟琳真诚地对她的追随者们说:“我将继续把这些卡片和包分发给街上和当地收容所的无家可归者。”
消极情绪来烘托
1. Tears rolled down my eyes/cheeks.
泪水模糊了双眼/留下脸颊。
2. Watching the shore in the distance, I felt powerless as if we were broken tiny boats at the mercy of strong waves.
看着远处的海岸,我感到无力(无力的),就好像我们是被强浪摧毁的小船。
3. Exhausted and cold, the thought that we might die here flashed across my mind,which made me quiver with an uncontrollable terror/horror/fright.
疲惫而冰冷,我们可能死在这里的想法在我的脑海中闪现,这使我因一种无法控制的恐惧/恐惧/恐惧而颤抖。
4. Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of fear surging through my whole body .
看着浩瀚的大海,我感到一种恐惧感掠过我的全身。
助人过程来描写
1.As the coat became completely wet, it dragged me down. I was tired of the struggle and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice.
当外套完全湿了,它把我拖了下来。我厌倦了挣扎,伸出双臂在冰上休息。
2.As they drove to the library, Sebastian nervously approached the roofers and offered the water.
当他们开车去图书馆时,塞巴斯蒂安紧张地走近屋顶工人,给了水。
3.Without a moment’s hesitation, Cheemi jumped through the window. Carl was sleeping soundly. Picking him up, Cheemi put him on her back and tied him tightly to herself with a bed sheet.
切米毫不犹豫地跳过了窗户。卡尔睡得很香。切米把他抱起来,把他放在背上,用床单把他紧紧地绑在自己身上。
4.Slowly she scaled the ladder and peeped through the window. Carefully she undid the bed sheet and handed it, with the child, to a policeman.
她慢慢地爬上梯子,从窗户里偷看。她小心翼翼地解开床单,把它和孩子一起交给了一个警察。
5.“We need to think out a way!” I muttered , scratching my head.
“我们需要想个办法!”我抓着头,嘟囔着。
6.Nervous and anxious, John struggled to calm herself down and carried out first aid to Smith.
尽管紧张而焦虑,约翰努力让自己镇静下来,对史密斯进行了急救。
7.Surrounded by fire and smoke, he recognized the direction of the cry and rushed towards it. He felt the child, quickly picked her up, and ran out as fast as he could.
在火和烟雾的包围下,他认出了哭声的方向,就朝它冲去。他感觉到了那孩子,迅速地把她抱起来,尽快地跑了出去。
感激、感动来升华
1. Ensuing their safety, I felt a surge of triumph .
当他们安全下来后,我感到一阵胜利。
2. Ultimately, we were back, safe and sound.
最终,我们又回来了,安然无恙。
3. Hearing the news, I couldn't help restraining my excitement.
听到这个消息,我忍不住抑制住了自己的兴奋。
4. When they left, the dog turned and gave a wink goodbye, seemingly saying that Paul was to be thanked.
当他们离开时,狗转过身,眨眼道别,似乎在说要感谢保罗。
5. On hearing the good news, Tom and I sighed in great relief, grinning merrily at each other.
听到这个好消息,汤姆和我如释重负地叹了口气,愉快地咧着嘴笑。
6. (2023年浙江卷1月真题)I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away.
看到这个声音和感激的生物,我感到一阵欣慰和敬畏,我知道我将永远珍惜我们爬上车开车离开时分享的回忆。
7.“If I had not been given first aid, I would have dead.” Simmons said to Norwood gratefully. Simmons showed her gratitude to Norwood, saying “It was you who came to my aid and saved my life.”
如果我没有得到急救,我就会死了。西蒙斯感激地对诺伍德说。西蒙斯对诺伍德表示了感谢,她说:“是你来帮助我,救了我一命。”
8.Roses given, fragrance in hand.
赠人玫瑰,手留余香。
9.Small kindness can bring/contribute to/give rise to a big difference.
小小的善意可以产生大大的影响。
10.In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words. I felt so warm as if there were nine suns in my chest.
一瞬间,我眼里涌起了泪水,我被言语感动了。我感到很温暖,好像胸口有九个太阳。
11.(2020年山东卷真题) Needless to say, they were deeply moved, especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family.
不用说,他们非常感动,尤其是伯纳德,他终于找到了为家人赚钱的方法。
12.They thanked Sebastian and his dad again and waved them goodbye as they drove away.
他们再次感谢了塞巴斯蒂安和他的父亲,并在他们开车离开时挥手告别。
13.So moved and overjoyed was I that I wanted to give her a big hug, to express my deepest gratitude, but in a COVID world, all I could do was say, “Oh, my goodness! Thank you so much!”
我非常感动,欣喜若狂,我想给她一个大大的拥抱,以表达我最深切的感激之情,但在一个冠状病毒病的世界里,我所能做的就是说:“哦,我的天哪!非常感谢!”
14.I silently thanked Sister Esther in my heart. What a great teacher and a good friend! What she did brought happiness to our dark days!
我在心里默默地感谢以丝特修女。多么伟大的老师和好朋友!她所做的一切给我们黑暗的日子带来了幸福!
金句摘录
1. His heart beat so violently that he felt like sitting on pins and needles.
如此剧烈,他感到如坐针毡。
2. He was about to respond when he felt his tongue tied in and palms sweating.
他正要回答时,感到舌头被绑住了,手掌开始出汗。
3.Fear flooded over her, making her shake all over.
恐惧向他袭来,她吓得浑身发抖。
4.At the sight of the wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.
当看到那只狼时,我吓呆了,不敢动弹。
5.Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.
听到这个消息,他非常绝望,把悲伤淹没在酒中。
6. Desperate and helpless, she knelt down, with tears of regret streaming down her cheeks.
绝望而无助的她跪了下来,悔恨的泪水顺着面颊流了下来。
7. With tears streaming down her face, she thanked him again and again.
她泪流满面,再三感谢她。
8.Tears dropping from his eyes, he ran to Mum’s warm hug, and said gently “Mum, thank you.”
他热泪盈眶,跑到妈妈温暖的拥抱前,温柔地说:"妈妈,谢谢你。"
9.She felt her heart racing and her blood rushing.
她的心跳加速,热血沸腾。
10. A shiver of excitement passed through her stomach when she heard the news.
听到这个消息,她激动得胃里直打颤。
11.With the sparkle of gratitude in her eyes, she handed him a cup of hot tea, the warmth spreading like ripples in a still pond.
12. 她眼中闪烁着感激的光芒,把一杯热茶递给他,温暖像静水中的涟漪一样扩散开来。
13.Carrying a basket of fresh bread, he stepped into the elderly couple’s home, his heart light with the joy of giving.
14. 他提着一篮新鲜的面包,走进了这对老年夫妇的家,心中充满了给予的喜悦。
15.Showered with unexpected kindness, the young boy realized that a small gesture could illuminate someone’s world like a spark in the dark.
16. 在意外的善意中,年轻男孩意识到一个小小的举动可以像黑暗中的火花一样照亮某人的世界。
17.With his voice trembling slightly, he expressed his gratitude, his words flowing like a gentle melody.
18. 他声音微微颤抖,表达了他的感激之情,话语如温柔的旋律般流淌。
19.Encouraged by her neighbor’s support, she embraced the chance to begin again, her determination as firm as an ancient oak.
20. 在邻居的支持下,她抓住了重新开始的机会,她的决心坚定如古老的橡树。
21.With every smile he shared, he planted seeds of joy, each one promising a brighter future.
22. 随着他分享的每一个微笑,他播下了快乐的种子,每一个都承诺着一个更光明的未来。
23.With determination glinting in her eyes, she overcame every obstacle, her spirit acting as a beacon guiding others forward.
24. 她眼中闪烁着决心,克服了每一个障碍,她的精神如同灯塔,引导他人前行。
25.With every encouraging word, he built her confidence, layer by layer, like a craftsman shaping a masterpiece.
26. 随着每一句鼓励的话语,他一点一点地建立了她的自信,就像工匠雕刻一件杰作。
27. Never had I anticipated that a random act of kindness would inject such great power into others.
28. 我从来没有想到,一个随意的善举会给他人注入如此巨大的力量。
29.Not only did he keep in mind the help of Meredith’s family, but he also did whatever he could to help those in need .
30. 他不仅把麦迪斯家人的帮助记在心里了,而且他也尽他所能去帮助其他有需要的人。
语段赏析
给予
We appreciated it so much that we got a gift from the kind stand owner. What's the most impressive is that Robby passed on the kindness to a homeless man too. We never know what happiness a simple act of kindness will bring. By giving, we also teach others how to give. Remember: The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose. 我们非常感激,从好心的摊主那里得到了一份礼物。最让人印象深刻的是,Robby也把这份善意传递给了一个无家可归的人。我们永远不知道一个简单的善举会带来什么样的幸福。通过给予,我们也教会别人如何给予。记住:赠人玫瑰,手留余香。
感激
Hanging up, he turned to Steve and Mike and sincerely thanked both of them. Cold as the rain was, great warmth filled his heart as never before. "Life is really sweet with love and care. Getting help from others is a kind of happiness and I'd like to pass my happiness to others," he talked to himself. 挂断电话,他转向史蒂夫和迈克,真诚地感谢他们二人。尽管雨很冷,但他心中充满了前所未有的温暖。"生活中有了爱和关怀,真的很甜蜜。得到别人的帮助是一种幸福,而我想把我的幸福传递给别人,"他自言自语道。
善良传递
"Kindness is free. Take care." Stunned and moved, I gobbled up the food, staring at the note, feeling guilty about my previous thought that all people were indifferent. It eventually dawned on me that a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference. From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that the Mexican family offered me."善良是免费的。保重。"我既震惊又动容,大口大口地吃着食物,盯着纸条,对我以前认为所有人都漠不关心的想法感到内疚。我终于明白,一个小小的善举可能足以强大到产生巨大的影响。从那天起,每次我遇到需要帮助的人,我都会向他们伸出援手,希望把那个墨西哥家庭给予我的善意传递下去。
给被困路上旅客面包和衣服度过暴风雪
As the winter storm raged, I watched the stranded tourists with a heavy heart, their shivering forms a stark contrast to the cozy warmth of my home. Driven by compassion, I gathered loaves of bread and warm clothes, and offered them with a gentle, "Please, take these to ward off the chill."Their eyes, initially dulled by the cold, brightened with surprise and gratitude. The simple act of sharing taught me the true meaning of empathy and the power of small gestures to bring comfort in the face of adversity.
当冬季风暴肆虐时,我怀着沉重的心情看着被困的游客,他们在寒冷中颤抖的身影与我家的温馨温暖形成了鲜明对比。出于同情,我收集了面包和保暖的衣物,温和地递给他们:"请拿这些来抵御寒冷。"他们的眼睛最初因寒冷而黯淡无光,随后因惊讶和感激而明亮起来。分享这个简单行为教会了我同情的真正含义,以及在逆境中带来安慰的小举动的力量。
清洁工拾金不昧归还戒指
The cleaner's heart overflowed with integrity as she found the glinting ring, knowing its worth yet choosing to return it. "This belongs to someone precious," she thought, handing it back with a humble smile. The lady's eyes glistened with tears of gratitude as she clasped the cleaner's hand, her "Thank you" echoing with sincerity. The act reaffirmed the belief in the purity of kindness, a reminder that honesty is the most valuable treasure one can possess.
清洁工在发现那枚闪闪发光的戒指时,内心充满了正直,知道它的价值却选择归还。“这属于某个珍贵的人,”她想着,带着谦逊的微笑递还戒指。女士的眼睛因感激而闪烁着泪光,她紧握清洁工的手,她的“谢谢你”充满了真诚。这一行为重申了对纯真善良的信仰,提醒着诚实是一个人可以拥有的最宝贵的财富。
同学帮助我适应新学校
Feeling like a fish out of water in the new school, I was greeted by a classmate's warm smile, a lifebuoy in the overwhelming sea of faces. "Welcome, let me show you around," she said, with her voice as a soothing melody amidst the chaos. Her friendly guidance steered me through the corridors, her patient explanations like a map through the unfamiliar territory. I watched her kind eyes, a mirror reflecting the spirit of community. It dawned on me that every new beginning is a chance to find connections and kindness in unexpected places.
在新学校里感到格格不入,我被一位同学温暖的微笑所迎接,就像在令人不知所措的人海中的救生圈。"欢迎,让我带你参观一下,"她的声音在混乱中成为舒缓的旋律。她友好的引导带我穿过走廊,她耐心的解释就像在不熟悉的领域中的地图。我注视着她那仁慈的眼睛,那是反映社区精神的镜子。我突然意识到,每一个新的开始都是一个在意想不到的地方找到联系和善意的机会。
模拟再现
(一)
(2025·四川南充·三模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As the rising sun spread warm light over the thick woods, Alex and his loyal dog Max started their much-anticipated hiking trip. Their destination was a forest on the mountain, which was famous for its fascinating scenery and diverse wild animals. Alex, an enthusiastic nature lover and photographer, had carefully planned this trip, packing his camera with high hopes of taking some truly amazing photos of the landscape and some shy creatures that inhabited this area.
The path was peaceful, filled with sunlight shining through the thick trees above. The only sounds that they heard were birds singing and leaves moving softly as they whispered secrets in the breeze. Max, full of energy, bounded ahead, his tail swinging wildly as he excitedly explored the new surroundings.
When they went around a bend, Alex’s sharp eyes caught a strange flash in the distance. His curiosity got the better of him, and he quickened his pace with Max. As he approached it, he found a large, metal object half-buried in the mud. Its worn metal parts were open wide, with sharp sawteeth (锯齿) on it. The ground around it was disturbed, with broken branches and faint boot prints — signs that someone had been here recently. The sight made Alex feel scared — a warning that even though the forest seemed calm, dangerous things might be hiding nearby.
Alex continued walking forward when suddenly he heard a scream coming from behind him. He turned around and saw a little deer lying on the metal object he had just found. Observing carefully, Alex noticed that its back leg was stuck in the metal object. The deer’s eyes were wide with fear and pain, and every time it tried to get free, the sawteeth around its leg seemed to press even tighter. Alex realized that this metal object was most likely a trap left behind illegal poaching (偷猎) activities.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Alex’s heart sank at the sight.
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He picked up his camera and took a photo of the deer as it bounded away.
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【答案】
Alex’s heart sank at the sight. He knew he had to act quickly. Kneeling down gently, he tried to calm the terrified deer with soft words. “It’s okay, little one. I’m here to help.” Then, with great care, he started examining the trap, trying to figure out how to free the deer’s leg without causing more harm. Max stood nearby, looking worried. As Alex worked, he thought about the cruelty of poaching. How could people set such traps and cause so much suffering to these innocent animals? Finally, after what seemed like ages, he managed to loosen the trap, and the deer’s leg was free.
He picked up his camera and took a photo of the deer as it bounded away. The deer’s graceful figure disappearing into the forest made Alex feel a sense of relief. This experience made him more determined to do something against poaching. He decided to report this to the local forest rangers, providing them with the exact location of the trap and the details he had observed. He hoped that his actions could help protect the precious wildlife in this forest. As he and Max continued their hike, he knew that this day would be one he would never forget, and he was ready to take on more challenges to safeguard nature.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,主要讲述了Alex和他的狗Max在森林中徒步旅行时,意外发现一只小鹿被困在偷猎者留下的陷阱中的故事。
【详解】1. 段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“亚历克斯看到这一幕,心都沉了下去。”可知,第一段可描写Alex看到小鹿被困后的反应和行动,他迅速尝试解救小鹿,并思考偷猎行为的残忍。
②由第二段首句内容“他拿起相机,拍了一张鹿蹦蹦跳跳的照片。”可知,第二段可描写小鹿被解救后欢快离去的场景,以及Alex对此经历的感悟和他决定采取的行动,即向当地森林护林员报告此事,并表达他保护野生动物的决心。
2. 续写线索:看到小鹿被困——迅速尝试解救——思考偷猎的残忍——小鹿被成功解救——小鹿欢快离去——Alex决定报告此事并保护野生动物。
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①跪下:kneel down / crouch down / get down on one’s knees
②试图做:try to do/attempt to do/endeavor to do
③松开:loosen / untie / unfasten
情绪类
①害怕的:terrified / frightened / scared
②担心的:worried / concerned / anxious
【点睛】【高分句型1】As Alex worked, he thought about the cruelty of poaching.(运用了as引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】He hoped that his actions could help protect the precious wildlife in this forest.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
(二)
(2025·福建漳州·三模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
There lived a ten-year-old boy named Tim in a small town. Though born in a family that struggled to make ends meet, Tim was a bright and lively boy, having a strong passion for music. He held a dream that he could perform music for many people at his own concert in the future.
One day, word reached Tim about a local music competition, the prize of which was a full scholarship to a highly regarded music academy. This was an opportunity that seemed like a golden ticket to his dream, so he made the decision to participate. After hurrying to sign up for the competition, he made a plan to practice, day in and day out, using an old guitar that had been passed down from his grandfather.
When the day of the competition finally arrived, Tim felt a mixture of nervousness and excitement. He stepped onto the stage and poured all his heart, soul, and love into the music. He felt rather satisfied with his performance.
During the following days, he waited for the result anxiously. However, he didn’t win. He completely broke down, feeling all his painstaking efforts were for nothing. A deep sense of discouragement settled over him. His parents knew that his skills are not good enough but didn’t know how to comfort him. Tim was always sitting, playing his old guitar in the park, with nobody to talk with.
A few weeks later, a man named Mr. Thompson moved into the neighborhood. Little did anyone know that Mr. Thompson was a guitar master who once shared the spotlight on stages with well-known bands but now sought the peace of a quiet life. One day, he happened to spot Tim sitting alone, playing the guitar with a disappointed expression. He approached Tim and started a conversation. Tim opened up to him about his experience in the competition.
注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mr. Thompson listened attentively and then took over the guitar.
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Two years later, Tim returned to his hometown for his own concert.
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【答案】 Mr. Thompson listened attentively and then took over the guitar. He played the song that Tim performed in the competition. Such wonderful music left Tim shocked. Before Tim could say a word, Mr. Thompson proposed to give him free music lessons. Tim agreed happily. Over the following months, with Mr. Thompson’s encouragement and guidance, Tim made rapid progress. With skills and confidence improving, Tim recorded his music and shared it online. People were drawn to his music, and he won lots of applause. A music producer was deeply impressed by Tim’s talent and decided to cooperate with him. So Tim left his hometown, walking closer to his dream.
Two years later, Tim returned to his hometown for his own concert. He went to Mr. Thompson’s house and knocked at his door excitedly, hoping to invite him to the concert. However, Tim got no response. He then was told that Mr. Thompson had moved for a long time. At the live concert, Tim performed a song specially for Mr. Thompson. When the last note was played, he stood up straight and took a bow, showing his sincere gratitude to his teacher. Nobody noticed an old man, in the last row, clapping hands for the excellent player. And that’s Mr. Thompson, smiling with tears of joy shining in his eyes.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了一个名叫Tim的小男孩,家里不怎么富裕,但他对音乐有很大的热情,希望有一天能在自己的音乐会上表演音乐。一次当地举行一场音乐比赛,Tim决定参加并且日复一日的练习,但是Tim并没有赢得比赛,他很崩溃很沮丧。几周后, Thompson,一个吉他大师搬到Tim社区,偶然遇到Tim并且攀谈起来,Tim向Thompson讲述比赛的经过。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“Thompson先生聚精会神地听着,然后接过吉他。”可知,第一段可描写Tim受到Thompson的指导,离自己的音乐梦想更进一步的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“两年后,Tim回到家乡开了自己的演唱会。”可知,第二段可描写Tim开演唱会的过程。
2.续写线索:Thompson先生指导——Tim进步很大——和音乐人合作——离开家乡——回家乡开演唱会——邀请Thompson先生却被告知已搬走——举行演唱会——表达感谢——Thompson先生看到Tim的成功
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.演出:perform/put on a show
②.提议:propose/suggest
③.被……所吸引:be drawn to/be attracted to
情绪类
①.感谢:showing his appreciation/show his gratitude/be grateful
②.高兴地:happily/merrily
【点睛】[高分句型1]. He played the song that Tim performed in the competition.(由关系代词that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]. He went to Mr. Thompson’s house and knocked at his door excitedly, hoping to invite him to the concert(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型3]. When the last note was played, he stood up straight and took a bow, showing his sincere gratitude to his teacher.(when引导的时间状语从句和现在分词作状语)
(三)
(2025·四川宜宾·二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once upon a time, there was a little girl named Jenny. One day, while playing in the woods, she got lost. She was so scared and started to cry. As she was wandering around, hoping to find her way home, she came across an old woman. The old woman, seeing Jenny’s distress, decided to help her. She gave Jenny a magical seven-colored flower.
The flower had seven petals (花瓣), each in a different color: red, orange, yellow, green, cyan, blue, and purple. The old woman told Jenny that each petal could grant her one wish. Jenny was overjoyed. She pulled off the first red petal and said, “I want to go home.” In an instant, she found herself right in front of her own house.
However, Jenny was a curious girl. She thought it would be fun to test the flower’s power. She pulled the orange petal and wished for a big bunch of colorful balloons. Immediately, a huge number of balloons filled the air around her. But they were too many to handle. They started to carry her up into the sky. Frightened, Jenny quickly pulled the yellow petal and wished the balloons would go away. And so they did.
Next, Jenny saw some beautiful cakes in a shop window. She wanted them so much. With the green petal, she wished for all the cakes in the shop. The cakes appeared in front of her, but soon, they started to pile up and made a mess. Jenny used the cyan petal to make the cakes disappear.
Then, Jenny wished to have a cute toy-bear with the blue petal. A toy-bear appeared in front of Jenny. But it was not what Jenny wanted. At this point, Jenny had only one purple petal left. She began to think seriously about what to wish for.
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Suddenly, she saw a little boy sitting sadly in the corner who couldn’t walk.
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“I wish he could walk,” Jenny murmured to the last petal.
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【答案】Possible version (158 words)
Suddenly, she saw a little boy sitting sadly in the corner who couldn’t walk. Jenny stared at the little boy, her heart pounding with hesitation. She thought about all the amazing things the last petal could bring for herself, like a room full of books or a magical adventure. But when she saw the boy’s sad face, she knew what she had to do. Taking a deep breath, she gently pulled the last petal, her voice soft yet determined. (65 words)
“I wish he could walk,” Jenny murmured to the last petal. The moment the words left her lips, a warm, golden light bathed the boy. His eyes widened in disbelief as he felt strength within his legs. Slowly, he pushed himself up, his hands trembling with excitement. With a huge grin, he took his first step, then another, and soon he was running towards Jenny, his laughter echoing in the air. Jenny wrapped her arms around the boy, both of them lost in a world of pure happiness, and she knew that this was the most precious moment she could have ever wished for. (93 words)
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述小女孩Jenny在森林迷路,获老妇人赠予的七色花,用前五片花瓣许愿后都出现小状况,此时只剩最后一片紫色花瓣,她开始认真思考愿望。
【详解】1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“突然,她看到一个小男孩悲伤地坐在角落里,他不能走路。”可知,第一段可描写Jenny看到小男孩后的内心挣扎,她在为自己许愿和帮助小男孩之间犹豫,最后决定用最后一片花瓣帮助小男孩。
②由第二段首句内容“‘我希望他能走路’,Jenny对着最后一片花瓣喃喃说道。”可知,第二段可描写许愿后小男孩恢复行走能力,他和Jenny都沉浸在幸福之中。
2. 续写线索:看到小男孩——内心犹豫——决定帮助男孩——男孩恢复行走——两人感到幸福
3. 词汇激活:
行为类
①看见:see/catch sight of
②颤抖:tremble/quiver
③拥抱:wrap one’s arms around/hug/embrace
情绪类
①轻轻地:gently/lightly
②幸福:happiness/bliss
【点睛】[高分句型1] Jenny stared at the little boy, her heart pounding with hesitation. (运用了独立主格结构)
[高分句型2] The moment the words left her lips, a warm, golden light bathed the boy. (运用了名词词组the moment引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型3] His eyes widened in disbelief as he felt strength within his legs.(运用了从属连词as引导时间状语从句)
题型通关
(一)
(24-25高三下·河北·阶段练习)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a regular day at the smartphone store. The usual crowd of customers came in, each with their own unique issues. My job was to help them all, whether it was something as simple as transferring contacts or as difficult as fixing a phone that wouldn’t turn on.
Then Joe appeared. He looked to be in his early 50s. His hair was slightly graying. He was practically running towards the counter, his eyes wide with panic.
“You need to give me a new phone!” Joe almost shouted. “This one you sold me a few days ago is broken! The photos in my phone are totally messed up!”
Joe’s urgency made me pay closer attention. “Let’s take a look at what’s going on,” I said. Joe thrust (塞) the phone into my hands, nearly dropping it.
“Look at this! Every picture is ruined!” He sounded out of breath. I opened the photo gallery, and sure enough, the selfies (自拍照) he’d taken were quite strange: His forehead was stretched, and his eyes were oddly wide. The pictures looked like something out of a funhouse mirror.
I started checking the settings, detecting there was a heavy filter (滤光器) turned on, which was distorting (扭曲) his face in every picture. “Sir, it’s actually a filter that’s causing the issue. Your phone isn’t broken; it’s just the settings. Resetting the settings of the camera will help.”
“But it’s digital! I didn’t mess with anything! My photos were fine when I took them,”he argued. “I need these pictures to be perfect! Please, just fix it,” his voice had softened, almost like he was begging now.
Then, almost in a whisper, he admitted, “I need these photos for a dating website.”Suddenly, it all made sense. This was not just any photo but was his shot at finding love. The thought of it going wrong had made him completely uneasy.
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Realizing how much this meant to Joe, I knew I had to help him.
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I showed him the results of my shots of him.
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【答案】参考范文:
Realizing how much this meant to Joe, I knew I had to help him. I showed him how to reset the camera settings, making sure to turn off the filter that had been causing the distortion. I double-checked everything, wanting to be certain that this time the photos would come out just right. After completing the adjustment, I suggested Joe start fresh and take some new photos. He still looked tense, like he wasn’t sure this would work. I offered to help him take photos and guided him to pose decently. “Okay, just relax and give me a smile.” Joe forced a nervous but hopeful smile.
I showed him the results of my shots of him. Joe stared at the screen for a moment, and then, as if a huge weight had been lifted off his shoulders. Those pictures were normal: His forehead wasn’t stretched, and his eyes looked like his own. He broke into a wide smile.“These are perfect!” he exclaimed, his voice filled with relief. “You really saved the day.”Then Joe left the store a different man, hopeful and ready to take his shot at finding love.Seeing him off, I sensed a smile spread across my face. Sometimes, the smallest gestures really do make the biggest difference.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在智能手机店工作时的经历。一天,五十出头的乔惊慌失措地跑到店里,称几天前买的手机坏了,手机里的照片全乱了。作者检查后发现是相机设置了强滤光器导致照片扭曲变形,手机本身没问题,只需重置相机设置即可。但乔坚持说自己没动过设置,还表示这些照片是用于约会网站,对他很重要。作者意识到此事对乔意义重大,便帮他重置了相机设置,关掉了滤光器,还主动提出帮他拍照并指导他摆姿势。看到拍出来的正常照片后,乔如释重负,露出了开心的笑容,对作者表示感谢后满怀希望地离开了。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“意识到这对乔的意义,我知道我必须帮助他。”可知,第一段可描写作者帮助乔找到原因并解决问题。
②由第二段首句内容“我给他看了我给他拍的照片。”可知,第二段可描写乔对现在拍的照片很满意以及作者的感受。
2.续写线索:决定帮助他——仔细检查和调整——主动提出帮他拍照——对现在拍的照片很满意——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①完成:completing/ finishing
②提供:offered/ provided
③大叫道:exclaimed/ shouted
情绪类
①紧张的:nervous/ intense
②宽慰:relief /comfort
【点睛】[高分句型1] I showed him how to reset the camera settings, making sure to turn off the filter that had been causing the distortion.(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]. Joe stared at the screen for a moment, and then, as if a huge weight had been lifted off his shoulders.(运用了as if引导的方式状语从句)
(二)
(24-25高三上·陕西·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When taxi driver Lauren Mulvihill picked up 89-year-old Ronald Dembner from the Veteran’s Hospital in Henry County, Georgia, she immediately sensed it wasn’t going to be a typical passenger. It was obvious that he was struggling and in bad shape. But it wasn’t until they arrived at his home that her worst guess was confirmed.
Expecting to be greeted by family members , she was greeted by something out of a nightmare episode of Hoarders instead. Mr Ronald’s home was covered in a thick layer of waste and littered with trash. Piles of rubbish and dirt covered the counters, carpets, and walls, and the air was filled with an unpleasant smell.
His wife and two sons passed away, and he had no one to assist him. Even the home care nurses had stopped coming to visit as a result of the terrible living conditions. He was completely alone, except for his dog, Homer.
Unable to clean up after himself or Homer but scared of losing his home and his dog, Mr Ronald was too afraid to reach out for help. Mulvihill, however, was not.
Shocked by what she witnessed, the single mom of two decided to take matters into her own hands. She spent hours on the phone, contacting the fire department, adult services and Habitat for Humanity. However, no one could offer any help. “Everybody said mentally he’s fine, and he’s just older. So nobody will help,” she said.
Finally, with all other resources exhausted, she posted a call to arms online, creating the group, Helping Mr Ronald. She explained the situation, writing in part, “I drove him home and he asked me to help him inside. It is scaring. The man lives alone and cannot keep up with his pets. The house is in a mess.”
She went on to explain, “The main issues are piles of rubbish and general disrepair (no handrails on the stairs, soiled carpet and furniture, etc)”.
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Luckily, the response to Mulvihill’s call for help flooded in.
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Day by day, the house began to transform.
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Luckily, the response to Mulvihill’s call for help flooded in. Dozens of volunteers, feeling sympathy for Mr Ronald, came forward armed with cleaning supplies, tools, and a strong desire to make a difference. Together, they worked tirelessly to clear away the years of rubbish and dirt that had accumulated in the house. As they worked, they also provided much-needed companionship and support to Mr Ronald. The warmth and kindness of the volunteers filled his heart with hope and gratitude.
Day by day, the house began to transform. Rooms once buried under garbage now shone with cleanliness. Mr Ronald’s home was no longer a house of horrors, but a place of peace and comfort. But perhaps the most significant change was in Mr Ronald himself. The loneliness and fear that had gripped his heart began to disappear, replaced by a new-found sense of belonging and community. He now knew that he was not alone, and that there were people who cared for him.
【导语】本文以人物为线索,主要讲述了出租车司机Lauren Mulvihill在接到一位89岁的退伍军人Ronald Dembner后,发现他的家处于一种令人震惊的脏乱状态,Ronald因为家人去世和健康问题,无法自己清理家中的垃圾,也害怕失去自己的家和狗,Lauren在尝试联系多个机构寻求帮助无果后,决定通过社交媒体发起求助,创建了“帮助Ronald先生”的群组。
【详解】1. 段落续写:
①第一段首句“幸运的是,对Mulvihill求助的回应如潮水般涌来。”表明Lauren的求助得到了回应,志愿者们纷纷伸出援手。
②第二段首句“日复一日,房子开始转变。”描述了随着志愿者们的帮助,Ronald的家逐渐发生了变化。
2. 续写线索:两人偶遇——了解Ronald家里的情况——社交媒体求助——志愿者参与——提供物资和支持——清理垃圾——修复家居——恢复清洁和秩序
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①提供帮助:offer help/extend assistance
②清理:clean up/remove rubbish
③修复:repair/fix up
④照顾:care for/take care of
情绪类
①感激:gratitude/appreciation
②孤单:alone/all by oneself
【点睛】【高级句型1】Together, they worked tirelessly to clear away the years of rubbish and dirt that had accumulated in the house.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高级句型2】The loneliness and fear that had gripped his heart began to disappear, replaced by a new-found sense of belonging and community. (that引导的定语从句以及过去分词作状语)
(三)
(24-25高三上·山西·阶段练习)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a cold autumn evening in the small town of Willow Creek. The sun had long set, leaving behind a sky painted with orange and purple. In the midst of this quietness, a figure could be seen hurrying down the road, carrying a large backpack.
This was Lily, a senior at Willow Creek High School. Her backpack was filled not with books for her own studies, but with supplies she had collected for the annual “Warm Hearts, Warm Homes” charity drive. The event aimed to provide warmth, care, and support to families in need during the harsh winter months. Lily hoped the donation could ensure that those suffering in the cold receive the comfort and safety they desperately need.
As Lily approached the town square, where the donation drop-off point was set up, she noticed a figure huddled in the corner. It was an elderly woman, shivering in the cold. Lily’s heart went out to her immediately.
“Excuse me, madam,” Lily said gently, approaching the woman. “It’s getting quite cold out here. Is there anything I can do to help?”
The woman looked up, her eyes filled with gratitude and despair. “I’m afraid I’ve lost my way, young lady. I was trying to get to my sister’s house, but I don’t seem to remember how to get there anymore.”
Lily’s sense of duty and sympathy kicked in. She knew she had to help this woman, even if it meant delaying her own plans. Without hesitation, Lily offered her hand to the woman and said, “Let me help you find your sister. We’ll figure this out together.”
As they walked, Lily listened devotedly to the woman’s story, trying to piece together clues that might lead them to her destination. The woman’s memory was hazy, but she remembered a few landmarks and the name of the street where her sister lived. Finally, after what felt like hours of searching, they saw a familiar-looking house, its porch light glowing warmly in the night.
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The woman’s face lit up as they approached the house.
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Lily’s backpack was still heavy but now filled with a different kind of weight.
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【答案】范文
The woman’s face lit up as they approached the house. “This is it! This is where my sister lives,” she exclaimed, tears of relief streaming down her cheeks. Lily’s heart filled with joy at the sight of the woman’s happiness. She knocked on the door, and soon a surprised but overjoyed woman answered. The reunion was emotional, with hugs and tears of joy exchanged between the two sisters. Lily stood back, watching the heartwarming scene unfold, feeling a sense of fulfillment that surpassed any academic achievement. As the sisters caught up on lost time, she quietly slipped away.
Lily’s backpack was still heavy but now filled with a different kind of weight. That is the weight of having made a difference in someone’s life. She arrived at the donation drop-off point, slightly late but filled with a renewed sense of purpose. As she unloaded her supplies, she couldn’t help but smile, knowing that tonight, she had realized the very essence of the “Warm Hearts, Warm Homes” initiative — not just through the physical donations, but through the act of kindness and compassion she had shown to a stranger in need.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了莉莉为一年一度的“温暖的心,温暖的家”慈善活动送物资,结果发现了一个迷路的老妇人,莉莉帮助老妇人找到了家人,内心感到温暖。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“当他们走近房子时,那女人的脸上露出了喜色”可知,第一段可描写女人找到了亲人居住的地方,莉莉也十分高兴。
②由第二段首句内容“莉莉的背包仍然很重,但现在装了一种不同的重量”可知,第二段可描写莉莉因为自己的善举而感到温暖。
2.续写线索:走进房子——找到亲人——亲人团聚——莉莉温暖——莉莉充满使命感——莉莉感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①充满:be filled with /be full of
②超过:surpass/exceed
情绪类
①惊讶的:surprised/astonished
②同情:compassion/mercy
【点睛】[高分句型1] As the sisters caught up on lost time, she quietly slipped away. (运用了as引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]As she unloaded her supplies, she couldn’t help but smile, knowing that tonight, she had realized the very essence of the “Warm Hearts, Warm Homes” initiative — not just through the physical donations, but through the act of kindness and compassion she had shown to a stranger in need.(运用that引导宾语从句)
(四)
(24-25高三上·四川成都·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“This is my first day delivering food.”
“This is my second day of delivery.”
...
Xiaowen posted his daily vlog online, in which he wore a contagious smile and stammered, “It is my 20th day of food delivery and I’m working hard to earn money for my cochlear implantation (耳蜗植入手术) !”
Recognized as the only means to restore hearing and language ability for people with extremely severe neurological deafness, cochlear implantation involves conducting risky surgery where doctors will put a built-in device in the patient’s head behind the ear and fitting the patient with a wearable signal-receiving device, like an earphone, one month after the surgery. Meanwhile, it costs as high as 300,000 yuan, or over 100,000 yuan when social security reimburses part of it. In Xiaowen’s case, it would mean 10 years of delivery when he just made approximately 100 yuan a day.
Worse still, hearing-impaired, Xiaowen had several narrow escapes with death at the intersection on the roads because he couldn’t hear the horn of the cars behind him! He sighed with a heavy heart when customers complained about his inability to speak on the phone to inform them of the arrival of a delivery. Even so, Xiaowen kindly refused people’s fat tips but accepted their apologies when they found out about his disability.
Born in an ordinary family, Xiaowen, the little chubby boy, was diagnosed with congenital hearing impairment. This was like a bolt from the blue, breaking the family’s beautiful vision of Xiaowen’s future. But it didn’t bring down Xiaowen’s mother. Fearing that Xiaowen couldn’t understand teachers’ instructions, she was always patiently there to help him with lip-reading and guide him to express himself bravely. Thanks to mom, Xiaowen has grown into a self-reliant adult who wouldn’t reap without sowing. One day, Xiaowen watched his mother singing and said with a lisp, “Mom, you must have the most beautiful voice in the world!” “Dear, how I wish you could hear mommy and sing with me...” Mom eyed Xiaowen with tender love, a trace of sorrow flashing over her face. It would be just a long, long time before they could pay that much money.
Mr. B, a well-known blogger, is devoted to charity causes. He and his team happened to see Xiaowen’s posts and they followed him online and decided to help him.
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Mr. B invited Xiaowen and his mom to his office and told them the good news.
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One month later, Xiaowen and his mom went to the hospital to try out the signal-receiving device.
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【答案】Mr. B invited Xiaowen and his mom to his office and told them the good news. He said that they’d like to offer money for the implantation. Surprised but grateful, Xiaowen declined the gesture at first, saying he shouldn’t take it without a reason. “But that’s the only way to restore your hearing. And you can return that favor afterwards if you insist!” Mr. B maintained that this upright and unyielding boy should be helped. Holding his mother’s hand, overwhelmed with gratitude, Xiaowen agreed to receive the offer. The operation, the first part of the implantation, went smoothly. With great anticipation, Xiaowen and his mother were waiting for the day when he could hear.
One month later, Xiaowen and his mom went to the hospital to try out the signal-receiving device. The doctor placed the device around his right ear gently. “Beep!” The signal was sent out. Xiaowen shook slightly as if he’d been struck by electricity. “Xiaowen, can you hear mommy?” Mom softly called his name as instructed. Startled by the new voice, Xiaowen turned around and nodded yes, his throat tightening. Mom breathed a sigh of relief and hugged Xiaowen, happy tears welling up in her eyes. Everyone was touched and immersed in the joy of success. And miracles do happen to those who help themselves.
【导语】本文是以人物为线索,本文讲述了一个名叫小文的聋哑人通过送外卖努力攒钱进行耳蜗植入手术的故事。小文的母亲一直在支持他,帮助他通过读唇理解老师的话,并鼓励他勇敢表达自己。一个名叫B先生的慈善博主看到了小文的帖子,决定帮助他。
【详解】1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“B先生邀请小文和他的妈妈到他的办公室,并告诉他们好消息。”可知,第一段可描写B先生邀请小文和他的母亲到办公室,并告诉他们愿意资助小文进行手术的好消息。
②由第二段首句内容“一个月后,小文和他的妈妈去医院试戴信号接收设备。”可知,第二段可描写一个月后,小文和他的母亲去医院试戴信号接收设备,这是耳蜗植入手术后的重要一步。
2. 续写线索:B先生的资助——小文的手术——试戴信号接收设备——小文第一次听到声音——感悟
3. 词汇激活:
行为类
① 资助:offer money/provide financial assistance/give a grant
② 拥抱:hug/embrace/cuddle
③涌出:well up/pour out
情绪类
① 感激:grateful/thankful/appreciative
② 感动:touched/moved/affected
【点睛】【高分句型1】Surprised but grateful, Xiaowen declined the gesture at first, saying he shouldn’t take it without a reason.(运用了形容词作状语以及现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】Startled by the new voice, Xiaowen turned around and nodded yes, his throat tightening.(运用了过去分词作状语以及独立主格结构)
(五)
(24-25高三上·河南驻马店·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“I must have left my wallet home. I’m so sorry. I’ll have to come back for these things later,” Mary said to the cashier, who started picking up the items and putting them back. Meanwhile, Mary prepared to walk away when the boy behind her in line spoke up.
“Wait, ma’ am. You don’ t have many things anyway. I’ll pay for them,” the boy said. He couldn’t be older than 12, and Mary noticed that he didn’t look particularly well-off so she wanted to refuse his offer. “I insist, ma’ am. Sometimes, we have to do good things, right?” the boy said and paid for everything that Mary had picked out.
After they got their groceries ready, Mary and the boy went outside. “Hey, I’m Mary. What’s your name?” she said conversationally. “I’m Mark,” the boy said. “Thank you so much for what you did, Mark. It saved me a trip to the store. Listen, how about giving me your phone number so I can pay you back as soon as I get my wallet,” Mary suggested, and the kid wrote down his number on the receipt. “Here, but don’t worry about it. There’s no rush. I live nearby anyway,” Mark said. “Although I also believe in paying kindness forward like you, we have to pay off our debts,” Mary added, and they said goodbye.
Mary told her daughter Anastacia about this incident and always thought of the boy who paid for her things, worrying that he might need the money urgently. So the next day, after calling the boy and learning his address, they went to his home. Returning the money, they began to chat. By talking more, Mary learned that Mark’s grandma needed a huge surgery for $23,000. The hospital was keeping her in observation while Mark raised the money. And he just started a GoFundMe but it was not that popular. “You shouldn’t have to do that on your own,” Mary said, concerned. “We don’t have anyone else. It’s only us,” Mark shrugged.
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Mary and Anastacia looked at each other and came to a wordless decision.
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The GoFundMe project reached far beyond their goal.
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【答案】
Mary and Anastacia looked at each other and came to a wordless decision. They knew they had to help Mark and his grandma. Anastacia, being tech-savvy, immediately took to social media, sharing Mark’s GoFundMe link with her friends and encouraging them to donate. Mary, on the other hand, reached out to her colleagues and community members, spreading the word about Mark’s situation and asking for their support.
The GoFundMe project reached far beyond their goal. In just a few days, they had raised not only the $23,000 needed for the surgery but also an additional amount to cover any unexpected expenses. Mark was overwhelmed with gratitude when Mary and Anastacia told him the news. “I didn’t expect this much support. Thank you so much!” he said, tears welling up in his eyes. The surgery was successful, and Mark’s grandma recovered well. From that day on, Mary and Anastacia became a part of Mark’s family, sharing joys and sorrows, and celebrating life’s milestones together. They all believed that kindness and generosity could create miracles, and they were living proof of that.
【导语】文章以人物为线索展开,讲述了在一个商店里,Mary忘记带钱包无法支付选购的商品,准备离开时,排在她后面的男孩Mark主动提出帮她支付。Mary对此非常感激,并想要偿还这笔钱。后来,Mary了解到Mark的奶奶需要一笔巨额手术费,而Mark正在独自筹集资金。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“Mary和Anastacia对视了一眼,无言中达成了共识。”可知,第一段可描写她们决定帮助Mark,以及她们是如何帮助Mark的。
②由第二段首句内容“GoFundMe筹款项目大大超出了预期目标。”可知,第二段可描写筹款项目取得的进展,Mark表示感谢以及感悟。
2.续写线索:Mary和Anastacia主动提供帮助——筹款项目取得进展——表示感谢——手术成功——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
帮助:help/ give sb a hand
鼓励某人做某事:encourage sb to do sth/ inspire sb to do sth
告诉某人某事:tell sb sth/ inform sb of sth
情绪类
感谢:thank/ appreciate
快乐:joy/ delight
【点睛】[高分句型1] Mark was overwhelmed with gratitude when Mary and Anastacia told him the news.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] They all believed that kindness and generosity could create miracles, and they were living proof of that.(运用了第一个that引导宾语从句)
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(24-25高三上·山东青岛·期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
James, a 34-year-old man, had faced many hardships in recent years. After losing his job during the pandemic, he struggled to make ends meet. Following the passing of his mother and an eviction (驱逐) from his apartment, James became homeless, spending his days working odd jobs and his nights in local shelters.
Despite these challenges, James maintained a positive outlook. He often volunteered at a nearby soup kitchen which was designed to provide food for the old and disabled, where he found comfort in helping others. Every day, he would rise with a sense of purpose, a rare quality that seemed to shine through even the darkest of times. James frequently shared his dream of one day having a home to call his own and getting back on his feet, inspiring others with his determination.
Recently, a local news station featured James in a column about homelessness in Seattle, sharing his inspiring story which moved the hearts of many viewers. They made contact with him, wanting to help him realize his dream of having a stable place to live in.
One day, a surprising twist unfolded. A local businesswoman, inspired by James’s perseverance, decided to pay for his first month’s rent and helped him land a job at her organization. But the ultimate surprise came during the rent signing. In an emotional moment, the businesswoman revealed that she had purchased a small house in a nearby neighborhood for James. Tears filled James’s eyes as he realized the power of the kindness returned to him. “I never expected such a thing could happen to me,” James said. But he turned down her offering politely and said: “I appreciate your generosity more than you can imagine, but I need to rebuild my life on my own. There are still many other homeless people needing your help.” Inspired by his words, she set up a non-profit organization in the small house.
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James was invited to take charge of it a few days later.
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James’s efforts did not go unnoticed.
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【答案】范文
James was invited to take charge of it a few days later. With unwavering dedication, he transformed the small house into a community hub. His firsthand experience enabled him to design practical programs—job training workshops, counseling sessions, and temporary accommodation services. Every weekend, James organized donation drives, encouraging locals to contribute clothes and groceries. His compassionate leadership gradually attracted more volunteers. One afternoon, he noticed a familiar face among newcomers—a teenager he’d once shared sandwiches with at the shelter. “You taught me kindness isn’t about receiving,” the boy smiled, holding a box of supplies. James nodded, warmth swelling in his chest.
James’s efforts did not go unnoticed. Local newspapers featured his initiative, sparking citywide support. Within months, the organization expanded to three neighboring towns. The businesswoman proudly allocated funds for its growth while James secured stable housing through his salary. At the annual charity gala, he stood beside donors, now equals in rebuilding lives. Years later, the original small house displayed a plaque: “Where dignity begins.” James often lingered there, remembering how rejecting one gift had multiplied hope for countless others.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了詹姆斯经历了很多困难,但保持积极态度,后来得到了一位女商人的帮助,但他拒绝了房子,女商人因此成立了非营利组织。詹姆斯把这个组织管理得很好,得到了很多人支持,而詹姆斯也因此改善了生活。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“几天后,詹姆斯被邀请来负责这件事。”可知,第一段可描写詹姆斯如何管理这个非营利组织,帮助其他无家可归的人,可能包括他的工作内容、遇到的挑战或成功案例。
②由第二段首句内容“詹姆斯的努力并没有被忽视。”可知,第二段可描写他的努力带来的影响,比如更多人加入,组织扩大,或者他个人生活的改善,比如找到稳定的住所或工作,呼应他之前的梦想。
2.续写线索:负责组织——管理组织——得到认可——被报道——生活改善——詹姆斯感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
注意到:notice/take notice of
吸引:attract/appeal
扩大:expand/extend
情绪类
有同情心的:compassionate/merciful
坚定:unwavering/firm
【点睛】[高分句型1] Every weekend, James organized donation drives, encouraging locals to contribute clothes and groceries. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] The businesswoman proudly allocated funds for its growth while James secured stable housing through his salary. (运用了while表示对比关系)
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(24-25高三上·广东深圳·期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a chilly autumn day in 2009. Megan Atherton and her roommate, Sarah, found themselves standing outside a small mechanic shop in Annapolis, Maryland, with a broken-down car and empty pockets. The two had just been driven out of their apartment and were desperate to find shelter in Megan’s hometown of Pittsburgh. They had hoped that their old, reliable car would get them there, but fate had other plans.
As they stood discussing their next move, a kind voice interrupted their conversation. “Are you two in need of some help?” asked Toni Cranston, a woman with a warm smile and eyes that seemed to hold the wisdom of ages. She had overheard their difficulty while waiting for her own car to be serviced.
After listening to what Megan explained to her about their situation, Toni said, “I can take you to Pittsburgh. But I can’t leave my cat at home because she has diabetes (糖尿病) and needs her medication. You can stay at my house tonight, and we’ll leave first thing in the morning.”
Megan and Sarah exchanged surprised looks but quickly accepted, Toni’s generous offer. They followed her to her home. Toni also prepared a hearty dinner.
The next morning, as the sun began to rise, Toni packed a small bag for the cat and led Megan and Sarah to her car and sent them’ to their destination. Toni refused to accept any payment for her kindness, saying, “Sometimes, people just need a helping hand. Pass it forward when you can.”
After that, Megan and Toni lost touch. But nearly 15 years later, Megan still thought about everything Toni had done for her. She couldn’t remember Toni’s last name, but when Toni’s niece heard Megan’s story of her unsung hero, she reached out to her aunt.
“My niece kept saying there can’t be two Ton is in Ellicott City with a diabetic cat,” Toni said. Megan’s unsung hero had been found.
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Years after the two women first met, they finally got together in October this year.
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Before they parted, Megan handed Toni a small envelope.
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【答案】参考范文:
Years after the two women first met, they finally got together in October this year. Their reunion was a heart-warming moment filled with hugs and happy tears. Megan recounted how she had always remembered Toni’s selfless act during that difficult time and shared how that experience had shaped her perspective on life, inspiring her to always be ready to lend a helping hand to those in need. They sat down and talked for hours, sharing all the joys and sorrows that had occurred in their lives over the past 15 years. It was clear that their encounter had left a deep mark on both of their lives.
Before they parted, Megan handed Tonia small envelope. Toni was a bit surprised and tried to decline at first. But Megan gently pushed it into her hands. Inside the envelope was a beautifully written thank-you letter and a gift card. Megan said sincerely, “This is just a small way to show my appreciation for what you did for me so long ago. Your kindness changed my life, and I will always remember it. It has inspired me to be a better person and to help others whenever I can. I hope you will accept it.” Toni was deeply moved and promised to cherish this special gift.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,文章主要讲述2009年秋日,梅根和室友莎拉汽车抛锚且身无分文,刚被赶出公寓的她们渴望回到梅根家乡匹兹堡。在汽修店外,她们的困境被托妮听到,托妮主动提出帮忙,让她们先住自己家,还准备晚餐。次日,托妮送她们到目的地,且拒绝接受任何报酬,只希望她们日后能传递善意。此后梅根和托妮失去联系。后来托妮的侄女听闻此事,联系上了托妮。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“在两人初次见面多年后,他们终于在今年10月走到了一起。”可知,第一段可描写二人见面后的情景并分享15年来他们生活中发生的所有喜怒哀乐。
②由第二段首句内容“分手前,梅根递给托妮一个小信封。”可知,第二段可知梅根送给托妮感谢信和礼品卡来表达感激 。
2.续写线索:再次见面——激动和高兴——分享彼此的故事——送感谢信和礼品卡——托妮感动——接受礼物
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.充满:filled with/full of
②.分享:share/have a share in
③.鼓励:inspire/encourage
情绪类
①.惊讶的:surprised/amazed
②.真诚地:sincerely/genuinely
【点睛】[高分句型1]. It was clear that their encounter had left a deep mark on both of their lives.(由连接词that连接的主语从句)
[高分句型2]. This is just a small way to show my appreciation for what you did for me so long ago.(由连接词what连接的宾语从句)
[高分句型3]. It has inspired me to be a better person and to help others whenever I can.(由whenever引导的时间状语从句)
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(24-25高三上·辽宁·期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In the bustling city of Harmony, where towering skyscrapers mirrored the ambitions of its inhabitants, lived a young man named Li Ming. He was an ordinary high school student with extraordinary dreams. Li Ming often pondered about his role in society, wondering how he could contribute positively to the world around him. One day, as he walked home from school, he noticed an old lady struggling to carry a heavy bag of groceries. Without hesitation, he rushed to her side and offered his help.
The old lady, Mrs. Zhang, smiled warmly at Li Ming’s unexpected kindness. “Thank you, young man. You’ve made my day much easier,” she said, her eyes twinkling with gratitude. Li Ming, feeling a sense of accomplishment, replied, “It's my pleasure, Mrs. Zhang. We all need a helping hand sometimes.”
As they walked together, Mrs. Zhang shared stories of her youth, how she had volunteered in her community and how those experiences had shaped her into the compassionate person she was today. Li Ming listened intently, realizing that small acts of kindness could ripple through society, inspiring others to do the same.
Inspired by Mrs. Zhang’s words, Li Ming decided to take action. He approached his school’s principal, Ms. Wang, with an idea for a community service club. “Ms. Wang, I believe that by working together, we can make a real difference in our community,” he explained passionately. Ms. Wang, always supportive of her students’ initiatives, agreed and provided the necessary resources to kickstart the club. The club, named “Harmony Helpers”, quickly gained popularity among students. They organized various activities, such as cleaning public parks, visiting local nursing homes, and assisting at food banks. Li Ming and his fellow club members found immense joy in giving back to their community, seeing the smiles on the faces of those they helped.
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One particular event stood out.
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Through the program, Li Ming benefited a lot.
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【答案】
One particular event stood out. The club partnered with a local charity to host a free English tutoring program for immigrants. Li Ming, with his strong grasp of the language and passion for teaching, volunteered to lead the sessions. Inspired by his spirit, more and more volunteers got involved in the tutoring program. At the same time, the immigrants, eager to learn and integrate into their new society, appreciated the opportunity greatly.
Through the program, Li Ming benefited a lot. He improved his teaching skills but also gained a deeper understanding of the challenges faced by immigrants. He learned about their cultures, dreams, and aspirations. This experience further confirmed his belief in the power of education and community service to bridge gaps and foster understanding among different groups. He realized that his journey, starting with a simple act of kindness, would blossom into a lifelong commitment to serving society and fostering harmony among its people. The day he met Mrs. Zhang and the ripple effect it had on his life would always be engraved in his mind.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。在和谐市,高中生李明偶遇一位提着重物的老奶奶并伸出援手。受老奶奶启发,他创立“和谐帮手”社区服务俱乐部,组织活动回馈社区,与成员们从中获得巨大快乐。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段句首内容“一个特别的事件脱颖而出。”可知,第一段可以描写该俱乐部的特殊的活动内容,如为移民举办了一个免费的英语辅导项目,志愿者积极参与。
②由第二段句首内容“通过这个项目,李明受益匪浅。”可知,第二段可以描写李明受益的内容。
2.续写线索:事件脱颖而出——合作辅导——受益匪浅——受益的内容——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①做搭档,配对:partner/pair
②参加:get involved in/participate in
③提高:improve/upgrade
情绪类
①激情:passion/enthusiasm
②感激:appreciate/feel grateful for
【点睛】【高分句型1】Inspired by his spirit, more and more volunteers got involved in the tutoring program. (运用了过去分词作状语)
【高分句型2】He realized that his journey, starting with a simple act of kindness, would blossom into a lifelong commitment to serving society and fostering harmony among its people. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
(九)
(24-25高三上·山东济南·期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
For Jake, the journey from high school to college had never seemed so challenging. The real world— the campus life he had heard so much about, the decisions on what to study, what career to pursue, and how to find his place— felt like a heavy weight on his chest. He had no clue what his future held.
One afternoon, Jake’s mom suggested he spend some time volunteering at the community center. “It might be a good way to take your mind off things,” she said. At first, he resisted. Volunteering didn't sound like the right way to prepare for college. He needed to focus on his future, not wasting time helping others. But eventually, he agreed unwillingly.
When Jake first arrived at the center, the atmosphere felt unfamiliar but warm. It was a small, comfortable space with colorful walls, art supplies, and kids playing in the corner. He was assigned to help with the kids’ art class. The first few days were uneventful. Jake just sat back, passing out crayons, organizing the art supplies, and occasionally offering a word of encouragement to the kids.
But one particular day, a girl caught his attention. Her name was Layla, and she was sitting in the corner, quietly staring down at a blank canvas (画布), with her hands wrapped tightly around a paintbrush. Her brush paused above the canvas as if she were waiting for permission to make the first mark.
Jake had no experience with art and didn’t know how to guide Layla. But something about her hesitation touched his heart. He walked over to her and asked, “Hey, Layla, what's going on? Why aren't you painting?” She looked up at him with large brown eyes, then down at her hands, which were holding the paintbrush tightly but not moving. “I’m not good at it,” she replied. “I don’t know how to make it look like what’s in my mind.”
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Jake sat beside her, smiling.
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As Layla’s confidence grew, Jake felt a shift within himself.
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【答案】
Jake sat beside her, smiling. “You know, Layla,” he said gently, “art isn’t about making something look perfect. It’s about expressing what’s inside you. There’s no right or wrong way to paint. Just close your eyes and think about that beautiful thing in your mind, then let the brush move freely on the canvas.” Layla listened intently, her eyes fixed on Jake. Slowly, she took a deep breath and made the first stroke. Jake watched with encouragement, nodding and offering words of praise for each new color she added. Bit by bit, a beautiful landscape emerged on the canvas.
As Layla’s confidence grew, Jake felt a shift within himself. He realized that helping others could bring such a sense of fulfillment. The joy on Layla’s face when she finally saw her completed painting was like a light bulb going off in his head. He understood that his own future didn’t have to be a burden. Just as he had guided Layla to express herself, he could also find his own path step by step. Volunteering wasn’t a waste of time at all. It was a chance to learn, grow, and see the world from a different perspective. From that day on, Jake was no longer weighed down by the unknowns of his future. Instead, he was excited to explore new possibilities and make a difference, just like he did for Layla.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,Jake在高中升大学的关键时期,因对未来的迷茫而倍感压力。妈妈建议他去社区中心做志愿者,起初他抗拒但最终同意。在那他帮儿童上美术课,遇到不敢画画的Layla,他鼓励她,自己也在这个过程中有所感悟。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“Jake微笑着在她身旁坐下。”可以预测续写这段主要内容: Jake坐在Layla身旁温柔鼓励她,在Jake的鼓励下,一幅美丽风景画在画布上逐渐呈现。
②由第二段首句内容“随着Layla信心渐增,Jake发觉自己内心也有了转变。”可以预测续写这段主要内容:Jake意识到帮助他人带来的满足感,明白志愿服务的意义,不再为未来未知焦虑,而是期待探索新可能。
2.续写线索: Jake坐身旁——温柔鼓励Layla——美丽风景画呈现—— Jake的感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.说: say/utter
②.意识到……:realize that/be aware that
③.帮助:help/assist/aid
情绪类
①.快乐: joy/delight/happiness
②.兴奋的:excited/excitative/exalted
【点睛】[高分句型1]. It’s about expressing what’s inside you. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]. Layla listened intently, her eyes fixed on Jake. (运用了“名词+过去分词”的独立主格结构)
[高分句型3]. Jake watched with encouragement, nodding and offering words of praise for each new color she added. (运用了现在分词作状语)
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(2025·宁夏内蒙古·模拟预测)阅读下列材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers-very big, tough-looking bikers. They blocked my only path and their appearance suggested they were part of an infamous street gang (帮派).
I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date of the event?
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater, where I could meet many animal rescue groups. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
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I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.
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When the film began, I realized that the bikers were not what I had feared.
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【答案】范文
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. They were chatting loudly and seemed to fill every corner of the place. My heart sank even further. I quickly found an empty seat in the back row, trying to make myself as inconspicuous as possible. I clutched my bag tightly, constantly glancing around, praying that nothing bad would happen. Every now and then, I peeked at the bikers, wondering what they were doing here. Were they going to cause trouble? The tension in the air was palpable, and I regretted my decision to come alone.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were not what I had feared. They had come to support the fundraiser for the local animal shelters. As the documentary unfolded, showing the plight of the abandoned dogs, I saw many of the bikers wiping away tears. They were as moved as I was by the heartwarming and heartbreaking stories. During the intermission, some of them even came over to me, smiling kindly and asking if I was enjoying the film. Their tough exteriors hid big, soft hearts. I felt ashamed of my initial fear and was truly grateful that I had decided to come. We spent the rest of the evening sharing our love for animals and discussing ways to help.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在费城参加会议期间,看到酒店附近剧院有一场关于动物救助站救助流浪狗的纪录片放映及筹款活动,作者因喜爱动物想去参加,却在剧院外看到一群看起来凶巴巴的摩托骑手,犹豫后还是进入剧院,希望电影结束时骑手们已离开。
【详解】1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句 “我匆匆走进电影院,却发现里面骑自行车的人更多了”可知,第一段可描写作者进入剧院后,面对更多骑手时内心的忐忑、不安,以及所采取的试图让自己安全、不引人注意的行动,比如找角落座位、紧紧抓包、频繁观察骑手等,展现当时紧张氛围。
②由第二段首句“当电影开始时,我意识到那些骑自行车的人并不是我所害怕的” 可知,第二段可描写电影播放过程中作者看到骑手们被纪录片触动的表现,以及中场休息时骑手们与作者友好互动的情景,体现出骑手们外表与内心的反差,突显温暖主题。
2. 续写线索:进入剧院,遇到更多骑手——内心恐惧,找座躲避——电影开场,知晓骑手身份——观影中骑手真情流露——中场休息友好交流
3. 词汇激活:
行为类:
①紧握:clutch/grab/grasp/seize
②偷看:peek at/steal a look at/glance at
③支持:support/back/uphold/advocate
情绪类:
①感动的:moved/touched
②羞愧的:ashamed/abashed
【点睛】【高分句型1】Every now and then, I peeked at the bikers, wondering what they were doing here. (运用了现在分词wondering作状语和what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】As the documentary unfolded, showing the plight of the abandoned dogs, I saw many of the bikers wiping away tears. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句和现在分词showing作状语和现在分词短语wiping away作宾语补足语)
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