Unit6汉堡法描述家人正在进行的活动（课件）-2024-2025学年五年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（译林版三起）

Unit 6 译林版三年级起点五年级下册 汉堡法描述厨房内的活动 CONTENTS 目录 写作方法指引 01 基础知识精讲 02 真题写作练习 03 模拟写作提升 04 行业PPT模板http:///hangye/ 模板来自于： 第一PPT https:/// 01 写作方法指引 PART.01 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 介绍人物、时间、地点及状态 介绍家人备餐的活动 说明晚餐时间及心情 4 01 写作方法指引-汉堡法 介绍人物、时间、地点及状态It’s ______o’clock. I ______. My parents are ______ in the kitchen. 介绍家人备餐的活动Mum is _______. Dad is ______ There is ____ in the fridge. 说明晚餐时间及心情 Dinner will be ready at _____o’clock. I’m ___ because _____. 01 写作方法指引-示例 It’s 5:30 in the afternoon. I come home from school, a little hungry. My parents are in the kitchen. Mum is washing tomatoes and carrots. She wants to cook soup. Dad is cooking meat with potatoes, stirring the pan carefully. There are some eggs and bread in the fridge. I stand beside them and watch. Dinner will be ready at 6:00. I’m excited because the food smells really nice! It’s 5:30 in the afternoon. I come home from school, a little hungry. My parents are in the kitchen. Mum is washing tomatoes and carrots. She wants to cook soup. Dad is cooking meat with potatoes, stirring the pan carefully. There are some eggs and bread in the fridge. I stand beside them and watch. Dinner will be ready at 6:00. I’m excited because the food smells really nice! 介绍人物、时间、地点及状态 介绍家人备餐的活动 说明晚餐时间及心情 It’s 5:30 in the afternoon. I come home from school, a little hungry. My parents are in the kitchen. Mum is washing tomatoes and carrots. She wants to cook soup. Dad is cooking meat with potatoes, stirring the pan carefully. There are some eggs and bread in the fridge. I stand beside them and watch. Dinner will be ready at 6:00. I’m excited because the food smells really nice! It’s 5:30 in the afternoon. I come home from school, a little hungry. My parents are in the kitchen. Mum is washing tomatoes and carrots. She wants to cook soup. Dad is cooking meat with potatoes, stirring the pan carefully. There are some eggs and bread in the fridge. I stand beside them and watch. Dinner will be ready at 6:00. I’m excited because the food smells really nice! 02 基础知识精讲 PART.02 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.介绍人物、时间、地点及状态 参考句型： 时间：It’s ____ o’clock (in the afternoon/evening). （整点：5:00, 6:00；半点：5:30 half past five, 6:30 half past six） 描述状态：I come home from school ____ (tired/hungry/excited/curious). -引出人物：When I get home, ____ (my parents/grandparents) are in the kitchen. 8 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.介绍人物、时间、地点及状态 参考单词： afternoon（下午） evening（傍晚） tired（疲倦的） hungry（饿的） excited（兴奋的） curious（好奇的） 9 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.详细描述厨房内的活动（父母动作 + 环境细节） 运用现在进行时（be + 动词ing）和There be句型描述具体动作及物品。 参考句型： 父母动作：My father/mother is ____ (cooking meat/washing vegetables/cutting potatoes/making soup). 状态描述：They are ____ (busy/happy/working together). 环境细节：There is/are ____ (some tomatoes/a potato/two carrots) in the fridge/on the table/in the pan. 10 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.详细描述厨房内的活动（父母动作 + 环境细节） 运用现在进行时（be + 动词ing）和There be句型描述具体动作及物品。 参考词汇： 动作词汇：cook（烹饪） wash（洗） cut（切） stir（搅拌） prepare（准备） 食物词汇：meat（肉） potatoes（土豆） tomatoes（番茄） carrots（胡萝卜） cabbages（卷心菜） soup（汤） eggs（鸡蛋） 地点词汇：fridge（冰箱） table（桌子） pan（锅） bowl（碗） 11 02 基础知识精讲-句型 3.总结感受 说明晚餐时间及心情 参考句型： 准备时间：Dinner will be ready at ____ (6:00/six o’clock/half past six). 心情 + 原因：I’m ____ (happy/excited/glad/hungry) because the food ____ (smells nice/looks delicious). 情感升华：I love ____ (having dinner with my family/the warm kitchen). 12 02 基础知识精讲-句型 3.总结感受 说明晚餐时间及心情 参考词汇： ready（准备好的） soon（很快） smell（闻起来） delicious（美味的） nice（好的） warm（温暖的） 13 02 基础知识精讲-语法 There be 句型 句型结构 There be + 某物/人 + 地点表示“某地有某物/人”，be 动词的形式由后面的第一个名词的单复数决定（就近原则）。 单数/不可数名词： There is + 单数/不可数名词 + 地点. 例：There is a tomato in the fridge. 冰箱里有一个番茄。 02 基础知识精讲-语法 There be 句型 复数名词： There are + 复数名词 + 地点. 例：There are some potatoes on the table. 桌上有一些土豆。 02 基础知识精讲-语法 用 is 或 are 填空 1. There ______ some carrots in the fridge. 2. There ______ a potato on the table. 3. There ______ some soup in the pot. 4. There ______ two onions and a tomato in the basket. 5. There ______ a knife and some forks near the plate. are is is are is 03 模拟写作提升 PART.03 模拟写作提升1 用几句话介绍放学后观察到的厨房场景，描述父母的晚餐准备过程，注意运用本单元学习到的现在进行时和 there be 句型 要求： 语句通顺，语法正确。 书写工整。不少于五句话。 参考句型： It’s ________ p.m. I ________ from a football game. In the kitchen, Mum is ________. She wants to ________. Dad is cooking ________. There are some ________ and ________ in the fridge. Dinner is ________. I’m excited to ________ with ________. 参考词汇： washing vegetables（洗蔬菜）、cooking soup（煮汤）、meat（肉）、there be（有）、fridge（冰箱） 19 It’s 5:30 p.m. I come home from a football game. In the kitchen, Mum is washing vegetables. She wants to cook tomato soup. Dad is cooking meat with potatoes. There are some tomatoes and eggs in the fridge. Dinner is almost ready. I’m excited to have dinner with my parents. 范文1： 介绍人物、时间、地点及状态 介绍家人备餐的活动 说明晚餐时间及心情 20 模拟写作提升2 Mike傍晚放学回到家，看见父母正在厨房为晚餐做准备，请介绍一下大家正在做的事情。 要求： 1.语句连贯通顺，条理清楚。 2.短文需包括所有信息提示，不少于5句话。 21 参考句型： It’s __________o’clock. I __________. My parents are __________ in the kitchen. Mum is __________. Dad is __________ with __________ There is __________ in the fridge. Dinner will be ready at __________ o’clock. I’m __________ because __________. 参考词汇： preparing dinner（准备晚餐）、cutting vegetables（切蔬菜）、cooking meat with potatoes（土豆烧肉）、there be（有）、kitchen（厨房） 22 It’s six o’clock. I come back home. My parents are preparing dinner in the kitchen. Mum is cutting vegetables. Dad is cooking meat with potatoes. There is some juice and bread in the fridge. Dinner will be ready at Seven o’clock. I’m happy because the kitchen is full of nice smells. 范文2： 介绍人物、时间、地点及状态 介绍家人备餐的活动 说明晚餐时间及心情 23 04 真题写作练习 PART.03 现在是5点45分，你刚刚放学回家，看到父母在厨房准备晚餐。用现在进行时和 there be 句型描述厨房活动。 要求： 语句通顺，表达正确; 注意大小写和标点符号。 真题写作练习-苏州姑苏 参考句型： It’s _________. I _________. My parents are _________. Dad is _________. Mum is _________to _________. My brother is _________. There are some _________the fridge. Dinner _________soon. I’m _________. 参考词汇： cooking dinner（做晚餐）、washing tomatoes（洗番茄）、cook soup（煮汤）、meat（肉）、there be（有）、fridge（冰箱） 26 It’s 5:45 p.m. I get home from school. My parents are cooking dinner. Dad is cooking meat. Mum is washing tomatoes to cook soup. My brother is looking for some juice in the fridge. There are some potatoes and carrots in the fridge. Dinner will be ready soon. I’m hungry and looking forward to the meal. 范文3： 介绍人物、时间、地点及状态 介绍家人备餐的活动 说明晚餐时间及心情 27 Thank you! $$