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专题06 应用文写作+读后续写
Part 01 应用文写作
Writing 01
(23-24高二下·青海省西宁市第十四中学·月考)假定你是李华,随着科技的发展,机器人将成为人们生活中的一部分,为了让同学们更好地了解机器人,你校决定举行主题为“The Development and Application of Robots”的演讲比赛。你有意向参加,请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 机器人的发展;
2. 机器人的应用。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Writing 02
(23-24高二下·青海省西宁市第十四中学·月考)假定你是李华,你校将成立体育社团(Sports club),请用英语告知国际交换生。
要点如下:
1. 社团活动(打球,游戏......);
2. 参加社团的好处 (例如:1.强身健体;2.交流学习......);
3. 欢迎参加社团。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Writing 03
(22-23高二下·青海玉树州民族中学·期中)请根据下面的提示,写一篇100词左右的英语短文。
提示:时下,越来越多的学生使用的是电子词典,而非纸质词典。请根据下表就此现象的利弊做出剖析,并提出自己的看法。
利
1.方便、快捷;
2.提供读音;
3.附带其他功能,如计算器。
弊
1.对眼睛有害,影响视力;
2.电子产品对环境的污染更大。
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Writing 04
(21-22高二下·青海玉树州第二民族中学·期中)幸福是什么,幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家,幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光,幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶,请你以“My happiness”为话题,写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。
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Part 02 读后续写
Writing 01
(23-24高二下·青海省西宁市第十四中学·月考)William, a highly skilled plumber (水管工) with three decades of experience, was admired by everyone for his outstanding plumbing abilities. However, what many didn’t know was his deep love for music. Ever since he was a young boy, William was passionate about singing. He dreamed of attending a music school and becoming a famous pop singer, just like his idol Willie Nelson. He even dreamed about performing in his own private concerts someday. Unfortunately, tragedy struck when a car accident claimed the lives of both his parents, abruptly ending all his ambitions for the future. As the eldest brother in his family, William had to drop out of school and find a job to support his two younger sisters.
After three decades, William’s passion for singing remained as strong as ever. As he went about his plumbing work, he always carried a little radio with him, belting out tunes and joyfully singing along. The dull tasks of repairs became enjoyable and much more manageable with music in the background. Occasionally, when inspiration struck, he even composed a song or two of his own. In fact, he had setup a small basement studio where he recorded some of these songs, purely for the fun of it.
One day, William received a call from a client, Remus Gall, asking him to help repair the pipes in his kitchen. William accepted the mission readily. Upon arriving at Mr. Gal’s, he was led into the kitchen and began his work. As usual, while doing the repair work, he happily sang along to his small radio. Coincidentally, Remus Gall was a music producer and owner of a small recording company. Remus overheard the plumber singing and immediately realized there was something in William’s voice. He was amazed that an ordinary plumber should have such great talent in singing. After the repair work, Remus got the chance to talk with William and introduced his profession to him.
“You’ve really got a beautiful voice.” Remus said sincerely. “Have you ever thought of releasing an album of your own? If so, I would be more than glad to help you.”
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
William was greatly shocked by what he heard.
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After three months’ hard work, William’s first-ever album finally came out.
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Writing 02
(23-24高二下·青海省西宁市第十四中学·月考)Once in the summer holidays, a brother and a sister, Sammy and Marie, visited their grandparents on their farm. Sammy took his slingshot (弹弓) to play in the woods. He practiced hard for many days but all his efforts were in vain. No matter how much he tried, he could never hit the target.
At lunchtime, Grandma called out, ”Sammy, it’s lunchtime!” Getting a little disappointed, he headed back for the lunch. While walking back, Sammy noticed his grandma’s pet. It was a cute, little duck. Out of excitement he took his slingshot and aimed at the duck. This time, his shot hit the target and it hit the poor duck on its head and killed it. He was shocked and frightened at the same time.
In the extreme fear, he hid the dead duck in the pile of woods. Marie, his younger sister, had seen it all from the window but she decided not to confront him.
The next day, Grandma said, “Marie, let’s wash the dishes.” Hearing this, Marie immediately said, “But Grandma, Sammy told me he wanted to help you do the household chores.” As soon as she said this, she turned to Sammy and whispered, “Remember the duck?” Sammy got anxious, knowing that his sister knew his secret about the duck. If he did not obey her, she would tell their grandparents about it. So without uttering a single word, he did the dishes. Later, in the evening, Grandpa asked if the children wanted to go for fishing. On hearing this, Grandma said, ”I am sorry but I need Marie to stay with me and help make a supper.” Marie turned to Grandma and said, “Well, that’s all right. Sammy told me he wanted to help you." She again whispered to Sammy, “Remember the duck?” Hearing this, Sammy couldn’t say a word, just standing there angrily. So Marie went with her grandfather for fishing and poor Sammy had to stay with his grandma.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After Marie took advantage of Sammy several times, he finally could not stand it any longer.
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Later that day, Marie went back from fishing with her grandfather.
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专题06 应用文写作+读后续写
Part 01 应用文写作
Writing 01
(23-24高二下·青海省西宁市第十四中学·月考)假定你是李华,随着科技的发展,机器人将成为人们生活中的一部分,为了让同学们更好地了解机器人,你校决定举行主题为“The Development and Application of Robots”的演讲比赛。你有意向参加,请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 机器人的发展;
2. 机器人的应用。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】参考范文
Good morning, everyone!
It’s my great honor to deliver my speech on the Development and Application of Robots.
With the development of science and technology, robots will surely play a more and more important role in many aspects. To begin with, they will be good helpers in people’s daily life like helping people do the housework. Besides, robots will be widely used in the medical field. For example, nanobots are a new technique for fighting cancer cells. As for education, they are an effective way to stimulate students’ interest in learning, especially pupils’.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生用英语写一篇演讲稿,参加“The Development and Application of Robots”演讲比赛,需涵盖机器人的发展和应用两个方面的内容。
【详解】1.词汇积累
演讲:speech→lecture
首先:to begin with→first of all
此外:besides→in addition
例如:for example→for instance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With the development of science and technology, robots will surely play a more and more important role in many aspects.
拓展句:As science and technology develop rapidly, robots will surely play a more and more important role in many aspects.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To begin with, they will be good helpers in people’s daily life like helping people do the housework. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] As for education, they are an effective way to stimulate students’ interest in learning, especially pupils’. (运用了不定式作后置定语)
Writing 02
(23-24高二下·青海省西宁市第十四中学·月考)假定你是李华,你校将成立体育社团(Sports club),请用英语告知国际交换生。
要点如下:
1. 社团活动(打球,游戏......);
2. 参加社团的好处 (例如:1.强身健体;2.交流学习......);
3. 欢迎参加社团。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear classmates,
Exciting news! I’m very glad to tell you that a sorts club will be set up in our school. In the club we can take part in a wide variety of games and activities, such as football, basketball, running, swimming and so on.
As we know, sports plays a critical role in our daily life. Through physical training, we can not only build up our bodies, but also get rest from our busy studies. Besides, the club will offer us chances to learn from each other and promote friendship between students. I’m sure we’ll enjoy a wonderful time together.
The sports club is open to everyone. You’re warmly welcome to join the club.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你校将成立体育社团,要求考生用英语告知国际交换生。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
加入:take part in→participate in
活动:activity→event
重要的:critical→important
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The sports club is open to everyone.
拓展句:The sports club, which welcomes members from all backgrounds, is open to everyone.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m very glad to tell you that a sorts club will be set up in our school.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]As we know, sports plays a critical role in our daily life.(as引导的非限制性定语从句)
Writing 03
(22-23高二下·青海玉树州民族中学·期中)请根据下面的提示,写一篇100词左右的英语短文。
提示:时下,越来越多的学生使用的是电子词典,而非纸质词典。请根据下表就此现象的利弊做出剖析,并提出自己的看法。
利
1.方便、快捷;
2.提供读音;
3.附带其他功能,如计算器。
弊
1.对眼睛有害,影响视力;
2.电子产品对环境的污染更大。
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【答案】Nowadays more and more students prefer electric dictionaries in their language learning. Generally, edictionaries have many advantages. First, it is more convenient and faster. Besides,with an edictionary the word can be accompanied with its pronunciation. Thirdly, an edictionary usually has other functions, for example, it may be used as a calculator.
But every coin has two sides. It also has some disadvantages. The important one is that it will do great harm to students’ eyes. To make matters worse, edictionaries mean more pollution than paper dictionaries.
As for me, I’d like to stick to my paper dictionary, which is more environmentallyfriendly and less harmful to my health.
【分析】本篇书面表达表达是一篇议论文。要求考生越来越多的学生使用的是电子词典,而非纸质词典这一现象的利弊进行剖析,发表自己的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜欢:prefer→ be fond of
例如:for example=for instance
重要的:important→significant
坚持:stick to=insist on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To make matters worse, edictionaries mean more pollution than paper dictionaries.
拓展句:To make matters worse, edictionaries mean more pollution than paper dictionaries, which is harmful to our environment.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
The important one is that it will do great harm to students’ eyes.(that引导表语从句)
[高分句型2]
As for me, I’d like to stick to my paper dictionary, which is more environmentallyfriendly and less harmful to my health.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
Writing 04
(21-22高二下·青海玉树州第二民族中学·期中)幸福是什么,幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家,幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光,幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶,请你以“My happiness”为话题,写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。
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【答案】My happiness
Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around us.
I will never forget one thing. Once, I got a very bad score in a math exam. I was so ashamed and afraid to tell my parents. But when I got home, my parents knew what had happened. They gently said to me, “It doesn’t matter, we are sure you will be better next time. Never give up. ”I was so moved that I made up my mind to study harder next time. It is the encouragement and tolerance of love that makes me realize how important happiness is.
This has always made me very happy. Whenever I meet with difficulties, I can feel my parents’ deep love.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生以“My happiness”为话题,写一件曾经发生过的让自己感到幸福的事情。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的:important→ essential
感动的:moved → touched
开心的:happy→ delighted
困难:difficulty→ challenge
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I was so ashamed and afraid to tell my parents.
拓展句:I was so ashamed and afraid that I daren’t tell my parents.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I was so moved that I made up my mind to study harder next time(运用了that引导的结果状语从句)
【高分句型2】It is the encouragement and tolerance of love that makes me realize how important happiness is.(运用了it is…that结构的强调句)
Part 02 读后续写
Writing 01
(23-24高二下·青海省西宁市第十四中学·月考)William, a highly skilled plumber (水管工) with three decades of experience, was admired by everyone for his outstanding plumbing abilities. However, what many didn’t know was his deep love for music. Ever since he was a young boy, William was passionate about singing. He dreamed of attending a music school and becoming a famous pop singer, just like his idol Willie Nelson. He even dreamed about performing in his own private concerts someday. Unfortunately, tragedy struck when a car accident claimed the lives of both his parents, abruptly ending all his ambitions for the future. As the eldest brother in his family, William had to drop out of school and find a job to support his two younger sisters.
After three decades, William’s passion for singing remained as strong as ever. As he went about his plumbing work, he always carried a little radio with him, belting out tunes and joyfully singing along. The dull tasks of repairs became enjoyable and much more manageable with music in the background. Occasionally, when inspiration struck, he even composed a song or two of his own. In fact, he had setup a small basement studio where he recorded some of these songs, purely for the fun of it.
One day, William received a call from a client, Remus Gall, asking him to help repair the pipes in his kitchen. William accepted the mission readily. Upon arriving at Mr. Gal’s, he was led into the kitchen and began his work. As usual, while doing the repair work, he happily sang along to his small radio. Coincidentally, Remus Gall was a music producer and owner of a small recording company. Remus overheard the plumber singing and immediately realized there was something in William’s voice. He was amazed that an ordinary plumber should have such great talent in singing. After the repair work, Remus got the chance to talk with William and introduced his profession to him.
“You’ve really got a beautiful voice.” Remus said sincerely. “Have you ever thought of releasing an album of your own? If so, I would be more than glad to help you.”
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
William was greatly shocked by what he heard.
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After three months’ hard work, William’s first-ever album finally came out.
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【答案】参考范文
William was greatly shocked by what he heard. He had never considered himself to be a talented singer, and his passion for music had always been a private hobby. But the sincere words from Remus Gall made him realize that he might have a chance to pursue his dream after all. William felt a surge of excitement and anticipation, and he couldn’t wait to explore this new opportunity. He had always wondered what his life would have been like if he had pursued music instead of plumbing, and now he had a chance to find out.
After three months’ hard work, William’s first-ever album finally came out. The recording process was a new and challenging experience for William, but he was determined to make the most of it. With the help of Remus Gall and his team, William’s songs were professionally recorded and produced. The album was a mix of original songs and covers of some of William’s favorite classics. The album was titled “Plumber with a Voice”, a nod to William’s unlikely journey from a skilled plumber to a budding singer.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了威廉是一位技术高超的水管工,然而,许多人不知道的是他对音乐的热爱。威廉从小就酷爱唱歌。他梦想进入一所音乐学校,成为一名著名的流行歌手,就像他的偶像威利·纳尔逊一样。不幸的是,一场车祸夺去了他父母的生命,悲剧降临了,他对未来的抱负戛然而止。三十年后,威廉对唱歌的热情一如既往地强烈,并且在一次巧合下被一名音乐制作人发现了他的才华,还为他出版了专辑。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“威廉被他所听到的震惊了”可知,第一段可描写雷穆斯·戈尔的真诚话语让威廉意识到自己有机会追求自己的梦想,威廉决定一试。
②由第二段首句内容“经过三个月的努力,威廉的首张专辑终于面世了”可知,第二段可描写威廉在的雷穆斯·加尔帮助下出版了专辑和专辑出版后的影响。
2.续写线索:追求梦想——渴望探索机会——团队帮助——专辑发布——威廉感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①意识到:realize/be aware of
②追求:pursue/chase after
③决定:be determined to/determine to do
情绪类
①热情:passion/enthusiasm
②兴奋:excitement/thrill
【点睛】[高分句型1] He had always wondered what his life would have been like if he had pursued music instead of plumbing, and now he had a chance to find out. (运用了what引导宾语从句和if条件状语从句虚拟语气)
[高分句型2] But the sincere words from Remus Gall made him realize that he might have a chance to pursue his dream after all. (运用了不定式作后置定语和that引导宾语从句)
Writing 02
(23-24高二下·青海省西宁市第十四中学·月考)Once in the summer holidays, a brother and a sister, Sammy and Marie, visited their grandparents on their farm. Sammy took his slingshot (弹弓) to play in the woods. He practiced hard for many days but all his efforts were in vain. No matter how much he tried, he could never hit the target.
At lunchtime, Grandma called out, ”Sammy, it’s lunchtime!” Getting a little disappointed, he headed back for the lunch. While walking back, Sammy noticed his grandma’s pet. It was a cute, little duck. Out of excitement he took his slingshot and aimed at the duck. This time, his shot hit the target and it hit the poor duck on its head and killed it. He was shocked and frightened at the same time.
In the extreme fear, he hid the dead duck in the pile of woods. Marie, his younger sister, had seen it all from the window but she decided not to confront him.
The next day, Grandma said, “Marie, let’s wash the dishes.” Hearing this, Marie immediately said, “But Grandma, Sammy told me he wanted to help you do the household chores.” As soon as she said this, she turned to Sammy and whispered, “Remember the duck?” Sammy got anxious, knowing that his sister knew his secret about the duck. If he did not obey her, she would tell their grandparents about it. So without uttering a single word, he did the dishes. Later, in the evening, Grandpa asked if the children wanted to go for fishing. On hearing this, Grandma said, ”I am sorry but I need Marie to stay with me and help make a supper.” Marie turned to Grandma and said, “Well, that’s all right. Sammy told me he wanted to help you." She again whispered to Sammy, “Remember the duck?” Hearing this, Sammy couldn’t say a word, just standing there angrily. So Marie went with her grandfather for fishing and poor Sammy had to stay with his grandma.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After Marie took advantage of Sammy several times, he finally could not stand it any longer.
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Later that day, Marie went back from fishing with her grandfather.
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【答案】 After Marie took advantage of Sammy several times, he finally could not stand it any longer. He came to Grandma and admitted that he had killed the duck. Grandma knelt down smiling, gave him a hug and said, “My dear child, I know. I was standing right near the window when it all happened. But because I love you, I forgave you. I was wondering how long you would let Marie take advantage of you and how long you would admit your mistake.” Sammy apologized to his grandma and hugged her once again.
Later that day Marie went back from fishing with her grandfather. Grandma called Marie to come to her and disclosed the whole truth, and meantime blamed her for taking advantage of her brother. Marie also felt ashamed and regretful, so she said sorry to Grandma and her brother, promising not to do so again. She would help with the chores at home and play with Sammy. Therefore, Sammy and Marie had wonderful summer holidays and both of them learned a lot from this trip. So it is important to admit your mistake, apologize and seek others’ forgiveness.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Sammy因为受不了 Marie 的威胁而选择向奶奶坦白,并获得奶奶的原谅,奶奶批评了Marie威胁哥哥的行为。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“在Marie占了Sammy几次便宜之后,他终于忍无可忍了。”可知,第一段可描写Sammy不愿再忍受 Marie 的威胁而纠结要不要向奶奶坦白,可描写Sammy 的心理活动,以及向奶奶坦白后奶奶的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“那天晚些时候,Marie和祖父一起钓鱼回来了。”可知,第二段可描写在 Marie 和爷爷钓鱼回来之后,奶奶因为 Marie 威胁 Sammy 而批评了她并表扬Sammy的诚实,兄妹俩之间的冲突消失,皆大欢喜,享受假期。
2.续写线索:Sammy无法忍受 Marie 的威胁——向奶奶坦白——批评Marie——兄妹冲突消失——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①承认:admit/ acknowledge
②.原谅:pardon/forgive
③.帮助:help/assist
情绪类
①.羞愧的:ashamed / abashed
②.后悔的:regretful / sorry
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I was standing right near the window when it all happened.(由连接词when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]. But because I love you, I forgave you.(由because引导的原因状语从句)
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