专题08应用文写作之祝贺信-2025年高考英语写作提分秘籍（新高考通用）

专题08应用文写作之祝贺信 第一部分 题型分析 第二部分 写作方法 第三部分 常用句式 第四部分 写作模版 第五部分 模拟再现 第六部分 举一反三 第七部分 题型通关 题型分析 祝贺信是向对方表示祝贺的信件，其命题形式通常以真实生活场景为背景，如同学获奖、朋友升学、亲戚创业成功、生日/节日祝福等。 祝贺信的核心要求是语言简洁真诚，格式规范，内容切题，体现祝贺的情感并适当表达鼓励或祝愿。 字数要求：80词左右（高考英语作文标准）。祝贺信也是人们情感交流的一种方式，写祝贺信可以使亲戚、朋友、同事之间加强联系，增进了解，彼此关心。 写作方法 祝贺信写作步骤： 说明事由并表达自己衷心祝贺→展开评论事件、赞扬收信人→再次表达良好祝愿 在写作主要内容的时候，可以重点赞扬一下当事人的优秀能力和取得成就的原因、并展望他将来的美好发展前景等。 常用句式 经典首段 1.I am writing to express my congratulations on .... 我写信是为了祝贺你…… 2.Congratulations on your success in 祝贺你……成功。 3.Please accept my most sincere congratulations and best wishes for the future. 请接受我最诚挚的祝贺和最良好的祝愿。 4.I’m writing to convey my heartfelt congratulations on your receiving the offer from Peking University. 我写信是为了表达我对你收到北京大学录取通知书衷心的祝贺。 5.I am much delighted to learn that you have been elected the leader of your school basketball team. 得知你被推选为学校篮球队队长我很开心。 6.I would like to express my congratulations on… 我想表达我对……的祝贺 高分正文 1.I know this is surely owing to… 我知道这肯定是因为…… 2.As far as I’m concerned, you’re intelligent. 在我看来，你很聪明. 3.I just want you to know how pleased I am to witness your success. 我只是想让你知道我是多么高兴见证你的成功。 4.As the saying goes, “ Everything comes to him who waits. “ Finally, you succeeded. 俗话说，“功夫不负有心人。”最后，你成功了！ 5.Without your effort, you couldn’t have succeeded. 如果没有你的努力，你就不可能成功了。 经典尾段 1.请接受我最热烈的问候。Please accept my warmest regards. 2.祝你一切顺利!Wish you all the best! 3.祝你心想事成!May all your wishes come true! 4.祝你年年有今日，岁岁有今朝。I wish you many happy returns of the day. Congratulations again, and I wish your future success! 再次向你表示祝贺，希望你获得更大的成功。 Sincere congratulations to you again! 再次真诚地祝贺你！ 写作模版 Dear       , (首段祝贺) Congratulations on your _______ .It was delightful for me to hear that ______________ .I know how hard you have been working and I am very proud of you for your achievement.Please accept my sincere congratulations on your ___________. (评论事件) I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I understand for sure that it is your hard work / your excellent ability that leads you to the current success.Now you prove to me a mature and well-rounded（全面的）________in every respect. (展望未来，再次祝愿) Judging from your current success / achievement, I am confident that in the future ___________ .Again, I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______.May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams! 模拟再现 （一） （2024·陕西安康·模拟预测）假定你是李华，交换生Terry在你校成语闯关比赛(Idiom Challenge Competition)中荣获二等奖，请你给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括： 1. 向他表示祝贺；2. 肯定他的付出。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） （2024·重庆荣昌·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Peter以优异的成绩通过考试，取得了到中国某大学留学的资格。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示祝贺； 2. 请教学习方法； 3. 期待在中国见面。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 举一反三 （一） （2024·江西·三模）假定你是李华，你的留学生好友 Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛（Chinese Traditional Culture Contest）”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信，内容包括： 1. 祝贺； 2. 回顾； 3. 期待。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （二） （2024·山西运城·三模）假定你是李华，交换生 Terry在你校成语闯关比赛(Idiom Challenge Competition)中荣获二等奖，请你给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括： 1.向他表示祝贺； 2.肯定他的付出。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） （2025·河南信阳·二模）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Kary作为“The Cleanup Teenagers”环保组织的一员，清理海岸垃圾，并获得了国家青年英雄奖。请你给他写一封邮件表示祝贺，内容包括： （1）祝贺他获奖；（2）肯定对方的付出努力；（3）表示受到启发并向他学习。 注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Karry, I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 题型通关 （一） （24-25高三上·福建·期中）假定你是李华，英国交换生Chris参加你校举办的“Beautiful China in My Eyes”短视频比赛，获得了一等奖。请你给Chris写一封邮件，内容包括： (1)表达祝贺； (2)你对作品的看法。 注意： (1)写作词数应为80个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （二） （24-25高三上·广东·阶段练习）假定你是李华、新西兰交换生Tim的画作入选了你校学生会举办的“我眼中的大美中国” (Beautiful China in My Eyes)主题画展。请你给Tim写一封邮件，内容包括: (1)表达祝贺; (2)简评其作品。 注意: (1)写作词数应为80个左右; (2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, LiHua （三） （24-25高三上·山西·开学考试）假如你是李华，你的笔友李雷在2024年的高考中获得了优异的成绩，被自己的理想大学录取。请你用英语写一封信，向他表示祝贺。内容包括：1.祝贺高考成绩优异；2.肯定他的努力；3.期待交流。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80词左右； 2.适当添加细节。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） （24-25高三上·四川成都·期末）假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下： 1．表示祝贺并赞扬; 2．给与鼓励和期待; 注意： 1．词数80左右; 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 参考词汇：“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛“Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） （24-25高三上·山西太原·期末）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Karry作为“The Cleanup Teenagers”环保组织的一员，清理海岸垃圾，并获得了国家青年英雄奖。请你给他写一封邮件表示祝贺，内容包括： (1) 祝贺他获奖； (2) 表示受到启发并向他学习。 注意： (1) 写作词数应为80个左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Karry， I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes. ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— Love， Li Hua （六） （23-24高二上·浙江杭州·阶段练习）假定你是李华，得知好友 Eric回国后在学校成立了中国传统文化和习俗学习小组。请给他写 一封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示祝贺；2.询问学习内容；3.期待他分享学习体会。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） （2024·湖南·一模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Lucy的生日即将到来，你特意给她寄了一些具有中国特色的礼物。请你给她写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 你的祝福； 2. 简要介绍你的礼物； 3. 表达期望。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3, 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Lucy, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （八） （23-24高三下·湖南长沙·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris来邮件与你分享了他参加了他们学校中文学习俱乐部开展的“中国成语(Chinese Idioms)”比赛，并获得了冠军的消息。请你给他写一封回信。 要求如下： 1.表达祝贺； 2.肯定努力； 3.表达祝愿。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua （九） （23-24高二上·云南昆明·阶段练习）假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”演讲比赛(“Chinese Bridge”speech contest)一等奖。你为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信。 内容包括： 1. 取得成就的原因(努力与坚持)以及希望继续努力； 2. 希望有机会交流。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题08应用文写作之祝贺信 第一部分 题型分析 第二部分 写作方法 第三部分 常用句式 第四部分 写作模版 第五部分 模拟再现 第六部分 举一反三 第七部分 题型通关 题型分析 祝贺信是向对方表示祝贺的信件，其命题形式通常以真实生活场景为背景，如同学获奖、朋友升学、亲戚创业成功、生日/节日祝福等。 祝贺信的核心要求是语言简洁真诚，格式规范，内容切题，体现祝贺的情感并适当表达鼓励或祝愿。 字数要求：80词左右（高考英语作文标准）。祝贺信也是人们情感交流的一种方式，写祝贺信可以使亲戚、朋友、同事之间加强联系，增进了解，彼此关心。 写作方法 祝贺信写作步骤： 说明事由并表达自己衷心祝贺→展开评论事件、赞扬收信人→再次表达良好祝愿 在写作主要内容的时候，可以重点赞扬一下当事人的优秀能力和取得成就的原因、并展望他将来的美好发展前景等。 常用句式 经典首段 1.I am writing to express my congratulations on .... 我写信是为了祝贺你…… 2.Congratulations on your success in 祝贺你……成功。 3.Please accept my most sincere congratulations and best wishes for the future. 请接受我最诚挚的祝贺和最良好的祝愿。 4.I’m writing to convey my heartfelt congratulations on your receiving the offer from Peking University. 我写信是为了表达我对你收到北京大学录取通知书衷心的祝贺。 5.I am much delighted to learn that you have been elected the leader of your school basketball team. 得知你被推选为学校篮球队队长我很开心。 6.I would like to express my congratulations on… 我想表达我对……的祝贺 高分正文 1.I know this is surely owing to… 我知道这肯定是因为…… 2.As far as I’m concerned, you’re intelligent. 在我看来，你很聪明. 3.I just want you to know how pleased I am to witness your success. 我只是想让你知道我是多么高兴见证你的成功。 4.As the saying goes, “ Everything comes to him who waits. “ Finally, you succeeded. 俗话说，“功夫不负有心人。”最后，你成功了！ 5.Without your effort, you couldn’t have succeeded. 如果没有你的努力，你就不可能成功了。 经典尾段 1.请接受我最热烈的问候。Please accept my warmest regards. 2.祝你一切顺利!Wish you all the best! 3.祝你心想事成!May all your wishes come true! 4.祝你年年有今日，岁岁有今朝。I wish you many happy returns of the day. Congratulations again, and I wish your future success! 再次向你表示祝贺，希望你获得更大的成功。 Sincere congratulations to you again! 再次真诚地祝贺你！ 写作模版 Dear       , (首段祝贺) Congratulations on your _______ .It was delightful for me to hear that ______________ .I know how hard you have been working and I am very proud of you for your achievement.Please accept my sincere congratulations on your ___________. (评论事件) I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I understand for sure that it is your hard work / your excellent ability that leads you to the current success.Now you prove to me a mature and well-rounded（全面的）________in every respect. (展望未来，再次祝愿) Judging from your current success / achievement, I am confident that in the future ___________ .Again, I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______.May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams! 模拟再现 （一） （2024·陕西安康·模拟预测）假定你是李华，交换生Terry在你校成语闯关比赛(Idiom Challenge Competition)中荣获二等奖，请你给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括： 1. 向他表示祝贺；2. 肯定他的付出。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Terry, I'm writing to extend my warmest congratulations to you for your outstanding performance in Idiom Challenge Competition, where you were awarded the second prize. Your achievement is truly commendable, and it reflects your hard work and dedication towards this competition. It is evident that you have put in a large amount of effort to master the idioms and their meanings. Your success is a testament to your perseverance and commitment to excellence. Once again, congratulations on your well-deserved accomplishment ! I am confident that this recognition will motivate you to continue striving for greatness in your future study. Keep up the fantastic work, Terry! Best wishes!                                                                                                             Yours sincerely,                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。交换生Terry在考生所在学校的成语闯关比赛(Idiom Challenge Competition)中荣获二等奖，请考生给他写一封祝贺信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 表达：extend→express 比赛：competition→match 明显的：evident→apparent 激励：motivate→inspire 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：Your achievement is truly commendable, and it reflects your hard work and dedication towards this competition. 拓展句：Your achievement is truly commendable, which reflects your hard work and dedication towards this competition. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I am confident that this recognition will motivate you to continue striving for greatness in your future study.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】I'm writing to extend my warmest congratulations to you for your outstanding performance in Idiom Challenge Competition, where you were awarded the second prize.（运用了where引导的定语从句） （二） （2024·重庆荣昌·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Peter以优异的成绩通过考试，取得了到中国某大学留学的资格。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示祝贺； 2. 请教学习方法； 3. 期待在中国见面。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter, I’m rather glad to learn that you have passed the examination and obtained the qualification to study in China. I’d like to express my sincere congratulations on your success. I’m deeply encouraged by what you’ve achieved. Although I work hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory. Could you be kind enough to share your learning experience with me? Meanwhile, I’m so much inspired by what you have achieved and, you know, to study in a key university is a dream deep-rooted in my mind. How can I make a step forward from where I am? Looking forward to your coming to China. I hope we can meet in China during the summer vacation. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的英国笔友 Peter以优异的成绩通过考试，取得了到中国某大学留学的资格。请给他写封邮件。 【详解】1.词汇积累 快乐的：glad→pleased 获得：obtain→gain 鼓励：encourage→motivate 表达：express→extend 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Although I work hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory. 拓展句：Working hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m deeply encouraged by what you’ve achieved.（运用了what引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】I’m rather glad to learn that you have passed the examination and obtained the qualification to study in China.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） 举一反三 （一） （2024·江西·三模）假定你是李华，你的留学生好友 Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛（Chinese Traditional Culture Contest）”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信，内容包括： 1. 祝贺； 2. 回顾； 3. 期待。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter, Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you. It came as no surprise, for you are keenly interested in Chinese culture and have been continuously exploring it. Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but you also consulted many locals and professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture. Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛（Chinese Traditional Culture Contest）”中获得外国选手组一等奖这件事写一封信，表达祝愿，回顾过程并表示期待。 【详解】1.词汇积累 传达：extend→convey 对……感兴趣：be interested in→have an interest in 充裕的：abundant→sufficient 致力于：devote oneself to→commit oneself to 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you. 拓展句：Learning that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but you also consulted many locals and professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture. (运用了not only…but also句型、部分倒装句及which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句) （二） （2024·山西运城·三模）假定你是李华，交换生 Terry在你校成语闯关比赛(Idiom Challenge Competition)中荣获二等奖，请你给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括： 1.向他表示祝贺； 2.肯定他的付出。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Terry, I am thrilled to hear that you have achieved the second prize in our Idiom Challenge Competition! Congratulations on your remarkable accomplishment! Your dedication and hard work have paid off, and your success is a testament to your efforts. This achievement is not only a credit to you but also a proud moment for our school. Keep up the good work, and I am sure that many more successes await you in the future. Once again, congratulations! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Terry写一封祝贺信，祝贺他在校成语闯关比赛中获得二等奖，内容包括：向他表示祝贺，肯定他的付出。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 激动的：thrilled→excited 非凡的：remarkable→extraordinary 全身心投入：dedication→commitment 证明：testament→proof 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：This achievement is not only a credit to you but also a proud moment for our school. 拓展句：Not only is this achievement a credit to you but it also is a proud moment for our school. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I am thrilled to hear that you have achieved the second prize in our Idiom Challenge Competition!(使用了不定式作状语、that引导宾语从句) 【高分句型2】Keep up the good work, and I am sure that many more successes await you in the future. (使用了祈使句、that引导宾语从句) （三） （2025·河南信阳·二模）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Kary作为“The Cleanup Teenagers”环保组织的一员，清理海岸垃圾，并获得了国家青年英雄奖。请你给他写一封邮件表示祝贺，内容包括： （1）祝贺他获奖；（2）肯定对方的付出努力；（3）表示受到启发并向他学习。 注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Karry, I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Karry, I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes. Please accept my heartfelt congratulations on this incredible honor! Your dedication to cleaning up the coast is truly inspiring. Not only have you removed harmful plastic waste that endangers wildlife, but you have also raised awareness within your community about the importance of environmental conservation. Your efforts have proven that even small actions taken by teenagers can spark meaningful difference. Greatly encouraged by your example, I now feel a stronger sense of responsibility to reduce my daily waste and actively participate in local environmental initiatives. Keep up the amazing work! I wish you continued success in all your future projects. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是一封祝贺信，要求考生以李华的名义，向获得国家青年英雄奖的美国朋友Kary表示祝贺，并肯定他的付出和努力，同时表达受到对方启发并希望向他学习的愿望。 【详解】词汇积累 高兴的：be glad → be delighted 献身：dedication → commitment 激励：encouraged → inspired 参加：participate in → involve oneself in 句式拓展 同义句改写 原句：Your dedication to cleaning up the coast is truly inspiring. 拓展句：Your unwavering commitment to the coastal cleanup endeavor is genuinely motivating. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only have you removed harmful plastic waste that endangers wildlife, but you have also raised awareness within your community about the importance of environmental conservation.（运用了部分倒装） 【高分句型2】Greatly encouraged by your example, I now feel a stronger sense of responsibility to reduce my daily waste and actively participate in local environmental initiatives.（使用了过去分词作状语） 题型通关 （一） （24-25高三上·福建·期中）假定你是李华，英国交换生Chris参加你校举办的“Beautiful China in My Eyes”短视频比赛，获得了一等奖。请你给Chris写一封邮件，内容包括： (1)表达祝贺； (2)你对作品的看法。 注意： (1)写作词数应为80个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Chris, I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to congratulate you on winning first prize in the “Beautiful China in My Eyes” short video competition! Your video really stood out. It not only captured the essence of China, from its breathtaking natural scenery to its rich cultural heritage, but also blended the traditional and modern aspects of life here. Besides, your impressive use of camera angles, lighting, and composition creates a visually stunning experience that transports viewers to the heart of China. Once again, congratulations on this well-deserved win! I am looking forward to seeing more of your creative works in the future. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Chris写一封祝贺信，祝贺他在“Beautiful China in My Eyes”短视频比赛中获得一等奖。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 比赛：competition→contest 突出：stand out→stick out/be outstanding 本质：essence→nature 融合：blend→combine 2. 句式拓展 简单句改为复合句 原句：Your video really stood out. It not only captured the essence of China, from its breathtaking natural scenery to its rich cultural heritage, but also blended the traditional and modern aspects of life here. 拓展句：Your video really stood out, which not only captured the essence of China, from its breathtaking natural scenery to its rich cultural heritage, but also blended the traditional and modern aspects of life here. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to congratulate you on winning first prize in the “Beautiful China in My Eyes” short video competition!(使用了不定式作目的状语、动名词作宾语) 【高分句型2】Besides, your impressive use of camera angles, lighting, and composition creates a visually stunning experience that transports viewers to the heart of China. (使用了that引导定语从句) （二） （24-25高三上·广东·阶段练习）假定你是李华、新西兰交换生Tim的画作入选了你校学生会举办的“我眼中的大美中国” (Beautiful China in My Eyes)主题画展。请你给Tim写一封邮件，内容包括: (1)表达祝贺; (2)简评其作品。 注意: (1)写作词数应为80个左右; (2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, LiHua 【答案】Dear Tim, We have just chosen twelve paintings as part of the exhibition on the theme of “The Beauty of China.” I’m writing to inform you that your painting is among the selected ones. Your painting mainly focuses on the big changes that have taken place in China in the past decades. Not only do you show your love for China, but you also show your talent and skills in your painting. There’s no doubt that it has been highly thought of by all the judges. Congratulations to you again. I anticipate that you’ll create more wonderful paintings about China in your spare time. Yours. Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给新西兰交换生Tim写一封邮件，告诉对方其画作入选了你校学生会举办的“我眼中的大美中国”主题画展，内容包括简评他的作品并向他表示祝贺。 【详解】1.词汇积累 主题：subject → theme 专注：concentrate on → focus on 告知：tell → inform 发生：happen → take place 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：We have just chosen twelve paintings as part of the exhibition on the theme of “The Beauty of China.” 拓展句：We have just chosen twelve paintings as part of the exhibition whose theme is “The Beauty of China.” 【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only do you show your love for China, but you also show your talent and skills in your painting（运用了not only…but also…位于句首的倒装句） 【高分句型2】I anticipate that you’ll create more wonderful paintings about China in your spare time.（运用了that引导宾语从句） （三） （24-25高三上·山西·开学考试）假如你是李华，你的笔友李雷在2024年的高考中获得了优异的成绩，被自己的理想大学录取。请你用英语写一封信，向他表示祝贺。内容包括：1.祝贺高考成绩优异；2.肯定他的努力；3.期待交流。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80词左右； 2.适当添加细节。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Li Lei, Learning that you have been admitted to your dream university due to your excellent academic performance in Gao Kao, I am writing to convey my sincere congratulations to you. It came as no surprise that you stood out in the big exam. Not only have you devoted most of your time to your studies, but you have dived into various activities to build up all kinds of skills. Additionally, your selfless help wins you recognition and trust from both your teachers and classmates. You set me a good example. I am wondering if you could offer me some advice on time management in school. Congratulations again! Wait for you to share your experience. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的笔友李雷在2024年的高考中获得了优异的成绩，被自己的理想大学录取。要求考生用英语写一封信，向他表示祝贺。 【详解】1.词汇积累 出色的：excellent→outstanding 表达：convey→extend 因为：due to→because of 此外：additionally→besides 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：You set me a good example. I am wondering if you could offer me some advice on time management in school. 拓展句：Since you set me a good example, could you offer me some advice on time management in school? 【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that you have been admitted to your dream university due to your excellent academic performance in Gao Kao, I am writing to convey my sincere congratulations to you. (运用了that引导宾语从句和现在分词作状语) [高分句型2] Not only have you devoted most of your time to your studies, but you have dived into various activities to build up all kinds of skills. (运用了倒装句) （四） （24-25高三上·四川成都·期末）假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下： 1．表示祝贺并赞扬; 2．给与鼓励和期待; 注意： 1．词数80左右; 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 参考词汇：“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛“Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Peter, Hearing that you have won the first prize of “Chinese Bridge” Chinese Speech Contest, I’m writing to extend my warmest congratulations to you on your success. I understand for sure that it is your excellent ability that leads you to the current success. Your fluent Chinese left a deep impression on me. It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest. I know this is surely owing to your hard work, persistence as well as your determination to achieve your dream. So I firmly believe that if you go on studying Chinese harder, you will have the opportunity to study in China. I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead. Yours sincerel 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国笔友Peter写封信，祝贺他获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。 【详解】1.词汇积累 表达：extend→convey 当然：surely→certainly 毅力：persistence→perseverance 因为：owing to→due to 2.句式拓展简单句变复合句 原句：Your fluent Chinese left a deep impression on me. 拓展句：What left a deep impression on me was your fluent Chinese. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you have won the first prize of “Chinese Bridge” Chinese Speech Contest, I’m writing to extend my warmest congratulations to you on your success. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] I understand for sure that it is your excellent ability that leads you to the current success. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和强调句) （五） （24-25高三上·山西太原·期末）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Karry作为“The Cleanup Teenagers”环保组织的一员，清理海岸垃圾，并获得了国家青年英雄奖。请你给他写一封邮件表示祝贺，内容包括： (1) 祝贺他获奖； (2) 表示受到启发并向他学习。 注意： (1) 写作词数应为80个左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Karry， I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes. ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— Love， Li Hua 【答案】Dear Karry， I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes. Please accept my heartfelt congratulations on this incredible honor! Your dedication to cleaning up the coast is truly inspiring. Not only have you removed harmful plastic waste that endangers wildlife, but you have also raised awareness within your community about the importance of environmental conservation. Your efforts have proven that even small actions taken by teenagers can spark meaningful difference. Greatly encouraged by your example, I now feel a stronger sense of responsibility to reduce my daily waste and actively participate in local environmental initiatives. Keep up the amazing work! I wish you continued success in all your future projects. Love, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的美国朋友 Karry作为“The Cleanup Teenagers”环保组织的一员，清理海岸垃圾，并获得了国家青年英雄奖。要求考生给他写一封邮件表示祝贺。 【详解】1.词汇积累 真挚的：heartfelt→sincere 荣誉：honor→glory 意识：awareness→consciousness 鼓励：encourage→inspire 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Your dedication to cleaning up the coast is truly inspiring. 拓展句：Your dedication to cleaning up the coast is truly inspiring, which has a great influence on me. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only have you removed harmful plastic waste that endangers wildlife, but you have also raised awareness within your community about the importance of environmental conservation. （运用了部分倒装结构） 【高分句型2】Greatly encouraged by your example, I now feel a stronger sense of responsibility to reduce my daily waste and actively participate in local environmental initiatives.（运用了过去分词作状语的结构） （六） （23-24高二上·浙江杭州·阶段练习）假定你是李华，得知好友 Eric回国后在学校成立了中国传统文化和习俗学习小组。请给他写 一封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示祝贺；2.询问学习内容；3.期待他分享学习体会。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Eric, I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations to you on the establishment of the Chinese traditional culture and custom study group in your school. I’m glad that you are so fascinated by our traditional culture and customs and I’d be truly thrilled if you could share some insights into the topics and the activities that your study group will explore. Are you focusing on some specific aspects, such as Chinese calligraphy, festival customs, or ancient literature? I’m eager to learn about your reflections and the valuable lessons you’ve gained from studying Chinese traditional culture and customs. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友 Eric写一封邮件，祝贺他回国后在学校成立了中国传统文化和习俗学习小组，询问学习内容并期待他分享学习体会。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad→pleased 兴奋的：thrilled→excited 专注于：focus on→concentrate on 获得：gain→obtain 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations to you on the establishment of the Chinese traditional culture and custom study group in your school. 拓展句：Hearing that you established the Chinese traditional culture and custom study group in your school, I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations to you. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m glad that you are so fascinated by our traditional culture and customs and I’d be truly thrilled if you could share some insights into the topics and the activities that your study group will explore.（运用了that引导的宾语从句、if引导的条件状语从句以及后一个that引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】I’m eager to learn about your reflections and the valuable lessons you’ve gained from studying Chinese traditional culture and customs.（运用了省略关系词的定语从句） （七） （2024·湖南·一模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Lucy的生日即将到来，你特意给她寄了一些具有中国特色的礼物。请你给她写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 你的祝福； 2. 简要介绍你的礼物； 3. 表达期望。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3, 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Lucy, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Lucy, With your birthday approaching, I sincerely wish you a happy birthday! To convey my sincere wishes, I’ve made some paper cuttings for you. One piece is designed with four Chinese characters that mean “happy birthday”. Another piece is in the shape of sunflowers, which stand for good health and energy. There’s also one piece showing a monkey on a tree as the year in which you were born was the Year of the Monkey in the Chinese zodiac. The paper cuttings are expected to be delivered to you within seven days and I hope you’ll like them. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的英国笔友Lucy的生日即将到来，你特意给她寄了一些具有中国特色的礼物，要求你给她写一封邮件，表达你的祝福，简要介绍你的礼物以及表达期望。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 来临：approach→come near 真诚地：sincerely→heartfelt 代表：stand for→represent 展示：show→display 2. 句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：The paper cuttings are expected to be delivered to you within seven days and I hope you’ll like them. 拓展句：The paper cuttings, which I expect to be delivered to you within seven days, are crafted with the hope that they will bring you joy. 【点睛】[高分句型1]Another piece is in the shape of sunflowers, which stand for good health and energy.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]There’s also one piece showing a monkey on a tree as the year in which you were born was the Year of the Monkey in the Chinese zodiac.(运用了现在分词作定语，in which引导的定语从句) （八） （23-24高三下·湖南长沙·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris来邮件与你分享了他参加了他们学校中文学习俱乐部开展的“中国成语(Chinese Idioms)”比赛，并获得了冠军的消息。请你给他写一封回信。 要求如下： 1.表达祝贺； 2.肯定努力； 3.表达祝愿。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Chris, I’m so delighted to learn that you have been the champion of Chinese Idioms con test in your school. This is a special and happy moment for you. I’m very proud of you. Please accept my sincerest congratulations! But indeed no one could have been more deserving of the champion than you because I know how hard you have been learning Chinese. It is your diligence and perseverance that stand you out in the crowd. It is a real encouragement to see your efforts paid off and I do hope you can hold your passion for Chinese and further understand our splendid culture. Wish you future success in Chinese study. I’m looking forward to meeting you in China one day. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Chris写一封回信，祝贺他比赛获得冠军。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：delighted→glad 快乐：happy→merry 以……为骄傲：be proud of→take pride in 取得回报：pay off→get in return 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：This is a special and happy moment for you. I’m very proud of you. 拓展句：This is a special and happy moment for you, when I’m very proud of you. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m so delighted to learn that you have been the champion of Chinese Idioms con test in your school. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] It is your diligence and perseverance that stand you out in the crowd. (运用了强调句) （九） （23-24高二上·云南昆明·阶段练习）假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”演讲比赛(“Chinese Bridge”speech contest)一等奖。你为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信。 内容包括： 1. 取得成就的原因(努力与坚持)以及希望继续努力； 2. 希望有机会交流。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter,       How is everything going with you recently? I am more than delighted to hear that you won the first prize of “Chinese Bridge” speech contest. Please accept my sincere congratulations on your achievement.     As we all know, it is your hard work and persistence that lead you to the current success. In the past few months, you have been devoting time and effort to practicing Chinese every day, because of which you made great progress. But in order to achieve more in your study and embrace a better future in your life, you’d better go on studying Chinese harder. Eventually, would you tell me when it’s convenient for you. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国笔友Peter写一封祝贺信，祝贺他获得了“汉语桥”演讲比赛一等奖，表示你为他感到骄傲。其内容包括： 取得成就的原因(努力与坚持)、希望继续努力以及 希望有机会交流。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 高兴的：delighted→excited 促成：lead to→contribute to 继续：go on→continue 最后：eventually→ultimately 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：But in order to achieve more in your study and embrace a better future in your life, you’d better go on studying Chinese harder. 复合句：If you want to achieve more in your study and embrace a better future in your life, you’d better go on studying Chinese harder. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As we all know, it is your hard work and persistence that lead you to the current success.（运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句和强调句型） 【高分句型2】Eventually, would you tell me when it’s convenient for you（运用了when引导的宾语从句） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$