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专题06应用文写作之建议信
第一部分
题型分析
第二部分
写作方法
第三部分
常用句式
第四部分
写作模板
第五部分
模拟再现
第六部分
举一反三
第七部分
题型通关
题型分析
建议信是就某事向某个人或某个组织提出建议或忠告的信件。建议信应言简意赅、目的具有合理性和说服力,并要注意礼貌。建议信通常包括三部分:开头:说明写信缘由.主体:陈述具体的建议和理由。结尾:希望建议被考虑和采用。建议信是高考重点考查的考向。
写作方法
建议信要给出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由,而且提出的理由要合情合理,语气一定要得当,既要委婉礼貌,又要有说服力。
一般来说,建议信可分为三个部分:
(1)开头;开门见山,简要陈述事由,简单介绍自己并陈述自己的观点,注意语气。
(2)主体;说明建议的内容,对所提出的建议进行分析、说明原因。这一部分注意要简 明扼要,目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
(3)结尾;对自己提出的建议简单地做一小结并表达愿望。
常用句式
开头常用句
I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life.Here are a few suggestions.
我很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。这里有一些建议。
I have received your letter saying you plan to pay a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
我已经收到了你的来信,信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
I've heard from you, learning that you're worried about your driving test. I'd like to share some of my ideas as follows.
收到来信,获悉你担心驾照考试。我想分享我的如下想法。
主体常用句
What's more, you may as well join in a summer camp, which not only broadens your horizons but also helps you develop the spirit of teamwork.
另外,你不妨参加夏令营,这不但会开拓你的视野而且有助于你培养团队精神。
As for my point of view, to start with, you'd better do more reading.
至于我的观点,首先,你最好多阅读。
If I were you, I would do more travelling.
如果我是你,我就会多外出旅游。
In addition, it does benefit you if you participate in a variety of afterclass activities.
此外,参加各种课外活动对你也有益处。
In addition, it's a good idea to prepare your lessons in advance.
另外,提前准备功课是个好主意。
You are supposed to choose Chinese calligraphy because it's a natural combination of beauty, strength, history and technique.
你应该选择中国书法,因为它是美丽、力量、历史和技巧的自然结合。
结尾常用句
Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Post.
在此,我希望我的建议能够为我们学校的《英语报》的改进版增添精彩的一笔。
I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work!
无论你决定做什么,祝你学习/工作好运!
写作模板
Dear ________,
I was glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on _________(别人求助内容). Here are my suggestions. / You have asked me for my advice with regard to__________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
To get started, you had better _________(建议一). Besides, it’s a good idea to _________(建议二). Last but not least, I think the most efficient way is to _________(建议三).
With all the factors taken into consideration, I’m sure you will _________(成功解决问题). / I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with your__________(祝愿)
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
模拟再现
(一)
(2025·湖南·模拟预测)假定你是李华,为了适应英语听力中的英美混合播音,你给外教Smith写封邮件,希望他在口语课上提供针对性的帮助。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear smith,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
(2025·湖南·一模)假定你是李华,你所在的城市今年夏天将开办一个国际音乐夏令营,该夏令营面向世界各地爱好演奏中国民族乐器(Chinese musical instruments) 的学生。你想建议你的英国朋友James参加该夏令营。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.夏令营的开办信息;
2.你的建议;
3.夏令营的课程:
(1)中国民族乐器演奏训练课;
(2)中国传统音乐欣赏课。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear James,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
举一反三
(一)
(2025·河南驻马店·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你校图书馆规定学生借阅时一次不能超过三本书。你认为这一规定不妥。请你给图书馆管理员写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)分析此举可能带来的问题;
(2)提出建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(二)
(2025·福建泉州·模拟预测)假定你是李华,外教Mr. Pullen计划使用AI工具为学生提供全天候的英语口语练习支持。然而,你认为这种做法可能存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Pullen,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
(三)
(2025·陕西榆林·三模)假定你是李华,你所在的国际学校开展了丰富多彩的体育活动,但你发现同学们参与的热情不高,请你给负责体育活动的外籍老师 Peter写一封信。内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, a student from our international school.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
题型通关
(一)
(2025·贵州安顺·二模)假定你是李华,你校交换生 Jack 受邀去中国朋友家里做客。他在邮件中向你咨询相关事情,请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 介绍礼仪;
2. 给出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)
(2025·河北保定·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的英国好友Terry得知你在主题为“健康生活”(Health Lifestyle)的演讲比赛中获得一等奖,写信向你询问有关情况。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.感谢Terry的关注;
2.叙述你是如何保持健康的;
3.询问Terry对健康生活的建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Terry,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)
(2025·广东深圳·一模)假定你是李华,外教 Mike准备开展读书月活动,让学生读完指定的五本英文名著,你认为这样的安排存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(四)
(2025·山东青岛·一模)假定你是李华,外教Chris计划于下周六组织一次春游活动(spring outing),现面向全班同学征集活动建议。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)具体活动;
(2)你的理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(五)
(2025·河北承德·一模)假定你是李华,你校最近来了一批英国交换生。请你给学校英文报写一封邮件,建议向交换生征稿,内容包括:
1.提出建议;
2.说明理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(六)
(2025·山西·一模)假定你是李华,在学校英语论坛上看到一则求助帖:
I love drawing, but my friend is so much better at it than I am. Whenever we draw together, I end up feeling discouraged and upset. Please help! Any advice would mean a lot to me. Thanks!
请写一则回帖,提出你的建议。
注意:
(1) 写作词数应为80个左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear friend,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(七)
(2025·河北秦皇岛·一模)假如你叫李华。现在你市已经进入严冬季节,时常出现低温、霜冻和雨雪天气。为此,请你写一封邮件给正在你校交流学习的英国学生Mike,提醒他一些注意事项,以避免冻伤和感冒。
要点包括:
1.可能出现的自然灾害;
2.相关的防范建议;
3.你的祝愿。
要求:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(八)
(2025·山东枣庄·二模)假定你是李华。在英语课上,外教Mr Smith经常采用“同伴合作”方式改作文。请你给他写一封邮件,建议使用人工智能 (AI) 工具,如Deepseek批改,内容包括:
1.你的建议;
2.你的理由。
注意:
1.词数 80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(九)
(2025·广东肇庆·二模)假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Alice在准备即将到来的中文考试中遇到困难,写信向你求助。请你给他回信,内容包括:
(1)提出建议;
(2)阐述理由;
(3)表达期待。
注意:
(1)字数80词左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
(3)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alice,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Senior One.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(十)
(2025·河北·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的加拿大朋友Kevin要来广州参加一个国际青少年足球比赛。请你根据以下要点给他写一封邮件:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 提供建议。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Kevin,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(十一)
(2025·山东·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你校新成立了国画社团(Traditional Chinese Painting Club)和民乐社团(Folk Music Club),你的新西兰同学Richard对这两个社团很感兴趣,但不知如何选择,写信向你求助,请你给他回信,内容如下:
1.给出建议并说明理由;
2.告知申请方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Richard,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(十二)
(2025·陕西咸阳·二模)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter因学业压力将放弃足球训练,请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示理解;2.给出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re considering quitting football training due to academic pressure.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes
Li Hua
(十三)
(2025·河北邯郸·三模)假定你是李华,你的交换生朋友Bob想要加入学校的书法(calligraphy)社团,他给你发邮件询问相关信息。作为该社团的负责人,请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 该社团的活动介绍;
2. 加入该社团后的建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Bob,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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专题06应用文写作之建议信
第一部分
题型分析
第二部分
写作方法
第三部分
常用句式
第四部分
写作模板
第五部分
模拟再现
第六部分
举一反三
第七部分
题型通关
题型分析
建议信是就某事向某个人或某个组织提出建议或忠告的信件。建议信应言简意赅、目的具有合理性和说服力,并要注意礼貌。建议信通常包括三部分:开头:说明写信缘由.主体:陈述具体的建议和理由。结尾:希望建议被考虑和采用。建议信是高考重点考查的考向。
写作方法
建议信要给出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由,而且提出的理由要合情合理,语气一定要得当,既要委婉礼貌,又要有说服力。
一般来说,建议信可分为三个部分:
(1)开头;开门见山,简要陈述事由,简单介绍自己并陈述自己的观点,注意语气。
(2)主体;说明建议的内容,对所提出的建议进行分析、说明原因。这一部分注意要简 明扼要,目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
(3)结尾;对自己提出的建议简单地做一小结并表达愿望。
常用句式
开头常用句
I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life.Here are a few suggestions.
我很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。这里有一些建议。
I have received your letter saying you plan to pay a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
我已经收到了你的来信,信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
I've heard from you, learning that you're worried about your driving test. I'd like to share some of my ideas as follows.
收到来信,获悉你担心驾照考试。我想分享我的如下想法。
主体常用句
What's more, you may as well join in a summer camp, which not only broadens your horizons but also helps you develop the spirit of teamwork.
另外,你不妨参加夏令营,这不但会开拓你的视野而且有助于你培养团队精神。
As for my point of view, to start with, you'd better do more reading.
至于我的观点,首先,你最好多阅读。
If I were you, I would do more travelling.
如果我是你,我就会多外出旅游。
In addition, it does benefit you if you participate in a variety of afterclass activities.
此外,参加各种课外活动对你也有益处。
In addition, it's a good idea to prepare your lessons in advance.
另外,提前准备功课是个好主意。
You are supposed to choose Chinese calligraphy because it's a natural combination of beauty, strength, history and technique.
你应该选择中国书法,因为它是美丽、力量、历史和技巧的自然结合。
结尾常用句
Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Post.
在此,我希望我的建议能够为我们学校的《英语报》的改进版增添精彩的一笔。
I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work!
无论你决定做什么,祝你学习/工作好运!
写作模板
Dear ________,
I was glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on _________(别人求助内容). Here are my suggestions. / You have asked me for my advice with regard to__________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
To get started, you had better _________(建议一). Besides, it’s a good idea to _________(建议二). Last but not least, I think the most efficient way is to _________(建议三).
With all the factors taken into consideration, I’m sure you will _________(成功解决问题). / I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with your__________(祝愿)
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
模拟再现
(一)
(2025·湖南·模拟预测)假定你是李华,为了适应英语听力中的英美混合播音,你给外教Smith写封邮件,希望他在口语课上提供针对性的帮助。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear smith,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Smith,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students. In order to adjust to the mixed accents of British and American English in listening practice, I’m wondering if you could accept the following suggestions I would like to offer on our oral English lessons.
First of all, we would greatly appreciate it if you could provide some pronunciation rules which can help us sharpen our listening skills. Additionally, it would help to introduce us to some useful materials, such as English songs, fun dubbing, or film clips where we can be exposed to various accents. I am firmly convinced that we will make great progress with your aid.
Thank you for your attention to this letter! Looking forward to your support and guidance!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Smith写一封邮件,希望在口语课上得到针对性的帮助,以适应英语听力中的英美混合播音。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
适应:adjust to → adapt to
建议:suggestion → proposal
此外:additionally → in addition
帮助:aid → help
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:First of all, we would greatly appreciate it if you could provide some pronunciation rules which can help us sharpen our listening skills.
同义句:First of all, we would be very grateful if you could offer some pronunciation guidelines to help us improve our listening abilities.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In order to adjust to the mixed accents of British and American English in listening practice, I’m wondering if you could accept the following suggestions I would like to offer on our oral English lessons. (运用了if引导的宾语从句和省略引导词的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Additionally, it would help to introduce us to some useful materials, such as English songs, fun dubbing, or film clips where we can be exposed to various accents. (运用了where引导的定语从句)
(二)
(2025·湖南·一模)假定你是李华,你所在的城市今年夏天将开办一个国际音乐夏令营,该夏令营面向世界各地爱好演奏中国民族乐器(Chinese musical instruments) 的学生。你想建议你的英国朋友James参加该夏令营。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.夏令营的开办信息;
2.你的建议;
3.夏令营的课程:
(1)中国民族乐器演奏训练课;
(2)中国传统音乐欣赏课。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear James,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear James:
Good news! An international music camp is due to open in our city this summer to any student worldwide interested in playing Chinese musical instruments. As a Chinese music lover, why not come and join the camp?
At the camp, you will be given full training. Of course, to play well, you are required to have a good understanding of the Chinese traditional music, so there will be music classes intended to help you to appreciate such kind of music.
I’m sure you will have a lot of fun at the camp.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。考生想建议自己的英国朋友James参加该夏令营。请你给他写封邮件。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
感兴趣:be interested in → be passionate about / enthusiastic about
提供培训指导:give full training → provide with comprehensive instruction
深入的理解:good understanding → thorough comprehension / solid grasp
玩得开心:have a lot of fun → greatly enjoy yourselves / create wonderful memories
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:At the camp, you will be given full training.
拓展句:At the camp, where professional instructors will guide you step by step, you will be given full training.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sure you will have a lot of fun at the camp. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Of course, to play well, you are required to have a good understanding of the Chinese traditional music, so there will be music classes intended to help you to appreciate such kind of music.(运用了不定式作状语,运用了不定式作补足语)
举一反三
(一)
(2025·河南驻马店·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你校图书馆规定学生借阅时一次不能超过三本书。你认为这一规定不妥。请你给图书馆管理员写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)分析此举可能带来的问题;
(2)提出建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I recently became aware of the library’s limit of three books per loan and felt compelled to share my concerns.
While I understand the intention behind the policy, it might lead to negative effect. Some subjects demand diverse resources for a research topic. With only three books, students would face challenges in providing comprehensive project materials.
Would it be possible to consider a more flexible policy? Maybe you could allow additional books based on academic project needs? This approach could benefit students while managing the library’s resources effectively.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在校图书馆规定学生借阅时一次不能超过三本书。你认为这一规定不妥。请你给图书馆管理员写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
面对:face→be faced with
提供:provide→offer
可能的:possible→likely
方法:approach→method
2.句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句:With only three books, students would face challenges in providing comprehensive project materials.
拓展句:It is with only three books that students would face challenges in providing comprehensive project materials.
【点睛】[高分句型1] While I understand the intention behind the policy, it might lead to negative effect. (运用了while引导的让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] Maybe you could allow additional books based on academic project needs? (运用了过去分词作定语)
(二)
(2025·福建泉州·模拟预测)假定你是李华,外教Mr. Pullen计划使用AI工具为学生提供全天候的英语口语练习支持。然而,你认为这种做法可能存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Pullen,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Pullen,
I am writing to share my thoughts about the plan to use AI tools for providing oral English practice around the clock.
While AI is useful, I worry that some students might become overly reliant on it, missing opportunities for real-time communication with teachers and classmates. This interaction is essential for improving speaking skills in a natural environment.
To address this, I would suggest balancing AI with face-to-face interactions to ensure students continue to develop their communication skills in authentic settings. Additionally, integrating group discussions and role-playing activities could also further enhance their conversational abilities.
Thank you for considering my perspective.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。外教Mr. Pullen计划使用AI工具为学生提供全天候英语口语练习支持,要求考生给给外教写邮件说明该做法可能存在的问题并提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
英语口语:oral English → spoken English/colloquial English
过度依赖:overly reliant on → overly dependent on
实时交流:real-time communication → instant communication
解决:address → solve/deal with
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to share my thoughts about the plan to use AI tools for providing oral English practice around the clock.
拓展句:I am writing to share my thoughts about the plan which aims to use AI tools for providing oral English practice around the clock.
【点睛】[高分句型1] While AI is useful, I worry that some students might become overly reliant on it, missing opportunities for real time communication with teachers and classmates. (运用了while引导的让步状语从句和that引导的宾语从句以及现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Additionally, integrating group discussions and role-playing activities could also further enhance their conversational abilities.(运用了动名词作主语)
(三)
(2025·陕西榆林·三模)假定你是李华,你所在的国际学校开展了丰富多彩的体育活动,但你发现同学们参与的热情不高,请你给负责体育活动的外籍老师 Peter写一封信。内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, a student from our international school.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, a student from our international school. I’m writing to discuss an issue I’ve noticed recently. Despite the rich variety of sports activities organized by our school, many students seem to lack enthusiasm for participation.
To address this problem, I have a few suggestions. First, we could introduce more diverse sports, such as yoga or rock climbing. Second, we can offer professional coaching to help students improve their skills. Finally, setting up a rewards system for active participants might encourage more students to join in.
I sincerely hope my suggestions can be of some help. Looking forward to seeing more students enjoying sports activities.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生给负责体育活动的外籍老师 Peter写一封信,就同学们参与体育活动的热情不高一事给出自己的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
解决:address→ deal with
首先:first→ first of all
最后:finally→ last but not least
真诚地:sincerely→ genuinely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Despite the rich variety of sports activities organized by our school, many students seem to lack enthusiasm for participation.
拓展句:Despite the rich variety of sports activities that are organized by our school, many students seem to lack enthusiasm for participation.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to discuss an issue I’ve noticed recently.(运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)
【高分句型2】I sincerely hope my suggestions can be of some help.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
题型通关
(一)
(2025·贵州安顺·二模)假定你是李华,你校交换生 Jack 受邀去中国朋友家里做客。他在邮件中向你咨询相关事情,请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 介绍礼仪;
2. 给出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll visit a Chinese family. Here are some key points to help you enjoy the experience.
When you arrive, it’s customary to greet the hosts warmly. A smile and a polite “Hello” go a long way. Addressing the hosts with their titles, such as “Mr” or “Mrs”, shows respect. At the dinner table, etiquette is important. Wait for the hosts to invite you to sit and start eating. Use chopsticks properly and avoid pointing them at others.
Here are some suggestions for you. Bring a small gift, like fruits or snacks, to show appreciation to them.
I hope these tips will help you make a good impression. Have a great time!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,给交换生Jack回邮件,介绍去中国朋友家做客的礼仪并给出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的:glad → delighted/happy
依惯例的:customary → conventional
建议:suggestion → proposal/advice
感激,感谢:appreciation → gratitude
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:A smile and a polite “Hello” go a long way.
拓展句:A smile and a polite “Hello”, which are simple yet effective, go a long way in making a good first impression.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When you arrive, it’s customary to greet the hosts warmly. (运用了从属连词when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Addressing the hosts with their titles, such as “Mr” or “Mrs”, shows respect. (运用了动名词短语作主语)
[高分句型3] I hope these tips will help you make a good impression. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)
(二)
(2025·河北保定·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的英国好友Terry得知你在主题为“健康生活”(Health Lifestyle)的演讲比赛中获得一等奖,写信向你询问有关情况。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.感谢Terry的关注;
2.叙述你是如何保持健康的;
3.询问Terry对健康生活的建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Terry,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Terry,
Thank you so much for your concern in my recent achievement. I’m excited to share that I won the first prize in the Health Lifestyle Speech Competition.
Maintaining health has always been a priority for me. I keep a balanced diet, ensuring I consume a variety of fruits and vegetables. Additionally, I try to get plenty of sleep and reduce stress by exercising.
I’m curious to hear about your own health routine. What are some tips or habits you follow to lead a healthy lifestyle? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国好友Terry回信,感谢他的关注,叙述自己是如何保持健康的并询问他对健康生活的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的:excited→thrilled
确保:ensure→make sure
许多的:plenty of→a number of
建议:tip→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m curious to hear about your own health routine.
拓展句:I’m curious to hear about what you have done regularly to keep healthy.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m excited to share that I won the first prize in the Health Lifestyle Speech Competition.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]I keep a balanced diet, ensuring I consume a variety of fruits and vegetables.(运用了现在分词作状语,省略了that的宾语从句)
(三)
(2025·广东深圳·一模)假定你是李华,外教 Mike准备开展读书月活动,让学生读完指定的五本英文名著,你认为这样的安排存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
I really appreciate your effort to organize the reading month. However, requiring all students to finish five assigned classic English books may cause some issues.
Firstly, the books might be too challenging for some students, leading to stress. Secondly, limited time could discourage thorough reading. Could we adjust the plan? Maybe reduce the number to 2-3 books and let students choose from a list based on their interests. Alternatively, grouping students to read different books and share summaries could save time while ensuring engagement.
Thanks for considering my suggestions.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,外教 Mike 准备开展读书月活动,让学生读完指定的五本英文名著,要求考生写一封邮件,说明这样安排存在的问题,并提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
导致:lead to → result in
确保:ensure → guarantee
考虑:consider → take ... into account/consideration
建议:suggestions → advice
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:However, requiring all students to finish five assigned classic English books may cause some issues.
拓展句:Some issues may be caused if all students are required to finish five assigned classic English books.
【点睛】【高分句型1】However, requiring all students to finish five assigned classic English books may cause some issues. (运用了动名词作主语)
【高分句型2】Firstly, the books might be too challenging for some students, leading to stress. (运用了现在分词作状语)
(四)
(2025·山东青岛·一模)假定你是李华,外教Chris计划于下周六组织一次春游活动(spring outing),现面向全班同学征集活动建议。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)具体活动;
(2)你的理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m glad to hear that we’ll have a spring outing next Saturday. I suggest we go to the botanical garden. There, we can admire various plants and learn about different species, which is both educational and relaxing. Also, we can have a picnic in the garden. It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other. I’m looking forward to the activity.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生给外教Chris写封信,就其计划于下周六组织一次春游活动一事给出自己的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→ delighted
建议:suggest→ advise
各种各样的:various→ a variety of
机会:chance→ opportunity
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:Also, we can have a picnic in the garden. It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other.
拓展句:Also, we can have a picnic in the garden, which will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m glad to hear that we’ll have a spring outing next Saturday.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】There, we can admire various plants and learn about different species, which is both educational and relaxing.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(五)
(2025·河北承德·一模)假定你是李华,你校最近来了一批英国交换生。请你给学校英文报写一封邮件,建议向交换生征稿,内容包括:
1.提出建议;
2.说明理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Editor,
I hope this email finds you well. I would like to suggest inviting our British exchange students to contribute articles to the school English newspaper.
This initiative would provide them with an opportunity to share their experiences, cultural insights, and impressions of our school. It would also help our students better understand British culture and improve their English skills. Moreover, such articles would promote cross-cultural communication and strengthen the bond between our students and the exchange students.
I believe this would be a meaningful addition to our school newspaper. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给学校英文报写一封邮件,建议向交换生征稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggest → advise
提供某人某物:provide sb. with sth. → offer sb. sth.
此外:moreover → in addition
加强:strengthen → enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I would like to suggest inviting our British exchange students to contribute articles to the school English newspaper.
拓展句:I would like to suggest that you should invite our British exchange students to contribute articles to the school English newspaper.
【点睛】[高分句型1] This initiative would provide them with an opportunity to share their experiences, cultural insights, and impressions of our school.(运用了动词不定式作后置定语)
[高分句型2] I believe this would be a meaningful addition to our school newspaper.(运用了省略了that的宾语从句)
(六)
(2025·山西·一模)假定你是李华,在学校英语论坛上看到一则求助帖:
I love drawing, but my friend is so much better at it than I am. Whenever we draw together, I end up feeling discouraged and upset. Please help! Any advice would mean a lot to me. Thanks!
请写一则回帖,提出你的建议。
注意:
(1) 写作词数应为80个左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear friend,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear friend,
I can really empathize with the frustration you’re experiencing. It’s completely normal to feel discouraged when you compare your drawing skills to someone who seems more proficient. However, it’s crucial to shift your perspective.
First of all, rather than constantly measuring yourself against your friend, focus on your personal development. Secondly, consider your friend as a valuable resource. Instead of feeling jealous, approach them and ask for advice. Finally, always keep in mind the reason why you started drawing in the first place — the pure joy and fulfillment it brings. Stay true to your passion, and with consistent practice, you’ll surely reach new heights.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校论坛上的一则求助帖写回帖,给出自己的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
经历:experience→ go through
重要的:crucial→ important/critical
最后:finally→ last but not least
高兴:joy→ happiness
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Stay true to your passion, and with consistent practice, you’ll surely reach new heights.
拓展句:If you can stay true to your passion, you’ll surely reach new heights with consistent practice.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I can really empathize with the frustration you’re experiencing.(运用了省略关系代词that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】It’s completely normal to feel discouraged when you compare your drawing skills to someone who seems more proficient.(运用了when引导的状语从句和who引导的定语从句)
(七)
(2025·河北秦皇岛·一模)假如你叫李华。现在你市已经进入严冬季节,时常出现低温、霜冻和雨雪天气。为此,请你写一封邮件给正在你校交流学习的英国学生Mike,提醒他一些注意事项,以避免冻伤和感冒。
要点包括:
1.可能出现的自然灾害;
2.相关的防范建议;
3.你的祝愿。
要求:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Mike,
I hope this email finds you well. As winter has arrived in our city, extremely cold weather with low temperatures, frost, and snow or rain is common. Such conditions may lead to natural disasters like blizzards, which can be quite dangerous.
To avoid getting frostbite or catching a cold, wear thick, warm clothes, gloves, and a hat when going out. Try to stay indoors during extreme weather. If you have to be outside, keep moving to keep warm.
I sincerely hope you stay safe and healthy during this cold season.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。现在你市已经进入严冬季节,时常出现低温、霜冻和雨雪天气。为此,要求考生写一封邮件给正在你校交流学习的英国学生Mike,提醒他一些注意事项,以避免冻伤和感冒。
【详解】1.词汇积累
导致:lead to→ cause
极端地:extremely → terrifically
到达:arrived→ reached
健康:healthy→ fit
2.句式拓展
扩写句子
原句:Try to stay indoors during extreme weather.
拓展句:Try to stay indoors during extreme weather, which will reduce your risk of frostbite.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Such conditions may lead to natural disasters like blizzards, which can be quite dangerous.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】If you have to be outside, keep moving to keep warm.(运用了If引导的条件状语从句。)
(八)
(2025·山东枣庄·二模)假定你是李华。在英语课上,外教Mr Smith经常采用“同伴合作”方式改作文。请你给他写一封邮件,建议使用人工智能 (AI) 工具,如Deepseek批改,内容包括:
1.你的建议;
2.你的理由。
注意:
1.词数 80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua. I’d like to suggest using AI tools like Deepseek for marking compositions instead of the “peer-cooperation” way.
There are several reasons for this. Firstly, AI tools like Deepseek can provide immediate feedback. Secondly, the feedback is highly detailed. It can point out not only grammar and spelling mistakes but also offer in-depth analysis of vocabulary usage and logical coherence. This helps us better understand our weaknesses. Moreover, AI can give a wide range of language suggestions, enabling us to learn different ways of expression.
I sincerely hope you’ll consider this proposal. It could potentially bring about a more efficient and effective writing - learning experience for all of us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写封信,建议他用人工智能 (AI) 工具,如Deepseek批改作文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先:firstly→ first of all
此外:moreover→ what’s more
希望:hope→ wish
真诚地:sincerely→ genuinely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Moreover, AI can give a wide range of language suggestions, enabling us to learn different ways of expression.
拓展句:Moreover, AI can give a wide range of language suggestions, which enables us to learn different ways of expression.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It can point out not only grammar and spelling mistakes but also offer in-depth analysis of vocabulary usage and logical coherence.(运用了not only…but also…连接的并列谓语)
【高分句型2】I sincerely hope you’ll consider this proposal.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
(九)
(2025·广东肇庆·二模)假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Alice在准备即将到来的中文考试中遇到困难,写信向你求助。请你给他回信,内容包括:
(1)提出建议;
(2)阐述理由;
(3)表达期待。
注意:
(1)字数80词左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
(3)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alice,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Senior One.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Alice,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Senior One. I’m more than sorry to hear that you’re struggling with the approaching Chinese exam. Here are some tips that might be of great help.
To begin with, why not immerse yourself in Chinese podcasts or movies? This way, you can enhance your listening skills while enjoying the content. The reason is that exposure to authentic language materials can familiarize you with different accents and speaking rhythms. Additionally, keeping a Chinese journal is highly recommended. Not only does it allow you to practice writing regularly, but it also helps you review and reinforce the words and sentence patterns you’ve learned.
I’m fully convinced that with consistent efforts, you’ll ace the exam. Looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国笔友Alice回封信,对他即将到来的中文考试提出建议,阐述理由,表达期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
即将来临的:approaching→forthcoming
提高:enhance→boost
另外:additionally→in addition
经常地:regularly→on a regular basis
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Additionally, keeping a Chinese journal is highly recommended.
拓展句:Additionally, I highly recommend that you keep a Chinese journal.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Here are some tips that might be of great help. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] The reason is that exposure to authentic language materials can familiarize you with different accents and speaking rhythms. (运用了that引导的表语从句)
(十)
(2025·河北·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的加拿大朋友Kevin要来广州参加一个国际青少年足球比赛。请你根据以下要点给他写一封邮件:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 提供建议。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Kevin,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Kevin,
I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to Guangzhou for the international youth football tournament!
A couple of tips for your stay: Firstly, do drink enough water as the temperature can be quite high. Secondly, be prepared for varied weather — it can be sunny one moment and rainy the next. As for food, don’t miss trying our local dim sum and Cantonese cuisine.
Please feel free to reach out if you need any help. I’m more than willing to assist and make your stay as pleasant as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给加拿大朋友Kevin写邮件,他要来广州参加一个国际青少年足球比赛,对此表示欢迎以及提供建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
首先:firstly→first of all
愉快的:pleasant→enjoyable
联系:reach out→contact
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As for food, don’t miss trying our local dim sum and Cantonese cuisine.
拓展句:As for food, don’t miss trying our local dim sum and Cantonese cuisine, which will leave a deep impression on you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to Guangzhou for the international youth football tournament!(运用了that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Please feel free to reach out if you need any help.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
(十一)
(2025·山东·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你校新成立了国画社团(Traditional Chinese Painting Club)和民乐社团(Folk Music Club),你的新西兰同学Richard对这两个社团很感兴趣,但不知如何选择,写信向你求助,请你给他回信,内容如下:
1.给出建议并说明理由;
2.告知申请方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Richard,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Richard,
Thrilled to learn about your interest in the newly-established clubs in our school, I strongly recommend the Traditional Chinese Painting Club to you.
The club was founded by a group of Chinese painting lovers, with several highly experienced art teachers providing guidance. It offers various activities, ranging from the visit to Chinese painting galleries to the lectures on how to sharpen your painting skills. It’s an opportunity to dive into the amazing world of ink painting and have a deeper understanding of Chinese culture.
If you want to apply, please fill in the application form on the club’s official website before November 25th. I believe you’ll find it a rewarding and fulfilling experience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校新成立了国画社团(Traditional Chinese Painting Club)和民乐社团(Folk Music Club),要求考生给对这两个社团很感兴趣但不知如何选择的新西兰同学Richard回信,给出建议并说明理由和申请方式。
【详解】 1. 词汇积累
兴奋的:thrilled → exhilarated
各种各样的:various → a variety of/all kinds of
对……有更深入的理解:have a deeper understanding of → gain a better insight into
令人满足的:fulfilling → satisfying
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It offers various activities, ranging from the visit to Chinese painting galleries to the lectures on how to sharpen your painting skills.
拓展句:It offers various activities, which range from the visit to Chinese painting galleries to the lectures on how to sharpen your painting skills.
【点睛】【高分句型1】If you want to apply, please fill in the application form on the club’s official website before November 25th.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe you’ll find it a rewarding and fulfilling experience.(运用了省略了连接词that的宾语从句)
(十二)
(2025·陕西咸阳·二模)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter因学业压力将放弃足球训练,请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示理解;2.给出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re considering quitting football training due to academic pressure.
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Best wishes
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re considering quitting football training due to academic pressure.
I know how difficult it can be to manage both studies and a passion like football. The mountains of assignments and looming exams are indeed overwhelming, making you feel like you have no choice but to let go of football.
But think about it. Football isn’t just a sport; it’s a great stress reliever. After focusing on textbooks for hours, a short training session can help you relax and recharge. My suggestion is to draw up a well-organized schedule. Set fixed time for study, training, and rest. By doing this, you can keep up with your studies while still enjoying football. I sincerely hope you won’t give it up.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生就你的英国笔友Peter因学业压力将放弃足球训练这事给他写一封邮件。内容包括:表示理解和给出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
困难的:difficult→tough
放弃: let go of →give up
专注于:focus on→concentrate on
帮助:help→assist
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The mountains of assignments and looming exams are indeed overwhelming, making you feel like you have no choice but to let go of football.
拓展句:The mountains of assignments and looming exams are indeed overwhelming, which will make you feel like you have no choice but to let go of football.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I know how difficult it can be to manage both studies and a passion like football. (运用了how引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】By doing this, you can keep up with your studies while still enjoying football.(运用了状语从句的省略)
(十三)
(2025·河北邯郸·三模)假定你是李华,你的交换生朋友Bob想要加入学校的书法(calligraphy)社团,他给你发邮件询问相关信息。作为该社团的负责人,请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 该社团的活动介绍;
2. 加入该社团后的建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Bob,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文:
Dear Bob,
I’m glad that you want to join our school’s calligraphy club! Let me share something relevant with you.
Our calligraphy club is a vibrant community of students who share a passion for the art of beautiful writing. We regularly organize workshops where members can practice different calligraphy styles and learn new writing techniques. In addition, we participate in various school events to showcase our artistic creativity.
Here’s some advice for you when you are new to the club. Firstly, attend our introductory meeting to meet the current members and get a feel for our activities. Besides, prepare some basic calligraphy tools. Last but not least, be patient and practice in order to integrate into the creative process. I’m looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给交换生朋友Bob回一封邮件,给他介绍学校的书法社团的活动,给他提一些加入该社团后的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
此外:in addition→what’s more
参加:participate in→take part in
另外:besides→moreover
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In addition, we participate in various school events to showcase our artistic creativity.
拓展句:In addition, we participate in various school events where we can showcase our artistic creativity.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Our calligraphy club is a vibrant community of students who share a passion for the art of beautiful writing. (运用了关系代词who引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] We regularly organize workshops where members can practice different calligraphy styles and learn new writing techniques. (运用了关系副词where引导的限制性定语从句)
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