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英语 1 2 第二部分 高频话题读写练 ★范畴三 人与自然 话题11 自然生态 3 写作指导 | 地点介绍 话题概述 陕西书面表达未考查过地点介绍，但2024《例析与指导》示例一是关 于向将来中国旅游的笔友推荐一处地方参观。此话题在全国中考中常考角 度为：介绍某一个地方。 此类作文写作要点主要包括：当地特色（local features）、美食 （food）、名胜古迹（places of interest）、气候（climate）、地理位置 （location）、面积（area）、人口（population）、历史渊源（history）等。 4 “地点介绍”写作佳句及范文积累见《晨读册》P36 写作剖析 （2024《例析与指导》试卷示例一）假如你是吴毅磊，下面是你的笔 友Tom发来的邮件。请给他回复邮件，回答他所关心的问题。 Hi Wu Yilei, I have been planning my trip to China recently. Can you introduce a place to me? Is it a good idea to travel around the place by car? What gifts can I get for my friends and family? Look forward to your reply. Tom 5 参考词汇： choice, convenient, delicious, places of interest, … 要求： 1.选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。） 6 Hi Tom, I'm very glad to know you will visit China.______________________ Yours, Wu Yilei 7 Step 1 审好题，定方向 1.定主题：介绍__________； 2.定文体：根据给出的部分及题干可知，文章是一封邮件，属于________； 3.定时态：根据邮件内容可知是介绍某个地方及提建议，应用 ____________； 4.定人称：根据题干可知是给对方介绍，主体人称用__________。 5.定要点：①____________；②____________；③__________。 某个地方 应用文 一般现在时 第一人称 推荐的地方 推荐的理由 所给建议 8 Step 2 搭框架，写句子 推荐一个旅游的地方 开头：开门见山， 点明主题 要点：简单的问候并讲明推荐的地方是哪里 I'm very glad to know you will visit China. （问候已给出，需讲明推荐的地方） 9 推荐一个旅游的地方 开头：开门见山， 点明主题 参考词汇：①I think…is a good place to visit. ② You can go to… ③…is a good/pretty choice. 造句：①______________________________________ ____________ ②____________________________________ I think Xi'an will be a good choice for you to visit. I think Xi'an is a good place to visit. 10 推荐一个旅游的地方 中间:推荐的理由 及建议 要点：推荐的理由 理由1：有悠久的历史 参考词汇：ancient; long history; old 参考句型：①It has… ②As one of the oldest cities, … 造句：①______________________________________ _____________________ ②__________________________________________ As one of the oldest cities in China, Xi'an has a long history. Xi'an is an ancient city with a long history. 11 推荐一个旅游的地方 中间:推荐的理由 及建议 理由2：美食和传统文化 参考词汇：snack; delicious food; excellent; tradition 参考句型：You can enjoy/eat… 造句： _______________________________________ ________________________ You can enjoy its delicious food and excellent traditional culture. 12 推荐一个旅游的地方 中间:推荐的理由 及建议 理由3：交通便利 参考词汇：subway; underground; taxi; convenient 参考句型：①It is convenient to… ②It is easier for sb. to do sth. 造句：① _____________________________________ __________________________ ②____________________________________________ ______________ It will be easier for you to go around by subway or by taxi. It is convenient to get anywhere by underground or by taxi. 13 推荐一个旅游的地方 中间:推荐的理由 及建议 要点：选礼物的建议 参考词汇：choose; paper cutting; book; food 参考句型：①You can choose…as a gift. ②…is a good gift for friends or family. 中间:推荐的理由 及建议 造句：① ______________________________________________ ____ ② ______________________________________________ You can choose food, books, paper cutting as gifts. Paper cutting will be a good gift for your friends. 14 推荐一个旅游的地方 结尾：总结全文， 表达希望 要点:总结全文，表达希望 I'm sure you can have a great time in Xi'an! （已给出） 参考词汇：great; wonderful; enjoyable 参考句型：①I'm sure… ②I hope/believe you will… 造句：________________________________________ __________________ I believe you will have a wonderful/enjoyable time/trip in Xi'an. 15 Step 3 构篇章，润词句 【组句成篇】 Hi Tom, I'm very glad to know you will visit China. I think Xi'an will be a good choice for you to visit. 【润色美文】 （针对文中画波 浪线的句子） 16 As one of the oldest cities in China, Xi'an has a long history. You can enjoy its delicious food and traditional culture. You can travel around Xi'an. It will be easier to get around by subway or by taxi. As for gifts, you can choose food, books, paper cutting and so on. I'm sure you can have a great time in Xi'an! Yours, Wu Yilei 用if条件状语从 句升级画波浪线 的句子 ______________ ______________ ______________ ______________ ______________ ______________ _______ If you travel around Xi'an, it will be easier to get around by subway or by taxi. 17 温馨提示：润色完成后，请在通篇检查一遍后在练习本上誊写下最终范文。 18 实战演练 假如你是Helen， Sophia是你的外国好友，她准备假期来中国旅游， 请你给她写一封邮件，推荐她来北京旅游并给出理由，同时给她提一点游 览这个城市的建议。 提示： 1.Why do you advise Sophia to go to Beijing?2.Your suggestions. 参考词汇：capital, long history, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum, Tian'anmen Square, delicious, book（v.）预订, friendly 19 要求： 1.邮件必须包括所有提示内容，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。） 20 Dear Sophia, Glad to get your e-mail. You told me that you wanted to visit China. Welcome to China. Now I'll give you some suggestions. _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Beijing is the capital of China. It's an old city with a long history. There are many famous places of interest in Beijing. So you can visit the famous places of interest there. You can visit the old houses, the Beijing Hutongs, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum, the Great Wall, Tian'anmen Square and so on. The people there are very friendly. And the food there is very delicious. So don't wait. 21 _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ I think you'll have a good time. Yours, Helen Please go to visit Beijing. Oh, don't forget to book the hotel on the Internet, for there are too many visitors in Beijing. $$