Unit4作文学案-2024-2025学年冀教版英语七年级下册

此刻打盹，你将做梦；而此刻学习，你将圆梦。 天才就是无止境刻苦勤奋的能力 路虽远行则将至，事虽难做则必成！ Unit 4 My friends 作文学案 一、写作思路 本单元的写作项目是“朋友”，属于“人与社会”主题范畴中的“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群。常见的写作任务是介绍自己的朋友，或讲述与朋友相处的生活点滴。通过回忆那些美好的时光，更加珍惜这份友谊。 二、写作步骤 第一步：开篇点题，引出“我的朋友”； 第二步：具体介绍朋友以及讲述与朋友相处的故事，常用一般现在时、一般过去时，且主语使用第一、三人称； 第三步：表达感受。 三、黄金语料 开头段 1. Everyone has their own good friends... 2. My best friend is... /... is my best friend. 3. Let me tell you about my friend... 4. I’d like to introduce you to my best friend... 中间段 1. He/ She is... years old. 2. He/ She likes... best. 3. His/ Her favourite... is... 4. We are both quiet/hard-working/ busy... 5. She/ He is really smart and helps me with my homework. 6. She helped me... 7. We study together, and it makes learning so much easier. 8. She is always there for me, no matter... 9. We both love to play games. 10. We often challenge each other to see who’s the best player. 结尾段 1. He’s not just a friend. He’s like a brother to me. 2. All in all, she’s such a great friend, and I don’t know what I can do without her. 3. In a word, she’s always there when I need someone to talk to. 4. He makes school more enjoyable. 5. I’m really lucky to have him around. 6. I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. 名言警句 1. Wealth is not friends, but friends are wealth. 财富不是朋友，而朋友是财富。 2. A friendship between gentlemen is as pure as crystal. 君子之交淡如水。 【典例1】 每个人都有自己的好朋友，友谊让我们的成长更加丰富多彩，那么你最好的朋友是谁呢？假设你是李华，请以“My Best Friend” 为题，向大家介绍一下你最好的朋友，文章需包含以下要点： 1. 你最好的朋友是谁(英文名)? 他(她)的性格特征、爱好是什么? 2. 他(她)为什么是你最好的朋友？3. 你如何看待你们之间的友谊？ 注意： 1. 词数60 左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥（文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名）； 3. 条理清楚，语句通顺，语意连贯，书写规范。 写作提纲 介绍 朋友 引出话题 My best friend is Jenny. 具体介绍朋友 并讲述与朋友 相处的故事 She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful.  She likes reading... One day...  表达感受 I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. 【范文1】 My Best Friend Everyone has their own good friends and friendship makes our growth more colorful. My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She likes reading. She not only does well in all the subjects, but also gets on well with others at school. I am weak in maths. One day, I failed in the maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths. With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her. We became good friends. I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever. 1. 亮点词块 ① friendly and helpful 友好且乐于助人的 ② do well in 擅长 ③ get on well with... 和……相处得很好 ④ be weak in 不擅长 ⑤ from then on 从那时起 2. 高分句子 ① I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. （so that 引导结果状语从句）我如此伤心以至于我忍不住哭泣。 ② She not only does well in all the subjects, but also gets on well with others at school. (not only... but also... 不仅……而且……) 她不仅所有科目都做得很好，而且在学校和他人相处得也很好。 【译文1】 我最好的朋友 每个人都有自己的好朋友，友谊使我们的成长更加丰富多彩。我最好的朋友是珍妮。她是一个安静的女孩。她总是很友好和乐于助人。她喜欢阅读。她在所有科目上都表现得很好，而且在学校里也和别人相处得很好。我在数学方面比较弱。 有一天，我在数学考试中失败了。我伤心得忍不住哭了。珍妮鼓励了我很多。从那以后，她帮助我学习数学。在她的帮助下，我在下次的数学考试中得了A。我真的很感激她。我们成了好朋友。 我认为友谊是我们生活中必不可少的一部分，我希望我们的友谊永远长存。 【典例2】 “海内存知己，天涯若比邻。”在这广阔的世界中，总有一个人，愿意跨越千山万水，只为与你共度每一个欢笑与泪水交织的瞬间，这个人便是你生命中不可或缺的挚友。你校英语学习社团正举办一场以“友谊之光”为主题的征文活动。请撰写一篇文章参赛，向大家介绍你的挚友，并分享一段你们之间感人至深的故事。 要求： 1. 词数：不少于60； 2. 不得出现本人的真实姓名和学校信息； 3. 表达准确，逻辑清晰，卷面整洁。 参考信息： 【范文2】 My best friend, Alex, is a tall and cheerful person with a contagious smile. He likes blue, so he always wears blue clothes. He has a habit of being late, but his kindness makes up for it. On a rainy day, I was stuck at school without an umbrella. Alex showed up, drenched, with an extra umbrella just for me. His selflessness and warmth turned a gloomy day into a cherished memory. Our friendship is a testament to the power of small acts of kindness. 【译文2】 我最好的朋友亚历克斯，个子高大，性格开朗，笑容感染力十足。他喜欢蓝色，所以总是穿蓝色的衣服。他有迟到的习惯，但他的善良弥补了这一点。在一个雨天，我被困在学校里没有伞。亚历克斯出现了，浑身湿透，还多带了一把伞给我。他的无私和温暖让一个阴沉的日子变成了珍贵的记忆。我们的友谊证明了小小的善举所具有的力量。 【典例3】 有一句著名的谚语“A friend in need is a friend indeed (患难见真情).” 请你以“My friend and I” 为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下你和你的朋友。 内容包括： ★ the similarities (相似点) or differences (不同点) between you and your friend ★ a story between you and your friend ★ your ideas about good friends 要求：1. 词数不少于60； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 【范文3】 My friend and I My friend is Lucy. We have both similarities and differences. We are both interested in reading books. However, I am more outgoing while she is a bit shy. Once, we went hiking together. On the way, I fell down and hurt my ankle. Lucy didn’t leave me alone. Instead, she helped me sit down and carefully examined my ankle. Then she supported me all the way back. I was really touched. In my opinion, good friends should be helpful. When friends are in trouble，we should help them at once. 【译文3】 我和我的朋友 我的朋友是露西，我们有相似之处也有不同之处。我们都喜欢读书，不过我比较外向，而她比较内向。 有一次，我们一起去远足。在途中，我摔倒了，脚踝受伤了。露西没有离开我，反而帮我坐下，仔细检查我的脚踝。然后她一直扶着我走回来。我真的很感动。 我认为好朋友应该互相帮助，当朋友遇到困难时，我们应该立即帮助他们。 第 2 页 共 2 页 第 1 页 共 2 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$