专题05应用文写作之感谢信-2025年高考英语写作提分秘籍（新高考通用）

专题05应用文写作之感谢信 第一部分 题型分析 第二部分 写作方法 第三部分 常用句式 第四部分 写作模板 第五部分 模拟再现 第六部分 举一反三 第七部分 题型通关 题型分析 感谢信考查重点 格式规范：需掌握英文书信的格式（如称呼、正文、结尾、署名）。 内容完整：需涵盖感谢原因、具体事例、情感表达及未来祝愿。 语言得体：用词真诚、礼貌，符合英文表达习惯。 常见情境 感谢朋友或家人的帮助（如备考支持、生日礼物等）。 感谢老师或导师的指导（如学习建议、项目指导等）。 感谢陌生人或组织的善意（如旅途帮助、捐赠等）。 写作方法 感谢信的写作，可以分以下三段进行： 第一段， 简述写信的目的，诚挚地表达谢意； 第二段， 表明感谢的原因，回顾对方所做的具体事情； 第三段， 再次向对方表示感谢并表达希望回报对方的愿望。 常用句式 感谢信必备词汇 assistance援助； generous慷慨的； warm热情的； sincere真诚的； appreciate感谢； express表达； accept接受； reception接待； kindness友善； timely及时的； selfless无私的； convey传达； hospitality热情好客的； thoughtful体贴周到 开头句 1.I am writing the letter to thank you for … 我写这封信是要感谢你......。 2. On behalf of …, I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for your selfless help. 我想代表……在这封信里，对你无私的帮助表达我诚挚的谢意。 3.with the deepest gratitude, I'm writing to you to express my thanks for your kindness when I was. 怀着最深的感激，我写信给您，感谢您在我在……时对我的关心。 4. Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to… 非常感谢你为帮助我们……所做的一切。 5. Hearing that you will return to your country soon, I feel a bit upset. But meanwhile, I want to send my sincere gratitude for your kind help with my English learning. 听说你很快就要回国了，我感到有些伤心。但同时，我想对你在我英语学习上给予的善意帮助表示衷心的感谢。 6.I would like to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance. 我想对你给予我们的及时帮助和支持表示衷心的感谢。 中间句 1.Had it not been for your (help/guidance/ assistance), I wouldn’t have (won the prize) =But for/Without your help, I wouldn't have done… 要不是你的帮助的话，我就不会赢得这个奖项了。 2.I still remember what you have devoted to improving my oral English and English writing. 我仍然记得为了帮助我提高我的英语口语和写作你所付出的帮助。 3.Without your instruction, I couldn't have won first place in the competition. 没有你的指导，我不可能在比赛中获得第一名。 4.It was nice/kind/thoughtful of you to help me with... 你在......帮助我真的太善良/周到了。 5.Thank you very much for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during my visit… 6.You really added greatly to my convenience and pleasure of the whole trip. 你真的给我的整个旅程带来了极大的方便与快乐。 7.Not only do I miss the time when you…with me, but also I am grateful for the help you gave me. 我不仅怀念你与我……的时光，而且很感激你对我的帮助。 8.Additionally, without your help, I wouldn't have been a top student in English and would not have won the English speech contest. 此外，没有你的帮助，我不会成为一名英语拔尖的学生也不会赢得英语演讲比赛。 结尾句 1.Again, I would like to express my thanks to you./ Thanks again for your kind help. 再次感谢你的热心帮助。 2.My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description. 我真正的感激之情已经无法形容了。 3.I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help. 我非常感激你，我真的不知道该如何足够感谢你的帮助 4.Words fail to express my thankfulness to you. 我无法用语言来表达我对你的谢意。 5.Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories; we will remember them forever. 没有什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆，我们会永远牢记在心。 6.Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget. 请接受我真诚的帮助，我永远不会忘记。 7.I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by... 如果我有机会通过……报答你的好意，我会非常高兴。 8.My gratitude is beyond description./I appreciate it more than I can say./ I can never thank you enough. 感激之情，无以言表。 写作模板 Dear ____ ,      How is everything going?（用于比较熟悉的人之间简单打招呼）/ I'm Li Hua, a student from ××× Middle School.（用于正式的感谢信中自我介绍）  I am writing to extend/express/show my sincere/heartfelt gratitude for ______(开头说明感谢对方的原因).       But for your assistance in ______(对方给予的具体帮助), I would not have ______(运用虚拟语气句式表达没有对方帮助时会产生的后果).     You have given me so much help that I will never forget. Last month, ______(回忆感谢对方做出的细节1-2点).      Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. （结尾再次表达感谢之意）/ Wish you have a healthy body and lead a happy life! （也可以表达自己对另一方的祝福）/ If there is a chance, welcome to China, I am looking forward to your coming. / I am looking forward to meeting you one day to express my heartfelt thanks for your generous help face to face.（还可以邀请对方来中国参观）                                                     Yours sincerely,                                                             Li Ming 模拟再现 （一） 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris得知你在学校迷你马拉松比赛（mini-marathon）中获奖，来信向你表示祝贺并询问相关情况。请你给Chris回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示感谢； 2. 介绍赛前准备。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （二） 假如你是国际交流学生Jim，学校下周将举办成人仪式典礼，校长要求每个同学写一封信给自己的父母，信的内容大致如下： 1. 成长与收获； 2. 表达感恩； 3. 继续努力。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 举一反三 （一） （24-25高三上·山东烟台·期末）假定你是李华，上个月在英国学习期间借宿在外教Mrs Smith家，你归国后打算给她邮寄一份具有中国特色的礼物。请你用英语给她写一封邮件，内容包括： （1）表达感谢； （2）挑选的礼物； （3）提醒对方查收。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mrs Smith, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （二） （2024·山东菏泽·一模）假定你是李华，你在你校上周举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。此前，你的交换生好友Peter给予了你很多帮助。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 分享获奖的喜悦； 2. 感谢他的帮助； 3. 邀请他到你家做客以表谢意。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （三） （23-24高三上·湖南长沙·阶段练习）假定你是李华，刚从新西兰的University of Canterbury游学归来。请你代表中国交换生给该校校长Dr John Wood写封信。内容包括： 1. 感谢接待； 2. 谈谈收获； 3. 邀请来访。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 题型通关 （一） （2024·河南·模拟预测）假定你是李华，明天就是一年一度的教师节了，请你给你的英语老师写一封感恩信。内容包括： 1. 写信目的； 2. 难忘的一件事； 3. 你的祝福。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） （2024·辽宁辽阳·模拟预测）假定你是校电台访谈节目“Live in China”的主持人李华，上周五你校外教Mr. Smith接受了你的访谈，节目播出后反响很好。请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1．感谢他精彩的发言和真诚的建议; 2．希望有机会再次来节目做客。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右; 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr. Smith, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （三） （2024·辽宁沈阳·模拟预测）假定你是李华，从小练习国画，你的美国朋友Peter邀请你参加主题为Amazing Nature的青少年画展。请给他回复一封邮件，表示同意参加，内容包括： 1. 感谢邀请； 2. 作品简介。 注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 Dear Peter, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua （四） （2024·山东·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris得知你在学校迷你马拉松比赛（mini-marathon）中获奖，来信向你表示祝贺并询问相关情况。请你给Chris回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示感谢； 2. 介绍赛前准备。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （五） （2024·山东菏泽·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国好友John给你寄来了春节礼物。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 告知已收到礼物； 2. 收到礼物的感受； 3. 表示感谢。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） （2024·江西南昌·三模）假如你是国际交流学生Jim，学校下周将举办成人仪式典礼，校长要求每个同学写一封信给自己的父母，信的内容大致如下： 1. 成长与收获； 2. 表达感恩； 3. 继续努力。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） （2024·河北承德·二模）假定你是李华，前一段时间你的身体状况一直不好。你的网友Oliver时常关心着你。请你用英语写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.目前状况及感谢； 2.介绍健身计划。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Oliver, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua （八） （2024·山东菏泽·一模）假定你是李华，你在你校上周举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。此前，你的交换生好友Peter给予了你很多帮助。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 分享获奖的喜悦； 2. 感谢他的帮助； 3. 邀请他到你家做客以表谢意。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （九） （2023·湖南·模拟预测）假定你是学生会主席李华，学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动Work Creates a Better Life得到了外教Patrick的大力支持。活动已经圆满结束，请你给他写一封感谢信。内容包括： 1．表示感谢； 2．外教的帮助； 3．活动的反响。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （十） （2024·云南昆明·一模）假定你是李华，你在学校举办的“Adversity and Courage”英语演讲比赛中获奖，请给指导外教 Miss Morton 写一封邮件表示感谢。内容包括： 1. 感谢指导； 2. 个人感悟。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Miss Morton, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题05应用文写作之感谢信 第一部分 题型分析 第二部分 写作方法 第三部分 常用句式 第四部分 写作模板 第五部分 模拟再现 第六部分 举一反三 第七部分 题型通关 题型分析 感谢信考查重点 格式规范：需掌握英文书信的格式（如称呼、正文、结尾、署名）。 内容完整：需涵盖感谢原因、具体事例、情感表达及未来祝愿。 语言得体：用词真诚、礼貌，符合英文表达习惯。 常见情境 感谢朋友或家人的帮助（如备考支持、生日礼物等）。 感谢老师或导师的指导（如学习建议、项目指导等）。 感谢陌生人或组织的善意（如旅途帮助、捐赠等）。 写作方法 感谢信的写作，可以分以下三段进行： 第一段， 简述写信的目的，诚挚地表达谢意； 第二段， 表明感谢的原因，回顾对方所做的具体事情； 第三段， 再次向对方表示感谢并表达希望回报对方的愿望。 常用句式 感谢信必备词汇 assistance援助； generous慷慨的； warm热情的； sincere真诚的； appreciate感谢； express表达； accept接受； reception接待； kindness友善； timely及时的； selfless无私的； convey传达； hospitality热情好客的； thoughtful体贴周到 开头句 1.I am writing the letter to thank you for … 我写这封信是要感谢你......。 2. On behalf of …, I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for your selfless help. 我想代表……在这封信里，对你无私的帮助表达我诚挚的谢意。 3.with the deepest gratitude, I'm writing to you to express my thanks for your kindness when I was. 怀着最深的感激，我写信给您，感谢您在我在……时对我的关心。 4. Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to… 非常感谢你为帮助我们……所做的一切。 5. Hearing that you will return to your country soon, I feel a bit upset. But meanwhile, I want to send my sincere gratitude for your kind help with my English learning. 听说你很快就要回国了，我感到有些伤心。但同时，我想对你在我英语学习上给予的善意帮助表示衷心的感谢。 6.I would like to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance. 我想对你给予我们的及时帮助和支持表示衷心的感谢。 中间句 1.Had it not been for your (help/guidance/ assistance), I wouldn’t have (won the prize) =But for/Without your help, I wouldn't have done… 要不是你的帮助的话，我就不会赢得这个奖项了。 2.I still remember what you have devoted to improving my oral English and English writing. 我仍然记得为了帮助我提高我的英语口语和写作你所付出的帮助。 3.Without your instruction, I couldn't have won first place in the competition. 没有你的指导，我不可能在比赛中获得第一名。 4.It was nice/kind/thoughtful of you to help me with... 你在......帮助我真的太善良/周到了。 5.Thank you very much for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during my visit… 6.You really added greatly to my convenience and pleasure of the whole trip. 你真的给我的整个旅程带来了极大的方便与快乐。 7.Not only do I miss the time when you…with me, but also I am grateful for the help you gave me. 我不仅怀念你与我……的时光，而且很感激你对我的帮助。 8.Additionally, without your help, I wouldn't have been a top student in English and would not have won the English speech contest. 此外，没有你的帮助，我不会成为一名英语拔尖的学生也不会赢得英语演讲比赛。 结尾句 1.Again, I would like to express my thanks to you./ Thanks again for your kind help. 再次感谢你的热心帮助。 2.My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description. 我真正的感激之情已经无法形容了。 3.I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help. 我非常感激你，我真的不知道该如何足够感谢你的帮助 4.Words fail to express my thankfulness to you. 我无法用语言来表达我对你的谢意。 5.Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories; we will remember them forever. 没有什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆，我们会永远牢记在心。 6.Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget. 请接受我真诚的帮助，我永远不会忘记。 7.I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by... 如果我有机会通过……报答你的好意，我会非常高兴。 8.My gratitude is beyond description./I appreciate it more than I can say./ I can never thank you enough. 感激之情，无以言表。 写作模板 Dear ____ ,      How is everything going?（用于比较熟悉的人之间简单打招呼）/ I'm Li Hua, a student from ××× Middle School.（用于正式的感谢信中自我介绍）  I am writing to extend/express/show my sincere/heartfelt gratitude for ______(开头说明感谢对方的原因).       But for your assistance in ______(对方给予的具体帮助), I would not have ______(运用虚拟语气句式表达没有对方帮助时会产生的后果).     You have given me so much help that I will never forget. Last month, ______(回忆感谢对方做出的细节1-2点).      Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. （结尾再次表达感谢之意）/ Wish you have a healthy body and lead a happy life! （也可以表达自己对另一方的祝福）/ If there is a chance, welcome to China, I am looking forward to your coming. / I am looking forward to meeting you one day to express my heartfelt thanks for your generous help face to face.（还可以邀请对方来中国参观）                                                     Yours sincerely,                                                             Li Ming 模拟再现 （一） 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris得知你在学校迷你马拉松比赛（mini-marathon）中获奖，来信向你表示祝贺并询问相关情况。请你给Chris回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示感谢； 2. 介绍赛前准备。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Chris, Thanks for your letter and for your question as well. Now I am delighted to share with you more details about the mini-marathon. Before the race, it is important to practice running and do some physical training every day. Be careful to avoid injury. Besides, you should stay confident and keep a good mood. As you know, the mini-marathon in our city is scheduled to take place every year, with hundreds of people participating in it. I think you can enter the one next year. Looking forward to your participation. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生向英国朋友Chris写信感谢他向你在学校迷你马拉松中获奖表达的祝贺，并介绍相关情况。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 高兴：delighted→pleased 重要的：important→significant 避免：avoid→prevent 自信：confident→assertive 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Before the race, it is important to practice running and do some physical training every day. 拓展句：Before the race, it is important that we should practice running and do some physical training every day. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As you know, the mini-marathon in our city is scheduled to take place every year, with hundreds of people participating in it. (运用了As引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Before the race, it is important to practice running and do some physical training every day. (运用了it作形式主语) （二） 假如你是国际交流学生Jim，学校下周将举办成人仪式典礼，校长要求每个同学写一封信给自己的父母，信的内容大致如下： 1. 成长与收获； 2. 表达感恩； 3. 继续努力。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear dad and mom, How time flies! Today I will become a real adult and I know what you have done for me since I was born. So I’m writing this letter to convey my deepest gratitude and love to you. During these years, I gradually gained a lot of confidence from your companion and encouragement, and I still remember when I failed in maths exams and even tended to give it up, you just patted me on the shoulder and inspired me to keep on. What’s more, you praised me for my earnest effort and progress, which really gave me a sense of achievement. To be good parents is by no means an easy job as I imagined before, so I’m very grateful for your patience, guidance, responsibility and affection as well as all you have done for me. Dad and mom, I will spare no effort to pursue my dream and try my best to live up to your expectation. Love you forever! Yours loving boy, Jim 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。学校下周将举办成人仪式典礼，要求考生写一封信给自己的父母，信的内容大致如下：1. 成长与收获；2. 表达感恩；3. 继续努力。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 获得：gain→obtain 激励某人做某事：inspire sb. to do sth.→encourage sb. to do sth. 感激的：grateful→appreciative 此外：what’s more→in addition 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：So I’m writing this letter to convey my deepest gratitude and love to you. 拓展句：So I’m writing this letter so that I can convey my deepest gratitude and love to you. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Today I will become a real adult and I know what you have done for me since I was born.(运用了what引导宾语从句，since引导时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】What’s more, you praised me for my earnest effort and progress, which really gave me a sense of achievement. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 举一反三 （一） （24-25高三上·山东烟台·期末）假定你是李华，上个月在英国学习期间借宿在外教Mrs Smith家，你归国后打算给她邮寄一份具有中国特色的礼物。请你用英语给她写一封邮件，内容包括： （1）表达感谢； （2）挑选的礼物； （3）提醒对方查收。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mrs Smith, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mrs Smith, I’ve returned home, safe and sound. Never will I forget the wonderful time I spent in your house. I really appreciate your kind hospitality, which made me feel so comfortable during my stay there. Filled with gratitude, I’ve been thinking of sending you a favored gift to convey my feeling. Considering you’re a Chinese tea addict, I finally decided on a delicate porcelain tea set, each item beautifully crafted with traditional Chinese patterns. I hope it can bring you more enjoyment while having tea. I’ve chosen a reliable international shipping service, which promised the gift will reach your house in a month. Please check the package in time. Hoping you’ll like it. Looking forward to seeing you next time! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求给你在英国学习期间提供借宿的外教Mrs Smith写一封邮件，向对方表示感谢。 【详解】1.词汇积累 回到，返回：return → come back 选择：choose → select 精致的：delicate → exquisite 喜欢：like → be fond of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Filled with gratitude, I’ve been thinking of sending you a favored gift to convey my feeling. 拓展句：Because I am filled with gratitude, I’ve been thinking of sending you a favored gift to convey my feeling. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Never will I forget the wonderful time I spent in your house. (运用了部分倒装句) 【高分句型2】I really appreciate your kind hospitality, which made me feel so comfortable during my stay there. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) （二） （2024·山东菏泽·一模）假定你是李华，你在你校上周举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。此前，你的交换生好友Peter给予了你很多帮助。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 分享获奖的喜悦； 2. 感谢他的帮助； 3. 邀请他到你家做客以表谢意。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter, I am thrilled to share with you that I just won the first prize in our school’s English speech competition last week! This accomplishment is undoubtedly a result of your invaluable assistance. Your insights, suggestions, and encouragement were crucial in helping me prepare for the competition. I really appreciate your help. To express my heartfelt gratitude, I would like to invite you to my home for a visit. It would be a pleasure to have you as my guest and to thank you in person for all your help. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生好友Peter写封邮件，告诉他在上周举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖，同时感谢他的帮助。 【详解】1.词汇积累 激动的：thrilled→ excited 帮助：assistance→ help 至关重要的：crucial→ vital 感谢：appreciate→ thank 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Your insights, suggestions, and encouragement were crucial in helping me prepare for the competition. 拓展句：Your insights, suggestions, and encouragement were crucial, which helped me prepare for the competition. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I am thrilled to share with you that I just won the first prize in our school’s English speech competition last week!（运用了从属连词that引导的宾语从句。） 【高分句型2】To express my heartfelt gratitude, I would like to invite you to my home for a visit.（运用了非谓语动词中的动词不定式To express作目的状语。） （三） （23-24高三上·湖南长沙·阶段练习）假定你是李华，刚从新西兰的University of Canterbury游学归来。请你代表中国交换生给该校校长Dr John Wood写封信。内容包括： 1. 感谢接待； 2. 谈谈收获； 3. 邀请来访。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： Dear Dr John Wood, I’m writing on behalf of all the exchange students to express our gratitude for your hospitality and generosity during our stay in New Zealand. What impressed us deeply were the delicious local cuisine and the comfortable accommodation well-prepared for us. Also, the activities you arranged not only got every one of us involved in learning, but built a cultural bridge between us, for which we were really grateful. Thanks again for all your efforts and we sincerely hope you can come to China and visit us in the near future! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，刚从新西兰的University of Canterbury游学归来。请你代表中国交换生给该校校长Dr John Wood写封信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 代表：on behalf of→represent 表达：express→extend 美味的：delicious→tasty 感谢的：grateful→thankful 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：What impressed us deeply were the delicious local cuisine and the comfortable accommodation well-prepared for us. 拓展句：It was the delicious local cuisine and the comfortable accommodation well-prepared for us that impressed us deeply. 【点睛】[高分句型1] What impressed us deeply were the delicious local cuisine and the comfortable accommodation well prepared for us.(运用了what引导的主语从句) [高分句型2] Also, the activities you arranged not only got every one of us involved in learning, but built a cultural bridge between us, for which we were really grateful. (运用了介词+关系代词结构的非限制性定语从句) 题型通关 （一） （2024·河南·模拟预测）假定你是李华，明天就是一年一度的教师节了，请你给你的英语老师写一封感恩信。内容包括： 1. 写信目的； 2. 难忘的一件事； 3. 你的祝福。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Miss Gao, I would like to write a letter to express my sincere gratitude to you for tomorrow’s Teachers’ Day. I remember one Monday I was reading in class when my stomach hurt. Immediately you rushed to the drugstore next to the school to buy me some medicine. Being taken good care of, I felt so much warmth. You are a reliable teacher. I am very grateful to you because you teach me how to read as well as the truth of life. Happy Teachers’ Day and wish you success in work and good health. Your student, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给自己的英语老师写一封感恩信，介绍自己最难忘的一件事，并表达祝福。 【详解】1.词汇积累 感谢：gratitude→thankfulness 立刻：immediately→right away 买：buy→purchase 照顾：take care of→look after 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Immediately you rushed to the drugstore next to the school to buy me some medicine. 拓展句：Immediately you rushed to the drugstore which was next to the school to buy me some medicine. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Being taken good care of, I felt so much warmth. (运用了现在分词短语作状语) 【高分句型2】I am very grateful to you because you teach me how to read as well as the truth of life.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句) （二） （2024·辽宁辽阳·模拟预测）假定你是校电台访谈节目“Live in China”的主持人李华，上周五你校外教Mr. Smith接受了你的访谈，节目播出后反响很好。请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1．感谢他精彩的发言和真诚的建议; 2．希望有机会再次来节目做客。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右; 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr. Smith, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to extend my sincerest gratitude for your participation on our radio program, “Live in China”. Your insightful comments and valuable suggestions made for a truly memorable interview. The response from our listeners was overwhelmingly positive, and many have expressed their appreciation for your participation and the depth of your insight. We greatly appreciate your willingness to share your experiences and knowledge with our community. We would be delighted if you come back on the program in the future. Your insights and perspectives would be a valuable addition to our discussions. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为校电台访谈节目“Live in China”的主持人，上周五你校外教Mr. Smith接受了你的访谈，节目播出后反响很好这一情况，给外教Mr. Smith写一封感谢信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 见解：insights→ opinion 建议：suggestions→ advice 高兴的：delighted→ happy 宝贵的：valuable→ precious 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I am writing to extend my sincerest gratitude for your participation on our radio program, “Live in China”.. 拓展句：I am writing to extend my sincerest gratitude for your participation on our radio program, whose theme is “Live in China”.. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We greatly appreciate your willingness to share your experiences and knowledge with our community.（运用了非谓语动词中的动词不定式to do作后置定语修饰willingness。） 【高分句型2】We would be delighted if you come back on the program in the future.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句。） （三） （2024·辽宁沈阳·模拟预测）假定你是李华，从小练习国画，你的美国朋友Peter邀请你参加主题为Amazing Nature的青少年画展。请给他回复一封邮件，表示同意参加，内容包括： 1. 感谢邀请； 2. 作品简介。 注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 Dear Peter, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version 1 Dear Peter, Thank you very much for inviting me to the painting exhibition themed on Amazing Nature! I’d like to attend it and here briefly introduce my work. In line with the theme, I will create a traditional Chinese painting featuring my picturesque hometown. Trees and flowers will be highlighted with bright and vivid colors. The spectacular mountains and the crystal water are certain to impress you. When observing the painting, you will also be amazed at the achievements that have been made in sustainable development. Please let me know if you need any further details. Thanks again for this opportunity. Yours sincerely, Li Hua One possible version 2 Dear Peter, I am delighted to accept your invitation to the art exhibition themed “Amazing Nature”. Thank you for the fantastic opportunity and I am writing to give you a brief introduction of my work. The painting I created features the harmony of natural world. I am an enthusiast of both nature and art; therefore, my works are often full of elements of nature. You will be deeply impressed by the peaceful landscapes, elegant birds and delicate flowers in the paining, which is in line with the theme. Thanks again for the opportunity to demonstrate my passion for art and nature. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。美国朋友Peter邀请你参加主题为Amazing Nature的青少年画展。要求考生给他回复一封邮件，表示同意参加。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参加：attend→participate in 给人印象深刻：impress→make an impression on 对……感到惊奇：be amazed at→be astonished at 感激：thank→appreciate 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Thank you very much for inviting me to the painting exhibition themed on Amazing Nature! 拓展句：Thank you very much for inviting me to the painting exhibition which is themed on Amazing Nature! 【点睛】【高分句型1】When observing the painting, you will also be amazed at the achievements that have been made in sustainable development.（运用了状语从句的省略，that引导定语从句） 【高分句型2】Please let me know if you need any further details.（运用了条件状语从句） （四） （2024·山东·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris得知你在学校迷你马拉松比赛（mini-marathon）中获奖，来信向你表示祝贺并询问相关情况。请你给Chris回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示感谢； 2. 介绍赛前准备。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Chris, Thanks for your letter and for your question as well. Now I am delighted to share with you more details about the mini-marathon. Before the race, it is important to practice running and do some physical training every day. Be careful to avoid injury. Besides, you should stay confident and keep a good mood. As you know, the mini-marathon in our city is scheduled to take place every year, with hundreds of people participating in it. I think you can enter the one next year. Looking forward to your participation. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生向英国朋友Chris写信感谢他向你在学校迷你马拉松中获奖表达的祝贺，并介绍相关情况。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 高兴：delighted→pleased 重要的：important→significant 避免：avoid→prevent 自信：confident→assertive 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Before the race, it is important to practice running and do some physical training every day. 拓展句：Before the race, it is important that we should practice running and do some physical training every day. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As you know, the mini-marathon in our city is scheduled to take place every year, with hundreds of people participating in it. (运用了As引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Before the race, it is important to practice running and do some physical training every day. (运用了it作形式主语) （五） （2024·山东菏泽·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国好友John给你寄来了春节礼物。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 告知已收到礼物； 2. 收到礼物的感受； 3. 表示感谢。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear John, How’s everything going? I’m glad to tell you that I have received your gift for the Spring Festival. You can’t imagine how excited I was when I opened the package and saw the original English novel that I had dreamed of owing. I couldn’t believe my eyes even when I touched the fresh cover of the book. I was so eager to delve into the story that I stayed up the whole night reading some chapters, which was really engaging. I can’t love the gift enough and I’m deeply grateful for your kindness. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语给英国好友John写封邮件，感谢他寄来的春节礼物。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad→delighted 激动的：excited→ thrilled 有趣的：engaging→entertaining 感激的：grateful→ thankful 2.句式拓展 陈述句变倒装句 原句：I was so eager to delve into the story that I stayed up the whole night reading some chapters, which was really engaging. 拓展句：So eager was I to delve into the story that I stayed up the whole night reading some chapters, which was really engaging. 【点睛】【高分句型1】You can’t imagine how excited I was when I opened the package and saw the original English novel that I had dreamed of owing.（运用了how引导的宾语从句、when引导的时间状语从句以及that引导的限定性定语从句） 【高分句型2】I was so eager to delve into the story that I stayed up the whole night reading some chapters, which was really engaging.（运用了so…that…引导的结果状语从句以及which引导的非限定性定语从句） （六） （2024·江西南昌·三模）假如你是国际交流学生Jim，学校下周将举办成人仪式典礼，校长要求每个同学写一封信给自己的父母，信的内容大致如下： 1. 成长与收获； 2. 表达感恩； 3. 继续努力。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear dad and mom, How time flies! Today I will become a real adult and I know what you have done for me since I was born. So I’m writing this letter to convey my deepest gratitude and love to you. During these years, I gradually gained a lot of confidence from your companion and encouragement, and I still remember when I failed in maths exams and even tended to give it up, you just patted me on the shoulder and inspired me to keep on. What’s more, you praised me for my earnest effort and progress, which really gave me a sense of achievement. To be good parents is by no means an easy job as I imagined before, so I’m very grateful for your patience, guidance, responsibility and affection as well as all you have done for me. Dad and mom, I will spare no effort to pursue my dream and try my best to live up to your expectation. Love you forever! Yours loving boy, Jim 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。学校下周将举办成人仪式典礼，要求考生写一封信给自己的父母，信的内容大致如下：1. 成长与收获；2. 表达感恩；3. 继续努力。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 获得：gain→obtain 激励某人做某事：inspire sb. to do sth.→encourage sb. to do sth. 感激的：grateful→appreciative 此外：what’s more→in addition 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：So I’m writing this letter to convey my deepest gratitude and love to you. 拓展句：So I’m writing this letter so that I can convey my deepest gratitude and love to you. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Today I will become a real adult and I know what you have done for me since I was born.(运用了what引导宾语从句，since引导时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】What’s more, you praised me for my earnest effort and progress, which really gave me a sense of achievement. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) （七） （2024·河北承德·二模）假定你是李华，前一段时间你的身体状况一直不好。你的网友Oliver时常关心着你。请你用英语写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.目前状况及感谢； 2.介绍健身计划。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Oliver, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Oliver, This winter, the cold was very popular and I lacked exercise, so my physical condition has been poor. It is your concern and encouragement that have continuously strengthened my confidence. I feel warm to have friends like you. Spring has arrived. A year’s plan lies in spring. I am planning to develop a detailed fitness plan according to what you said. Firstly, participate in more outdoor activities and breathe fresh air. Secondly, handle the relationship between learning and health correctly, and emphasize the role of physical health in learning. In the future, I will continue to communicate with you about this situation. I also wish you better health. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于“前一段时间你的身体状况一直不好，你的网友Oliver时常关心着你”这一情况，用英语写一封回复邮件。 【详解】1.词汇积累 缺乏：lacked→ was short of 增强，提升：strengthened → enhanced 参加：participate in→ take part in 强调：emphasize→ stress 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：This winter, the cold was very popular and I lacked exercise, so my physical condition has been poor. 拓展句：This winter, the cold was very popular and I lacked exercise, which led to my physical condition poor. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It is your concern and encouragement that have continuously strengthened my confidence.（运用了It is…that…的强调句式。） 【高分句型2】I am planning to develop a detailed fitness plan according to what you said.（运用了连接代词what引导的宾语从句。） （八） （2024·山东菏泽·一模）假定你是李华，你在你校上周举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。此前，你的交换生好友Peter给予了你很多帮助。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 分享获奖的喜悦； 2. 感谢他的帮助； 3. 邀请他到你家做客以表谢意。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter, I am thrilled to share with you that I just won the first prize in our school’s English speech competition last week! This accomplishment is undoubtedly a result of your invaluable assistance. Your insights, suggestions, and encouragement were crucial in helping me prepare for the competition. I really appreciate your help. To express my heartfelt gratitude, I would like to invite you to my home for a visit. It would be a pleasure to have you as my guest and to thank you in person for all your help. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生好友Peter写封邮件，告诉他在上周举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖，同时感谢他的帮助。 【详解】1.词汇积累 激动的：thrilled→ excited 帮助：assistance→ help 至关重要的：crucial→ vital 感谢：appreciate→ thank 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Your insights, suggestions, and encouragement were crucial in helping me prepare for the competition. 拓展句：Your insights, suggestions, and encouragement were crucial, which helped me prepare for the competition. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I am thrilled to share with you that I just won the first prize in our school’s English speech competition last week!（运用了从属连词that引导的宾语从句。） 【高分句型2】To express my heartfelt gratitude, I would like to invite you to my home for a visit.（运用了非谓语动词中的动词不定式To express作目的状语。） （九） （2023·湖南·模拟预测）假定你是学生会主席李华，学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动Work Creates a Better Life得到了外教Patrick的大力支持。活动已经圆满结束，请你给他写一封感谢信。内容包括： 1．表示感谢； 2．外教的帮助； 3．活动的反响。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Patrick, I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the Work Creates a Better Life, which has turned out to be an amazing success. It is so nice of you to have offered us a variety of presentation skills and creative suggestions on our show. It was under your professional guidance that the participants showed their skills of cooking, gardening, etc. Their impressive performances definitely fueled their passion for daily life skills. Most importantly, this activity helped students receive wide admiration and gain their tremendous confidence. Many thanks for your time and support. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封感谢信，感谢外教Patrick对学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动的大力支持。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 感激：gratitude→appreciation 惊人的：amazing→astonishing 表达：express→convey 各种各样的：a variety of→various 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Their impressive performances definitely fueled their passion for daily life skills. 拓展句：Their performances which impressed people, definitely fueled their passion for daily life skills. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the Work Creates a Better Life, which has turned out to be an amazing success.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】It was under your professional guidance that the participants showed their skills of cooking, gardening, etc.(运用了it is...that强调句型) （十） （2024·云南昆明·一模）假定你是李华，你在学校举办的“Adversity and Courage”英语演讲比赛中获奖，请给指导外教 Miss Morton 写一封邮件表示感谢。内容包括： 1. 感谢指导； 2. 个人感悟。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Miss Morton, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 【答案】Dear Miss Morton , I am writing the letter to tell you that I got a first prize in the English Speech Contest “Adversity and Courage” held in my school last Friday. Thanks for your guide in my English .You gave me a lot of help. I was very happy when we stayed together studying. During the time when we stayed, you were kind to me. You were humorous. You taught me how to speak English fluently. I made great progress with your kind help, without which I couldn't have got the prize. Through this activity, I deeply realized that adversity and courage can make a person better. Yours, Li Hua 【分析】这是一篇应用文。假定考生是李华，你在学校举办的“Adversity and Courage”英语演讲比赛中获奖，请给指导外教 Miss Morton 写一封邮件表示感谢。 【详解】1.词汇积累 告诉：tell→inform 快乐的：happy→pleased 帮助：help→assistance 举行：hold→throw 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：Thanks for your guide in my English .You gave me a lot of help. 拓展句：Thanks for your guide in my English where you gave me a lot of help. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I was very happy when we stayed together studying.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】I made great progress with your kind help,without which I couldn't have got the prize.（运用了介词+关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$