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2025年中考【热点·重点·难点】专练(江苏专用)
专题19 书面表达(解析版)
江苏中考书面表达命题趋势
一、书信类为主(占比60%)
1.固定格式:开头和结尾已给出(如"Dear Kevin, ... Yours, Li Hua"),需严格遵循格式。
2.任务明确:要求回答具体问题(如制作礼物步骤、推荐自己当志愿者、给建议等)。
3.贴近生活:话题多为日常交流(如介绍节日、回复求助、社会实践计划)。
4.字数限制:90-100词左右,需精简语言,避免赘述。
5.跨文化交际:2024 年苏州卷可能涉及向外国友人介绍中国城市,需融合传统文化元素(如端午节习俗、名胜古迹)。
6.高频题型:建议信如“如何保护传统文化”“网络使用的利弊”;邀请函如“邀请外教参加校园活动”“社区环保活动设计”;感谢信如 “感谢老师的帮助”“感恩父母的付出”。
7.评分重点:内容完整性:覆盖题干所有要点(如 2023 年镇江卷需包含方案选择、理由、建议);语言得体性:使用礼貌用语(如 “I would appreciate it if...”),避免生硬表达;逻辑连贯性:通过 “First of all... Secondly... Finally...” 等连接词分层论述。
二、非书信类为辅(占比40%)
1.主题多样:涵盖文化传承(端午、苏轼)、环保倡议(美化苏州)、励志演讲(做更好的自己)、读后感等。
2.结构清晰:需分点论述(如"懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己"),逻辑性强。
3.开放性强:部分题目需自选角度(如"文化角vs菜园"),需结合自身经历或观点。
4.语言要求高:需使用高级词汇(如"patriotism")和复杂句型(如定语从句)。
5.思辨性增强:2024 年常州卷《那么旧,那样新》要求辩证分析传统与现代的关系,需结合具体案例(如古建筑保护与科技应用)。
6.跨学科融合:2023 年扬州卷《跨代组合》结合航天团队案例,考查团队合作与年龄差异的关系。
7.高频题型:议论文如“人工智能对生活的影响”“青少年心理健康问题”;记叙文如“成长中的一次挑战”“难忘的校园活动”;说明文如“垃圾分类指南”“科技产品介绍”。
8.评分重点:论点明确:议论文需在首段提出核心观点(如“环保需要全民参与”);细节描写:记叙文需通过动作、心理描写增强感染力(如“双手颤抖着按下发送键”);结构清晰:采用“总-分-总”结构,结尾升华主题(如“坚持让我收获了成长”)。
江苏中考书面表达满分策略
一、审题四步法
1.明确体裁:书信类需检查格式,非书信类需确定文体(议论文 / 记叙文 / 说明文)。
2.提取要点:用下划线标注题干关键词(如 “建议”“理由”“个人经历”)。
3.确定人称时态:书信类常用第一人称(I/We),议论文用一般现在时,记叙文用过去时。
4.字数要求:确保 80-100 词,避免超字数或字数不足。
二、构思三技巧
1.列大纲:书信类按 “开头-正文-结尾” 分三段;议论文按 “论点 - 论据 - 结论” 布局。
2.选素材:议论文需积累 3 个以上论据(如名人名言、数据、事例);记叙文需选取 2-3 个细节。
3.用模板:书信类开头用 “I am writing to...”,结尾用 “Looking forward to your reply.”;议论文开头用 “With the development of...”,结尾用 “In conclusion...”。
三、写作三原则
1.语言简洁:避免复杂句式,多用简单句(如 “There be 句型”“主谓宾结构”)。
2,亮点突出:每段使用一个高级词汇或句型(如 “not only... but also...”“定语从句”)。,3.卷面整洁:书写工整,避免连笔,保持段落分明(每段空一行)。
四、检查五要点
1.格式:书信类检查称呼、结尾是否正确。
2.语法:主谓一致、时态、介词搭配(如 “in the morning”“on Sunday”)。
3.拼写:重点检查高频易错词(如 “environment”“government”)。
4.标点:英文句号用 “.”,逗号后空格。
5.字数:用 “/” 标记每行字数,确保达标。
江苏中考书面表达15个满分句型
1.I am writing to you about the problem I am facing.
我写信是想告诉你我目前面临的问题。
2.I would like to recommend myself for the volunteer position.
我想推荐自己担任志愿者职位。
3.I believe that perseverance leads to success.
我相信毅力会带来成功。
4.The reason why I am writing is to share my experience.
我写信的原因是想分享我的经历。
5.In my opinion, teamwork is essential for success.
在我看来,团队合作对于成功至关重要。
6.I am glad to receive your letter and appreciate your advice.
我很高兴收到你的信并感谢你的建议。
7.I understand how you feel and can relate to your situation.
我理解你的感受,并能感同身受。
8.I used to dislike sports, but now I enjoy running.
我过去不喜欢运动,但现在我喜欢跑步。
9.If I am lucky enough to be chosen, I will do my best.
如果我有幸被选中,我会尽我最大的努力。
10.It is important to stay positive and focused.
保持积极和专注是很重要的。
11.We should take responsibility for our actions.
我们应该为自己的行为负责。
12.I believe that we can make a difference by volunteering.
我相信我们可以通过志愿服务来产生影响。
13.The more we practice, the better we will become at this skill.
我们练习得越多,这项技能就会变得越好。
14.I am proud to be a part of this community.
我很自豪能成为这个社区的一部分。
15. As long as we try our best, we will achieve our goals.
只要我们尽力,我们就会实现我们的目标。
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【限时练一:近年江苏中招真题·书面表达20篇】
【真题01】(2024·江苏连云港·中考真题)假如你是李华,你的交换生朋友Kevin很喜欢你亲手做的小礼物,他来信询问制作过程,请你给他回信,内容包括:
(1)你送的礼物是什么;
(2)你送此礼物的原因;
(3)制作的方法或过程。
注意:
(1)词数90左右,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself.
As the Dragon Boat Festival was coming, I decided to make a Xiang Bao for you. People in China, especially children wear it at the festival. We believe it can bring us good luck.
To make it, I prepared some string and a small bag that looks like a rice dumping. I also collected some leaves of a special plant called Ai Cao. Then, I put Ai Cao into the bag and tied it with the string.
Next time you come to China, I’ll show you how to make it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息。可以适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先介绍自己送的礼物是什么;
第二步,介绍自己为什么送这件礼物,阐明原因;
第三步,着重介绍制作这份礼物的方法或过程。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth.决定做某事
②remind sb. of sth.提醒某人某事
③so that以便
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①We believe it can bring us good luck.(省略that的宾语从句)
②Make sure you choose the proper color for each part so that your picture may look natural.(so that引导目的状语从句)
【真题02】(2024·江苏淮安·中考真题)假如你是李华,你所在的阳光社区将于下个月开放社区图书馆,现面向全社区招募志愿者。请根据以下要点,用英语写一封自荐信。
你的优势
热爱阅读,乐于助人,做事细心
工作设想
鼓励居民多读书,每周推荐一本好书,……
志愿工作的意义
……从对他人和对自己两方面进行阐述
参考词汇:志愿工作 voluntary work
注意:
1. 100词左右,已给出部分不计入总词数;
2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Sir/Madam.
My name is Li Hua. I’m writing to recommend myself to be the volunteer of the library in our community. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I will be thankful if I get the chance.
【答案】例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I’m writing to recommend myself to be the volunteer of the library in our community.
I have some advantages for this volunteer work. I love reading and I am always willing to help others. I am also careful and responsible in my work.
If I am lucky enough to be a volunteer, I will try my best to do the following things. I will organize reading activities to encourage residents to read more books. I will recommend a good book every week to inspire their interest in reading. I also plan to set up a reading corner where residents can share their reading experiences.
I believe that doing voluntary work is very meaningful. It can not only help others improve their reading skills but also enrich my own life.
I will be thankful if I get the chance.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封自荐信;
②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的优势;
第二步,介绍自己的工作设想;
第三步,介绍志愿工作的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①be willing to do sth.乐意做某事
②encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
③set up建立
[高分句型]
①If I am lucky enough to be a volunteer, I will try my best to do the following things. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②I also plan to set up a reading corner where residents can share their reading experiences. (where引导的定语从句)
【真题03】(2024·江苏常州·中考真题)假如你是李平,收到英国笔友 Peter的求助信,请你根据来信,按照要求写一封英文回信。
Dear Li Ping,
These days I’m going crazy! My teacher requires me to run for half an hour every morning. But I don’t like sports at all. I think it’s meaningless. What do you think of it? Could you share your sports experience and tell me what you have learned from it? Please give me some advice as well.
Yours,
Peter
注意:
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 词数100左右;文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter. I understand how you feel. I used to dislike sports too, but now I enjoy running. Running is very good for health. It not only keeps us healthy but also makes us more energetic.
When I started running, I found it difficult at first. But soon I started to feel stronger and happier. Moreover, running every morning helped me focus better during the day.
My advice is to start slowly and set small goals. Then try listening to music or thinking about your favourite things while running, which will make running more enjoyable. Give yourself a chance to try running, I’m sure you’ll love it.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据Peter的信谈谈自己对跑步的看法、跑步经历并给出建议;注意适当发挥,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,谈谈自己对运动/跑步的看法;
第二步,介绍自己的跑步经历;
第三步,给出关于跑步的一些建议;
第四步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth. 过去常常做某事
②not only...but also 不仅……而且……
③think about 思考
[高分句型]
①When I started running, I found it difficult at first.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②Then try listening to music or thinking about your favourite things while running, which will make running more enjoyable.(which引导的定语从句)
【真题04】(2024·江苏南通·中考真题)假如你是李华,将参加学校英语社团举行的主题为“A Friendly Smile”的交流分享活动,谈谈班级里与微笑有关的故事,请根据下面海报中的提示,写一篇交流稿。
A Friendly SmileTips for your sharing
·choose anything that happened in your class
·describe the story
·express your feelings
Please join us and share your story at 8:00 a. m. next Tuesday (June 25) at the Students’ Centre.
School English Club
注意:1. 词数 90左右,交流稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 交流稿中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua from Class 1. Grade 9. Today I like to share a story that happened in my class. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you often smile? Thank you!
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. Today I’d like to share a story that happened in my class.
One day, our teacher announced that there would be a math test the next day. Everyone was worried, except for Tom. He was always confident and had a smile on his face. When the test started, I found the questions very difficult and I was stuck. I looked around and saw Tom still smiling. His smile was like a ray of sunshine, making me feel less nervous. After the test, I asked him how he could be so calm. He said, “A smile can make everything better. When you smile, you feel more confident and you can think more clearly.” His words made me realize the power of a smile.
Since then, I have tried to smile more often. When I meet difficulties, I smile and tell myself to be brave. When I see my classmates, I smile to show my friendliness. A smile can really make a difference.
Do you often smile? Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:根据提示内容谈谈班级里与微笑有关的故事,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,谈谈班级里与微笑有关的故事;
第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①except for除了
②look around环顾四周
③make a difference有影响
[高分句型]
①One day, our teacher announced that there would be a math test the next day. (that引导的宾语从句)
②When the test started, I found the questions very difficult and I was stuck. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③His smile was like a ray of sunshine, making me feel less nervous. (现在分词作状语)
【真题05】(2024·江苏徐州·中考真题)假定你是徐州的一名九年级学生李华。你校英文报正组织题为“A famous person in the history of Xuzhou”的征文活动,你选择的人物是苏轼(1077—1079年间任徐州知州)。请结合以下要点写一篇英语短文,参加征文活动。
注意:
1. 征文需包括以上三个要点;
2. 词数90左右;
3. 征文中不得泄露个人信息。
提示词:苏堤 Su Causeway 黄楼 Huanglou Pavilion
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
A famous person in the history of Xuzhou
Su Shi, also known as Su Dongpo, was a famous poet, writer, and politician in ancient China. He is widely regarded as one of the greatest poets in Chinese history and his works have been admired for centuries. Su Shi’s contributions to Xuzhou, in particular, are significant and have left a lasting influence on the city.
He led people to finish the construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion, which helped to control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou. Su Shi also discovered coal in the area. Besides his achievements, Su Shi was a productive poet. Su Shi’s time in Xuzhou was a period of great creativity and productivity, and his works reflect his love for the city and its people. When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou, the people were very sad.
Su Shi’s legacy in Xuzhou lives on through his writings, the structures he helped build, and the memories of the people he touched. He is remembered as a hero and a cultural icon in Xuzhou, and his contributions to the city will never be forgotten.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般过去时为主;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意不要漏写你的感受,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单阐述苏轼的身份以及成就;
第二步,苏轼在任徐州知州之间的经历;
第三步,说说你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be regarded as被认为
②admire...for...因……羡慕
③contribute to对……做贡献
[高分句型]
①When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou, the people were very sad.(时间状语从句)
②He led people to finish the construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion, which helped to control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou.(定语从句)
【真题06】(2024·江苏镇江·中考真题)初中三年校园生活丰富多彩,有些活动一定令你难忘。近期,你校英文报举办“The School Activity I Will Never Forget”的主题征文活动。
要求:
1.参考下图,确定至少一次活动并详细介绍,可适当发挥;
2.文章不少于90词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
The School Activity I Will Never Forget
In the past three years, there have been many colorful activities in our school. I will never forget
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【答案】Possible version 1:
The School Activity I Will Never Forget
In the past three years, there have been many colorful activities in our school. I will never forget the club activity in Grade Eight.
I was a member of the English Drama Club. Every Tuesday, we joined together in the room and learned to act interesting plays. It was my favourite time at my school. Last year, our teacher encouraged us to perform in front of all the students. We felt nervous at first, but our teacher believed us. To make it successful, we spent several weekends practising. It was tiring but no one gave up. Finally, we performed excellently and all the teachers and students praised us. Every member was satisfied with it.
Thanks to the club activity, I not only achieved my acting dream but also made some true friends. I will never forget the experience.
Possible version 2:
The School Activity I Will Never Forget
In the past three years, there have been many colorful activities in our school. I will never forget the sports meeting that I took part in last term.
It was a sunny day. We gathered on the playground. All of us were happy and excited. I joined in the 400-metre race. At first, I was very nervous because I was worried about the result. However, when I heard the excited cheers from my classmates, I felt I was full of energy and completed the race successfully.
Another activity that impressed me most was the badminton competition in Grade 8. Before my best friend entered the final, we practised hard together every day. At last, she finished fourth. Both of us thought it was meaningful for friends to help each other.
Activities are over, but memories remain.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,选择一项校园活动;
第二步,具体阐述活动内容;
第三步,表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
②give up放弃
③be satisfied with对……满意
④thanks to多亏
[高分句型]
To make it successful, we spent several weekends practising.(动词不定式作目的状语)
【真题07】(2024·江苏宿迁·中考真题)唯有不断成长,才能遇见更好的自己。你校正在开展主题为“做更好的自己”的演讲比赛。假如你是李华,请以“To be a better self”为题写一篇演讲稿,从懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己三个方面谈一谈自己的理解。
To be a better self
懂感恩
敬爱父母;服务社区……
亲自然
保护环境;关爱动物……
爱自己
健康生活;培养兴趣……
注意事项:
1.内容必须包括表格中的要点,并适当发挥1-2点;
2.词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
To be a better self
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to be here to give a speech about “To be a better self”.
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【答案】
To be a better self
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to be here to give a speech about “To be a better self”. Being a better self, I think, means more than being excellent in study but being an all-round person.
In order to become a better version of ourselves, we should first be grateful. We should love our parents. We also use our spare time to serve the community. If we meet people in need of help, we should lend a hand in time. Second, we should get close to nature. We should protect the environment and care for animals. We also do volunteer work to promote the importance of animals and plants. Finally, we have to love ourselves. We should live a healthy life and develop our hobbies. We should learn ways to relax ourselves and keep a good mood. I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let’s make changes from now on.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括三个要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,引出话题“做更好的自己”;
第二步,从懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己三个方面具体阐述怎么做。
第三步,总结话语。
[亮点词汇]
①get close to亲近
②keep a good mood保持好心情
[高分句型]
①If we meet people in need of help, we should lend a hand in time. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let’s make changes from now on. (宾语从句)
【真题08】(2024·江苏无锡·中考真题)传统节日是中华文化的重要组成部分。学校正开展“中华文化周”活动,今年的主题是“交朋友,传文化”。假设你是李华,请你给国外的笔友Tom发一封英文邮件,向他介绍一个中国传统节日(时间、庆祝方式等)。注意事项:
1. 邮件内容须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数不少于90个,邮件开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称;
4. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Dear Tom,
Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture.
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Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country?
Yours truly
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture. I’m writing to tell you something about the Spring Festival.
Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. Before the spring festival, people usually have a thorough cleaning and put up couplets on their doors. No matter how faraway people are, they’ll try to return to their home. On the New Year’s Eve, people have a big dinner and watch the Spring Festival Gala. On the first day of the New Year, people set off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year. People usually visit their relatives each other. I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money.
Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country?
Yours truly
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:本文主要介绍一个中国传统节日,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出“最喜欢的节日是春节”的话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、庆祝方式”等方面进行介绍;
第三步,书写结语,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①put up couplets贴春联
②set off the fireworks燃放烟花
[高分句型]
①Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. (and连接的并列句)
②I like the Spring Festival best, because I can get lucky money. (because引导的原因状语从句)
【真题09】(2024·江苏苏州·中考真题)你校English Reading Club正在组织一次英文小说读书分享会,本周阅读内容为Auggie’s Story(阅读D篇)。请从以下两个标题中任选一个,写一篇英文读后感。
选择一:以Sometimes people surprise us为题,内容包括:
1.你对这句话的理解;
2.结合实际生活举例说明;
3.你得到的启发。
选择二:以Trouble is a friend为题,内容包括:
1.你对这句话的理解;
2.结合实际生活举例说明;
3.你得到的启发。
注意:
1.词数:100左右;
2.请先填写你所选的标题,再写文章;
3.照抄阅读语篇不得分;
4.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Title: ____________
After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Title: Trouble is a friend
After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. And I think trouble is a friend.
The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.
In my English study last year, my grammar was very bad. That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score. But thanks to the help of my deskmate, she helped me make a grammar study schedule and helped me with grammar every week. And I spent an hour studying grammar every day. In the end, my grammar improved greatly.
In my opinion, trouble is bad, but it sometimes makes us better. It reminds us not to give up when facing difficulties and to face them bravely.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:选择一个话题完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,请先填写你所选的标题并介绍你对这句话的理解;
第二步,结合实际生活举例说明;
第三步,最后表达你得到的启发。
[亮点词汇]
① thanks to多亏
② help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③ in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.(表语从句,让步状语从句)
②That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score.(原因状语从句)
【真题10】(2024·江苏扬州·中考真题)端午节是中国四大传统节日之一。为加深中华文化理解,激发爱国主义情怀,某英语报“Culture”专栏正面向中学生举行以“Duanwu Festival—A celebration of patriotism”为题的征文比赛。请根据以下问题提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示:
(1) What is Duanwu Festival?
(importance, date, rice dumplings, dragon boat races)
(2) Why is Duanwu Festival also widely accepted as a celebration of patriotism?
(spirit behind the story of Qu Yuan, spirit of dragon boat racing)
(3) As a teenager, how can we practise the spirit of patriotism?
(1. …;2. …)
参考词汇:patriotism n.爱国主义; patriotic adj.爱国的; poet n.诗人;
all ethnic groups 全民族; the lunar May fifth 农历五月初五
要求:(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
(3)词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Duanwu Festival — A celebration of patriotism
Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival.
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【答案】例文
Duanwu Festival — A celebration of patriotism
Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important and traditional festivals in China. It falls on the lunar May fifth. People all across China eat rice dumplings and dragon boat races are held in many places to remember a great ancient patriotic poet Qu Yuan.
Qu Yuan sacrificed for his country, which showed us the spirit of patriotism. People’s dragon boat racing is closely related to honor Qu Yuan.
As a teenager, I believe it is our duty and responsibility to strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland. First, By working hard and pursuing excellence in our studies, we can make a significant impact on the development of our country. Second, By dedicating ourselves to protect the earth, we also can be a better person and it is good for our country.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍端午节;
第二步,介绍屈原故事的精神和赛龙舟的精神;
第三步,说明如何实践爱国。
[亮点词汇]
①is closely related to息息相关
②strive for奋发图强
[高分句型]
①Qu Yuan sacrificed for his country, which showed us the spirit of patriotism.(定语从句)
②As a teenager, I believe it is our duty and responsibility to strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland.(宾语从句)
【真题11】(2023·江苏淮安·中考真题)假如你是李华,你们学校的英语社团将开展以“体育锻炼,健康你我”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请以“Better Exercise, Better Life”为题,根据以下要点,写一篇英语演讲稿。
我的日常锻炼
1. 最喜欢的锻炼方式
2. 锻炼时长
3. 带来益处(不少于两点)
给同学的建议
1. 校内锻炼方式(不少于两点)
2. 校外锻炼方式(不少于两点)
号召
1. 希望大家多锻炼
2. …
参考词汇:做早操do morning exercises
上体育课 have PE lessons
压力减轻 feel less stressed
合理锻炼 exercise properly
注意:
1. 词数在80—100之间,已给出的文字不计入总词数;
2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Better Exercise, Better Life
Dear classmates,
I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “Better Exercise, Better Life”.
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That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
【答案】例文
Dear classmates,
I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “Better Exercise, Better Life”.
My favorite exercise is playing basketball. I often play basketball for about ten hours a week. Because I think it is interesting and relaxing and it also enables me to make friends with others.
I think we should do morning exercises every day to start our day. What’s more, when we have PE lessons, we can take part in different kinds of activities. We can also run for half an hour every day to build up our body. If we have time, we can ride bikes on weekends with our friends.
I hope everyone can exercise more and have a better life.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据表格中的提示信息进行写作,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍自己的日常锻炼;
第三步,介绍给同学的建议;
第四步,发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends with sb.和某人交朋友
②take part in参与
③on weekends在周末
[高分句型]
①when we have PE lessons, we can take part in different kinds of activities.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I hope everyone can exercise more and have a better life.(省略that的宾语从句)
【真题12】(2023·江苏盐城·中考真题)在人生的旅程中,亲人、朋友、老师、书籍等陪伴我们同行,助力我们成长。学校英语俱乐部正组织题为“Being with You”的征文比赛,请根据提示,写一篇短文参赛。
1. Who/What do you always like being with?
2. Why do you like being with him/her/it?
(Give two or three reasons)
…
注意事项:
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
2. 词数100左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Being with You
You’ve always been my sunshine. I like being with you, …
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【答案】例文
Being with You
You’ve always been my sunshine. I like being with you, my English teacher, Miss Li. You are very kind and hard-working. You are so helpful that you are ready to help almost every student in our class.
Two years ago, I was afraid to speak English and was poor at English. But you tried your best to help me solve my problem. Thanks to your help, I made great progress in my English study. Now I can speak English in public and don’t feel nervous any more.
You teach me not only to learn but also to be a kind and warm-hearted person. I hope I’ll be with you forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章开头以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接短文开头,引出喜欢同行的是谁或某个物品;
第二步,按照提示说明你喜欢与之相伴的原因,至少给出两、三个原因,可列举具体的事例;
第三步,表达愿与其一直同行的意愿并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to help sb乐于帮助某人
②thanks to多亏,由于
③not…any more不再
④not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①You are so helpful that you are ready to help almost every student in our class.(so…that引导的结果状语从句)
②I hope I’ll be with you forever.(省略引导词that引导的宾语从句)
【真题13】(2023·江苏常州·中考真题)当前,有些学生忽视倾听的作用,针对该情况,请你根据要点提示,用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿,阐述倾听的重要性。
要点:
1.在学校生活中要倾听及理由;
2.在日常生活中要倾听及理由。
注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数100左右;文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Listening carefully plays an important role in our life.
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【答案】例文
Listening carefully plays an important role in our life.
In class, we should listen to teachers carefully. It can not only help us have a better understanding of what the teachers say, but also it can improve learning efficiency. What’s more, we should listen to our classmates carefully. It can show that we are listening to our classmates and we care about them so that it can strengthen our relationship.
We should be good listeners at home. We should listen to our parents carefully in order to know about our parents’ ideas and avoid arguing with each other.
In a word, listening to others carefully is important in our daily life, so we should learn to become good listeners.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据题干中的提示内容介绍倾听的重要性。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍在学校生活中要倾听及理由;
第三步,介绍在日常生活中要倾听及理由。
第四步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also 不但……而且
②care about 关心
③in order to 为了
[高分句型]
①It can show that we are listening to our classmates and we care about them so that it can strengthen our relationship. (that引导的宾语从句,以及so that引导的目的状语从句)
②We should listen to our parents carefully in order to know about our parents’ ideas and avoid arguing with each other. (动词不定式作目的状语)
【真题14】(2023·江苏南通·中考真题)热心公益,积极为社会作力所能及的贡献是新时代初中生责任意识的表现。请你从以下社会行为中选择一种或另选一种相关活动,用英语写一篇关于今年暑假准备做的一次社会实践活动的短文。要求表达清楚“做什么、为何做、怎样做”。
注意:1. 词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
参考词汇:responsibility n. 责任;义务
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to have a social practice activity.
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The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to have a social practice activity. I’m going to take part in a voluntary activity in Old People’s Home.
First, I can talk to the old about something interesting or take a walk with them. Then, I may give them a great performance. Finally, I can do whatever I can such as cleaning the bedrooms or folding clothes for the old.
I believe these activities will not only make the old happy but also help me learn a lot. Isn’t it meaningful?
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应选择一种社会行为,介绍今年暑假准备做的社会实践活动,要包含要点“做什么、为何做、怎样做”。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题,介绍做什么,为何做;
第二步,介绍怎么做;
第三步,再次点明活动的益处,暗含这么做的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in 参加
②such as 例如
③fold clothes 叠衣服
④not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Finally, I can do whatever I can such as cleaning the bedrooms or folding clothes for the old.(whatever引导宾语从句)
②Isn’t it meaningful?(否定疑问句)
【真题15】(2023·江苏镇江·中考真题)假如你是李华,你们学校整理出一块空地,将用于拓宽学生活动和实践的空间。校英语报登载了校方初拟的两种方案,就这块空地建设文化角还是菜园征求意见。请根据提示给校报写一封信谈谈你的想法和建议。
A Culture Corner
A Vegetable Garden
●display art works
●share ideas and feelings
●hold activities (fashion shows, …)
●develop a sense of beauty
●…
●work with classmates
●learn farming skills
●harvest vegetables (tomatoes, …)
●form the habit of labour (劳动)
●…
要求:
1.所写内容必须包括一种方案的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2.对你所选择的方案说明理由,并对其提出建议;
3.文章不少于90词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m happy to hear that there is an empty area in our school for building a Culture Corner or a Vegetable Garden. In my opinion, it’s better to ...
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m happy to hear that there is an empty area in our school for building a Culture Corner or a Vegetable Garden. In my opinion, it’s better to build a vegetable garden. The reasons are as follows.
First of all, our country advocates labor education. Second, students can work with their classmates in the garden to strengthen their friendship. Third, working in the garden can help students learn farming skills. Fourth, a garden built on the empty land can harvest a lot of vegetables, such as tomatoes, potatoes, carrots and so on, which can save the cost of food for the school. Last but not least, students can form the habit of labor by planting vegetables.
This is not only good for the school, but also good for the growth of students.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据表格选择一种方案;
第二步,就选择的方案结合提示信息介绍下你的想法和建议。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③last but not least最后也是最重要的
[高分句型]
Fourth, a garden built on empty land can harvest a lot of vegetables, such as tomatoes, potatoes, carrots and so on, which can save the cost of food for the school.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【真题16】(2023·江苏徐州·中考真题)假定你是李华。你班交换留学生Simon即将返校,他对“校园科技周”非常感兴趣,他写了一封邮件向你询问相关信息,请你根据邮件内容和所给提示写封回信。
注意:
1.词数90左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.邮件需包括所给要点,可适当增加细节,使内容完整通顺;
3.邮件中不得泄露个人信息;
4.请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hi Simon,
I’m very happy to tell you about our School Technology Week.
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I’m sure you will enjoy the Technology Week.
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Hi Simon,
I’m very happy to tell you about our School Technology Week.
It will be held in the No. 2 building in two weeks. There are many different kinds of activities in the Week. First, you can watch science fiction films like The Wandering Earth. Second, some students will tell stories about scientists like Deng Jiaxian. What’s more, our school will share the latest news about technology and show creative ideas about robots. You are crazy about robots, right? Great, there are some smart robot shows you can take part in here. Then you can see and experience how excellent they are.
I’m sure you will enjoy the Technology Week.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据开头,介绍科技周开始的时间;
第二步,根据Simon的问题提示,介绍科技周的活动;
第三步,介绍Simon感兴趣的机器人活动。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of不同种类的
②take part in参加
[高分句型]
Then you can see and experience how excellent they are.(感叹句作宾语)
【真题17】(2023·江苏宿迁·中考真题)“双减”政策推行之后,中学生的学习及生活发生了很大的变化。为了达成“五育”并举的培养目标,你校开展了丰富的延时服务课程并鼓励学生参与志愿服务。某报社想了解这方面的情况。假如你是李华,请你根据以下提示写一封英文邮件进行简单介绍。
延时服务
参加各种各样的课程,比如音乐、篮球等;
……(你的情况)
志愿服务
帮助他人解决问题;
…… (举例说明)
你的收获
提升能力,更加自信;
……(补充1-2点)
注意事项:
1. 词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Dear Editor,
I am glad to tell you something about the after-school services in our school and the voluntary work we do.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Editor,
I am glad to tell you something about the after-school services in our school and the voluntary work we do.
Our school provides various after-school services, such as music, basketball, and more. I enjoy taking part in the art club where I can express my creativity.
In addition to these services, we also have opportunities for voluntary work. By helping others solve problems and assisting in community service events, we gain valuable experience and develop important skills.
Through these activities, I have gained confidence and improved my abilities. I believe that these experiences will benefit me greatly in the future.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容介绍学校的课后服务和志愿工作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出对课后服务和志愿工作的介绍;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从课后服务和志愿工作两个方面重点介绍;
第三步,表达自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②take part in参加
③In addition to另外
④in the future在未来
[高分句型]
①By helping others solve problems and assisting in community service events, we gain valuable experience and develop important skills.(动名词作宾语)
②I believe that these experiences will benefit me greatly in the future.(that引导的宾语从句)
【真题18】(2023·江苏无锡·中考真题)青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题,为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏,倾听读者的心声,并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华,最近也遇上了些烦心事,请给该专栏发一封英文邮件,讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。
注意事项:
(1)邮件内容须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
(2)词数在100左右,邮件开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment.
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I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment.
These days I’m not happy. I always argue with my parents. They only care about my schoolwork. The summer holiday is coming. They plan to choose lots of after-school classes for me. But I don’t want to take these classes and don’t want to be so busy. I’m interested in painting. I just want to take painting lessons during the holiday. They disagree with me. I don’t know what to do. And how can I improve the relationship with my parents? Can you give me some advice?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据要求讲述自己的烦恼。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明自己遇到了问题。
第二步,讲述自己的烦恼并寻求建议。
第三步,书写结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①argue with和某人争吵
②care about关心
③take painting lessons上绘画课
[高分句型]
①The summer holiday is coming. (现在进行时表示将来的动作)
② I don’t know what to do. (疑问词+动词不定式)
【真题19】(2023·江苏泰州·中考真题)泰州是著名的教育之乡。你的英国朋友想了解泰州的教育,想请你用英语介绍一下,你列出如下提纲:
1. 良好的教育环境(校园美丽,名人众多……写1-2点);
2. 优秀的老师;
3. 自己的学习表现。
要求:
1. 包含所有要点,表达清晰,过渡合理,衔接自然,可适当拓展;
2. 不得使用真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息;
3. 词数 100 左右。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
I am proud to be a student in Taizhou. There is a good educational environment. The campus here is beautiful, and there are many celebrities, such as Hu Yuan, Wang Anshi and so on. There are also many libraries and famous universities.
The teachers here are also excellent. Most of them are teachers who graduated from famous universities, and some even returned from studying abroad. They have advanced teaching methods and teaching ideas. They also produce a large number of excellent students.
In addition to learning cultural knowledge, I also join many clubs, such as basketball club, chess club, dancing club and so on. Here I not only learn cultural knowledge, but also learn a lot of life philosophy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容介绍泰州的教育,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍泰州良好的教育环境;
第二步,介绍优秀的老师;
第三步,介绍自己的学习表现。
[亮点词汇]
①be proud of为……感到自豪
②graduate from毕业于
③a large number of许多
[高分句型]
①Most of them are teachers who graduated from famous universities, and some even returned from studying abroad.(who引导的定语从句)
②Here I not only learn cultural knowledge, but also learn a lot of life philosophy.(not only...but also...连接并列结构)
【真题20】(2023·江苏苏州·中考真题)Happy Home Club本期的主题是“How to make Suzhou more beautiful”,你打算以“Starting from me and now”为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1. 触动你的一件事情;
2. 这件事给你的启示;
3. 你的倡议。
注意:
1. 词数:100左右。
2. 内容完整(照抄阅读语篇不得分)
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Starting from me and now
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
Starting from me and now
Last weekend, I went to the city park with my classmates. When we got there, we were amazed that there were different kinds of rubbish on the ground. We felt very sad about that. The city is our home, so we should try our best to keep the city clean.
First of all, we should protect our environment. Don’t throw rubbish around or spit anywhere. We’d better plant more trees to make the air clean. Second, we are supposed to be friendly and helpful to others. Third, we ought to obey the traffic rules. Don’t ride too fast or play on the street. Last but not least, remember to save energy. Turn off the lights and taps in time.
As long as we try our best and starting from me and now, I believe Suzhou will become more and more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:要求根据题干中的提示介绍如何让自己的家乡变得更美,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍触动你的一件事情以及这件事情给你的启示;
第二步,为了使苏州变得更美,介绍你的倡议;
第三步,书写结语。表达“希望家乡会更美丽”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of 各种各样的
②be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事
③remember to do sth. 记得做某事
④in time 及时
[高分句型]
①When we got there, we were amazed that there were different kinds of rubbish on the ground.(when引导时间状语从句)
②We’d better plant more trees to make the air clean. (“sb. had better do sth.”表建议的句型)
③I believe Suzhou will become more and more beautiful.(宾语从句)
【限时练二:2025年江苏名校好题调研书面表达25篇】
【模拟01】(2025·江苏南京·模拟预测)假定你是晨光中学初三学生李华,学校英语角邀请你分享“AI助力英语学习”的经验。请根据以下提示,写一封80—100词的英文建议信,给同龄朋友分享AI工具 (如Doubao、DeepSeek) 的使用心得和建议,并鼓励同学善用AI,做学习的主人。
要点:
1. How has AI helped you with your English studies?
2. What suggestions can you offer teenagers on how to properly use AI tools?
注意:
①内容涵盖所有要点,全文连贯通顺;
②已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数;
③文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. And I’m excited to share how AI tools like Doubao and DeepSeek have helped me with my English studies. These tools have improved my listening and speaking skills by providing real-time feedback. They also help me correct grammar mistakes and expand my vocabulary, making learning more efficient and fun.
However, it’s important to use AI tools properly. First, plan your time wisely and avoid over-reliance on AI. Second, combine AI with traditional learning methods, such as reading books and practicing with classmates. Remember, AI is a tool, not a replacement for hard work. Let’s make the most of AI and take control of our learning journey. Together, we can achieve great results!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:材料所给要点需完整表达,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍AI如何帮助英语学习;
第二步,对青少年正确使用AI提出建议;
第三步,发出倡议,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①real-time feedback实时反馈
②make the most of充分利用
③take control of控制;掌管
[高分句型]
①And I’m excited to share how AI tools like Doubao and DeepSeek have helped me with my English studies. (how引导宾语从句)
②However, it’s important to use AI tools properly. (“It’s+形容词+to do” 句型)
【模拟02】(2025·江苏无锡·一模)假如你是林丹,你的美国笔友Tom来信表示近期学习压力较大,不知如何缓解。请你回信,介绍你最喜欢的一种放松方式 (如运动、阅读、听音乐、画画等) ,并说明理由,同时分享一次你的相关经历。
注意事项:
1. 回信内容须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意:
2. 词数不少于90个,回信开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
3. 回信中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称;
4. 回信必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter. We are busy with our study, but we should learn how to achieve a balance between work and rest. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my experience can help you.
Yours truly,
Lin Dan
【答案】例文
Dear Tom.
Thanks s for your letter. We are busy with our study, but we should learn how to achieve a balance between work and rest.
As we all know, there are many kinds of ways to relax, for me, I prefer reading. I think it can not only help us learn more about the world but also make us feel more relaxed, especially when we feel tired. Last weekend, I was busy with my homework and my parents were out for work. I finished my homework and took a walk in our community, feeling very tired. When I returned home, I was attracted by a novel called Treasure Island. I was so interested in it that I forgot my dinner. When I was lost in the story, I felt as if I were there.What’s more, I had a special feeling of being surrounded by the characters in the novel. How exciting it was! I was tired but I was really relaxed.
I hope my experience can help you.
Yours truly,
Lin Dan
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,感谢来信,表达理解Tom的压力,提出平衡学习与放松的重要性;
第二步,介绍放松方式并说明理由;
第三步,描述一次具体的放松经历,表达希望建议对Tom有帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①many kinds of 许多种
②prefer doing sth更喜欢做某事
③be attracted by被……吸引
④be surrounded by被……所包围
[高分句型]
①I think it can not only help us learn more about the world but also make us feel more relaxed, especially when we feel tired.(宾语从句、运用了not only…but also…的并列结构)
②When I returned home, I was attracted by a novel called Treasure Island.(时间状语从句)
【模拟03】(24-25九年级下·江苏南京·阶段练习)假如你是中学生李明,你的英国好友Alan来信询问你的近况。中考 (the Entrance Exam to Senior High School) 在即,你们班最近召开了以“How to study efficiently (高效地)”为主题的班会。请你根据以下信息给他写一封信,并和他交流一下自己怎样在努力学习的同时,劳逸结合减轻压力。
Opinions from Class Meeting
Student 1: Good learning attitude (态度).
Student 2: Better study methods.
Student 3: …
Your opinions
About work-life balance
Dear Alan,
How is everything going?
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文:
Dear Alan,
How is everything going? I’m writing to share some updates. With the Entrance Exam to Senior High School approaching, our class recently held a meeting titled “How to Study Efficiently.” Here are the main ideas:
First, Student 1 emphasized the importance of a good learning attitude, like staying focused and positive. Student 2 suggested improving study methods, such as taking notes and reviewing mistakes. Student 3 added that setting a clear schedule helps avoid procrastination.
As for me, I believe in balancing work and life. For example, I study for 45 minutes and then take a 10-minute break to stretch or listen to music. On weekends, I play basketball to relax. This keeps my mind fresh and reduces stress.
How do you manage study and free time? Looking forward to your advice! Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信,属于应用文写作;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主,辅以少量“现在进行时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生需结合班会讨论内容和个人观点,适当扩展细节,突出高效学习和劳逸结合的主题。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明写信目的,分享班会内容和个人近况;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。介绍班会中同学们的观点,并结合自身情况说明如何高效学习和平衡生活;
第三步,书写结语。表达对好友的关心和期待回复。
[亮点词汇]
①the importance of……的重要性
②such as比如
③take notes做笔记
④set a clear schedule制定清晰的时间表
⑤reduce stress 减轻压力
[高分句型]
①Student 3 added that setting a clear schedule helps avoid procrastination. (宾语从句)
【模拟04】(24-25九年级下·江苏苏州·阶段练习)Write a letter of at least 80 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一封不少于80个词的信,标点符号不占格。信的开头和署名已给,不计入总字数。)
假设你是初三学生李华,在学校举办的国际学生交流活动中结识了一位外国朋友Zoe。随着活动的结束,Zoe即将返回她的国家。为了表达你的友谊和对她的美好祝愿,你决定送给她一份蕴含苏州传统文化特色的礼物。请写一封信,随信附上这份礼物。信中包含以下内容:
(1)对这份礼物的简介(包括名称、特点、用途等);
(2)你选择这份礼物的原因。
注意:1.信中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分; 2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Dear Zoe,
It was great having you here.
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【答案】例文
Dear Zoe,
It was great having you here. I’d like to give you a Suzhou embroidery handkerchief, a special souvenir from my city. Made of soft silk, it’s decorated with beautiful hand-stitched patterns of peonies and birds, which are symbols of happiness and beauty in Chinese culture. This handkerchief is not only useful for wiping hands or tears but also a tiny work of art that can be framed and displayed. Its delicate design shows the skill of Suzhou’s traditional craftsmen.
I chose this gift because it represents the charm of Suzhou’s culture, and I hope you’ll love its uniqueness. Every time you use it, I want it to remind you of our friendship and the joyful moments we shared during the exchange program. May it bring you warmth and sweet memories, just like our days together.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①体材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信;
②时态:一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,首先要根据已给出的2个要点提示进行写作,其次要适当补充发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:第一段介绍自己要送给Zoe的礼物;
第二步:第二段说明送这份礼物的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth想要做某事
②not only…, but also…不仅……,而且……
③remind sb of sth使某人想起某事
[高分句型]
①Made of soft silk, it’s decorated with beautiful hand-stitched patterns of peonies and birds, which are symbols of happiness and beauty in Chinese culture. (被动语态和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②I chose this gift because it represents the charm of Suzhou’s culture, and I hope you’ll love its uniqueness. (because引导的原因状语从句)
【模拟05】(24-25九年级下·江苏南通·开学考试)假如你是Kris,你校试行在课间播放音乐,你班的同学对此进行了讨论,看法不同,多数学生赞同,部分学生反对。请根据表格中所提供的信息,给校长写一封信,介绍大家的观点,并谈谈自己的看法。
Pros
Cons
Reason
1. make… feel happy
2. help… relax…
3. improve study efficiency
1. cannot get the expected results, as the break is short
2. in the next class some students are still lost in the music
Your Opinion
…
要求:
1. 内容完整,意思连贯,书写规范;
2. 必须用上表格中的提示信息,80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:study efficiency学习效果,expected预期的,effect影响,peace安静,results结果
Dear Headmaster,
We had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave the ideas.
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【答案】例文
Dear Headmaster,
We had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave their ideas.
Most students agree with the idea because they believe music can make them feel happy, help them relax, and even improve study efficiency. However, some students disagree. They think the break is too short to get the expected results, and in the next class, some students might still be lost in the music, which could affect their focus.
In my opinion, playing music during the break could be beneficial if the volume is kept low and the music is calming. This way, it can provide a peaceful environment without distracting students in the next class.
Yours sincerely,
Kris
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封信;
②时态:时态是一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写作意图开头已给出,写作时可直接介绍大家的观点。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,主要围绕“同意的原因”、以及“不同意的原因”展开,适当补充,丰富细节。
第三步,谈谈自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①have a discussion谈论
②agree with同意
③make sb feel adj让某人感觉……
④help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
⑤study efficiency学习效果
⑥too…to…太……以致不能……
⑦In my opinion就我而言
[高分句型]
①Most students agree with the idea because they believe music can make them feel happy, help them relax, and even improve study efficiency. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②They think the break is too short to get the expected results, and in the next class, some students might still be lost in the music, which could affect their focus. (which引导的定语从句)
③In my opinion, playing music during the break could be beneficial if the volume is kept low and the music is calming. (if引导的条件状语从句)
【模拟06】(2025·江苏苏州·模拟预测)假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Mike写信告诉你他对DeepSeek很感兴趣,你需要给他写一封回信,要点如下:
1. 向Mike介绍DeepSeek是中国自主研发的新兴AI工具,非常受欢迎。
2. 告诉Mike你使用DeepSeek学英语,解难题,写文章;DeepSeek还帮你规划旅行和提供健康生活建议等。
3. 建议Mike使用DeepScek学汉语。
1. 词数80到100字;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 提示词:DeepSeek (深度求索) AI(人工智能) tool (工具) 研发 develop
Dear Mike,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
I was thrilled to receive your letter expressing your keen interest in DeepSeek. Allow me to share some more insights about this remarkable AI tool.
DeepSeek is an emerging AI tool independently developed by China, and it has gained immense popularity. I’ve personally found it incredibly useful in various aspects of my life. For instance, I use DeepSeek to enhance my English learning, solve complex problems, and even draft articles with ease. What’s more, it helps me plan my travels and offers valuable advice for a healthy lifestyle.
Considering your enthusiasm, I highly recommend giving DeepSeek a try for learning Chinese. Looking forward to hearing your experiences with DeepSeek!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封回信,属于书信写作;
②时态:采用“一般现在时”;
③提示:题目要求写一封80到100词的信给英国朋友Mike,介绍DeepSeek是中国自主研发的新兴AI工具,说明其在学习、解决问题、旅行规划和健康生活方面的应用,并建议他用DeepSeek学习汉语。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头部分回应Mike的兴趣表达,并简要介绍DeepSeek是一款由中国独立开发并广受欢迎的AI工具;
第二步,详细阐述DeepSeek在日常生活中的多种用途,包括英语学习、问题解决、文章撰写、旅行规划以及提供健康生活建议等具体例子;
第三步,基于上述信息,建议Mike尝试使用DeepSeek学习汉语,并期待听到他的使用体验。
[亮点词汇]
①emerging AI tool新兴的AI工具
②independently developed独立开发
③enhance one’s English learning增强某人的英语学习
④solve complex problems解决复杂问题
⑤draft articles撰写文章
⑥plan one’s travels规划某人的旅行
⑦valuable advice for a healthy lifestyle健康生活的宝贵建议
[高分句型]
Considering your enthusiasm, I highly recommend giving DeepSeek a try for learning Chinese. (现在分词短语作状语)
【模拟07】(24-25九年级上·江苏泰州·期末)你校下学期将举行主题为“Fun with English”的英语节活动,为此校英语报刊登了一份征求活动建议的通知。假如你是初三学生刘强,请给英语报的编辑写一封信,内容包括:
1.你认为英语节活动会给你们的学习生活带来哪些积极意义?
2.请为学校英语节推荐一项活动,并阐述理由。
活动提示(仅供参考):
English short drama show;
Sharing a good read in English;
Telling good Chinese stories in English;
English chorus (合唱) competition …
3.针对你推荐的活动,九年级学生可以在寒假期间做哪些准备?请给出你的建议。
注意:
1.要点齐全,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2.词数100左右,信件开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.信件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear Editor,
I’m happy to hear that we will have an English Festival next term.
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Yours sincerely,
Liu Qiang
【答案】范文1
Dear Editor,
I’m happy to hear that we will have an English Festival next term. I believe it will make our school life more colorful and provide a good chance for us to enjoy the beauty of English.
As for the activities, I’d like to recommend Telling good Chinese stories in English. In my opinion, it will not only make ourselves understand our culture better but also improve our English speaking and writing. More importantly, we can help to spread Chinese culture through the activity.
Grade 9 students can get prepared during the winter holiday. It’s necessary to choose a good Chinese story first. If we don’t know how to tell the story in English clearly, we can email teachers for help. We can also practise it in front of our parents or friends. Maybe they have some good ideas.
I think it’ll be very meaningful if we can tell good Chinese stories in English at the English Festival. I hope my advice is worth taking.
Yours sincerely,
Liu Qing
范文2
Dear Editor,
I’m happy to hear that we will have an English Festival next term. I’m sure it is an important chance for us students to improve our learning skills and show our talents.
I’d like to recommend an activitity named English chorus competition for the festival. By practising singing together, we can not only improve our English pronunciation but also make our English study more enjoyable. What’s more, we can learn about teamwork and become closer to each other.
During the winter vacation, Grade Nine students can learn the songs at home with the help of the Internet at the beginning. Later, the whole class can gather together at school and practise singing once a week.
In my opinion, it is meaningful for us to take part in the English chorus competition. I hope my advice would be helpful to you.
Yours sincerely,
Liu Qing
【详解】以范文1为例
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:根据提示内容进行写作,可适当增添细节,注意行文连贯,表述完整并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍这个活动带来的积极意义;
第二步,介绍自己推荐的活动及理由;
第三步,根据推荐的活动,表达九年级学生需要做哪些准备及建议;
第四步,书写结语,希望建议能够被采纳。
[亮点词汇]
①in one’s opinion在某人看来
②more importantly更重要的是
③in front of在……前面
[高分句型]
①I believe it will make our school life more colorful and provide a good chance for us to enjoy the beauty of English. (宾语从句)
②If we don’t know how to tell the story in English clearly, we can email teachers for help. (if引导条件状语从句)
【模拟08】(24-25九年级上·江苏南通·期末)学校将要进行学生会换届选举,假如你是交换生Simon,想推荐你班的班长陈启同学担任学生会主席。请从以下图示中至少选择或自拟三种能力介绍陈启,并用英文写一封推荐信。
注意:
1. 词数90词左右,推荐信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 表达时请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Simon from Class 1, Grade 9. I’m writing to recommend our monitor Chen Qi to be the chairperson of the Students’ Union. I think he is an excellent student of great abilities.
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In a word, I think Chen Qi is the most suitable person for the position. I hope that you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Simon
【答案】例文:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Simon from Class 1, Grade 9. I’m writing to recommend our monitor Chen Qi to be the chairperson of the Students’ Union. I think he is an excellent student of great abilities.
Chen Qi is very helpful. He always does extra work in class. At school, he always helps other students with their schoolwork. He is also clever and hard-working. He is good at Chinese and English. He always gets good marks in tests. Chen Qi is also organized and never forgets to do the things he plans to do. He has organized many after-class activities well.
In a word, I think Chen Qi is the most suitable person for the position. I hope that you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Simon
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封信;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出写作意图(已给出);
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,主要围绕“人际交往”、“学习提升”以及“活动组织”展开,适当补充,丰富细节;
第三步,表达希望(已给出)。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb with sth在某事上帮助某人
②be good at擅长
③forget to do sth忘记做某事
④plan to do sth计划做某事
[高分句型]
Chen Qi is also organized and never forgets to do the things he plans to do. (省略that的定语从句)
【模拟09】(2024·江苏南京·三模)你收到了澳大利亚笔友Simon的来信,请根据来信内容给他回复。
Dear Li Hua,
How are you doing? I am really happy to tell you that we’ re planning a two-day visit to China. I wonder which city you think is well worth a visit. Why do you recommend it? Have you been there before? Can you share something special you have experienced with us?
Yours,
Simon
注意:
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3. 词数80左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Simon,
Welcome to China! The city I want to recommend to you is …
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I hope my recommendation is of great value to you!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Simon,
Welcome to China! The city I want to recommend to you is Shenyang. It is my hometown.
Shenyang is in the northeast of China. It is the capital city of Liaoning Province. There are many famous scenic spots here, such as the Shenyang Palace Museum , Expo Garden, Qipan Scenic and so on. You can taste a lot of delicious food here, such as Li Liangui Smoked Pork Pancake, Laobian Dumplings, Cold Noodles, Pot Wrapped Pork, Shenyang Huitou, White Meat and Blood Sausage, Da La Pi, Shazhu Cuisine, Laoshanji Haicheng Pie, Majia Shaomai, etc. If you want to shop, you can go to Wuai City, where you can buy anything you want. If you visit here, you will be very happy. I hope you will have a good time in Shenyang.
I hope my recommendation is of great value to you!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:主要时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据所给内容要点完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明推荐城市;
第二步,介绍城市信息;
第三步,表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①scenic spots景点
②such as比如
③and so on等等
[高分句型]
①If you want to shop, you can go to Wuai City, where you can buy anything you want. (where引导非限制性定语从句)
②If you visit here, you will be very happy.(if引导条件状语从句)
【模拟10】(2024·江苏泰州·二模)“双减”后,学校创立了许多新的社团。假如你是李华,在学校的公众号上看到社团招募新成员的信息,请用英语写一封申请信,写明你想加入的某一个或者某两个社团名称、自身情况、加入理由以及希望。
注意事项:
1. 信件需包含至少两个理由,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺,意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名, 校名等相关信息;
3. 词数在100个左右,信件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m glad to see the notice on our school public account.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m glad to see the notice on our school public account. I am so interested in basketball that I would like to join the Basketball Club.
I am a tall and strong boy. I like basketball very much because it is interesting. I often play basketball after school with my classmates and we have a lot of fun together.
There are two reasons why I want to join the Basketball Club. First, I want to lean basketball skills. Second, I hope to play some basketball games with this team and I do enjoy the sense when we win the game.
I really hope I can become a member of this club.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作开头以及提示要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏信息,并适当添加信息,使文章通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,直接说明来信意图来引出下文的自我介绍,直接说明自己想要参加的俱乐部;
第二步,具体介绍自身情况、加入理由以及希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②so...that...如此……以至于……
[高分句型]
①I like basketball very much because it is interesting.(原因状语从句)
②Second, I hope to play some basketball games with this team and I do enjoy the sense when we win the game.(时间状语从句)
【模拟11】(2025·江苏常州·模拟预测)时间在不经意中从指尖划过,转眼我们即将毕业。蓦然回首,成长的路上留下一串串或深或浅的脚印,记载着欢乐和忧伤,伴随我们一路走来。请根据提示,任选一点或自拟,分享你的成长故事。
Growing up
1. Knowing myself
2. Dealing with problems
3. Getting on with others
4. …
注意:
1. 词数100左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容完整(照抄阅读语篇不得分);
3. 文中不得出现与学生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Growing up
How times flies! Now we are Grade Nine students. I feel happy and sometimes sad when growing up. Here is what I’d like to share with you.
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【答案】例文:
Growing up
How time flies! Now we are Grade Nine students. I feel happy and sometimes sad when growing up. Here is what I’d like to share with you.
One of my biggest challenges was dealing with problems. Last year, I failed a math test. Instead of giving up, I analyzed my mistakes and asked my teacher for help. Gradually, my grades improved. This experience taught me that persistence leads to progress. Another important lesson was getting on with others. I used to argue with my classmates over small things. Later, I learned to listen and understand their perspectives. Now, we work together harmoniously.
Growing up is a journey full of ups and downs, but each step makes us stronger.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:根据提示信息,需从4个给定角度(认识自我/解决问题/人际相处/自拟)任选其一展开,介绍自己的成长经历。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点名主题。想要分享自己的成长经历;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。描述具体自己遇到的困境和采取的措施,以及最后取得的进步或感悟;
第三步,升华主题。总结成长收获。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of代替
②give up放弃
③get on with sb与某人相处
[高分句型]
①This experience taught me that persistence leads to progress.(that引导的宾语从句)
②Growing up is a journey full of ups and downs, but each step makes us stronger.(动名词短语作主语)
【模拟12】(2025·江苏盐城·一模)习惯是人生的根基,学生时期播下自律的种子,未来方能收获丰硕的果实。——陶行知。最近,你班就“学生的良好学习习惯和生活习惯”话题展开了广泛讨论。请你根据下表所提示的信息, 用英语写一篇题为“A good habit,a successful life”的短文。
注意:
1.词数100左右。短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.短文须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
A good habit, a successful life
Recently our class have had a discussion on students’ good habits. In order to make our life successful,we should have good habits of learning.
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In a word, good habits will give us a successful life.
【答案】例文
A good habit, a successful life
Recently our class have had a discussion on students’ good habits. In order to make our life successful,we should have good habits of learning.
First, we should get up early and go to bed early to keep healthy. We should eat more vegetables and fruits. Also, we should keep the air in the room fresh. We should exercise at least one hour every day. It is good for our health. Second, we should listen to our teachers carefully at class and finish our homework on time. It is a good habit to review and preview our lessons. We should read more books after school.
In a word, good habits will give us a successful life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇议论文
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接文章开头,开篇点题,我们应该有良好的习惯;
第二步,具体阐述自己的生活习惯和学习习惯;
第三步,总结自己的生活感受。
[亮点词汇]
①at least至少
②review and preview our lessons复习并预习课程
[高分句型]
①It is a good habit to review and preview our lessons. (it作形式主语)
【模拟13】(2025·江苏南京·模拟预测)黑发不知勤学早,白首方悔读书迟。请根据以下征稿内容,为校英语广播站写一篇短文。
Welcome to our radio program. This week we invite you to say something about Tangping (躺平):
What Tangping means for teenagers;
Whether you choose Tangping and why;
Your advice to teenagers who choose Tangping.
We hope to hear from you.
注意:
1.内容涵盖所有要点,全文连贯通顺。
2.词数80左右。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
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【答案】例文
For teenagers, Tangping often reflects a passive way—escaping pressure and competition. I reject Tangping because I think challenges help us grow. Life is full of ups and downs, and we must face them bravely.
For those who choose Tangping, I have some advice. First, you should have a purpose for your life, like going to college. Second, stay away from mobile phones. If you feel bored, play sports instead of watching short videos on the Internet.
Let’s embrace life actively instead of lying flat!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先讲述躺平对青少年意味着什么;
第二步,讲述自己是否会选择躺平及原因;
第三步,谈谈自己对选择躺平的青少年的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of充满
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③instead of而不是
[高分句型]
I reject Tangping because I think challenges help us grow.(because引导的原因状语从句)
【模拟14】(2025·江苏无锡·一模)假如你是李华,你校写作俱乐部本期的主题是“The rose’s in her hand, the scent in mine (赠人玫瑰,手有余香)”,请你以此写一篇英语短文,内容包括:
1. 你对这句话的理解;
2. 你的亲身经历;
3. 你的感想或倡议。
注意事项:词数100左右。
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【答案】例文
A well-known proverb goes that “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine”, which I think means helping others is helping ourselves.
I can well remember that three weeks ago my classmates and I went to help an old couple do some housework. After arriving, we helped wash the windows and mop the floor. We also sang and danced to cheer up the old couple. They felt very happy. We were also very happy though we felt a little tired. Later, our teacher praised us for our good deeds.
In my opinion, helping others not only benefits the receiver but also the giver. One should always be ready to help others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题;
第二步,详细介绍自己帮助别人的事情经过;
第三步,分享自己的感受,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①do some housework做家务
②cheer up使振作起来
③not only...but also...不仅……而且……
④be ready to do准备好做
[高分句型]
①A well-known proverb goes that “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine”, which I think means helping others is helping ourselves.(which引导的定语从句)
②We were also very happy though we felt a little tired.(though引导的让步状语从句)
【模拟15】(2025·江苏南京·模拟预测)某英文网站正在举办征文活动,请根据网站征文要求,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
Beautiful school day wanted!
This new global site is a place for students to share their ideas. We are looking for your beautiful school day to inspire (鼓舞) our readers. Did you help anyone at school? Did you enjoy a beautiful song in your art lesson? Did you have an amazing experience in the school lab?
Your school life is full of beauty. Choose a beautiful school day. Write a passage to tell us what you did that day and why you think it was beautiful. Send your writing to us right now!
注意:
1.内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺。
2.词数80左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
My Beautiful School Day
My school life is full of beauty.
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【答案】例文:
My Beautiful School Day
My school life is full of beauty.
One day, I helped a classmate with his math homework, which made me feel proud and happy. During the art lesson, we listened to a beautiful song that touched my heart deeply. In the afternoon, we did an experiment in the lab, which was not only educational but also fascinating.
That day was beautiful because I learned the joy of helping others and experienced the wonders of art and science. I will always remember that day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文属于材料作文,为记叙文;
②时态:一般过去时为主;
③提示:根据征文要求,描述一个美丽的校园日,内容包括当天的活动以及为什么觉得这一天美丽。
[写作步骤]
第一步:确定主题。选择一个具体的校园日,描述当天的活动。例如,帮助同学、艺术课上的美妙体验、实验室的奇妙经历等。
第二步:展开描述。详细描述当天的活动,包括时间、地点、人物和事件,以及这些活动如何让你感受到校园生活的美好。
第三步:总结感受。简要总结为什么这一天对你来说是美丽的,表达对校园生活的热爱。
[亮点词汇]
①help...with...帮助……某事
②touch my heart触动心灵
③not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①One day, I helped a classmate with his math homework, which made me feel proud and happy.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②That day was beautiful because I learned the joy of helping others and experienced the wonders of art and science.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
【模拟16】(2025·江苏徐州·模拟预测)随着旅游经济的蓬勃发展,徐州成为游客的网红打卡地。徐州文旅向广大青少年征集文章来向世界各地游客宣传、展现徐州的“美”,邀请世界各地游客来徐州游玩。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,用英文写一篇短文介绍徐州的“美”。
注意:1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 不得在作文出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
3. 语句连贯,词数80-100个左右,作文的标题和开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
可能用到的词汇:戏马台(The horse-playing tower);龟山汉墓(Tomb of Han Dynasty in Guishan);云龙山(Yun Long Mountain);徐州方特乐园(Xuzhou Fangte Amusement Park);地锅鸡(Pot chicken);把子肉(Bazi meat);烙馍(baked bun);barbecue;Sha soup
The Beauty of Xuzhou
Today I would like to show you the beauty of Xuzhou.
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【答案】例文
The Beauty of Xuzhou
Today I would like to show you the beauty of Xuzhou. Xuzhou is a city in the northwest of Jiangsu Province, China. It has a long history and is famous for its beauty.
The people here are friendly and warm-hearted. Xuzhou is famous for its delicious food. Don’t miss trying Pot chicken, Bazi meat, and baked bun. The local barbecue and Sha soup are also highly recommended. You can also visit the famous Yun Long Mountain, which offers breathtaking views and peaceful surroundings. Another must-see is the Tomb of Han Dynasty in Guishan, where you can explore ancient Chinese history. For those who love to have fun, Xuzhou Fangte Amusement Park is a great place to enjoy thrilling rides.
Come and experience the charm of Xuzhou for yourself!
【详解】[总体分析]
①本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍徐州的基本信息,包括位置和历史等;
第二步,介绍徐州的美,包括人、美食和旅游景点等;
第三步,欢迎大家来徐州。
[亮点词汇]
①is famous for以……而闻名
②are also highly recommended也是强烈推荐的
③breathtaking views惊人的景色
[高分句型]
①You can also visit the famous Yun Long Mountain, which offers breathtaking views and peaceful surroundings. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Come and experience the charm of Xuzhou for yourself!(祈使句)
【模拟17】(2024·江苏南京·二模)你在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到 “Life in 2045” 的征稿启事。请根据图片内容,选择至少2个方面来写,畅想未来生活,并用英语写一篇短文投稿。
注意:
1. 内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺。
2. 不少于80词 (已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Life in 2045
Life in 2045 will be quite different.
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【答案】例文:
Life in 2045
Life in 2045 will be quite different from today.
First of all, my house will become very amazing. Imagine waking up in the morning and my smart kitchen has already prepared a tasty breakfast for me. The future house will know what I want and satisfy my needs.
Secondly, getting around will be easier and faster because of future transport. The future cars will take us anywhere we want to go. Flying cars might even become a reality, making long-distance travel much quicker. These are just some of the exciting changes I can expect in 2045. I can’t wait to see what will happen in the future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇图示作文;
②时态:时态为 “一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题,说明2045年的生活有何不同;
第二步,具体阐述2045年的生活,从“房子、购物、交通”等方面介绍;
第三步,书写结语,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①satisfy one’s need 满足某人的需求
②can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事
[高分句型]
The future house will know what I want and satisfy my needs.(what引导的宾语从句)
【模拟18】(2025·江苏连云港·模拟预测)情系端午,传承有我。假如你是王明,你的外籍笔友Rick想请你介绍你最喜欢的端午节,请用英语给他回复邮件。词数90左右。内容包括:
Dear Rick,
I’m glad to know that you show great interest in traditional Chinese festivals. I’d like to introduce my favourite one, the Dragon Boat Festival to you.
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Yours,
Wang Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Rick,
I’m glad to know that you show great interest in traditional Chinese festivals. I’d like to introduce my favourite one, the Dragon Boat Festival to you.
I like the Dragon Boat Festival because it is a good time for my family members to get together. And we can enjoy some traditional activities. On that day, we can make rice dumplings with my family and eat them. Besides, people will hold dragon boat races. They are really exciting. In addition, we can share some stories about the festival to each other.
I want to introduce traditional Chinese festivals to people from all over the world and I also hope more people can learn more about Chinese culture.
Yours,
Wang Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为邮件;
②时态:主要时态为一般现在时;
③提示:文中是向朋友介绍端午节,从喜欢的原因、家人团聚、传统活动(包粽子、赛龙舟、分享故事等)等方面展开。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头表明写信目的,向朋友介绍自己最喜欢的端午节;
第二步,中间阐述喜欢端午节的原因,介绍端午节当天家人一起做的事,如包粽子、吃粽子,以及人们举行的赛龙舟活动,还提到分享节日故事;
第三步,结尾表达想要向全世界的人介绍中国传统节日,希望更多人了解中国文化的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce介绍
②traditional传统的
③activities活动
[高分句型]
I like the Dragon Boat Festival because it is a good time for my family members to get together.(此句使用“because”引导原因状语从句)
【模拟19】(2025·江苏扬州·一模)“千里之行,始于足下”,做好每一件事,成为更好的自己。假如你是李华,准备参加学校举办的英语活动,主题为“One Thing I Keep Doing”,根据以下图示,用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要求:
1.词数100左右,短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当发挥,使条理清晰,内容完整,意思连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。
One Thing I Keep Doing
I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic is “One Thing I Keep Doing”. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【答案】例文
One Thing I Keep Doing
I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic is “One Thing I Keep Doing”.
I love running and I have kept running for six years. When I was nine years old, I was often ill. So I made up my mind to run to keep healthy.At first, I was not good at sports and running was always my weakness. But my father encouraged me all the time. Sometimes I was so tired that I really wanted to give up. But I kept telling myself that I could make it. No matter what kind of difficulty I faced, I tried my best to keep running.
Now I do much better in running. I’m very healthy. I’m very proud of myself and I’m ready for any challenge in the future.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍自己在坚持做的某件事以及坚持做这件事的理由并说明坚持做这件事情给自己带来的影响。
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的收获和感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①make up one’s mind下定决心
②be good at擅长……
③give up放弃
④make it成功
[高分句型]
①When I was nine years old, I was often ill. (When引导的时间状语从句)
②But I kept telling myself that I could make it. (宾语从句)
【模拟20】(2025·江苏盐城·一模)袁隆平院士有两个梦想:“禾下乘凉梦”和“杂交稻覆盖全球梦”。带着梦想他创造了一个又一个奇迹。人人都有自己的梦想。你的梦想是什么?请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要点:
1. What is your dream?
2.Why do you have such a dream?
3. How do you plan to realize your dream?
要求:
1. 内容须包含所有要点,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and friends,
I’m happy to be here to share my dream with you.
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【答案】例文
Dear teachers and friends,
I’m happy to be here to share my dream with you. Life is of great value to all of us. We can only live once. It’s necessary for us to have a dream. My dream is to be a writer when I grow up. My favourite writer is Jane Austen, who wrote Pride and Prejudice. Her books are so perfect that I read them again and again and never get bored. How I want to be a great writer like Jane Austen! I hope to make my life more meaningful in this way.
In order to make my dream come true, I ought to spend my limited life carefully. It’s important to read a large number of great books and practise writing from time to time. I believe I can make my dream come true one day. I’m looking forward to the coming of that day!
That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己的梦想,可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题,介绍自己的梦想是什么及为什么有这样的梦想;
第二步,介绍计划如何实现自己的梦想;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①grow up长大
②again and again一遍又一遍
③a large number of大量的
[高分句型]
①My dream is to be a writer when I grow up. (when引导时间状语从句)
②Her books are so perfect that I read them again and again and never get bored. (so ... that引导结果状语从句)
【模拟21】(2025·江苏无锡·一模)无锡,江南水乡的璀璨明珠,被选为2025年央视春晚分会场,展现了其独特的文化魅力与现代化风貌。春晚分会场的设立,让全国观众领略无锡的自然之美、人文之韵与创新活力,为这座城市增添了新的光彩。请写一篇演讲稿,号召更多的人来无锡游玩,体验无锡之美。
注意:
(1)语句通顺,言之有理。(给出内容非限定性表达,可自主合理发挥);
(2)不得出现真实的人名和学校名;
(3)字数不少于90词;
(4)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总数。
Dear friends,
As one of the sub-venues for the 2025 Spring Festival Gala, Wuxi showed its unique charm and won high praise from all over the world.
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I hope all of you can come and enjoy the beauty of Wuxi. Thank you for your listening.
【答案】例文
Dear friends,
As one of the sub-venues for the 2025 Spring Festival Gala, Wuxi showed its unique charm and won high praise from all over the world.
This season is perfect for visiting Wuxi because the weather is mild and pleasant. You can enjoy the beautiful scenery of Taihu Lake and the ancient charm of the Grand Canal. Wuxi is also famous for its traditional culture, such as the Huishan clay figurines and the local opera. Don’t miss the delicious Wuxi cuisine, especially the sweet and savory Wuxi ribs. During your visit, remember to wear comfortable shoes and bring a camera to capture the stunning views. I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here!
I hope all of you can come and enjoy the beauty of Wuxi. Thank you for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:以一般现在时为主;
③提示:根据给出的内容要点写作,可适当添加细节,自主合理发挥,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,号召大家来无锡游玩;
第二步,介绍无锡的主要景点和特色文化等;
第三步,给出旅行中的注意事项,并表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①mild and pleasant温和宜人
②ancient charm古老魅力
③is famous for因……而著名
[高分句型]
①This season is perfect for visiting Wuxi because the weather is mild and pleasant. (原因状语从句)
②I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here! (宾语从句)
【模拟22】(2025·江苏常州·一模)假如你叫李华,你将代表学校参加我市中学生英语演讲比赛,讲的主题是“Learning to get along with our parents”。请你用英语一篇演讲稿,内容要点如下:
现象
1. 孩子和父母互相不够理解
原因 1. 父母过于关注孩子学业成绩
建议 ……
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;
3. 词数 100 左右。演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is “Learning to get along with our parents”. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【答案】参考例文
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is “Learning to get along with our parents”.
These days, most of us feel it hard to get along with our parents. We easily get angry for no reason and even don’t want to talk to them for days.
Here are some of the reasons. First, our parents care too much about our marks and it makes us stressed. Second, we are unwilling to communicate with them because we don’t think they can understand us.
It’s time for us to change. First, we can communicate with them by sharing our joys and worries with them. Then, we can help with some housework to show our love for them. Finally, we should achieve a balance between our schoolwork and hobbies so that they won’t feel worried about us.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先说明孩子和父母互相不够理解的现象;
第二步,介绍有这样现象的原因;
第三步,给出解决的建议。
[亮点词汇]
① too much太多
② be unwilling to不愿意
③ help with sth帮忙做某事
[高分句型]
①Second, we are unwilling to communicate with them because we don’t think they can understand us.(because引导原因状语从句)
②Finally, we should achieve a balance between our schoolwork and hobbies so that they won’t feel worried about us.(so that引导目的状语从句)
【模拟23】(2025·江苏常州·模拟预测)在丰富多彩的初中学习生活中,你一定积累了很多学习方法和经验吧!现校刊英文专栏以“Learning to learn”为题征稿。请你根据要求,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
Dear students,
Learning to learn is more important than learning itself. What good methods do you have when learning subjects? The following questions may help you.
1. What subject do you want to talk about?
2. What good learning methods do you have about the subject?
3. What are your feelings when you learn the subject?
We are looking forward to your sharing.
注意:1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.表达清楚,语言通顺,书写规范;
3.词数不少于100。文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello everyone! It’s my great honor to share my learning methods with you all.
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【答案】例文
Hello everyone! It’s my great honor to share my learning methods with you all. I’d like to talk about math.
First, I always preview the lessons before class and mark difficult points. During class, I take notes while listening carefully. After class, I do exercises to check my understanding. If I make mistakes, I write them in a notebook and review them weekly. Second, I use mind maps to connect different formulas. For example, I draw a diagram showing how algebra relates to geometry. This helps me remember rules better. Math makes me feel challenged but excited. When I solve a problem correctly, I feel confident.
Learning math is like solving puzzles—it’s hard but fun!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借用文章已给开头,引出主题,讨论数学科目;
第二步,根据题干的要点,介绍自己学习数学的具体方法;
第三步,分享学习感受并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①talk about谈论
②for example例如
[高分句型]
①If I make mistakes, I write them in a notebook and review them weekly.(条件状语从句)
②Learning math is like solving puzzles—it’s hard but fun!(动名词作主语)
【模拟24】(2025·江苏盐城·一模)生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近,无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、 朋友……),请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
注意事项:
1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容,仅供参考;
3. 词数在100个左右,演讲稿得首尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息;
5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Good afternoon, everyone!
It’s a great honor for me to speak here.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【答案】例文
Good afternoon, everyone!
It’s a great honor for me to speak here. Mum is the person I want to thank. She looks common, but she is the prettiest in my mind.
She is an excellent doctor. She works to high standards. In this way, she sets a good example to me. Also, she cares much about my study and my health. Though I don’t learn things quickly, Mum always stands by me and gives me support. When I fail, she encourages me. When I succeed, she cheers for me. She believes in me all the time. We make progress together.
It’s Mum who shapes my life. I can’t thank her too much.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己想感谢的人,可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题,表达自己想感谢的人是谁;
第二步,具体介绍这个人是如何影响自己的;
第三步,书写结语,表达感谢之情。
[亮点词汇]
①set a good example树立了一个好榜样
②cheer for为……欢呼
③all the time一直
[高分句型]
①Though I don’t learn things quickly, Mum always stands by me and gives me support. (though引导让步状语从句)
②When I succeed, she cheers for me. (when引导时间状语从句)
【模拟24】(2025·江苏南通·模拟预测)初中生活就要结束了,每一个即将毕业的初三学子都成长了许多。回顾自己三年的学习生活,你会发现我们得到了许多人的帮助,父母、老师和同学都对我们的成长起到了不可替代的作用。在最后一堂英语课上,你将代表你们小组发言,请根据下表提示要点写一篇发言稿。
回顾
美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获
感谢
老师的奉献、父母的支持、同学的帮助
倡议
1. 捐赠书籍
2. ……
3. ……
祝愿
学校更加美好、同学们前程似锦
注意:1. 必须包含表格中的所有要点,适当发挥,行文连贯;
2. 词数 90 左右,开头、结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
3. 不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。
Good afternoon, everyone! It’s great honour for me to make a speech here on behalf of our group. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening.
【答案】范文:
Good afternoon, everyone! It’s great honour for me to make a speech here on behalf of our group.
It has been 3 years since we began to study in such a beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years. I believe we can’t succeed without our teachers’ devotion, our parents’ support or our classmates’ help. I’d like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.
At this moment, I advise all of us to do something for our school, such us donating books, planting trees to make our school more beautiful. What’s more, we should study hard so that our school will be proud of us.
I hope our school will be much better and all of us will have a wonderful future.
That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“我很荣幸代表我们的小组在这里演讲。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——回顾、感谢、倡议和祝愿等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①make a speech做演讲
②What’s more而且
③on behalf of代表
[高分句型]
I hope our school will be much better and all of us will have a wonderful future. (宾语从句)
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专题19 书面表达(解析版)
江苏中考书面表达命题趋势
一、书信类为主(占比60%)
1.固定格式:开头和结尾已给出(如"Dear Kevin, ... Yours, Li Hua"),需严格遵循格式。
2.任务明确:要求回答具体问题(如制作礼物步骤、推荐自己当志愿者、给建议等)。
3.贴近生活:话题多为日常交流(如介绍节日、回复求助、社会实践计划)。
4.字数限制:90-100词左右,需精简语言,避免赘述。
5.跨文化交际:2024 年苏州卷可能涉及向外国友人介绍中国城市,需融合传统文化元素(如端午节习俗、名胜古迹)。
6.高频题型:建议信如“如何保护传统文化”“网络使用的利弊”;邀请函如“邀请外教参加校园活动”“社区环保活动设计”;感谢信如 “感谢老师的帮助”“感恩父母的付出”。
7.评分重点:内容完整性:覆盖题干所有要点(如 2023 年镇江卷需包含方案选择、理由、建议);语言得体性:使用礼貌用语(如 “I would appreciate it if...”),避免生硬表达;逻辑连贯性:通过 “First of all... Secondly... Finally...” 等连接词分层论述。
二、非书信类为辅(占比40%)
1.主题多样:涵盖文化传承(端午、苏轼)、环保倡议(美化苏州)、励志演讲(做更好的自己)、读后感等。
2.结构清晰:需分点论述(如"懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己"),逻辑性强。
3.开放性强:部分题目需自选角度(如"文化角vs菜园"),需结合自身经历或观点。
4.语言要求高:需使用高级词汇(如"patriotism")和复杂句型(如定语从句)。
5.思辨性增强:2024 年常州卷《那么旧,那样新》要求辩证分析传统与现代的关系,需结合具体案例(如古建筑保护与科技应用)。
6.跨学科融合:2023 年扬州卷《跨代组合》结合航天团队案例,考查团队合作与年龄差异的关系。
7.高频题型:议论文如“人工智能对生活的影响”“青少年心理健康问题”;记叙文如“成长中的一次挑战”“难忘的校园活动”;说明文如“垃圾分类指南”“科技产品介绍”。
8.评分重点:论点明确:议论文需在首段提出核心观点(如“环保需要全民参与”);细节描写:记叙文需通过动作、心理描写增强感染力(如“双手颤抖着按下发送键”);结构清晰:采用“总-分-总”结构,结尾升华主题(如“坚持让我收获了成长”)。
江苏中考书面表达满分策略
一、审题四步法
1.明确体裁:书信类需检查格式,非书信类需确定文体(议论文 / 记叙文 / 说明文)。
2.提取要点:用下划线标注题干关键词(如 “建议”“理由”“个人经历”)。
3.确定人称时态:书信类常用第一人称(I/We),议论文用一般现在时,记叙文用过去时。
4.字数要求:确保 80-100 词,避免超字数或字数不足。
二、构思三技巧
1.列大纲:书信类按 “开头-正文-结尾” 分三段;议论文按 “论点 - 论据 - 结论” 布局。
2.选素材:议论文需积累 3 个以上论据(如名人名言、数据、事例);记叙文需选取 2-3 个细节。
3.用模板:书信类开头用 “I am writing to...”,结尾用 “Looking forward to your reply.”;议论文开头用 “With the development of...”,结尾用 “In conclusion...”。
三、写作三原则
1.语言简洁:避免复杂句式,多用简单句(如 “There be 句型”“主谓宾结构”)。
2,亮点突出:每段使用一个高级词汇或句型(如 “not only... but also...”“定语从句”)。,3.卷面整洁:书写工整,避免连笔,保持段落分明(每段空一行)。
四、检查五要点
1.格式:书信类检查称呼、结尾是否正确。
2.语法:主谓一致、时态、介词搭配(如 “in the morning”“on Sunday”)。
3.拼写:重点检查高频易错词(如 “environment”“government”)。
4.标点:英文句号用 “.”,逗号后空格。
5.字数:用 “/” 标记每行字数,确保达标。
江苏中考书面表达15个满分句型
1.I am writing to you about the problem I am facing.
我写信是想告诉你我目前面临的问题。
2.I would like to recommend myself for the volunteer position.
我想推荐自己担任志愿者职位。
3.I believe that perseverance leads to success.
我相信毅力会带来成功。
4.The reason why I am writing is to share my experience.
我写信的原因是想分享我的经历。
5.In my opinion, teamwork is essential for success.
在我看来,团队合作对于成功至关重要。
6.I am glad to receive your letter and appreciate your advice.
我很高兴收到你的信并感谢你的建议。
7.I understand how you feel and can relate to your situation.
我理解你的感受,并能感同身受。
8.I used to dislike sports, but now I enjoy running.
我过去不喜欢运动,但现在我喜欢跑步。
9.If I am lucky enough to be chosen, I will do my best.
如果我有幸被选中,我会尽我最大的努力。
10.It is important to stay positive and focused.
保持积极和专注是很重要的。
11.We should take responsibility for our actions.
我们应该为自己的行为负责。
12.I believe that we can make a difference by volunteering.
我相信我们可以通过志愿服务来产生影响。
13.The more we practice, the better we will become at this skill.
我们练习得越多,这项技能就会变得越好。
14.I am proud to be a part of this community.
我很自豪能成为这个社区的一部分。
15. As long as we try our best, we will achieve our goals.
只要我们尽力,我们就会实现我们的目标。
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【限时练一:近年江苏中招真题·书面表达20篇】
【真题01】(2024·江苏连云港·中考真题)假如你是李华,你的交换生朋友Kevin很喜欢你亲手做的小礼物,他来信询问制作过程,请你给他回信,内容包括:
(1)你送的礼物是什么;
(2)你送此礼物的原因;
(3)制作的方法或过程。
注意:
(1)词数90左右,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made by myself.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【真题02】(2024·江苏淮安·中考真题)假如你是李华,你所在的阳光社区将于下个月开放社区图书馆,现面向全社区招募志愿者。请根据以下要点,用英语写一封自荐信。
你的优势
热爱阅读,乐于助人,做事细心
工作设想
鼓励居民多读书,每周推荐一本好书,……
志愿工作的意义
……从对他人和对自己两方面进行阐述
参考词汇:志愿工作 voluntary work
注意:
1. 100词左右,已给出部分不计入总词数;
2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Sir/Madam.
My name is Li Hua. I’m writing to recommend myself to be the volunteer of the library in our community. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I will be thankful if I get the chance.
【真题03】(2024·江苏常州·中考真题)假如你是李平,收到英国笔友 Peter的求助信,请你根据来信,按照要求写一封英文回信。
Dear Li Ping,
These days I’m going crazy! My teacher requires me to run for half an hour every morning. But I don’t like sports at all. I think it’s meaningless. What do you think of it? Could you share your sports experience and tell me what you have learned from it? Please give me some advice as well.
Yours,
Peter
注意:
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 词数100左右;文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ping
【真题04】(2024·江苏南通·中考真题)假如你是李华,将参加学校英语社团举行的主题为“A Friendly Smile”的交流分享活动,谈谈班级里与微笑有关的故事,请根据下面海报中的提示,写一篇交流稿。
A Friendly SmileTips for your sharing
·choose anything that happened in your class
·describe the story
·express your feelings
Please join us and share your story at 8:00 a. m. next Tuesday (June 25) at the Students’ Centre.
School English Club
注意:1. 词数 90左右,交流稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 交流稿中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua from Class 1. Grade 9. Today I like to share a story that happened in my class. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you often smile? Thank you!
【真题05】(2024·江苏徐州·中考真题)假定你是徐州的一名九年级学生李华。你校英文报正组织题为“A famous person in the history of Xuzhou”的征文活动,你选择的人物是苏轼(1077—1079年间任徐州知州)。请结合以下要点写一篇英语短文,参加征文活动。
注意:
1. 征文需包括以上三个要点;
2. 词数90左右;
3. 征文中不得泄露个人信息。
提示词:苏堤 Su Causeway 黄楼 Huanglou Pavilion
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【真题06】(2024·江苏镇江·中考真题)初中三年校园生活丰富多彩,有些活动一定令你难忘。近期,你校英文报举办“The School Activity I Will Never Forget”的主题征文活动。
要求:
1.参考下图,确定至少一次活动并详细介绍,可适当发挥;
2.文章不少于90词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
The School Activity I Will Never Forget
In the past three years, there have been many colorful activities in our school. I will never forget
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【真题07】(2024·江苏宿迁·中考真题)唯有不断成长,才能遇见更好的自己。你校正在开展主题为“做更好的自己”的演讲比赛。假如你是李华,请以“To be a better self”为题写一篇演讲稿,从懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己三个方面谈一谈自己的理解。
To be a better self
懂感恩
敬爱父母;服务社区……
亲自然
保护环境;关爱动物……
爱自己
健康生活;培养兴趣……
注意事项:
1.内容必须包括表格中的要点,并适当发挥1-2点;
2.词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
To be a better self
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to be here to give a speech about “To be a better self”.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【真题08】(2024·江苏无锡·中考真题)传统节日是中华文化的重要组成部分。学校正开展“中华文化周”活动,今年的主题是“交朋友,传文化”。假设你是李华,请你给国外的笔友Tom发一封英文邮件,向他介绍一个中国传统节日(时间、庆祝方式等)。注意事项:
1. 邮件内容须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数不少于90个,邮件开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称;
4. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Dear Tom,
Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country?
Yours truly
Li Hua
【真题09】(2024·江苏苏州·中考真题)你校English Reading Club正在组织一次英文小说读书分享会,本周阅读内容为Auggie’s Story(阅读D篇)。请从以下两个标题中任选一个,写一篇英文读后感。
选择一:以Sometimes people surprise us为题,内容包括:
1.你对这句话的理解;
2.结合实际生活举例说明;
3.你得到的启发。
选择二:以Trouble is a friend为题,内容包括:
1.你对这句话的理解;
2.结合实际生活举例说明;
3.你得到的启发。
注意:
1.词数:100左右;
2.请先填写你所选的标题,再写文章;
3.照抄阅读语篇不得分;
4.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Title: ____________
After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【真题10】(2024·江苏扬州·中考真题)端午节是中国四大传统节日之一。为加深中华文化理解,激发爱国主义情怀,某英语报“Culture”专栏正面向中学生举行以“Duanwu Festival—A celebration of patriotism”为题的征文比赛。请根据以下问题提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示:
(1) What is Duanwu Festival?
(importance, date, rice dumplings, dragon boat races)
(2) Why is Duanwu Festival also widely accepted as a celebration of patriotism?
(spirit behind the story of Qu Yuan, spirit of dragon boat racing)
(3) As a teenager, how can we practise the spirit of patriotism?
(1. …;2. …)
参考词汇:patriotism n.爱国主义; patriotic adj.爱国的; poet n.诗人;
all ethnic groups 全民族; the lunar May fifth 农历五月初五
要求:(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
(3)词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Duanwu Festival — A celebration of patriotism
Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival.
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【真题11】(2023·江苏淮安·中考真题)假如你是李华,你们学校的英语社团将开展以“体育锻炼,健康你我”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请以“Better Exercise, Better Life”为题,根据以下要点,写一篇英语演讲稿。
我的日常锻炼
1. 最喜欢的锻炼方式
2. 锻炼时长
3. 带来益处(不少于两点)
给同学的建议
1. 校内锻炼方式(不少于两点)
2. 校外锻炼方式(不少于两点)
号召
1. 希望大家多锻炼
2. …
参考词汇:做早操do morning exercises
上体育课 have PE lessons
压力减轻 feel less stressed
合理锻炼 exercise properly
注意:
1. 词数在80—100之间,已给出的文字不计入总词数;
2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Better Exercise, Better Life
Dear classmates,
I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “Better Exercise, Better Life”.
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That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
【真题12】(2023·江苏盐城·中考真题)在人生的旅程中,亲人、朋友、老师、书籍等陪伴我们同行,助力我们成长。学校英语俱乐部正组织题为“Being with You”的征文比赛,请根据提示,写一篇短文参赛。
1. Who/What do you always like being with?
2. Why do you like being with him/her/it?
(Give two or three reasons)
…
注意事项:
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
2. 词数100左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Being with You
You’ve always been my sunshine. I like being with you, …
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【真题13】(2023·江苏常州·中考真题)当前,有些学生忽视倾听的作用,针对该情况,请你根据要点提示,用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿,阐述倾听的重要性。
要点:
1.在学校生活中要倾听及理由;
2.在日常生活中要倾听及理由。
注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数100左右;文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Listening carefully plays an important role in our life.
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【真题14】(2023·江苏南通·中考真题)热心公益,积极为社会作力所能及的贡献是新时代初中生责任意识的表现。请你从以下社会行为中选择一种或另选一种相关活动,用英语写一篇关于今年暑假准备做的一次社会实践活动的短文。要求表达清楚“做什么、为何做、怎样做”。
注意:1. 词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
参考词汇:responsibility n. 责任;义务
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to have a social practice activity.
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【真题15】(2023·江苏镇江·中考真题)假如你是李华,你们学校整理出一块空地,将用于拓宽学生活动和实践的空间。校英语报登载了校方初拟的两种方案,就这块空地建设文化角还是菜园征求意见。请根据提示给校报写一封信谈谈你的想法和建议。
A Culture Corner
A Vegetable Garden
●display art works
●share ideas and feelings
●hold activities (fashion shows, …)
●develop a sense of beauty
●…
●work with classmates
●learn farming skills
●harvest vegetables (tomatoes, …)
●form the habit of labour (劳动)
●…
要求:
1.所写内容必须包括一种方案的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2.对你所选择的方案说明理由,并对其提出建议;
3.文章不少于90词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m happy to hear that there is an empty area in our school for building a Culture Corner or a Vegetable Garden. In my opinion, it’s better to ...
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Yours,
Li Hua
【真题16】(2023·江苏徐州·中考真题)假定你是李华。你班交换留学生Simon即将返校,他对“校园科技周”非常感兴趣,他写了一封邮件向你询问相关信息,请你根据邮件内容和所给提示写封回信。
注意:
1.词数90左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.邮件需包括所给要点,可适当增加细节,使内容完整通顺;
3.邮件中不得泄露个人信息;
4.请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hi Simon,
I’m very happy to tell you about our School Technology Week.
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I’m sure you will enjoy the Technology Week.
Li Hua
【真题17】(2023·江苏宿迁·中考真题)“双减”政策推行之后,中学生的学习及生活发生了很大的变化。为了达成“五育”并举的培养目标,你校开展了丰富的延时服务课程并鼓励学生参与志愿服务。某报社想了解这方面的情况。假如你是李华,请你根据以下提示写一封英文邮件进行简单介绍。
延时服务
参加各种各样的课程,比如音乐、篮球等;
……(你的情况)
志愿服务
帮助他人解决问题;
…… (举例说明)
你的收获
提升能力,更加自信;
……(补充1-2点)
注意事项:
1. 词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Dear Editor,
I am glad to tell you something about the after-school services in our school and the voluntary work we do.
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Li Hua
【真题18】(2023·江苏无锡·中考真题)青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题,为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏,倾听读者的心声,并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华,最近也遇上了些烦心事,请给该专栏发一封英文邮件,讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。
注意事项:
(1)邮件内容须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
(2)词数在100左右,邮件开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment.
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I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【真题19】(2023·江苏泰州·中考真题)泰州是著名的教育之乡。你的英国朋友想了解泰州的教育,想请你用英语介绍一下,你列出如下提纲:
1. 良好的教育环境(校园美丽,名人众多……写1-2点);
2. 优秀的老师;
3. 自己的学习表现。
要求:
1. 包含所有要点,表达清晰,过渡合理,衔接自然,可适当拓展;
2. 不得使用真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息;
3. 词数 100 左右。
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【真题20】(2023·江苏苏州·中考真题)Happy Home Club本期的主题是“How to make Suzhou more beautiful”,你打算以“Starting from me and now”为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1. 触动你的一件事情;
2. 这件事给你的启示;
3. 你的倡议。
注意:
1. 词数:100左右。
2. 内容完整(照抄阅读语篇不得分)
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Starting from me and now
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【限时练二:2025年江苏名校好题调研书面表达25篇】
【模拟01】(2025·江苏南京·模拟预测)假定你是晨光中学初三学生李华,学校英语角邀请你分享“AI助力英语学习”的经验。请根据以下提示,写一封80—100词的英文建议信,给同龄朋友分享AI工具 (如Doubao、DeepSeek) 的使用心得和建议,并鼓励同学善用AI,做学习的主人。
要点:
1. How has AI helped you with your English studies?
2. What suggestions can you offer teenagers on how to properly use AI tools?
注意:
①内容涵盖所有要点,全文连贯通顺;
②已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数;
③文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【模拟02】(2025·江苏无锡·一模)假如你是林丹,你的美国笔友Tom来信表示近期学习压力较大,不知如何缓解。请你回信,介绍你最喜欢的一种放松方式 (如运动、阅读、听音乐、画画等) ,并说明理由,同时分享一次你的相关经历。
注意事项:
1. 回信内容须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意:
2. 词数不少于90个,回信开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
3. 回信中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称;
4. 回信必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter. We are busy with our study, but we should learn how to achieve a balance between work and rest. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my experience can help you.
Yours truly,
Lin Dan
【模拟03】(24-25九年级下·江苏南京·阶段练习)假如你是中学生李明,你的英国好友Alan来信询问你的近况。中考 (the Entrance Exam to Senior High School) 在即,你们班最近召开了以“How to study efficiently (高效地)”为主题的班会。请你根据以下信息给他写一封信,并和他交流一下自己怎样在努力学习的同时,劳逸结合减轻压力。
Opinions from Class Meeting
Student 1: Good learning attitude (态度).
Student 2: Better study methods.
Student 3: …
Your opinions
About work-life balance
Dear Alan,
How is everything going?
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【模拟04】(24-25九年级下·江苏苏州·阶段练习)Write a letter of at least 80 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一封不少于80个词的信,标点符号不占格。信的开头和署名已给,不计入总字数。)
假设你是初三学生李华,在学校举办的国际学生交流活动中结识了一位外国朋友Zoe。随着活动的结束,Zoe即将返回她的国家。为了表达你的友谊和对她的美好祝愿,你决定送给她一份蕴含苏州传统文化特色的礼物。请写一封信,随信附上这份礼物。信中包含以下内容:
(1)对这份礼物的简介(包括名称、特点、用途等);
(2)你选择这份礼物的原因。
注意:1.信中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分; 2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Dear Zoe,
It was great having you here.
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【模拟05】(24-25九年级下·江苏南通·开学考试)假如你是Kris,你校试行在课间播放音乐,你班的同学对此进行了讨论,看法不同,多数学生赞同,部分学生反对。请根据表格中所提供的信息,给校长写一封信,介绍大家的观点,并谈谈自己的看法。
Pros
Cons
Reason
1. make… feel happy
2. help… relax…
3. improve study efficiency
1. cannot get the expected results, as the break is short
2. in the next class some students are still lost in the music
Your Opinion
…
要求:
1. 内容完整,意思连贯,书写规范;
2. 必须用上表格中的提示信息,80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:study efficiency学习效果,expected预期的,effect影响,peace安静,results结果
Dear Headmaster,
We had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave the ideas.
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【模拟06】(2025·江苏苏州·模拟预测)假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Mike写信告诉你他对DeepSeek很感兴趣,你需要给他写一封回信,要点如下:
1. 向Mike介绍DeepSeek是中国自主研发的新兴AI工具,非常受欢迎。
2. 告诉Mike你使用DeepSeek学英语,解难题,写文章;DeepSeek还帮你规划旅行和提供健康生活建议等。
3. 建议Mike使用DeepScek学汉语。
1. 词数80到100字;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 提示词:DeepSeek (深度求索) AI(人工智能) tool (工具) 研发 develop
Dear Mike,
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Li Hua
【模拟07】(24-25九年级上·江苏泰州·期末)你校下学期将举行主题为“Fun with English”的英语节活动,为此校英语报刊登了一份征求活动建议的通知。假如你是初三学生刘强,请给英语报的编辑写一封信,内容包括:
1.你认为英语节活动会给你们的学习生活带来哪些积极意义?
2.请为学校英语节推荐一项活动,并阐述理由。
活动提示(仅供参考):
English short drama show;
Sharing a good read in English;
Telling good Chinese stories in English;
English chorus (合唱) competition …
3.针对你推荐的活动,九年级学生可以在寒假期间做哪些准备?请给出你的建议。
注意:
1.要点齐全,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2.词数100左右,信件开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.信件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear Editor,
I’m happy to hear that we will have an English Festival next term.
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Yours sincerely,
Liu Qiang
【模拟08】(24-25九年级上·江苏南通·期末)学校将要进行学生会换届选举,假如你是交换生Simon,想推荐你班的班长陈启同学担任学生会主席。请从以下图示中至少选择或自拟三种能力介绍陈启,并用英文写一封推荐信。
注意:
1. 词数90词左右,推荐信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 表达时请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Simon from Class 1, Grade 9. I’m writing to recommend our monitor Chen Qi to be the chairperson of the Students’ Union. I think he is an excellent student of great abilities.
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In a word, I think Chen Qi is the most suitable person for the position. I hope that you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Simon
【模拟09】(2024·江苏南京·三模)你收到了澳大利亚笔友Simon的来信,请根据来信内容给他回复。
Dear Li Hua,
How are you doing? I am really happy to tell you that we’ re planning a two-day visit to China. I wonder which city you think is well worth a visit. Why do you recommend it? Have you been there before? Can you share something special you have experienced with us?
Yours,
Simon
注意:
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3. 词数80左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Simon,
Welcome to China! The city I want to recommend to you is …
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I hope my recommendation is of great value to you!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【模拟10】(2024·江苏泰州·二模)“双减”后,学校创立了许多新的社团。假如你是李华,在学校的公众号上看到社团招募新成员的信息,请用英语写一封申请信,写明你想加入的某一个或者某两个社团名称、自身情况、加入理由以及希望。
注意事项:
1. 信件需包含至少两个理由,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺,意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名, 校名等相关信息;
3. 词数在100个左右,信件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m glad to see the notice on our school public account.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【模拟11】(2025·江苏常州·模拟预测)时间在不经意中从指尖划过,转眼我们即将毕业。蓦然回首,成长的路上留下一串串或深或浅的脚印,记载着欢乐和忧伤,伴随我们一路走来。请根据提示,任选一点或自拟,分享你的成长故事。
Growing up
1. Knowing myself
2. Dealing with problems
3. Getting on with others
4. …
注意:
1. 词数100左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容完整(照抄阅读语篇不得分);
3. 文中不得出现与学生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Growing up
How times flies! Now we are Grade Nine students. I feel happy and sometimes sad when growing up. Here is what I’d like to share with you.
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【模拟12】(2025·江苏盐城·一模)习惯是人生的根基,学生时期播下自律的种子,未来方能收获丰硕的果实。——陶行知。最近,你班就“学生的良好学习习惯和生活习惯”话题展开了广泛讨论。请你根据下表所提示的信息, 用英语写一篇题为“A good habit,a successful life”的短文。
注意:
1.词数100左右。短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.短文须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
A good habit, a successful life
Recently our class have had a discussion on students’ good habits. In order to make our life successful,we should have good habits of learning.
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In a word, good habits will give us a successful life.
【模拟13】(2025·江苏南京·模拟预测)黑发不知勤学早,白首方悔读书迟。请根据以下征稿内容,为校英语广播站写一篇短文。
Welcome to our radio program. This week we invite you to say something about Tangping (躺平):
What Tangping means for teenagers;
Whether you choose Tangping and why;
Your advice to teenagers who choose Tangping.
We hope to hear from you.
注意:
1.内容涵盖所有要点,全文连贯通顺。
2.词数80左右。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
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【模拟14】(2025·江苏无锡·一模)假如你是李华,你校写作俱乐部本期的主题是“The rose’s in her hand, the scent in mine (赠人玫瑰,手有余香)”,请你以此写一篇英语短文,内容包括:
1. 你对这句话的理解;
2. 你的亲身经历;
3. 你的感想或倡议。
注意事项:词数100左右。
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【模拟15】(2025·江苏南京·模拟预测)某英文网站正在举办征文活动,请根据网站征文要求,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
Beautiful school day wanted!
This new global site is a place for students to share their ideas. We are looking for your beautiful school day to inspire (鼓舞) our readers. Did you help anyone at school? Did you enjoy a beautiful song in your art lesson? Did you have an amazing experience in the school lab?
Your school life is full of beauty. Choose a beautiful school day. Write a passage to tell us what you did that day and why you think it was beautiful. Send your writing to us right now!
注意:
1.内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺。
2.词数80左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
My Beautiful School Day
My school life is full of beauty.
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【模拟16】(2025·江苏徐州·模拟预测)随着旅游经济的蓬勃发展,徐州成为游客的网红打卡地。徐州文旅向广大青少年征集文章来向世界各地游客宣传、展现徐州的“美”,邀请世界各地游客来徐州游玩。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,用英文写一篇短文介绍徐州的“美”。
注意:1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 不得在作文出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
3. 语句连贯,词数80-100个左右,作文的标题和开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
可能用到的词汇:戏马台(The horse-playing tower);龟山汉墓(Tomb of Han Dynasty in Guishan);云龙山(Yun Long Mountain);徐州方特乐园(Xuzhou Fangte Amusement Park);地锅鸡(Pot chicken);把子肉(Bazi meat);烙馍(baked bun);barbecue;Sha soup
The Beauty of Xuzhou
Today I would like to show you the beauty of Xuzhou.
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【模拟17】(2024·江苏南京·二模)你在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到 “Life in 2045” 的征稿启事。请根据图片内容,选择至少2个方面来写,畅想未来生活,并用英语写一篇短文投稿。
注意:
1. 内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺。
2. 不少于80词 (已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Life in 2045
Life in 2045 will be quite different.
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【模拟18】(2025·江苏连云港·模拟预测)情系端午,传承有我。假如你是王明,你的外籍笔友Rick想请你介绍你最喜欢的端午节,请用英语给他回复邮件。词数90左右。内容包括:
Dear Rick,
I’m glad to know that you show great interest in traditional Chinese festivals. I’d like to introduce my favourite one, the Dragon Boat Festival to you.
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Yours,
Wang Ming
【模拟19】(2025·江苏扬州·一模)“千里之行,始于足下”,做好每一件事,成为更好的自己。假如你是李华,准备参加学校举办的英语活动,主题为“One Thing I Keep Doing”,根据以下图示,用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要求:
1.词数100左右,短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当发挥,使条理清晰,内容完整,意思连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。
One Thing I Keep Doing
I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic is “One Thing I Keep Doing”. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【模拟20】(2025·江苏盐城·一模)袁隆平院士有两个梦想:“禾下乘凉梦”和“杂交稻覆盖全球梦”。带着梦想他创造了一个又一个奇迹。人人都有自己的梦想。你的梦想是什么?请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要点:
1. What is your dream?
2.Why do you have such a dream?
3. How do you plan to realize your dream?
要求:
1. 内容须包含所有要点,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and friends,
I’m happy to be here to share my dream with you.
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【模拟21】(2025·江苏无锡·一模)无锡,江南水乡的璀璨明珠,被选为2025年央视春晚分会场,展现了其独特的文化魅力与现代化风貌。春晚分会场的设立,让全国观众领略无锡的自然之美、人文之韵与创新活力,为这座城市增添了新的光彩。请写一篇演讲稿,号召更多的人来无锡游玩,体验无锡之美。
注意:
(1)语句通顺,言之有理。(给出内容非限定性表达,可自主合理发挥);
(2)不得出现真实的人名和学校名;
(3)字数不少于90词;
(4)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总数。
Dear friends,
As one of the sub-venues for the 2025 Spring Festival Gala, Wuxi showed its unique charm and won high praise from all over the world.
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I hope all of you can come and enjoy the beauty of Wuxi. Thank you for your listening.
【模拟22】(2025·江苏常州·一模)假如你叫李华,你将代表学校参加我市中学生英语演讲比赛,讲的主题是“Learning to get along with our parents”。请你用英语一篇演讲稿,内容要点如下:
现象
1. 孩子和父母互相不够理解
原因 1. 父母过于关注孩子学业成绩
建议 ……
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;
3. 词数 100 左右。演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is “Learning to get along with our parents”. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【模拟23】(2025·江苏常州·模拟预测)在丰富多彩的初中学习生活中,你一定积累了很多学习方法和经验吧!现校刊英文专栏以“Learning to learn”为题征稿。请你根据要求,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
Dear students,
Learning to learn is more important than learning itself. What good methods do you have when learning subjects? The following questions may help you.
1. What subject do you want to talk about?
2. What good learning methods do you have about the subject?
3. What are your feelings when you learn the subject?
We are looking forward to your sharing.
注意:1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.表达清楚,语言通顺,书写规范;
3.词数不少于100。文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello everyone! It’s my great honor to share my learning methods with you all.
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【模拟24】(2025·江苏盐城·一模)生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近,无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、 朋友……),请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
注意事项:
1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容,仅供参考;
3. 词数在100个左右,演讲稿得首尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息;
5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Good afternoon, everyone!
It’s a great honor for me to speak here.
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That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【模拟24】(2025·江苏南通·模拟预测)初中生活就要结束了,每一个即将毕业的初三学子都成长了许多。回顾自己三年的学习生活,你会发现我们得到了许多人的帮助,父母、老师和同学都对我们的成长起到了不可替代的作用。在最后一堂英语课上,你将代表你们小组发言,请根据下表提示要点写一篇发言稿。
回顾
美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获
感谢
老师的奉献、父母的支持、同学的帮助
倡议
1. 捐赠书籍
2. ……
3. ……
祝愿
学校更加美好、同学们前程似锦
注意:1. 必须包含表格中的所有要点,适当发挥,行文连贯;
2. 词数 90 左右,开头、结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
3. 不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。
Good afternoon, everyone! It’s great honour for me to make a speech here on behalf of our group. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening.
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