内容正文:
Section B Writing 写作导学
英语 八年级下册 人教版
原创新课堂
【话题剖析】
本单元以“文学和音乐”为话题,学习运用现在完成时态谈论已经读过的书和已经听过的音乐。文学和音乐领域都有丰富的作品、独特的风格、鲜明的个性,并且它们都能产生潜移默化、塑造灵魂的效果。
【写作目标】
阅读相关文章并能将目标语言、短语及语法运用到写作中,会写一篇文章介绍某一人物或某一作品。
假如你是李明。今年“世界读书日”(World Book Day)的主题是“Read and Share”,为此你校英语俱乐部正开展征文活动。请你根据右边思维导图内容提示,用英语写一篇短文谈谈你读过的一本书。
注意:1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名;
3.语句连贯,词数70左右。
My Favorite Storybook
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【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达是一篇话题作文,要求根据思维导图介绍你读过的一本书。写作时,使用第一人称;时态使用一般现在时和一般过去时。
【审题列纲】
结构 素材要点
开头:引出主题 我想介绍一本书(I would like to introduce a book)
这本书是写给儿童的(It is a book for children)
正文:介绍书的内容,并说明喜欢该书的理由 主角是一个叫……的女孩(The main character is a girl called...)
做了一个奇怪的梦(have a strange dream)
发生了很多奇妙的事(a lot of amazing things happened)
我喜欢这本书是因为……(I like the book because...)
语言不太难理解(the language is not too difficult to understand)
结尾:推荐这本书 我强烈推荐这本书(strongly recommend this book)
【句型仿写】
1.Little Women is a classic about four sisters growing up.
Tom Sawyer is ___________________________________________.
2.Listening to music is a good way to wake up.
_________ is a good way __________.
3.It reminds us that the best things in life are free.
It reminds us that ___________________________________.
a fantastic book that is about adventure of a boy
Reading
to relax
studying without thinking is dangerous
4.My favorite kind of books is science fiction.
The first line of the song list is Love Yourself.
5.I introduce the book to you because it's full of amazing puzzles.
I like reading best it not only broadens our horizon,but also enriches our minds (答案不唯一).
because
【佳作欣赏】
My Favorite Storybook
Reading books not only broadens our horizons,but also enriches our minds.The book I like best is Cinderella by Marcia,whose character is a beautiful girl called Cinderella.She lived with her cruel stepmother and two stepsisters after her father died and they made her do all the housework.Cruel as her stepmother was to her,Cinderella still lived an optimistic life.At a party held by the king for the prince to choose the girl he loved,with the help of the fairy,the prince fell in love with her and they got married and lived together happily.The reason why I like the storybook best is that it is
very interesting.Besides,it's a book for children and the language isn't too difficult to understand.
After reading the story,I feel that because Cinderella is a kind and beautiful girl who had never done anything bad to anyone,she lives a happy life at last.
I strongly recommend this book and I hope you will like it,too.
一、回答问题。
The Summer of Riley is a fantastic book.It tells a heartwarming story about a boy and his best friend—a dog.
It happened in the countryside.William was an 11yearold boy.His grandfather just died a month ago before he got Riley.Since he felt so sad,his mother decided to get him a dog to cheer him up.That's how Riley came to the family.
William and Riley fell in love with each other at first sight.They soon became good friends.However,after a little while,Riley began to make trouble.To make things worse,Riley attacked their neighbor's horse.The neighbor called the police.The police decided to put Riley to death.With the help of William's friend,Grace,both of them tried to stop the police from putting Riley to death.
Eve Bunting did a wonderful job of creating this story.It isn't just about a boy and a dog that get into all kinds of trouble.It is an enjoyable book about loyalty (忠诚),trust,and most of all,friendship.Throughout the whole book,it tells the process of William and Riley growing closer as time goes on.A dog is really a man's best friend.
1.What are the main characters of the book?
The main characters of the book are William and Riley.
2.When did the story happen?
The story happened when William was 11 (years old).
3.3.What made things worse according to the passage?
Riley attacked their neighbor's horse.
4.Who is the writer of the book?
The writer of the book is Eve Bunting.
5.What is the book about?
The book is about loyalty,trust and friendship.
二、书面表达。
今年“世界读书日(World Book Day)”的主题是“Read and Share”,为此你校英语俱乐部正开展征文活动,要求介绍你所读过的一本书。你草拟了写作流程,请根据下面思维导图用英语写一篇短文参加活动。
注意:1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名;
3.语句连贯,词数70左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
This year's World Book Day is coming and I would like to introduce a book. It is a book for children and the name is Alice in Wonderland.The main character is a girl called Alice.One day,Alice was sitting with her sister by a river.Alice was bored and fell asleep.She had a strange dream.In her dream,a lot of amazing things happened.For example,she followed a white rabbit into a deep hole with a big hall at its bottom.I like the book because it tells such an interesting story and the language is not too difficult to understand.
I strongly recommend this book and I hope you will like it,too.
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