内容正文:
专题19 活动方案项目选择类英语作文
目录
题型综述 1
解题攻略 2
中考练场 5
【题型解读】
“活动方案项目化”类作文大致都是集中在下面几种题型:项目选择+理由阐述;活动方案设计+理由阐述、评价反思改进、分享+看法等,但是活动方案的修订、完善还没有出现。下面对这一类型作文进行解析,供同学们、老师们参考!项目选择类英语作文命题规律:首先,给出一个特定的主题或选项清单。然后,要求学生从选项中选择一个,并进行简要介绍。通常要求学生说明选择此项的原因或个人经历。
【命题规律】
情境性与实用性结合:题目通常设置具体情境(如学校活动、社区活动等),要求考生根据情境选择合适的活动项目,并阐述理由。
综合性考查:考查考生的逻辑思维能力、语言表达能力以及对活动的规划和组织能力。
开放性与引导性结合:题目提供一定框架(如活动目的、内容等),考生需在此基础上发挥创造力,设计具体的活动方案。
【解题技巧】
阅读题目并仔细理解每个选项的含义和背景。确保你对每个选项都有一定的了解。
在选择一个主题之前,考虑自己对哪个选项更有兴趣,或者是否有相关的个人经验。
在写作时,首先简要介绍选中的主题。可以提供一些背景信息,例如该领域的起源、特点或重要性。
接下来,说明你对该主题的兴趣或个人经历。可以分享你是如何接触到这个主题的,以及它对你产生的影响。最后,总结你的观点,强调选择该主题的重要性和你对其的热情。
【考点诠释】
(一)命题考向
▶主题聚焦
围绕学校活动、社会实践、团队合作等场景展开,贴近学生生活。
常见类型:校园活动策划、志愿服务项目、学习计划选择等。
▶能力考查
策划能力:设计活动方案或选择项目,说明具体安排。
分析能力:分析选择理由,说明其优势或意义。
表达能力:清晰表达观点,语言流畅。
▶语言要求
语言简洁明了,避免冗长复杂的句子。
逻辑清晰,使用连接词增强连贯性。
词汇丰富,句式多样。
(二)写作思路
开头:根据题目要求,确定选择活动的主题,吸引读者注意。
主体:
活动项目选择:列举几个活动项目,并说明选择的理由(如与主题相关、受众兴趣等)。
活动流程设计:详细描述活动的流程,包括时间、地点、参与人员、活动内容等。
结尾:强调活动的教育意义或社会价值,提升文章的深度,或表达对活动成功的期望或展望。
(三)高分句式库
引入话题
Our school is planning to…, and I would like to suggest…
Faced with several options, I have decided to choose…
方案或选择说明
The activity will be held on… at…
The project includes… and requires…
选择理由分析
This activity is not only fun but also educational.
The project will help us develop…
总结升华
I believe that this activity will be a great success.
I am confident that the project will bring us many benefits.
【典题举隅】
(2025·上海长宁·一模)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (请根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Alex发邮件告诉你,最近他已经成功报名参加交换生项目 (exchange program),下学期来你学校交流学习两个月,想了解你校的特色课程 (feature course),请你给Alex回信,表示欢迎并介绍你认为最有特色的学校课程,如:运动、艺术、编程 (programming)、茶艺 (tea art) 等等并说明理由。
Dear Alex,
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Yours,
Li Hua
第一套
(2022·上海中考真题)
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
你校将增设一间学生活动室(student activity room),现有以下六种关于活动室用途的设想:
读者之家(Reading corner) 劳技工坊(Mini workshop) 艺体天地(Arts and sports centre)
义卖集市(Charity market) 科创小屋(High-tech lab) 心灵驿站(Heart-to-heart room)
学校正通过校报了解学生的意向。假设你是李华,请给校报张老师写封邮件,表明你最喜欢的一种设想,并说明理由。
(注意:1. 邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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第二套
(2021·上海·中考真题)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
你的学校正在为以下活动课招募教学小助手(teaching assistant):
球类(Ball Games) 演讲(Speech) 器乐(Instrumental Music)
戏剧(Drama) 手工(Handicrafts) 摄影(Photography)
假设你是李华,请给教导处张老师写封信,结合你的兴趣和特长,说明你想担任哪一门活动课的小助手及理由。
注意:
1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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第三套
(2023·上海黄浦·二模)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
假设你是李华,暑假期间,你将参加一个国际夏令营。在夏令营期间,各国青少年都要介绍自己国家的文化,包含语言(language)、节日(festivals)、饮食(food and drinks)、服饰(clothing)、文学艺术(art and literature)、传统技艺(traditional skills)等不同方面。请你选择其中一种形式,向外国小朋友介绍中国文化,并说明理由。
注意:1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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第四套
(2023·上海宝山·二模)Write at least 60 words according to the situation given.(请根据所给情境, 写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格,邮件格式已给)
美好的初中生活即将画上句号,你的学校正在征集初三年级毕业典礼的活动方案。假如你是李华,请你给教导处王老师写一份邮件。阐述你对毕业典礼活动的初步设想,重点设计1-2个活动并说明你的设计理由。
以下活动仅供参考:
诗歌朗诵(poetry reading) 小组唱(group singing) 脱口秀(talk show)
制作微视频(making short videos) 小品表演(short play) 赠送礼物(giving gifts)
(注意:1.文中不得出现任何真实人各、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。)
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第五套
(2024·上海浦东新·二模)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
学校呼吁师生共建美好校园。学生会 (the student union) 收到来自同学们的众多提议(proposal)。请代表学生会选取以下一项提议写一份倡议书。谈一谈提出该倡议的理由并给出具体实施建议。
Recycling wastepaper 废纸回收
Volunteering in the canteen 食堂志愿工作
Daily jogging 每日慢跑
Weekly talent show 每周才艺秀
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第六套
(24-25九年级下·浙江杭州·阶段练习)假设你是王涛,你的澳大利亚朋友Emma即将来中国参加文化交流活动。请根据以下信息写一封邮件,为她推荐一个合适的文化体验营。
Cultural Camp A (Historical City)◆Time: 1 day
◆Activities:
Visit ancient walls and palaces.
Make simple lanterns with teachers.
Enjoy local meals.
Cultural Camp B (Water Town)◆Time: 2 days
◆Activities:
Take photos and draw old buildings.
Design colorful lanterns.
Cook snacks with villagers.
注意:
(1)邮件需包含所选文化营的时间和至少两点活动信息,可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
(2)词数80左右,邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Emma,
It’s wonderful to learn about your upcoming cultural trip to China!
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Yours,
Wang Tao
第七套
(2025·浙江温州·一模)假如你是李华,英国交换生Amy即将来你校体验特色课程。请根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向她推荐一个合适的课程。
Traditional Chinese culture is amazing. I love to work with others.
Chinese Kungfu Course on the playground
in groups
learn the history and do kungfu
Chinese Cooking Course in the cooking room
in groups
cook Chinese food and share it
注意:
1.邮件需包含所选课程的至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数80左右;邮件的首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Amy,
I am happy to know that you are coming to experience the special courses in my school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
第八套
(2024·浙江嘉兴·模拟预测)某英语网站正在开展“劳动教育创意方案”的征集活动,校学生会策划了两个方案。假设你是学生会成员,请你选择其中一个方案,用英语写一篇短文,介绍活动内容及意义。要点提示如下:
Getting Labour Education
Plans
Plan A: At school
Plan B: At home
Activities
·grow vegetables
·learn paper cutting
·…
·cook meals
·tidy up the room
·…
Meanings
·get close to nature
·know more about Chinese culture
·…
·improve life skills
·develop independence (独立)
·…
注意:(1)短文必须包含表中你所选方案的所有信息,并适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3)词数:80~100。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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专题19 活动方案项目选择类英语作文
目录
题型综述 1
解题攻略 2
中考练场 5
【题型解读】
“活动方案项目化”类作文大致都是集中在下面几种题型:项目选择+理由阐述;活动方案设计+理由阐述、评价反思改进、分享+看法等,但是活动方案的修订、完善还没有出现。下面对这一类型作文进行解析,供同学们、老师们参考!项目选择类英语作文命题规律:首先,给出一个特定的主题或选项清单。然后,要求学生从选项中选择一个,并进行简要介绍。通常要求学生说明选择此项的原因或个人经历。
【命题规律】
情境性与实用性结合:题目通常设置具体情境(如学校活动、社区活动等),要求考生根据情境选择合适的活动项目,并阐述理由。
综合性考查:考查考生的逻辑思维能力、语言表达能力以及对活动的规划和组织能力。
开放性与引导性结合:题目提供一定框架(如活动目的、内容等),考生需在此基础上发挥创造力,设计具体的活动方案。
【解题技巧】
阅读题目并仔细理解每个选项的含义和背景。确保你对每个选项都有一定的了解。
在选择一个主题之前,考虑自己对哪个选项更有兴趣,或者是否有相关的个人经验。
在写作时,首先简要介绍选中的主题。可以提供一些背景信息,例如该领域的起源、特点或重要性。
接下来,说明你对该主题的兴趣或个人经历。可以分享你是如何接触到这个主题的,以及它对你产生的影响。最后,总结你的观点,强调选择该主题的重要性和你对其的热情。
【考点诠释】
(一)命题考向
▶主题聚焦
围绕学校活动、社会实践、团队合作等场景展开,贴近学生生活。
常见类型:校园活动策划、志愿服务项目、学习计划选择等。
▶能力考查
策划能力:设计活动方案或选择项目,说明具体安排。
分析能力:分析选择理由,说明其优势或意义。
表达能力:清晰表达观点,语言流畅。
▶语言要求
语言简洁明了,避免冗长复杂的句子。
逻辑清晰,使用连接词增强连贯性。
词汇丰富,句式多样。
(二)写作思路
开头:根据题目要求,确定选择活动的主题,吸引读者注意。
主体:
活动项目选择:列举几个活动项目,并说明选择的理由(如与主题相关、受众兴趣等)。
活动流程设计:详细描述活动的流程,包括时间、地点、参与人员、活动内容等。
结尾:强调活动的教育意义或社会价值,提升文章的深度,或表达对活动成功的期望或展望。
(三)高分句式库
引入话题
Our school is planning to…, and I would like to suggest…
Faced with several options, I have decided to choose…
方案或选择说明
The activity will be held on… at…
The project includes… and requires…
选择理由分析
This activity is not only fun but also educational.
The project will help us develop…
总结升华
I believe that this activity will be a great success.
I am confident that the project will bring us many benefits.
【典题举隅】
(2025·上海长宁·一模)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (请根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Alex发邮件告诉你,最近他已经成功报名参加交换生项目 (exchange program),下学期来你学校交流学习两个月,想了解你校的特色课程 (feature course),请你给Alex回信,表示欢迎并介绍你认为最有特色的学校课程,如:运动、艺术、编程 (programming)、茶艺 (tea art) 等等并说明理由。
Dear Alex,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Alex,
I’m glad to hear about your upcoming exchange program at our school! Welcome! At our school, one of the most distinctive courses is Tea Art. It’s not just about learning how to brew tea, but also understanding Chinese culture and history. It’s a calming and enriching experience that offers insights into traditional cultures. I believe you’ll enjoy it greatly.
Looking forward to seeing you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达欢迎的态度;
第二步,选择茶艺课作为特色课程进行介绍,以其结合文化和历史的特点为理由,说明其独特性和吸引力;
第三步,期待对方的回复,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①hear about听到关于
②look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①It’s a calming and enriching experience that offers insights into traditional cultures.(定语从句)
②I believe you’ll enjoy it greatly.(宾语从句)
第一套
(2022·上海中考真题)
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
你校将增设一间学生活动室(student activity room),现有以下六种关于活动室用途的设想:
读者之家(Reading corner) 劳技工坊(Mini workshop) 艺体天地(Arts and sports centre)
义卖集市(Charity market) 科创小屋(High-tech lab) 心灵驿站(Heart-to-heart room)
学校正通过校报了解学生的意向。假设你是李华,请给校报张老师写封邮件,表明你最喜欢的一种设想,并说明理由。
(注意:1. 邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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【答案】Dear Mr Zhang,
I am writing to you to share my ideas about the use of the student activity room. I prefer to make it a heart-to-heart room.
For some students, they may feel helpless and depressed when they meet troubles in life, especially those who are shy. They can turn to this place for help if there is one.
Besides, students are likely to suffer from mental problems. If these problems aren’t solved well, they may bring bad results. The heart-to-heart room can offer help to these students in time.
Thank you for reading my e-mail.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件。
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:首先选择其中你最喜欢的一种设想,发邮件给校报张老师,并说明理由。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题,介绍自己喜欢的设想;
第二步,介绍喜欢的理由;
第三步,表示感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①prefer to do更喜欢做某事
②turn to求助于
③suffer from遭受
[高分句型]
① they may feel helpless and depressed when they meet troubles in life, especially those who are shy.(含有when引导的时间状语和who引导的定语从句)
②They can turn to this place for help if there is one.(if引导的条件状语从句)
第二套
(2021·上海·中考真题)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
你的学校正在为以下活动课招募教学小助手(teaching assistant):
球类(Ball Games) 演讲(Speech) 器乐(Instrumental Music)
戏剧(Drama) 手工(Handicrafts) 摄影(Photography)
假设你是李华,请给教导处张老师写封信,结合你的兴趣和特长,说明你想担任哪一门活动课的小助手及理由。
注意:
1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文:
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I am writing to you to apply for the teaching assistant for our instrumental music lesson. The reason why I am interested in this job is that I love music and I have got the level-10 certificates of both piano and guitar. Besides, music is a way to deepen our understanding of the world as well as a way to relax ourselves. I hope more students will find its beauty through this course, which is certainly my goal. Being the teaching assistant is exactly what I am good at and what I desire. I really hope you can give me this opportunity.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据所给情境,给教导处张老师写封信,结合自己的兴趣和特长,说明自己想担任哪一门活动课的小助手及理由。
2.写作指导:本文主要以第一人称写作,时态为一般现在时。结合自己的兴趣和特长,选择一门活动课,表明选择担任这一门课的小助手的理由;可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等;语言的表述要符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;层次要分明、条理要清晰。
第三套
(2023·上海黄浦·二模)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
假设你是李华,暑假期间,你将参加一个国际夏令营。在夏令营期间,各国青少年都要介绍自己国家的文化,包含语言(language)、节日(festivals)、饮食(food and drinks)、服饰(clothing)、文学艺术(art and literature)、传统技艺(traditional skills)等不同方面。请你选择其中一种形式,向外国小朋友介绍中国文化,并说明理由。
注意:1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文:
The Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals of the Chinese people. It is a symbol of unity, prosperity, and on the new hope for the future. On the Chinese new year’s eve, people let off fireworks, put up red lanterns and use couplets to decorate their houses. They also have a big meal on the new year’s eve. They eat dumplings, fish, meat and other delicious food. During this Festival, people wear new clothes, and visit relatives. Children look forward to receiving red envelope money. There are also Dragon and lion dance on the street and some other carnival activities.
I like this festival because we can have great fun during this festival.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并注意适当添加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据自己选择的文化开始介绍;
第二步,说明选择这个文化的理由
[亮点词汇]
①let off fireworks放烟花
②look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①It is a symbol of unity, prosperity, and on the new hope for the future.(and表并列)
②There are also Dragon and lion dance on the street and some other carnival activities.(there be句型)
第四套
(2023·上海宝山·二模)Write at least 60 words according to the situation given.(请根据所给情境, 写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格,邮件格式已给)
美好的初中生活即将画上句号,你的学校正在征集初三年级毕业典礼的活动方案。假如你是李华,请你给教导处王老师写一份邮件。阐述你对毕业典礼活动的初步设想,重点设计1-2个活动并说明你的设计理由。
以下活动仅供参考:
诗歌朗诵(poetry reading) 小组唱(group singing) 脱口秀(talk show)
制作微视频(making short videos) 小品表演(short play) 赠送礼物(giving gifts)
(注意:1.文中不得出现任何真实人各、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。)
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【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Wang,
The wonderful junior high school life is coming to an end. I hope our graduation ceremony is colorful and interesting. This is my activity plan.
I think making short videos and giving gifts are good activities. We can make short videos of the three years’ experiences to show our study, life and love. It can be a good memory for us in the future. Besides, we can give gifts to each other in order to express the friendship between students and teachers. This is a symbol of our friendship.
I hope my advice is helpful to you. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求向教导处王老师阐述你对毕业典礼活动的初步设想,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出自己的活动计划;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,介绍1-2个活动并说明设计理由;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①come to an end结束
②in the future在将来
③each other彼此
④a symbol of……的象征
[高分句型]
①Besides, we can give gifts to each other in order to express the friendship between students and teachers.(in order to表示目的)
②I hope my advice is helpful to you.(省略that的宾语从句)
第五套
(2024·上海浦东新·二模)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
学校呼吁师生共建美好校园。学生会 (the student union) 收到来自同学们的众多提议(proposal)。请代表学生会选取以下一项提议写一份倡议书。谈一谈提出该倡议的理由并给出具体实施建议。
Recycling wastepaper 废纸回收
Volunteering in the canteen 食堂志愿工作
Daily jogging 每日慢跑
Weekly talent show 每周才艺秀
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【答案】参考范文:
The student union has received many proposals on how to make our school better. Among them, recycling wastepaper caught our eye, and we appeal all students to recycle it. Every day, the school prints hundreds of papers which are made from trees. We cut down millions of trees every year and replace hardly any of them. To save paper, you can write on both sides of a draft paper and make sure there are few blanks before dropping it. You can also take waste papers to the school recycling centre to reuse them. By making a few small changes daily, you can have a huge impact on the amount of paper that gets used.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作主题;
第二步,具体介绍如何使我们学校变得更好。
[亮点词汇]
①caught our eye引起我们的注意
②hundreds of几百
③make sure确保
④have a huge impact on有巨大影响
[高分句型]
①Every day, the school prints hundreds of papers which are made from trees.(which引导的定语从句)
②To save paper, you can write on both sides of a draft paper and make sure there are few blanks
before dropping it.(省略that的宾语从句)
第六套
(24-25九年级下·浙江杭州·阶段练习)假设你是王涛,你的澳大利亚朋友Emma即将来中国参加文化交流活动。请根据以下信息写一封邮件,为她推荐一个合适的文化体验营。
Cultural Camp A (Historical City)◆Time: 1 day
◆Activities:
Visit ancient walls and palaces.
Make simple lanterns with teachers.
Enjoy local meals.
Cultural Camp B (Water Town)◆Time: 2 days
◆Activities:
Take photos and draw old buildings.
Design colorful lanterns.
Cook snacks with villagers.
注意:
(1)邮件需包含所选文化营的时间和至少两点活动信息,可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
(2)词数80左右,邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Emma,
It’s wonderful to learn about your upcoming cultural trip to China!
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Yours,
Wang Tao
【答案】Possible versions:
Dear Emma,
It’s wonderful to learn about your upcoming cultural trip to China! I know you love Chinese history, especially old buildings. I think Cultural Camp A is perfect for you. It offers a 1-day trip in a historical city where you can explore ancient walls and palaces from the Ming Dynasty. Also, you can learn to make lanterns by using bamboo and silk with skilled teachers. Making lanterns is a kind of Chinese traditional art form. What’s more, you have a chance to taste local dishes like Hangzhou’s famous “West Lake Fish”. As a history lover, you’ll enjoy learning about China’s past while creating art. Don’t miss this chance to experience history hands-on!
I’m sure you’ll love this camp. Looking forward to your adventure!
Yours,
Wang Tao
Dear Emma,
It’s wonderful to learn about your upcoming cultural trip to China! I know you prefer Chinese old buildings, so I think Cultural Camp B is a good choice for you.
It’s a 2-day trip in a beautiful water town where you can take photos and draw old buildings to capture their beauty. You want to learn traditional art forms. In this camp, you can design colorful lanterns. It’s a good chance for you to learn and experience the beauty of Chinese traditional art. What’s more, you can cook snacks with villagers. Not only can you learn to make local snacks and enjoy them, but also it’s a great way to make new friends.
I believe this camp matches your love for history, art, and food. Hope you enjoy it!
Yours,
Wang Tao
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,确定推荐的文化营,并简要介绍其时间;
第二步,详细描述所选文化营的活动;
第三步,表达对Emma参加活动的期待,并希望对方享受这次体验。
[亮点词汇]
①make lanterns制作灯笼
②a kind of一种
③what’s more除此之外还
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I think Cultural Camp A is perfect for you.(省略引导词that的宾语从句)
②It offers a 1-day trip in a historical city where you can explore ancient walls and palaces from the Ming Dynasty. (where引导定语从句)
③Don’t miss this chance to experience history hands-on!(祈使句)
第七套
(2025·浙江温州·一模)假如你是李华,英国交换生Amy即将来你校体验特色课程。请根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向她推荐一个合适的课程。
Traditional Chinese culture is amazing. I love to work with others.
Chinese Kungfu Course on the playground
in groups
learn the history and do kungfu
Chinese Cooking Course in the cooking room
in groups
cook Chinese food and share it
注意:
1.邮件需包含所选课程的至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数80左右;邮件的首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Amy,
I am happy to know that you are coming to experience the special courses in my school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Amy,
I am happy to know that you are coming to experience the special courses in my school. Since you are fascinated by traditional Chinese culture and enjoy working with others, I would like to recommend the Chinese Cooking Course to you.
In this course, you will have the opportunity to learn about Chinese cuisine in the cooking room, where you can cook delicious Chinese food under the guidance of experienced teachers. Moreover, you will learn the history behind each dish, which will deepen your understanding of Chinese culture. Working in groups will also allow you to interact with other students and share your cooking experiences.
I believe you will enjoy this course and have a wonderful time learning about Chinese food and culture.
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:这是一封电子邮件。
②时态:主要使用一般现在时。
③提示:邮件中需要包含所选课程的至少两点相关信息,并且不能出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头部分需要表达对Amy即将来校体验的欢迎和高兴之情,并引出推荐课程的主题;
第二步,主体部分详细描述推荐的课程并说明为什么这门课程适合Amy;
第三步,结尾部分再次表达对Amy的期待,希望她能享受这次课程体验,并附上友好的问候。
[亮点词汇]
①be fascinated by 对……着迷
②under the guidance of 在……的指导下
③deepen one’s understanding 加深某人的理解
④interact with 与……互动
[高分句型]
①Since you are fascinated by traditional Chinese culture and enjoy working with others, I would like to recommend the Chinese Martial Arts Course to you.(原因状语从句)
②In this course, you will not only learn Chinese martial arts moves under the guidance of experienced teachers, but also deepen your understanding of Chinese culture by exploring the historical stories behind each move.(not only...but also...结构)
第八套
(2024·浙江嘉兴·模拟预测)某英语网站正在开展“劳动教育创意方案”的征集活动,校学生会策划了两个方案。假设你是学生会成员,请你选择其中一个方案,用英语写一篇短文,介绍活动内容及意义。要点提示如下:
Getting Labour Education
Plans
Plan A: At school
Plan B: At home
Activities
·grow vegetables
·learn paper cutting
·…
·cook meals
·tidy up the room
·…
Meanings
·get close to nature
·know more about Chinese culture
·…
·improve life skills
·develop independence (独立)
·…
注意:(1)短文必须包含表中你所选方案的所有信息,并适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3)词数:80~100。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Our school is calling for plans on labour education. We choose to get labour education __________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Our school is calling for plans on labour education. We choose to get labour education at school. There will be three labour activities for us to take part in. Here is our plan.
Firstly, we will learn to grow vegetables with the help of the teachers. We need to look after the vegetables with great care and attention, which will offer us a chance to get close to nature. What’s more, we can also learn paper cutting from the art teachers, and it’s really meaningful to learn more about Chinese culture. Apart from that, it’s of great use to learn to make delicious food from the cooks in our school.
In short, we hope all of us can improve ourselves and make a difference through the labour activities.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头,引出话题,并选择其中一个方案;
第二步、介绍该方案中的活动以及意义;
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②look after照看
③apart from除了
④make a difference有影响
[高分句型]
We need to look after the vegetables with great care and attention, which will offer us a chance to get close to nature. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
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