Unit 3 Period 5 Writing-【金版教程】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第四册作业与测评word（外研版2019）

Period 5　Writing 应用文写作——推荐信 技法指导 本单元的写作任务是推荐信，这种类型的文章属于介绍类说明文。推荐信可以推荐一个人、一个地方、一本书、一部电影。在信中表明推荐的内容、原因及进一步的沟通。要想做到介绍直观形象，使读者如临其境，应注意以下几点： 1．认真审题，选好描写角度，确定文章采用的人称和写作的着力点，点明要推荐的内容。 2．推荐信通常使用一般现在时和第三人称。写作时要根据被推荐人的特点，叙述推荐的东西的价值。采用不同的说明方法，可以从表面和深层两方面来写，详尽而有条理地介绍，给读者一个清晰的印象。 3．结尾处概括期待对方回复，并表示感谢。注意行文的连贯性，句子之间、层次之间、段落之间要衔接紧密，过渡自然，可用一些常用关联词或词组来体现这种逻辑性。 经典句式 1．开头常用句式 ①I am writing to you to recommend this product. I have sufficient reasons to introduce it to you and I dare say it is the best I have ever seen. 我写信给你是为了向你推荐这种商品。我有足够的理由向你介绍它，我敢说这是我见过的最好的。 ②To practice Chinese painting requires four basic tools—writing brush, ink stick, paper and ink slab. They were nicknamed by ancient Chinese “the Four Treasures of the Study”． 画中国画需要的主要工具有笔，墨，纸，砚。古人称它们为“文房四宝”。 ③Peking Opera is popular in China with a history of more than 200 years, dating back to Qing Dynasty. 京剧在中国很流行，拥有200多年的历史，始于清朝。 2．主体段落常用句式 ①Miss Liu Ming was one of my classmates in Tianjin University. She was an excellent student in our university as can be seen from her straight A grades on all subjects. 刘明是我在天津大学的同学。她在我们学校成绩优异，各科成绩都是优秀。 ②Being one of the traditional Chinese festivals, Spring Festival is the grandest and most important festival for Chinese people. It is also the time for whole families to get together, which is similar to Christmas for westerners. 对于中国人来说，春节是规模最大、最重要的传统节日。就如同西方的圣诞节一样，它是一家团聚的日子。 ③What's more, it is better for you to join in more outdoor activities with your American friends, which may help you relax and have fun. 而且，多与你的美国朋友一起参加户外活动对你有好处，这可以帮助你放松，使你开心。 ④Finally, mind your own manners and remain modest and honest when getting along with your British friends. 最后，与你的英国朋友相处时，你要注意个人礼貌，要谦虚、诚实。 ⑤Mountains, rivers and natural landscape are the main description object of Chinese painting. 山、水和自然景观是中国画的主要描写对象。 ⑥I've been longing to go to America, mainly for two reasons. One is that I can experience American culture, which is believed to be the most diverse in the world. The other is that I can broaden my horizons in this developed country. 我一直盼望去美国，主要有两个原因。其一是我能够体验美国文化，它被认为是世界上最多元化的。其二是我能够在这个发达国家开阔视野。 3．结尾常用句式 ①On November 16, 2010, Peking Opera was listed in the Representative List of World Intangible Cultural Heritage. 在2010年11月16日，京剧被列入“世界非物质文化遗产代表作名录”。 ②But to tell the truth, I am faced with some challenges. I don't have a good command of English, especially spoken English, so I'm afraid I'll have difficulty fitting in very soon. 但说实话，我面临着一些挑战。我英语掌握得不够好，尤其是英语口语，因此我担心我难以很快适应。 ③What strikes me most is that American middle schools attach great importance to students' ability of practice. 给我印象最深的是美国中学对学生的实践能力非常重视。 典例演练 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Jackson打算近期实地了解一下中国文化，请你给他回信，推荐他到北京参观。内容包括： 1．提出建议； 2．活动：参观博物馆，欣赏京剧等； 3．预祝开心。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 [精彩范文] Dear Jackson， Knowing you are about to come to learn about Chinese Culture, I recommend visiting Beijing, the capital and cultural center of China. With a long history, Beijing enjoys a high reputation for its abundance of ancient architecture and museums, where precious historical relics are waiting for you to explore. Besides, the exceptional Peking Opera performances are also what you can't miss. Hearing them being performed live in front will give you a totally different understanding. Additionally, Hutongs with different shapes, lengths and directions, which are very typical of Beijing, can lead you to anywhere you want. Beijing never fails anyone who is ready for it. It deserves a visit. Wish you a very happy and meaningful time in China! Yours sincerely， Li Hua 总评　本文主时态是一般现在时，时态运用准确。上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。在选择句式时赋予变化。总之，本文要点完整，语句通顺，用词委婉，易于让人接受。 [亮点呈现] (1)文中运用了大量的高级短语，使文章显得有档次。如enjoy a high reputation for; its abundance of ancient architecture and museums; give you a totally different understanding等。 (2)此外运用了besides, additionally等顺序连词的运用，使得文章脉络清晰。文中的语法结构及句式灵活多变，简单句和复合句相结合。复合句有由where引导的非限制性定语从句where precious historical relics are waiting for you to explore；由what引导的表语从句the exceptional Peking Opera performances are also what you can't miss等。 (3)另外非谓语运用的也恰到好处，如动词­ing形式作状语Knowing you are about to come to learn about Chinese Culture, ...；非谓语中的­ing形式作主语Hearing them being performed live in front will give you a totally different understanding等。 跟踪演练 校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr Wang， 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Yours sincerely， Li Yue [精彩范文] Dear Mr Wang， Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I'd like to give some suggestions. What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries. In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books: literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically. I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendation. Yours sincerely， Li Yue 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$