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专题09应用文写作
经典基础题
Passage 1
(23-24高二下·福建莆田3月月考)
为了解学生周末用餐的情况,你的学校进行了一次相关调查。请你根据图表信息,以“Convenience
Food or Fresh Food on Weekends?'为题写一篇英语短文,内容包括:
1.学生周末用餐选择情况的概述:
2.简单的分析:
3.你的看法。
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好:
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dining out
Ordering
takeouts
22%
14%
ihrt fo
thom的
50%
Convenience Food or Fresh Food on Weekends?
Recently,our school has conducted a survey,which aims to figure out how the students enjoy their weekend
dinner.
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Passage 2
(2425学年高二下·广东省韶关3月月考)
你们班上周开展了以“How can we build up our bodies'?”为题的讨论,请你把讨论结果以短文形式写出
来张贴到班级的英语角。短文内容包括:
1.讨论结果:
2.你的观点。
要求:词数80左右。
Passage 3
(23-24高二下,湖南长沙3月月考)
假定你是学生会主席李华,暑期学生会将组织“丝绸之路”沿线国家考察活动。你校的英国交换生
David想报名参加,写信向你询问相关情况,请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1.活动时间:
2.具体安排:
3.报名方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
Yours,
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Passage 4
(2425学年高二下·广东省恩平3月月考)
假设你是李津,你的笔友Chris发来邮件,他刚刚参加了世界环境日(World Environment Day)的活
动,询问你参加过哪些保护环境的活动。请你回一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)你校的环保活动:垃圾分类宣传与实践,美化校园等:
(2)你是如何保护环境的:绿色出行,低碳生活等:
(3)你的感想。
参考词汇:垃圾分类waste sorting:低碳low-carbon
注意:
(1)词数不少于100:
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯:
(3)开头结尾己给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
Yours,
Li Jin
Passage 5
(23-24高二下·浙江杭州·期中)
为丰富校园文化生活,学校准备举办中国国画展。假定你是校英文报记者李华,请写篇宣传稿。内容
包括:
1.时间地点:
2.展览内容:
3.号召参观。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:
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2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Passage 6
(23-24高二下·浙江丽水·期中)
假定你是李华,为了庆祝世界粮食日的到来,你校将举办“Food and Health”相关主题的英文演讲比赛。
请你写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
1.节日意义:2.如何健康饮食:3.发出呼吁。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Save Food and Eat Healthily
Good morning,everyone!
Thank you for your attention!
Passage 7
(23-24学年高二下·浙江省杭州5月月考)
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果
写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.学习活动状况描述:
2.简单评论:
3.你的建议。
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65%
50%
18%
12%
读英语书墙
听英语欧曲
看英语电影
浏览英语学习网站
学生英语学习活动调查结果(人数百分比)
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Passage 8
(23-24学年高二下·浙江省余姚期中)
目前,很多学生苦恼学习效率低,觉得时间不够用。学校组织班会,以“How to Spend Time Properly'”
为题,让同学们进行讨论。请你从以下方面准备发言稿。
1.恰当管理时间的意义:
2.如何恰当管理时间,给出建议。
注意:1.词数80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
How to Spend Time Properly
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Passage 9
(23-24学年高二下·福建省南安5月月考)
假定你是李华,在一所国际学校就读,最近你校图书馆决定缩短中午开放时间,你认为这种做法存在
问题。请给图书馆写一封邮件,内容包括:
1反馈问题:
2提出建议。
注意:
1写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Library Staff,
My name is Li Hua,and I am a student in Class 1,Senior 3.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 10
(23-24高二下·福建宁德·3月月考)
假定你是李华,你去英国旅游时在某餐厅就餐,对该餐厅的服务不满意,请根据以下内容给餐厅的经
理写一封投诉信,内容包括:
1投诉内容(食物不新鲜,服务态度不好等)。
2.希望得到妥善的处理。
注意:1.写作词数应为80词左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Passage 11
(2425高二下·福建厦门3月月考)
上周末你校举办了“急救知识进校园”的活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1活动的过
程:2活动的影响。
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2题目已为你写好。
First Aid Knowledge Hits the Campus
Passage 12
(24-25高二下·福建三明3月月考)
假定你是李华,一个月前参加了“HealthyLife”杂志社组织的主题为“健康生活方式选择”的夏令营活
动。请你给该杂志社编辑写封信反馈你参加夏令营前后的变化,内容包括:
1.困扰和行动:
2.收获和感受。
注意:
1写作词数应为80左右:
2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
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Li Hua
Passage 13
(24-25高二下·山东济南·3月月考)
学校英语俱乐部计划举办一场关于急救知识的讲座,此次讲座将重点介绍心肺复苏(CP)和海姆利
希急救法(Heimlich manoeuvre)。请你以俱乐部的名义写一则通知,内容包括:
1讲座的时间、地点:
2讲座的主要内容:
3欢迎大家参加并鼓励提问交流。
注意:1.词数80词左右:2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Passage 14
(24-25高二下山东3月月考)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom来信询问你最近的假期旅行经历。请给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1旅行目的地及选择原因:
2旅行中的主要活动:
3.你的收获与感受。
注意:1词数80左右:
2.开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数:
3.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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Dear Tom,
I'm thrilled to share my trip with you!
Best wishes,
LiHua
Passage 15
(2425学年高二下·山东省济宁3月月考)
上周,你参加了校学生会组织的环保作品展。请给校英语报写一篇短文介绍此活动,内容包括:
1.活动过程:
2.个人感受。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Passage 16
(2425高二下·江苏盐城3月月考)
假如你是李华,你校上周举办了太空科技展,请你给英文校报投稿,内容包括:
(1)活动内容介绍:
(2)活动反响。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右:
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(2)请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Passage 17
(24-25高二下山东枣庄3月月考)
假如你是李华,你的外国笔友Mik©想了解有关中国“工匠精神”的纪录片。请你写一封信,向他推
荐一部纪录片,内容包括:
L.推荐《我在故宫修文物》(Masters in the Forbidden City):
2说明推荐理由。
注意:1写作词数应为80个左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 18
(23-24高二下·湖北武汉·期中)
假定你是李华,是红星中学高二年级的学生。最近你们年级的同学参加了社会实践,外教老师Jaso
对此很感兴趣,请你给他写一封邮件,分享这次经历,内容包括:
1.实践内容:
2.体验和感受。
注意:1.词数80左右:
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专题09 应用文写作
Passage 1
(23-24高二下·福建莆田·3月月考)
为了解学生周末用餐的情况,你的学校进行了一次相关调查。请你根据图表信息,以“Convenience Food or Fresh Food on Weekends?”为题写一篇英语短文,内容包括:
1. 学生周末用餐选择情况的概述;
2. 简单的分析;
3. 你的看法。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好;
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Convenience Food or Fresh Food on Weekends?
Recently, our school has conducted a survey, which aims to figure out how the students enjoy their weekend dinner.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Convenience Food or Fresh Food on Weekends?
Recently, our school has conducted a survey, which aims to figure out how the students enjoy their weekend dinner.
It comes as no surprise that half of the students surveyed prefer fresh food prepared at home, which is healthier and more delicious. 32% of the students choose to dine out in restaurants, while only 14% order take outs. Even fewer are those who favor prepared store-bought food, with less than 5 percent.
Obviously, fresh food, which is what I have a preference for, is more favorable than convenience food on weekends. Not only can I have a good taste of the dishes my mother cooks for me, I can also enjoy the time with my parents and communicate with them about my experiences in school.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。学校就学生周末用餐的情况进行了一次相关的调查,要求考生根据图表数据,以“Convenience Food or Fresh Food on Weekends?”为题写一篇英语短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
进行调查:conduct a survey→carry out a survey 美味的:delicious→tasty
选择:choose→select 明显地:obviously→apparently
2.句式拓展:句型转换
原句:32% of the students choose to dine out in restaurants, while only 14% order take outs.
拓展句:32% of the students, who choose to dine out in restaurants, are in contrast to the 14% who order take outs.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Recently, our school has conducted a survey, which aims to figure out how the students enjoy their weekend dinner.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句,how引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Even fewer are those who favor prepared store-bought food, with less than 5 percent.(运用了who引导的限定性定语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25学年高二下•广东省韶关3月月考)
你们班上周开展了以“How can we build up our bodies?”为题的讨论,请你把讨论结果以短文形式写出来张贴到班级的英语角。短文内容包括:
1. 讨论结果;
2. 你的观点。
要求:词数80左右。
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【答案】One possible version:
Our class recently conducted a discussion on the topic “How can we build up our bodies?”. Here are the results of our communication.
During the discussion, several ideas were raised. Many students emphasized the importance of regular exercise. Suggestions ranged from engaging in sports activities, such as running, cycling, and swimming, to practicing yoga or tai chi for flexibility and balance. The significance of sufficient sleep and rest periods was also emphasized. Some students underlined the need for an average of 8 hours of quality sleep every night.
I believe that it is crucial to maintain a balanced and nutritious diet. Undoubtedly, consuming a variety of fruits, vegetables, whole grains, and lean proteins can contribute to our health.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。题目要求考生就班级开展的以“How can we build up our bodies?”为题的讨论结果进行写作,需说明讨论结果,并表达个人观点。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提出:raise→put forward 强调:emphasize→highlight, underline, stress 充足的:sufficient→enough
至关重要的:crucial→essential, vital 各种各样的:a variety of→various, a range of
有助于:contribute to→be conductive to, be beneficial to
2. 句式拓展:简单句变复合句
原句:Undoubtedly, consuming a variety of fruits, vegetables, whole grains, and lean proteins can contribute to our health.
拓展句:There is no denying that consuming a variety of fruits, vegetables, whole grains, and lean proteins can contribute to our health.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 Suggestions ranged from engaging in sports activities, such as running, cycling, and swimming, to practicing yoga or tai chi for flexibility and balance. (运用了动名词短语engaging…和practicing…作宾语)
【高分句型2】 I believe that it is crucial to maintain a balanced and nutritious diet. (运用了that引导名词性从句作believe的宾语)
Passage 3
(23-24高二下·湖南长沙·3月月考)
假定你是学生会主席李华,暑期学生会将组织“丝绸之路”沿线国家考察活动。你校的英国交换生 David 想报名参加,写信向你询问相关情况,请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 活动时间;
2. 具体安排;
3. 报名方式。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear David,
Knowing that you’re interested in participating in our summer exploration activity along the Silk Road, I am more than happy to provide you with the relevant information.
Firstly, the activity is scheduled to take place from July 15th to July 25th. We will visit several countries along the Silk Road, including Kazakhstan and Turkey. The 10-day tour includes cultural heritage sites, historical landmarks, and local experiences. To register for the activity, you need to fill out the application form, which can be obtained from the Student Council. The completed form should be submitted along with a photocopy of your passport by June 20th.
If you have any other questions, you can contact the Student Union either by email or telephone.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。暑期学生会将组织“丝绸之路”沿线国家考察活动。考生所在校的英国交换生 David 想报名参加,写信向你询问相关情况,请你用英文给他回复。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:take part in→participate in 快乐的:happy→pleased 提供:provide→offer 获得:obtain→gain
2.句式拓展:合并句子
原句:Firstly, the activity is scheduled to take place from July 15th to July 25th. We will visit several countries along the Silk Road, including Kazakhstan and Turkey.
拓展句:Firstly, the activity is scheduled to take place from July 15th to July 25th, when we will visit several countries along the Silk Road, including Kazakhstan and Turkey.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】To register for the activity, you need to fill out the application form, which can be obtained from the Student Council.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Knowing that you’re interested in participating in our summer exploration activity along the Silk Road, I am more than happy to provide you with the relevant information.(运用了现在分词作状语)
Passage 4
(24-25学年高二下•广东省恩平3月月考)
假设你是李津,你的笔友Chris发来邮件,他刚刚参加了世界环境日(World Environment Day)的活动,询问你参加过哪些保护环境的活动。请你回一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)你校的环保活动:垃圾分类宣传与实践,美化校园等;
(2)你是如何保护环境的:绿色出行,低碳生活等;
(3)你的感想。
参考词汇:垃圾分类 waste sorting;低碳 low-carbon
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m thrilled to hear about your participation in the World Environment Day activities.
At my school, we have been actively engaging in environmental protection initiatives. We conduct regular waste sorting campaigns and encourage students to practice it daily. Additionally, we take part in beautifying our campus by planting trees and flowers. Personally, I contribute by choosing green transportation modes like cycling or walking to school, and I strive to live a low-carbon lifestyle by conserving water and turning off lights when not in use. These activities have made me more aware of our environment’s fragility and the importance of preserving it for future generations.
I hope to hear more about your experiences soon.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。笔友Chris发来邮件,他刚刚参加了世界环境日的活动,询问考生参加过哪些保护环境的活动,要求考生按照要求回一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的:thrilled → excited 参与:engage in → participate in 努力:strive → make great efforts
保护:conserve → protect
2.句式拓展:同义句转换
原句:I’m thrilled to hear about your participation in the World Environment Day activities.
拓展句:Hearing about your participation in the World Environment Day activities, I feel thrilled.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Additionally, we take part in beautifying our campus by planting trees and flowers.(运用了动名词beautifying作宾语、动名词planting作宾语)
【高分句型2】I hope to hear more about your experiences soon.(运用了不定式to hear作宾语)
Passage 5
(23-24高二下·浙江杭州·期中)
为丰富校园文化生活,学校准备举办中国国画展。假定你是校英文报记者李华,请写篇宣传稿。内容包括:
1. 时间地点;
2. 展览内容;
3. 号召参观。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
In order to enrich our school life and promote Chinese culture, our school will stage an exhibition of Chinese paintings in the new stadium on April 30.
During the exhibition, dozens of Chinese paintings created by teachers and students, will be on show for appreciation. Besides, several respectable local painters will be invited to give lectures and remark on some of the exhibits, which must be both exciting and interesting.
If you’re interested, don’t hesitate to come and enjoy them. This is a chance not to be missed.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写篇宣传稿,介绍学校为丰富校园文化生活准备举办的中国国画展的时间和内容,并号召大家观展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提升:promote→improve 举办:stage→hold
在展览:on show→on display 另外:besides→in addition
2.句式拓展:简单句变复合句
原句:During the exhibition, dozens of Chinese paintings created by teachers and students, will be on show for appreciation.
拓展句:During the exhibition, dozens of Chinese paintings which were created by teachers and students, will be on show for appreciation.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】During the exhibition, dozens of Chinese paintings created by teachers and students, will be on show for appreciation. (运用了非谓语动词过去分词作后置定语)
【高分句型2】Besides, several respectable local painters will be invited to give lectures and remark on some of the exhibits, which must be both exciting and interesting.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 6
(23-24高二下·浙江丽水·期中)
假定你是李华,为了庆祝世界粮食日的到来,你校将举办“Food and Health”相关主题的英文演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
1. 节日意义; 2. 如何健康饮食; 3. 发出呼吁。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Save Food and Eat Healthily
Good morning, everyone!
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Thank you for your attention!
【答案】One possible version:
Save Food and Eat Healthily
Good morning, everyone!
I am Li Hua, a student of Senior 2, and I feel greatly privileged to be here to deliver my speech. Today is World Food Day, a significant occasion that not only reminds us of the importance of food in sustaining life but also calls for action against food waste and malnutrition.
To save food and eat healthily, we’d better live a healthier lifestyle by choosing whole foods, limiting processed items, and cooking more at home. Besides, excessive snacking, frequent consumption of bubble tea, and regular reliance on takeout meals should be minimized. Remember, small changes today pave the way to a healthier tomorrow and good health begins with what we eat.
So let’s eat healthily and make a conscious effort to respect food, value its source, and appreciate its role in our lives.
Thank you for your attention!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇演讲稿参加“Food and Health”主题英文演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
荣幸的:privileged→honored 珍惜:value→cherish
此外:besides→in addition 记住:remember→keep in mind
2.句式拓展:简单句变复合句
原句:To save food and eat healthily, we’d better live a healthier lifestyle by choosing whole foods, limiting processed items, and cooking more at home.
拓展句:If we want to save food and eat healthily, we’d better live a healthier lifestyle by choosing whole foods, limiting processed items, and cooking more at home.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 Today is World Food Day, a significant occasion that not only reminds us of the importance of food in sustaining life but also calls for action against food waste and malnutrition. (运用了that引导定语从句)
【高分句型2】 Remember, small changes today pave the way to a healthier tomorrow and good health begins with what we eat. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
Passage 7
(23-24学年高二下•浙江省杭州5月月考)
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学习活动状况描述:
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
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【答案】
Learning English beyond the Classroom
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65%and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, due to a lack of self-discipline, what benefits most to their study is reading English books and avoiding relying on the internet. I think it is urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen guidance and improve students’ self-discipline.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以Learning English beyond the Classroom为题,使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文向学校英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
然而:however→yet 由于:due to→because of 依赖:rely on→depend on 提高:improve→enhance
2.句式拓展:同义句转换
原句:I think it is urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen guidance and improve students’ self-discipline.
拓展句:I think it is urgent that parents and teachers should strengthen guidance and improve students’ self-discipline.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】For students, due to a lack of self-discipline, what benefits most to their study is reading English books and avoiding relying on the internet. (运用了what引导的主语从句)
【高分句型2】I think it is urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen guidance and improve students’ self-discipline. (运用了it作形式主语,非谓语动词不定是作真正主语)
Passage 8
(23-24学年高二下•浙江省余姚期中)
目前,很多学生苦恼学习效率低,觉得时间不够用。学校组织班会,以“How to Spend Time Properly”为题,让同学们进行讨论。请你从以下方面准备发言稿。
1. 恰当管理时间的意义;
2. 如何恰当管理时间,给出建议。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
How to Spend Time Properly
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【答案】
How to Spend Time Properly
Time is more precious than any possessions. It is equal to everyone. How you spend that valuable time determines the quality of your life.
There are three rules for effective time management. Firstly, don’t try to work full-time and take a full load. Be reasonable about how much work you can do. Secondly, make a list of all the things that you need to get done in a given time. Put the tasks in order of importance and delete any unimportant items. Thirdly, avoid lack of focus. Personal phone calls and emails can easily disturb your workday progress.
Let’s make good use of time to make our life colorful and meaningful.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“How to Spend Time Properly”为题,写一篇发言稿,说明恰当管理时间的意义,就如何恰当管理时间给出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
规则:rule→regulation 任务:task→assignment
删除:delete→remove 利用:make use of→take advantage of
2.句式拓展:合并简单句
原句:Time is more precious than any possessions. It is equal to everyone.
拓展句:Time, which is equal to everyone, is more precious than any possessions.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】How you spend that valuable time determines the quality of your life.(运用了how引导的主语从句)
【高分句型2】Secondly, make a list of all the things that you need to get done in a given time.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
Passage 9
(23-24学年高二下•福建省南安5月月考)
假定你是李华,在一所国际学校就读,最近你校图书馆决定缩短中午开放时间,你认为这种做法存在问题。请给图书馆写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.反馈问题;
2.提出建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Library Staff,
My name is Li Hua, and I am a student in Class 1, Senior 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Library Staff,
My name is Li Hua, and I am a student in Class 1, Senior 3. I am writing to express my concerns about the recent decision to shorten the library's opening hours during the noon period. Many students rely on this time to study, complete assignments, or simply enjoy reading. This change significantly limits our access to these valuable resources, which could potentially affect our academic performance and well-being.
I understand that there may be reasons behind this decision, such as staffing or budget constraints. However, I kindly suggest considering alternative solutions. For instance, could volunteer students or part-time staff help keep the library open during these hours? Or, could we implement a sign-in system to demonstrate the demand and ensure responsible use of the space?
Thank you for considering my feedback. I believe that by working together, we can find a solution that benefits all parties involved.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给校图书馆写一封邮件,反馈图书馆缩短中午开放时间这种做法存在的问题,并且提出自己的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
依赖,依靠:rely on→ depend on 影响:affect→ influence
建议:suggest→ advise 例如:for instance→ for example
2.句式拓展:简单句变复合句
原句:However, I kindly suggest considering alternative solutions.
拓展句:However, I kindly suggest that we consider alternative solutions.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】This change significantly limits our access to these valuable resources, which could potentially affect our academic performance and well-being. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe that by working together, we can find a solution that benefits all parties involved. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和限制性定语从句)
Passage 10
(23-24高二下·福建宁德·3月月考)
假定你是李华,你去英国旅游时在某餐厅就餐,对该餐厅的服务不满意,请根据以下内容给餐厅的经理写一封投诉信,内容包括:
1.投诉内容(食物不新鲜,服务态度不好等)。
2.希望得到妥善的处理。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80词左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, one of your customers, writing to make a complaint about the poor service of your restaurant.
Last Friday, when dining in your restaurant, we found the food not fresh, which was so upsetting. What annoyed us most was that when we explained it to the waitress, instead of helping us solve the problem, she shouted at us rudely.
Therefore, I’d like you to investigate the matter seriously and make a formal apology to me. I’d appreciate it if you could give due attention to the matter.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇作文属于书信表达。假如你是李华,在某餐厅就餐时不满意餐厅的服务,请向餐厅经理写一封投诉信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
劣质的:poor →low-grade 帮助:help→ assist 因此:therefore →thus 大叫:shout →yell
2.句式拓展:同义句转换
原句:What annoyed us most was that when we explained it to the waitress, instead of helping us solve the problem, she shouted at us rudely.
拓展句:When we explained it to the waitress, instead of helping us solve the problem, she shouted at us rudely, which annoyed us most.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Last Friday, when dining in your restaurant, we found the food not fresh, which was so upsetting.(运用了状语从句的省略和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】What annoyed us most was that when we explained it to the waitress, instead of helping us solve the problem, she shouted at us rudely.(运用了what引导的主语从句,that引导表语从句以及when引导的时间状语从句)
Passage 11
(24-25高二下·福建厦门·3月月考)
上周末你校举办了“急救知识进校园”的活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.活动的过程;2.活动的影响。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
First Aid Knowledge Hits the Campus
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【答案】Possible version 1:
First Aid Knowledge Hits the Campus
Last weekend, our school hosted a hands-on first aid training program titled “First Aid Knowledge Hits the Campus”.
First Aid instructors began with live demonstrations, teaching CPR and wound bandaging through interactive drills. Students then practiced these skills under expert guidance. The highlight was a timed emergency simulation where teams raced to perform first aid on “injured” volunteers.
The event left a lasting impact. Over 90% of participants reported feeling more confident in handling emergencies. “I finally know how to act in critical moments,” shared one participant. Teachers praised the blend of theory and practice, calling it “life-saving knowledge every student needs.”
Possible version 2:
First Aid Knowledge Hits the Campus
Last weekend witnessed an activity with the theme of “First Aid Knowledge Hits the Campus”, which brought a wealth of first aid knowledge to students.
The day kicked off with an engaging seminar led by first aid instructors, sharing their expertise through interactive demonstrations and practical sessions. What followed was first aid practice under the attentive guidance of the professionals. The climax arrived when students competed in a simulated emergency contest, where teams raced to apply skills under time pressure.
The impact of the event has been tremendous. Not only did students gain practical knowledge, but they also built confidence and improved adaptability in emergency situations. (可增加 “Mastering CPR techniques makes me feel empowered to save lives,” shared a participant.)
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于上周末举办的“急救知识进校园”的活动,为校英文报写一篇报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:host→ hold 影响:impact→ influence 处理:handle→ deal with 最终:finally→ eventually
2.句式拓展:简单句变复合句
原句:Last weekend, our school hosted a hands-on first aid training program titled “First Aid Knowledge Hits the Campus”.
拓展句:Last weekend, our school hosted a hands-on first aid training program which was titled “First Aid Knowledge Hits the Campus”.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The highlight was a timed emergency simulation where teams raced to perform first aid on “injured” volunteers.(运用了关系副词where引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Teachers praised the blend of theory and practice, calling it “life-saving knowledge every student needs.”(运用了现在分词短语作状语和省略了关系代词that或which的定语从句)
Passage 12
(24-25高二下·福建三明·3月月考)
假定你是李华,一个月前参加了“HealthyLife”杂志社组织的主题为“健康生活方式选择”的夏令营活动。请你给该杂志社编辑写封信反馈你参加夏令营前后的变化,内容包括:
1.困扰和行动;
2.收获和感受。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Editor,
As I took part in the summer camp about health and lifestyle choices, I started to analyze them seriously, especially playing games, the unhealthy way I relaxed myself, and its effects on my life.
A month ago, I felt stressed out and always relaxed with computer games day and night. Playing was fun, but I felt even more worn out afterwards! After the camp, I realized that it was time to adjust my lifestyle by finding other ways to relax. Rock climbing and playing basketball were the things I thought of doing instead. Though it was a big struggle, I made it with great determination.
After a month of trying out, I feel more energetic now. I believe that I can change myself for the better.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给“HealthyLife”杂志社组织写一封信,反馈参加“健康生活方式选择”的夏令营活动前后的变化。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:take part in→participate in 影响:effect→influence
焦虑的:stressed out→anxious 极度疲惫的:worn out→enhausted
2.句式拓展:陈述句变倒装句
原句:Though it was a big struggle, I made it with great determination.
拓展句:Big struggle though it was, I made it with great determination.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】After the camp, I realized that it was time to adjust my lifestyle by finding other ways to relax.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Rock climbing and playing basketball were the things I thought of doing instead.(运用了动名词做主语,以及that(已省略)引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型3】Though it was a big struggle, I made it with great determination.(运用了though引导的让步状语从句)
Passage 13
(24-25高二下·山东济南·3月月考)
学校英语俱乐部计划举办一场关于急救知识的讲座,此次讲座将重点介绍心肺复苏(CPR)和海姆利希急救法(Heimlich manoeuvre)。请你以俱乐部的名义写一则通知,内容包括:
1.讲座的时间、地点;
2.讲座的主要内容;
3.欢迎大家参加并鼓励提问交流。
注意:1.词数80词左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Notice
We are excited to announce that the English Club will host a lecture on first aid techniques, focusing on CPR and the Heimlich Manoeuvre.
The event will take place on November 15th at 3:00 p.m. in the School Auditorium. During the lecture, you will learn the essential steps and practical skills for performing CPR and the Heimlich Manoeuvre, which are crucial in emergency situations.
We encourage everyone to attend and actively participate by asking questions or sharing your thoughts. This is a great opportunity to gain valuable knowledge and improve your first aid skills.
Looking forward to seeing you there!
The English Club
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校英语俱乐部计划举办一场关于急救知识的讲座,此次讲座将重点介绍心肺复苏和海姆利希急救法,要求考生按照要求以俱乐部的名义写一则通知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的:excited → exalted 专注于: focus on → concentrate on
必不可少的:essential → indispensable 关键的:crucial → critical
2.句式拓展:同义句转换
原句:We are excited to announce that the English Club will host a lecture on first aid techniques, focusing on CPR and the Heimlich Manoeuvre.
拓展句:We are excited to announce that the English Club will host a lecture on first aid techniques, which focuses on CPR and the Heimlich Manoeuvre.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】We are excited to announce that the English Club will host a lecture on first aid techniques, focusing on CPR and the Heimlich Manoeuvre.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】During the lecture, you will learn the essential steps and practical skills for performing CPR and the Heimlich Manoeuvre, which are crucial in emergency situations.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 14
(24-25高二下·山东·3月月考)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom来信询问你最近的假期旅行经历。请给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.旅行目的地及选择原因;
2.旅行中的主要活动;
3.你的收获与感受。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
I’m thrilled to share my trip with you!
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文1
Dear Tom,
I’m thrilled to share my trip with you!
During my winter vacation, I traveled to Sanya for sightseeing. This tropical paradise attracted me with its endless golden beaches and coconut trees. Every morning, I swam in the warm sea while seagulls danced above the waves.
The highlight was trying Hainanese chicken rice, a famous local cuisine. I also took many souvenir photos with seashells shaped like hearts. At sunset, I sat on the sand listening to fishermen’s songs, feeling completely relaxed.
This trip taught me that simple joys like sunshine and laughter can make life wonderful. Can’t wait to hear about your adventures!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
参考范文2
Dear Tom,
I’m thrilled to share my trip with you!
During my winter vacation, I traveled to the countryside near Beijing! I chose this destination because I wanted to escape the city noise and enjoy fresh air. The small village surrounded by green hills looked like a painting in spring.
During the trip, I climbed ancient stone steps to a hilltop temple, where I rang a huge bronze bell for good luck. I also learned to make traditional dumplings with a local family, which was messy but fun! The most exciting part was cycling through flower fields under blue skies.
This journey taught me that happiness often comes from simple things - like the smell of wildflowers or sharing stories with new friends. How about your holiday? I’d love to hear your stories!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的英国朋友Tom来信询问你最近的假期旅行经历,要求考生给他写一封回信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
激动的:thrilled→excited 假期:vacation→holiday 吸引:attract→draw 精彩的:wonderful→fantastic
2. 句式拓展:简单句变复合句
原句:This tropical paradise attracted me with its endless golden beaches and coconut trees.
拓展句:The place, which is a tropical paradise, attracted me with its endless golden beaches and coconut trees.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Every morning, I swam in the warm sea while seagulls danced above the waves.(while引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】This trip taught me that simple joys like sunshine and laughter can make life wonderful.(that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 15
(24-25学年高二下•山东省济宁3月月考)
上周,你参加了校学生会组织的环保作品展。请给校英语报写一篇短文介绍此活动,内容包括:
1. 活动过程;
2. 个人感受。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
Last week, I took part in an environmental protection works exhibition organized by the school student union.
At the exhibition, there were various works, such as paintings, handicrafts and posters, all showing different environmental protection ideas. Students walked around, admiring and discussing these works. What’s more, some students actively shared the inspiration behind their works, which further deepened everyone’s understanding of environmental protection.
This activity really impressed me. It not only raised my awareness of environmental protection but also let me see the creativity of my schoolmates. I hope there will be more such meaningful activities.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生介绍参加校学生会组织的环保作品展的活动过程以及个人感受。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
参加:take part in → participate in 各种各样的:various → diverse/a variety of
此外:what’s more → besides/in addition 提高:raise → enhance
2. 句式拓展:简单句变复合句
原句:Last week, I took part in an environmental protection works exhibition organized by the school student union.
拓展句:Last week, I took part in an environmental protection works exhibition, which was organized by the school student union.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Students walked around, admiring and discussing these works.(运用了现在分词作伴随状语)
【高分句型2】What’s more, some students actively shared the inspiration behind their works, which further deepened everyone’s understanding of environmental protection. (运用了关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型3】 It not only raised my awareness of environmental protection but also let me see the creativity of my schoolmates. (运用了not only...but also...并列结构)
Passage 16
(24-25高二下·江苏盐城·3月月考)
假如你是李华,你校上周举办了太空科技展,请你给英文校报投稿,内容包括:
(1)活动内容介绍;
(2)活动反响。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
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【答案】
Last week, our school hosted a Space Technology Exhibition, which was an exciting event for all students.
The exhibition showcased various models of spacecraft, satellites, and even a simulated Mars rover. Experts from the aerospace industry gave insightful lectures on the latest advancements in space exploration. Additionally, interactive displays allowed students to experience the challenges of living in space. The event received overwhelming positive feedback. Many students expressed their fascination with the mysteries of the universe and the potential of space technology. Teachers also praised the exhibition for inspiring curiosity and creativity among students.
Overall, it was a memorable experience that broadened our horizons and deepened our interest in science and technology.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校上周举办了太空科技展,要求考生按照要求给英文校报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
展现:showcase → show 各种各样的:various → a variety of
专家:expert → specialist 表达:express → convey
2.句式拓展:简单句变复合句
原句:Experts from the aerospace industry gave insightful lectures on the latest advancements in space exploration.
拓展句:Experts, who are from the aerospace industry, gave insightful lectures on the latest advancements in space exploration.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Last week, our school hosted a Space Technology Exhibition, which was an exciting event for all students.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Overall, it was a memorable experience that broadened our horizons and deepened our interest in science and technology.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
Passage 17
(24-25高二下·山东枣庄·3月月考)
假如你是李华,你的外国笔友Mike想了解有关中国“工匠精神”的纪录片。请你写一封信,向他推荐一部纪录片,内容包括:
1.推荐《我在故宫修文物》(Masters in the Forbidden City);
2.说明推荐理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
Thrilled to know your interest in China’s craftsmanship, I firmly recommend Masters in the Forbidden City to you, a documentary that truly captures China’s “craftsmanship spirit”.
It focuses on restorers at the Palace Museum who repair ancient artifacts with incredible patience and skill. They bring ancient artifacts back to life. The documentary shows how their passion, patience and dedication bridge the past and present. It teaches us that true mastery lies in passion and perseverance. Watching it, you’ll understand why these unsung heroes deserve admiration.
I hope you’ll enjoy it!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国笔友迈克写信,推荐关于中国“工匠精神”的纪录片。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的:thrilled→excited 聚焦:focus on→concentrate on
奉献:dedication→devotion 毅力:perseverance→tenacity
2.句式拓展:同义句
原句:Watching it, you’ll understand why these unsung heroes deserve admiration.
拓展句:When you watch it, you’ll understand why these unsung heroes deserve admiration.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】It focuses on restorers at the Palace Museum who repair ancient artifacts with incredible patience and skill.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】The documentary shows how their passion, patience and dedication bridge the past and present.(运用了how引导的宾语从句)
Passage 18
(23-24高二下·湖北武汉·期中)
假定你是李华,是红星中学高二年级的学生。最近你们年级的同学参加了社会实践,外教老师Jason对此很感兴趣,请你给他写一封邮件,分享这次经历,内容包括:
1. 实践内容;
2. 体验和感受。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:戏曲欣赏 opera appreciation 插秧 transplanting rice seedlings 扎筏 raft making 篝火 camping fire
Dear Jason,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jason,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to share with you an exciting social practice that our grade recently participated in.
Our social practice included a variety of activities, such as opera appreciation, transplanting rice seedlings, raft making, and enjoying a camping fire. These activities gave us a taste of traditional culture and the joy of hands-on labor.
I loved the opera, feeling the rich cultural heritage. Planting rice and making rafts were fun and taught us teamwork. The camping fire was cozy, strengthening our class bonds.
Overall, it was an enriching experience, blending learning and fun.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。最近你们年级的同学参加了社会实践,外教老师Jason对此很感兴趣,要求考生给他写一封邮件,分享这次经历。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
令人兴奋的:exciting→thrilling 参加:participate in→take part in
快乐:joy→delight 喜爱:love→be fond of
2. 句式拓展:简单句变倒装句
原句:Planting rice and making rafts were fun and taught us teamwork.
拓展句:Not only were planting rice and making rafts enjoyable activities, but they also effectively taught us the importance of teamwork and collaboration.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 I hope this email finds you well. (省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 I loved the opera, feeling the rich cultural heritage. (现在分词作状语)
Passage 19
(23-24高二下·湖北武汉·期中)
假定你是新华中学学生会主席李华,你校有学生经常不吃早餐,针对这一现象,请你写一封倡议书,发表在你校英文报上,呼吁大家按时吃早餐。要点如下:
1.吃早餐的重要性;
2.不吃早餐的原因;
3.你的建议。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear schoolmates,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Students’ Union
【答案】
Dear schoolmates,
As president of the Students’ Union at Xinhua High School, I am writing to address a concerning issue prevalent among our students — skipping breakfast, which is alarming considering the vital role breakfast plays.
Breakfast provides the necessary nutrients and energy to start our day. It fuels both our bodies and minds. Neglecting breakfast can lead to distraction in class, fatigue and even long-term health problems. Common reasons why some students skip breakfast may include rushing to get to school, lack of appetite or time in the morning.
To tackle this issue, we can make small changes to our routines, such as waking up earlier to prepare breakfast or choosing quick and nutritious options like fruit, yogurt, or whole-grain cereal.
In conclusion, let’s value our well-being by starting our day with a nutritious breakfast.
The Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封倡议书,发表在学校英文报上,呼吁大家按时吃早餐。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供:provide→offer 忽视:neglect→ignore 导致:lead to→result in 解决:tackle→deal with
2.句式拓展:合并简单句
原句:Breakfast provides the necessary nutrients and energy to start our day. It fuels both our bodies and minds.
拓展句:Breakfast provides the necessary nutrients and energy to start our day, which fuels both our bodies and minds.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】As president of the Students’ Union at Xinhua High School, I am writing to address a concerning issue prevalent among our students — skipping breakfast, which is alarming considering the vital role breakfast plays.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Common reasons why some students skip breakfast may include rushing to get to school, lack of appetite or time in the morning.(运用了why引导的定语从句)
Passage 20
(24-25高二下·湖北黄冈·3月月考)
假定你是育才中学学生会主席李华,你校即将举行主题为“Let’s go green now”的一项环保活动。请你用英语写一封倡议书,要点包括:
1、倡导绿色生活的原因;
2、实践途径(至少三点)。
注意:1. 词数80词左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
the Students Union
【答案】
Dear fellow students,
With the development of society and economy, many cities are faced with serious environmental problems, which do great harm to people’s health. In order to protect our environment, it is high time that we should go green.
Firstly, we should raise people’s awareness of going green. Secondly, using public transportation or riding bicycles instead of driving cars can make a great difference, which reduce greenhouse effect. What’s more, we should save water, electricity, paper, food and so on. Last but not least, it is a good idea to classify our rubbish and recycle it in our daily life.
Let’s make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment.
the Students Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校即将举行主题为“Let’s go green now”的一项环保活动写一封倡议书。
【详解】1.词汇积累
面临:be faced with→ be confronted with 为了:in order to → so as to
首先:Firstly → First of all 减少:reduce→ decrease
2.句式拓展:简单句变复合句
原句:Let’s make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment.
拓展句:Let’s make joint efforts so that we can create a green and harmonious environment.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】With the development of society and economy, many cities are faced with serious environmental problems, which do great harm to people’s health.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】In order to protect our environment, it is high time that we should go green.(运用了虚拟语气固定句型)
Passage 21
(24-25高二下·湖北武汉·3月月考)
假如你是李华,你校英文报正在关于“中学生是否可以借助DeepSeek进行学习”这一话题进行征稿,请你向校报投稿,谈谈你的观点并陈述理由。
注意:1. 词数不少于80;
2. 开头、结尾已为你写出,不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Kind regards,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear editor,
I believe middle school students can benefit from using DeepSeek for learning if guided properly.
Firstly, it provides instant access to knowledge explanations, helping us clarify confusing concepts efficiently. Secondly, its personalized learning features allow students to review weak areas systematically. However, overreliance should be avoided. Students must develop independent thinking by verifying AI-generated answers through textbooks and teacher consultations.
In conclusion, DeepSeek serves as a powerful supplementary tool rather than a replacement for traditional learning methods. By balancing technology with active human engagement, we can maximize academic progress.
Kind regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿征文。要求考生以“中学生是否可以借助DeepSeek进行学习”这一话题写一篇短文,向校报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先:firstly→to start with 帮助:help→assist 允许:allow→permit 总之:in conclusion→all in all
2.句式拓展:简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, it provides instant access to knowledge explanations, helping us clarify confusing concepts efficiently.
拓展句:Firstly, it provides instant access to knowledge explanations, which helps us clarify confusing concepts efficiently.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Firstly, it provides instant access to knowledge explanations, helping us clarify confusing concepts efficiently. (运用了非谓语现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】By balancing technology with active human engagement, we can maximize academic progress. (运用了非谓语动词动名词作宾语)
Passage 22
(24-25学年高二下•湖北省咸宁3月月考)
上周你校举办了文化艺术节,请你为学校写一篇文章介绍这个活动,内容包括:
1. 时间地点;
2. 活动内容;
3. 活动影响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
Our School’s Arts Festival
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Our School’s Arts Festival
Last week, our school held a remarkable arts festival in the school hall.
The festival featured various activities. There were amazing painting exhibitions showing students’ creative works. Also, students gave wonderful performances like dancing and singing. Besides, a drama show impressed everyone deeply.
This festival not only enriched our school life but also inspired students’ love for art and culture. It created a positive and artistic atmosphere on campus. All of us benefited a lot from it.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于上周你校举办了文化艺术节这一情况,为学校写一篇文章介绍这个活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
各种各样的:various→ all kinds of 此外:Besides → What’s more
激发:inspired→ motivated 精彩的:wonderful→ fantastic
2.句式拓展:合并句子
原句:It created a positive and artistic atmosphere on campus. All of us benefited a lot from it.
合并句:It created a positive and artistic atmosphere on campus, which benefited us a lot.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】There were amazing painting exhibitions showing students’ creative works.(运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作后置定语修饰exhibitions)
【高分句型2】This festival not only enriched our school life but also inspired students’ love for art and culture.(运用了not only…but also…的固定句型)
Passage 23
(23-24高二下·湖南岳阳·3月月考)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Sam来信祝贺你的生日,并寄给你一本英语词典和一本科幻小说《地心游记》(Journey to the Centre of the Earth)作为礼物,请你为此用英语给他写一封回信。内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.告诉他你的英语进步情况;
3.邀请他暑假来玩。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sam,
I’m so grateful for the birthday blessing and gifts you sent to me.
As you know, it’s a challenge for me to learn English well, so I turned to you for help. You advised that I should read more and enlarge my vocabulary. While reading English stories, I came across some new words, so a dictionary was exactly what I needed. Then, I received your gifts, an English dictionary and the novel named Journey to the Centre of the Earth. What a timely help! Encouragingly, I have made some progress in a recent exam. I’ll go on working hard and do better.
I hope you can come to my city for a visit during the summer vacation and we can have fun together.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Sam回信,对其赠送的礼物表示感谢,告知自己的英语进步情况并邀请他暑假来玩。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激的:grateful→appreciative 帮助:help→assistance
建议:advise→suggest 玩得开心:have fun→enjoy oneself
2.句式拓展:简单句变复合句
原句:Then, I received your gifts, an English dictionary and the novel named Journey to the Centre of the Earth.
拓展句:Then, I received your gifts, an English dictionary and the novel whose name is Journey to the Centre of the Earth.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 As you know, it’s a challenge for me to learn English well, so I turned to you for help.(运用as引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 While reading English stories, I came across some new words, so a dictionary was exactly what I needed.(运用状语从句省略,what引导表语从句)
Passage 24
(24-25高二下·湖南长沙·3月月考)
假定你是李华,你校拟近期组织一次踏青活动(spring-outing)。请给外教Michael写封邮件,邀请他参加,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.具体行程安排。
注意:80字左右。
Dear Michael,
I am Li Hua. ____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Michael,
I am Li Hua, writing to extend a warm invitation to you to join us for our upcoming spring-outing activity. The main purpose of this event is to provide a much-needed break from our daily routines, allowing us all to enjoy the beauty of nature and foster a stronger sense of community.
The specific itinerary is as follows: We will meet at the school gate at 9:00 a.m. this Saturday. From there, we will board a bus that will take us to our destination, a picturesque park nearby. Upon arrival, we will embark on a leisurely walk through the park, taking in the fresh air and admiring the blooming flowers.
Looking forward to your participation!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Michael写封邮件,邀请他参加踏青活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目的:purpose→goal 即将到来的:upcoming→forthcoming 欣赏:enjoy→appreciate
呼吸:take in→breathe in
2.句式拓展:简单句变复合句
原句:The main purpose of this event is to provide a much-needed break from our daily routines, allowing us all to enjoy the beauty of nature and foster a stronger sense of community.
拓展句:The main purpose of this event is to provide a much-needed break from our daily routines, which allows us all to enjoy the beauty of nature and foster a stronger sense of community.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】From there, we will board a bus that will take us to our destination, a picturesque park nearby. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Upon arrival, we will embark on a leisurely walk through the park, taking in the fresh air and admiring the blooming flowers. (运用了现在分词作状语)
Passage 25
(24-25高二下·湖南郴州·3月月考)
假如你是李华,在2月青少年武术锦标赛中,你的朋友Simon和他的团队获得了5枚银牌,但未获得金牌,他为此深感失落。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)表达对Simon情绪的理解;
(2)分享你对体育精神的两点看法;
(3)再次鼓励或肯定Simon。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Simon,
I know the result of the Youth Martial Arts Championships must be a disappointment to you.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Simon,
I know the result of the Youth Martial Arts Championships must be a disappointment to you. Winning five silver medals is an incredible achievement, but I understand how you might feel about missing the gold.
In sports, what truly matters is not just the medals but the effort and growth along the way. First, perseverance is key - every setback is a step toward future success. Second, teamwork and sportsmanship are more valuable than any trophy.
You’ve already proven your talent and dedication. Keep pushing forward, and I’m sure greater victories await you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生给朋友Simon写一封,表达对他错失金牌的安慰,分享对体育精神的看法并鼓励肯定Simon的努力。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
失望:disappointment →frustration/ dissatisfaction 出色的:incredible → amazing/remarkable
成就:achievement → accomplishment 努力:effort →dedication/ commitment
2. 句式拓展:简单句变复合句
原句:First, perseverance is key - every setback is a step toward future success.
拓展句:First, perseverance, as we all know, is key - every setback is a step toward future success.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Winning five silver medals is an incredible achievement, but I understand how you might feel about missing the gold. (运用了动名词作主语,运用了how引导宾语从句,运用了动名词作宾语)
【高分句型2】In sports, what truly matters is not just the medals but the effort and growth along the way.(运用了what引导主语从句)
Passage 26
(24-25高二下·湖南长沙·3月月考)
假设你是李华,请给学校的英语报写一封倡议书,呼吁大家保护文化遗产。内容包括:
1.分析世界文化遗产现状;
2.说明文化遗产的重要性;
3.给出保护措施(至少两条)。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear editor,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear editor,
Nowadays, many cultural heritage sites have been destroyed, facing the danger of disappearing. Heritage protection is at the top of the agenda.
Cultural heritage is a symbol of great civilization. It offers us a great opportunity to learn about what happened in the past.
In my opinion, some measures should be taken to protect cultural heritage effectively. To start with, the government should make policies to regulate people’s behaviour at the relics. As teenagers, we can draw more people’s attention to it, for the more they know about the importance of cultural heritage protection, the stronger support we will get from the public.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给学校的英语报写一封倡议书,呼吁大家保护文化遗产。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供某人某物:offer sb sth→provide sb with sth 发生:happen→take place
应该:should→be supposed to 首先:to start with→first of all
2.句式拓展:合并句子
原句:Cultural heritage is a symbol of great civilization. It offers us a great opportunity to learn about what happened in the past.
拓展句:Cultural heritage is a symbol of great civilization, which offers us a great opportunity to learn about what happened in the past.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】It offers us a great opportunity to learn about what happened in the past.(运用了what引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Nowadays, many cultural heritage sites have been destroyed, facing the danger of disappearing.(运用了现在分词作结果状语)
Passage 27
(24-25高二下·广东茂名·阶段练习)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 Tom打算利用暑假参加志愿者活动,目前有两个选择:在当地社区图书馆帮忙,或是参与环保组织的海滩清洁项目。他向你征求意见,请你写一封回信,内容包括:
1.对他参与志愿活动的赞赏;
2.对比这两个选择并给出你的建议。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I am extremely pleased to learn that you intend to engage in volunteer activities during your summer vacation. This is an exceptionally noble and rewarding decision.
Both the local community library assistance and the beach clean-up project organized by the environmental organization are outstanding options, each possessing its own unique advantages. The library option allows you to interact with various people, help with book arrangement and run reading clubs, improving your communication with others. Plus, you can immerse yourself in books. The beach clean-up project, on the contrary, lets you work outdoors, protect the environment and learn about ecosystems.
If you prefer indoor, book-related work, go for the library. If you love nature and hands-on work, choose the beach clean-up. No matter which one you choose, I’m sure you’ll have a great time!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生就你的英国笔友Tom利用暑假参加志愿者活动的选择问题写一封回信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
打算做某事: intend to do sth→plan to do sth 不同的:various→different
帮助:help→assist 能够:can→be able to
2.句式拓展:简单句变复合句
原句:Both the local community library assistance and the beach clean-up project organized by the environmental organization are outstanding options, each possessing its own unique advantages.
拓展句:Both the local community library assistance and the beach clean-up project organized by the environmental organization are outstanding options, each of which possesses its own unique advantages.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I am extremely pleased to learn that you intend to engage in volunteer activities during your summer vacation. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】The library option allows you to interact with various people, help with book arrangement and run reading clubs, improving your communication with others.(运用了现在分词作状语)
Passage 28
(24-25学年高二下•广东省江门期中)
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Take a Break from Social Media为题,写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
1. 提出观点;
2. 陈述理由;
3. 发起倡议。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Take a Break from Social Media
Good morning, everyone!
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That’s all. Thank you.
【答案】Version 1: 从“social media的弊端”角度陈述理由
Take a Break from Social Media
Good morning, everyone!
I’m so privileged to deliver a speech here. In the age of the Internet when many teenagers are addicted to social media, I think we should take a break from it.
Firstly, with much time spent on social media, students nowadays cannot concentrate on their studies, which will inevitably affect their academic performance. Besides, excessive exposure to the virtual world may create a false sense of reality and a loss of real human contact. Lastly, spending too much time on social network could also bring about mental and physical health issues such as depression and poor eyesight.
Even though social media can keep us updated, we do need to turn off our devices for a while and embrace the physical world.
That’s all. Thank you.
Version 2: 从“take a break的益处”角度陈述理由
Take a Break from Social Media
Good morning, everyone!
I’m so privileged to deliver a speech here. In the age of the Internet when many teenagers are addicted to social media, I think we should take a break from it.
Firstly, taking a break from social media allows us to have more real contact with our family and friends, which helps us establish better interpersonal relationships. Besides, when freed from social media, we will have more time for hobbies like reading and painting, through which we can enjoy our life to the fullest. Lastly, spending less time on social media makes time for doing exercise and thus helps improve both our physical and mental health.
Even though social media can keep us updated, we do need to turn off our devices for a while and embrace the physical world.
That’s all. Thank you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Take a Break from Social Media为题,写一篇发言稿参赛
【详解】1.词汇积累
发表演讲:deliver a speech→give a speech 沉迷于:be addicted to→be obsessed with
集中于:concentrate on→focus on 此外:besides→additionally
2.句式拓展:同义句转换
原句:Firstly, with much time spent on social media, students nowadays cannot concentrate on their studies, which will inevitably affect their academic performance.
拓展句:Firstly, students nowadays cannot concentrate on their studies because they spent too much time on social media, which will inevitably affect their academic performance.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】In the age of the Internet when many teenagers are addicted to social media, I think we should take a break from it. (运用了定语从句)
【高分句型2】Lastly, spending too much time on social network could also bring about mental and physical health issues such as depression and poor eyesight. (运用了动名词作主语)
Passage 29
(24-25高二下·广东茂名·3月月考)
假定你是李华,最近某中学英语报正在举办以“中国春节申遗成功”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文向该报投稿,内容包括:
1. 春节的意义;
2. 倡议加强文化遗产保护,弘扬传统文化。
参考词汇:人类非物质文化遗产名录List of Intangible Cultural Heritage of Humanity
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
The Spring Festival, the most important traditional festival in China, is a time to ring out the old and ring in the new. Most importantly, it represents the traditional Chinese virtue of respecting ancestors and highlighting family unity and prosperity. By celebrating traditional festivals like the Spring Festival, not only can we strengthen the inheritance and protection of cultural heritage, but we can promote excellent traditional Chinese culture.
Let’s value and pass on this cultural treasure to future generations.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿征文,要求考生就某中学英语报正在举办以“中国春节申遗成功”为主题的征文活动写一篇短文向该报投稿。其内容包括:春节的意义和倡议加强文化遗产保护,弘扬传统文化。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的:important →significant 强调: highlight→stress
能够:can→ be able to 重视:value→attach importance to
2.句式拓展:简单句变复合句
原句:The Spring Festival, the most important traditional festival in China, is a time to ring out the old and ring in the new.
拓展句:The Spring Festival, which is regarded as the most important traditional festival in China, is a time to ring out the old and ring in the new.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Most importantly, it represents the traditional Chinese virtue of respecting ancestors and highlighting family unity and prosperity. (运用了动名词作介词后宾语)
【高分句型2】By celebrating traditional festivals like the Spring Festival, not only can we strengthen the inheritance and protection of cultural heritage, but we can promote excellent traditional Chinese culture. (运用了not only提前构成的部分倒装)
Passage 30
(23-24学年高二下•浙江省杭州期中)
在口语课上,外教Alex组织同学们讨论是否使用网络投票(online voting)的方式评选校园十佳歌手。请你代表小组发言,内容包括:
1.小组观点;
2.陈述理由。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hello, everyone!
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Thank you for listening!
【答案】参考范文一
Hello, everyone!
Our group believes that online voting is a fantastic idea to select the top ten campus singers.
Firstly, it’s important to acknowledge that online voting is convenient and accessible to everyone. With just a few clicks on a computer or a smartphone, we can easily cast votes to support our favourite singers. Besides, online voting allows for a wider reach and engagement, breaking down the boundaries of physical locations and enabling more people to participate in the voting process. Overall, we think online voting is a convenient and inclusive means for choosing the top ten campus singers.
Thank you for listening!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表小组发言,陈述小组对于是否使用网络投票的方式评选校园十佳歌手的观点,并陈述理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先:firstly→first and foremost 重要的:important→significant
另外:besides→moreover 参加:participate in→take part in
2.句式拓展:简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, online voting allows for a wider reach and engagement, breaking down the boundaries of physical locations and enabling more people to participate in the voting process.
拓展句:Besides, online voting allows for a wider reach and engagement, which can break down the boundaries of physical locations and enabling more people to participate in the voting process.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Our group believes that online voting is a fantastic idea to select the top ten campus singers. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, online voting allows for a wider reach and engagement, breaking down the boundaries of physical locations and enabling more people to participate in the voting process. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
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