Unit 1 Section Ⅳ Writing（课件PPT）-【优化指导】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第四册（外研版2019）

UNIT 1　Looking forwards Section Ⅳ　Writing 1.写作词汇再现 ①volunteer志愿者 ②fluently流利地 ③gratefully感激地 ④express表达；表示 ⑤struggle斗争；努力 UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 ⑥application申请；应用 ⑦register注册；登记 ⑧have a good command/knowledge of精通；掌握 ⑨feel honored感到荣幸 apply for申请 ⑪first of all首先 ⑫provide ...for ...为……提供…… UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 ⑬have a chance to do sth.有机会做某事 ⑭communicate well with与……良好沟通 ⑮take ...into consideration 把……考虑在内 UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 2．精彩句式再练 单句填空/完成句子 I'd feel _______(honor) if I have a chance to do voluntary work for the guests from all over the world. ②我想申请6月30日《每日新闻》刊登的当地导游的职位。 I wish to ____________________________________ as advertised in the Daily News on 30 June. honored apply for the position of a local tour guide UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 ③如我所附简历所示，我能流利地说英语和法语。 As stated in my attached CV，____________________________________________． ④我很高兴有机会与你进一步讨论我的申请。 I would be delighted to __________________________ my application further with you. have the opportunity to discuss I can speak both English and French fluently UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 ⑤我写信是想申请成为即将在贵美术馆举办的中国画展的志愿者。 _______________________________ for the Chinese Painting Exhibition to be held in your art gallery. ⑥我认为我能胜任这份工作，因为我从小就学习中国画。 I think ______________________，because I have learned Chinese painting since boyhood. I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer I am qualified for this job UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 ⑦如果你能给我这次机会，我将非常感激。 _____________________ if you could offer me the opportunity. ⑧我精通英语口语和书面语。 I ______________________ both spoken and written English. I would be very grateful have a good command of UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 Ⅰ 写一封申请信 ►文体感知 申请信是一种应用文文体，一封出色的申请信是得到理想职位的关键。这类文章一般具有以下特点： 1．时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，有时会用到一般将来时。 2．人称相对统一，主要采用第一人称。 3．文章主要叙述真实情况，不需要发表评论。 UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 ►写作技巧 这类文章的写作，通常要注意以下几点： 1．直入主题。解释你为什么写这封申请信，并表明你感兴趣的职位或工作。 2．申请信是证明你的能力的好机会，因此确定该职位的技能要求是重要的一步。看清招聘信息上列出的每项要求，再将自己的学历、能力与兴趣逐一与之对应；然后具体介绍与这些技能相关的工作经历；最后表明自己的信心。 UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 ►典例展示 假定你是李华，你所在的城市将举办“国际旅游博览会”，计划招募志愿者，你想报名参加。请你用英语写一封申请信，内容包括： 1．表达意愿； 2．你的优势。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 参考词汇：国际旅游博览会the International Tourism Fair __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 确定体裁、 话题 体裁：应用文 话题：申请做志愿者 确定时态、 人称 时态：一般现在时为主 人称：第一人称为主 UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 布局文章 架构 首段：开门见山，直奔主题 中段：陈述理由 尾段：表达意愿 列出核心 要点 1.介绍想要申请的职位 2．陈述优势、理由等 3．期盼答复 UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 [实践应用] 1．完成句子 ①我在报纸上看到了你们的志愿者招聘信息。 I have read your recruitment information ___________________________． ②我想申请成为其中一员。 I'd like to _______________． for volunteers on the newspaper apply to be one UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 ③我愿意为公众提供服务。 I'm willing to ______________________________． ④国际旅游博览会是即将在我市举办的一项重要活动。 The International Tourism Fair is an important event __________ in our city. provide service for the public to be held UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 ⑤我感到很荣幸。我有机会为来自世界各地的客人做志愿工作。 I'd ____________．I ________________________________ for the guests from all over the world. ⑥我英语说得很流利。 I _____________ fluently. feel honored have a chance to do voluntary work speak English UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 ⑦它使我能够很好地与外国人交流。 It _________________________ well with foreigners. ⑧我有做志愿工作的经验。 I ___________________ of doing voluntary work. enables me to communicate have the experience UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 2．句式升级 ⑨用连词升级句⑤为主从复合句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________ 用定语从句升级句⑥和句⑦为主从复合句 ______________________________________________________________________________ I'd feel honored if I have a chance to do voluntary work for the guests from all over the world. I speak English fluently，which enables me to communicate well with foreigners. UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 3．靓化成篇 结合以上句子写一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。 UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 [参考范文] Dear Sir or Madam， I have read your recruitment information for volunteers on the newspaper.I'd like to apply to be one. UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 First of all，I'm willing to provide service for the public.It is undoubtedly meaningful.The International Tourism Fair is an important event to be held in our city.I'd feel honored if I have a chance to do voluntary work for the guests from all over the world.Secondly，I speak English fluently，which enables me to communicate well with foreigners.Last but not least，I have the experience of doing voluntary work. UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 Please take my application into consideration and I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours， Li Hua UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 ►实战演练 假定你是李华，你从报纸上看到某旅游区寒假拟招聘一名英语导游。请你根据以下要点写一封申请信，介绍自己的情况。要点如下： 1．写信目的； 2．自荐理由(了解当地的风俗文化、擅长英语等)； 3．希望获准。 UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 [参考范文] Dear Sir or Madam， I am Li Hua，a student in No.1 middle school.From the advertisement，I know an English guide is wanted in winter.So I'm writing the letter to recommend myself. UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 I'm eighteen，a local as well.Thus，I have a good knowledge of local customs and cultures.In addition，I'm good at communicating with others in English and I have taken part in many national English contests，which also proved myself.Now I would like to put what I have learned into practice.Moreover，I am very interested in English，so I firmly believe that I am quite suitable for the post. UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 I'd appreciate it if you would give me the chance to work as a guide this winter.Looking forward to your early reply. Yours， Li Hua UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 Ⅱ 读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 As an old saying goes，we make a living by what we get，but make a life by what we give. UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 I truly believe that a job is definitely not a job if you love what you are doing.Many years ago，I worked in an employment and insurance office，which helps people find jobs，apply for employment and insurance，and return to school for training.What could be more rewarding than to help someone find a job or change their career? UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 I have always said that people are at their worst when they are unemployed or sick.I must admit that some days were challenging.But I have one amazing story that I would like to share. One day，a lady came to the office with a dream of becoming a registered nurse.According to my client，her family did not approve.She was a mother with young children，and her husband had returned to school for training.It was not economically practical for her to return to school. UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 It was clear that this lady had a passion for the nursing profession，so I encouraged her to realize her dream.I equipped her with the information necessary to apply for nursing school，and she left the office.She went on her way，and I never knew whether she followed her dream or not. Many years later，I was diagnosed(诊断) with cancer of the stomach and was admitted to the hospital for an operation.I must admit I was scared.My mother had died of cancer at age forty.I had a husband and two beautiful children.I was only forty-eight years old.The surgery was successful.It was，however，very painful.Days flew smoothly as I recovered from the pain. UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右﹔ 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 Paragraph 1： But one night the pain began growing stronger. ________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 Paragraph 2： “You never know what impact your encouraging words had on me，” the nurse said.__________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 [巧读文] 1．读要素 Who：I；a lady Where：office；hospital When：one day UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 What：I worked in an employment and insurance office and met a mother with young children who wanted to become a registered nurse，but her family did not agree.I provided her with information on applying for nursing school.Many years later，I was diagnosed with stomach cancer.The surgery was successful，and I recovered from the pain. UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 2．读双线(情节线、情感线) 情节线： UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 情感线： rewarding→passionate→scared UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 [妙构思] 1．读首句，定方向 Paragraph 1： 由续写第一段首句“But one night the pain began growing stronger.(但有一天晚上，疼痛开始变得强烈起来。)”可推知，第一段可以描写作者偶遇了当年帮助的那个想要成为护士的女性，并帮助了作者。由续写第二段首句可知，第一段结束的时候要提到作者想知道她是如何追求梦想的。 UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 Paragraph 2： 由续写第二段首句“‘You never know what impact your encouraging words had on me，’ the nurse said.(护士说：‘你永远不知道你鼓励的话语对我有什么影响。’)”可知，该段可以描写护士受作者鼓舞追求梦想的过程以及作者的感悟。 UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 2．巧设问，定细节 Paragraph 1： (1)Who was sent to look after the author? ____________________________________ (2)How did the author feel? ______________________________ (3)What did the author want to know? _______________________________________ A nurse that the author once helped. She felt amazed and surprised. She wondered how she pursued her dream. UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 Paragraph 2： (1)What did the lady tell her? _____________________ (2)How did the author feel? ___________ (3)What did the author think? _____________________________________________ Her story of success. Luckily ... Helping others will benefit yourself as well. UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 [雕句式] 根据提示升级下列句子 1．I should express my sincere thanks to you actually. →______________ I should express my sincere thanks to actually.(强调宾语) 2．As I was amazed and surprised，I recognized she was the young lady.She had been interviewed by me. →____________________，I recognized she was the young lady ___________________________．(形容词作状语；定语从句) It is you that Amazed and surprised who had been interviewed by me UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 3．After she had overcome tremendous difficulties in economy and got support from her family，she returned to school for study and eventually fulfilled her dream as a registered nurse. →___________________________________________________________________________，she returned to school for study and eventually fulfilled her dream as a registered nurse.(分词作状语) Having overcome tremendous difficulties in economy and got support from her family UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 [成美文] Paragraph 1： But one night the pain began growing stronger._________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 Paragraph 2： “You never know what impact your encouraging words had on me，” the nurse said._________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 [参考范文] Paragraph 1： But one night the pain began growing stronger.A nurse was sent for special medical help.After that，I felt more relieved.“Thanks to your timely care，I feel much better，” I said gratefully to the nurse.“It is you that I should express my sincere thanks to actually.Remember the struggling mother many years ago？” she asked.Amazed and surprised，I recognized her—she was the young lady who had been interviewed by me.“How did you make it？” I asked，wondering how she pursued her dream. UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 Paragraph 2： “You never know what impact your encouraging words had on me，” the nurse said.She told me that she was determined to achieve her goal following my advice.Having overcome tremendous difficulties in economy and got support from her family，she returned to school for study and eventually fulfilled her dream as a registered nurse.So fantastic was this encounter.How blessed we were to have met each other！What could be more rewarding than to help someone fulfill their dreams？Helping others will benefit yourself as well. UNIT 1　Looking forwards 英语　选择性必修　第四册　W 返回导航 课时梯级训练(四) 单元综合检测(一) 谢 谢 [审题谋篇] $$