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Section IV
Writing
应用文写作-写一封景点的推荐
信
技法指导
本单元的写作任务是应用文写作,主题为写一封景点的推荐信。推荐信在用语上应礼貌、周
到;对于所推荐的人、事物或事件应详细讲述推荐的原因及可能给对方带来的好处等。景点
类的推荐信通常可分为三部分
开头-总体介绍,引出所推荐的景点。
主体-详细介绍此地的特色,如风景名胜、著名建筑,并阐述推荐该地的理由。
结尾-表示祝愿及欢迎
经典句式
1.开头常用句式
①Learning that you are coming to visit China, I'd like to recommend several places of interest tc
you.
得知你将来中国游览,我想向你推荐几处名胜。
②l'm really excited and eager to introduce some places of this country to you
我真的很兴奋并渴望向你介绍这个国家的一些地方。
③l'm more than glad/pleased/delighted to learn that you are going to Beijing, and I'd like to offer
my recommendation
得知你要去北京我很高兴,我想向你提议。
2. 主体段落常用句式
①Hainan Province consists of Hainan Island and neighbouring isles as well as wide sea areas
海南省由海南岛和附近的小岛及广阔的海域组成
②I recommend that you sleep in a tent at night so that you can get close to nature
我建议你晚上睡在帐蓬中以便你可以亲近大自然
③The old town dates back to the late seventeenth century
这座古城建于十七世纪后期
④China lies in the east of Asia and on the western coast of the Pacific Ocean
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中国位于亚潮东部,太平洋的西岸。
Beijing has many places of interest. among which is the Forbidden City
北京有许多名胜,其中包括故宫。
One-third of the island is covered with forest
这个岛的三分之一都是森林。
3. 结尾常用句式
①I do hope you can take my recommendations into account/consideration and make a final
decision.
我真希望你能考虑我的推荐并做出最后的决定。
②I sincerely hope that my recommendation can be of some help to you
我真诚地希望我的推荐能对您有所帮助
③If you have any questions about this place, please feel free to contact me
如果你对这个地方有任何问题,请随时联系我。
典例演练
假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Richard一家计划来安微度假,向你了解相关情况。请你用英
语给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1推荐他们游黄山、听黄梅戏、品微茶
2.推荐理由(不少于两点);
3.温馨提示(天气、交通等).
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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[精彩范文]
Dear Richard.
How are you doing? I'm glad to hear that your family and you are planning to go to Anhui
Province on holiday. There are some suggestions about this travel I'd like to offer to you before you
arrive.
Huangshan is a must for every visitor to Anhui, which is famous at home and abroad with its
amazing scenery. At the same time, you can enjoy Huangmei Opera, a special of Anhui, equal to
Peking Opera of China, while drinking Anhui Tea with its unique wonderful taste
Additionally, you can visit some websites to learn the local weather conditions and
transportation concerned in advance to be well prepared for this trip
Looking forward to your coming
Yours.
LiHua
总评
本文分为三个部分:第一部分为日常问候;第二部分为游览建议和推荐理由;最后为
温馨提示和期待。脉络非常清晰,准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,同时也
使用了高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,并在句式的选择上富于变化
[亮点呈现]
(1)at thesametime,equalto等短语的运用,凸显了作者灵活运用语言的能力,极大地吸引了
读者的注意力。
(2)宾语从句I'mgladtohear that.,非限制性定语从句which is famous at.的使用,提升了
文章的档次。
(3)There are some suggestions about this travel I'd like to offer to you before you arrive.运用了
therebe句型及省略that/which的定语从句,彰显了作者扎实的英语写作功底
, 跟踪演练
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Selena来信告知她全家打算到湖南旅行的消息,并希望你能推
荐熟悉的旅游路线,如“长沙之行”“风凰之行”等。请你给她回信,内容包括:
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1. 推荐的路线
2. 推荐的理由;
3. 你的祝愿。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Selena
I am more than delighted to know that your family and you are about to visit Hunan. ..-.
....................................................................................................................................
Hope you'll enjoy your stay here and keep in touch
Yourssincerely
LiHua
[精彩范文]
灰度印刷 可临练习
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Dear Selena
I am more than deliahted to know that your family and
you are about to visit Hunan Since I was born and raised in
the capital city, Chanasha, it's my pleasure to suggest youd
wonderful trio here
To beain with, the Tianxin Tower is a place that you can't
miss as it stands in the south of the old city, qoing throuqh
the hard experience and witnessing the big chanqes of
Chanasha, Moreoyer. for a foodie. there is no better place
than Pozi Street. where you can enjoy some delicious food
like spicy crayfish, Besides. if you want to buy some souvenirs.
you may pay a visit to the shopping malls which are centered
around the Wuyi Sauare
Hope you'll enjoy your stay here and keep in touch.
Yours sincerely
LiHuC