Unit 1 Section Ⅳ Writing（课件PPT）-【优化指导】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第三册（外研版2019）

UNIT 1　Face values (单元主题语境：人与自我——外表与内心的关系) Section Ⅳ　Writing 1.写作词汇再现 ①masterpiece n．代表作 ②vividly adv.生动地 ③reflect v．反映 ④grow up长大 ⑤run away from ...从……逃跑 ⑥more than不仅仅 ⑦all walks of life社会各个阶层 UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 ⑧be considered as ...被认为…… ⑨elegant adj.优雅的 fashionable adj.时髦的 ⑪untidy adj.不整洁的 ⑫well-dressed adj.衣着华丽的 ⑬surprised adj.惊讶的 ⑭sigh v．& n．叹息 UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 ⑮disappointed adj.失望的 ⑯desperate adj.绝望的 ⑰lose heart 丧失信心 ⑱think of 考虑到；想到 UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 2.精彩句式再练 单句填空/完成句子 ①Jane Eyre never ____(feel) herself inferior as a tutor before Mr.Rochester. ②There's no doubt ____ it's the best book that I've ever read. felt that UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 ③这本小说是我最喜欢的书，因为它很有意义，我可以从中学到很多。 This novel is my favorite book _______________________________________． ④这本书揭示了这样一个真理：人不是为失败而生的，一个人可以被毁灭，但不能被打败。 _________________________：people are not born for defeat；a man can be destroyed，but not defeated. because it's so meaningful that I can learn a lot from it This book reveals such a truth UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 ⑤她说这话时面无表情，非常严肃。(with) She said this _______________________________． ⑥阳光照射进来，他们的眼睛里闪耀着喜悦的光芒。 The sun shined in and their eyes _________________． with a completely straight face sparkled with joy UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 ⑦他不高不矮，长着一张圆脸、一张大嘴巴和一双灰色的眼睛，看上去很和蔼可亲。 He is ______________________，with a round face，a wide mouth and grey eyes，_________________． neither tall nor short looking very kind UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 Ⅰ 介绍文学作品 ►文体感知 介绍文学作品的文章属于说明文的范畴，内容包括作者简介、作品主要内容、写作背景、作品评价、作品的影响以及给读者的启示等。注意语言要简洁，表述要清晰有条理。 UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 ►写作技巧 介绍文学作品的文章一般可分三段来写。 1．第一段：整体介绍该作品(书名、作者和作品类型)； 2．第二段：概述作品的主要内容(通常用一般现在时)； 3．第三段：讨论作品的主题和意义，也可适当发表自己的感悟和评论。 UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 ►典例展示 假设你们班要办一期英语角，主题是“我最喜欢的英文文学作品”。请你写一篇短文介绍一下马克·吐温(Mark Twain)的《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》(The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn)。内容包括： UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 1．作者：马克·吐温，美国作家，在密西西比河(the Mississippi River)畔的一个小城长大； 2．内容简介：这部小说讲述了男孩哈克贝利·费恩从家中逃走，和奴隶吉姆在密西西比河流浪的故事； 3．评价：小说生动地反映了当时的社会，被认为美国文学史上最伟大的作品之一。 UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 ______________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 [审题谋篇] 确定体裁、话题 体裁：说明文 话题：介绍马克·吐温的《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》 确定时态、人称 时态：一般现在时为主 人称：第三人称为主 UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 布局文章架构 首段：作者和作品简介 中段：情节介绍 尾段：评价 列出核心要点 1.简要介绍马克·吐温及其作品 2．介绍作品《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》 3．评价《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》 UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 [实践应用] 1．完成句子 ①马克·吐温是一位美国作家。 Mark Twain is __________________． ②他以写故事而闻名。 He was famous for _______________． ③马克·吐温在密西西比河畔的一座小城长大。 Mark Twain _______________________ on the banks of the Mississippi River. an American writer writing stories grew up in a small town UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 ④他的代表作之一是《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》。 _______________________ is The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn. ⑤在小说中，男孩哈克贝利·费恩从家中逃走，和一个名叫吉姆的奴隶沿着密西西比河游荡。 In the novel，a boy，Huckleberry Finn ___________________ and ____________ the Mississippi River with a slave named Jim. One of his masterpieces runs away from home wanders down UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 ⑥哈克贝利遇见的人物涵盖了社会所有阶层，因此这部小说生动地反映了当时的社会状况。 Huckleberry meets people ______________________________．So the novel ___________________________________________________． ⑦《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》在美国文学史上一直被称为“最伟大的作品之一”。 The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn has been considered as _______________________________________________________________． who are from all walks of life vividly reflects the social conditions at that time one of the greatest works in the history of American literature UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 2．句式升级 ⑧将句①和句②合并为含有同位语的句子 _____________________________________________________________ ⑨用无灵主语句以及定语从句合并句③和句④ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．靓化成篇 结合以上句子写一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。 Mark Twain，an American writer，was famous for writing stories. A small town on the banks of the Mississippi River saw the growth of Mark Twain，one of whose masterpieces is The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn. UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 [参考范文] Mark Twain，an American writer，was famous for writing stories.A small town on the banks of the Mississippi River saw the growth of Mark Twain，one of whose masterpieces is The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn. In the novel，a boy，Huckleberry Finn runs away from home and wanders down the Mississippi River with a slave named Jim.But the story is more than that.Huckleberry meets people who are from all walks of life.So the novel vividly reflects the social conditions at that time. The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn has been considered as one of the greatest works in the history of American literature. UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 ►实战演练 假定你是李华，你校举办了“名著助我成长”的征文比赛，请你写一篇介绍美国作家欧内斯特·米勒尔·海明威(Ernest Miller Hemingway)的小说《老人与海》(The Old Man and the Sea)的短文参赛。内容包括： 1．主要人物：老渔夫Santiago(乐观自信，勇于面对困难)； 2．主要内容：Santiago在捕获大马林鱼(marlin)后与鲨鱼搏斗的冒险故事； 3．作品主题：面对挫折和困难要坚持不懈、勇往直前，展现自己的精神力量。 注意：词数80左右。 UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 [参考范文] The Old Man and the Sea is a novel written by Ernest Miller Hemingway.This book tells the story of Santiago，an experienced but lonely old fisherman who is optimistic，confident，and brave in facing setbacks and difficulties.He caught a marlin，which is one of the world's largest fish，but his adventure is not over yet.On the way back，he had to fight against a number of sharks.The book praises the old fisherman's determination and encourages people not to give in to any difficulties. Personally，I think this is a touching story that will motivate those who read it. UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 Ⅱ 读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I first became conscious of my body image last year in the fifth grade.One day I was walking by my mirror getting ready for bed and I noticed that my stomach looked big.I started to really hate that and think I was fat even though my family always told me how skinny I was.It wasn't only my stomach—I started to think my nose was ugly and that my laugh was disgusting.I was even afraid to laugh or smile in public. UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 Then，in the sixth grade，a popular guy in my class named Luke made it worse.He told his table group that my body looked swollen in skinny jeans.I heard about it from someone else，but then Luke even told me to my face！I couldn't stop thinking about what Luke had said.Even worse，I started to believe it was true，and I hid my skinny jeans all the way at the bottom of my drawer. UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 I know I cared too much about what other people said and thought about me.I guess I just wanted to be liked.In fact，I really wish I could have just brushed off comments like that，but I couldn't change my personality and what I care about that easily. Luke's mean comment affected me in a big way.I lost confidence in more than just my body—I started to think that I didn't matter and that I didn't have a place in the world.To make it worse，some people also started telling me that I was not meant to be an author，which is what I really want to be.That especially hurt and I started to feel really sad all the time. UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 I hadn't really told anyone how I'd been feeling until a couple of months ago when I got a call from my cousin.I'm really close to her，and hearing her voice and laugh made me feel so good inside.I thought about how I used to be that way too，and how I was so sick of feeling sad. UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1： Then I started telling her and it all came out._________________________ ______________________________________________________________ UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 Paragraph 2： When I went back to my bedroom，I looked at myself in the mirror for a long time._____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 [巧读文] 1．读要素 Who：I，my family，Luke，my cousin Where：my home When：a couple of months ago What：I had no confidence in my body. Why：Some people made mean comments on me. UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 2．读双线(情节线、情感线) 情节线： UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 情感线： worried→upset and unconfident→sad UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 [妙构思] 1．读首句，定方向 Paragraph 1： 由续写第一段首句“Then I started telling her and it all came out.”可知，“我”要告诉表姐自己的遭遇，因此第一段可以接着描写表姐听了“我”的诉说之后，给“我”建议，让“我”不要在乎别人对“我”的讨论，“我”要学会接受自己并爱自己。由续写第二段首句“当我回到我的卧室，我长久地看着镜子里的自己”可知，第一段结束的时候要提到对自我的认识。 UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 Paragraph 2： 由续写第二段首句“When I went back to my bedroom，I looked at myself in the mirror for a long time.”并结合上文可知，该段应写在镜中“我”发现了自己的美，同时“我”告诉自己，尽管别人还会恶语攻击，但“我”要看到自己的优点，“我”认为“我”是完美的——这一点没有人能改变。结合上文情节可知，文章结尾可重点写作者接受了表姐的建议后的改变。 UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 2．巧设问，定细节 Paragraph 1： (1)What did my cousin do? _____________________________________________ (2)What did my cousin tell me? __________________________________________ (3)What did my cousin add? _____________________________________________________________ (4)What did I think? ____________________________________________________ She started listing all my good qualities ... Don't listen to people who are so mean ... I shouldn't let them tell me how to feel about myself or my body. I must learn to love and accept myself for who I am. UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 Paragraph 2： (1)What did I see? _______________________________________ (2)What did I know? ______________________________________________________________ (3)How did I deal with it? ___________________________________________ (4)What did I think? _______________________ My nice grey eyes and my cute smile/... Some people might make hurtful comments again/I may feel like I am fat again ... I will be prepared/think well of myself ... I am perfect myself/... UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 [雕句式] 根据提示升级下列句子 1．She started listing all my good qualities，saying I shouldn't listen to people who are so mean.They were probably just feeling bad about themselves or trying to look cool. →She started listing all my good qualities，saying I shouldn't listen to people who are so mean _________________________________________________ or trying to look cool.(原因状语从句) because they were probably just feeling bad about themselves UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 36 2．I saw what I had never seen in myself before，like my nice grey eyes，my cute smile，and the fact：I am beautiful in my own way. →I saw what I had never seen in myself before，like my nice grey eyes，my cute smile，and the fact _________________________________．(同位语从句) that I am beautiful in my own way UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 [成美文] Paragraph 1： Then I started telling her and it all came out._______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 38 Paragraph 2： When I went back to my bedroom，I looked at myself in the mirror for a long time.______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 [参考范文] Paragraph 1： Then I started telling her and it all came out.She seemed so surprised and said how special I was.She started listing all my good qualities，saying I shouldn't listen to people who are so mean because they were probably just feeling bad about themselves or trying to look cool.Definitely，she added，I shouldn't let them tell me how to feel about myself or my body.It was like a sudden wake-up call：focusing on what other people thought of me only made things even worse，and I must learn to love and accept myself for who I am. UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 Paragraph 2： When I went back to my bedroom，I looked at myself in the mirror for a long time.I saw what I had never seen in myself before，like my nice eyes，my cute smile，and the fact that I am beautiful in my own way.I know some people might still make hurtful comments again，and sometimes I may feel like I am fat again，but next time I will be prepared.I will only think well of myself even when I am feeling sad，and stand up for myself when someone puts me down.In my eyes，I am perfect myself—no one can change that. UNIT 1　Face values 英语　选择性必修　第三册　W 返回导航 课时梯级训练(四) 单元综合检测(一) 谢 谢 $$