Unit 4 Section Ⅳ Writing（课件PPT）-【优化指导】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语选择性必修第三册（人教版2019）

UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE (单元主题语境：人与自我——优秀品质) Section Ⅳ　Writing 1.写作词汇再现 ①expedition远征；探险；探险队 ②dark黑暗的 ③endurance忍耐力；耐久力 ④unfortunately不幸地；遗憾地 ⑤perseverance毅力；韧性；不屈不挠的精神 ⑥abandon抛弃；放弃；舍弃 UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 ⑦escape逃走；逃脱 ⑧miracle奇迹 ⑨survive生存；幸存 ⑩moving令人感动的 ⑪director导演 ⑫award奖；奖品 ⑬outstanding杰出的 ⑭achieve达到；完成 UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 ⑮rainbow彩虹 ⑯in a hurry匆忙 ⑰manage to do sth.设法做到某事 ⑱be intended to do sth.打算做某事 ⑲be born with天生具有 ⑳go aboard a ship登船 become stuck in被困于 in spite of尽管，虽然 UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 be inspired by受……鼓舞 in face of面对；面临 give up放弃 UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 2．精彩句式再练 单句填空/完成句子/句式升级 ①Donald noticed a note _______(read) “Dear Donald，thank you for your kindness.” ②Virtual reality technology will allow you to explore new world and concepts，______(make)learning more fun and exciting. ③__________(promote) students' level of art appreciation，we're going to hold a painting and calligraphy exhibition. reading making To promote UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 ④他不能忽视这样一个事实，那就是失踪的船长很可能还活着。 He couldn't ignore the fact _________________________________________． ⑤Through labor，we not only have learned the value of self-discipline and cooperation，but we have cultivated our characters and become determined individuals. →Through labor，_______________________________________________ ___________，but we have cultivated our characters and become determined individuals.(not only位于句首引起部分倒装) that the lost captain would probably be still alive not only have we learned the value of self­discipline and cooperation UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 Ⅰ 应用文写作 写一篇故事评论 ►文体感知 本单元的写作任务是根据本单元的故事写一篇短评。短评一般是对一本书的内容、思想、艺术表现等的分析和讨论。简单的书评在分享书中的故事以及观点的同时，可以适当地加入自己的理解、感受和看法。 UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 ►写作技巧 故事评论的基本结构 1．首段：简要介绍故事的基本信息； 2．主体段：介绍故事梗概； 3．尾段：客观公正地评论。可以是对作者的写作手法、文中主人公的命运和性格特征的评论，也可以是自己阅读之后学到的道理。 UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 ►典例展示 结合本单元文章《一次成功的失败》并根据下面提示写一篇短评。 1．欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员们一起登上了“坚忍”号。途中“坚忍”号被冰山困住了，大家弃船后逃到了象岛。沙克尔顿驾船去寻求帮助。最后，尽管困难重重，船员们还是活了下来； 2．在这个故事中，船员之间真诚的关爱以及他们在困难面前的忍耐力和毅力使我深受鼓舞； 3．从这个故事中我学到一个道理：无论遇到什么困难，都不要放弃！ UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 确定体裁、 话题 体裁：应用文 话题：评论故事《一次成功的失败》 确定时态、 人称 时态：一般过去时和一般现在时 人称：第三人称为主 布局文章 架构 首段：简要引出要评论的故事 中段：介绍故事梗概 尾段：感悟和收获 UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 列出核心 要点 1.《一次成功的失败》讲的是历史上一次伟大的探险 2．故事梗概 (1)关键要素：欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员、一艘名为“坚忍”号的船 (2)重要经历 ①“坚忍”号沉入了大海，大家弃船逃到象岛 ②沙克尔顿离开他们去寻求帮助 ③尽管困难重重，船员们还是活了下来 UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 列出核心 要点 3．感悟和收获 (1)他们相互关爱 (2)面对困难的耐力和毅力 (3)遇到困难不轻言放弃 UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 [实践应用] 1．完成句子 ①故事《一次成功的失败》讲的是历史上一次伟大的探险。(expedition) The story，A SUCCESSFUL FAILURE，is ___________________________. ②欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员登上了一艘名为“坚忍”号的船。(crew，go aboard a ship) Ernest Shackleton and ________________________，and its name was Endurance. about a great expedition in history his crew went aboard a ship UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 ③不幸的是，在途中，“坚忍”号卡在了冰里，沉入了海洋。(unfortunately，become stuck in) _____________，on the way Endurance _____________________，and it ________________． ④他们弃船逃到象岛。(abandon，escape) They ___________________________________________． Unfortunately became stuck in the ice sank into the ocean abandoned the ship and escaped to Elephant Island UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 ⑤尽管困难重重，船员们还是活了下来。(manage，in spite of) The crew __________________________________________． ⑥我不仅被他们彼此之间的关爱深深感动，也被他们面对困难时的耐力和毅力所鼓舞。(be inspired by，endurance，perseverance，in face of) I am deeply moved by the concern and love between them and _____________________________________________________________． managed to survive in spite of so many difficulties I'm also inspired by their endurance and perseverance in face of difficulties UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 ⑦我从这个鼓舞人心的故事中学到了重要的一课。 I have learned _____________________________________． ⑧那就是无论遇到什么困难，都不要放弃。 That is，whatever difficulties we meet，_____________． an important lesson from the inspiring story never give up UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 2．句式升级 ⑨用过去分词作定语升级句② ________________________________________________________ Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard a ship named Endurance. UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 ⑩用分词作结果状语升级句③ ___________________________________________________________________________ ⑪用分词作时间状语升级句④ __________________________________________________________ Unfortunately，on the way Endurance became stuck in the ice，sinking into the ocean. Having abandoned the ship，they escaped to Elephant Island. UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 ⑫用“not only ...but also”句式升级句⑥ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ⑬用同位语从句合并升级句⑦和句⑧ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Not only am I deeply moved by the concern and love between them but I'm also inspired by their endurance and perseverance in face of difficulties. I have learned an important lesson from the inspiring story that whatever difficulties we meet，never give up. UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 3．靓化成篇 结合以上句子写一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。 UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 [参考范文] The story，A SUCCESSFUL FAILURE，is about a great expedition in history. Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard a ship named Endurance.Unfortunately，on the way Endurance became stuck in the ice，sinking into the ocean.Having abandoned the ship，they escaped to Elephant Island.Shackleton left them to find help.The crew managed to survive in spite of so many difficulties. UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 Not only am I deeply moved by the concern and love between them but I'm also inspired by their endurance and perseverance in face of difficulties.I have learned an important lesson from the inspiring story that whatever difficulties we meet，never give up. UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 ►实战演练 根据下列信息，写一篇关于电影《阿甘正传》的影评。 1．电影名：Forrest Gump(《阿甘正传》)； 2．导演：Robert Zemeckis； 3．剧情：阿甘出生时就智力低下，且在儿时他的腿有些问题。人们总是认为他做任何事情都不会成功。但是，他最终取得了令人难以置信的成功，他成为橄榄球明星、战斗英雄和百万富翁； 4．评价：在1995年第67届奥斯卡金像奖颁奖典礼上，该电影获得了6项奥斯卡大奖。影片告诉我们生活是美好的，只要坚持不懈，就会有奇迹发生。 UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 [参考范文] The movie Forrest Gump，directed by Robert Zemeckis，won six awards at the 67th Oscars in 1995.It tells us a story that how an ordinary person made his life outstanding. Forrest Gump was born with low IQ and there was something wrong with his legs in his childhood.People always thought he can't be successful in doing anything.But he achieved lots of unbelievable successes: he became a rugby star，a war hero，and a millionaire. UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 The movie is intended to tell us that life is wonderful and there will be a miracle if only there is perseverance.The movie also sends such a message to us: do well what we should do，and life will return us well. UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 Ⅱ 读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A rock is as big as a house.That's how the guide book described Giant Rock.Dad said it was carried here by a glacier millions of years ago. UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 I was finally going to see it，on snowshoes，with my three older cousins，my dad，and my uncle Don.I'd been snowshoeing before，and I liked the adventure of hiking through deep snow alongside wild-animal tracks.At the parking area，after putting on our snowshoes，we studied the map in the information kiosk (亭子).“We start here”，Dad said，“on the red path.Then we turn left onto the purple circle.That's where Giant Rock is.” “Remember to stick together，guys，” Uncle Don said. UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 The path ran uphill alongside a stone wall.It was easy to follow because red markers were nailed to the trees and the snow had been packed down by other hikers.At the top of the hill，we turned onto the purple path，which wound back and forth，travelling through the hills and gullies.We settled into a rhythm，with Dad and everyone else in front and me in the back，crunch-crunch-crunching through the snow.My cousins were faster than I was，but I managed to keep up. UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 Finally，we reached a hill and saw the massive rock sitting alone in the forest.“It really is as big as a house，” my cousin Josh said，gazing up.My cousins and I high-fived(举手击掌) each other and jogged down the slope until we stood at the base，breathless.Standing in the rock's giant shadow，I noticed the sun had dipped even lower.“Let's head back，” Dad said after a few minutes. UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 Soon we were crunch-crunch-crunching our way home.I was a little behind the group when I noticed a set of animal tracks I didn't recognize.I followed them off the path for a closer look.There were no claw marks，which meant they didn't belong to a dog or a fox.Instead，they looked like tiny handprints and footprints.Must be a raccoon (小浣熊)，I thought. UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 Paragraph 1： I looked around when I suddenly realized I was totally alone.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 Paragraph 2： Reaching a crossroads，I tried to calm myself down，picturing the map again.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 [巧读文] 1．读要素 Who：the author's three older cousins，the author's dad，the author's uncle Don，the author Where：on a hill What：The author was separated from the author's family when they returned from an adventure to the forest to see a big rock. UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 2．读双线(情节线、情感线) UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 [妙构思] 1．读首句，定方向 Paragraph 1： 由续写第一段首句“I looked around when I suddenly realized I was totally alone.”可知，作者与家人走散了。由此可推知第一段可描写作者与家人走散后的反应和表现。由续写第二段首句“Reaching a crossroads，I tried to calm myself down，picturing the map again.”可知，作者第一段未能成功找到家人，所以第一段结尾处要描述作者在冷静下来思考前是如何行进的。 UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 Paragraph 2： 由续写第二段首句“Reaching a crossroads，I tried to calm myself down，picturing the map again.”可知，该段首先要描写作者在脑海中分析路线的情形；结合文章类型(自然历险)，可推知文章结局可描述作者最终成功脱困，与家人会合。 UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 2．巧设问，定细节 Paragraph 1： (1)What did “I” do and what was the response? __________________ (2)What did “I” think? ____________________________________________ shouted/cried/ ... would catch up with them if “I” hurried/ ... UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 (3)What difficulty did “I” face? ______________________________________ grow darker/no flashlight/no phone/... UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 Paragraph 2： (1)What did “I” picture? ____________________________________________________________ (2)What was the other possible way to get out? _________________________________________________ (3)What was the result? ______________________________________ turned left onto the purple circle/walk the opposite way/... stay put and let my cousins or others find me/... saw the parking area and my family/... UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 [雕句式] 根据提示升级下列句子 1．They couldn't have gone far，I thought，and stepped onto the trail. →_____________________________________________________ (分词作状语) 2．Soon it might be very dark and I couldn't tell what color the markers were. →___________________________________________________ (too ...to ...) They couldn't have gone far，I thought，stepping onto the trail Soon it might be too dark to tell what color the markers were. UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 3．If I wanted to get back，I needed to walk the opposite way. →_________________________________________(不定式作目的状语) To get back，I needed to walk the opposite way. UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 [成美文] Paragraph 1： I looked around when I suddenly realized I was totally alone.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 Paragraph 2： Reaching a crossroads，I tried to calm myself down，picturing the map again.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 [参考范文] Paragraph 1： I looked around when I suddenly realized I was totally alone. “Hey！” I shouted.“Dad，where are you？” Nothing，just the sound of my own breathing.They couldn't have gone far，I thought，stepping onto the trail.I would catch up with them if I hurried.It seemed to grow darker.I had no flashlight.No phone.My mind started to race.Soon it might be too dark to tell what color the markers were.I couldn't just follow my own footsteps because there were so many tracks in the forest from other travelers. UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 Paragraph 2： Reaching a crossroads，I tried to calm myself down，picturing the map again.To reach Giant Rock we had turned left onto the purple circle.To get back，I needed to walk the opposite way.If this didn't work，I'd stay put and let my cousins or others find me.Then I heard someone calling and noticed the stone wall and the trail running alongside it.This had to be right.I went down the hill in large steps.Then I saw the parking area and my family! I was breathless as I shouted and ran towards them. UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE 英语　选择性必修　第三册　R 返回导航 课时梯级训练(十六) 单元综合检测(四) 谢 谢 [审题谋篇] $$