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中考作文话题之针砭时弊 写作话题 时常在大街上看到横穿马路的行人，这虽然是生活中的细节，却不仅对生命和幸福造成了威胁，还体现 了个人素质和修养欠佳。请就这一话题，发表自己的看法.行文要求连贯,字数不得少于80个单词。 1. 描述时常看到的过街场景； 2. 发表你的个人看法； 3. 你认为可以改进的办法。 注意：1.文中可以使用自己亲身经历或是虚构的故事。 2. 不能出现真实姓名和学校。 范文 The Chinese style of crossing the street has been a hot topic on the Internet recently. Many people cross the street without looking at the traffic lights. Why? I think there are two main reasons. First of all. Some people lack the awareness of traffic safety. Besides, some people think it takes them so much time to wait for the green light that they can't afford the time wasted. However, it has brought danger to themselves as well as to others. So something must be done to solve this problem.People should learn and obey the traffic rules. Whoever breaks the rules should be punished. On the other hand, fZtis action has put shame on us as well as on our country. As a Chinese, it’s our duty to obey the traffic rules. Let’s make a wonderful future for you and me! 佳作赏析 Cell Phones at School: Should They Be Allowed? Today, mobile devices （设备）such as cell phones, MP3 and MP4 players are find their way into classrooms in students’ pockets. These high tech gadgets（小器具）are useful learning support tools for students. Unfortunately, many teachers and administrators （管理者）have serious concerns about the use of these high tech gadgets in schools. Some schools are so afraid and go extreme （极端）to ban （禁止）these mobile devices for security （安全）and other reasons. It is true that mobile devices could be disruptive （破坏）and dangerous in schools. As teachers and educators, we should educate our students with the proper use of the mobile technologies. Teachers and school administrators should embrace （拥抱）the rich learning enhancing （正在提高的）possibilities that these mobile devices provides and will provide even more so in the future. Instead of banning these wonderful learning tools in schools, we must ensure that educational practices include the adoption （采用）of mobile technologies in productive （有成效的）ways. Now, the topic of whether the students can use mobile phones in school is becoming more and more heat （heated）. Different people have different opinions on it. Some are for it and some are against it. As for me, I think students should be allowed to use mobile phones. High-tech communicative machines are needed for students to get more news around the world, especially for the ones living in school. With mobile phones, we can learn more things about outer world more quickly .Mobile phones play an important role among the young, too. They can help us to communicate with friends that are away from us easily. And they can help us to tell our parents whether we're in danger, in trouble, or meeting with other problems. So I think our students should be allowed to use mobile phones in school.Anyhow/ after all, its advantages are worth the worries. 补充题目及范文 （1）随若互联网的发展，智能手机（smart phone）已被广泛使用。我们身边的“低头族（phubber）”随处可见。请 根据以下提示写一篇短文。 1. “低头族”出现的场台：吃饭的时候，步行上学或上班的时候，睡觉前......： 2. 这样做的弊端：影响与家人和朋友的关系（relationship）；容易引发交通事故.对身心健康有害：不利 于学习和工作。 3. 观点陈述：正确使用手机；面对而的交流胜过网上聊天......。 要求：1.词数：80-120词左右；2.文中不得出现其实姓名和校名等信息。 范文： With the development of the Internet, smart phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there. Some people play with their smart phones while having dinners with family and friends instead of talking with them. It has a bad influence on the relationship between them. Others look at their smart phones while walking and even riding or driving. It may increase the possibility of traffic accidents. Some children want to play with smart phones before sleeping. Ifs bad for their health and study. In fact, face-to-face conversations are much, more convenient and better than chatting online by phone. Mobile phones are helpful and necessary tools in our life. But we should make good use of them to be "healthy” users rather than phubbers. （2）今年来，一些家长为了让孩子取得更加优异的学习成绩，不惜花重金在假期里将孩子送入各种培训班， 但这也有可能会带来一系列的问题。你认为学生应该参加课后补习班吗？请说说你自己的看法，并列举你 的理由（至少三条）。 要求：1.词数：80-120词左右： 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息。 范文： In recent years, some parents always send their children to all kinds of training classes during their holiday to make them study better.To be frank, I can not agree with their opinions for the reasons below. As for the most important reason, we are still teenagers. We should be given a chance to enjoy ourselves or we can't have anything valuable in our life. Furthermore.we are already under much stress in the school. We are supposed to relax a little at home. According to a study, more and more students feel stressed out because of too many training classes. As a matter offset, sending children to training classes may also cause a disagreement between parents and children. For the purpose of getting along with their children, parents are expected to pay visits to some meaningful places with their children during holidays instead of sending them to training classes. In conclusion, we are old enough to make our own decisions.Please believe that we can get good grades by working hard, without taking training classes. # 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 观点看法类议论文常用句型 1. To be frank, I can not agree with their opinions for the reasons below.老实说，因为以下理由我不同意他们的 意见。 2. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.就我个人而言，我在某种程度上同意 后者的意见。 3.1n conclusion\a word, I believe that...总而言之，我相信 4.1n my opinion\view\From my point of view, we should...在我看来，我们应该 5.Last week, we held a discussion about whether...,...had different opinions.上周，我们对是否 进行了 一场讨论,......有不同的观点。 6.1t is important \difficult\useful\exciting (for us) to do that我们而言，做某事是重要的、困难的、有用的、 令人兴奋的。 7.1n short\brief\a word\conclusion\sum, we should…简而言之，我们应该 8.Some believe that..., while others think that...有些人相信 而有些人认为 9. There are opinions about\on it. One is...,and the other is...关于这点有两方面的看法，一是.....另一个是..... 10. The reason why...is that 的原因是... 11 .On the one hand, ...On the other hand,...—方面， 另一方面， 12. First,...Second,...Last but not least,...首先，...其次，...最后但同样重要的是，... 13. From ail that I have said, I agree to the thought that...从所有我所说的来看，我同意...的看法。 14.In my view, I hold the point of view that...在我看来，我支持 的观点。 15. I am sure my opinion is both...and…我相信我的观点既...... 又... 16.0n the contrary, there are some people holding the different view.相反，有些人持不同的观点。 17. Every coin has two sides. I think we should look at the positive side instead of only focusing on its bad side.凡 事都有利弊。我认为我们应该看好的一面，而不是只关注不好的一面。 18.When it comes to TOPIC,some think\hold\believe…对于 一些人认为 19.There is a public debate today that TOPIC.今天关于 有一场公开讨论。 20.Recently,TOPIC has been brought into focus.最近 已经成了焦点 21.Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to TOPIC.如同一枚硬币有两面一 样，......也有积极和消极的两个方面。 22.TOPIC has aroused much public concern in China ...在中国己经引起了公众关注。 23.Now there is a growing awareness that TOPIC.现在人们愈加认识到...... 24.The first and most important reason is that...首先一个重要的理由是...... 25.Let’s assume that…假使 26.Let’s take... as an example.让我们以......为例。 27.Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involve...任何对此问题的讨论都不可避免涉及 28.The advantages of A outweigh the disadvantages of B. A 的优点超过了 B 的缺点。 29. In comparison /contrast 比较、对比来说 30. I do not deny that A has its own merits.我不否认 A 有其自身的优点。 31.We can conclude from the foregoing reasons and examples that....从上述理由和例子，我们可以推断出 32.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that......考虑了所有这些因素后，我们可以 得出结论..... Proverbs 1 .Facts speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。 2. Everyone can meet with ups and downs.每个人都可能经历人生的跌宕起伏。 3. Respecting others means respecting ourselves.即重别人就是照垂自己。 4.If you hold a belief and stick to it, you will eventually achieve your dream.如果你坚持自己的信念，你的梦想 最终就能实现。 写作练兵 现如今，随着中国经济的发展，越来越多的父母选择在孩子初中毕业后就送他们去国外留学。来自中 国的小留学生也成为了欧美发达国家的一道风景线。但这么小的年龄就出国留学，是好事坏，大家众说纷 纭。请你根据此话题，写一篇作文。 参考要点：1.初中毕业就出国留学的好处（体验不同文化、了解社会和世界......） 2. 初中毕业就出国留学的坏处（难适应环境、花费巨大......） 3. 你对此事的看法。 要求：1.词数：80-120词左右； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息。 IX.书面表达 Nowadays, with the development of China 参考范文 Nowadays, with the development of China, more and more students choose to study abroad, even some middle school students and pupils included. Each coin has two sides. Studying abroad can experience a variety of culture and help us know about society and the world. But it also has some shortcomings. For example, Chinese students may have difficulty in adapting to the new environment of study and life. What's more, studying abroad will cost a lot of money. It will be great burdens for our families. As far as I am concerned, it is not a good idea for us to do so. However, if you have this thought, you must think it over before you take actions. # 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$