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《2025年高考英语读后续写高分宝典》 专题09 2021新课标I卷读后续写及满分语料10类68句(母亲节惊喜) 原卷版 【读后续写六年高考考情】 年份 卷别 主题 话题 类型 2025 浙江1月卷 人与社会/自我 勇寻真相并且学会共情的重要性 生活故事类 八省联考卷 人与社会/动物 铁汉柔情让我感动流浪犬守护者 关爱动物类 2024 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 车站履行承诺还钱给出租车司机 个人成长类 浙江1月卷 人与自我 利用脑图来确定方位找到教学楼 校园生活类 九省联考卷 人与自然 志愿者训练意外发现海豚的秘密 关爱动物类 2023 新课标I&II卷 人与自我 老师鼓励参加作文比赛终获大奖 校园生活类 浙江1月卷 人与自然 作者两次与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅感悟 关爱动物类 2022 新课标I&II卷 人与自我 鼓励身残志坚男孩参加校越野赛 体育比赛类 浙江6月卷 人与社会 为社区无家可归的人们发放食物 助人为乐类 浙江1月卷 人与社会 与“最不合拍”搭档终成为好朋友 校园生活类 2021 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 孩子母亲节给妈妈做早餐送惊喜 家庭亲情类 浙江6月卷 人与自我 作者上学时一次打工挣钱的经历 个人成长类 浙江1月卷 人与社会 少年头意外卡在南瓜中爆红网络 生活故事类 2020 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 三个孩子帮助贫困家庭孩子挣钱 个人成长类 浙江7月卷 人与自然 与北极熊面对面的一次脱险经历 关爱动物类 浙江1月卷 人与自然 帮助宠物狗重获快乐收获新伙伴 关爱动物类 【读后续写情节衔接思维导图】 ( 点 1 ： 位于续写 第一段段首 ，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点 2 ： 位于续写 第一段段尾 ，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点 3 ： 位于续写 第二段段首 ，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点 4 ： 续写 结尾 主旨 升华 ，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 ) 【读后续写语言表达满分策略】 ( 真题呈现 ) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右。 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 情节变化 ) 情节阶段 情节描述 功能 计划阶段 文章开头描述了双胞胎期待母亲节的到来，并计划为妈妈准备早餐作为惊喜。 交代故事背景和双胞胎的动机，表达了对妈妈的爱与感激。 准备工作 双胞胎设定好闹钟，一大早就悄悄起床来到厨房，决定先煮粥，再煎面包。 展现了双胞胎的积极主动和对任务的认真态度。 煎面包出现失误 Jeff加热锅子时火候过大，导致面包迅速变黑。 突显双胞胎的经验不足，为后续情节铺垫。 处理意外情况 Jenna处理好火候后，Jeff发现粥沸腾导致火熄灭。随后，Jeff 不小心烫伤了手。 加强故事的紧张气氛，并反映出双胞胎的应变能力。 失望和反思 双胞胎看着厨房的混乱情景，充满失落和懊恼。 突显失败带来的情感波动，为父亲的出现创造契机。 ( 情感变化 ) 情感变化 情感表现 作用 期待与兴奋 双胞胎计划早餐并想象妈妈的反应，感到非常兴奋与自豪。 表现孩子们对母亲的爱和想要表达感激之情。 紧张与焦虑 当他们遇到煎面包和煮粥的意外情况时，心情逐渐紧张，开始感到焦虑。 强调他们在任务中面对的挑战，展现他们的成长。 失望与沮丧 看到厨房的混乱情景时，感到深深的失望。 突出孩子们的挫败感，展示他们对母亲的期待和自己任务的重视。 希望与感激(后续可能) 父亲的出现可能带来帮助，让他们重新感受到希望。 暗示父亲的支持，预示着最终可能带来的成功和满足。 ( 主题分析 ) 321原则 上下文推理 内容预测 衔接句1 第一段段首句后 原文描述了孩子们尝试给母亲带来惊喜，但因经验不足，厨房出现了混乱，Jeff的手还被烫伤了。父亲的出现提供了帮助的契机。 父亲看到混乱的厨房和Jeff烫伤的手，先关心Jeff的手，再鼓励孩子们继续完成惊喜，体现父亲的支持和温暖。 过渡1 第一段中间 父亲帮忙收拾厨房，带领他们重新做早餐，孩子们在父亲的帮助下重拾信心并顺利完成准备。 父亲帮助清理厨房，教导他们正确烹饪，孩子们在指导下恢复信心并完成早餐，氛围温馨和鼓励。 衔接句2 第一段结尾 第二段段首句表明孩子们端着早餐去叫醒母亲，此处需与第一段结束时的成功准备场景紧密连接。 孩子们将准备好的早餐端上楼，表现出自信和成就感。此时场景已经转换到母亲的房间，孩子们带着期盼唤醒母亲。 衔接句3 第二段段首句后 第二段开头提到母亲醒来，顺理成章地唤起她对孩子们烫伤手的关切，使情感逐步递进，表达母亲的温情。 母亲先关心Jeff的烫伤，接着感受到孩子们用心准备的早餐，情绪感动。家庭温情升华。 过渡2 第二段中间 母亲的感动与孩子们的自豪交织在一起，进一步衬托出浓浓的家庭温馨氛围，反映出母亲的欣慰和孩子们的满足。 母亲品尝早餐，对孩子们的用心表达感激之情，孩子们体验到爱的回馈。 结尾句 第二段结尾 孩子们通过自己的努力给母亲带来了快乐，尽管经历了困难，他们学会了付出和亲情的价值。 通过母亲对孩子们的肯定，主题得到升华，突显家庭爱与奉献的重要性。 【简要分析】 【原文解读】 本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起 饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败，后来在父亲的帮助下，获得成功，他们把早餐献给亲爱的母 亲，妈妈非常感动的故事。 【续写线索】帮助——指导——积极——献礼——感动 【段落续写】 1.由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了”可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。 2.由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。 第二节 本文是一篇记叙文。讲述的是Jenna和Jeff这对双胞胎兄妹为了在母亲节早上给母亲惊喜而精心策划并制作早餐的故事；他们克服困难，永不放弃，折射的是他们对母亲的拳拳之爱。 【导语】本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。”可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。 ②由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。 2.续写线索：指导——积极——献礼——感动 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①帮助：help/assist ②完成：finish/complete ③拥抱：hug/embrace 情绪类 ①高兴：happy/delighted ②感动：moved/touched 【点睛】 [高分句型1]. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]. It was not only the breakfast, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. (固定短语not only…but (also)和强调句型) ( 研读材料 ) 一、读大意，抓中心主题 双胞胎Jeff和Jenna准备在母亲节为母亲做法式吐司和鸡肉粥的早餐，母亲节当天，他们先煮粥，然后把面包放进鸡蛋和牛奶的混合液中。但由于火太大，面包焦了，在第二块面包将要煎成功的时候，沸腾的粥把火熄灭了，厨房里一片狼藉，Jeff的手也烫伤了，Jenna帮他用冷水冲手的时候闻到了面包烧焦的味道。 二、读人物，找续写人物 读续写两段的首句可知，Dad ,Mom和twins是续写内容的关键人物 三、读时态，选续写时态 通读全文可知，该故事主要是用一般过去时讲述的，故续写内容的时态也应一致。 四、读结构，辨划分方式 弄清故事的结构特点及表现形式，选择合适的方式划分段落，常用的有4种： 1.以时空变化划分(指时间和地点)； 2.以人物思想感情的变化来划分； 3.按记叙内容的变化来划分； 4.按描述角度的变化、事情发展的阶段来划分。 再看回真题，一开始，这对双胞胎在母亲节前就在策划给母亲的惊喜，而后是在母亲节当天，两人在厨房为母亲准备早餐。而由续写两段首句可知，续写第一段这对Twins还是在厨房里，第二段是在楼上妈妈的卧室里，人物所处地点不断变化，由此可知, 题目是按照时空变化来划分的。而我们在构思续写内容时也应在这两个地点的基础上进行拓展。 五、读语言，定风格特色 挖掘文本语言表达风格，模仿原文语言写句子。使续写部分的语言风格与原文的风格相一致，以促进语言协同。此外，如果原文有较多对话, 续写也可出现对话；如原文没有对话, 尽量少用对话形式。 ( 思维导图 ) ( 谋篇布局 ) 续写第一段： 根据续写第二段提示句可知，早餐最终被做好了，因此本段可围绕“爸爸出现”后给予双胞胎的帮助展开故事情节，可以是爸爸给他们指出补救办法，或者爸爸直接帮忙，不管是哪种构思，双胞胎做早餐的困难在本段应该得到解决。 续写第二段： 根据提示句可知双胞胎已经端着早餐上楼并叫醒妈妈，因此本段可围绕双胞胎见到妈妈后的故事展开，可以穿插双胞胎和妈妈之间的对话，还可以提到爸爸假装睡觉，最后可以通过自然式结尾，给故事画上句号，或通过主题式结尾，突出“亲情”、“劳动”、“克服困难、解决问题”等主题。 ( 语料背诵 ) 满分秘诀一、无灵主语（时间、地点、情感、自然现象、动作行为类名词作主语） 1.一看到这一片狼藉，他的下巴就惊吓掉了。 1. 2.如释重负的泪水像一条断了的珍珠项链一样滚落下来。 2. 3.很快，厨房里弥漫着早餐的香味。 3. 4.母亲面带微笑，灿烂的笑容照亮了整个房间。 4. 5.很快，一份精心设计的法式吐司和一碗粥就做好了。 5. 6.当她看到早餐时，眼睛睁大了，兴奋得闪闪发光。 6. 7.她的眼睛在早餐和双胞胎之间徘徊，好像在问发生了什么事。 7. 8、整个上午，大家沐浴在幸福家庭的温暖中，度过了一段幸福的时光。 8. 9.她一注意到早餐端到床上，脸上就闪过一丝兴奋。 9. 10.食物的香味弥漫在卧室里，仿佛变了魔法，卧室变成了世界上最可爱的地方。 10. 满分秘诀二、动作链（A and B型，A, B and C 型） 11.杰夫又吃了一片面包，这一次一切都很完美。 11. 12.他们拥抱着她，喊道：“妈妈，母亲节快乐！” 12. 13.父亲拿出药盒，在詹娜的手上涂了一些药。 13. 14.妈妈咬了一口三明治，大声说这是她吃过的最好的三明治。 14. 15.他们的母亲立刻坐了起来，紧紧地拥抱着他们，感激他们做的丰盛早餐。 15. 满分秘诀三、独立主格结构/with复合结构 16.他们的父亲发现了混乱的局面，明白了一切。 16. 17.一切都解决了，父亲离开了厨房，答应保守他们的秘密。 17. 18.詹娜哭了，悔恨和内疚像无尽的潮水一样淹没了她。 18. 19.他们的父亲困惑地问他们，心中闪过一丝愤怒。 19. 20.母亲深深地感动了，说了声“谢谢”，拥抱着孩子们，泪水模糊了她的眼睛。 20. 21.母亲热泪盈眶，紧紧地搂着他们。 21. 22.父亲吓了一跳，倒在地上，皱着眉头望着现场。 22. 23.这对双胞胎大喊“母亲节快乐”，眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。 23. 24.由于每个人都扮演不同的角色，没过多久，他们三个人就完成了所有的事情。 24. 25.母亲搂着双胞胎，紧紧地拥抱着他们，眼泪从脸颊上流下。 25. 满分秘诀四、非谓语短语（作主语、宾语、状语、定语、宾语补足语等） 26.父亲看到这里一片狼藉，吓得僵住了，好像在地上扎了根似的。 26. 27.听到这些话，这对双胞胎点了点头，眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。 27. 28.看着诱人的早餐，他们激动得失去了说话的能力。 28. 29.听到这些话，这对双胞胎点了点头，眼睛里闪烁着激动的光芒。 29. 30.看着精心准备的早餐，三人会心一笑。 30. 31.他们把早餐递给她，大喊“母亲节快乐！给你一个大惊喜！” 31. 32.她站起来，把双胞胎紧紧地抱在怀里，说：“这将是我一生中最好的早餐。”。" 32. 33.看到他们灰心丧气的脸，他叫他们打扫厨房，同时帮他们给妈妈做早餐。 33. 34.看到美味的早餐，这对双胞胎可以想象他们的母亲在享用时会多么惊讶和自豪。 34. 35.她瞪大了眼睛，忍不住品尝着早餐，骄傲地说这是她吃过的最好的早餐。 35. 满分秘诀五、介词短语位于句首 36.一瞬间，厨房的空气中弥漫着甜甜的味道。 36. 37.说完之后，杰夫结结巴巴地说出了他们的计划，脸涨得通红。 37. 38.一看到脏乱的厨房，他就知道发生了什么事。 38. 39.他毫不犹豫地关上了锅下的火。 39. 40.让他们欣慰的是，在父亲的指导下，他们成功地做好了早餐。 40. 41.一看到法式吐司和粥，他们的妈妈就哭了：“太惊喜了！” 41. 42.他们的父亲没有责怪他们的粗心大意，而是灿烂地微笑着拍拍他们的头。 42. 43.不到一个小时，厨房就打扫干净了，父亲做了一些鸡蛋三明治，煮了一些燕麦粥。 43. 44.在父亲的指导下，他们收拾残局，成功地做了法式吐司和鸡肉粥。 44. 满分秘诀六、形容词、副词短语位于句首 45.他们的母亲既震惊又骄傲，轻声说：“谢谢，我的孩子们。” 45. 46.很快，美味诱人的法式吐司和鸡肉粥就做好了。 46. 满分秘诀七、直接引语/简洁对话 47.他轻轻地拍了拍，安慰道：“别担心，我会帮你修的。” 47. 48.“惊喜！妈妈，母亲节快乐！”他们说着，把胳膊举向空中。 48. 49.他笑着小声对他们说：“哇，你们两个真让我惊讶，我能和你们一起去吗？” 49. 50.“别慌！”他递给每个人一条湿毛巾，帮助他们迅速清理残局。 50. 51. 这个世上最幸福妈妈不停地重复着，“谢谢你们，宝贝。” 51. 满分秘诀八、特殊句式（倒装、强调、感叹） 52.惊喜来得太突然他们的母亲没有意识到发生了什么事。 52. 53.她非常高兴，紧紧地抱着双胞胎，喜悦的泪水夺眶而出。 53. 54.她羞愧得低着头流下了愧疚的泪水。 54. 55.他们的母亲突然没有意识到发生了什么事。 55. 56.妈妈刚一醒来，就发现了美味的早餐。 56. 57.家庭的爱有助于做出最美味的早餐。 57. 58.在任何情况下，他们的母亲都没有想到她的一天会以这样一份温暖的礼物开始。 58. 满分秘诀九、环境描写 59.阳光透过窗户照在骄傲的母亲脸上。 59. 60.清晨的阳光洒进来，全家人沐浴在爱和幸福之中。 60. 61.沐浴在阳光下，他们一起享用早餐。 61. 满分秘诀十、主题升华句 62.整个房间都沐浴在母亲节快乐的气氛中。 62. 63.他们的父亲站在门旁，记录着这感人的一幕。 63. 64.这位父亲用相机记录下了令人难忘的一幕。多么令人惊喜的母亲节啊。 64. 65.沉浸在家庭的爱中，妈妈高兴地说：“你们三个让我过得很开心！” 65. 66.一家人聚在精心设计的早餐旁，沉浸在幸福和感激之中。 66. 67. 她立马明白了一切，感觉到一股暖流在她心里涌动，奔腾而来。 67. 68. 妈妈吻了吻他们，灿烂的笑 “亲爱的谢谢你们。真是个大惊喜！” 68. ( 范文背诵 ) As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. “Don’t panic!” their father handed each of them a wet towel, helping them clean the mess up quickly. After the cleaning, he began helping them prepare breakfast. The twins acted as their father’s little helpers, and it was a pleasure to team up with their father. Under his careful guidance, it didn’t take long before the French toast and chicken porridge were ready. Everything settled, their father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. “Happy Mother’s Day!” shouted the twins. “And we have a surprise for you!” So sweet was the surprise that Mother excitedly shook Father, who was pretending to snore. Her face lit up with happiness. Mother hugged the twins and showed her thanks. She tasted a piece of French toast and said that it was the best breakfast she had ever had. Love filled the whole room. What a beautiful and sweet surprise! 【读后续写家庭亲情类名校好题调研】 [调研01]（2025·浙江温州·二模）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I’d always been told to take care of my older brother, Brian, who was born weak and small. I’d often tie his shoes or prepare another glass of water for him. My mom saw my larger size and strong body as a sign that I was to be a kind of guardian angel (守护天使) for Brian. However, that was not the case. One day our school sponsored a pumpkin-carving contest. First prize was S100, and I knew just how I would spend it. There was a brand-new game I was dying to own. So I decided the first place bonus definitely had to land in my pocket. When I had to carve the perfect pumpkin I’d picked out, it dawned on me that with my big clumsy fingers I’d surely screw it up (搞砸). I thought of Brian’s smaller, delicate hands and knew he was the man for the job. I immediately begged Brian. Unexpectedly, he asked for a cut. That was fifty-fifty. Quickly doing the math in my head, I figured out even if I split (分摊) the first prize, I’d still have enough cash for the game. So I gave in to Brian’s demands. With skillful hands Brian carved the perfect face, and now we had the best pumpkin ever. Then the unexpected happened: We came in second. Unfortunately, second prize was only $50, and I needed every penny of that to buy the game. The day of the awards ceremony, the principal handed over the money to me because Brian was home, sick with cold. If he really wanted to win, he would have been here today, I thought to myself, justifying stealing the cash from under poor Brian’s runny nose. With hardly a thought, I ran to the store and bought my dream game. That night when Brian asked if we had won, I denied, afraid to look into his eyes. The whole thing was never mentioned again until the day when Brian was packing for college. I played my usual role in helping him pack when I came across an old album filled with photos he had taken as the school photographer. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I was enjoying the photos when one caught my eye. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “You actually knew and didn’t say anything?" I was shocked. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [调研02]（2025·河南驻马店·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Dad’s Old Guitar Tom was a teenager who loved exploring the old and dusty corners of his house. One day, while digging through the attic, he found something that caught his eye. It was a guitar, which was old, with signs of wear. However, it seemed to tell a story. Tom rushed downstairs with the guitar in hand. “Dad, look what I’ve found!” he exclaimed, showing the guitar to his father. Dad’s eyes widened, and a smile slowly spread across his face. “ Ah, my old guitar,” he said, taking it gently from Tom. “You played the guitar?” Tom asked, surprised. Dad chuckled, “Yes, a long time ago. I was in a band with some of my best friends when I was about your age.” Tom’s eyes lit up with excitement. “You were in a band? That’s so cool! Tell me more!” Dad settled into a chair, the old guitar resting on his lap. “We called ourselves ‘The Sunset Strummers’. We played at small events, parties, and even some local cafes. Those were some of the best days of my life. Music, friendship, and endless fun.” Days went by, and Tom couldn’t stop thinking about his dad’s musical past. He spoke to his mother and learned more. Old photos were brought out, showing a young dad with long hair, rocking out with his band. Tom felt proud and interested. He wanted to do something special for his dad to let him relive those days, even if just for a moment. With the help of his mom and younger sister, Lucy, Tom came up with a plan. They would organize a surprise concert in their backyard and invite some of Dad’s old band members and friends. Lucy was good with tech, so she took charge of sending out digital invites and setting up the stage. Tom practiced on the old guitar, hoping to play alongside his dad. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 The day of the surprise concert arrived. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As the evening grew dark and the music came to an end, Dad hugged Tom tightly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [调研03]（2025·陕西安康·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Love Conquered Alzheimer’s Disease Shirley was a white-collar worker who always spared time to accompany her single father at weekends. They took a walk in the nearby park, climbed mountains, and dined out. But as Shirley’s father grew older, he occasionally forgot things. In the beginning, it was things that didn’t matter, such as where he left his smartphone or what the neighbor’s name was. However, one year later, his condition became worse. He was diagnosed with Alzheimer’s disease (阿尔茨海默病).The doctor’s advice was that Shirley should remind her father of the time they spent together, which might relieve his symptoms, although there was no cure for the disease. Though having no medical background, Shirley had heard about the disease many times. She also sensed that her father was becoming more eccentric (古怪的). He would forget her name and the way home. It was uneasy for Shirley to watch her father struggle, but she had to work in the daytime. One day, in order to ensure that her father had had lunch, Shirley called him up. But no one answered on the other side. She was worried and took half a day off. When she arrived at home, there was no one. Without the slightest hesitation, Shirley left the house to search for her father. All of a sudden, Shirley’s phone rang. The strange phone number drew her attention. She prayed that her father would be safe and sound. The call was from a policeman, who told her that her father was in the hospital due to a car accident, and that he wasn’t able to come home. After hanging up the phone, Shirley drove to the hospital, seeing that her father was lying on the bed, with his face pale. Walking closer to him, Shirley noticed that he was grasping a watch. “Dad, why do you grasp the watch? It will make you tired,” asked Shirley. At the same time, she tried taking the watch off his hands. Unexpectedly, he grasped it more tightly. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “Don’t take away the watch my daughter bought me,” shouted her father: ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As her father calmed down, Shirley suddenly thought of the doctor’s advice. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [调研04]（24-25高二下·江苏南京·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Eight-year-old Peter was a lively and energetic little boy. Every weekend, he would go to his grandfather’s house, although he didn’t particularly enjoy it. His grandfather was very strict with Peter. He demanded that Peter develop two good habits: being punctual (准时的) and staying organized. To help his grandson develop these habits, the grandfather took certain measures. For instance, Peter had to be in the dining room sharply at 12:00 noon for lunch, or else he would have no meal. Peter sometimes felt that his grandfather was too strict, but he dared not voice his dissatisfaction.   This week was no exception. Peter arrived at his grandfather’s house as usual. His grandfather was busy cooking in the kitchen, the smell of the food filling the air. Peter, left on his own, wandered into the living room to play. There, he accidentally knocked over the first-aid kit that was placed on the table. The contents in the kit spilled all over the floor, small bottles of pills scattered everywhere. Peter paid no attention to the chaos he had caused. He glanced at the mess, then remembered that David, his friend from next door, was home alone. Awakened by the thought of watching cartoons with David, Peter hurried next door, leaving the spilled contents of the first-aid kit behind. In the kitchen, the grandfather, who was chopping vegetables, suddenly felt unwell. His heart began to race, and he realized that he was having a heart attack. He struggled to the living room to get his medicine. However, when he got there, all he saw was the overturned first-aid kit and the pills scattered on the floor. The grandfather bent down with difficulty, his heart racing with anxiety as he searched for the blue bottle that contained his heart medicine. The precious seconds ticked by, and he felt his strength fading. Time was running out, and Peter didn’t know it. The little boy was completely unaware of the danger his grandfather was facing, immersed in the fun of the cartoon, laughing from time to time. The clock struck 12 but the cartoon was still five minutes away from ending. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Finally, after a desperate search, Peter spotted the small blue bottle hidden under the sofa. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [调研05]（2025·江西·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I could smell garlic and other Italian spices before I opened the front door. Mom was cooking because Uncle Vince was coming for dinner. As the only non-Italian in the family, she wanted to make a good impression on Uncle Vince, who was a very traditional Italian. Mom opened the fridge, where lay two bags of food, one for meatballs and the other for cake balls. She hurriedly took out the bag of “meatballs” which she had cooked and frozen before. However, she didn’t realize that she had made a mistake, but later it became a surprise. Mom carefully put the meatballs into the boiling pot of sauce and tried to make them expand, just like my Italian grandma used to do. The salad was ready, covered with a wet towel to keep it fresh. The table was set; the garlic bread was waiting to be put into the oven; the water for the spaghetti was almost boiling. Uncle Vince arrived in time for dinner. We greeted each other just like Italians usually do. Then, he and Dad sat in the living room, chatting casually while Mom and I served the food. “Come on in, guys. Food is almost ready,” Mom said, with a confident smile on her face. I passed Uncle Vince the bowl full of spaghetti, and then Dad handed him the plate of “meatballs” that had been heated in the sauce. When Uncle Vince saw the size of the “meatballs”, his eyes widened, and he couldn’t help licking (舔) his lips. He helped himself to three meatballs while Mom held her breath. Then he picked up one of the “meatballs” with his fork and took a big bite. He stopped for a moment and said, “The taste and spices of this ‘meatball’ are quite interesting. It is different but really good.” Mom finally relaxed. In fact, the “meatballs” were so good that after eating three, Uncle Vince had two more. Mom felt very happy, and the atmosphere of the family dinner was so harmonious. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The next morning, when Mom opened the fridge for breakfast, she froze, finding the bag of meatballs was just there. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Mom closed the fridge and whispered to Dad and me, “Don’t tell anyone. Wait for further response from Uncle Vince.” ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [调研06]（2025·云南·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I was young, my father was a secondary school teacher in Edensor, England. As the breadwinner, he was deeply engaged in his school responsibilities during my childhood. Consequently, I often felt distant from him because he had few moments to talk or interact with me. My mother, a full-time housewife, managed the household and took care of my younger bother and me, busting around the kitchen, bedrooms and grocery stores. The back garden of our house was a special place for me; it was not only a secure spot for kids but also my dad’s favorite hobby area. Whenever he was home, he would spend most of his spare time looking after his treasured roses, which my mother also adored. My father would care for his roses with great devotion and affection. Often, I would watch beside him, curious or eager for his attention, but he was usually preoccupied (全神贯注). He regularly watered the roses, cleaned the leaves, loosened and turned over the soil, and fed them with essential nutrients. His expectation was the joy and sweetness brought by their blossoming. One day, I saw him cut off some branches and stems. Then, with a sharp knife, he carefully made marks on the main branches. He cut open the marked spots to insert sprouts (嫩枝) into those new cuts and wrapped them with bandages. After all his efforts, he reminded us never to touch them. From then on, whenever my father returned home from work, he would go straight to tend to those plants. Within a month, we all witnessed the entire process: tender stems grow, form buds, and finally bear blossoms in various colors. The garden soon became a place of immense beauty, filled with rose blossoms and surrounded by their sweet fragrance. My parents truly enjoyed themselves there, and so did my brother Tommy and I. Those roses brought us immense happiness, and no one, especially me, wanted to let go of such beauty. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150词左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 One sunny day, I decided to do something as my dad had done to have more roses. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Later that day, when my dad saw the great mess I had made, he was totally shocked. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [调研07]（2025·河北·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a sunny morning when I packed my bags for a business trip. The house was filled with the usual hustle and bustle (熙熙攘攘), but today there was a sense of excitement mixed with a bit of anxiety. This would be the first time I would be leaving my son, Max, behind for a few days. Max, five years old, was used to having me around. Little did he know, today was going to be a day of new experiences and emotions. As I took out my suitcase, Max entered the room, his eyes wide with curiosity. “Mom, where are you going?” he asked, his voice carrying innocence and some concern. I smiled, “I’ve to go on a trip for work, Max. I’ll be back in a few days.” Max’s eyes grew even wider, and I could see the look of shock on his face. He had never been apart from me for more than a day, and the concept of me being away was completely new to him. “But, Mom, who will take care of me?” he asked, his voice trembling (颤抖) slightly. I hugged him tightly, saying, “Dad will be here with you, and Grandma is coming over to help. You’ll have so much fun with them, and I’ll call you every day,” I said, hoping to ease his worries. Max nodded slowly, but I could tell he was still unsure. As the day went on, I noticed Max staying close to me, watching my every move. He helped me pack, and brought me items he thought I might need, like his favorite toy car and a drawing he made for me. His small gestures touched my heart, and I realized how much he cared. When it was finally time for me to leave, Max stood by the door, his expression a mix of bravery and sadness. I hugged him one last time and whispered, “I’ll be back before you know it, Max. Be good and remember that I love you.” He nodded, with tears in his eyes. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As I drove away, I couldn’t help but glance back at the house. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When I finally returned home, Max greeted me with the biggest hug ever. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [调研08]（2025·江苏南京·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 After my family moved to America, we lived on Pearl Street in New York’s Chinatown. Below our flat, my family ran a bakery. My mother named me after the street: Pearl Wong. A typical Chinese-style mum, my mother often reminded me of the importance of being outstanding. “Be number one, or be nothing,” she demanded in broken English. She would check my report cards and frown at anything lower than an A． At a holiday party, my brother received a chess set, missing a pawn (卒) and a knight (马). My mother dismissed it as unwanted junk, but we were fascinated, especially me. “Why can't they move more steps?” “Why do they go cross ways to take other men?” I had so many questions. My mother patted the flour off her hands. “Let me see book,” she said. “Ah. Don't know why? You find out yourself.” So I read and memorized the rules, studied the moves, and practiced endlessly. Soon, I was beating my brothers. With every game, my chess improved, my wins grew, and my hunger for victory deepened. I started entering tournaments and winning trophies (奖杯). My mother became my biggest supporter—but in her own way. She pushed me to win every game and displayed every trophy in the bakery window. I asked her several times not to do so but she insisted. Soon, the cakes were surrounded by rows of shining trophies. “This my daughter, Pearl,” she would tell others, her voice full of pride. But the more she showed me off, the more I felt trapped, as if I were no longer playing for myself, as if I were her trophy. One Saturday in Chinatown, my mother paraded (招摇过市) me through the stores, without making a purchase. “This my daughter, Pearl Wong, Chinatown chess champion,” she announced. The shopkeepers, with forced smiles, looked at us with an obviously growing impatience. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Yet, she went on and on, totally ignoring my burning eyes. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When I finally returned to the bakery, my mother was putting away the trophies. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [调研09]（2025·河北唐山·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Ever since I was a child, Dad had been working hard. He’d worked as a telegraph operator on the railroad and added his earnings selling old pocket watches at the markets. “We needed the money. For a rainy day,” he always said. When I was 10 years old, I bought an ice cream, Daddy’s favorite, with the first dollar I earned by doing odd jobs in the neighborhood. I thought he’d be pleased. He looked up and indeed smiled. But as he took a taste of it, he warned, “Don’t be squandering (乱花) all your hard-earned money on this again. You should be putting something away for rainy days.” I tried hard to fight back tears. I was quite disappointed. When I was a little older, I studied piano. I knew how proud he’d be of the way I played The Londonderry Air. But at the last minute of my first performance, Daddy couldn’t come. He had to work overtime. We needed the money. For a rainy day. Didn’t he care about my happiness? One day he showed me what my happiness was worth. After I studied nursing and pursued my career, I started to raise a dog, Muffin, and she became my soul mate. I had to drop her off at my friend’s when I had a business trip. One time, Muffin jumped the fence in my friend’s backyard and raced off. No one could find her. “I’m so sorry, Roberta,” Mom said, covering a blanket around me on the sofa. “Your father is worried too.” I felt my heart break when a stranger called, “I have found your dog. How can I get the reward of $1,000 mentioned in the ad of the newspaper?” 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 I was stunned about the reward. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I cried, holding the newspaper, but I quickly pulled myself together and drove to my parents’ house. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [调研10]（24-25高三下·广东·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I had a long and tiring day at school. My head was aching by the time I reached home. Streams of sweat were running down my face, and my T-shirt was wet. I felt like I had run a marathon, and my energy had completely run out. I managed to unlock the door with my fingerprint. As usual, it was silent and nobody was at home. Mother and Father wouldn’t be back from work until 8:00 p. m. They were totally engaged in their work, and it seemed that I was the last one they cared about. I knew I should be tough and independent, but sometimes I just couldn’t help recalling the nice days when I could stay with my parents for a whole day. Kicking off my shoes, I let my backpack slide down my arms, and onto the floor. Dragging myself slowly to the coffee table, I sank onto the sofa and closed my eyes. Falling asleep, I was unconscious to the fever that was developing in my body. “Shayne? Shayne, wake up!” I could hear Mother’s distant voice, gentle yet urgent. I tried to shake the tiredness off, but my head was heavy. “Wake up, son,” I could feel Father’s big, warm hand on my forehead. I heard him say, “He’s running a fever. We’ve got to send him to the doctor. His temperature is rather high.” I tried to speak, but my words were lost in a fog of weariness (疲惫) and discomfort. Father lifted me off the sofa, and what followed was an unclear memory—I couldn’t even remember how we traveled from home to the clinic and back. But in my half-conscious state, I was aware of Mother’s loving hands wiping my face with a damp towel that was cold to the touch. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Late at night, I woke up to find my mouth and throat dry. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “Much better,” I looked up to see my parents staring at me with much concern. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14 / 21 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 《2025年高考英语读后续写高分宝典》 专题09 2021新课标I卷读后续写及满分语料10类68句(母亲节惊喜) 解析版 【读后续写六年高考考情】 年份 卷别 主题 话题 类型 2025 浙江1月卷 人与社会/自我 勇寻真相并且学会共情的重要性 生活故事类 八省联考卷 人与社会/动物 铁汉柔情让我感动流浪犬守护者 关爱动物类 2024 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 车站履行承诺还钱给出租车司机 个人成长类 浙江1月卷 人与自我 利用脑图来确定方位找到教学楼 校园生活类 九省联考卷 人与自然 志愿者训练意外发现海豚的秘密 关爱动物类 2023 新课标I&II卷 人与自我 老师鼓励参加作文比赛终获大奖 校园生活类 浙江1月卷 人与自然 作者两次与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅感悟 关爱动物类 2022 新课标I&II卷 人与自我 鼓励身残志坚男孩参加校越野赛 体育比赛类 浙江6月卷 人与社会 为社区无家可归的人们发放食物 助人为乐类 浙江1月卷 人与社会 与“最不合拍”搭档终成为好朋友 校园生活类 2021 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 孩子母亲节给妈妈做早餐送惊喜 家庭亲情类 浙江6月卷 人与自我 作者上学时一次打工挣钱的经历 个人成长类 浙江1月卷 人与社会 少年头意外卡在南瓜中爆红网络 生活故事类 2020 新课标I&II卷 人与社会 三个孩子帮助贫困家庭孩子挣钱 个人成长类 浙江7月卷 人与自然 与北极熊面对面的一次脱险经历 关爱动物类 浙江1月卷 人与自然 帮助宠物狗重获快乐收获新伙伴 关爱动物类 【读后续写情节衔接思维导图】 ( 点 1 ： 位于续写 第一段段首 ，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点 2 ： 位于续写 第一段段尾 ，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点 3 ： 位于续写 第二段段首 ，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点 4 ： 续写 结尾 主旨 升华 ，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 ) 【读后续写语言表达满分策略】 ( 真题呈现 ) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右。 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 情节变化 ) 情节阶段 情节描述 功能 计划阶段 文章开头描述了双胞胎期待母亲节的到来，并计划为妈妈准备早餐作为惊喜。 交代故事背景和双胞胎的动机，表达了对妈妈的爱与感激。 准备工作 双胞胎设定好闹钟，一大早就悄悄起床来到厨房，决定先煮粥，再煎面包。 展现了双胞胎的积极主动和对任务的认真态度。 煎面包出现失误 Jeff加热锅子时火候过大，导致面包迅速变黑。 突显双胞胎的经验不足，为后续情节铺垫。 处理意外情况 Jenna处理好火候后，Jeff发现粥沸腾导致火熄灭。随后，Jeff 不小心烫伤了手。 加强故事的紧张气氛，并反映出双胞胎的应变能力。 失望和反思 双胞胎看着厨房的混乱情景，充满失落和懊恼。 突显失败带来的情感波动，为父亲的出现创造契机。 ( 情感变化 ) 情感变化 情感表现 作用 期待与兴奋 双胞胎计划早餐并想象妈妈的反应，感到非常兴奋与自豪。 表现孩子们对母亲的爱和想要表达感激之情。 紧张与焦虑 当他们遇到煎面包和煮粥的意外情况时，心情逐渐紧张，开始感到焦虑。 强调他们在任务中面对的挑战，展现他们的成长。 失望与沮丧 看到厨房的混乱情景时，感到深深的失望。 突出孩子们的挫败感，展示他们对母亲的期待和自己任务的重视。 希望与感激(后续可能) 父亲的出现可能带来帮助，让他们重新感受到希望。 暗示父亲的支持，预示着最终可能带来的成功和满足。 ( 主题分析 ) 321原则 上下文推理 内容预测 衔接句1 第一段段首句后 原文描述了孩子们尝试给母亲带来惊喜，但因经验不足，厨房出现了混乱，Jeff的手还被烫伤了。父亲的出现提供了帮助的契机。 父亲看到混乱的厨房和Jeff烫伤的手，先关心Jeff的手，再鼓励孩子们继续完成惊喜，体现父亲的支持和温暖。 过渡1 第一段中间 父亲帮忙收拾厨房，带领他们重新做早餐，孩子们在父亲的帮助下重拾信心并顺利完成准备。 父亲帮助清理厨房，教导他们正确烹饪，孩子们在指导下恢复信心并完成早餐，氛围温馨和鼓励。 衔接句2 第一段结尾 第二段段首句表明孩子们端着早餐去叫醒母亲，此处需与第一段结束时的成功准备场景紧密连接。 孩子们将准备好的早餐端上楼，表现出自信和成就感。此时场景已经转换到母亲的房间，孩子们带着期盼唤醒母亲。 衔接句3 第二段段首句后 第二段开头提到母亲醒来，顺理成章地唤起她对孩子们烫伤手的关切，使情感逐步递进，表达母亲的温情。 母亲先关心Jeff的烫伤，接着感受到孩子们用心准备的早餐，情绪感动。家庭温情升华。 过渡2 第二段中间 母亲的感动与孩子们的自豪交织在一起，进一步衬托出浓浓的家庭温馨氛围，反映出母亲的欣慰和孩子们的满足。 母亲品尝早餐，对孩子们的用心表达感激之情，孩子们体验到爱的回馈。 结尾句 第二段结尾 孩子们通过自己的努力给母亲带来了快乐，尽管经历了困难，他们学会了付出和亲情的价值。 通过母亲对孩子们的肯定，主题得到升华，突显家庭爱与奉献的重要性。 【简要分析】 【原文解读】 本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起 饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败，后来在父亲的帮助下，获得成功，他们把早餐献给亲爱的母 亲，妈妈非常感动的故事。 【续写线索】帮助——指导——积极——献礼——感动 【段落续写】 1.由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了”可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。 2.由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。 第二节 本文是一篇记叙文。讲述的是Jenna和Jeff这对双胞胎兄妹为了在母亲节早上给母亲惊喜而精心策划并制作早餐的故事；他们克服困难，永不放弃，折射的是他们对母亲的拳拳之爱。 Paragraph 1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Knowing what they were preparing for, he was greatly surprised. So immediately, he offered to get involved in the kids’ job. Firstly, he put the pot of porridge on a gentle heat, asking Jeff to watch out for it going for fifteen minutes. And then, he asked Jenna to break another two eggs and mix them with milk. With all preparations done, they started to fry bread together. In a flash, sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen. To their delight, the breakfast was a success in the end. Paragraph 1: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Eyes opened, the woman heard a harmonious “Happy Mother’s Day” from her twin kids with hot, sweet breakfast before her. Behind the children stood their father. To shed light on the game of the gift, he told the mother the whole story. After learning about what happened, she rose quickly to gaze at the boy’s hand with moved tears rolling down her cheeks. “Thank you, my honey!” said the mother. 【导语】本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。”可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。 ②由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。 2.续写线索：指导——积极——献礼——感动 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①帮助：help/assist ②完成：finish/complete ③拥抱：hug/embrace 情绪类 ①高兴：happy/delighted ②感动：moved/touched 【点睛】 [高分句型1]. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]. It was not only the breakfast, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. (固定短语not only…but (also)和强调句型) ( 研读材料 ) 一、读大意，抓中心主题 双胞胎Jeff和Jenna准备在母亲节为母亲做法式吐司和鸡肉粥的早餐，母亲节当天，他们先煮粥，然后把面包放进鸡蛋和牛奶的混合液中。但由于火太大，面包焦了，在第二块面包将要煎成功的时候，沸腾的粥把火熄灭了，厨房里一片狼藉，Jeff的手也烫伤了，Jenna帮他用冷水冲手的时候闻到了面包烧焦的味道。 二、读人物，找续写人物 读续写两段的首句可知，Dad ,Mom和twins是续写内容的关键人物 三、读时态，选续写时态 通读全文可知，该故事主要是用一般过去时讲述的，故续写内容的时态也应一致。 四、读结构，辨划分方式 弄清故事的结构特点及表现形式，选择合适的方式划分段落，常用的有4种： 1.以时空变化划分(指时间和地点)； 2.以人物思想感情的变化来划分； 3.按记叙内容的变化来划分； 4.按描述角度的变化、事情发展的阶段来划分。 再看回真题，一开始，这对双胞胎在母亲节前就在策划给母亲的惊喜，而后是在母亲节当天，两人在厨房为母亲准备早餐。而由续写两段首句可知，续写第一段这对Twins还是在厨房里，第二段是在楼上妈妈的卧室里，人物所处地点不断变化，由此可知, 题目是按照时空变化来划分的。而我们在构思续写内容时也应在这两个地点的基础上进行拓展。 五、读语言，定风格特色 挖掘文本语言表达风格，模仿原文语言写句子。使续写部分的语言风格与原文的风格相一致，以促进语言协同。此外，如果原文有较多对话, 续写也可出现对话；如原文没有对话, 尽量少用对话形式。 ( 思维导图 ) ( 谋篇布局 ) 续写第一段： 根据续写第二段提示句可知，早餐最终被做好了，因此本段可围绕“爸爸出现”后给予双胞胎的帮助展开故事情节，可以是爸爸给他们指出补救办法，或者爸爸直接帮忙，不管是哪种构思，双胞胎做早餐的困难在本段应该得到解决。 续写第二段： 根据提示句可知双胞胎已经端着早餐上楼并叫醒妈妈，因此本段可围绕双胞胎见到妈妈后的故事展开，可以穿插双胞胎和妈妈之间的对话，还可以提到爸爸假装睡觉，最后可以通过自然式结尾，给故事画上句号，或通过主题式结尾，突出“亲情”、“劳动”、“克服困难、解决问题”等主题。 ( 语料背诵 ) 满分秘诀一、无灵主语（时间、地点、情感、自然现象、动作行为类名词作主语） 1.一看到这一片狼藉，他的下巴就惊吓掉了。 1. His jaw dropped open at the sight of the great mess. 2.如释重负的泪水像一条断了的珍珠项链一样滚落下来。 2. Tears of relief rolled down like a broken pearl necklace. 3.很快，厨房里弥漫着早餐的香味。 3. Soon, the delicious smell of breakfast filled the kitchen. 4.母亲面带微笑，灿烂的笑容照亮了整个房间。 4. The mother’s face beamed and her shining smile lit up the room. 5.很快，一份精心设计的法式吐司和一碗粥就做好了。 5. Soon, a well-designed French toast and a bowl of porridge were ready. 6.当她看到早餐时，眼睛睁大了，兴奋得闪闪发光。 6. When she saw the breakfast, her eyes widened up and twinkled with excitement. 7.她的眼睛在早餐和双胞胎之间徘徊，好像在问发生了什么事。 7. Her eyes wandered between the breakfast and the twins as if she was asking what happened. 8、整个上午，大家沐浴在幸福家庭的温暖中，度过了一段幸福的时光。 8. That whole morning witnessed a happy time with everyone bathed in the warmth of a happy family. 9.她一注意到早餐端到床上，脸上就闪过一丝兴奋。 9. The instant she noticed the breakfast was brought in bed, a ripple of excitement flashed through her face. 10.食物的香味弥漫在卧室里，仿佛变了魔法，卧室变成了世界上最可爱的地方。 10. The scent of the food filled the bedroom, which, as if by magic, had turned into the most lovely place in the world. 满分秘诀二、动作链（A and B型，A, B and C 型） 11.杰夫又吃了一片面包，这一次一切都很完美。 11. Jeff put in another slice of bread and this time everything was perfect. 12.他们拥抱着她，喊道：“妈妈，母亲节快乐！” 12. They hugged her and yelled "Happy Mother’s Day, Mummy!" 13.父亲拿出药盒，在詹娜的手上涂了一些药。 13. Father fetched the medicine box and applied some medicine to Jenna’s hand. 14.妈妈咬了一口三明治，大声说这是她吃过的最好的三明治。 14. Mother bit into a sandwich and exclaimed it was the best sandwich she had ever tasted. 15.他们的母亲立刻坐了起来，紧紧地拥抱着他们，感激他们做的丰盛早餐。 15. Their mother sat up right away, hugged them tightly and appreciated them for their brilliant breakfast. 满分秘诀三、独立主格结构/with复合结构 16.他们的父亲发现了混乱的局面，明白了一切。 16. Spotting the messy situation, their father understood everything. 17.一切都解决了，父亲离开了厨房，答应保守他们的秘密。 17. Everything settled, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret. 18.詹娜哭了，悔恨和内疚像无尽的潮水一样淹没了她。 18. Jenna cried with regret and guilt overwhelming her like endless tides. 19.他们的父亲困惑地问他们，心中闪过一丝愤怒。 19. Their father asked them confusedly with a sense of anger floating up in his mind. 20.母亲深深地感动了，说了声“谢谢”，拥抱着孩子们，泪水模糊了她的眼睛。 20. Deeply touched, the mother said “Thank you” and hugged the kids, tears blurring her eyes. 21.母亲热泪盈眶，紧紧地搂着他们。 21. With tears welling up in her eyes, the mother threw her arms around them tightly. 22.父亲吓了一跳，倒在地上，皱着眉头望着现场。 22.Astonished, Father was rooted on the floor, staring at the scene with eyebrow frowning. 23.这对双胞胎大喊“母亲节快乐”，眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。 23. The twins yelled “Happy Mother’s Day”, with their eyes twinkling with excitement. 24.由于每个人都扮演不同的角色，没过多久，他们三个人就完成了所有的事情。 24. With everyone sharing different roles, it didn’t take long for the three of them to get everything done. 25.母亲搂着双胞胎，紧紧地拥抱着他们，眼泪从脸颊上流下。 25. Mother threw her arms around the twins and hugged them tightly, with moving tears streaming down from cheeks. 满分秘诀四、非谓语短语（作主语、宾语、状语、定语、宾语补足语等） 26.父亲看到这里一片狼藉，吓得僵住了，好像在地上扎了根似的。 26. Seeing the mess, Father froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground. 27.听到这些话，这对双胞胎点了点头，眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。 27. Hearing the words, the twins nodded their heads, their eyes shining with excitement. 28.看着诱人的早餐，他们激动得失去了说话的能力。 28. Looking at the inviting breakfast, they were deprived of all power of speech by excitement. 29.听到这些话，这对双胞胎点了点头，眼睛里闪烁着激动的光芒。 29. Hearing the words, the twins nodded, with their eyes sparkling with great excitement. 30.看着精心准备的早餐，三人会心一笑。 30. Looking at the well prepared breakfast, the three exchanged an understanding smile. 31.他们把早餐递给她，大喊“母亲节快乐！给你一个大惊喜！” 31. They handed the breakfast to her, yelling “Happy Mother's Day! A big surprise for you!” 32.她站起来，把双胞胎紧紧地抱在怀里，说：“这将是我一生中最好的早餐。”。" 32. She got up and held the twins tightly in her arms, saying ''This will be the best breakfast in my life. " 33.看到他们灰心丧气的脸，他叫他们打扫厨房，同时帮他们给妈妈做早餐。 33. Seeing their discouraged faces, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. 34.看到美味的早餐，这对双胞胎可以想象他们的母亲在享用时会多么惊讶和自豪。 34. Seeing the delicious breakfast, the twins could imagine how surprised and proud their mother would be when enjoying it. 35.她瞪大了眼睛，忍不住品尝着早餐，骄傲地说这是她吃过的最好的早餐。 35. Her eyes widened and she could not help tasting the breakfast, saying proudly it was the best breakfast she had ever had. 满分秘诀五、介词短语位于句首 36.一瞬间，厨房的空气中弥漫着甜甜的味道。 36. In a flash, sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen. 37.说完之后，杰夫结结巴巴地说出了他们的计划，脸涨得通红。 37. After that, Jeff stammered out their plan, his face flushing. 38.一看到脏乱的厨房，他就知道发生了什么事。 38. At the sight of the messy kitchen, he knew what had happened. 39.他毫不犹豫地关上了锅下的火。 39. Without hesitation, he turned off the fire burning under the pan. 40.让他们欣慰的是，在父亲的指导下，他们成功地做好了早餐。 40. To their relief, with the guidance of father, they successfully made the breakfast. 41.一看到法式吐司和粥，他们的妈妈就哭了：“太惊喜了！” 41. At the sight of the French toast and porridge, their mum let out a cry, “What a surprise!” 42.他们的父亲没有责怪他们的粗心大意，而是灿烂地微笑着拍拍他们的头。 42. Instead of blaming them for their carelessness, their father put on a bright smile and patted on their heads. 43.不到一个小时，厨房就打扫干净了，父亲做了一些鸡蛋三明治，煮了一些燕麦粥。 43. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had made some egg sandwiches and cooked some oat porridge. 44.在父亲的指导下，他们收拾残局，成功地做了法式吐司和鸡肉粥。 44. Under their father’s instruction, they cleaned up the mess and succeeded in making French toast and chicken porridge. 满分秘诀六、形容词、副词短语位于句首 45.他们的母亲既震惊又骄傲，轻声说：“谢谢，我的孩子们。” 45. Shocked and proud, their mother said in a sweet whisper, “Thanks, my kids.” 46.很快，美味诱人的法式吐司和鸡肉粥就做好了。 46. Soon the delicious and inviting French toast and chicken porridge were ready. 满分秘诀七、直接引语/简洁对话 47.他轻轻地拍了拍，安慰道：“别担心，我会帮你修的。” 47. He patted them gently, comforting “Don't worry! I'll help you fix it.” 48.“惊喜！妈妈，母亲节快乐！”他们说着，把胳膊举向空中。 48. “Surprise! Happy mother’s day, mummy!” They said, throwing their arms into the air. 49.他笑着小声对他们说：“哇，你们两个真让我惊讶，我能和你们一起去吗？” 49. He whispered to them with a smile, “Wow, you two really surprised me, can I join you?” 50.“别慌！”他递给每个人一条湿毛巾，帮助他们迅速清理残局。 50. “Don’t panic!” he handed each one a wet towel, helping them clean the mess quickly. 51. 这个世上最幸福妈妈不停地重复着，“谢谢你们，宝贝。” 51. “Thank you, my honey.” the happiest mother in the world kept repeating these words. 满分秘诀八、特殊句式（倒装、强调、感叹） 52.惊喜来得太突然他们的母亲没有意识到发生了什么事。 52. So sudden was the surprise that their mother didn't realize what had happened. 53.她非常高兴，紧紧地抱着双胞胎，喜悦的泪水夺眶而出。 53. So delighted was she that she hugged the twins tightly, tears of joy welling up in her eyes. 54.她羞愧得低着头流下了愧疚的泪水。 54. So ashamed was she that she shed guilty tears with head drooping. 55.他们的母亲突然没有意识到发生了什么事。 55. So sudden was the surprise that their mother didn't realize what had happened. 56.妈妈刚一醒来，就发现了美味的早餐。 56. No sooner had mother woken up than she spotted the delicious breakfast. 57.家庭的爱有助于做出最美味的早餐。 57. It is the family love that helps make the most delicious breakfast. 58.在任何情况下，他们的母亲都没有想到她的一天会以这样一份温暖的礼物开始。 58.Under no circumstances had their mother expected her day to start with such a warm gift. 满分秘诀九、环境描写 59.阳光透过窗户照在骄傲的母亲脸上。 59. The sun was shining on the proud mother’s face through the windows. 60.清晨的阳光洒进来，全家人沐浴在爱和幸福之中。 60. The early sunlight streaming in, the whole family were bathed in love and happiness. 61.沐浴在阳光下，他们一起享用早餐。 61. Bathed in the sunshine, they enjoyed the breakfast together. 满分秘诀十、主题升华句 62.整个房间都沐浴在母亲节快乐的气氛中。 62.The whole room was bathed in a happy Mother's Day atmosphere. 63.他们的父亲站在门旁，记录着这感人的一幕。 63. Their father was standing beside the door, recording this touching scene. 64.这位父亲用相机记录下了令人难忘的一幕。多么令人惊喜的母亲节啊。 64. Using the camera, the father recorded the memorable scene. What a Mother’s Day Surprise. 65.沉浸在家庭的爱中，妈妈高兴地说：“你们三个让我过得很开心！” 65. Immersed in the love of the family, mom said in delight, “You three have made my day!” 66.一家人聚在精心设计的早餐旁，沉浸在幸福和感激之中。 66. Gathering around the well-designed breakfast, the whole family was immersed in happiness and gratitude. 67. 她立马明白了一切，感觉到一股暖流在她心里涌动，奔腾而来。 67. She understood the whole thing at once and felt a warm current welling up in her heart and surging through her. 68. 妈妈吻了吻他们，灿烂的笑 “亲爱的谢谢你们。真是个大惊喜！” 68. Mother kissed them and smiled dazzlingly “Oh dear, thank you my sweeties. What a big surprise!” ( 范文背诵 ) As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. “Don’t panic!” their father handed each of them a wet towel, helping them clean the mess up quickly. After the cleaning, he began helping them prepare breakfast. The twins acted as their father’s little helpers, and it was a pleasure to team up with their father. Under his careful guidance, it didn’t take long before the French toast and chicken porridge were ready. Everything settled, their father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. “Happy Mother’s Day!” shouted the twins. “And we have a surprise for you!” So sweet was the surprise that Mother excitedly shook Father, who was pretending to snore. Her face lit up with happiness. Mother hugged the twins and showed her thanks. She tasted a piece of French toast and said that it was the best breakfast she had ever had. Love filled the whole room. What a beautiful and sweet surprise! 【读后续写家庭亲情类名校好题调研】 [调研01]（2025·浙江温州·二模）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I’d always been told to take care of my older brother, Brian, who was born weak and small. I’d often tie his shoes or prepare another glass of water for him. My mom saw my larger size and strong body as a sign that I was to be a kind of guardian angel (守护天使) for Brian. However, that was not the case. One day our school sponsored a pumpkin-carving contest. First prize was S100, and I knew just how I would spend it. There was a brand-new game I was dying to own. So I decided the first place bonus definitely had to land in my pocket. When I had to carve the perfect pumpkin I’d picked out, it dawned on me that with my big clumsy fingers I’d surely screw it up (搞砸). I thought of Brian’s smaller, delicate hands and knew he was the man for the job. I immediately begged Brian. Unexpectedly, he asked for a cut. That was fifty-fifty. Quickly doing the math in my head, I figured out even if I split (分摊) the first prize, I’d still have enough cash for the game. So I gave in to Brian’s demands. With skillful hands Brian carved the perfect face, and now we had the best pumpkin ever. Then the unexpected happened: We came in second. Unfortunately, second prize was only $50, and I needed every penny of that to buy the game. The day of the awards ceremony, the principal handed over the money to me because Brian was home, sick with cold. If he really wanted to win, he would have been here today, I thought to myself, justifying stealing the cash from under poor Brian’s runny nose. With hardly a thought, I ran to the store and bought my dream game. That night when Brian asked if we had won, I denied, afraid to look into his eyes. The whole thing was never mentioned again until the day when Brian was packing for college. I played my usual role in helping him pack when I came across an old album filled with photos he had taken as the school photographer. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I was enjoying the photos when one caught my eye. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “You actually knew and didn’t say anything?" I was shocked. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分范文】 I was enjoying the photos when one caught my eye. It was a picture of the pumpkin we had carved together. Underneath, Brian had written, “My first real win with my brother. Even if we didn’t get first, it was a victory because we worked as a team.” Seeing those words, a wave of guilt washed over me. I remembered how I had selfishly taken all the money and lied to him. I realized how much I had let him down. I turned to Brian, ready to confess everything. “You actually knew and didn’t say anything?” I was shocked. Brian just smiled gently and said, “I always knew. But I also knew that you needed that game more than the money at that time. And I was proud of our teamwork, not the prize. I hoped one day you’d understand the real meaning of winning together.” His words made me feel even more ashamed. I apologized sincerely, vowing to make it up to him. From then on, I truly understood my role as his guardian angel and the importance of true brotherhood. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者与哥哥Brian之间的一次经历，展现了兄弟之间的情感变化以及作者对“真正胜利”的理解。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我正欣赏着这些照片，其中一张吸引了我的目光。”以及第二段首句内容““你其实早就知道却什么都没说？”我震惊地问道。”可知，第一段可描写作者发现自己的哥哥早就知道他们获得了二等奖，却没有揭穿作者。 ②由第二段首句内容““你其实早就知道却什么都没说？”我震惊地问道。”可知，第二段可描写作者向哥哥道歉，也真正理解了兄弟情谊的重要性。 2.续写线索：作者欣赏着照片，突然发现了一张俩人一起雕刻南瓜的照片——在照片下，哥哥记下了他们一起雕刻南瓜这件事，并感叹虽然没有获得第一名，但是仍然是胜利——作者突然意识到哥哥早就知道了真相，却没有揭穿自己的谎言——作者准备向哥哥坦白，可是哥哥却温柔地自己为两人的团队合作感到自豪——作者非常愧疚，真诚地向哥哥道歉——从此之后，作者真正理解了兄弟情谊。 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①说谎：lie/ tell a lie ②使……失望：let down/ disappoint ③道歉：apologize/ make an apology 情绪类 ①对……感到自豪：be proud of/ take pride in ②真诚地：sincerely/ genuinely 【点睛】【高分句型1】It was a picture of the pumpkin we had carved together.（运用了省略关系代词的定语从句） 【高分句型2】Even if we didn’t get first, it was a victory because we worked as a team.（运用了even if引导的状语从句和because引导的状语从句） [调研02]（2025·河南驻马店·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Dad’s Old Guitar Tom was a teenager who loved exploring the old and dusty corners of his house. One day, while digging through the attic, he found something that caught his eye. It was a guitar, which was old, with signs of wear. However, it seemed to tell a story. Tom rushed downstairs with the guitar in hand. “Dad, look what I’ve found!” he exclaimed, showing the guitar to his father. Dad’s eyes widened, and a smile slowly spread across his face. “ Ah, my old guitar,” he said, taking it gently from Tom. “You played the guitar?” Tom asked, surprised. Dad chuckled, “Yes, a long time ago. I was in a band with some of my best friends when I was about your age.” Tom’s eyes lit up with excitement. “You were in a band? That’s so cool! Tell me more!” Dad settled into a chair, the old guitar resting on his lap. “We called ourselves ‘The Sunset Strummers’. We played at small events, parties, and even some local cafes. Those were some of the best days of my life. Music, friendship, and endless fun.” Days went by, and Tom couldn’t stop thinking about his dad’s musical past. He spoke to his mother and learned more. Old photos were brought out, showing a young dad with long hair, rocking out with his band. Tom felt proud and interested. He wanted to do something special for his dad to let him relive those days, even if just for a moment. With the help of his mom and younger sister, Lucy, Tom came up with a plan. They would organize a surprise concert in their backyard and invite some of Dad’s old band members and friends. Lucy was good with tech, so she took charge of sending out digital invites and setting up the stage. Tom practiced on the old guitar, hoping to play alongside his dad. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 The day of the surprise concert arrived. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As the evening grew dark and the music came to an end, Dad hugged Tom tightly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】  The day of the surprise concert arrived. Friends and family members gathered in the backyard, holding their breath in anticipation. Tom led his dad outside, blindfolded. When the blindfold was removed, Dad’s face lit up. The old band members were there, instruments in hand. Tom handed the guitar to his dad. Without hesitation, Dad took the guitar, and the band started playing. The music was filled with nostalgia and love. Tom joined in with a song he had learned, and together, father and son played in harmony. The crowd cheered, danced, and sang along.       As the evening grew dark and the music came to an end, Dad hugged Tom tightly. “Thank you,” he whispered, tears in his eyes. “This was the best gift ever.” Lucy captured the moments with her camera, ensuring the memories would last forever. The old guitar had not only revealed a piece of Dad’s past but also created a new and beautiful memory for everyone present. And in a simple backyard, with string lights and heartwarming tunes, the family and friends came together, celebrating love, memories and the timeless magic of music. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Tom发现父亲的旧吉他后，通过组织一场惊喜音乐会帮助父亲重温青春时光的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“惊喜音乐会的日子到了”可知，第一段可描写开音乐会的场景，包括父亲的反应以及乐队的重聚。 ②由第二段首句内容“夜幕降临，音乐结束了，爸爸紧紧地拥抱着汤姆。”可知，第二段可描写父子子情感互动，体现父亲的感动和作者的感悟。 2.续写线索：汤姆把蒙着眼睛的爸爸领了出去——乐队的老成员都在——父子合奏——父亲感动比赛——作者感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①递给：hand /pass ②加入：join in/take part in ③捕捉：capture /catch ④揭露：reveal/uncover 情绪类 ①紧紧地：tightly / firmly ②感人的：heartwarming/ affecting 【点睛】[高分句型1]When the blindfold was removed, Dad’s face lit up. (运用了when引导时间状语从句) [高分句型2] Tom joined in with a song he had learned, and together, father and son played in harmony. (运用了省略that的定语从句) [调研03]（2025·陕西安康·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Love Conquered Alzheimer’s Disease Shirley was a white-collar worker who always spared time to accompany her single father at weekends. They took a walk in the nearby park, climbed mountains, and dined out. But as Shirley’s father grew older, he occasionally forgot things. In the beginning, it was things that didn’t matter, such as where he left his smartphone or what the neighbor’s name was. However, one year later, his condition became worse. He was diagnosed with Alzheimer’s disease (阿尔茨海默病).The doctor’s advice was that Shirley should remind her father of the time they spent together, which might relieve his symptoms, although there was no cure for the disease. Though having no medical background, Shirley had heard about the disease many times. She also sensed that her father was becoming more eccentric (古怪的). He would forget her name and the way home. It was uneasy for Shirley to watch her father struggle, but she had to work in the daytime. One day, in order to ensure that her father had had lunch, Shirley called him up. But no one answered on the other side. She was worried and took half a day off. When she arrived at home, there was no one. Without the slightest hesitation, Shirley left the house to search for her father. All of a sudden, Shirley’s phone rang. The strange phone number drew her attention. She prayed that her father would be safe and sound. The call was from a policeman, who told her that her father was in the hospital due to a car accident, and that he wasn’t able to come home. After hanging up the phone, Shirley drove to the hospital, seeing that her father was lying on the bed, with his face pale. Walking closer to him, Shirley noticed that he was grasping a watch. “Dad, why do you grasp the watch? It will make you tired,” asked Shirley. At the same time, she tried taking the watch off his hands. Unexpectedly, he grasped it more tightly. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “Don’t take away the watch my daughter bought me,” shouted her father: ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As her father calmed down, Shirley suddenly thought of the doctor’s advice. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分范文】 “Don’t take away the watch my daughter bought me,” shouted her father: Shirley was surprised to hear him mention her. Although he often forgot her name, at that moment, he remembered the watch and connected it to her. Her heart was filled with both sadness and joy. She gently held his hand and said softly, “Dad, it’s me, Shirley. I’m here for you.” He seemed puzzled but didn’t resist. Shirley realized that the watch was precious to him because it reminded him of their special bond. As her father calmed down, Shirley suddenly thought of the doctor’s advice. She pulled out a photo album she had prepared earlier. It was full of pictures capturing their happy times together. Sitting by his side, she pointed at each photo, telling him stories about those moments. Sometimes, he would smile or nod, recognizing a familiar face or place. Though he didn’t remember everything, Shirley felt there was hope. She knew these memories could help him feel connected. Determined to fight the disease, she promised herself to create new memories with her father, holding onto the power of love. 【导语】本文以阿尔茨海默病线索，讲述了Shirley的父亲患上了阿尔茨海默病，医生告诉Shirley这种病需要与父亲多讲述以前发生的事情。有一次父亲走丢了，结果出了车祸被送到了医院。Shirley赶到医院时，看着父亲手里紧紧地握着一个手表，父亲不愿放下手表，说这是女儿给他买的，不能拿走。Shirley很是感动，于是拿出一本相册集，坐在父亲身边，给他讲述每张照片背后的故事。她希望用爱来打败父亲的病。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“她父亲大喊道：“不要拿走我女儿给我买的手表”。”可知，本段可以写Shirley很是惊讶，尽管父亲经常忘记自己的名字，但这一刻他记得自己，记得自己给他买的手表。她安抚着父亲，知道这块表对父亲来说很重要，这是他们之间的纽带。 ②由第二段首句内容“随着父亲冷静下来，她想起了医生的建议。”可知，本段可以写Shirley想起了医生建议，于是拿出一本相册集，坐在父亲身边，跟他讲述了每一张照片背后的故事。尽管父亲想不起来所有的事情，但Shirley却看到了希望。她知道这些照片能让父亲感觉到他们之间的联系，她希望用爱来打败父亲的病。 2.续写线索：父亲大喊→感到惊讶→安抚父亲→想起了医生的建议→拿出相册集，讲述故事→看到了希望。 3.词类激活： 行为类： 微笑：smile/beam a smile 抓住：hold/seize/grasp 意识到：realize/be aware of/be conscious of 情感类： 惊讶的：surprised/astonished/amazed 困惑的：puzzled/confused/full of puzzlement 高兴：joy/delight/happiness 【点睛】【高分句型1】 Shirley realized that the watch was precious to him because it reminded him of their special bond.(运用了that引导宾语从句和because引导原因状语从句。) 【高分句型2】 Sitting by his side, she pointed at each photo, telling him stories about those moments.(运用了现在分词作状语。) [调研04]（24-25高二下·江苏南京·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Eight-year-old Peter was a lively and energetic little boy. Every weekend, he would go to his grandfather’s house, although he didn’t particularly enjoy it. His grandfather was very strict with Peter. He demanded that Peter develop two good habits: being punctual (准时的) and staying organized. To help his grandson develop these habits, the grandfather took certain measures. For instance, Peter had to be in the dining room sharply at 12:00 noon for lunch, or else he would have no meal. Peter sometimes felt that his grandfather was too strict, but he dared not voice his dissatisfaction.   This week was no exception. Peter arrived at his grandfather’s house as usual. His grandfather was busy cooking in the kitchen, the smell of the food filling the air. Peter, left on his own, wandered into the living room to play. There, he accidentally knocked over the first-aid kit that was placed on the table. The contents in the kit spilled all over the floor, small bottles of pills scattered everywhere. Peter paid no attention to the chaos he had caused. He glanced at the mess, then remembered that David, his friend from next door, was home alone. Awakened by the thought of watching cartoons with David, Peter hurried next door, leaving the spilled contents of the first-aid kit behind. In the kitchen, the grandfather, who was chopping vegetables, suddenly felt unwell. His heart began to race, and he realized that he was having a heart attack. He struggled to the living room to get his medicine. However, when he got there, all he saw was the overturned first-aid kit and the pills scattered on the floor. The grandfather bent down with difficulty, his heart racing with anxiety as he searched for the blue bottle that contained his heart medicine. The precious seconds ticked by, and he felt his strength fading. Time was running out, and Peter didn’t know it. The little boy was completely unaware of the danger his grandfather was facing, immersed in the fun of the cartoon, laughing from time to time. The clock struck 12 but the cartoon was still five minutes away from ending. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Finally, after a desperate search, Peter spotted the small blue bottle hidden under the sofa. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 The clock struck 12 but the cartoon was still five minutes away from ending. Although Peter really wanted to finish watching the cartoon, he tore himself away from the cartoon and went home. As soon as Peter walked in, he was scared to see his grandfather lying on the ground. He quickly ran over and asked what was wrong. His grandfather, in a faint voice, uttered, “Blue bottle... find the blue bottle...” Peter immediately dropped to his knees and started frantically searching the floor. At that moment, he was filled with regret for not tidying up the mess he made when he knocked over the first-aid kit. Finally, after a desperate search, Peter spotted the small blue bottle hidden under the sofa. He rushed over, reached out to grab the bottle and handed it to his grandfather, tears welling up his eyes and his voice trembling as he apologized, “Grandpa, I’m sorry!” His grandfather, after taking the medicine, gently patted Peter on the shoulder and said, “Thank God you’ve come home in time and find the life-saving medicine for me.” Realizing Grandpa was out of danger, Peter felt a mixed surge of guilt and comfort overwhelming him, and at this moment, he realized the importance of being punctual and staying organized. 【导语】本文以急救箱为线索展开，讲述了八岁活泼好动的彼得每个周末都要去爷爷家，尽管爷爷对他的守时和整洁有着严格的要求，彼得偶尔仍会调皮捣蛋。一次，他在爷爷家玩耍时不小心打翻了急救箱，却未予理会便跑去邻居家看动画片。与此同时，爷爷突然心脏病发作，却发现急救箱被弄乱无法及时找到救命药的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“时钟敲响了12下，但动画片还有五分钟才结束。”可知，第一段可描写彼得回家发现爷爷倒地急需药物后怎么做的以及对自己的行为的感受。 ②由第二段首句内容“终于，在一番焦急的搜寻后，彼得发现那个小蓝瓶藏在沙发底下。”可知，第二段可描写彼得发现药瓶后如何救治爷爷以及爷爷服药后对彼得说了些什么以及彼得对该经历的感悟。 2.续写线索：不舍离开邻居家——发现爷爷倒地——急寻小药瓶——发现药瓶救治爷爷——爷爷对彼得安抚——彼得的感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①跑过去：ran over/rush over/ dash over/hurry over ②伸出手：reached out/ extend /stretch ③颤抖：tremble/shake/ quaver 情绪类 ①害怕的：scared/frightened ②懊悔：regret/guilt/ remorse 【点睛】[高分句型1] Although Peter really wanted to finish watching the cartoon, he tore himself away from the cartoon and went home.（运用了although引导的让步状语从句） [高分句型2] He rushed over, reached out to grab the bottle and handed it to his grandfather, tears welling up his eyes and his voice trembling as he apologized, “Grandpa, I’m sorry!”（运用了独立主格结构作状语） [高分句型3] Realizing Grandpa was out of danger, Peter felt a mixed surge of guilt and comfort overwhelming him, and at this moment, he realized the importance of being punctual and staying organized.（运用了现在分词短语作状语） [调研05]（2025·江西·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I could smell garlic and other Italian spices before I opened the front door. Mom was cooking because Uncle Vince was coming for dinner. As the only non-Italian in the family, she wanted to make a good impression on Uncle Vince, who was a very traditional Italian. Mom opened the fridge, where lay two bags of food, one for meatballs and the other for cake balls. She hurriedly took out the bag of “meatballs” which she had cooked and frozen before. However, she didn’t realize that she had made a mistake, but later it became a surprise. Mom carefully put the meatballs into the boiling pot of sauce and tried to make them expand, just like my Italian grandma used to do. The salad was ready, covered with a wet towel to keep it fresh. The table was set; the garlic bread was waiting to be put into the oven; the water for the spaghetti was almost boiling. Uncle Vince arrived in time for dinner. We greeted each other just like Italians usually do. Then, he and Dad sat in the living room, chatting casually while Mom and I served the food. “Come on in, guys. Food is almost ready,” Mom said, with a confident smile on her face. I passed Uncle Vince the bowl full of spaghetti, and then Dad handed him the plate of “meatballs” that had been heated in the sauce. When Uncle Vince saw the size of the “meatballs”, his eyes widened, and he couldn’t help licking (舔) his lips. He helped himself to three meatballs while Mom held her breath. Then he picked up one of the “meatballs” with his fork and took a big bite. He stopped for a moment and said, “The taste and spices of this ‘meatball’ are quite interesting. It is different but really good.” Mom finally relaxed. In fact, the “meatballs” were so good that after eating three, Uncle Vince had two more. Mom felt very happy, and the atmosphere of the family dinner was so harmonious. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The next morning, when Mom opened the fridge for breakfast, she froze, finding the bag of meatballs was just there. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Mom closed the fridge and whispered to Dad and me, “Don’t tell anyone. Wait for further response from Uncle Vince.” ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 The next morning, when Mom opened the fridge for breakfast, she froze, finding the bag of meatballs was just there. It dawned on her that the “meatballs” Uncle Vince had enjoyed so much were actually cake balls she had mistakenly taken out of the freezer. Panic surged through her as she recalled how Uncle Vince had raved about them. She wondered if he had noticed the mix-up or if he was just being polite. The realization was both hilarious and nerve-wracking, leaving her in a state of disbelief as she imagined Uncle Vince's reaction if he found out the truth. Mom closed the fridge and whispered to Dad and me, “Don’t tell anyone. Wait for further response from Uncle Vince.” We exchanged amused glances, the secret creating a bond between us. As breakfast progressed, I could see Mom stealing glances at Uncle Vince, who seemed oblivious to the mix-up, still basking in the afterglow of last night’s dinner. The air was filled with laughter and lighthearted banter, but Mom’s mind was racing. Finally, she decided to come clean to Uncle Vince the next time he visited. After all, the joy of family meals was in the memories we created together, even if they were sprinkled with unexpected surprises. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者回家便闻及妈妈为迎接传统意大利人文斯叔叔晚餐所烹美食香气。身为家中唯一非意大利人，妈妈想留好印象，却在准备时错将冷冻蛋糕球当肉丸烹制。用餐时，文斯叔叔对“肉丸”满怀期待，品尝后赞不绝口，家庭晚餐氛围融洽。次日晨，妈妈发现真肉丸仍在冰箱，惊觉给文斯叔叔吃的竟是蛋糕球，又好笑又紧张，让家人保密并等待文斯叔叔后续反应。早餐时文斯叔叔毫无察觉，妈妈决定下次见面坦白，觉得家庭聚餐的乐趣正是这种意外惊喜带来的回忆 。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“第二天早上，当妈妈打开冰箱准备吃早餐时，她惊呆了，发现那袋肉丸就在那里。”可知，第一段可描写妈妈发现弄错食物后的心理状态变化过程。 ②由第二段首句内容“妈妈关上冰箱，小声对爸爸和我说：“不要告诉任何人。等待文斯叔叔的进一步答复。””可知，第二段可描写文斯叔叔没有注意到这一混乱以及妈妈决定下次说出实情。 2.续写线索：妈妈惊呆了——弄错食物——感到恐慌——不要告诉任何人——没有注意到这一混乱——决定下次说出实情 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①回忆：recalled/ memorized ②.充满：be filled with /be full of ③.决定做某事：decided to do/determine to do 情绪类 ①.恐慌：panic/ scare ②.惊喜：surprise /astonishment 【点睛】[高分句型1]. The realization was both hilarious and nerve-wracking, leaving her in a state of disbelief as she imagined Uncle Vince's reaction if he found out the truth.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语。） [高分句型2]. As breakfast progressed, I could see Mom stealing glances at Uncle Vince, who seemed oblivious to the mix-up, still basking in the afterglow of last night’s dinner.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句。） [调研06]（2025·云南·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I was young, my father was a secondary school teacher in Edensor, England. As the breadwinner, he was deeply engaged in his school responsibilities during my childhood. Consequently, I often felt distant from him because he had few moments to talk or interact with me. My mother, a full-time housewife, managed the household and took care of my younger bother and me, busting around the kitchen, bedrooms and grocery stores. The back garden of our house was a special place for me; it was not only a secure spot for kids but also my dad’s favorite hobby area. Whenever he was home, he would spend most of his spare time looking after his treasured roses, which my mother also adored. My father would care for his roses with great devotion and affection. Often, I would watch beside him, curious or eager for his attention, but he was usually preoccupied (全神贯注). He regularly watered the roses, cleaned the leaves, loosened and turned over the soil, and fed them with essential nutrients. His expectation was the joy and sweetness brought by their blossoming. One day, I saw him cut off some branches and stems. Then, with a sharp knife, he carefully made marks on the main branches. He cut open the marked spots to insert sprouts (嫩枝) into those new cuts and wrapped them with bandages. After all his efforts, he reminded us never to touch them. From then on, whenever my father returned home from work, he would go straight to tend to those plants. Within a month, we all witnessed the entire process: tender stems grow, form buds, and finally bear blossoms in various colors. The garden soon became a place of immense beauty, filled with rose blossoms and surrounded by their sweet fragrance. My parents truly enjoyed themselves there, and so did my brother Tommy and I. Those roses brought us immense happiness, and no one, especially me, wanted to let go of such beauty. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150词左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 One sunny day, I decided to do something as my dad had done to have more roses. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Later that day, when my dad saw the great mess I had made, he was totally shocked. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 One sunny day, I decided to do something as my dad had done to have more roses. Without telling anyone, I took a pair of scissors and began my “gardening project”. I carefully selected a few branches, and with trembling hands, I made the first cut, hoping it would lead to a new rose. I then made clumsy marks on the remaining stems and tried to insert any twigs I could find. The garden soon turned into a chaotic scene, with cut branches and scattered leaves everywhere. I was so absorbed in my work that I failed to notice how much of a mess I had created, thinking I was on my way to making the garden even more beautiful. Later that day, when my dad saw the great mess I had made, he was totally shocked. He froze in his tracks and his eyes widened in disbelief as he stared at the damaged roses. At first, I was terrified, fearing his anger. But instead of scolding, he gently asked why I did this. I tearfully told him I wanted more roses like he did. He took a deep breath, his initial shock giving way to a gentle smile. Kneeling beside me, he placed a hand on my shoulder and said, “Let me show you how it’s really done.” From that day on, he spent more time teaching me about gardening, and our relationship bloomed like those beautiful roses in the garden. 【导语】本文围绕作者童年经历展开，讲述了父亲因工作繁忙，作者与其关系疏远。父亲闲暇时热衷照料后花园的玫瑰，作者常一旁观看。一次，父亲对玫瑰进行嫁接操作。不久，玫瑰绽放，花园美不胜收，玫瑰不仅装点了花园，更拉近了家人间的距离，给全家带来了幸福。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“在一个阳光明媚的日子里，我决定像我父亲那样做些事情，以便能拥有更多的玫瑰。”可以预测续写这段主要内容： 受父亲影响，作者瞒着家人开展“园艺工程”，虽弄乱花园，却自认为能让其更美。 ②由第二段首句内容“那天晚些时候，当我父亲看到我造成的一片狼藉时，他完全惊呆了。”可以预测续写这段主要内容：父亲发现作者弄乱花园后未斥责，而是耐心教导，借此拉近了两人关系 。 2.续写线索：开展“园艺工程”——弄乱花园——父亲未斥责——耐心教导——父子关系更亲密 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①开始：begin/commence ②注意到：notice/perceive/take notice of ③凝视：stare at/gaze at 情绪类 ①害怕的：terrified/sacred ②愤怒：anger/rage 【点睛】[高分句型1]. I carefully selected a few branches, and with trembling hands, I made the first cut, hoping it would lead to a new rose. （运用了现在分词作状语和省略that的宾语从句） [高分句型2]. I then made clumsy marks on the remaining stems and tried to insert any twigs I could find. （运用了省略that的限制性定语从句） [调研07]（2025·河北·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a sunny morning when I packed my bags for a business trip. The house was filled with the usual hustle and bustle (熙熙攘攘), but today there was a sense of excitement mixed with a bit of anxiety. This would be the first time I would be leaving my son, Max, behind for a few days. Max, five years old, was used to having me around. Little did he know, today was going to be a day of new experiences and emotions. As I took out my suitcase, Max entered the room, his eyes wide with curiosity. “Mom, where are you going?” he asked, his voice carrying innocence and some concern. I smiled, “I’ve to go on a trip for work, Max. I’ll be back in a few days.” Max’s eyes grew even wider, and I could see the look of shock on his face. He had never been apart from me for more than a day, and the concept of me being away was completely new to him. “But, Mom, who will take care of me?” he asked, his voice trembling (颤抖) slightly. I hugged him tightly, saying, “Dad will be here with you, and Grandma is coming over to help. You’ll have so much fun with them, and I’ll call you every day,” I said, hoping to ease his worries. Max nodded slowly, but I could tell he was still unsure. As the day went on, I noticed Max staying close to me, watching my every move. He helped me pack, and brought me items he thought I might need, like his favorite toy car and a drawing he made for me. His small gestures touched my heart, and I realized how much he cared. When it was finally time for me to leave, Max stood by the door, his expression a mix of bravery and sadness. I hugged him one last time and whispered, “I’ll be back before you know it, Max. Be good and remember that I love you.” He nodded, with tears in his eyes. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As I drove away, I couldn’t help but glance back at the house. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When I finally returned home, Max greeted me with the biggest hug ever. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 As I drove away, I couldn’t help but glance back at the house. There he was, standing at the window, waving with a small smile on his face. It was a moment that touched my heart, but I knew this experience would be valuable for both of us. During my trip, I called Max every evening. We talked about his day, the fun he was having with Dad and Grandma, and the new things he was learning. Each call seemed to ease his worries a little more, and by the third day, he sounded more confident and happier. When I finally returned home, Max greeted me with the biggest hug ever. “Mom! You’re back!” he exclaimed, his face lighting up with joy. At that moment, I realized how much he had grown in just a few days. He had faced his fears and come out stronger. This experience taught Max an important lesson about resilience and independence. It showed him that even when things change, he can adapt and thrive. It also reminded me of the importance of developing these qualities in him and helping him become a strong and confident individual. 【导语】本文以母子情为线索展开，讲述了作者因工作原因第一次离开五岁的儿子Max几天，儿子从最初的不舍、担忧到后来逐渐适应并成长的故事，展现了孩子在面对分离时的脆弱以及独立成长的过程。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我开车离开时，忍不住回头看了一眼房子。”可知，第一段可描写作者离开后对儿子的牵挂以及儿子在家中的表现。 ②由第二段首句内容“当我回到家时，Max给了我一个最大的拥抱。”可知，第二段可描写作者回到家后与儿子的重逢场景以及儿子在这几天中的变化。 2. 续写线索：离开——牵挂——儿子在家的表现——回家——重逢——儿子的成长 3. 词汇激活： 行为类 ①陪伴：accompany/keep company ②适应：adapt/adjust ③缓解：ease/alleviate 情绪类 ①担忧：worry/concern ②快乐：joy/delight ③自信：confident/self-assured ④坚强：strong/resilient 【点睛】【高级句型1】There he was, standing at the window, waving with a small smile on his face. (there开头的倒装句，现在分词作伴随状语) 【高级句型2】It showed him that even when things change, he can adapt and thrive. (that引导的宾语从句，when引导的时间状语从句) [调研08]（2025·江苏南京·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 After my family moved to America, we lived on Pearl Street in New York’s Chinatown. Below our flat, my family ran a bakery. My mother named me after the street: Pearl Wong. A typical Chinese-style mum, my mother often reminded me of the importance of being outstanding. “Be number one, or be nothing,” she demanded in broken English. She would check my report cards and frown at anything lower than an A． At a holiday party, my brother received a chess set, missing a pawn (卒) and a knight (马). My mother dismissed it as unwanted junk, but we were fascinated, especially me. “Why can't they move more steps?” “Why do they go cross ways to take other men?” I had so many questions. My mother patted the flour off her hands. “Let me see book,” she said. “Ah. Don't know why? You find out yourself.” So I read and memorized the rules, studied the moves, and practiced endlessly. Soon, I was beating my brothers. With every game, my chess improved, my wins grew, and my hunger for victory deepened. I started entering tournaments and winning trophies (奖杯). My mother became my biggest supporter—but in her own way. She pushed me to win every game and displayed every trophy in the bakery window. I asked her several times not to do so but she insisted. Soon, the cakes were surrounded by rows of shining trophies. “This my daughter, Pearl,” she would tell others, her voice full of pride. But the more she showed me off, the more I felt trapped, as if I were no longer playing for myself, as if I were her trophy. One Saturday in Chinatown, my mother paraded (招摇过市) me through the stores, without making a purchase. “This my daughter, Pearl Wong, Chinatown chess champion,” she announced. The shopkeepers, with forced smiles, looked at us with an obviously growing impatience. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Yet, she went on and on, totally ignoring my burning eyes. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When I finally returned to the bakery, my mother was putting away the trophies. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 Yet, she went on and on, totally ignoring my burning eyes. I was so angry that I wanted to scream at her. But I knew it would be useless. So I walked off quickly, leaving her talking with others. I wandered aimlessly through the streets, not knowing where to go. After a long time, I found myself in front of a chess shop. The chess sets in the window were so attractive that I couldn’t help but stare at them. How I wished I could have one of them! When I finally returned to the bakery, my mother was putting away the trophies. She looked at me with a sad expression. “Pearl, you must be hungry. I’ve prepared your favorite food.” I didn’t answer, just sitting there staring at the floor. “I'm sorry, Pearl,” she said in a low voice. “I shouldn’t have shown you off like that. It’s because I love you so much and I’m so proud of you.” Hearing this, I burst into tears. “Mom, I’m sorry too. I shouldn’t have left you alone. You’re always doing your best for me. ” We hugged each other tightly. 【导语】本文以人物情感为线索展开，讲述了作者的母亲以自己的方式对作者在象棋比赛中取得成绩而感到骄傲，却让作者感到被束缚，在一次母亲炫耀的过程中，作者最终情绪爆发的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容 “然而，她不停地说着，完全无视我愤怒的眼神。” 可知，第一段可描写作者因母亲的行为感到愤怒，最终离开，四处游荡，看到象棋店的场景。 ②由第二段首句内容 “当我最终回到面包店时，妈妈正在收拾奖杯。” 可知，第二段可描写作者和母亲最终进行沟通，化解矛盾，彼此理解的过程。 2.续写线索：母亲炫耀 —— 作者愤怒离开 —— 街头游荡 —— 看到象棋店 —— 回到面包店 —— 母亲道歉 —— 作者谅解 —— 彼此拥抱 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①尖叫：scream/shout/yell ②游荡：wander/roam ③盯着看：stare at/gaze at 情绪类 ①愤怒：angry/annoyed ②悲伤：sad/sorrowful 【点睛】[高分句型1] I was so angry that I wanted to scream at her.（使用了“so...that... ”引导的结果状语从句） [高分句型2] Hearing this, I burst into tears.（使用了现在分词短语做状语） [调研09]（2025·河北唐山·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Ever since I was a child, Dad had been working hard. He’d worked as a telegraph operator on the railroad and added his earnings selling old pocket watches at the markets. “We needed the money. For a rainy day,” he always said. When I was 10 years old, I bought an ice cream, Daddy’s favorite, with the first dollar I earned by doing odd jobs in the neighborhood. I thought he’d be pleased. He looked up and indeed smiled. But as he took a taste of it, he warned, “Don’t be squandering (乱花) all your hard-earned money on this again. You should be putting something away for rainy days.” I tried hard to fight back tears. I was quite disappointed. When I was a little older, I studied piano. I knew how proud he’d be of the way I played The Londonderry Air. But at the last minute of my first performance, Daddy couldn’t come. He had to work overtime. We needed the money. For a rainy day. Didn’t he care about my happiness? One day he showed me what my happiness was worth. After I studied nursing and pursued my career, I started to raise a dog, Muffin, and she became my soul mate. I had to drop her off at my friend’s when I had a business trip. One time, Muffin jumped the fence in my friend’s backyard and raced off. No one could find her. “I’m so sorry, Roberta,” Mom said, covering a blanket around me on the sofa. “Your father is worried too.” I felt my heart break when a stranger called, “I have found your dog. How can I get the reward of $1,000 mentioned in the ad of the newspaper?” 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 I was stunned about the reward. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I cried, holding the newspaper, but I quickly pulled myself together and drove to my parents’ house. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 I was stunned about the reward. I had never placed such an ad. I knew Dad would be furious about this false claim. How could we afford $1,000? It was a huge sum for our family. We always saved money for a rainy day. But Muffin was like a family member to me. I was desperate to get her back, yet at the same time, I was extremely worried about how Dad would react. I cried, holding the newspaper, but I quickly pulled myself together and drove to my parents’ house. When I got there, Dad was sitting at the table. He looked up at me and said, “I placed the ad, honey. I know Muffin means the world to you. Your happiness is more important than saving for a rainy day.” Hearing this, tears welled up in my eyes again. I finally understood that behind his strict money saving words, there was always a deep love for me. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了父亲一直教导作者要为不时之需存钱，作者曾因此觉得父亲不关心自己的快乐。后来作者养的狗丢了，有人要求他支付登报的1000美元报酬。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我对这笔报酬感到震惊。”可知，第一段可描写作者因没登广告而担心父亲的反应，同时又急切想找回狗的矛盾心情。 ②由第二段首句内容“我拿着报纸哭了，但我很快振作起来，开车去了父母家。”可知，第二段可描写到父母家后父亲表明是自己登的广告，作者理解了父亲的爱。 2. 续写线索：震惊报酬——担心父亲反应——开车去父母家——父亲表明登广告——理解父亲的爱 3. 词汇激活： 行为类 ①储蓄：save/put aside ②反应：react/respond ③到达：get/reach 情绪类 ①暴怒的：furious/extremely angry ②绝望的：desperate/hopeless ③担心的：worried/concerned 【点睛】[高分句型1] I knew Dad would be furious about this false claim.(运用了省略连词that的宾语从句) [高分句型2] Hearing this, tears welled up in my eyes again.(运用了现在分词作时间状语) [高分句型3] I finally understood that behind his strict money saving words, there was always a deep love for me.(运用了连词that引导的宾语从句) [调研10]（24-25高三下·广东·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I had a long and tiring day at school. My head was aching by the time I reached home. Streams of sweat were running down my face, and my T-shirt was wet. I felt like I had run a marathon, and my energy had completely run out. I managed to unlock the door with my fingerprint. As usual, it was silent and nobody was at home. Mother and Father wouldn’t be back from work until 8:00 p. m. They were totally engaged in their work, and it seemed that I was the last one they cared about. I knew I should be tough and independent, but sometimes I just couldn’t help recalling the nice days when I could stay with my parents for a whole day. Kicking off my shoes, I let my backpack slide down my arms, and onto the floor. Dragging myself slowly to the coffee table, I sank onto the sofa and closed my eyes. Falling asleep, I was unconscious to the fever that was developing in my body. “Shayne? Shayne, wake up!” I could hear Mother’s distant voice, gentle yet urgent. I tried to shake the tiredness off, but my head was heavy. “Wake up, son,” I could feel Father’s big, warm hand on my forehead. I heard him say, “He’s running a fever. We’ve got to send him to the doctor. His temperature is rather high.” I tried to speak, but my words were lost in a fog of weariness (疲惫) and discomfort. Father lifted me off the sofa, and what followed was an unclear memory—I couldn’t even remember how we traveled from home to the clinic and back. But in my half-conscious state, I was aware of Mother’s loving hands wiping my face with a damp towel that was cold to the touch. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Late at night, I woke up to find my mouth and throat dry. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “Much better,” I looked up to see my parents staring at me with much concern. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 Late at night, I woke up to find my mouth and throat dry. Struggling to open my eyelids, I caught a look of worry on Mother’s pale face. She was sitting beside me, with my father standing by. “Mommy,” I spoke thickly. “I need water.” Mother immediately asked Father to fetch water for me. Father rushed out, and within a minute, he stepped carefully back into my room with a glass of warm water in his hands. “How are you feeling now?” he asked gently as I took a sip that provided instant relief to my aching, dry throat. “Much better,” I looked up to see my parents staring at me with much concern. I felt a wave of guilt. I spoke throatily, “I’m sorry you’re staying up to look after me. It must be tiring.” “Don’t apologize, silly boy. We’re taking a leave to stay home with you. It’s a rest from work for us, too!” Father assured me with a big smile. “Just concentrate on recovering,” he said and reached out to comb my hair with his fingers. A sudden surge of strength filled me, and I answered firmly, “I will be up and about by tomorrow.” 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，文章讲述作者在学校度过疲惫一天，回家后发烧昏睡。父母下班发现，父亲背作者去看医生，母亲贴心照顾。此前作者曾因父母忙碌感到孤单，这次生病让作者感受到他们的关爱。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“深夜，我醒来时发现自己的嘴巴和喉咙干得难受。”可以预测续写这段主要内容：深夜作者口渴醒来，父母关心，父亲急忙取水，作者喝水后喉咙缓解。 ②由第二段首句内容“‘好多了。’我抬起头，看到父母满脸关切地盯着我。”可以预测续写这段主要内容：作者生病醒来表达愧疚，父母称请假陪作者工作之余能休息，一番话语给作者力量，让作者坚定康复决心 。 2.续写线索：作者生病——父母关怀——父母请假陪同——作者愧疚——坚定康复决心 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①.看见：catch a look of /spot ②.提供：provide/offer/supply ③.照顾：look after/take care of 情绪类 ①.苍白的：pale/peaky/colourless ②.愧疚的：guilty/apologetic 【点睛】[高分句型1]. Struggling to open my eyelids, I caught a look of worry on Mother’s pale face. （运用了现在分词作状语） [高分句型2]. She was sitting beside me, with my father standing by. （运用了with的复合结构） [高分句型3]. I’m sorry you’re staying up to look after me.（运用省略that引导的宾语从句） 16 / 30 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$