读后续写 一次选择，温暖人心 讲义-吉林省吉林地区普通中学2024-2025学年高中毕业年级第三次调研测试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The world was wrapped in frost when I stepped outside. Yesterday’s snowfall had transformed the streets into dangerous paths, with black ice beneath tire tracks. It was the rush hour in the morning, and the traffic was exceptionally heavy that day. My hands clutched the steering wheel as I inched forward, dashboard（仪表盘） clock ticking — 8:43. If traffic moved at this pace, I’d be late for the 9:00 meeting. I thought to myself, frowning with anxiety. Near the Maple Street crossing, I saw chaos. A white car sat abandoned in the middle of the road. Ten yards away, a blue SUV knocked into a lamppost. A woman emerged from the car holding her child against her chest. Even through fogged windows, I saw the panic on her face. She stumbled towards the cars stuck in the traffic, pleading for a ride to the hospital. However, car after car, drivers just avoided eye contact with her. I rolled down the window and leaned out, trying to see if there was any hope of the road opening up ahead. Fragments of bystanders’ conversation revealed the tragedy: The child had a high fever and was vomiting（呕吐),forcing the father into panic. He drove fast, desperate to reach the hospital quickly. But the car went out of control on the glittering icy road and resulted in the collision. A wave of concern washed over me as I saw the child in her arms, my heart aching with profound sympathy for the mother. The dashboard clock glowed 8:55 — I would definitely be late. Company policy deducted（扣除）half-day pay for thirty-minute lateness, and worse still, I’d have to face the manager’s icy stare — the kind that could freeze a summer breeze. Restless on my seat, I imagined the cars ahead to fade away so that I could escape this traffic jam. Yet as the upset mother stepped closer, a familiar picture flashed through my mind: Last December, I’d sped past an elderly man fallen on icy sidewalk, his hand reaching toward my car. I’d chosen a client meeting over the feeling of sympathy, and I still felt guilty every time I remembered the scene. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1. With a call that came from heart, I signaled the mother to jump into my car. Paragraph 2. The clock read 9:37 when I finally reached the office. 文本主旨 本文讲述了一个关于选择和同情的故事。在一个寒冷的冬日早晨，主人公在上班途中遇到了一位急需帮助的年轻母亲和她的孩子。主人公在面对自己的工作责任和帮助他人的道德责任之间做出了艰难的选择。文章通过主人公的内心挣扎，探讨了同情心、责任感和人性的温暖。 五要素分析 时间：一个寒冷的冬日早晨，交通高峰期。 地点：Maple Street交叉口附近。 人物： 主角：叙述者（司机） 次主角：年轻母亲和她的孩子 其他人物：其他司机、公司经理 事件： 主人公在上班途中遇到交通堵塞。 一辆白色汽车和一辆蓝色SUV发生事故，年轻母亲带着生病的孩子急需帮助。 其他司机都避开了她，主人公在内心挣扎后决定帮助她。 结果：主人公帮助了年轻母亲，但因此迟到了，面临被扣工资和经理的责备。 词汇积累 frost（霜） black ice（黑冰） traffic（交通） steering wheel（方向盘） dashboard clock（仪表盘时钟） chaos（混乱） abandoned（被遗弃的） collision（碰撞） fever（发烧） vomiting（呕吐） sympathy（同情） policy（政策） deducted（扣除） icy stare（冰冷的目光） elderly（年长的） sidewalk（人行道） client meeting（客户会议） guilty（内疚） 续写分析 衔接句 第一段：以“With a call that came from heart, I signaled the mother to jump into my car.”开头，自然地引出主人公的决定。 第二段：以“The clock read 9:37 when I finally reached the office.”开头，描述主人公迟到后的场景。 情节合理性 第一段：主人公在内心的挣扎后，决定帮助年轻母亲，这一情节符合人性的温暖和同情心。 第二段：主人公迟到后面临被扣工资和经理的责备，这是现实生活中常见的后果，情节合理。 情感铺垫 第一段：主人公内心挣扎，回忆起自己曾经的冷漠行为，增强了帮助他人的决心。 第二段：主人公迟到后内心的忐忑和对经理责备的预期，与帮助他人后的满足感形成对比。 情感走向 初始：主人公因交通堵塞而焦虑。 冲突：主人公看到年轻母亲的困境，内心挣扎。 转折：主人公决定帮助年轻母亲，内心的同情战胜了对迟到的担忧。 高潮：主人公帮助年轻母亲到达医院，内心的满足感。 结局：主人公迟到，面临被扣工资和经理的责备，但内心无悔。 主题深化 同情与选择：文章通过主人公的选择，探讨了在面对他人困境时，同情心和责任感的重要性。 人性的温暖：即使在个人利益受损的情况下，帮助他人也能带来内心的满足。 道德与现实的冲突：主人公在道德责任和个人利益之间做出了选择，展现了人性的光辉。 下水文（两篇） 下水文1 With a call that came from heart, I signaled the mother to jump into my car. She looked at me with wide eyes, then quickly got in, holding the child tightly. I could see the relief in her face as she settled into the back seat. I turned on the heater and sped off towards the hospital, trying to weave through the traffic as quickly as possible. The child was shivering and looked very weak. The mother kept whispering words of comfort to him. I glanced at the clock — 9:15. I knew I’d be late, but I didn’t care. Helping this mother and her child was more important than anything else. When we finally reached the hospital, the mother got out and hugged me tightly. “Thank you,” she said, tears in her eyes. I nodded and watched as they rushed inside. I felt a warmth in my heart that I hadn’t felt in a long time. The clock read 9:37 when I finally reached the office. I took a deep breath and walked in, knowing I’d have to face the consequences. My manager was already at his desk, and he looked up as I entered. “You’re late,” he said, his voice cold. I nodded, feeling a bit nervous. “I know, and I’m sorry. There was an emergency on the way to work, and I had to help.” He raised an eyebrow, clearly skeptical. “We have policies for a reason,” he said. “But I understand. Just don’t let it happen again.” I nodded, feeling a mix of relief and gratitude. As I walked to my desk, I realized that sometimes, doing the right thing is worth any cost. 下水文2 With a call that came from heart, I signaled the mother to jump into my car. She looked at me hesitantly, then quickly got in, holding the child close. I could see the desperation in her eyes as she thanked me. I started the car and turned on the heater, trying to make the child as comfortable as possible. The traffic was still heavy, but I managed to find a quicker route to the hospital. The child was pale and shivering, and the mother was visibly distressed. I glanced at the clock — 9:20. I knew I’d be late, but I couldn’t leave them. When we arrived at the hospital, the mother got out and hugged me tightly. “Thank you so much,” she said, tears streaming down her face. I nodded, feeling a sense of fulfillment that I hadn’t felt in a long time. The clock read 9:37 when I finally reached the office. I took a deep breath and walked in, knowing I’d have to face my manager. He looked up as I entered and frowned. “You’re late,” he said, his tone stern. I nodded, feeling a bit nervous. “I know, and I’m sorry. There was an emergency on the way to work, and I had to help.” He sighed and looked at me for a moment. “Alright, just don’t make a habit of it.” I nodded, feeling relieved. As I walked to my desk, I realized that sometimes, the right choice isn’t always the easiest one, but it’s always worth it. 读后续写参考范文 Paragraph 1: With a call that came from heart, I waved to her to get into my car. Ignoring the loud horns behind me, I moved my car onto the icy side of the road to make space. The mother hurried in, holding her shaking child. "It’ll be okay!" I said, driving carefully but quickly. Traffic lights passed by as I focused on the slippery road. The child’s quiet cries filled the car, making my heart heavy. When we finally stopped at the hospital entrance, the mother held my hand, tears in her eyes as she thanked me. Watching her run inside, I took a deep breath—late for work, but feeling strangely relieved. Paragraph 2: The clock read 9:37 when I finally reached the office. My manager stood stiffly by my desk, frowning. "What happened?" he asked coldly. Nervously, I told him about the morning. His serious face softened when I described the sick child and the worried mother. After a pause, he suddenly said, "You’ve honored what truly matters this morning." His cold look disappeared, replaced by a quiet nod. He didn’t mention the pay cut. Back at my desk, coworkers smiled kindly. Outside, sunlight now melted the ice—a small but hopeful warmth. Some decisions, even if they cost you something, make things clear on the coldest mornings. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$