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读后续写:一场烘焙比赛中的关系得以修复 讲义-- 2025届山东省济南市高三下学期一模英语
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Hey, Isaac! ” Dayna said. There was a touch of awkwardness in her voice. “Feeling ready for this year’s baking competition? ” Dayna’s initiative greetings really surprised me.
“Do I look worried? ” I forced a polite smile. To be honest, I had been hoping to fix our relationship but worried about being turned down and making things worse.
Dayna and I used to be best friends. Our shared love for baking brought us together, leading us to join Mrs Cooper’s baking classes. We always supported each other during the lessons, which greatly enhanced our baking skills. Last year, I cheered for her to win the championship, but we were in such an embarrassing situation just because of an argument.
“Prepare to be amazed, ” I said. She shot me a doubtful look. “We’ll see. ” Today was the day of this year’s competition, whose theme was “cupcakes”. We entered the kitchen at the Students’ Baking Club, where we attended baking classes every Saturday. Family and friends filled a makeshift seating area. After explaining the competition consisted of two rounds, Mrs. Cooper announced the official start of the competition. Immediately, all the contestants quickly dived into their work.
As I was working on my creations, I couldn't help glancing (瞥见) at Dayna now and then because I was so used to checking on her when baking. Dayna, on the other hand, was completely focused. Her hands were moving skillfully as she measured, mixed, and poured. She didn’t seem to be affected by our current relationship at all, or maybe she was just better at hiding it.
Everything went very well. Soon, Mrs. Cooper announced that Dayna, two other contestants, and I were advancing to the final round. In this round, I got right into my zone. But I quickly realized I hadn’t packed the chocolates that I used for decorating. It was my magic weapon for winning! Sweat rolling down my face, I didn’t know what to do.
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Dayna must have sensed my panic.
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Thanks to Dayna’s chocolates, I won!
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主旨大意
文章主要讲述了Isaac和Dayna这对曾经的好友,因一场争吵关系陷入尴尬。在今年以“纸杯蛋糕”为主题的烘焙比赛中,Isaac在决赛轮发现忘记带装饰用的巧克力这一关键材料陷入困境,而Dayna不计前嫌帮助了他,最终Isaac赢得比赛,两人的关系也得以修复。
情节线
1.Isaac和Dayna曾是因热爱烘焙而亲密无间的好友,一起参加烘焙课程。
2.去年两人因一场争吵陷入尴尬,关系破裂。
3.今年的烘焙比赛中,两人都参赛,比赛分两轮,他们均晋级决赛。
4.决赛中Isaac发现忘带装饰巧克力,陷入困境。
5.Dayna帮助Isaac,最终Isaac赢得比赛。
情感线
1. 开篇Isaac面对Dayna的主动问候感到惊讶,同时内心一直渴望修复关系却又害怕被拒,体现出他的纠结与忐忑。
2. 比赛过程中,Isaac不时关注Dayna,而Dayna看似不受两人关系影响,实则也可能在隐藏情绪,表现出两人复杂微妙的情感状态。
3. 当Isaac陷入困境时,Dayna不计前嫌伸出援手,最后Isaac赢得比赛,两人关系迎来转机,情感从破裂走向修复。
主题句
1.Friendship has the power to overcome conflicts and bring people back together, as shown in the baking competition. 友谊拥有战胜冲突、让人们重归于好的力量,正如在这场烘焙比赛中所展现的那样。
2. In the face of difficulties, the spirit of forgiveness and helping each other can not only save the situation but also repair broken relationships. 在困难面前,宽容和互相帮助的精神不仅能挽救局面,还能修复破裂的关系。
3.The baking competition serves as a stage where former friends can put aside their differences, showing that true friendship endures through misunderstandings. 这场烘焙比赛成为了昔日好友放下分歧的舞台,表明真正的友谊能够经受住误解的考验。
范文一
Dayna must have sensed my panic. Her eyes, which had been intently focused on her own cupcakes, suddenly lifted. As she caught sight of my flustered expression and the empty space where my chocolates should have been, a flash of understanding crossed her face. Without hesitation, she reached into her bag and pulled out a pack of chocolates, exactly the same kind I needed. She quickly walked over and handed them to me, giving me a small smile. “Here you go,” she said softly. I was stunned, not expecting her kindness. “Thanks a million,” I stammered, relief flooding through me. With the chocolates in hand, I was able to finish my cupcakes with confidence.
Thanks to Dayna’s chocolates, I won! When Mrs. Cooper announced my name as the champion, I was overjoyed. But more than the victory, I felt grateful for Dayna’s help. After the competition, I walked up to her. “Dayna, I... I don’t know how to thank you enough. And I’m really sorry about what happened last year,” I said sincerely. She smiled at me, “It’s okay. I missed our friendship too. Let’s start over.” We hugged, and I knew our friendship was rekindled.
生词
1. stammer /ˈstæmə(r)/ v.口吃;结结巴巴地说
2. flood /flʌd/ v. 大量涌入;充满;泛滥
3. stunned/stʌnd/ adj. 震惊的;目瞪口呆的
4. rekindle/ˌriːˈkɪndl/ v.重新点燃;重新唤起;使复苏
高级句式
1. Her eyes, which had been intently focused on her own cupcakes, suddenly lifted. As she caught sight of my flustered expression and the empty space where my chocolates should have been, a flash of understanding crossed her face.
分析:“which had been intently focused on her own cupcakes”为非限制性定语从句,修饰“eyes”,补充说明她之前的状态;“As...”引导时间状语从句,描述她看到“我”困境时的反应,整个句子使情节过渡自然。
翻译:她原本一直专注于自己纸杯蛋糕的眼睛突然抬了起来。当她看到我慌乱的表情以及本该放巧克力的空位时,脸上闪过一丝理解。
2. Without hesitation, she reached into her bag and pulled out a pack of chocolates, exactly the same kind I needed.
分析:“Without hesitation”为介词短语作状语,表示“毫不犹豫地”;“exactly the same kind I needed”是省略了关系代词“that”的定语从句,修饰“chocolates”。
翻译:她毫不犹豫地把手伸进包里,拿出一包巧克力,正是我需要的那种。
3. When Mrs. Cooper announced my name as the champion, I was overjoyed.
- 分析:“When...”引导时间状语从句,使句子逻辑清晰,描述在特定时刻“我”的状态。
翻译:当库珀夫人宣布我是冠军时,我欣喜若狂。
4. But more than the victory, I felt grateful for Dayna’s help.
分析:“more than...”表示“不仅仅;超过”,强调除了胜利之外,“我”更感激戴娜的帮助,突出情感的重点。
翻译:但比起胜利,我更感激戴娜的帮助。
范文二
Dayna must have sensed my panic. She was in the middle of carefully piping icing on her cupcake when she suddenly stopped. Her gaze swept across the room and landed on me. Instantly, she understood my situation. She rushed over to me, carrying her box of chocolates. “Isaac, take these. I know you always use them for your masterpieces,” she said, her voice filled with warmth. I looked at her in disbelief, a lump forming in my throat. “Are you sure?” I asked. She nodded firmly, “Of course. We’re still friends, right?” With that, she placed the chocolates in my hands and returned to her own baking.
Thanks to Dayna’s chocolates, I won! As the audience erupted into applause, I felt a mix of pride and gratitude. After the ceremony, I found Dayna and pulled her aside. “Dayna, this win is as much yours as mine. Your kindness today means the world to me. I should have apologized sooner,” I said, looking her in the eye. She smiled, “It’s in the past. Let’s make more delicious memories together from now on.” We laughed, and the awkwardness between us finally disappeared.
生词
1. dilemma /dɪˈlemə/ n.(进退两难的)困境;窘境
2. rush /rʌʃ/ v. 迅速移动;急促;匆忙
3. lump /lʌmp/ n. (喉咙因激动而产生的)哽咽;肿块
4. erupt/ɪˈrʌpt/ v.(火山)爆发;(人群等)突然发生;突然发出(尤指叫喊)
高级句式
1. She was in the middle of carefully piping icing on her cupcake when she suddenly stopped. Her gaze swept across the room and landed on me.
分析:“when she suddenly stopped”为时间状语从句,与前面的过去进行时搭配,生动地描述出她正在做某事时突然停下的场景;后面一句通过连续的动作描写,自然地引出她发现“我”的困境,使情节连贯。
翻译:她正在仔细地给纸杯蛋糕挤糖霜,突然停了下来。她的目光扫过房间,落在了我身上。
2. I looked at her in disbelief, a lump forming in my throat.
分析:独立主格结构,“a lump forming in my throat”描述了“我”看到她帮助“我”时的状态,使情感表达更细腻。
翻译:我难以置信地看着她,喉咙里一阵哽咽。
3. As the audience erupted into applause, I felt a mix of pride and gratitude.
分析:“As...”引导时间状语从句,表明在观众鼓掌这一背景下,“我”产生了复杂的情感。
翻译:当观众爆发出掌声时,我感到既骄傲又感激。
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