读后续写：烘焙比赛故事 讲义-2025届山东省济南市高三下学期一模英语试题

读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Hey, Isaac! ” Dayna said. There was a touch of awkwardness in her voice. “Feeling ready for this year’s baking competition? ” Dayna’s initiative greetings really surprised me. “Do I look worried? ” I forced a polite smile. To be honest, I had been hoping to fix our relationship but worried about being turned down and making things worse. Dayna and I used to be best friends. Our shared love for baking brought us together, leading us to join Mrs Cooper’s baking classes. We always supported each other during the lessons, which greatly enhanced our baking skills. Last year, I cheered for her to win the championship, but we were in such an embarrassing situation just because of an argument. “Prepare to be amazed, ” I said. She shot me a doubtful look. “We’ll see. ” Today was the day of this year’s competition, whose theme was “cupcakes”. We entered the kitchen at the Students’ Baking Club, where we attended baking classes every Saturday. Family and friends filled a makeshift seating area. After explaining the competition consisted of two rounds, Mrs. Cooper announced the official start of the competition. Immediately, all the contestants quickly dived into their work. As I was working on my creations, I couldn't help glancing (瞥见) at Dayna now and then because I was so used to checking on her when baking. Dayna, on the other hand, was completely focused. Her hands were moving skillfully as she measured, mixed, and poured. She didn’t seem to be affected by our current relationship at all, or maybe she was just better at hiding it. Everything went very well. Soon, Mrs. Cooper announced that Dayna, two other contestants, and I were advancing to the final round. In this round, I got right into my zone. But I quickly realized I hadn’t packed the chocolates that I used for decorating. It was my magic weapon for winning! Sweat rolling down my face, I didn’t know what to do. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dayna must have sensed my panic. _________________________________________________________________ Thanks to Dayna’s chocolates, I won! _________________________________________________________________ 烘焙比赛故事续写 续写分析（两段）​ 第一段：此段以 Dayna 察觉到 “我” 的恐慌为切入点，迅速抓住读者注意力。“She looked up from her work and caught my eye. Without hesitation, she rummaged through her own supplies and pulled out a pack of chocolates.” 通过对 Dayna 动作的细致描写，展现出她的果断和善良，尽管与 “我” 之前有矛盾，仍毫不犹豫地伸出援手。“I was stunned. I hadn't expected her to come to my rescue, especially after our falling - out.” 则通过 “我” 的心理活动，突出 “我” 对 Dayna 此举的惊讶，强化了两人关系的戏剧性转变。“I stammered a quick ‘thank you’ and she just smiled faintly.” 简单的对话和表情描写，进一步体现出两人之间微妙的情感变化。“With the chocolates in hand, I was able to finish my cupcakes, adding the perfect decorative touch. As I worked, I couldn't help but feel a warmth spreading in my chest. This simple act of kindness from Dayna made me realize how much I missed our friendship.” 最后几句描述 “我” 完成作品的过程以及内心的感受，从拿到巧克力完成装饰，到感受到内心的温暖，再到意识到对友谊的怀念，层层递进，为两人关系的修复埋下伏笔。​ 第二段：主要围绕 “我” 获胜后的情节展开。“When Mrs. Cooper announced my name as the winner, I was overjoyed. But more than that, I felt a deep sense of gratitude towards Dayna.” 开篇点明 “我” 获胜后的喜悦以及对 Dayna 的感激之情，喜悦是外在表现，感激则是更深层次的情感核心。“I rushed over to her, and before I could stop myself, I gave her a big hug. ‘Thank you so much, Dayna. This wouldn't have been possible without you,’ I said, my voice filled with emotion.” 通过 “我” 的行动和语言，生动地展现出 “我” 对 Dayna 的感激之深，拥抱这一动作更是情感的直接宣泄。“She hugged me back, and for a moment, it was like all the awkwardness and tension between us had melted away. We both knew that this was the beginning of mending our broken friendship.”Dayna 的回应以及两人内心的感受描写，标志着两人关系的彻底缓和，友谊开始修复。“From that day on, we were inseparable again, and our love for baking brought us even closer.” 结尾总结两人后续的关系发展，突出友谊因这次经历更加深厚，升华了故事主题。​ 故事线​ Dayna 主动与 “我” 打招呼，提及今年的烘焙比赛，“我” 原本希望修复关系但有所顾虑，回忆起两人曾因烘焙结为好友，后因争吵陷入尴尬。​ 今年烘焙比赛主题为 “纸杯蛋糕”，在比赛现场，家人朋友观赛，Mrs. Cooper 宣布比赛开始，参赛者投入工作，“我” 在制作过程中不时关注 Dayna，而 Dayna 专注投入。​ 第一轮结束，Dayna、“我” 及另外两名选手晋级决赛，在决赛中 “我” 发现未带装饰用的巧克力，陷入恐慌。​ Dayna 察觉到 “我” 的恐慌，毫不犹豫地将自己的巧克力递给 “我”，“我” 顺利完成纸杯蛋糕的装饰，内心感受到温暖，意识到对友谊的怀念。​ “我” 凭借 Dayna 的巧克力赢得比赛，对 Dayna 充满感激，主动拥抱她表达谢意，两人关系缓和，友谊开始修复，此后两人因对烘焙的热爱关系更加亲密。 短语​ sense one's panic 察觉到某人的恐慌​ without hesitation 毫不犹豫地​ rummage through 翻找​ come to one's rescue 救助某人​ fall - out 争吵，闹翻​ stammer a thank - you 结结巴巴地说谢谢​ a perfect decorative touch 完美的装饰点缀​ a deep sense of gratitude 深深的感激之情​ melt away 消失，消散​ be inseparable 形影不离​ 主旨升华句​ This heart - warming narrative about the baking competition and the mending of a broken friendship serves as a powerful reminder that true friendship has the strength to overcome conflicts and that acts of kindness, no matter how small, can reignite the flames of a once - cherished bond.​ 这个关于烘焙比赛和修复破裂友谊的温暖故事有力地提醒我们，真正的友谊有战胜冲突的力量，善意的举动，无论多么微小，都能重新点燃曾经珍视的友谊之火。​ Through the protagonist's journey from a state of strained relationship to a restored and strengthened friendship, we are shown the transformative power of forgiveness and the beauty of second chances in nurturing meaningful connections.​ 通过主人公从关系紧张到友谊恢复并加深的历程，我们看到了宽恕的变革力量以及在培养有意义的人际关系中第二次机会的美好。​ The story of this baking competition is not merely about a culinary contest; it is a profound exploration of the complexities of human relationships, the importance of empathy, and the redemptive power of kindness in healing emotional wounds.​ 这个烘焙比赛的故事不仅仅是关于一场烹饪竞赛，它是对人际关系复杂性、同理心重要性以及善良在治愈情感创伤中救赎力量的深刻探索。​ In a world often filled with misunderstandings and conflicts, this narrative stands as an inspiration, encouraging us to approach our relationships with an open heart, ready to forgive and extend kindness, for it is in these actions that true friendships are forged and sustained.​ 在一个常常充满误解和冲突的世界里，这个故事是一种激励，鼓励我们以开放的心态对待人际关系，随时准备原谅并给予善意，因为正是在这些行动中，真正的友谊得以铸就和维系。​ From the initial awkwardness between friends to the final celebration of a rekindled friendship, the story encapsulates the essence of growth, the beauty of reconciliation, and the belief that every challenge in a relationship is an opportunity to learn and grow closer.​ 从朋友之间最初的尴尬到最终重燃友谊的庆祝，这个故事体现了成长的本质、和解的美好，以及相信人际关系中的每一个挑战都是学习和增进亲密的机会的信念。​ 写作示范​ 示范一​ Dayna must have sensed my panic. She paused in her work and looked over at me. Her eyes softened when she saw the distress on my face. Without a word, she reached into her bag and pulled out a box of chocolates. She walked over to me, placed the box in my hands, and said, “Here, you can use these.” I was speechless. I stared at her, not knowing what to say. She gave me a gentle smile and returned to her station. With the chocolates, I was able to finish my cupcakes with a new - found confidence. As I decorated them, I thought about how kind Dayna was to help me. I realized that I had been foolish to let our argument ruin our friendship.​ Thanks to Dayna’s chocolates, I won! When Mrs. Cooper announced my victory, I felt a mix of excitement and gratitude. I ran over to Dayna and threw my arms around her. “Thank you, Dayna. You saved me,” I said. She hugged me back tightly. “I'm so happy for you,” she replied. In that moment, all the hurt and anger from our argument seemed to fade away. We both knew that our friendship was back on track. From then on, we made a promise to always support each other, no matter what. Our love for baking and our friendship became even stronger.​ 示范二​ Dayna must have sensed my panic. She turned around and saw the worry in my eyes. Without hesitation, she opened her supply box and took out a bag of chocolates. She held it up and gestured for me to take it. I was shocked. I never thought she would be so generous, especially after what had happened between us. I took the chocolates from her and said, “Thank you. I really appreciate it.” She just nodded and went back to her baking. With the chocolates in my possession, I quickly got back to work. As I added the finishing touches to my cupcakes, I couldn't help but feel a sense of relief and a growing warmth towards Dayna. I knew that this small act of kindness was a step towards mending our friendship.​ Thanks to Dayna’s chocolates, I won! When my name was announced as the winner, I was elated. But my first thought was of Dayna. I walked over to her and said, “Dayna, I owe this win to you. Thank you for being so kind.” She smiled at me and said, “I'm glad I could help. I missed our friendship.” We looked at each other, and in that moment, we both knew that our friendship was back. From that day forward, we were inseparable. We baked together, laughed together, and supported each other through all of life's challenges. Our friendship was stronger than ever, and it all started with a simple act of kindness during a baking competition. 【答案】 Dayna must have sensed my panic. She glanced over at me and quickly realized what had happened. Without hesitation, she walked over to my table and handed me a bag of chocolates. “Here, you can use these,” she said with a smile. “We’re friends, aren’t we?” Her words warmed my heart and made me realize how much I had missed our friendship. I quickly got back to work, using the chocolates to decorate my cupcakes. With renewed confidence, I focused on making the best cupcakes I could. Thanks to Dayna’s chocolates, I won! When Mrs. Cooper announced my name as the winner, I felt a rush of emotions. I walked over to Dayna and gave her a hug. “Thank you so much,” I said sincerely. “You’re welcome,” she replied. “I’m just glad you won.” We both laughed and hugged again. As we walked out of the kitchen together, I knew that our shared love for baking had brought us back together. And this time, I was determined to never let anything come between us again. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$