读后续写--从死亡漩涡中逃生 讲义-河南省南阳市南阳六校联考2024-2025学年高一下学期3月月考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语进行续写，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 About three years ago, something terrible happened to me. That was the day when it took only six hours to break my body and soul. You think I am a very old man—but I am not. It took less than a single day to change my hair from black to white. One day, my two brothers and I were coming back from the islands where we often risked going and got more fish than others. All at once, the sky was covered with dark clouds and in less than a minute we were in a terrible storm. A huge wave covered our boat and my younger brother fell into the sea. My elder brother put his mouth close to my ear and cried out “Moskoe-strom!” The moment I heard the word I became very frightened. I knew what he meant by that one word well enough. With the wind and waves, we were going in the direction of the whirlpool. We were hopeless. Nothing could save us. I felt sick, as if I was falling from a mountain top in a dream. We went round and round, nearer and nearer to the horrible edge of the whirlpool. It may appear strange, but at that moment, when we were on the edge of the whirlpool, I felt calmer than when we were moving towards it. I began to think how amazing a thing it was to die in such a way, and how wonderful it was to see the power of nature. Suddenly, we went over the edge. I thought my life was over. But moment after moment passed, and I was still safe. 注意： 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: The boat was on the inside of the huge whirlpool and we were going round in circles at great speed. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: As you can see, the reason why I’m here to tell the story is that I made the right decision. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本主旨 本文通过讲述主人公在一次出海捕鱼时遭遇的恐怖漩涡经历，展现了人在绝境中对生命的渴望和对自然力量的敬畏，同时也体现了主人公在绝望中保持冷静并最终幸存下来的奇迹。 五要素分析 人物（Character）： 主要人物：主人公（我），两个兄弟（年轻弟弟和年长哥哥）。 次要人物：未明确提及，但可以推测有其他渔民或家人。 时间（Time）： 故事发生在大约三年前的一天，具体时间未明确，但可以推测是白天，因为有“天空被乌云覆盖”的描述。 地点（Place）： 故事主要发生在海上，特别是靠近Moskoe-strom（莫克斯特龙）漩涡的区域。 事件（Event）： 主人公和两个兄弟在海上捕鱼，遭遇风暴，被卷入漩涡。 在漩涡中，主人公经历了极度的恐惧和绝望，但最终幸存。 原因（Cause）： 风暴的突然来袭导致船只被卷入漩涡。 主人公在绝望中保持冷静，做出了正确的决定，从而幸存。 词汇积累 terrible（可怕的） body and soul（身心） risked going（冒险前往） dark clouds（乌云） terrible storm（可怕的风暴） whirlpool（漩涡） hopeless（无望的） frightened（害怕的） power of nature（自然的力量） icy cold（冰冷的） roaring（咆哮的） drowned out（淹没） clung to（紧紧抓住） burst out（爆发） stung（刺痛） amazing（令人惊叹的） wonderful（奇妙的） miraculous（奇迹般的） 续写分析 衔接句 第一段开头：“The boat was on the inside of the huge whirlpool and we were going round in circles at great speed.” 这句话自然地承接了前文描述的漩涡场景，强调了船只在漩涡中的危险状态。 第二段开头：“As you can see, the reason why I’m here to tell the story is that I made the right decision.” 这句话作为转折，引出了主人公幸存的原因，为后续情节展开提供了方向。 情节合理性 主人公在漩涡中经历了极度的恐惧和绝望，但最终通过冷静思考和正确决策幸存下来。这种情节符合人在绝境中可能出现的心理和行为反应。 主人公的幸存带有一定的奇迹色彩，但通过合理的描述（如抓住漂浮物、利用漩涡的特性等），使情节显得合理且引人入胜。 情感铺垫 第一段：通过描述船只在漩涡中的危险状态和主人公的恐惧心理，营造了紧张的氛围。 第二段：通过转折句引出主人公的幸存，情感上从绝望转向希望，增强了故事的感染力。 情感走向 恐惧与绝望：主人公在漩涡中感到极度恐惧和绝望，认为自己必死无疑。 冷静与思考：在绝望中，主人公逐渐冷静下来，开始思考如何生存。 希望与奇迹：通过正确的决策，主人公最终幸存，情感上从绝望转向希望和感激。 主题深化 本文通过主人公的经历，展现了人在绝境中对生命的渴望和对自然力量的敬畏。主题深化在于： 生命的顽强：即使在绝境中，主人公依然努力求生，体现了生命的顽强和不屈。 冷静与智慧：主人公在绝望中保持冷静，做出正确的决策，体现了智慧和勇气的重要性。 自然的力量：漩涡的恐怖和强大展示了自然的不可抗拒，同时也提醒人们要敬畏自然。 下水文一 The boat was on the inside of the huge whirlpool and we were going round in circles at great speed. The boat was shaking violently, and I could hear my elder brother shouting something, but the roaring of the wind and waves drowned out his voice. I clung to the side of the boat, feeling as if my heart would burst out of my chest. The water was icy cold, and the spray stung my face. I could see my younger brother struggling in the water, but the waves were too strong for him to hold on. Suddenly, I noticed a large barrel floating nearby. I shouted to my brother, “Grab that barrel!” He managed to reach it and held on tightly. The barrel helped us stay afloat as we were pulled deeper into the whirlpool. As you can see, the reason why I’m here to tell the story is that I made the right decision. I knew that panicking would only make things worse, so I tried to stay calm. As we were pulled into the center of the whirlpool, I realized that the water was actually calmer there. We held on to the barrel and waited. Eventually, the whirlpool began to weaken, and we were able to swim to the surface. We were rescued by a passing ship. It was a miraculous escape, and I will never forget the power of nature and the importance of staying calm in a crisis. 下水文二 The boat was on the inside of the huge whirlpool and we were going round in circles at great speed. The boat was tossed about like a toy, and I could see the terror in my brothers’ eyes. My elder brother was shouting something, but the noise of the storm made it impossible to hear him clearly. I clung to the boat, feeling the icy water splash against my face. The wind was howling, and the waves were like mountains. I thought we were surely going to die. But then, I remembered something I had read about whirlpools. They often have a calm center. I shouted to my brothers, “We need to get to the center!” My elder brother nodded, and we tried to steer the boat towards the center of the whirlpool. It was incredibly difficult, but we managed to do it. As you can see, the reason why I’m here to tell the story is that I made the right decision. When we reached the center, the water was surprisingly calm. We held on to each other and waited. The whirlpool eventually weakened, and we were able to swim to the surface. A passing ship saw us and rescued us. It was a close call, but we made it. I learned that even in the most terrifying situations, staying calm and thinking clearly can make all the difference. I will always remember that day and the power of nature. 【答案】 The boat was on the inside of the huge whirlpool and we were going round in circles at great speed. I held on to the boat tightly, my heart pounding in my chest. I could see my brothers’ terrified faces. The noise of the water was deafening. Then, I was surprised to notice that the objects in the whirlpool were not all pulled to the bottom at the same rate. Lighter things seemed to stay on the surface longer. I quickly made a decision. I shouted to my brothers to tie themselves to the empty barrels on the boat. But my elder brother was too panicked to respond, and my younger brother was already nowhere to be seen in the wild water. As you can see, the reason why I’m here to tell the story is that I made the right decision. I tied myself firmly to a barrel. The force of the whirlpool was still strong, but the barrel kept me floating. Hours passed like years. Finally, the storm began to weaken, and the whirlpool’s power decreased. I was gradually carried out of the danger zone. When I was rescued by a passing ship, I was in a state of extreme exhaustion. The experience had changed me forever, making me respect the power of nature even more. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$