主题4 读后续写（个人成长）-2025年高考英语读后续写主题讲与练

读后续写主题篇——个人成长 个人成长类故事通常描述的是青少年在成长或学习过程中遇到比赛、表演、演讲等各种赛事或活动，因信心不足而出现害怕、恐惧、自我怀疑等情绪，要求续写如何克服消极情绪，直面困难与挑战，最终取得成功。 近几年高考中考查过此类故事的有： 1.2023年新课标卷讲了母语非英语的“我”参加英语写作比赛(续写重点：比赛后的获奖情况以及对老师感恩的细节描述) 2.2022年新课标卷讲了David因害怕被嘲笑而对参加跑步比赛没有信心。(续写重点：在作者的开导下决定完成比赛的心理斗争以及比赛过程中如何克服困难、凭借坚强的毅力完成比赛) 个人成长故事模型通常为： 设计此类故事的续写情节时，要注意对主人公动作行为及心理变化的细节刻画。 一、个人成长主题词汇积累 1. 性格品质相关 乐观的 optimistic、positive；坚强的 strong - willed、tough、determined；自信的 confident、self-assured；独立的 independent；勇敢的 brave、courageous；有耐心的 patient；有责任感的 responsible；务实的 down-to-earth；保守的 conservative；具有…的美德 with the virtue of...；专心致志的 dedicated、bend on doing; 有洞察力的 with a keen insight into sth; 脾气好的good-natured, with a good temper;完美无缺的 faultless、perfect;有自制力的self-possessed; 天资高的talented, intellectual; 有抱负的ambitious; 可爱温和的lovable and good-natured; 容易相处的easy to get along with; 严肃的 serious; 能说会道的smooth-spoken; 见多识广的well-informed; 有教养的cultured; 时髦的 fashionable; 天真无邪的innocent、naive; 正直的upright、righteous 2. 情感体验相关 沮丧的 frustrated、depressed、despair、upset、disappointed、discouraged；伤感的sentimental；困惑的 confused、puzzled；失落的with a sense of loss、with a heavy/ sinking/sorrowful heart; 惊慌失措的panic；不高兴的、生气的 displeased、annoyed、furious、angry、irritated；疲惫不堪的exhausted and overwhelmed；激动的 excited、thrilled；自豪的 proud；尴尬的 embarrassed；开心的 with indescribably wild joy、delighted、joyful、cheerful、overjoyed；感动的moved；满意的satisfied、content；受到鼓舞的：inspired、encouraged；精神高涨的 be in high spirits；惊讶的surprised 3. 成长行为相关 反思：reflect、think back；进步：progress、improve 尝试探索类：try、attempt、explore、venture、experiment、challenge、dare 学习思考类：learn、study、acquire knowledge、reflect、ponder（深思）、analyze、comprehend、absorb、master 克服困难类：persevere、overcome、endure（忍耐）、adapt、conquer、resolve（解决） 情感转变类：hesitate、summon courage、regain confidence、reconcile（和解）、mature 行动类：step out of one's comfort zone（走出舒适区）、face the music（面对困难） learn from mistakes（从错误中学习）、push boundaries（突破极限） 心理活动类：a surge of determination（决心迸发）、a flicker of hope（一线希望）、a wave of doubt（一阵怀疑）、a spark of inspiration（灵感的火花） 结果类：reap the rewards（收获成果）、achieve self-breakthrough（实现自我突破）、gain a new perspective（获得新视角）、build resilience（培养韧性） 2、 万能句型 （一）开头 环境描写式 1.As the drizzle gently tapped on my shoulders, memories of past struggles flooded my mind, reminding me how far I had come.细雨轻拍在我的肩膀时，过往奋斗的记忆如潮水般涌入脑海，提醒自己已走了多远。 2.The heavy rain mirrored my inner turmoil, yet deep down I knew this storm would forge a stronger version of myself.倾盆大雨映照出我内心的纷乱，然而在心底深处，我明白这场风暴会铸就一个更强大的自己 回忆引入式 1.Looking back, I never imagined that a simple act of courage would redefine my understanding of growth.回首往事，我从未想过一个小小的勇敢之举会重新定义我对成长的理解。 2.It all began on that ordinary Friday afternoon, when a creaking bicycle chain became the soundtrack to my self-discovery.这一切都始于那个寻常的周五下午，当时自行车链条的嘎吱声成了我自我发现的背景音乐。 矛盾冲突式 Caught between societal expectations and my own aspirations, I realized growth often begins with breaking free from invisible chains.身处社会期望与个人抱负的夹缝中，我领悟到成长往往始于挣脱无形的枷锁。 描述成长的起点 1.Once I was a shy and timid boy/girl, lacking in confidence and afraid of challenges.曾经我是一个害羞且胆小的男孩/女孩，缺乏自信并且害怕挑战。 2.At the beginning, I was at a loss when facing new situations and had no idea how to handle them.起初，面对新情况时我不知所措，不知道该如何应对。 （二）过渡 反思转折 1. At that critical moment, a voice inside me whispered: 'True growth lies not in avoiding falls, but in rising stronger each time.在那个决定性时刻，心底有个声音轻轻响起："真正的成长不在于避免跌倒，而在于每次都能以更强大的姿态站起。 2. As the storm raged outside, a quiet realization dawned on me—perseverance was the bridge between my fears and potential.当暴风雨在外肆虐时，我内心却浮现一片澄明——原来坚韧才是横跨恐惧与潜能之间的桥梁。 3.Despite numerous difficulties, I told myself to be strong and not give up.尽管困难重重，我告诉自己要坚强，不要放弃。 4.It was through the setbacks that I learned the importance of perseverance and patience.正是在挫折中我学会了坚持和耐心的重要性。 5. Gradually, I realized that every experience, good or bad, was a valuable lesson for my growth.逐渐地，我意识到每一次经历，无论好坏，对我的成长来说都是宝贵的一课。 6.Through this experience, I became more mature and self - aware.通过这次经历，我变得更加成熟和有自我意识。 行动决心 1. With trembling hands and a racing heart, I made a choice that would forever alter my path...双手颤抖，心跳如雷，我做出了一个将永远改变人生轨迹的决定。 2.Summoning every ounce of courage, I stepped forward, knowing this decision would either break me or make me.我倾尽勇气迈出那一步，心知这个抉择要么将我击垮，要么使我重生。 情感催化 1.Tears blurred my vision, yet through them I saw clearly—this pain was the price of transformation.泪眼朦胧间，我却看清了——这份痛楚，正是蜕变的代价。 2.Her words struck me like lightning, igniting a fire of determination I never knew existed.她的话语如惊雷贯耳，点燃了我心中从未察觉的决意之火。 （三）结尾升华 哲理感悟 1.It dawned on Aram that one should stick to his/her dream no matter what happens.亚兰明白了：一个人应该坚持他/她的梦想，无论发生什么。 2.Growth is not about perfection, but about embracing imperfections as stepping stones to wisdom.成长的真谛不在于完美无缺，而在于将瑕疵化作通往智慧的垫脚石。 3.Through this journey, I learned that the strongest trees grow from surviving the fiercest storms.这一路让我明白，最坚韧的树木，往往诞生于最猛烈的风雨洗礼。 4.It was Mom who taught me we should never take for granted the very things that most deserve our gratitude.是妈妈教育我，我们永远不应该把最值得我们感激的事情视为理所当然。 5.Through our lives，we can gain a lot and lose so much.But being honest should always be with us，as honesty is always regarded as a virtue.在我们的生活中，我们可以获得很多，也可以失去很多。但诚实应该永远与我们同在，因为诚实总是被视为一种美德。 未来展望 1.As I rode home that day, the creaking bicycle chain no longer embarrassed me—it became a symphony celebrating my newfound courage.那日归途，吱呀作响的自行车链条不再令我难堪——它已化作一曲礼赞勇气的交响乐。 2.With each challenge overcome, I discovered that growth is an endless staircase, and I’m ready to climb higher.每克服一道难关，我便发现成长是座永无止境的阶梯——而我，已准备好攀登更高处。 象征隐喻 1.Like a butterfly emerging from its cocoon, I realized true growth requires both struggle and faith in one’s wings.如破茧之蝶，我终悟得：真正的成长既需要挣扎的勇气，更需对双翼的信念。 2.This experience taught me this: we don’t inherit strength, we cultivate it through every storm we weather.这段经历让我明白：力量并非与生俱来，而是在每一次风雨历练中淬炼而成。 3.Little did I know, this experience would become the cornerstone of my growth."（我未曾意识到，这段经历会成为我成长的基石。 挫折与坚持 1.Every setback is a setup for a comeback, every failure a foundation for future success.每一次挫折都是东山再起的伏笔，每场失败皆为未来成功的基石。 2.Adversity is not a dead end but a detour leading to resilience.逆境并非穷途末路，而是通往坚韧的曲径通幽。 3.Through trials and errors, I finally grasped the essence of perseverance."（经过反复尝试，我终于领悟了坚持的真谛。 4.Setbacks are not stumbling blocks but stepping stones on the path of personal growth, shaping us into stronger and more resilient individuals.挫折不是个人成长道路上的绊脚石，而是垫脚石，它们将我们塑造成为更强大、更有韧性的人。 5. Every failure we encounter during our growth journey engraves a valuable lesson in our hearts, guiding us to make wiser decisions in the future.在成长之旅中我们遇到的每一次失败都在我们心中刻下宝贵的一课，指引我们在未来做出更明智的决定。 自我突破 1. To grow is to shatter the mirrors of self-doubt and see reflections of possibility instead.成长，就是打破自我怀疑的镜子，在碎片中照见无限可能。 2. Growth begins where comfort zones end, in the uncharted territories of courage.成长始于舒适区的尽头，在那勇气的未征之地。 成长与自我提升 1. True growth is measured not by heights reached, but by depths of character forged in the climb.真正的成长，不在于登顶的高度，而在于攀登途中淬炼出的生命厚度。 2. We grow not by adding years to life, but by adding life to years through meaningful struggles.我们的成长，不在于为生命增添岁月，而在于通过有意义的奋斗为岁月注入生命。 3. Personal growth is a continuous process of self - discovery and self - improvement, where we constantly strive to break our limits and reach for new heights.个人成长是一个自我发现和自我提升的持续过程，在这个过程中我们不断努力突破自身极限，追求新的高度。 4. The pursuit of knowledge and the cultivation of good qualities are the driving forces behind our personal growth, enabling us to become better versions of ourselves.对知识的追求和良好品质的培养是我们个人成长背后的驱动力，使我们成为更好的自己。 5.It is through various life experiences that we learn, grow, and find our true selves, thus making personal growth an extraordinary adventure.正是通过各种各样的生活经历，我们学习、成长并找到真正的自我，从而使个人成长成为一场非凡的冒险。 6.It’s never too late to learn.Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.活到老，学到老。每个人都有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。 成长与性格塑造 1. Personal growth molds our character, like a sculptor shaping clay, making us more confident, kind, and determined as we face the challenges of life.个人成长塑造我们的性格，就像雕塑家塑造黏土一样，当我们面对生活挑战时，让我们变得更自信、善良和有决心。 2.As we grow, our experiences temper our personalities, turning us into individuals with unique charm and strength that stem from the process of personal development.在成长过程中，我们的经历磨炼我们的个性，把我们变成在个人发展过程中具有独特魅力和力量的个体。 3.Actually，every individual possesses talent.Be brave when you find it and also make efforts.You can create miracles in the end.事实上，每个人都有天赋，发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹。 追逐梦想而成长 1.It’s never too late to go for your dream.As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it，you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。 2.As long as we dare to dream and don’t let difficulties get in our way，anything is possible. 只要我们敢于梦想，不被困难所阻挡，一切皆有可能。 三、练习 1.(2023·新课标Ⅰ & Ⅱ) When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing.My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did. So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail? His reply: “Because I love your stories. If you’re willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try. I chose Paul Revere’s horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith(银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horse’s mouth.Not a brilliant idea, but funny; and unlikely to be anyone else’s choice. What did the horse think，as he sped through the night? Did he get tired? Have doubts? Did he want to quit? I sympathized immediately. I got tired.I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere’s horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half-dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them. When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said, “Great. Now, write it again.” I wrote it again, and again and again.When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn’t win, I wouldn’t care. 注意：续写词数应为150个左右。 A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news.___________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation._______________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I won first place！So overwhelmed with excitement and disbelief was I that my heart was pounding quickly. Finally came the big day! When my name was announced, I walked onto the stage against wild cheers and thunderous applause. Feeling extremely excited and proud, I accepted the prize, a symbol and recognition of my past perseverance and hard work. Thinking about this, I shed tears of gratitude, as there was one special person who meant a lot to me. I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation. “Congratulations! I knew you would win,” he said，hugging me tightly. “Thank you. I wouldn’t be what I am today without your encouragement.” A sense of gratitude welled up in the bottom of my heart. Patting my shoulder, he smiled, “It is your efforts that count most.” From then on, I began to bury myself in English writing. With my teacher’s inspiration, I determined to keep on challenging myself and embrace a better me. 2.(2023·山东临沂·统考一模） Palm trees seemed to speed by the car window. Eight-year-old Katrina began to get nervous, the way she always did in new surroundings. She felt a thin shine of sweat above her lip in spite of the car’s cool air. “The aquarium won’t be crowded, I bet, and people are gonna notice me. I hate wearing this prosthesis leg (假肢).” She felt tears pinprick behind her eyes. “Not being normal is the worst.” Entering the Clearwater Marine Aquarium, around a comer of a tank, she noticed an animal that looked unusual. “Is that a dolphin with stump (假肢) instead of a tail?” she asked an aquarium staff. He nodded. “Yes, that’s Winter. She’s a very special dolphin.” “What happened to her?” “This girl dolphin was found off the coast of Florida, caught in a crab trap. The ropes from the trap cut off the blood circulation to her tail. So she lost her tail,” Katrina caught her breath. “She’s just like me. She’s just like me.” “But she struggled to survive. Now she wears a prosthetic tail part of the day to help her swim like a dolphin’s supposed to swim.” the staff continued, “Every day, Winter shows us anything is possible if we believe.” Katrina felt her heart string was touched. She waved at Winter. Looking at Katrina, Winter raised her flipper (鳍), came to her and lifted her head. “She’s swimming right into my arms,” Katrina said tearfully. They made eye contact. She seemed to be speaking to Katrina: We’re the same. Back home, all Katrina talked about was Winter. For two weeks, she cried and begged her mother to take her back to Clearwater. Unfortunately, another blow hit Katrina. She fell on the hardwood floor at home and broke her other leg. Katrina was in constant leg nerve pain. After a through examination, the doctor explained bad news that she would need another surgery on her leg. Years of a living hell came back to her. She started fearing surgery again and refused to take any. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Katrina’s mom decided to take her back to Clearwater. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Finally came the day when Katrina was in the hospital again. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 Katrina’s mom decided to take her back to Clearwater. On arriving at Clearwater, Katrina couldn’t wait to see Winter, the lovely dolphin that comforted her and boosted her mood. As Katrina’s mother pushed the wheelchair to Winter, she raised her flipper, came to her and lifted her head. Katrina couldn’t hold back her excitement. Looking at the girl, Winter seemed to say “Go and take the surgery.” Katrina absolutely knew what that caring eyes were conveying, so she decided to keep a more optimistic state of mind. Finally came the day when Katrina was in the hospital again. Though feeling nervous and afraid of the pain the surgery might bring, Katrina would face it bravely. The operation was a success. Her mother took her to Clearwater the day she was discharged from hospital. Inspired by Winter’s swimming like a normal dolphin, Katrina practiced hard to walk. Her confidence has been improved as she gradually recovered. Katrina has no idea what the future holds but she will do anything to have a better look at this wonderful world. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$