Unit 1 Teenage Life Reading for Writing 课件-2024-2025学年高中英语人教版（2019）必修第一册

Write a letter of advice Reading for Writing Teenage Life www.515ppt.com 1 Learning Objectives In this class, you are expected to 1. read a letter of advice and gather information; 2. analyze the letter’s organization and language features; 3. use what you have learnt to write a letter of advice. www.515ppt.com 2 3 feel lonely Generation gap Poppy love Too shy to talk What are your life challenges or problem? Activity 1:Read the letter and gather information. www.515ppt.com 4 I know what the problem is. I understand how you feel. This is my advice and reason(s). I think my advice will help. Activity 2: Analyze its organization and language features. Facing these problems, how will you seek for help? 1 communicating face to face with the person concerned 2 turning to friends for help 3 asking for advice on social media 4 writing a letter to a professional adviser 5 ringing help hotlines ... Step1 Lead-in My parents won’t listen when I tell them things. I guess it’s because they’re adults and can’t understand me. Do you have any suggestions? I always feel lonely after school because my parents work in another city. What can I do? There is a girl I like in my class, but I’m too shy to talk to her. Please help me! My friend, Chen Lei, plays computer games too often and spends too much time online. I’m very worried about him. What should I do? Eric, 15, Chicago Min Ho, 15, Seoul Xu Ting, 14, Hangzhou a Worried Friend 7 Mark the body parts of the letter that match the following points. A. I know what the problem is. B. I understand how you feel. C. This is my advice and reason. D. I think my advice will help. Step2 Reading A. I know what the problem is B. I understand how you feel. D. I think my advice will help C. This is my advice and reason. 1) behaviour n.行为；行为方式；举止 behave vi. vt. 表现; 举止得体; 作出反应 e.g. good/bad behaviour 良好 / 恶劣行为 Make sure that good behaviour is rewarded.确保懿行得到嘉奖。 They behaved very badly towards their guests. 他们对客人们很不礼貌。 He behaved like a true gentleman. 他的行为像个真正的绅士。 She doesn’t know how to behave in public. 她在公共场合举止无措。 I want you to behave yourselves while I’m away. 我不在家时你们要乖乖的。 Step3 Language Points 9 2) It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. generation n. 一代人，同代人，同辈人；一代，一辈 e.g. the younger/older generation 年轻的一代；老一辈 My generation have grown up without the experience of a world war. 我这一代人在成长过程中没有经历过世界大战。 My family have lived in this house for generations. 我家祖祖辈辈都住在这房子里。 Step3 Language Points 10 10 September 2018 Dear Worried Friend, You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online. Date Greeting Body I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. Body A. I know what the problem is. B. I understand how you feel. C. This is my advice and reason(s). D. I think my advice will help. More expressions for a letter of advice: 开头:表明写信目的,表达理解来信人的感受 。 第二部分:提出建议,说明建议的理由和对解决问题的期望。 ① Knowing that you have trouble in… I am anxious for you. It’s my great pleasure to give you some suggestions , which will… ② After reading your letter, I am sorry to know that...however, the situation will be better if you could take my advice. Here are a few suggestions for you. ①I think it would be a good idea if you ...because… ②I would like to recommend that...since… 14 ③If I were you, I would... ④First/To begin with, it is important to...because…, What’s more/ In addition, it also helps to... Last but not least, why not... ①In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful. ②Finally, I hope that my suggestions would be beneficial to you. ④Best wishes. Looking forward to your reply/hearing from you. 结尾部分:希望建议得到采纳并祝愿,或盼望回复。 15 Choose one of the teenagers and discuss his/her problem. List possible suggestions and reasons. Name Suggestions Reasons Eric • Try listening to your parents. • Invite them out for something to eat. • Maybe they aren’t listening to you because you don’t listen to them. • This will give you a chance to communicate with them peacefully. Xu Ting • Join a volunteer group. • Connect with your parents online. • This will give you a chance to be around other people, and help you realise that other people have problems, too. • Just because they are far away, it doesn’t mean that you can’t talk to them. Min Ho • Ask a mutual(共同的） friend to introduce you to her. • Find chances to get together in groups where she is a group member. • Your friend will be able to help you break the ice with her and provide encouragement to you. • If you are in a group, you can communicate with her relaxedly. 16 第一步：审题 养成重视审题的习惯。书面表达是半封闭性的写作，审题十分重要。现以作业为例，谈谈如何审题： 思考的问题 样题分析 第几人称？（person） 文章的体裁是什么？ 要写的文章主题是什么 (topic) 怎样安排信息点的顺序？ (order) 动作是什么时候发生的？(时态) (when) 第一人称 书信 对新的学习阶段给出建议 说理的逻辑性 一般现在时 第二步：构思---建议信结构及内容要点 三段式： 第一段： 点明主题：表明写作意图， （有时要简单介绍自己）。 第二段： 陈述事实，提出建议，给出理由 （是什么，为什么，怎么样） 第三段： 总结全文，表明希望 草稿 修改 誊写 审题 First/First of all ，why not...？If you do this，you can…. Secondly/What's more, you should / had better do... It is also helpful/useful to do..., which will … I think it could be more beneficial if you could ... Thirdly/ In addition/Besides, it would be a good idea if.... By doing this,.... As far as I'm concerned/Last but not least, doing ... is a better choice. When it comes to this problem, I suggest that you should.... If I were you (in your situation) / in your shoes, I would... Body：介绍详情、提出建议和理由根据问题给出建议 （3个左右为宜） Ending：提出希望采纳建议+感谢+盼望回复（1+2或1+3） I hope you will find these ideas useful. 我希望你会发现这些办法有用。 I believe/am sure that if you follow my advice，you’ll… . 我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会……。 I would be grateful if you could consider my advice. 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