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高考续写冲刺—救援脱困类 一、高考链接 2020年浙江高考的拍摄北极熊遇险; 2018年的父子骑马迷路; 2017年的骑车游玩遇狼脱险。 二、高频情节构思 1.描写环境的恶劣十不安、绝望或恐惧的情绪 2.转机描写-描写听见或看见了什么十情绪描写(希望+努力) 3.脱险描写+情绪描写(感恩+高兴)+主旨升华 三、高频衔接 Part A. 时间衔接 1. 刹那间，我们的皮艇被巨大的钳子托出水面约六英尺。 In a split of second, our kayak was lifted out of the water about six feet by the massive jaws. Part B.情绪衔接 1. 让大家松了一口气的是，他们最终到达了另一边。 To everyone’s relief, they eventually made their way to the other side. Part C.心理描写衔接 我把芬威带回家的梦想就要实现了吗？我的心怦怦直跳，希望父亲能给我一个解释。 Was my dream of bringing Fenway home about to come true? My heart raced with hope and I looked to my father for some kind of explanation. Part D.感官衔接(看到、听到、想到、尝到...) 父亲感受到了我的担忧，同意放过这条蛇，并打电话向当地动物园求助。 My father, sensing my concern, agreed to leave the snake alone and made a call to the local zoo for help. Part E 动作衔接 一靠近我们，他就立刻伸出桨，把我们从水里捞起来，拉到他的皮艇上，向海滩驶去。Upon getting close to us, he immediately stretched out his paddle, pulled us out of water and into his kayak, heading to the beach.(三联动) Part F 地点衔接 Hardly had she arrived there breathlessly when she spotted her anxious parents and Margret. 四、高频动作链 1.我从人行道上抓起它，用尽全身力气将它扔过栅栏，直接砸在德国牧羊犬的脖子上。 Grabbing it from the pavement, I used all my strength to throw it over the fence, hitting the German shepherd directly on the neck. 1. 古德伦想都没想，一把将他拽了出来，拎起他就往港口冲。阿纳尔揉了揉眼睛，挣扎着站了起来，结果失去了平衡，导致两人都踉跄了一下。 Without thinking twice, Gudrun dragged him out, scooped him up and rushed to the harbor. Arnar rubbed his eyes, struggling to stand up and lost his balance, causing both of them to stumble. 3.我双手颤抖，双腿打颤，焦急地催促他们的孩子去医院检查。 Hands shaking and legs trembling, I anxiously rush their child to the hospital for a check-up. 4.我不敢抬头看太远，因为后背根本无法移动，只好跪在地上吹口哨。 I couldn’t look too far up because moving my back was impossible, so I got on my knees and whistled. 5.狗把头转向了本，而本则迅速恢复了平静，翻过了栅栏。 The dog turned its head away from Ben, who swiftly regained his calm and climbed over the fence. 6.一靠近我们，他立刻伸出桨，把我们从水里捞起来，塞进他的皮艇，向海滩驶去。 Upon getting close to us, he immediately stretched out his paddle, pulled us out of water and into his kayak, heading to the beach. 7.她抬起一只脚，想把怒火踩在地上，然后愣住了，因为阿纳尔的线索突然在她脑海中回响：“他总是在我脚下！” 她大叫一声，冲回了自己的房间。 She raised a foot to stamp her fury into the floor, then froze as Arnar's clue suddenly echoed through her mind, “He's always right under me!” With a shout she dashed back to her own room. 8.让他们惊讶的是，她并没有表现出生气，而是露出关切的神情，让他们赶紧把湿衣服换掉，然后紧紧地把他们搂在怀里取暖。 Much to their astonishment, she showed no sign of anger but a concerned look, asking them to change the wet clothes quickly and then wrapping them into her arms tightly to keep them warm. 9.我们往前走着着，欢笑着，感叹着周围大自然的美丽。 We toured, laughed, and marveled at the beauty of nature around us. 5、 对话/情绪/环境描写 对话描写 “池塘的魔法对你们俩都有奇效，"她说，眼睛里流露出真诚的关切。 The pond’s magic has done wonders for both of you,” she said, her eyes showing genuine concern. 情绪描写 1.透过窗户，看着静静躺在沙地上的蛇，我的心怦怦直跳。 My heart was pounding fast as I peered through the window, watching the snake lying still in the sand. 2.直到这时，房间的每个角落都涌动着轻松和温暖，似乎让外面的洪水不再那么可怕。 Until then, the easiness and warmth welled up in every corner of the room, seeming to make the floodwater outside less frightening outside. 3.苍白的脸渐渐变得红润，两个孩子也恢复了状态。大卫意识到自己的举动差点害死了自己和妹妹，后悔的泪水顺着脸颊滚落下来。 Pale faces turning red gradually, the two kids got back in form. David realizing his action almost killed himself and his sister, regretful tears rolled down his cheeks. 4.泪水灼烧着她的脸颊，外面的喧闹声提醒古德伦这不是游戏。 Tears burned her cheeks as the noise outside reminded Gudrun that this was no game. 环境描写 1.当他们驶过小镇，沿着蜿蜒的山路往山上走时，雨越下越大，天色也越来越暗。 As they drove past the town and up the winding road into the hills, the rain intensified, and the sky grew dark 2.太阳升起来了，在林地上投下长长的影子，我们开始了旅程。 The sun was up, casting long shadows on the forest floor as we set off on our journey. 3.探险中途，我们偶然发现了一个令人叹为观止的瀑布，晶莹的水流从岩石上倾泻而下，奏出宁静祥和的旋律。 Midway through our expedition, we stumbled upon a breathtaking waterfall, its glistening waters cascading down the rocks in a quiet and peaceful melody. 4.月亮升起来了，一切看起来不是黑色就是乳白色。起初，我只看到一片黑暗。 The moon was up and everything looked either black or milky. At first all I saw was darkness. 5.随着夜色渐浓，气温下降，伊恩让杰里米离开他，回到他们父母身边，但杰里米仍然没有离开。 As the evening grew darker and the temperature dropped, Ian told Jeremy to leave him and go back to their parents but Jeremy still did not leave. 六、主题升华句 1. 大自然固然美丽，但也可能变幻莫测、残酷无情。但最重要的是，我们要牢记，在最黑暗的时候，隧道尽头总会有一道光，就像埃文斯夫人小屋的灯一样。 Nature, while beautiful, could also be unpredictable and merciless. But most importantly, we bear in mind that in the darkest times, there's always a light at the end of the tunnel, just like Mrs. Evans' cabin light. 2. 但是，正是陌生人的善良和勇敢让艾玛和约翰重新欣赏了生活，并提醒他们，在危机时刻，人类可以闪耀。 But, it was the kindness and bravery of strangers that gave Emma and John a renewed appreciation for life and reminded them that in times of crisis, humanity can shine through. 3. 我抓起相机冲了出去,拍下了这只逃跑的熊的珍贵照片,使这次旅行终生难忘。 Grabbing the camera, I dashed out and snapped valuable pictures of the escaping bear, making the trip unforgettable for the whole life.(2020·浙江高考) 4. 我以前从未度过如此惊险而又危险的假期。我们迷路的经历给我的冒险假期增添了一种特别的味道，这将永远铭刻在我们的脑海中。 Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. Our being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which would be etched/engraved in our mind forever. 5. 我庆幸之余决定珍惜生命,不再冒这样的险。 Feeling fortunate, I made up my mind to cherish life and not to try such adventure again. 6. 就是这次冒险的旅行改变了我,给了我全新的生活 It was the adventurous journey that changed me, giving me an entirely new life. 7. 最后,我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊!事实证明,只要我们保持冷就总有办法摆脱困境。 Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience. It turns out that there's always a way out any difficult situation as long as we stay calm. 8. 正是这次独特的经历让我们明白，无论遇到什么困难（=我们可能会遇到困难），我们都不应该灰心丧气。 It was this unique experience that made understand whatever difficulty we are faced with (= we may face), we shouldn't lose heart The wind was particularly strong that day and the snow hitting our faces felt like needles.” 9.我们三人再次踏上回家的路，一致认为这是一次幸运的逃生。 The three of us made our way home again, agreeing that it was a fortunate escape. 10. 当你遇到困难时，你做了什么并不重要，最重要的是你做出了明智的决定并做好了充分的准备。 It doesn’t matter what you did when you were faced with tough situation , and what matters most is that you made a wise decision and well prepared. 七、高频微场景…… 1.如何找到脱困方法 我记得我在爬行动物书上看到，蛇是生态系统的重要组成部分，我不想对动物造成任何伤害。 I remembered from my reptile book that snakes were an important part of the ecosystem, and I didn’t want to cause any harm to the animal. 2.他们尝试了不同的营救方法。最后，一名工作人员下来用绳子绑住了我的腰，我终于被拖上了直升机。 They tried different rescue techniques. Eventually, one crewmember came down and tied a rope around my waist and I was finally dragged into the helicopter. 3.就在这时，我看到了小路上吃了一半的汉堡，我慌乱中把它掉在了地上。 Just then I caught sight of my half-eaten burger on the path, I had dropped it in panic. 4.突然，旁边的桨吸引了我的目光。我毫不犹豫地抓住桨，举起它，让它张开嘴。 Suddenly, the paddle beside caught my eyes. Without hesitation, I seized the paddle, raised it to keep its mouth open. 5. 有人建议我们清理冰层，但如果没有工具，这将耗费太多时间和精力。最后，我们决定去附近的一个小农场寻求帮助。 Someone suggested that we should clear up the ice, but this would take too much time and energy without tools. Eventually we decided to go to a small farm nearby and ask for help. 2.求助的场景(网络求助) 1.我在自己的 Facebook 上发布了我的情况，希望有人能看到并提供帮助。一些当地朋友甚至陌生人的回复让我应接不暇，他们都非常关心我的安全，并表示愿意提供帮助 I posted my situation onto my Facebook, hoping anyone might read it and help. The responses from a few local friends and even strangers were overwhelming, all of whom were deeply concerned about my safety and offering assistance. 3.从凶猛的动物那脱困 我从震惊中回过神来，焦急地在脑海中搜索着如何帮助本。我应该爬上栅栏帮助本吗？或者我可以做些什么来分散狗的注意力？本有被梅森先生的凶猛的狗攻击的危险。我放下所有东西，在包里翻找着能帮助本的东西。就在这时，我在小路上看到了我吃了一半的汉堡，我慌乱中把它掉在了地上。 Recovering from the shock, I anxiously searched my mind for an idea about how I could assist Ben. Should I climb up the fence and help Ben? Or could I do something to distract the dog? Ben was in danger of being attacked by Mr Mason's ferocious dog. Dropping everything, I searched my bag for something to help Ben. Just then I caught sight of my half-eaten burger on the path, I had dropped it in panic. 4.水中救人 1）可怕的洪水 突然，洪水把门强行冲开了。玛丽震惊、害怕、极度恐惧，她看到洪水涌进了房间，餐桌被冲倒了。她不知道该怎么办，颤抖着向妈妈求助。 All of a sudden, the floodwater forced the door open. Shocked, frightened and extremely scared, Mary saw the floodwaters pouring into the room, leaving the dinner table upside down. She didn’t know what to do, trembling, and turned to her mom for help. 2）洪水中自救 妈妈突然想到，他们必须上楼，因为此时此刻，他们别无选择，只能自救，在救援到来之前，留在原地会有很大危险。爸爸也毫不犹豫地冲上了二楼，还不忘带上装有重要文件和救灾物资的袋子。到了楼上，他们才松了一口气。 An idea occurred to Mom that they had to go upstairs, because they had no choice but to save themselves at that moment，and it would be of great danger to stay in place before rescue came to them. Dad also rushed to the second floor without hesitation, not forgetting to take the bag containing important documents and disaster supplies. Being upstairs, they breathed a sigh of relief. 3).水中救人 1.就在这时，一个陌生人出现在我面前。抱着最后一丝希望，我鼓起全身力气喊 “救命”，但突然一个巨浪打来，淹没了我的呼喊。我呛了一大口咸水，感觉糟透了。幸运的是，我的天使迅速向我靠近，然后用他有力的手臂紧紧地抱住了我。我的基本常识提醒我在坠入黑暗世界之前要保持放松。 Just then a stranger appeared in front of me. With the last hope, I gathered all my strength to cry out “Help” but suddenly a huge wave hit me and drowned my cry. I choked on a big swallow of salty water and felt terrible. Fortunately, my angel was swiftly approaching me and then held me tightly with his strong arm. My basic knowledge reminded me to stay relaxed before I fell into a world of darkness. 2.鲍尔跳入水中。片刻之后，他从沙底弹起，没有受伤！小女孩离他不到 10 英尺远。鲍尔几下就游到了她身边，把她托出水面：半张着嘴，眼睛几乎闭着，没有呼吸。他站起来，把她放在自己的肩膀上，用手拍她的后背。紧张的片刻之后，她开始咳嗽，眼睛也睁开了。鲍尔将女孩抱上岸时，眼中充满了欣慰的泪水。 Bauer jumped into the water. A moment later he was bouncing off the sandy bottom—unhurt! The little girl was less than 10 feet away. Bauer swam to her in a few quick strokes and lifted her out of the water: mouth half open, eyes nearly closed, not breathing. Standing up, he laid her against his shoulder and patted her at the back with his hand. After tense moments, she began coughing and her eyes opened. Tears of relief filled Bauer’s eyes as he carried the girl to the shore. 4.火中救人 经过快速评估，杰伊发现了一个潜在的入口。他下定决心，全神贯注，弓起身体，从破碎的卧室窗户一跃而过。尽管黑暗吞噬了一切，浓烟呛得人喘不过气来，杰伊还是摸索着、大喊着，最后通过追踪两个婴儿微弱的哭声找到了他们。他迅速把他们抱起来，递给外面的辛迪。窒息的他鼓起最后一丝力气，向躺在地上昏迷不醒的孩子父亲走去。 After a quick assessment, Jay identified a potential entrance. Determined and focused, he arched his body, leaping through a shattered bedroom window. Despite the engulfing darkness and choking smoke, Jay fumbled, yelled and finally located the two babies by tracing their faint cries. Quickly, he swept them up and passed them outside to Cindy. Suffocated as he was, he summoned the last bit of his strength, and reached for the father, who was lying unconscious on the floor. 5.电梯救人 1)被困前的绝望及自救 几分钟过去了，没有人来帮忙。空调坏了，电梯里变得非常闷热。我们满头大汗。我们试图再次按响紧急报警器。“救命啊！！！”每过一秒都是痛苦的。我大声尖叫，试图引起别人的注意。一股绝望的情绪涌上心头。我觉得我们永远都不会成功了。在最后的努力中，我试着撞门。接下来的几分钟就像几个小时一样，我们在一片寂静中等待着。 Several minutes passed, but no help came. The air-conditioning had died out, and the lift became really stuffy. We were sweating buckets. We tried to ring the emergency alarm again. Every second that passed was painful “Help!!!” I screamed at the top of my lungs, trying to get someone's attention. A wave of despair washed over me. I felt like we would never make it. In one last effort, I tried banging on the doors. The next few minutes felt like hours as we waited in complete silence. 2)获救过程 砰 当听到电梯门另一侧传来消防员的声音时，我的希望破灭了。救援终于来了！勇敢的消防员用他们的工具将门撞开。我感觉像是卸下了一百多斤的重担，林女士感谢上苍，有人来救我们了。门终于打开了，这一切都结束了，我松了一口气。 Bang! My hopes were lifted when heard the firefighters on the other side of the lift door. Help was finally here! The brave firefighters hit the doors open using their tools. It felt like a hundred pound weight was lifted off me, and Mrs Lim thanked the heavens that someone had come to our rescue. I made a sigh of relief when the doors were finally opened and all this drama was over. 5.雪崩中救人 事不宜迟，消防官兵开始了救援工作。“我们先用铁锹将积雪挖开，再用人力将车辆从雪中推出。”齐跃华回忆道。“最厚的积雪有近一米。17时12分，被困人员和车辆被成功转移到安全地带，最终被埋在雪中的3辆车共8人被救出。当时，一些消防队员已经被冻成了 “冰人”。 Without any delay, the firefighters started their rescue effort. “We first dug up the snow with shovels, and then pushed the vehicles out of the snow with manpower,” Qi Yuehua recalled. “The thickest snow accumulation was nearly one meter. At 17:12, the trapped people and vehicles were successfully moved to a safe place, and a total of 8 people in 3 cars buried in the snow were eventually rescued. Some of the firefighters had been frozen into “icemen” by then. 6.海啸中逃生 父亲大声叫我们跑回旅馆。他抓住我的手，拉着我一起跑。我们刚到酒店门口，就听到身后传来一阵轰鸣声。父亲迅速把我们推向楼梯。恐惧笼罩着我们，当我们爬到一楼时，听到了哗哗的水声和玻璃破碎的声音。父亲大声叫我们继续爬楼。 My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel. He grabbed my hand and pulled me with him. As we reached the hotel gate, we heard a roaring sound behind us. Quickly, my father pushed us towards the stairs. Fear gripped us and we reached the first floor when we heard the roar of rushing water and glass breaking. My father yelled at us to keep climbing. 7.被困车中获救 被困车中 泥水不断涌入车内，并迅速上升。艾玛意识到，他们必须在水位变得太危险之前离开。就在这时，她发现约翰的脚被卡住了，动弹不得。她拼命想挣脱他，但水压太大了。她拼命挣脱他，但徒劳无功。他们拼命地拼命喊叫，同时按住汽车喇叭。水不断上涨，眼看就要淹没汽车。他们看到的一切让他们非常害怕。即使因为大声喊叫而没有力气，他们仍然坚持着。 Muddy water was pouring into the car, rising quickly. Emma realized they had to get out before the water level became too dangerous. It was then that she noticed John's foot was caught and he couldn't move. She tried desperately to free him, but the water pressure was too great. She tried her best to free him, but in vain. They desperately tried to shout as hard as they could, while holding down the car horn. The water kept rising and was about to drown the car. What they saw made them very scared. Even though they had no strength because of the loud shouting, they still held on. 救援被困车辆 1.他们也遇到了和我们一样的麻烦，但他们冒着极大的风险把车停在了我们后面。司机们纷纷下车，表示愿意帮助我们摆脱困境。他们围着我们的车走来走去，试图找到一个合适的方法来解救我们的车。最后，他们决定把车抬起来。我们等了一会儿，直到有足够的人聚集起来抬起我的车。 They had the same trouble as we had, but they took great risks to stop their cars behind us. The drivers got out of their cars, offering to help us get out of trouble. They walked around our car, trying to find a proper way to rescue it. At last, they decided to free the car by lifting it. We waited a while until enough men gathered to lift my car. 2. 附近的居民迈克和他的兄弟大卫听到了哭声。当他们知道发生了什么后，毫不犹豫地跳入水中，向汽车游去。经过几次努力，他们终于获救了。惊魂未定的艾玛紧紧地拥抱了约翰，并向他们的救命恩人表示感谢。 Nearby residents, Mike and his brother David, heard cries. Without hesitation, when they knew what had happened , they dived in, and swam towards the car. After several attempts, they were rescued. Shaken and relieved, Emma hugged John tightly and thanked their rescuers. 8.救被困保险箱的孩子  此时，我们已经做好了用武力打开保险箱的充分准备，首先是钻孔。我们教男孩在钻孔时用手捂住耳朵，只有在摇动保险箱时才把手拿开。我们先在背面钻了一个洞。就在我们开始切第一刀时，我的工友输入了正确的密码。我们已经努力了三个小时，突然间，这个小男孩站在我面前，揉着眼睛。  We were fully prepared at this point to open the safe by force, starting with a drill. We taught the boy to put his hands over his ears while we were drilling and to take them off only when we shook the safe. We made a hole in the back first. Then, just as we started to make the first cut, my workmate typed in the correct code. We had been trying for three hours and now all of a sudden this little boy was standing in front of me, rubbing his eyes. 9.救人英雄的话语 当被问及当消防员是否太辛苦、太冒险时，齐晓东笑了笑。“我们完成了任务，被救人员安然无恙，我很满意。”他回答道。“其实，那天我们只想着尽快让被困人员脱离危险。我们的消防员一直在刻苦训练，时刻做好充分准备，确保人民群众的生命财产安全。 When asked if it was too hard and too risky to be firefighters, Qi smiled. “I am very satisfied that we completed the task and the rescued people were safe and sound,” he replied. “Actually, we only thought about getting the trapped people out of danger as soon as possible that day. Our firefighters have been training very hard and are always well prepared to ensure the safety of people’s lives and property.. 11.户外救人 天气恶劣 突然，天气急转直下。乌云密布，大雨倾盆。令人舒适的森林之声很快变成了可怕的风雷交响曲。原本畅通无阻的山路变得泥泞不堪，根本无法继续前行。 Suddenly, the weather took an abrupt turn. Dark clouds shrouded the sky, and a heavy downpour ensued. The comforting forest sounds quickly turned into a terrifying symphony of thunder and wind. The trail that was once so clear became a muddy mess, making it impossible to continue. 户外被困的恐惧 我们试图查看地图，但为时已晚，我们在荒野中迷失了方向。几个小时过去了，我们试图寻找小路的努力被证明是徒劳的。寒冷悄然而至，绝望开始袭来。 We tried to consult our map, but it was too late; we were lost in the wildness. Hours passed, and our attempts to find the trail proved to be in vain. With the cold creeping in, despair started to set in. 户外自救 在森林里迷路对我来说似乎是一场悲剧。我害怕一个人在森林里过夜，不知道会出什么问题，因为我从未有过这样的经历。与此同时，这也让我开始发散思维。我开始回想向朋友们发出信号的各种方法。最后，我决定捡树叶生信号火，点燃树叶让朋友们看到火光。虽然树叶是湿的，但我还是成功地点燃了树叶。 Being lost in the forest seemed like a tragedy to me. I was afraid of spending the night alone in the forest, wondering what would have gone wrong as I had never had such kind of experience. At the same time, it made me think outside the box. I started to recall various ways of making a signal to my friends. In the end, I decided to build a signal fire by collecting leaves and lighting them up for my friends to see the fire. Although they were wet, I managed to light the leaves. 户外获救 1.当我坐下来围着火堆取暖时，听到远处传来一些声音。我迅速环顾四周，但什么也没看到。随着声音越来越近，我意识到那是我的朋友们。我高兴得跳了起来，眼泪夺眶而出，因为我知道我安全了。他们喊着我的名字，我大声回答，心里知道我得救了。 While sitting down and warming myself around the fire, 1 heard some distant noise. I quickly looked around, but couldn’t see anything. As the sounds got closer, I realized that those were my friends. I jumped with a lot of joy as tears filled my eyes because I knew I was safe. They shouted my name, and I replied very loudly, knowing in my mind that l was saved. 2.就在我们准备放弃的时候，远处闪过一道微弱的光。好奇心战胜了恐惧，我们决定跟着它走。当我们走近时，看到了一间小木屋，窗户上闪烁着灯光。敲开门后，一位名叫埃文斯夫人的老妇人用热情的微笑欢迎了我们。她还为我们提供了过夜的住所，第二天一早，她又带领我们回到了主路。 Just when we were about to give up, a faint light flickered in the distance. Curiosity overpowered our fear, and we decided to follow it. As we drew closer, we saw a small log cabin, lights shining from its windows. Knocking on the door, an elderly woman, Mrs. Evans, welcomed us with a warm smile. She also offered us shelter for the night, and the next morning, guided us back to the main trail. 3.日出时分，杰里米决定帮助朋友的唯一办法就是背他下山。于是，他们开始长途跋涉返回营地。有时，杰里米背着伊恩。有时他把伊恩抱在怀里。终于，在漫长而疲惫的四个小时后，他们遇到了父母，父母看到他们后松了一口气。 At sunrise, Jeremy decided that the only way to help his friend was to carry him down the mountain. So, they started the long climb back to the campsite. Sometimes Jeremy carried Ian on his back. Sometimes he carried him in his arms. Finally, after four long and tiring hours, they came across their parents, who were relieved to see them. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$