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WELCOME UNIT
UNIT 8 GREEN LIVING
写作园地 应用文写作——
调查报告
一般来说,写调查报告主要包括以下4个部分:
1.简介——调查报告具有针对性,因此在首段就应明确报告的主题和目的;
2.方法——调查报告具有客观性,因此客观的数据来源必不可少;
3.结果——调查报告具有写实性,因此要描述调查结果;
4.总结——总结全文的主要观点,进一步深化主题。
写作园地 应用文写作——调查报告
写调查报告的时候,我们应该注意的是:
1.语言应简明扼要,语气和态度保持客观;
2.结论应与正文照应,归纳、总结要有理可依;
3.提出建议时,应考虑调查报告与读者之间的关系及与建议接收部门的关系,用词方面要符合交际原则。
写作园地 应用文写作——调查报告
1.开头常用句式
①A survey was carried out by an evening post in our city among the citizens on how they spent their national holidays.
我市的一家晚报对国庆长假期间市民的休闲方式进行了一项调查。
②The council conducted a survey of the uses to which farm buildings are put.
该委员会对农场建筑的用途进行了一个调查。
③A recent survey showed 75% of those questioned were in favour of the plan.
最近的民意调查显示,有75%的调查对象支持这项计划。
写作园地 应用文写作——调查报告
2.主体段落常用句式
①It is suggested that we students (should) not overuse our eyes and it's of great help to our eye health to participate in more outdoor activities.
人们建议我们学生不应过度用眼,多参与课外活动对我们的眼睛健康有帮助。
②The number of people who are opposed to this idea is over 5,000.
反对该观点的人超过5,000。
③95% of patients surveyed were satisfied with the public health service.
被调查的95%的病人对公共卫生医疗服务感到满意。
写作园地 应用文写作——调查报告
④The survey showed that Britain's trees are in good health.
调查显示英国的树木状况良好。
⑤According to the survey, sports enjoy the highest popularity among the four sorts of articles involved, indicating a growing trend of doing exercise on campus.
调查显示,在四类相关文章中,体育运动的受欢迎程度最高,这表明在校园里进行体育锻炼的趋势日益明显。
⑥A very small number of students, about 8% of them, regard reading as the most attractive.
极少数的学生,大约8%,认为阅读是最吸引人的。
写作园地 应用文写作——调查报告
3.结尾常用句式
①From the result of the survey we can conclude that English is so important in our society that everyone should try to learn it well.
从调查结果我们可以得出结论:英语在社会中如此重要以至于每个人都应该学好。
②Results suggest that diet is very important.
研究结果显示膳食十分重要。
③The house was reported as being in excellent condition.
报告说明这房子的状况极佳。
写作园地 应用文写作——调查报告
昨天,你们学校对800名中学生的未来理想职业进行了一次调查,请根据以下表格,写一篇调查报告。
职业 百分比 原因
老师或医生 40% 能帮助人
演员或歌手 20% 能出名,受人崇拜
做生意 30% 能挣大钱
你想从事什么职业及原因
写作园地 应用文写作——调查报告
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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写作园地 应用文写作——调查报告
[精彩范文]
Yesterday our school did a survey about the future career among 800 middle school students. According to the result, 40% of them want to be teachers or doctors, because they think teachers and doctors can help people. 20% of them want to be stars like actors and singers who they think will be admired by others. 30% of them want to do business by themselves, for they think they can make much money.
As for me, I want to be an athlete. I am one of the members of our school's basketball team. I am good at it and I hope one day I can get a chance to take part in the Olympic Games.
This indicates that everyone chooses a career for different reasons.
写作园地 应用文写作——调查报告
总评 本篇范文点明调查的时间和对象,指出调查结果和原因,表达自己的想法,上下文衔接自然。审题构思严谨,核心词汇周全,句式丰富。
写作园地 应用文写作——调查报告
[亮点呈现]
(1)be admired by, as for, get a chance等短语的使用凸显作者地道的表达。
(2)20% of them want to be stars like actors and singers who they think will be admired by others. 使用了who引导的定语从句,使句子结构灵活多变。
(3)30% of them want to do business by themselves, for they think they can make much money.使用了for引导的原因状语从句,展现了作者扎实的语言运用能力。
写作园地 应用文写作——调查报告
在社会经济快速、高度发展的今天,人们的物质生活丰富多彩,但是精神生活却存在着很多问题,也由此产生了人们对“幸福感”的不同看法。假设上周末你校对2,000名学生就“幸福感”的看法进行了调查。请根据以下数据写一篇文章。
比例 “幸福感”的来源
60% 从父母或亲友的爱、从温暖的家庭生活中感受到幸福
20% 从助人、捐赠、义卖中感受到幸福
10% 从友情中感受到幸福
10% 异于上述情况,从不同角度讲述自己的幸福感
结论 调查情况反映出学生们是热爱生活的,但是同时也反映了他们的生活经历有限、视野不够开阔
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内容要点:
1.调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象;
2.数据的解读;
3.总体评价。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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写作园地 应用文写作——调查报告
[精彩范文]
Last weekend, a survey about the feeling of happiness was carried out among the 2,000 students of our school.
Sixty percent of the students feel happy with the love from their parents and relatives as well as from the warmth of families. Twenty percent think they are happy to help others, donate something to people in need or take part in a voluntary selling. Among ten percent of them think friendship gives them much delight. Apart from the above, the rest of the students describe their happiness from different aspects.
Based on the statistics, a conclusion can be drawn that the students have deep love for life, but their life experience is limited, so their horizons need to be broadened.
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