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Unit8 Green Living写作精讲
A Survey Report(调查报告写作)
Unit 8 Green Living
写作任务:A Survey Report(调查报告写作)
审题
1
话题:围绕“绿色生活”主题,针对特定群体(如学生、社区居民)的环保意识、行为习惯
或某一环保问题(如垃圾分类、节约用水、低碳出行等)进行调查,并撰写调查报告。
2体裁:应用文一一调查报告(非纯粹议论文或说明文,需包含调查目的、方法、数据结果
及分析建议)
3人称:以第三人称为主(the survey shows/the respondents believe),适当使用第
一人称we(表示调查小组)
4
时态:
>介绍调查背景、方法:一般过去时(conducted,distributed)
,描述数据结果:一般现在时(shows,accounts for)
>提出建议:一般现在时/一般将来时(should,wil)
5
字数要求:高考标准100-130词
6
核心要点:
>调查目的与对象
>调查方法与过程(问卷、访谈等)
>主要调查结果(用数据、比例说明)
,分析结果并给出合理建议或结论
二、
文章结构
1开头段:简要说明调查的背景、目的、时间、对象及方法(如:而lean
about students'green living habits,a survey was conducted among
100 students last week.)
2主体段:呈现调查结果,可按照不同选项或方面分类描述(如:According to
the survey,60%of the respondents always sort their garbage,while
25%only do it occasionally.),并适当分析原因或对比。
3
结尾段:总结调查发现,提出针对性建议或呼吁行动(如:Based on the
results,it is suggested that more campaigns be launched to raise
environmental awareness.)
三、
核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
survey
n.调查
questionnaire
n.问卷
respondent
n.受访者
data
n.数据
percentage
n.百分比
majority
n.大多数
minority
n.少数
account for
占比
category
n.类别
represent
v.代表
2.常用短语
短语
释义
conduct a survey
开展调查
短语
释义
distrib ute q uestionnaires
分发问卷
collect/analyze data
收集/分析数据
according to the survey
根据调查
as can be seen from the chart/data
从图表/数据可以看出
account for ...
占百分比
in contrast
相比之下
it is worth noting that...
值得注意的是…
3.基础造句
1
A survey was carried out last week among 100 senior high students to find
out their daily green behaviors.
上周对100名高中生进行了一项调查,以了解他们日常的绿色行为。
2 According to the survey,60%of the respondents always turn off lights when
leaving the room.
调查显示,60%的受访者离开房间时总是关灯。
The results show that only 30%of the students bring reusable bags for
shopping.
结果表明,只有30%的学生购物时自带环保袋。
4In order to improve the situation,the school should organize more
environmental education activities.
为了改善现状,学校应组织更多环保教育活动。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通many→a large number of/a significant proportion of
普通
showreveal indicate demonstrate
普通
so-therefore consequently as a result
普通
importantvital essential of great significance
加分句型
1A survey conducted among 150 students reveals that nearly half of them
seldom use public transport.
在一项对150名学生进行的调查中,近一半学生很少使用公共交通。(过去分词短语作定语)
2 It can be clearly seen from the data that the majority of the respondents are in
favor of green commuting.
从数据中可清楚看出,大多数受访者支持绿色出行。(主语从句+被动)
sWhat is worth mentioning is that the percentage of students who bring their
own water bottles has increased by 20%.
值得一提的是,自带水瓶的学生比例上升了20%。(主语从句+定语从句)
4Only when everyone takes action can we truly achieve a green lifestyle.
只有当每个人都采取行动时,我们于能真正实现绿色生活方式。(倒装句)
五、写作模板(100-130词)
Title:A Survey Report on Green Living Habits among Senior High Students
Introduction:A survey was conducted last week among 100 students in our
school to learn about their daily green living habits.The data were collected
through questionnaires.
Main Body:According to the survey,70%of the respondents always sort their
garbage,which shows a strong awareness of waste management.However,only
35%of them choose to walk or bike for short distances.When it comes to saving
electricity,60%of the students remember to turn off lights and electronics when
not in use.In contrast,the use of plastic bags remains a problem-nearly 40%still
use them regularly.
Conclusion:The survey indicates that while students have some positive habits,
there is still room for improvement in reducing plastic use and adopting low-
carbon travel.It is strongly recommended that the school carry out more themed
activities and reward green behaviors.
六、作文仿军(120词左右)
仿写题目:你所在的班级就“家庭节水习惯”进行了一次调查,请根据以下数据写一
篇调查报告。数据:50个家庭中,80%用淘米水浇花,65%洗澡时关水打肥皂,但
有55%未安装节水龙头。
A Survey Report on Family Water-Saving Habits
A survey was conducted last week among 50 families in our community to learn
about their water-saving practices in daily life.The information was gathered
through online questionnaires.
The results show some encouraging habits:80%of the families use rice-washing
water to water plants,and 65%turn off the shower while applying soap.However,
it is worth noting that 55%of the families have not installed water-saving taps,
which means much water is still wasted in the kitchen and bathroom.
In conclusion,although many families have adopted good water-saving habits,
more efforts are needed in using efficient devices.It is suggested that the
government provide subsidies for water-saving equipment and that families learn
more about water conservation.
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议同学减少屏幕时间(基于调查报告)
Dear Mike,
I've read a survey report which shows that many students have poor eyesight due
to too much screen time.I'm writing to offer some suggestions.
First of all,it is a good idea to take a 20-second break every 30 minutes when
using digital devices,because it can relax your eyes and reduce strain.Besides,
you should spend more time outdoors doing sports,which can help protect your
eyesight.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to limit your daily screen time to
two hours,as it is beneficial to both your eyes and sleep.
I hope my advice will be of some help.I'm sure you'll have healthy eyes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
范文二:建议同学健康饮食(基于调查报告)
Dear Lucy,
I've read a survey report which indicates that many students frequently eat junk
food,leading to health problems.Here are my suggestions.
First of all,it is a good idea to replace chips and soda with fruits and milk,because
they provide essential nutrients and energy.Besides,you should have three
balanced meals every day,which can keep your body strong.Last but not least,I
strongly advise you to drink enough water instead of sugary drinks,as it is
beneficial to your skin and metabolism.
I hope my advice will help you form healthy habits.I'm looking forward to seeing
you in good shape.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua