内容正文:
写作高效提升
写作范例
重点词汇
(1)apply for (2)a parttime job
(3)summer holiday (4)a challenge to sb.
(5)whats more / besides / moreover
(6)gain experience (7)mistake
(8)turn to sb. for help
完成句子
(1)doing a parttime job
(2)adapt to the development and changes
(3)help me correct
句式升级
(4)Besides,doing a parttime job makes me gain
much experience so that I will better adapt to
the development and changes of the society.
(5)I hope you can help me correct my mistakes of
the words and format which / that are attached
to the materials.
写作练笔
One possible version:
Dear Henry,
Im writing to ask you to do me a favor. We
are to start “Green Campus Campaign”to inspire
students to be environmentally conscious at school.
Could you give us some advice on our current plan
at your convenience?
We plan to play a 30 minutes video first,
which is about how to save water,paper,cans and
electricity at school. Students will surely be im
pressed by the striking figures and helpful tips.
Then our science teacher will give a live show in
the lab on what actually happens to those recycla
ble materials. This will be really popular.
What else can we do?We look forward to your
constructive suggestions.
Yours,
Li Hua
练案[5]
基础练
Ⅰ. 1. acceptable 2. advertisement 3. faith
4. individual 5. contest 6. current 7. possi
ble 8. apply 9. addition 10. appreciate
Ⅱ. 1. to advertise 2. accepted 3. in 4. individ
uals 5. possibility 6. improving 7. in
8. that 9. to get 10. when
Ⅲ. 1. would like to take part 2. There is no possi
bility that 3. I accept he is not perfect
提升练
Ⅰ.【语篇解读】本文介绍了Red一词在美国表
达中的用途。
1. is used 考查动词的时态与语态。Red与use
之间为逻辑上的被动关系,再结合全文的时
态可知,答案为is used。
2. happiness 考查名词。本空用作show的宾
语,所以用名词happiness。
3. based 考查固定搭配。be based on “以……
为基础”。
4. in 考查介词。be marked in “用(某种颜色)
做标记”,是固定搭配。
5. when 考查关系副词。when引导定语从句,
修饰先行词day,并在从句中作状语。
6. a 考查冠词。surprise在此是可数名词,表示
“令人惊喜的事情”,所以本空用不定冠词。
7. commonly 考查副词。修饰动词heard用
副词。
8. which 考查关系代词。设空处引导一个非限
制性定语从句,并在从句中作主语,先行词是
expression,指物,故用which
。
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9. arrives 考查动词的时态。设空处是句子的
谓语,空前的the team是句子的主语,而且在
这里侧重的是整体,所以谓语动词用单数;全
文的时态都是一般现在时。故填arrives。
10. performing 考查非谓语动词。短语“catch爥
doing sth.”意为“逮住……正在做某事”。
Ⅱ.【语篇解读】本文首先指出父母与十几岁的
孩子之间存在矛盾冲突及其原因,然后是研
究发现的不同父母对此采取的不同方法,有
的方法较另一些方法更有效果,最后一段是
心理学家对解决冲突给出的建议。
1. D 根据第一句中的difficult以及第二句中的
again和“not easy”可知,青少年和父母有相
似的感觉。
2. B 由第一句“Parents feel that it is difficult to
live with teenagers.”父母和孩子之间相处困
难,可知他们之间有争论,即对事物有不同的
看法(argument)。
3. C 根据上文untidiness 和“daily routine
tasks”,填空所在的句子和后文的“clothes
thrown on the floor and their childrens refusal
爥”形成并列关系,可知用messy。
4. B 与上文说的孩子把家弄乱,到处乱扔衣服
并列的应是拒绝帮忙做家务。
5. C 与后文“不打扫房间,不去买东西”并列,
即“把毛巾丢(drop)在浴室”。
6. A 根据后句中“some approaches”可知选A
项,句意为:不同的家长有着不同的解决问题
的方法(approach)。
7. D 由下文中的better可知有些方法较为
成功。
8. A 父母责骂他们乱,但稍后(later)就为他们
整理房间,这样只会有更少的机会改变他们
的行为,即几乎无法改变他们的行为。
9. A 从下文多次出现的actions可知。
10. C 根据下文所举的例子“不帮父母去买东
西”“在冰箱里就找不到自己最喜欢的饮料”
可知,这是让孩子“感受到自己的行为产生
的后果”。
11. D 根据“are forced to”可知,孩子们被迫重
新考虑自己的行为。
12. A 根据本段倒数第二句出现的“Communi
cation is a twoway process.”以及上文一直强
调父母与孩子应如何沟通,可知选A项。
13. D “talk to”与say是同义复现,即父母要向
子女说出(talk)他们的想法,同时也要倾听
子女的想法。
14. B 由上文的“blame”可知,当父母看到孩子
把家里弄乱时会责备他们,所以选B项,
scold意为“责骂”。
15. C 只有通过倾听和相互理解(understand
ing),父母与孩子之间的问题才可得到解决。
故选C项。
Ⅲ. One possible version:
Dear Mike,
Im glad to know that you are coming to
China during Christmas. The following is a brief
introduction about some places of interest that I
strongly recommend to you.
The Great Wall of China is one of the
greatest wonders of the world and is visible
from outer space. Because of its rich history
and splendid appearance,the Great Wall at
tracts a lot of tourists,scientists,and histori
ans.
The famous West Lake is like a brilliant
pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile
shores of the East China Sea near the mouth of
the Hangzhou Bay. The view of the West Lake
is simply charming. Different time and different
weather make it a different scene.
Looking forward to your arrival. Wish you
a nice journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
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练案[5] UNIT 7 ART
Period Five Writing Workshop
基础练
Ⅰ.单词拼写
1. It is not socially (可接受的)for parents
to leave children unattended at that age.
2. If you want to find your things,you can put an
(广告)in a newspaper.
3. I am delighted to know you have such
(信念)in me.
4. You can open one (个人的)
account.
5. I finally came out of the (竞赛)as
the first prize winner.
6. Students are placed into classes according to
their (目前的)language skills.
7. It is (可能的)for him to accomplish
the task.
8. I am writing to a for the position as a
student volunteer.
9. In a ,I will tell him what you look
like so that you can find each other easily.
10. Thank you for your time and patience,and I
would (感激)it if you could grant
me interview.
Ⅱ.单句语法填空
1. Now you are asked to make a poster
(advertise)a sporting event.
2. It is generally (accept)that people
are motivated by success.
3. He had strong faith the coming of the
new artistic movements.
4. Most people believe the best way to build a
great team is to gather a group of the most
talented (individual).
5. There is a (possible)that we will
travel to China this Easter holiday.
6. Over the next months,he applied himself to
(improve)the technique.
7. If you are interested it,tell me and
Ill send you more information.
8. He felt so happy he praised me in
public,saying that I was an intelligent student.
9. It not only gave us a chance (get)
close to nature,but also gave us relaxation from
our study.
10. We were about to set off it suddenly
began to rain.
Ⅲ.完成句子
1. If you
,we will wait for you at the school gate at
9 in the morning.
如果你想参加,我们将于上午9点在学校大门
口等你。
2.
any of us will ever forget.
我们绝不可能忘记。
3. While
,I do actually like the
person.
尽管我承认他不够完美,但我确实喜欢这个人
。
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提升练
Ⅰ.语法填空
Red 1. (use)in many American expressions. It can be used to show 2. (happy),
as in the expression “a redletter day”. This is a day when something special happens. The expression is
probably 3. (base)on church customs. For almost 600 years,church calendars have been
marked 4. red to show special holy days. Todays calendars are still marked that way with the
dates of holidays and special days printed in red.
The expression “a redletter day”is often heard in everyday life. “A redletter day”is a day
5. people are especially happy. It may be a day that you have long waited for,a wedding day,
for example. Or it may be a day with 6. happy surprise. You might tell a friend that yesterday
was a redletter day,because you won some money in the lottery.“Rolling out the red carpet”is another
7. (common)heard expression,8. describes an especially warm welcome of any
kind. A city may “roll out the red carpet”for its baseball team,when the team 9. (arrive)
home after winning a championship.
Red is also used in some expressions that are not happy. To be caught “redhanded”is to be caught
10. (perform)a wrong act.
Ⅱ.完形填空
Parents feel that it is difficult to live with
teenagers. Then again,teenagers have 1 feelings
about their parents,saying that it is not easy to live with
them. According to a recent research,the most common
2 between parents and teenagers is that regarding
untidiness and daily routine tasks. On the one hand,
parents go mad over 3 rooms,clothes thrown on the
floor and their childrens refusal to help with the 4 .
On the other hand, teenagers lose their patience
continually when parents blame them for 5 the
towel in the bathroom,not cleaning up their room or
refusing to do the shopping at the supermarket.
The research,conducted by St. George University,
shows that different parents have different 6 to
these problems. However,some approaches are more
7 than others. For example,those parents who yell
1. A. natural B. strong
C. guilty D. similar
2. A. interest B. argument
C. link D. knowledge
3. A. noisy B. crowded
C. messy D. locked
4. A. homework B. housework
C. problem D. research
5. A. washing B. using
C. dropping D. replacing
6. A. approaches B. contributions
C. introductions D. attitudes
7. A. complex B. popular
C. scientific D. successful
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at their children for their untidiness,but 8 clean
the room for them,have fewer chances of changing their
childrens 9 . On the contrary,those who let
teenagers experience the 10 of their actions can do
better. For example,when teenagers who dont help
their parents with the shopping dont find their favorite
drink in the refrigerator,they are forced to 11 their
actions.
Psychologists say that 12 is the most important
thing in parentchild relationships. Parents should
13 to their children but at the same time they
should lend an ear to what they have to say. Parents
may 14 their children when they are untidy but they
should also understand that their room is their own
private space. Communication is a twoway process. It
is only by listening to and 15 each other that
problems between parents and children can be settled.
8. A. later B. deliberately
C. seldom D. thoroughly
9. A. behavior B. taste
C. future D. nature
10. A. failures B. changes
C. consequences D. thrills
11. A. defend B. delay
C. repeat D. reconsider
12. A. communication B. bond
C. friendship D. trust
13. A. reply B. attend
C. attach D. talk
14. A. hate B. scold
C. frighten D. stop
15. A. loving B. observing
C. understanding D. praising
Ⅲ.书面表达
假如你是李华,你的加拿大网友Mike圣诞
节期间打算来中国,他对中国传统文化非常感
兴趣,希望你能为他推荐一些名胜古迹。请你
用英语给他发一封电子邮件,向他推荐一个或
两个你所喜欢的名胜古迹。
要点包括:
1.简介你推荐的名胜古迹;
2.说明你推荐的理由;
3.表达你的祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计
入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike
,
Yours,
Li Hua
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