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Period Five Writing Workshop
课前自主预习
Ⅰ.猜词意
A.个人,个体 B.当前;现时 C.纪录片
D.忠诚地,忠实地
1. He served the company faithfully for 40 years.
( )
2. He currently holds the position of technical
manager. ( )
3. Hes an extremely unattractive individual,
dont you think? ( )
4. They showed a documentary on animal com
munication. ( )
Ⅱ.猜单词拼写
1. accept v.→ adj.可接受的
2. advertise v.→ n.广告
3. young adj.→ n.(青)少年
Ⅲ.预备写作素材
1. Shes great to work for—I really couldnt
a better boss. (请求
要……)
2. ,she writes the column
that is published every week.(此外)
3. My brother
pointing out my mistakes.(喜欢
)
课堂新知讲练
◇词汇拓讲
1. apply v. 运用/应用;使用;申请,贴,涂,敷;
适用
(P19)I wonder if you could also give me more
information about how to apply to be part of this
festival.
【翻译】我还想知道您能不能给我提供更多
关于如何申请参加艺术节的信息。
【用法详解
】
①apply oneself to致力于;专心于(to为介词)
apply (to sb.)for sth. (向某人)申请某物
apply sth. to爥将某物用在/涂在……上
apply to sb. / sth.
适用于某人某物
②applicant n. 申请人
application n. 申请
applied adj. 使用的;应用的
When the time came to make the final decision for
a course,I decided to apply for the one that reflec
ted my interest.
当最后决定课程的时间到来时,我决定申请
那门反映我兴趣的课程。
【针对练习】
用apply的适当形式填空
(1)He received a letter saying that his
had been rejected.
(2)
There are 150 competing for the
!$$
same position.
(3)It is said that most farmers at present can
new technology to their farming.
单句语法填空
(4)You will pass your exams only if you really
apply (you)to your study.
2. appreciate vt.感激;欣赏
(P19)I appreciate your help and look forward
to hearing from you.
【翻译】我感激你的帮助并期待着你的来信。
【用法详解
】
①appreciate (doing)sth. 感激(做)某事
I would appreciate it if爥假如……我将不胜
感激。
②appreciation n.欣赏;感激
【拓展提升】
(1)appreciate后接动名词,不可接不定式。
(2)其后不直接跟if或when等引导的从句,
需先接代词it,再接从句。
I appreciate being treated like a friend.
我感激被人当作朋友对待。
【针对练习】
单句语法填空
(1)Id appreciate your (write)me
back as soon as possible.
(2)I appreciate (give)such a good
chance to make a speech on how to learn
English well.
完成句子
(3)I would
on how to solve these
problems.
如果您能给我一些关于如何解决这些问
题的建议我将不胜感激。
3. look forward to期望;期待;盼望
(P19)I appreciate your help and look forward
to hearing from you.
【翻译】我感激你的帮助并期待着你的来信。
【用法详解
】
①look forward向前看
②“look forward to”中的to为介词,后跟名
词、代词或动名词作宾语。类似的短语
还有:
get down to开始认真干
pay attention to注意
devote oneself to献身;致力于
be used / accustomed to习惯于
be addicted to沉溺于
He was addicted to football when he was young.
当他小的时候就迷恋上了足球。
She devoted all her life to medical work for Chi
nese women and children.
她为中国的妇女儿童医疗事业奉献了毕生精力。
【针对练习】
单句语法填空
(1)Many people crowded there,so I looked for
ward (see)what had happened.
(2)We looked forward to (hear)
from you.
◇句式解读
1. (P19)For the past few months,we have been
interviewing and filming young players about
their interest in basketball.
【翻译】在过去的几个月里,
我们一直在做关于
!$%
年轻球员对篮球兴趣的采访,并拍摄下来。
【考点提炼】
在本句中“have been interviewing and filming”
为现在完成进行时,另外“for the past few
months”是现在完成时的标志性时间状语。
【归纳拓展】
(1)have / has been doing为现在完成进行时,
表示动作从过去开始一直延续到现在,或将
继续延续至将来。它和现在完成时的区别
如下:
时态 含义
现在完成时
(have / has done)
强调刚刚完成的动作或动作对
现在的影响或产生的结果。
现在完成进行时
(have / has been
doing)
表示过去的动作持续到现在并
有可能延续下去。也可表示重
复性动作,还可表示某种感情
色彩。
(2)现在完成时的常用时间状语有:so far,for
a long time,up to now,recently,in / for / during
the past few years;since等。
When you have learned English,you will find it
a bridge to so much knowledge.
当你学习英语之后,你将找到一条通往丰富知识
的桥梁。
Tom has been studying cross talk for five years.
五年来汤姆一直学习相声。
【针对练习】
完成句子
(1)Tom looks tired because he
since 9 a. m.
汤姆看上去很累,因为他从上午九点到
现在一直在打扫房子。
(2)You you
can succeed for five years.
五年来你一直在说你能成功。
2.(P19)In addition,would it be possible to tell
me about the prizes?
【翻译】此外,有可能告诉我关于奖品的事吗?
【考点提炼】
本句中的“it is possible (for sb.)to do sth.”
为固定句式,翻译为“做某事对某人来说是可
能的”。it为形式主语,不定式为真正主语。
【归纳拓展】
“可能”的表达法主要有:
It is possible (for sb.)to do sth.
It is possible / probable that爥
sb. is likely to do sth.
It is likely that爥
Is it possible for you to finish reading this book
by the weekend?
周末前你有可能读完这本书吗?
Youll be less likely to bring your work home.
那么你将不太可能把工作带回家。
【针对练习】
一句多译
他在将来有可能创造一项新的世界纪录。
(1) to set a
new world record in the future.
(2)
to set a new world record in the
future.
(3) he
will set a new world record in the future.
!$&
写作高效提升
◎话题短语
1. have difficulty in爥在……方面有困难
2. have no choice but to do爥除了……别无选择
3. turn to you for help向你求助
4. in the meanwhile / at the same time同时
5. gain some precious experience获得一些宝贵
的经验
6. do me a favor帮我个忙
7. adapt to the development and changes of society
适应社会的发展和变化
8. hope you can give us some advice希望你能给
我们一些建议
◎话题佳句
【引人入胜的开头句】
1. Im writing a letter to you to get some help about
爥
我给你写信是想得到……方面的一些帮助。
2. I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. I have
some difficulty in doing爥,which bothers me a
lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for
help.
我写信向你求助。我在……方面有困难,这
很困扰我。所以我别无选择,只能向你求助。
【精彩纷呈的篇中句】
3. Im eager to get your timely help. / Im eager for
your timely help.
我渴望得到你及时的帮助。
4. Faced with / Facing so many difficulties,I have
to turn to you for help.
面对如此多的困难,我不得不向你求助。
【回味无穷的结尾句】
5. I will be very grateful if you could help me爥/ I
would appreciate it if you could do me a favor
and爥
如果你能帮助我……我会非常感激。
6. Looking forward to your reply. And Id be really
thankful.
期待你的回复。我非常感激。
◎写作范例
【写作任务】
假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼
职,已写好申请信和个人简历(resume)。给外
教Ms. Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的
文字和格式(format)。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【写作指导】
1.明确体裁为应用文中的求助信。
2.文章的时态为一般现在时为主,现在进
行时,现在完成时为辅。人称为第一人称。
3.文章的结构框架为:
开头:直奔主题——交代写信目的
主体:写信的背景——想要兼职并叙述好
处:求助的具体内容。
结尾:表达自己的感谢之情
【学以致用】
重点词汇
(1)申请
!$'
(2)一份兼职工作
(3)暑假
(4)对某人来说是个挑战
(5)此外;而且
(6)获得经验
(7)错误
(8)向某人求助
完成句子
(1)Besides,
makes me gain much experience.
此外,兼职可以使我获得许多经验。
(2)I will better
of the society.
我能更好地适应社会的发展和变化。
(3)I hope you can
the mistakes of the words and format attached
to the materials.
我希望你能帮我修改所附材料的文字和格式。
句式升级
(4)用so that的复合结构合并句(1)和句(2)
(5)用复合句升级句(3)
定语从句:
【参考范文】
Dear Ms. Jenkins,
Im writing to ask you for help. Im applying
for a parttime job in an overseasfunded corpora
tion for this summer holiday. I think itll be a new
challenge to me. Moreover,doing the parttime job
will gain me some precious experience so that I
can better adapt to the development and changes
of society.
Ive already written the application and re
sume. But Im afraid that there are some mistakes
about the words and format. So I have no choice
but to bother you to correct the word mistakes in
the letter and format which / that are attached to
the materials in the letter.
Id appreciate it if you could do me a favor.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
◎写作练笔
假设你是李华,正在负责策划“绿色校园”
活动(Green Campus Campaign),请给你的美国
笔友Henry写封邮件,向他介绍此次活动的内
容并征求他的建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Henry,
Yours,
Li Hua
请同学们认真完成练案[5
]
!$(
智力方面会受到遏制“hold back”。average
“平均的;平常的;普通的;一般的”,average
children意为“普通的孩子”,与前句的“gifted
children”相对应。
4. B 通过下文“can help the gifted children to
graduate earlier”可以看出,此处所指的班级应
该是特长班。
5. A 把这些有天赋的孩子们(gifted children)
从普通班里选走可能会造成严重的问题。
6. A 通过上下文,尤其是“who were taken out
of a special class”看出,此处所指的孩子应该
是intelligent,意为“聪明的;理解力强的”。
7. B 从该句前面信息看出,这里所指的班级是
“regular class”,“普通班”。
8. D 从逻辑推出看,此处指学生在特长班,处
处依赖老师,遏制个性发展。heavily表示程
度“严重地”,rely heavily on sb.意为“过度地
依赖某人”。
9. C 根据“爥reflect voluntarily on many prob
lems ”可知,“自发地思考许多问题”,与前面
的“rely heavily on”形成比较。voluntarily的
意思是“自动地;自发地”。
10. B 通过从后面的“lose interest”和“do feel
bored”以及“who is bored”可知。
11. A 通过前句的“Many are concerned that爥”
提示,表语部分是在说明那些人的concern
“担心”,concern既是动词又是名词。
12. B 从these看出,指的是上文的parents和
teachers,adults具有概括性。
13. A talented与gifted同义。
14. D 从本句的so及前句的“Some top students
do feel bored in class”可知。此处在说明学
生的这种感受。
15. C 从前句“Studies have shown that to be
bored is to be anxious.”可知。
Ⅲ. One possible version:
Dear Tony,
Im glad to get in touch with you. Im writ
ing to tell you something about my study now.
You know,I used to be weak in physics
but now with the help of our physics teacher,I
have made great progress since I entered senior
high school this year. How are you getting on
with your Chinese learning?I believe youve al
so made great progress. By the way,next month
Im going to take a trip to your city. Ill bring
your favorite Chinese tea to you.
Look forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Period Five Writing Workshop
课前自主预习
Ⅰ. 1. D 2. B 3. A 4. C
Ⅱ. 1. acceptable 2. advertisement 3. youth
Ⅲ. 1. ask for 2. In addition 3. is fond of
课堂新知讲练
词汇拓讲
1.(1)application (2)applicants (3)apply
(4)yourself
2.(1)writing (2)being given
(3)appreciate it if you could give me some ad
vice / suggestions
3.(1)to seeing (2)hearing
句式解读
1. (1)has been cleaning the house (2)have
been saying
2.(1)He is likely (2)It is possible for him
(3)
It is possible / probable / likely that
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写作高效提升
写作范例
重点词汇
(1)apply for (2)a parttime job
(3)summer holiday (4)a challenge to sb.
(5)whats more / besides / moreover
(6)gain experience (7)mistake
(8)turn to sb. for help
完成句子
(1)doing a parttime job
(2)adapt to the development and changes
(3)help me correct
句式升级
(4)Besides,doing a parttime job makes me gain
much experience so that I will better adapt to
the development and changes of the society.
(5)I hope you can help me correct my mistakes of
the words and format which / that are attached
to the materials.
写作练笔
One possible version:
Dear Henry,
Im writing to ask you to do me a favor. We
are to start “Green Campus Campaign”to inspire
students to be environmentally conscious at school.
Could you give us some advice on our current plan
at your convenience?
We plan to play a 30 minutes video first,
which is about how to save water,paper,cans and
electricity at school. Students will surely be im
pressed by the striking figures and helpful tips.
Then our science teacher will give a live show in
the lab on what actually happens to those recycla
ble materials. This will be really popular.
What else can we do?We look forward to your
constructive suggestions.
Yours,
Li Hua
练案[5]
基础练
Ⅰ. 1. acceptable 2. advertisement 3. faith
4. individual 5. contest 6. current 7. possi
ble 8. apply 9. addition 10. appreciate
Ⅱ. 1. to advertise 2. accepted 3. in 4. individ
uals 5. possibility 6. improving 7. in
8. that 9. to get 10. when
Ⅲ. 1. would like to take part 2. There is no possi
bility that 3. I accept he is not perfect
提升练
Ⅰ.【语篇解读】本文介绍了Red一词在美国表
达中的用途。
1. is used 考查动词的时态与语态。Red与use
之间为逻辑上的被动关系,再结合全文的时
态可知,答案为is used。
2. happiness 考查名词。本空用作show的宾
语,所以用名词happiness。
3. based 考查固定搭配。be based on “以……
为基础”。
4. in 考查介词。be marked in “用(某种颜色)
做标记”,是固定搭配。
5. when 考查关系副词。when引导定语从句,
修饰先行词day,并在从句中作状语。
6. a 考查冠词。surprise在此是可数名词,表示
“令人惊喜的事情”,所以本空用不定冠词。
7. commonly 考查副词。修饰动词heard用
副词。
8. which 考查关系代词。设空处引导一个非限
制性定语从句,并在从句中作主语,先行词是
expression,指物,故用which
。
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