内容正文:
写作
假定你是李华,你校英文网站为丰富网站栏目,正广泛征集同学们的意见,增加新专栏。请你给网站负责人Mr. Green写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.建议增加的栏目;
2.你的理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Mr Green,
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Yours,
Li Hua
一、文本主旨
这封邮件围绕学校英文网站新栏目建设展开,李华建议增设 “文化交流” 栏目,并阐述其对拓宽学生视野、提升跨文化沟通能力的积极意义。
二、词汇积累
propose:v. 提议,建议
section:n. 部分;栏目
culture:n. 文化
festival:n. 节日
custom:n. 习俗
expand:v. 扩大,拓展
vision:n. 视野
communication:n. 交流,沟通
consider:v. 考虑
suggestion:n. 建议
三、短语积累
write to:写信给……
offer suggestions for:为…… 提供建议
add... to...:把…… 添加到……
cultural exchange:文化交流
traditional festivals:传统节日
cross - cultural communication:跨文化交流
considering sth:考虑某事
四、佳句积累
I am Li Hua, writing to offer suggestions for new columns on our school’s English website.(开篇点明写信目的,简洁明了)
I propose adding a “Cultural Exchange” section.(直接提出建议,“propose doing sth” 准确地道)
This column will introduce various cultures, like traditional festivals and customs.(介绍栏目内容,使用 “like” 列举例子)
It can expand students’ global vision and improve cross - cultural communication skills.(阐述栏目带来的好处,“expand vision”“improve skills” 搭配合理)
Thank you for considering my suggestion.(结尾表达感谢,礼貌得体)
五、写作示范
示范一
Dear Mr Green,
Hope this email finds you well! As an enthusiastic reader of our school’s English website, I’m eager to share my thoughts. I think we should add a “Book Review” column.
In this section, students can share summaries and personal reflections on their favorite English books. This not only helps others discover great reads but also improves our writing and critical thinking.
Thank you for your attention.
Yours,
Li Hua
示范二
Dear Mr Green,
I’m Li Hua. I strongly recommend adding a “Campus Life” column to our website.
This new section could feature students’ daily experiences, achievements in clubs, and memorable events. By sharing these stories, we can strengthen the bond among students and let outsiders better understand our school.
Thank you for considering my proposal.
Yours,
Li Hua
示范三
Dear Mr Green,
I am writing to suggest adding a “Language Learning Tips” column to our school English website.
In this column, students can share effective vocabulary - building strategies, grammar - learning methods, and speaking practice tips. It will surely make English learning more efficient and enjoyable for everyone.
Thanks a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr Green,
I'm Li Hua, a high school student who is very interested in our English website. I’m writing to offer a suggestion on enriching it.
In my opinion, establishing a travel column would be a good choice. Here are some reasons. First of all, travelling is one of the most popular ways to relax, so introducing a travel column can attract students’ interest. Secondly, given that students are busy with their studies, it is difficult for them to have a chance to visit famous scenic spots. Our website can help them make it. Lastly, appreciating the beautiful rivers and mountains of our motherland can increase our sense of national pride.
I trust that you will consider my suggestion favorably.
Yours,
Li Hua
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