读后续写：彼得和祖父的故事 讲义-江苏省南京市六校联合体2024-2025学年高二下学期3月联合调研英语试题

读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Eight-year-old Peter was a lively and energetic little boy. Every weekend, he would go to his grandfather’s house, although he didn’t particularly enjoy it. His grandfather was very strict with Peter. He demanded that Peter develop two good habits: being punctual (准时的) and staying organized. To help his grandson develop these habits, the grandfather took certain measures. For instance, Peter had to be in the dining room sharply at 12:00 noon for lunch, or else he would have no meal. Peter sometimes felt that his grandfather was too strict, but he dared not voice his dissatisfaction. This week was no exception. Peter arrived at his grandfather’s house as usual. His grandfather was busy cooking in the kitchen, the smell of the food filling the air. Peter, left on his own, wandered into the living room to play. There, he accidentally knocked over the first-aid kit that was placed on the table. The contents in the kit spilled all over the floor, small bottles of pills scattered everywhere. Peter paid no attention to the chaos he had caused. He glanced at the mess, then remembered that David, his friend from next door, was home alone. Awakened by the thought of watching cartoons with David, Peter hurried next door, leaving the spilled contents of the first-aid kit behind. In the kitchen, the grandfather, who was chopping vegetables, suddenly felt unwell. His heart began to race, and he realized that he was having a heart attack. He struggled to the living room to get his medicine. However, when he got there, all he saw was the overturned first-aid kit and the pills scattered on the floor. The grandfather bent down with difficulty, his heart racing with anxiety as he searched for the blue bottle that contained his heart medicine. The precious seconds ticked by, and he felt his strength fading. Time was running out, and Peter didn’t know it. The little boy was completely unaware of the danger his grandfather was facing, immersed in the fun of the cartoon, laughing from time to time. The clock struck 12 but the cartoon was still five minutes away from ending. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Finally, after a desperate search, Peter spotted the small blue bottle hidden under the sofa. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 彼得和祖父的故事 一、续写分析​ 第一段续写分析​ 开头点明时钟敲响 12 点，动画片还未结束。续写时要围绕彼得因祖父守时的要求，从沉浸动画片中回过神，回到祖父家展开。描述彼得回家途中及看到祖父病倒时的心理，为后文寻找药物铺垫。​ 第二段续写分析​ 开头表明彼得找到药瓶。接下来应描述祖父服药后身体的好转，彼得内心的愧疚与反思。结尾从彼得的改变入手，升华故事主旨，体现祖父规则的积极影响。 二、故事线​ 彼得周末去祖父家，玩耍时打翻急救箱，未收拾就去邻居家看动画片。​ 祖父做饭时心脏病发作，去客厅找药，面对散落一地的药品无从下手。​ 时钟敲响 12 点，彼得想起祖父守时的要求，回到祖父家，发现祖父病倒。 彼得找到药瓶，祖父服药后好转，彼得反思自己行为，从此变得更负责。​ 三、短语积累​ be engrossed in 全神贯注于​ tear oneself away from 忍痛离开​ rush back 冲回​ gasp for air 喘气​ be filled with guilt 充满愧疚​ apologize profusely 再三道歉​ realize the gravity of the situation 意识到事情的严重性​ become more responsible 变得更有责任感​ 四、主旨升华句​ Through this harrowing experience, Peter grasped that rules were not meant to confine him but to safeguard those around him.​ The incident taught Peter that small actions could yield significant consequences, compelling him to be more mindful in the future.​ Peter’s transformation from a heedless child to a responsible one demonstrated the profound impact of a single event.​ This event impressed upon Peter that punctuality and organization were not mere words but crucial values that could save lives.​ From that day forward, Peter internalized his grandfather’s teachings, understanding that they were keys to a more reliable and caring self.​ 五、写作示范​ 示范一​ The clock struck 12 but the cartoon was still five minutes away from ending. At first, Peter was reluctant to leave. However, the memory of his grandfather’s stern face made him turn off the TV and dash back home. As he stepped into the living room, his eyes widened in horror. His grandfather was lying on the floor, his face ashen. Panic surged through him, and he immediately knew something was terribly wrong.​ Finally, after a desperate search, Peter spotted the small blue bottle hidden under the sofa. Without hesitation, he rushed to his grandfather’s side and helped him take the medicine. Slowly, the old man’s breathing became more regular. Peter’s eyes filled with tears as he apologized repeatedly. This incident made Peter understand that being punctual and organized was not just about following rules. It was about caring for others and being a responsible person.​ 示范二​ The clock struck 12 but the cartoon was still five minutes away from ending. For a moment, Peter debated whether to stay. Then, the thought of his grandfather waiting for him made him overcome the temptation. He ran all the way back to his grandfather’s house. When he saw his grandfather struggling on the floor, his heart skipped a beat.​ Finally, after a desperate search, Peter spotted the small blue bottle hidden under the sofa. With trembling hands, he gave the medicine to his grandfather. As the color returned to his grandfather’s face, Peter felt a huge weight lifted off his shoulders. He realized that his lack of responsibility had almost caused a tragedy. From then on, Peter tried his best to follow his grandfather’s rules, always reminding himself to be a better person. 【答案】One possible version: The clock struck 12 but the cartoon was still five minutes away from ending. Although Peter really wanted to finish watching the cartoon, he tore himself away from the cartoon and went home. As soon as Peter walked in, he was scared to see his grandfather lying on the ground. He quickly ran over and asked what was wrong. His grandfather, in a faint voice, uttered, “Blue bottle... find the blue bottle...” Peter immediately dropped to his knees and started frantically searching the floor. At that moment, he was filled with regret for not tidying up the mess he made when he knocked over the first-aid kit. Finally, after a desperate search, Peter spotted the small blue bottle hidden under the sofa. He rushed over, reached out to grab the bottle and handed it to his grandfather, tears welling up his eyes and his voice trembling as he apologized, “Grandpa, I’m sorry!” His grandfather, after taking the medicine, gently patted Peter on the shoulder and said, “Thank God you’ve come home in time and find the life-saving medicine for me.” Realizing Grandpa was out of danger, Peter felt a mixed surge of guilt and comfort overwhelming him, and at this moment, he realized the importance of being punctual and staying organized. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$