内容正文:
应用文写作
假定你是李华,应英国网友 Tom 的请求为他和他的同学们拍摄了一组你的校园生活短视频。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.介绍拍摄内容;2.说明拍摄原因;3.谈谈拍摄感受。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
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Best wishes!
Li Hua
一、写作提纲
第一段:开篇引入
开篇点明收到 Tom 的请求,告知对方短视频已拍摄完成。
第二段:介绍详情
详细介绍拍摄内容,如校园风景、课堂活动、社团活动等;说明拍摄这些内容的原因;分享拍摄过程中的感受。
第三段:结尾祝愿
表达对 Tom 和他同学们的美好祝愿,期待对方反馈。
二、语言积累
(一)短语
at one’s request 应某人的请求
campus life 校园生活
short videos 短视频
campus scenery 校园风景
teaching buildings 教学楼
colorful activities 丰富多彩的活动
classroom discussions 课堂讨论
club activities 社团活动
basketball matches 篮球比赛
cultural festivals 文化节
document...with 用…… 记录
provide sb. with sth. 为某人提供某物
get a better understanding of 更好地了解
be impressed by 对…… 印象深刻
full of energy 充满活力
enjoyable experience 愉快的经历
look forward to 期待
hear from sb. 收到某人的来信
(二)佳句
I’m extremely delighted to have received your request for videos of my campus life, and I’m glad to tell you that I’ve already completed the shooting.
The short videos mainly focus on the beautiful campus scenery, including our modern teaching buildings and large, green lawns.
I also recorded various colorful activities on campus, such as exciting basketball matches and interesting cultural festivals.
Classroom discussions were captured as well, showing the lively learning atmosphere at our school.
I chose to shoot these because I wanted to provide you and your classmates with a vivid picture of my campus life.
Through these videos, I hope you can get a better understanding of the unique charm of our school.
During the shooting, I was deeply impressed by the energy and enthusiasm of my schoolmates.
It was truly an enjoyable experience to document the wonderful moments of campus life.
I realized how much I cherish the daily life on campus while shooting these videos.
I sincerely hope you and your classmates will like the videos.
Your feedback would be highly appreciated.
May you have a wonderful time exploring the content of the videos.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon and knowing your thoughts about the videos.
I believe these videos will strengthen the bond between us.
Should you have any other requests, please feel free to let me know.
三、写作示范
示范一
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to have fulfilled your request for campus - life videos. The videos feature our beautiful campus scenery, like the flower - filled gardens. I also recorded some exciting basketball matches.
I shot these to give you a real sense of my school life. During the process, I was reminded of how much fun we have here.
I hope you and your classmates enjoy the videos. Looking forward to your feedback!
Best wishes!
Li Hua
示范二
Dear Tom,
At your request, I’ve finished shooting short videos of my campus life. They include classroom discussions, where students share creative ideas. I also captured our English club’s activities.
I wanted to show you the vibrant learning environment and rich cultural life at my school. The shooting was an eye - opening experience.
I sincerely hope you like the videos. Let me know what you think.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
示范三
Dear Tom,
I’m writing to tell you that I’ve completed the videos you asked for. The videos document our campus from different angles, including the grand library. I also recorded a cultural festival with traditional dances.
I shot these to help you understand the unique features of my school. I felt proud to share these moments.
I’m looking forward to hearing your thoughts. Hope you enjoy them!
Best wishes!
Li Hua
示范四
Dear Tom,
I’m happy to inform you that the videos of my campus life are ready. They feature the morning exercises on the playground and an art exhibition.
I aimed to give you a comprehensive view of my daily school life. The shooting made me appreciate my campus more.
I hope these videos bring you joy. Waiting for your feedback!
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I’m thrilled to share the video showcasing my campus life! I captured scenes from our lively classes, science lab experiments, and a basketball match to reflect students’ daily routines. Additionally, I filmed the library and art club activities to highlight our academic and creative growth. I choose these moments to give you an authentic glimpse of our daily routines and the lively and energetic atmosphere here.
I truly enjoy my campus life. Though challenging, it’s fulfilling to study with motivated peers and participate in diverse activities. Every day brings new opportunities to learn and bond with friends, making school a brilliant part of my youth.
Hope this video helps you understand our school culture better. Looking forward to your feedback!
Best wishes!
Li Hua
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