读后续写 一场演出，解开心灵的 “结” 讲义 江苏省南京励志高级中学第二届创新班2024-2025学年高一下学期3月考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was in my room, unwilling to head to the community theatre with“my brother”Henry. He was just adopted by my parents recently. I was not in the mood for being onstage with him. “Kristie, come here,” my mom called. Following her voice, I found her outside the bathroom, holding a wet book. She gave the book a shake. “Henry’ s book was in the bathtub. Did you put it there? ” She glared at me—— something she never did before Henry came to our home. I didn't wet his book on purpose. Tears of hurt clouded my eyes. Worse still, she promised to buy him a new copy. My heart ached.Henry was stealing my mother's love. He was ruining my life. Meanwhile, Henry was just nearby, absorbed in working on a complicated rope knot(绳结) as usual. Why did a boy like him do the girly work? Far from manly! Soon, it was time to have to set off for the community theatre. As Henry walked ahead of us to the car, my mom took me aside and said in a low voice, “It's the first time for Henry to be onstage. Be kind to him, Honey.” I nodded but sighed. Being kind didn't use to be hard. But after Henry moved in, everything felt different. The theatre used to be a special place for my parents and me. With Henry involved, it didn't seem so special any more. Finally, it was our stage time. My heart beat wildly. I forgot my annoyance at Henry for a while. As we kids lined up, ready to act out our short play, I realized how loosely I had tied the drawstring(束带) on my skirt. Sure enough, my skirt began to drop. Laughter from the audience could be heard, and even though I was wearing shorts under my skirt, I could feel my face burst into flames. However, my hands were full. If only someone could help me out! 注意：续写词数应为 150 左右。 Right then, Henry sensed my embarrassment. After the performance, I found Henry and tapped him on the arm gratefully. 一、文本主旨​​​ 本文讲述了 “我” 因父母收养了亨利，感觉母亲的爱被抢走，对亨利心生不满。在社区剧院表演时，“我” 的裙子束带松开，面临尴尬局面。​ 二、五要素分析​ 人物：“我”（Kristie）、亨利、母亲。​ 时间：社区剧院表演当天。​ 地点：家里、社区剧院。​ 事件：亨利的书被弄湿，母亲误会 “我”；表演时 “我” 的裙子束带松开，陷入尴尬。​ 起因：亨利进入家庭后，“我” 感觉母亲对自己的关注减少，对亨利产生不满。​ 三、词汇积累​ 尴尬窘迫相关：embarrassment 尴尬；face burst into flames 脸红发烫；at a loss 不知所措。​ 动作行为相关：rush to one’s rescue 急忙去救某人；tie up 系紧；tap sb. on the arm 轻拍某人手臂。​ 情感表达相关：grateful 感激的；relieved 宽慰的；guilty 愧疚的。​ 四、续写分析​ 衔接句：第一段开头 “Right then, Henry sensed my embarrassment.” 承接上文 “我” 裙子掉落的尴尬场景，引出亨利的行动。第二段开头 “After the performance, I found Henry and tapped him on the arm gratefully.” 承接第一段亨利帮助 “我” 解决危机，描述表演结束后 “我” 的反应。​ 情节合理性：第一段亨利凭借擅长绳结的技能，快速帮 “我” 系好裙子，解决尴尬，符合前文对他擅长绳结的描述。第二段 “我” 对亨利的态度转变，从不满到感激，符合人物情感的发展逻辑。​ 情感铺垫：前文 “我” 对亨利的不满与误会，为后文 “我” 态度的转变做了情感铺垫，形成对比。​ 五、情感走向​ 第一段从 “我” 的尴尬、窘迫，到亨利帮助 “我” 后 “我” 的惊讶与些许感激，情感开始发生转变。第二段 “我” 对亨利表达感激，情感进一步升华，体现 “我” 对亨利态度的彻底改变。​ 六、主题深化​ 通过 “我” 与亨利在舞台上的互动，以及 “我” 态度的转变，深化了理解与接纳的主题，展现了家庭成员之间情感的融合。​ 七、下水文​ 下水文一​ Right then, Henry sensed my embarrassment. Without hesitation, he rushed to my side. His fingers, skilled in rope - knotting, quickly worked on the drawstring of my skirt. In no time, he had it tied up securely. I looked at him in surprise, a rush of gratitude replacing my previous annoyance. The audience’s laughter died down, and we continued with the play smoothly.​ After the performance, I found Henry and tapped him on the arm gratefully. “Thanks a ton, Henry. You saved me back there.” A shy smile spread across his face. I realized I had been wrong about him. He wasn’t stealing my mother’s love; he was just another member of our family. From that day on, I decided to give him a chance and open my heart to him.​ 下水文二​ Right then, Henry sensed my embarrassment. He swiftly took off the belt from his own pants. With a few quick movements, he looped it around my skirt, pulling it tight. His calmness in the face of chaos helped me regain my composure. We carried on with the performance as if nothing had happened.​ After the performance, I found Henry and tapped him on the arm gratefully. “I really appreciate what you did. I’m sorry for being mean to you.” I said, looking down in shame. Henry just grinned and replied, “No big deal.” At that moment, I understood that family wasn’t just about blood; it was about looking out for one another. I was ready to welcome Henry with open arms.​ 下水文三 Right then, Henry sensed my embarrassment. Without a moment’s hesitation, he stepped forward, his fingers deftly working with the drawstring. Thanks to his expertise in rope knots, the loose string was tightened within seconds. He then shot me a reassuring smile, his eyes brimming with kindness. Startled by his quick response, I felt a rush of gratitude replacing my initial irritation. Despite the remaining snickers from the audience, we managed to continue with the play smoothly. After the performance, I found Henry and tapped him on the arm gratefully. “Henry, I can’t thank you enough for what you did up there. You saved my day.” I said, my voice filled with sincerity. He blushed, shrugging it off as if it were no big deal. Looking at him, I felt a twinge of guilt for my previous hostility. “I’m really sorry for being so mean to you. I was wrong.” I added, lowering my head in shame. He patted my shoulder, saying, “It’s okay. I hope we can be good friends from now on.” At that moment, I realized that perhaps having Henry around wasn’t so bad after all. 参考答案 Right then, Henry sensed my embarrassment. He immediately came to my aid. He pulled up my skirt and skillfully tied the drawstring with a beautiful knot. When I saw what Henry did for me, something deep in my mind began to change. It seemed as if my cold heart began to melt slowly and my annoyance at him gradually gave way to guilt. I regretted having treated him as a stranger. While my mind was wandering, our performance time came. It turned out a great success,thunderous applause filling the whole theatre. After the performance, I found Henry and tapped him-on the arm gratefully. “Thanks,” I said with a grateful smile on my face. I had to admit that but for his timely help, I would have been extremely embarrassed. Without his knotting skill, the performance would have been quite different. “NOT a problem. You are my sister,” he grinned innocently, saying humorously.Surrounded by the cheerful atmosphere,I felt a flood of warmth of a big family. Maybe it wouldn't be so bad to have a new person in my corner of the world after all. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$