读后续写 邻里互助的温暖 讲义-广东省西浦教育集团外国语高中2024-2025学年高三第四次模拟（开学考）英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I was seven years old, my family moved from Mexico to America. In Mexico, I was a cheerful girl who loved making people laugh with my jokes and inventing fun games to play with my friends. However, when I arrived in America, I found it hard to fit in, and I became quieter. We lived in a small house with a modest yard where we grew vegetables—my responsibility. While I took pride in watching them grow, there were times when I dreamed of having a beautiful garden like my schoolmate Luella’s, with its delicate tulips (郁金香). Although Luella lived in the same neighborhood as me, we barely knew each other. It was after a tornado that Luella and I finally became close friends. The tornado struck on a Sunday afternoon.The gentle breeze transformed into a strong wind, and thick gray clouds filled the sky. Gradually, the tornado took shape, starting as a thin rope and growing into a large black funnel (漏斗). My entire family gathered in the bathroom, seeking shelter from the storm. Terrified, I sat close to my mom, knees in my chest. After the storm had passed, our worries and fears were replaced by relief that we were unharmed and that our house had remained undamaged. As I stepped outside, I witnessed the extent of the damage the tornado had caused to our neighborhood. Across the street, a tall tree had fallen, crushing Luella’s garden in front of her yellow house. We hurried over to check on it. Fortunately, her family seemed to be away at the time, and no one was injured. However, her once-beautiful garden was in ruins, with the fallen tree destroying the tulips and debris (碎片) spread everywhere. I could only imagine how heartbroken they must feel seeing this. Then my mom’s usual words rang in my ear, “It is more blessed to give than to receive,” and my family started to think about how we could help. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Just at that moment, Luella’s family returned in their car. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Even after the debris was cleared, I could still sense Luella’s sorrow for her lost garden. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文本主旨 本文通过讲述一个关于邻里互助的故事，展现了在困难时刻伸出援手的重要性。主人公从一个因文化差异而感到孤独的女孩，逐渐成长为一个能够给予他人支持和帮助的人，体现了“给予比接受更有福”的主题。 词汇积累 fit in - 适应 responsibility - 责任 delicate - 精美的 tornado - 龙卷风 funnel - 漏斗 debris - 碎片 heartbroken - 心碎的 blessed - 福气的 nursery - 苗圃 replant - 重新种植 续写分析 衔接句 第一段衔接：Just at that moment, Luella’s family returned in their car.（自然过渡到Luella一家回到现场的情景。） 第二段衔接：Even after the debris was cleared, I could still sense Luella’s sorrow for her lost garden.（自然过渡到清理后的情感描写。） 情节合理性 第一段：描述Luella一家回到现场，主人公和家人主动提供帮助，情节符合邻里互助的逻辑。 第二段：描述主人公和家人帮助Luella重新种植花园，情节合理且充满温情。 情感铺垫 第一段：通过Luella看到花园被毁后的反应，铺垫了悲伤的情感。 第二段：通过主人公和家人帮助Luella重建花园，情感逐渐转向温暖和希望。 情感走向 孤独与适应：主人公初到美国感到孤独，难以融入。 恐惧与担忧：龙卷风来袭时的恐惧和担忧。 悲伤与失落：Luella看到花园被毁后的悲伤。 温暖与希望：主人公和家人帮助Luella重建花园，带来温暖和希望。 成长与感悟：主人公通过这次经历学会了给予的重要性。 主题深化 本文通过主人公的经历，深化了“给予比接受更有福”的主题。主人公从一个孤独的女孩成长为一个能够给予他人支持和帮助的人，体现了在困难时刻伸出援手的重要性。同时，故事也展现了邻里之间的温暖和团结，传递了积极向上的价值观。 下水文：篇一 Just at that moment, Luella’s family returned in their car. They pulled up to the house, and Luella’s face fell as she saw the destruction. Her mother got out of the car and hugged her tightly, tears in her eyes. My family and I rushed over to offer our help. My dad and uncle helped to move the larger pieces of debris, while my mom and I started to clear away the smaller bits. Luella stood there, looking at the ruins of her beloved garden, and I could see the sadness in her eyes. I didn’t know what to say, but I knew we had to do something to help her feel better. Even after the debris was cleared, I could still sense Luella’s sorrow for her lost garden. She kept touching the broken flower pots and the crushed tulips, as if trying to remember how beautiful they once were. My mom had an idea and suggested we plant some new flowers together. We went to the local nursery and picked out some new tulip bulbs and a few other flowers. With the help of my family and some neighbors who had come over, we replanted the garden. Luella’s face lit up as she saw the new flowers being planted. She even helped with the planting, and by the end of the day, her garden was starting to look beautiful again. I realized that sometimes, the smallest acts of kindness can make a big difference. 下水文：篇二 Just at that moment, Luella’s family returned in their car. As they pulled up, Luella’s eyes widened in shock at the sight of her ruined garden. Her father quickly got out of the car and assessed the damage, while her mother comforted her. I could see the tears welling up in Luella’s eyes as she looked at the broken tulips and scattered debris. My family and I immediately went over to help. My dad and uncle worked on removing the larger pieces of debris, while my mom and I focused on clearing the smaller bits. Luella stood there, looking lost and heartbroken. I felt a pang of sadness for her and knew we needed to do more than just clean up. Even after the debris was cleared, I could still sense Luella’s sorrow for her lost garden. She kept touching the broken flower pots and the crushed tulips, as if trying to hold on to the memories of how beautiful they once were. My mom, sensing Luella’s distress, suggested we replant the garden together. We went to the local nursery and picked out some new tulip bulbs and a few other flowers. With the help of my family and some neighbors who had come over, we started replanting. Luella’s face gradually brightened as she saw the new flowers being planted. She even joined in, and by the end of the day, her garden was starting to look beautiful again. I realized that sometimes, the smallest acts of kindness can bring the biggest smiles. 参考答案1 Just at that moment, Luella’s family returned in their car. They pulled up to the house, and Luella’s face fell as she saw the destruction. Her mother got out of the car and hugged her tightly, tears in her eyes. My family and I rushed over to offer our help. My dad and uncle helped to move the larger pieces of debris, while my mom and I started to clear away the smaller bits. Luella stood there, looking at the ruins of her beloved garden, and I could see the sadness in her eyes. I didn’t know what to say, but I knew we had to do something to help her feel better. Even after the debris was cleared, I could still sense Luella’s sorrow for her lost garden. She kept touching the broken flower pots and the crushed tulips, as if trying to remember how beautiful they once were. My mom had an idea and suggested we plant some new flowers together. We went to the local nursery and picked out some new tulip bulbs and a few other flowers. With the help of my family and some neighbors who had come over, we replanted the garden. Luella’s face lit up as she saw the new flowers being planted. She even helped with the planting, and by the end of the day, her garden was starting to look beautiful again. I realized that sometimes, the smallest acts of kindness can make a big difference. 参考答案2 Just at that moment, Luella’s family returned in their car. Empathy surged within me as I saw the shock and disbelief on their faces. I couldn’t help but approach Luella, tightly holding her hands and saying, “I’m so sorry for your loss, but thankfully you’re all right.” She weakly nodded at me, still appearing puzzled by the devastating sight. My family volunteered to help hers clean up the mess, cutting down the branches and removing the fallen trees from the yard. To uplift Luella’s spirits and bring her comfort, I tried my best to cheer her up while tidying the garden with her, during which my own joyful personality seemed to revive a bit. Even after the debris was cleared, I could still sense Luella’s sorrow for her lost garden. My heart went out to her, knowing how much she had cherished those tulips that she had devoted so much energy to. Yet now, they were all gone. Determined to restore the beauty that once thrived, I suggested that we rebuild the garden. Luella agreed delightedly. With each bulb carefully planted and watered, the new tulip seedlings once again filled the garden, which symbolized the sprouting of a new friendship between us, as well as the turning that I finally got embraced by this new environment. My mom was right: it’s more blessed to give than to receive because when you give. You may receive something unexpected in return. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$