特训15 书面表达之个人经历与生活感悟（名校好题精选10篇）- 2025年中考英语二轮热点题型归纳与变式演练（上海专用）

命学科网 www,z×xk,Com 让教与学更高效 特训15书面表达之经历感悟类 (精选好题10篇) 1.Write at least60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标 点符号不占格。) 你学校的英语专栏将在下月进行主题为My social activity(我的社会实践活动)”的分享。请你写一篇 短文，介绍你参与校外的某一次社会实践活动，并谈谈你的感受。 (注意：短文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) 2.rite at least60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标 点符号不占格。) 初中的学习即将结束。你所在的学校正在筹备毕业典礼(graduation ceremony),部分学生将有机会在毕 业典礼上演讲，演讲的主题是“我和我的校园”。假如你是Jo,请从“课程、校园文化、场馆设施”等中选择 一项内容，结合自己的经历，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你的感受，给出你的建议。演讲稿开头已经写好。 1/6 命学科网 WwW,z××k,Com 让教与学更高效 3.Write at east60 words according to the given situation..(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标 点符号不占格。) 善于合作是一种重要能力。近期你校英语社团将举办以“Work Together,.Enjoy Teamwork”为主题的征 文活动，请写一篇短文，介绍你与他人合作的一次活动经历并谈谈你的感受。活动内容可以是taking part in a ball match,doing social practice,making a poster... 注意： (I)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息： (2)照抄阅读语篇不得分。 4.Write a passage of at least60 words about the topic“I solved a problem.”(以“我解决了一个问题"为题， 根据以下情境写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。) 在日常生活中，我们经常会碰到各种问题或挑战。请结合你的个人经历，说说你酒到的问题或挑战， 以及你是怎么成功解决的？你的感受或收获是什么？ 注意：1，短文中不得出现考生姓名、学校名等相关信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄本卷语篇不得分。 2/6 命学科网 www,z×xk,C0m 让教与学更高效 5.根据所给的题目“One thing I can do better我可以做得更好的一件事"写不少于60个词，标点符号不占 格。 注意：短文中不得出现考生的中文姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 提示：你可以结合自身的情况，谈谈在哪件事上可以有待改进。打算如何做得更好。如：在学习中某个方 面；在生活习惯中某个习惯；在生活技能中某种技能等。 以下单词和短语仅供参考： improve:give up;plan to;develop One Thing I Can Do Better 6.Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic"Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test'”.(以“复习准各期间有没有必要减少体育活动时间"为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号 不占格。) 期中检测即将来临，同学们都在认真复习准备，有些同学认为复习时间紧张，可以减少一部分体育活 动时间，有些同学认为没有必要，请你谈谈你的看法。 注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test? 3/6 命学科网 www,z×xk,Com 让教与学更高效 7.Write at least60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标 点符号不占格) 滴水穿石，铁杵成针，都向我们展示了坚持的力量。坚持，定会给我们带来收获。请回忆在过去一年 里你坚持做的一件事，以One thing I persisted in doing”为趣，简单描述，并谈谈收获和感受。 8.Write a passage of at least60 words about the topic“A problem I solved”.(以“我解决的一个问题”为题， 根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 在日常生活中，我们时常面临各种挑战和问题。请分享一次你的亲身经历，谈谈你是如何运用具体的策略 或方法，成功解决问题或找到答案的。 (注意：1.短文中不得出现考生处名、校名及其他相关信息。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。) 4/6 命学科网 WwW,z××k,Com 让教与学更高效 9.Write at least60 words according to the given information.(根据以下信息写一篇不少于60个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。) 短文中的主人公Lk©用日复一日的苦练和不言放弃的信念战胜了先天性疾病引发的障碍，取得了看 似不可能的成功，体验到克服困难之后的喜悦。 你在生活或学习中遭遇过什么困难，请结合自身经历，谈谈你是如何克服困难，并取得了何种收获或 成功。 注意： 1,文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。 l0.Write at least60 words on the given topic“Actions speak louder than words”.(根据所给题目“行动胜于 空谈”写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 常言道“行动胜于空谈”，一个行动往往胜过千言万语，我们在生活与学习中需要牢记这一点。请结合你的经 历或是所见所闻，谈谈你的心得感悟。 写作要点： ()围绕“行动胜于空谈”的主题，讲述一则你生活中的小故事。 (2)谈谈你对这件事的心得感悟。 注意：1短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。 5/6 命学科网 www,z×xk,Com 让教与学更高效 6/6 特训15 书面表达之经历感悟类 （精选好题10篇） 1．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation （根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 你学校的英语专栏将在下月进行主题为“My social activity（我的社会实践活动）”的分享。请你写一篇短文，介绍你参与校外的某一次社会实践活动，并谈谈你的感受。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My social activity     At my school, we have held a lot of social practice activities. Last month, I went to the Science and Technology Museum with my classmates. The Science and Technology Museum is a wonderful place for young people to learn. I visited the natural world and found something new. It was amazing. Besides, I did a lot of physics experiments by myself. They help me to put what I have learned into practice. I saw a lot of interesting things in the museum, too. I learned a lot. I was pretty excited and happy at that time. In my opinion, it is a good way for us to learn something useful out of the books in museums. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：主要内容包含两个方面：活动做了什么和自己收获。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明你最喜欢的实践活动是什么； 第二步，介绍具体做了什么； 第三步，谈一谈自己的收获。 [亮点词汇] ①a wonderful place 一个很棒的地方 ②put what I have learned into practice把所学的东西付诸实践 [高分句型] ①In my opinion, it is a good way for us to learn something useful out of the books in museums.（固定句型：It is a good/great way for sb to do sth） 2．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation （根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 初中的学习即将结束。你所在的学校正在筹备毕业典礼(graduation ceremony)，部分学生将有机会在毕业典礼上演讲，演讲的主题是“我和我的校园”。假如你是Joe，请从“课程、校园文化、场馆设施”等中选择一项内容，结合自己的经历，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你的感受，给出你的建议。演讲稿开头已经写好。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My dear teachers and classmates,     I’m very glad to make a speech on the graduation ceremony. It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful schoool. The school life is full of happiness and sadness, which is a precious treasure in my life.     I still remember when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. Here I want to say, thank you, my best teacher. Finally, I hope that all the students will have a good future and our school will become better and better.     Thank you for listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是演讲稿； ②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我很荣幸在毕业典礼上发言”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——从“课程、校园文化、场馆设施”等选一项内容、结合经历、谈感受、给建议等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达感谢您的聆听”的谢意。 [亮点词汇] ①make a speech做演讲 ②Little by little一点一点地 ③a precious treasure一个珍贵的财富 [高分句型] ①The school life is full of happiness and sadness, which is a precious treasure in my life. (定语从句） ②I hope that all the students will have a good future and our school will become better and better. (宾语从句) 3．Write at east 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 善于合作是一种重要能力。近期你校英语社团将举办以“Work Together, Enjoy Teamwork”为主题的征文活动，请写一篇短文，介绍你与他人合作的一次活动经历并谈谈你的感受。活动内容可以是taking part in a ball match, doing social practice, making a poster… 注意： (1) 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息； (2) 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Work Together, Enjoy Teamwork Last term, our class took part in a group poster-making activity about environmental protection. At first, we had different ideas about the layout and content. But we quickly sat down, listened to each other’s opinions, and divided the tasks. Some of us searched for information, some designed the layout, and I was responsible for drawing pictures. During the process, we encountered some difficulties, like not having enough materials. However, we worked together to solve the problems. We borrowed materials from other classes and came up with creative solutions. Finally, our poster won the first prize. Through this experience, I deeply felt the power of teamwork. Everyone’s strength is limited, but when we work together, we can achieve much more. We can learn from each other, share the workload, and overcome difficulties more easily. Teamwork makes the journey more enjoyable and the results more rewarding. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：要求介绍自己与他人合作的一次活动经历，并表达自己的感受，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己与他人合作的活动经历； 第二步，介绍自己与他人合作中遇到的困难； 第三步，介绍自己与他人合作中是如何克服困难的，并说明团队合作的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②at first最初 ③search for搜索 [高分句型] Everyone’s strength is limited, but when we work together, we can achieve much more. (when引导的时间状语从句) 4．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “I solved a problem.”（以“我解决了一个问题”为题，根据以下情境写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。） 在日常生活中，我们经常会碰到各种问题或挑战。请结合你的个人经历，说说你遇到的问题或挑战，以及你是怎么成功解决的？你的感受或收获是什么？ 注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生姓名、学校名等相关信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄本卷语篇不得分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I solved a problem Once, I was stuck on a math problem. It seemed so hard that I didn’t know where to start. I tried for hours but still couldn’t solve it. Then, I decided to ask my teacher for help. She explained it to me step by step and gave me some tips. With her help, I finally understood it and solved it by myself. I felt so happy and proud. This experience taught me that when I face difficulties, I should keep trying and ask for help if needed. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文为一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：提示问题已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己遇到的问题； 第二步，介绍自己是如何成功解决的； 第三步，表达自己的感受和收获。 [亮点词汇] ① ask sb for help向某人寻求帮助 ② step by step一步一步地 [高分句型] ① It seemed so hard that I didn’t know where to start.（so...that引导的结果状语从句） ② This experience taught me that when I face difficulties, I should keep trying and ask for help if needed.（that引导的宾语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句） 5．根据所给的题目“One thing I can do better我可以做得更好的一件事”写不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。 注意：短文中不得出现考生的中文姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 提示：你可以结合自身的情况，谈谈在哪件事上可以有待改进。打算如何做得更好。如：在学习中某个方面；在生活习惯中某个习惯；在生活技能中某种技能等。 以下单词和短语仅供参考： improve；give up；plan to；develop  One Thing I Can Do Better _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                      One Thing I Can Do Better As we all know, water has been seriously wasted. It’s not easy to change the world, but why not change myself first! One thing I can do better is to stop wasting water. I will never brush my teeth with a running tap. Taking shower instead of bath will help, too. What’s more, water will be reused to water the plants and clean the bathroom. With all these methods available, I believe I can save water and finally save the Earth. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中我可以做得更好的一件事的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出我可以更好地做一件事的话题； 第二步，具体阐述怎样去做好这件事以及带来的影响； 第三步，书写结语。表达“这样的行动能带来美好的结果”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①As we all know众所周知 ②instead of代替 ③what’s more还有 [高分句型] With all these methods available, I believe I can save water and finally save the Earth. (省略that的宾语从句) 6．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test”. (以“复习准备期间有没有必要减少体育活动时间”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 期中检测即将来临，同学们都在认真复习准备，有些同学认为复习时间紧张，可以减少一部分体育活动时间，有些同学认为没有必要，请你谈谈你的看法。 注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test?  Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test? Different students have different ideas.   Some students think that the mid-term test is coming, which can reduce part of the time for sports activities. But I think it is very necessary for students to play sports. We shouldn’t reduce sports time. Playing sports can help us have a strong body and learn more knowledge and enter a better university in the future. So we must exercise more. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，要写出自己的意见。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体引出“在准备考试的时候有必要减少运动时间吗”这个话题； 第二步，具体阐述不同人的意见以及自己的意见； 第三步，写出自己持有此意见的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①play sports做运动 ②help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事 ③in the future在将来 [高分句型] ①Some students think that the mid-term test is coming, which can reduce part of the time for sports activities. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②But I think it is very necessary for students to play sports. (it作形式宾语) 7．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 滴水穿石，铁杵成针，都向我们展示了坚持的力量。坚持，定会给我们带来收获。请回忆在过去一年里你坚持做的一件事，以“One thing I persisted in doing”为题，简单描述，并谈谈收获和感受。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： One thing I persisted in doing Over the past year, I persisted in running every morning. Initially, it was challenging to wake up early and push myself to run, especially on cold or rainy days. However, as time went by, I noticed significant improvements in my physical health and mental well-being. I felt more energetic throughout the day and my stress levels decreased. This experience taught me the importance of perseverance and the positive impact it can have on my life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，介绍自己坚持做的事情是什么； 第二步，描述坚持过程中遇到的挑战和收获； 第三步，表达自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①initially 起初 ②significant improvements 显著的改善 ③manage stress 管理压力 ④perseverance 坚持不懈 [高分句型] Initially, it was challenging to wake up early and push myself to run. (动词不定式作主语) 8．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “A problem I solved”. （以“我解决的一个问题”为题，根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 在日常生活中，我们时常面临各种挑战和问题。请分享一次你的亲身经历，谈谈你是如何运用具体的策略或方法，成功解决问题或找到答案的。 （注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其他相关信息。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A problem I solved A famous saying goes “Whatever difficulties you meet with, never give up half way”. I remember I had difficulty improving my English when I entered junior high school. Though I tried my best to recite the passages, it was still difficult for me to communicate with the native speakers. I couldn’t understand some long sentences in newspaper articles, either. With the tips from my English teacher, I was determined to listen to the English programs over the radio every day and follow it to practice my spoken English. Meanwhile, I picked up some key words to guess the meanings according to the context. “Practice makes perfect”. I made great progress at last. I felt very excited about that. Now I think if a good way is mastered, it will not difficult for anyone to improve English. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：本文主要是分享一次你的亲身经历，谈谈你是如何运用具体的策略或方法，成功解决问题或找到答案的。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细分享一次你的亲身经历，并谈谈你是如何运用具体的策略或方法，成功解决问题或找到答案的； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①have difficulty doing sth.做某事有困难 ②communicate with和某人交流 ③be determined to do sth.下定决心做某事 [高分句型] ①I remember I had difficulty improving my English when I entered junior high school. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②Though I tried my best to recite the passages, it was still difficult for me to communicate with the native speakers. (though引导的让步状语从句) ③Now I think if a good way is mastered, it will not difficult for anyone to improve English. (if引导的条件状语从句) 9．Write at least 60 words according to the given information. (根据以下信息写一篇不少于60个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。) 短文中的主人公Luke用日复一日的苦练和不言放弃的信念战胜了先天性疾病引发的障碍，取得了看似不可能的成功，体验到克服困难之后的喜悦。 你在生活或学习中遭遇过什么困难，请结合自身经历，谈谈你是如何克服困难，并取得了何种收获或成功。 注意： 1. 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I used to be really shy and was afraid of speaking in public. I was always a listener every time when there was a speech contest in our school. I admired others’ confidence and was ashamed of my shyness. To deal with the situation, I began to read aloud at home, practicing in front of a mirror again and again. My parents encouraged me and often worked as the listeners, which gave me great hope. I became more confident than I used to be. With my parents’ encouragement, I took part in an English speech contest. Imagining there was a mirror in front of me, I finished my speech fluently. With exciting tears in my eyes, I hugged my parents tightly. Teachers and other students also cheered me on. Practice makes perfect. Believe ourselves and don’t give up, and we will win. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，开门见山说出自己曾经遇到的困难； 第二步，具体阐述为此做出的努力和改变； 第三步，表达自己的收获和感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①used to be过去常常 ②took part in参加 ③give up放弃 ④deal with解决 ⑤practice makes perfect熟能生巧 [高分句型] ①To deal with the situation, I began to read aloud at home, practicing in front of a mirror again and again. (动词不定式作目的状语) ②My parents encouraged me and often worked as the listeners, which gave me great hope. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) 10．Write at least 60 words on the given topic “Actions speak louder than words”. (根据所给题目“行动胜于空谈”写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 常言道“行动胜于空谈”，一个行动往往胜过千言万语，我们在生活与学习中需要牢记这一点。请结合你的经历或是所见所闻，谈谈你的心得感悟。 写作要点： (1) 围绕“行动胜于空谈”的主题，讲述一则你生活中的小故事。 (2) 谈谈你对这件事的心得感悟。 注意：1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Actions Speak Louder than Words As an old saying goes, actions speak louder than words. The saying shows that taking action is of great importance. Here is a thing happened in my life. When I was a middle school student, I always aspired to achieve better grades and made many plans, but never took action, so I missed the opportunity to enter a good high school. Then I gradually realized that taking action to develop a plan and putting it into practice is very important for me. It not only helps me achieve better grades, but also benefits me in my daily life. In short, I firmly believe that setting detailed goals for the future and taking action to achieve them one by one is very important. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态是“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明行动胜于空谈的重要性，引出话题。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，围绕“行动胜于空谈”的主题，讲述一则你生活中的小故事。 第三步，书写结语，表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①As an old saying goes正如老话所说 ②is of great importance……是非常重要的 ③take action to do sth.采取行动做某事 ④Not only…but also…不仅……而且…… ⑤In short总之 [高分句型] ①The saying shows that taking action is of great importance. (that引导的宾语从句) ②When I was a middle school student, I always aspired to achieve better grades and made many plans, but never took action, so I missed the opportunity to enter a good high school. (when引导的时间状语从句) 11 / 11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$