湖南省大联考2024-2025学年高二下学期3月月考英语试题读后续写救助小猫故事续写 讲义

读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Sweat dripped from Callie’s face as she helped her big brother Briggs load hay bales (干草捆) onto the conveyor (输送机). She wasn’t strong enough to lift them herself, but she could at least help drag them into place. The machine chattered noisily while it carried the bales up to the hayloft, where Callie’s dad stacked them. All was quiet when Callie went inside to feed the horses. But as she filled the water buckets, she thought she heard a faint meow from the hayloft. She climbed the steps to the loft and listened. The sound seemed to be coming from behind the bales. She ran to get her dad and Briggs. Briggs cocked his head. “It’s coming from outside,” he determined. “Just a bird in a tree.” Callie’s dad agreed. “How do you know for sure?” Callie said. “I guess we’ve just got better ears than you,” Briggs joked. But Callie wasn’t convinced. She checked the hayloft again after supper. “Are you stuck in there, kitty?” she said, pressing an ear to the bales. Callie raced back to the house. “I heard it again, Dad! Will you please listen once more?” “All right, Cal,” her dad said, turning off the TV. “I’ll go check while you get ready for bed.” A few minutes later, Dad poked his head into Callie’s room. “The only thing I heard out there was a screech owl,” he said. “So stop worrying.” “OK, Dad,” Callie said. “Thanks for checking.” But she woke in the night thinking about what she’d heard. What if a kitten was trapped behind the bales? She lay on her back, wondering what to do. Finally, she grabbed a flashlight and crept into the barn. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Once in the barn, she shined the flashlight’s beam toward the ladder. _________________________________________________________________ Finally, Callie picked up the scared kitten from the corner of the hayloft. _________________________________________________________________ 救助小猫故事续写 续写分析​ 第一段续写主要描述了 Callie 进入谷仓后，朝着梯子用手电筒照亮，然后一步步爬上梯子进入干草棚。在干草棚里，随着她靠近，小猫的叫声愈发清晰，她通过手电筒的光照，在一堆干草捆后发现了小猫的动静，然后小心翼翼地在干草捆的迷宫中穿行过去。这一段重点在于 Callie 寻找小猫的过程，通过动作描写和心理描写，如 “Taking a deep breath”“her heart pounding with excitement”，展现了她紧张又兴奋的心情。​ 第二段续写是 Callie 找到了小猫，这是一只灰色的、害怕的小猫。Callie 把小猫抱起来，温柔地安抚它，然后带着小猫回到家里。父母被吵醒后看到小猫，认可了 Callie 的坚持。最后小猫成为家庭的一员，成为 Callie 坚定信念的象征。这一段着重刻画了 Callie 救助小猫后的场景，以及小猫融入家庭，升华了故事主题。​ 故事线​ Callie 进入谷仓，准备再次寻找小猫。​ Callie 爬上梯子到达干草棚，听到小猫叫声更清晰，通过手电筒发现小猫踪迹。​ Callie 找到小猫并抱起它，安抚受惊的小猫。​ Callie 带着小猫回家，父母看到小猫，认可 Callie 的行为。​ 小猫成为家庭的一员，象征着 Callie 的坚持。​ 短语​ shine the flashlight beam 用手电筒照亮​ take a deep breath 深呼吸​ step by step 一步步地​ make one's way through 穿过​ pick up 捡起​ hold... close 紧紧抱住​ wake sb. by 被…… 吵醒​ become a member of 成为…… 的一员​ 主旨升华句​ Callie's unwavering belief in her own ears not only saved a little life but also taught her family the importance of perseverance.​ The arrival of the kitten not only added warmth to the family but also served as a reminder that following one's intuition can lead to beautiful discoveries.​ Through this experience, Callie learned that standing up for what she believed in, no matter how small the matter seemed, could have a profound impact.​ The kitten, now a cherished part of the family, was a living testament to Callie's determination and the power of not giving up.​ This adventure with the kitten showed that even a child's simple act of persistence could bring new joy and meaning to an entire family.​ 写作示范一​ Once in the barn, she shined the flashlight’s beam toward the ladder. With a resolute look on her face, she began to climb, each step accompanied by the creaking of the ladder. As she emerged into the hayloft, the meowing echoed louder. She swept the flashlight around, her eyes scanning every nook and cranny. Suddenly, she caught sight of a small, furry figure huddled behind a large hay bale. Her heart leaped with joy as she slowly made her way over, careful not to startle the poor creature.​ Finally, Callie picked up the trembling kitten from the corner of the hayloft. It was a beautiful tabby, its fur soft to the touch. Callie cuddled it close, murmuring words of comfort. “Don't be afraid, little friend,” she said. She carried the kitten down the ladder and rushed into the house. Her parents, roused by the noise, came out to see. When they saw the kitten in Callie's arms, their faces lit up. “You did it, Callie!” her mom exclaimed. From that moment on, the kitten brought endless laughter and love to the family, always reminding them of Callie's indomitable spirit.​ 写作示范二​ Once in the barn, she shined the flashlight’s beam toward the ladder. Mustering up her courage, she started climbing, the old ladder groaning under her weight. As she reached the hayloft, the meowing grew more distinct. She moved the flashlight in a wide arc, searching for the source. All of a sudden, she spotted a slight movement among the bales. She carefully navigated through the maze of hay, her excitement building with every step.​ Finally, Callie picked up the frightened kitten from the corner of the hayloft. It was a tiny black - and - white kitten, its eyes filled with terror. Callie held it gently against her chest, trying to soothe it. “It's okay now,” she cooed. She then carried the kitten down to the house. Her parents, awakened by the commotion, came to the door. When they saw the kitten, they smiled proudly. “You were right all along, Callie,” her dad said. From then on, the kitten became an inseparable part of the family, a daily reminder of Callie's determination to follow her heart. 参考答案 Once in the barn, she shined the flashlight's beam toward the ladder. Her heart pounding, Callie climbed up to the hayloft. She moved carefully between the hay bales, listening intently. Suddenly, she heard a faint meow coming from a far corner. Excited but cautious, Callie inched her way towards the sound, moving hay bales aside one by one. As she neared the source, the meowing grew louder and more desperate. Finally, behind the last bale, she spotted a tiny black and white kitten, its eyes wide with fear. Finally, Callie picked up the scared kitten from the corner of the hayloft. She cradled it gently in her arms, the little kitten shivering all over. It snuggled against her, seemingly relieved to be found. Callie carefully made her way down the ladder and rushed back to the house. She woke her father and brother, proudly showing them the kitten and explaining how she had trusted her instincts. Her family was amazed and proud of her persistence. She decided to name the kitten“Lucky” and vowed to care for it until they could find its owner or, if necessary, give it a permanent home on their farm. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$