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Section Ⅳ Writing—A description of an iconic animal
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are mostly distributed in China
are lovely animals covered in
the same length as their bodies
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As they live in family groups in the forests of mountainous areas
Living in family groups in the forests of mountainous areas
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is suffering from habitat loss
Because of this
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It is urged that the public should promote their awareness
is urged to promote their awareness
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Golden monkeys,which are mostly distributed in China,are lovely animals
covered in golden and a bit grey hair with their tails as the same length as their
bodies.
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Now this endangered animal is suffering from habitat loss and their
population is decreasing,for which/because of which they are under our
country's firstclass protection.
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本单元的写作任务是描写标志性动物,属于描写性说明文。行文时要抓住该动物的主要特征进行描述,要求语言简明扼要,通俗易懂。该文体通常用第三人称,时态以一般现在时为主。
[文章架构]
[必备词汇]
①cute机灵的
②rare稀有的
③fierce凶猛的
④unique独一无二的
⑤endangered濒危的
⑥feed on以……为主食
⑦die out灭绝
⑧be regarded as被看作
⑨typical characteristic典型特征
⑩iconic/symbolic animals标志性动物
[必备句型]
描述动物
①There are many animals in nature.
自然界有许多动物。
②The monkey is one of the most intelligent animals in the wild.
猴子是野生世界最聪明的动物之一。
③Most of the movements of monkeys are in the tree.
猴子多数的活动都在树上。
④The jumping ability of monkeys is amazing to human beings.
猴子的跳跃能力对人类来说是非常惊人的。
表达观点
①We should be aware of the importance of protecting wildlife.
我们应该意识到保护野生动物的重要性。
②In fact,they are an important part of nature.
事实上,它们是自然界重要的一部分。
③No one can deny/doubt that protecting the animals is helpful to humans as well.
没人能够否认/怀疑,保护动物同样有利于人类。
[题目要求]
(2024·宁德高二检测)根据以下要点,写一篇有关濒危动物——金丝猴的短文。
1.栖息地:大部分金丝猴生活在中国。
2.外貌:金黄色,有点灰;尾巴几乎和身体一样长。
3.生活环境:高山密林。
4.生活习性: 主要在树上生活,群居,吃水果、坚果、树叶等。
5.它们的数量减少及原因,呼吁人们保护金丝猴。
注意:1.写作词数应为 80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The Golden Monkey
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[写作步骤]
第一步:审题谋篇
第二步:遣词造句
1.金丝猴主要分布在中国。
Golden monkeys _______________________________.
2.金丝猴是一种可爱的动物,全身长满金色和略带灰色的毛,尾巴和身体一样长。
Golden monkeys _____________________________ golden and a bit grey hair with their tails as _______________________________.
3.(一句多译)由于它们以家庭为单位生活在山区的森林中,它们的大部分活动都发生在树上。
★______________________________________________________,most of their activities occur in the trees.(原因状语从句)
★__________________________________________________,most of their activities occur in the trees.(分词作状语)
4.现在这种濒临灭绝的动物正在遭受栖息地的丧失,它们的数量正在减少。
Now this endangered animal _____________________________ and their population is decreasing.
5.正因为如此,它们受到国家的一级保护。
_______________,they are under our country's firstclass protection.
6.(一句多译)人们敦促公众提高保护这种稀有动物的意识。
★__________________________________________________ to protect this rare animal.
(it作形式主语)
★The public _________________________________ to protect this rare animal.
第三步:词句升级
7.用非限制性定语从句提升句1、2
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8.用定语从句提升句4、5
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第四步:妙笔成篇
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【参考范文】
The Golden Monkey
Golden monkeys,which are mostly distributed in China,are lovely animals covered in golden and a bit grey hair with their tails as the same length as their bodies.As they live in family groups in the forests of mountainous areas,most of their activities occur in the trees.They generally feed upon fruits,nuts as well as leaves.
Now this endangered animal is suffering from habitat loss and their population is decreasing,for which they are under our country's firstclass protection.It is urged that the public should promote their awareness to protect this rare animal.
请你以中国中学生李华的名义为一家英语网站写一篇文章,呼吁世界各地的中学生加入到拯救大熊猫的行列中来。内容包括:
1.对大熊猫的介绍(如外貌特征、生活习性等);
2.大熊猫面临的困境;
3.呼吁大家共同保护大熊猫。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.要求用到提示内容,但不要逐字翻译,行文连贯、流畅、完整。
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【参考范文】
As we all know,giant panda,one of the surviving ancient animals,is regarded as a national treasure of China and loved by people worldwide.
Giant panda is bearlike mammal.Its striking coat of black and white,together with its large body and round face gives it a charming appearance.Look at their black eyes,as if they were wearing a big pair of sunglasses.Giant panda has a greedy appetite for bamboo,without which they can't survive.
Unfortunately,with more and more forests destroyed and most of the bamboo
cut down,it is becoming more and more difficult for giant pandas to find food for themselves.
We eagerly hope that people who care about the conservation of rare animals can help save giant pandas.
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