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Section Ⅶ
Writing—An Opinion Essay
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本单元的写作项目是写一篇正反观点对比类议论文,此类文章的结构一般为:引语(提出问题)—正方观点及论据—反方观点及论据—结论( 个人看法)。
课文展示
Should TV Advertisements For Unhealthy
Products Be Banned?
In many countries,there are already laws which do not allow advertising for tobacco products like cigarettes.In my opinion,we should go further and ban advertisements for any unhealthy products such as alcohol and fried food.
Undoubtedly,unhealthy products harm our health.It is clearly desirable to limit TV advertisements for fast food.The rate of obesity has increased greatly.In some countries,it is second only to smoking as a cause of death.In addition,drinking alcohol results in a wide range of diseases.If children see fewer advertisements on TV of people doing these activities,they are much less likely to try to copy their behaviour.
A reason why people are against the idea is that making the products creates jobs and brings in large amounts of tax.However,surely this is a false argument.The money invested in making these unhealthy products could be used for more worthwhile businesses,such as those that improve our environment.Furthermore,it is not right to make money from activities which harm human health.
To conclude,laws to ban TV advertisements of unhealthy products are beneficial to society.They help to save lives and improve the health of a nation.
写作手法
【文章结构】
第一部分:提出论点,并表达自己的观点
第二部分:解释原因。
第三部分:对所述观点进行总结。
【相关词句】
1.提出争论焦点的常用句型
Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether we can play computer games or not.
最近我们就是否可以打电脑游戏举行了热烈的讨论。
According to a recent survey,fourmillion people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.
依照最近的一项调查,每年有4 000 000人死于与吸烟相关的疾病。
Opinions are divided on the question.
在这个问题上有意见分歧。
2.陈述正/反方观点及论据(理由)的常用句型
Some students are for the idea,while others think otherwise.
一些学生赞成这个想法,而另一些人则不这么认为。
However,there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.
然而,有很多人对这个事情持不同的看法。
It has more disadvantages than advantages.
它弊大于利。
Some hold the view that doing sports can keep fit,while others think that it is a waste of time doing sports.
有些人认为做运动可以强身健体,然而有些人认为运动是浪费时间。
3.归纳总结或发表自己观点的常用句型
Therefore,we can draw the conclusion that the sharp decline of wildlife species resulted from the population growth.
因此,我们可以很自然地得出结论,即野生物种的急剧下降源于人口的增加。
[写作要求]
1.文章要做到要点完整、条理清晰。各段之间层次清楚,以使文章显得有条理。从段落内部的层次上讲,每一段一般又分为三部分:主题句、扩展句和总结句。
2.常用一般现在时。
最近,你班同学就“太空探索是否值得”这一话题展开了一场讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息,用英语写一篇短文,介绍讨论的情况。
30%的同学认为不值得探索
70%的同学认为值得探索
1.离我们及我们的日常生活太遥远
2.浪费金钱。这些金钱本可用来解决地球上的饥饿、污染等问题
1.已使用卫星进行通讯传播、天气预报
2.有望解决地球人口问题、地球能源短缺问题
[审题谋篇]
体裁
议论文(太空探索的争论)
人称
第一和第三人称
时态
一般现在时
结构
第一段:提出问题——太空是否值得探索;
第二段:反对观点及原因;
第三段:赞成观点及原因。
[句式温习]
1.用于太空探索的资金可以用来解决地球的饥饿和污染等问题。
The money is spent on space exploration.It can be used to solve the earth's problems such as starvation and pollution.
2.70%的人认为太空值得探索。
70% think space is worth exploring .
3.我们从中受益匪浅。
We have benefited a lot from it.
4.总有一天,我们可以搬到其他星球去解决人口问题。
We may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day.
5.太空研究将使我们能够找到新的能源来解决地球上的能源短缺问题。
Space research will enable us to find new sources to solve the problem of energy shortages on the earth.
[句式升级]
6.用过去分词作定语改写句1
The money spent on space exploration can be used to solve the earth's problems such as starvation and pollution.
7.用because连接句2和句3
70% think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it.
[连句成篇]
Recently,students in our class have had a discussion on whether space is worth exploring.
30% of us think space exploration is not worthwhile.They think space is too far away from us and our daily life.The money spent on space exploration can be used to solve the earth's problems such as starvation and pollution.
On the other hand,70% think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it,such as using satellites for communication and weather forecast.What's more,with further space research,we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day.Also,space research will enable us to find new sources to solve the problem of energy shortages on the earth.
最近的一项研究发现,在一些国家,80%的学生在学习期间至少有一份兼职工作。请对“学生上学期间是否应该出去兼职?”发表自己的看法。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
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One possible version:
A recent study has found that 80% of the students in some countries have at least a parttime job during their study years.In my opinion,student employment has a positive effect on future career.
Firstly,fresh graduates who already have work experience have better chances of landing a job.Besides,studies show that working learners are more likely to move into a managerial position soon after graduating.
To sum up,a part time job can have positive effects on their lives,from which employed students can gain noteworthy advantages in terms of career path after they graduate.
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