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描述节日庆典经历
描写节日时,主要写出节日名称、节日的重要性、节日日期以及活动等。描写庆祝节日经历时,主要描写活动和心情。
[文章架构]
[亮点词汇]
①celebration n.庆祝;庆祝会
②ceremony n.典礼;仪式;礼节
③cheer v.& n.欢呼,喝彩
④compete vi.比赛,竞赛
⑤competition n.竞争;竞赛
⑥concert n.音乐会;演奏会
⑦feast n.盛宴,宴会
⑧festival n.节日;纪念活动
⑨firework n.烟火 (pl.fireworks) 烟火表演
⑩match vt.使相配 n.比赛,竞赛
⑪participate vi.参加,参与
⑫be on holiday/vacation在度假
⑬dress up穿上盛装;打扮
⑭fall on (some day)(节日等)是在(某天)
⑮on special occasions在特殊场合
⑯set off fireworks燃放烟花/爆竹
[高级句式]
段首句
①As Teachers' Day was approaching,our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for a change this year.
随着教师节的临近,今年为了换一种方式来庆祝这个重要的日子,我们班决定举办一场聚会。
②I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.
我想邀请你下周六和我们一起去附近的敬老院过重阳节。
③As one of the most popular traditional festivals in China,the Spring Festival falls on the first day of the first lunar month.
作为中国最受欢迎的传统节日之一,春节是在农历的正月初一。
主体段落句
①The MidAutumn Festival is a traditional festival of China,which is actually a day for family reunion.
中秋节是中国的一个传统节日,实际上是家人团聚的日子。
②It is believed that the moon is at its brightest at the night of the MidAutumn Festival,when people can admire the moon and enjoy mooncakes.
人们相信中秋节晚上的月亮是最亮的,在那时人们可以赏月和品尝月饼。
③It is said that TombSweeping Day,which usually falls on April 4th to 6th,has a history of several thousand years.
清明节通常在4月4日到6日之间,据说它有几千年的历史。
④The Lunar New Year is a great occasion to the Chinese people.It lasts about the first six days of the year,during which people do not work except for the workers on duty.
农历新年对中国人来说是一个伟大的时刻,春节假期从年初起要持续六天,在此期间,除了值班人员之外人们不用工作。
段尾句
①This will be an unforgettable experience.
这将是一段难忘的经历。
② I will never forget this festival because so many fascinating moments have left a deep impression on me.
我永远不会忘记这个节日,因为许多精彩的时刻给我留下了深刻印象。
③The festival experience made me aware of the importance of family and inspired me to spend more time with my family.
节日的经历让我意识到家庭的重要性,并激励我花更多的时间与家人在一起。
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你以“一个难忘的传统节日”为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.你的经历;
2.你的感悟。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
An Unforgettable Traditional Festival
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[写作步骤]
第一步 审题谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
1.给我印象最深的是去年端午节的一次经历,纪念中国古代伟大的爱国者和诗人屈原。(一句多译)
① What strikes/impresses me most is an experience of last year's Dragon Boat Festival in memory/honour of Qu Yuan,a great patriot and poet in ancient China.(主语从句)
②The thing that strikes/impresses me most is an experience of last year's Dragon Boat Festival to honour Qu Yuan,a great patriot and poet in ancient China.(定语从句)
2.那天早上,我观看了一场龙舟比赛,然后参观了屈原庙。
That morning,I watched a dragon boat race ,and then visited Qu Yuan temple.
3.在那里我了解了他的生活和楚国的历史。
There I learned about his life and the history of Chu Kingdom.
4.他的雄心壮志和对国家的热爱深深地打动了我。(一句多译)
①His ambition and love for the country touched me deeply .(主动语态)
②I was deeply touched by his ambition and love for the country.(被动语态)
③ It was his ambition and love for the country that touched me deeply.(强调句型)
5.后来,我加入了当地人的红歌合唱团,赞美我们的国家。
Later,I joined in a red song chorus with locals to praise our country.
第三步 词句升级
6.用定语从句合并句2和句3
That morning,I watched a dragon boat race,and then visited Qu Yuan temple where I learned about his life and the history of Chu Kingdom .
第四步 妙笔成篇
An Unforgettable Traditional Festival
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【参考范文】
An Unforgettable Traditional Festival
What strikes/impresses me most is an experience of last year's Dragon Boat Festival in memory/honour of Qu Yuan,a great patriot and poet in ancient China.
That morning,I watched a dragon boat race,and then visited Qu Yuan temple where I learned about his life and the history of Chu Kingdom.I was deeply touched by his ambition and love for the country.Later,I joined in a red song chorus with locals to praise our country.
Now I can't help thinking if Qu Yuan were still alive,how proud he would feel for our prosperous country.
(2023—2024学年山东临沂高一期末)假如你是李华,你校上周六成功举办了校园民俗音乐节。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动目的和内容;
2.活动感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A Campus Folk Music Festival
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【参考范文】
A Campus Folk Music Festival
Last Saturday I witnessed an extraordinary campus folk music festival held in our school hall,whose aim was to promote excellent traditional Chinese culture and enrich our school life.
The opening ceremony started at 9:00 a.m.with a speech delivered by our headmaster.Then followed various wonderful performances given by talented students,including singing,dancing and instrumental music playing.The highlight was the interactive sessions where audience can sing along.
This festival was truly a feast which not only opened up a stage to showcase the students' talents and passion,but also enhanced our taste of the folk music.
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