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Section Ⅶ Writing—A Survey Report
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调查报告属于应用文,一般是用简洁、生动的语言把图中所提供的信息准确、完整地表达出来,还需要分析调查结果,揭示其规律,找出解决问题的对策。调查报告主要包括:介绍、主要发现、结论。
课文展示
Actions Taken by City Residents to Help Protect the Environment
Last August, city officials interviewed about 500 residents to find out people's attitudes to protecting the environment and what actions they had taken.Here are the results:
——调查结果
As the diagram shows, the percentage of those who felt that they needed to help protect the environment is as high as 96%.Very few (4%) felt it was not necessary.More than half of those who took part in the survey had done four of the five activities in the past month.Around 90% had tried to recycle waste such as glass, metal and paper;and more than two thirds (70%) had tried to cut back on the use of disposable packaging,such as plastic honey bottles, and butter and yoghurt containers.Also, the majority of residents had cycled or walked.
——积极的发现
Unfortunately, not as many who took part had taken action to save water and energy in their homes.Just under 40% (38%) tried to save water when they were washing dishes or taking showers.Just over half (51%) tried to save energy by reducing the use of air conditioning or turning off lights.
——消极的发现
To sum up, it seems that almost all who took part understood the need to help take care of the environment.Most of them tried to recycle waste, ride bikes or walk, and reduce the use of disposable packaging.However, not as many were saving water and energy.This indicates that the residents needed to pay more attention to these two activities.
——调查结论
写作手法
【文章结构】
【相关词句】
►常用开头语
1.Last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on “who is your idol”.
上周,我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题,在2 600名学生中进行了一次调查。
2.I have recently made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls in my class about their purpose of getting on the Internet.
最近我对我班的30名男生和30名女生进行了调查,看他们上网做什么。
3.Last week,we did /conducted /carried out a survey among all the students in our school on the time they spent in sleeping every day.
上周,我们就每天的睡眠时间对全校学生进行了调查。
4.Recently, a survey has been done to find out how middle school students spend their pocket money.
目前,针对中学生如何花掉零用钱进行了一项问卷调查。
5.Last week, a survey was carried out among the students in our school on “Your Safety”.
上周,在我们学校的学生中进行了一项关于“你的安全”的调查。
►常用结尾语
1.As for myself, Thomas Edison is my idol, because his inventions have greatly changed our life.
至于我自己,托马斯·爱迪生是我的偶像,因为他的发明大大地改变了我们的生活。
2.As far as I am concerned, effective measures should be instantly taken to help students to spare time for sleeping.
就我而言,应该立即采取有效措施来帮助学生获得睡觉的时间。
3.In my opinion, we should take action to help students to make good use of study time.
在我看来,我们应当采取措施帮助学生好好利用学习的时间。
4.As far as I am concerned, effective measures should be instantly taken to ensure our safety so that we can grow up healthily and securely.
就我而言,应该立即采取有效措施来确保我们的安全,这样我们才能健康安全地成长。
[注意事项]
1.确定体裁:调查报告属于应用文。
2.确定主体时态:写调查报告时通常使用一般过去时或一般现在时。注意在同一篇文章中主体时态要一致。
3.确定中心人称:调查报告主要介绍调查对象的相关情况,因此中心人称通常是第三人称。有时也可使用第一人称。
一项调查显示,年轻人在睡前玩手机时,主要包括以下几项活动:
看新闻
23%
阅读电子书
20%
玩游戏
18%
刷微博
17%
聊天
15%
看视频
7%
请你根据以上内容按以下要求写一篇调查报告。
要求:1.介绍调查结果;
2.表明自己的观点。
[审题谋篇]
1.确定体裁:本文为调查报告;
2.确定人称:本文的主要人称应为第一人称和第三人称;
3.确定时态:时态应以一般现在时为主。
[词汇热身]
1. reveal 显示
2. surf the Internet 网上冲浪
3. the latest news 最新消息
4. chat with online friends 与网友聊天
5. function 运行,活动
6. have a negative impact on 对……有负面影响
7. do harm to 损害;伤害
8. limit the time 限制时间
[句式温习]
1.很多年轻人在睡觉前玩手机。
A large number of young people play with their cellphones before going to sleep.
2.23%的人上网浏览最新消息。
23% of them surf the Internet for the latest news.
3.20%的人阅读电子书。
20% read electronic books.
4.有足够的睡眠对我们的身体机能很重要。
It is important to have enough sleep for our body to function well.
5.我们应该限制花在手机上的时间。
We should limit the time we spend on cellphones.
6.我们可以有更多的时间睡觉和与他人交流。
We can have more time for sleep and communication with others.
[句式升级]
7.用while 连接句2和句3
23% of them surf the Internet for the latest news while 20% read electronic books.
8.用As we all know 升级句4
As we all know,it is important to have enough sleep for our body to function well.
9.用it is clear that 和 so that 升级句5和句6
It is clear that we should limit the time we spend on cellphones so that we can have more time for sleep and communication with others.
[连句成篇]
A recent survey has revealed that a large number of young people play with their cellphones before going to sleep.23% of them surf the Internet for the latest news while 20% read electronic books.18% play games and 17% check their microblog.15% chat with online friends and 7% watch video programs.
As we all know,it is important to have enough sleep for our body to function well.However, playing with cellphones has a negative impact on our health.For example, playing with cellphones before going to sleep does harm to our eyes and cervical spine.It is clear that we should limit the time we spend on cellphones so that we can have more time for sleep and communication with others.
我们是寄宿制学校,大部分学生住校,也有一部分学生选择走读。我校开展了一次问卷调查,主题为“我们是否应该住校?”
下表是本次调查的结果,请你就此结果写一篇调查报告,并适当阐述自己的观点。
70%的同学赞成住校
30%的同学反对住校
1.有利于培养我们良好的学习和生活习惯
1.学校餐厅无法满足多样需求
2.节约了时间
2.学生住校不利于了解外界信息
3.可与老师及同学充分交流,有利于共同进步
3.和家人交流少
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Recently,a survey has been made in our school on whether we students should live on campus in a boarding school.The opinions are divided.
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One possible version:
Recently,a survey has been made in our school on whether we students should live on campus in a boarding school.The opinions are divided.
70% of us are in favor of it as living on campus can help develop a good habit of studying and living.Besides,they can spend less time on the way to school and home.What's more,they can consult teachers and discuss with classmates,which will contribute to their improvement.
However,30% of them are against it for the reasons below:First,the school canteen can't meet the various needs of students.Second,if they live on campus,they will have little chance to get in touch with society.Last,without parents accompanying,they communicate less with them.
Personally,I think it's necessary to live on campus because we can live,study and play together happily.
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