Unit4 Our animal friends Writing 写作课件-2024-2025学年沪教版英语七年级下册

7B Unit 4 Our animal friends Writing You are expected to: 1) know the basic structure of writing stories about animals. 2) finish an outline of stories about animals. 3) write stories about animals that you know. Teaching objectives: What can we learn from the video? Lead-in: After watching this video, please discuss with your partners: 1) Do you know any stories happened between amazing animals and humans? 2) Where did these stories come from? 3) Can you share some stories that you know about amazing animals? Lead-in-Group work: Read the story and explain what happened. When Sam went swimming in the sea last month, he saw a shark. However, a dolphin helped him get back to the beach. Pre-writing: What do you think of this title? Is it a good title? an eye-catching title an introduction time markers past tense Pre-writing: six elements verb phrases or short sentences in past tense Writing: Prepare for your own Writing: Writing: Step 1: Time: Place: Character(s): Beginning: Middle/Body: End: Step 2: Writing: Step 3: an eye-catching title an introduction Writing: 【Sample】 书面表达( 15分) 《Teens》杂志正在征集有关动物勇救人类的英勇故事，请你以金毛狗火灾中勇救主人为题，完成一篇征文。 内容包括: 1.时间地点人物：2021年3月17日，黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市一住宅，爷爷和金毛狗； 2.事件起因：家中烟灰缸突然滑落，烟灰缸里（未熄灭的）烟头引燃毯子； 3.事件经过：姥爷在屋里睡觉，金毛在客厅。 4.事件结尾：机智的金毛就把起火的毯子拖到阳台，并成功用水浇灭明火。 写作要求：语句连贯，词数80词左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总次数。 Mar. 17, 2021 in Qiqihar a dog and an elderly man rested on his sofa; fell asleep, started a small fire noticed the danger; pulled it to the balcony; put out the fire with water led ... to the balcony, were safe and sound, spread online,  praised the smart dog Sample: Step 1: Step 2: Sample: rested on his sofa; fell asleep, started a small fire noticed the danger; pulled it to the balcony; put out the fire with water led ... to the balcony, were safe and sound, spread online,  praised the smart dog Step 3: Sample: rested on his sofa; fell asleep, started a small fire noticed the danger; pulled it to the balcony; put out the fire with water led ... to the balcony, were safe and sound, spread online,  praised the smart dog an eye-catching title Brave dog saves owner from a fire Brave dog saves owner from a fire A story of bravery and intelligence has caught people’s attention in China. On 17 March 2021, an elderly man in Qiqihar was resting on his sofa when he carelessly dropped some ash from his cigarette onto a blanket. Unfortunately, the man fell asleep, and the blanket started burning. There was a lot of dark smoke in the room. Luckily, the man’s dog noticed the danger. Instead of just barking, the dog decided to save his owner. He grabbed the blanket with his mouth and pulled it over to the balcony. There, the dog pushed over the water bowl to stop the fire. The brave dog probably saved his owner’s life. When the man’s grandson returned home, the dog led him to the wet balcony and showed him the burnt blanket. The boy was shocked, but then he realized that everyone was safe and sound. This amazing story quickly spread online, and many people praised the smart dog for his bravery. Sample: Homework: 必做作业 以小组为单位，互读自己写的故事，进行二次修改、重写，并选出本组优秀故事。 选做作业 把故事制作成网帖，可以适当配上插图。 Thank you! $$Dolphins, there are many stories pertaining to dolphins rushing to the aid of a human b, especially when they are attacked by a shark. This just so happens to be one of those stories. In August of two thousand, seven recreational surfer tadd interest was attacked suddenly by a great White shark at the protected beach, marino state beach, california. The shark attacked as he was laying belly down on his surfboard, protecting his vital organs by flaying the skin from his back, like us, self described banana peel and chewing the leg to the bone. IT was, at this point, a pot of bottles. Nose dolphin appeared, forming a circle of protection around interests and preoccupy the shark while he could make his way back to the shore.