专题09 书面表达 【期中必刷15篇】-2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期期中考点大串讲（人教版）

2024-2025学年八年级下期期中考点大串讲（人教版） 专题09 书面表达（15篇） 同步作文（5篇） 1．假如你是张丽，你的美国笔友Anna近来总感觉不舒服，昨天又得了重感冒，请你写一封电子邮件问候她，并给她提一些建议叫她照顾好自己的身体。 要求：1.至少提出三条建议；2. 80词左右，可以适当发挥；电子邮件的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Anna, I’m sorry to hear that ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, hang Li 【答案】 Dear Anna, I’m sorry to hear thatyou have a bad cold. You are often ill, so I want to give you some advice. First, you should see a doctor to find out what’s wrong with you. Second, you should change your living habits. For example, you should get enough sleep and shouldn’t study late into the night. You should take exercise every day. Third, it’s important to eat healthily, so you shouldn’t eat too much junk food. Please look after yourself. I hope you get better soon. Yours, Zhang Li 【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如have a bad cold，give you some advice，see a doctor，into the night.，for example,，make people healthier，take exercise，too much，look after yourself./ get better soon等。而First, you should see a doctor to find out what’s wrong with you. / Third, it’s important to eat healthily, so you shouldn’t eat too much junk food.等复杂从句结构的运用，既丰富了短文内容，又使表达很有层次感，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。 2．为了更好地举办冬奥会，市冬奥办现在面向全社会招聘身体健康、热爱体育运动、乐于助人，并能熟练运用英语和外国友人交流的志愿者。假如你叫李华，请根据以下提示和要求，写一封应征冬奥会志愿者的自荐信。 提示:1. Why do you want to be a volunteer? 2. What can you do? 要求: 1. 自荐信须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 信中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名； 3. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam, Thank you for reading my letter. I’d like to be a volunteer for Winter Olympic Games. Because___________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Sir or Madam, Thank you for reading my letter. I’d like to be a volunteer for Winter Olympic Games. Because I like sports. In school, I often take part in all kinds of activities. I am good at English. I listen to English news on the radio every day and can communicate with foreign friends freely. I am outgoing, too. I can get along with them and give them a hand whenever they are in need. I think volunteer work is great. I hope I can be a member of Winter Olympic Games. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，要求写一篇自荐信； ② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作时应围绕所给提示信息写作，并适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：文章开头已经给出，应承接文章开头，接着写出想成为志愿者的原因及你擅长做的事情； 第二步：对自荐信进行总结，写出你的期待和愿望。 [亮点词汇] ① take part in 参加，参与 ② communicate with sb 和某人沟通，交流 ③ give them a hand 帮助某人 ④ get along with 和某人相处 [高分句型] ① I can get along with them and give them a hand whenever they are in need.（用whenever引导时间状语从句） ②. I hope I can be a member of Winter Olympic Games. （hope后省略that的宾语从句） 3．假如某报社正在以“We Should Do Chores at Home”为题进行征文比赛活动，请你根据表格中的提示内容用英语写一篇短文参加比赛。 现存现象 你常做的家务 你的体会和看法 许多学生不愿做家务，原因如下： 1. 认为做家务是父母的工作； 2. 做家务占用学习的时间。 ●整理床铺 ●浇花 ●打扫房间 ●倒垃圾 …… …… 要求：1. 表达准确，语句通顺； 2. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 3. 词数80左右。 We Should Do Chores at Home ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 We Should Do Chores at Home Now many students don’t like doing chores at home. There are mainly two reasons. One is that they think it’s their parents’ job to do chores at home. The other is that they think doing chores takes up their time for study. But I think we should help to do chores at home because our parents are busy with their work and are often tired after work. I often do chores at home, like making the bed, watering the flowers, cleaning the rooms, taking out the rubbish and doing the dishes. I think doing chores makes us relaxing. I also feel great to help my parents. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，写短文表达在家应该做家务这一看法。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍许多学生不愿做家务这一现象并分析原因； 第二步，介绍自己的观点并列举自己常做的家务； 第三步，谈谈自己的感受及看法。 [亮点词汇] ①do chores 做家务 ②one ... the other ... 一个……另一个…… ③take up 占据 ④be busy with sth. 忙于某事 [高分句型] ①There are mainly two reasons.（There be句型） ②One is that they think it’s their parents’ job to do chores at home.（that引导表语从句；省略that的宾语从句；it固定句式） ③But I think we should help to do chores at home because our parents are busy with their work and are often tired after work.（because引导的原因状语从句） 4．汤姆最近很苦恼，他觉得父母总是忙于工作，很少陪他，所以他上网发帖求助。假设你是玛丽，请根据下面的要点提示，给汤姆回帖提些建议。 提示： (1) 应该理解父母，他们努力工作是为了全家过得更好；(2) 可以和父母谈谈，他们可能会在下个节假日陪你；(3) 帮父母做些家务；(4) 找其他朋友玩，就不会感到孤独。 要求： (1) 语句通顺，表达正确；(2) 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；(3) 70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Tom, I know you are upset these days. Here is some of my advice for you. _________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will have a good time. Mary 【答案】 Tom, I know you are upset these days. Here is some of my advice for you. First, you should understand your parents. They work hard because they want your family to live a better life. Second, you could talk to your parents about the problem. Maybe they could stay with you the next holiday. Third, you should try to help your parents do some chores. And you could go out to visit your friends and have fun with them. Then you won’t feel lonely. What do you think of my advice? I hope you will have a good time. Mary 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据汤姆的烦恼以及所给提示内容给汤姆提建议，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，要针对汤姆的烦恼提建议； 第二步，根据提示内容具体描述所给建议； 第三步，希望建议对汤姆有用。 [亮点词汇] ①live a better life过更好的生活 ②talk to交谈 ③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 [高分句型] ①They work hard because they want your family to live a better life.（because引导的原因状语从句） 5．某英文报以An Unforgettable Day (《难忘的一天》) 为题，面向中学生开展征文活动，请你写一篇短文参加此次活动。 内容包括： 1、哪一天让你感到难忘； 2、什么事（开心的、伤心的或是有特别意义的，……）让你感到那天难忘； 3、那一天你经历了什么； 4、那天的经历对你有什么影响或者你有什么感受。 要求： 1、80-100 词； 2、文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 An Unforgettable Day I’ll never forget June 11th, 2012.It was a sunny day. On the way to school, my friend did something rude to me. It made me sad. What’s worse, I got a “C” in my favorite subject. After school, I went home unhappily. It was dark in the room. Suddenly the lights were on, and I heard the song “Happy birthday”. I was surprised to see many people and a big cake. “Oh, it’s my birthday.” I was so excited and happy. It was my first time to have a birthday party. I’ll never forget that day. 【分析】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求根据自己的回忆以一篇叙事性短文,记述自己难忘的一件事情。动笔前先要认真阅读写作提示,注意从四个方面进行叙述。由于是回忆性短文，故用过去时态较多，注意时态和时间状语的搭配。写作中选取自己比较熟悉的内同写，注意适当使用连词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系,不要犯语法书写的低级错误。 【详解】写作题目为难忘的一天，从题目可知，这一天已经过去，作文应该主要使用一般过去时。同时可以使用适当的副词来加强作文情感，比如文中用到的suddenly，生动地表达了事情的转折。以及一些好的句型：I was surprised to see many people and a big cake.句型结构为be+adj.+to do sth。 期中真题（10篇） 1．（23-24八年级下·河北石家庄·期中）学生需要做家务吗？某校针对这个问题对200个学生做了一项调查。请根据下面的调查结果写一篇报道。 有必要（30%） 没有必要（70%） 1.多数学生不会干家务活。 1.学生的任务是学习而不是劳动。 2.做家务可以锻炼吃苦耐劳的精神。 2.学习任务繁重，没有做家务的时间。 3.做家务可以体验父母的艰辛。 3.做家务活是父母的事情。 你的看法：…… ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Is it necessary for students to do housework at home? We did a survey about this. According to the result, we know 70% of the students think it is unnecessary for students to do housework. Most students can’t do housework. They think it is the job of their parents. As students, their duty is to study hard. They have no time to do housework because of the heavy homework. On the other hand, 30% of the students think it is good for them to do housework, because they can learn how to look after themselves by doing it, and know how hard their parents are. It also helps them to develop the spirit to work hard. I think we students should spend some time on housework, no matter how busy we are. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍调查结构，并介绍自己对做家务的看法，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍学生的看法以及原因； 第三步，介绍自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①according to根据 ②because of因为 ③look after照顾 ④spend time on sth.花费时间在某物上 [高分句型] ①They think it is the job of their parents. (宾语从句) ②On the other hand, 30% of the students think it is good for them to do housework, because they can learn how to look after themselves by doing it, and know how hard their parents are. (because引导的原因状语从句) 2．（23-24八年级下·重庆开州·期中）参加志愿者服务活动可以帮助青少年学习新技能，增强沟通能力和社会责任感。今年暑假，我校将进行社会实践活动。请根据下面表格中的内容提示，以“My Volunteer Work Plan”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你选择的活动项目及活动计划，并谈谈参加志愿者服务活动的意义。 Volunteer Work Help in the city library Clean up the city parks Hold a charity bazaar (义卖) Do volunteer work in a hospital Visit the old people’s home … 要求 1. 可选择表格中的1—2个活动项目，也可自拟活动项目。 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，词数80—100。 My Volunteer Work Plan Volunteer work is becoming more and more important in our growth. What’s your volunteer plan for this summer vacation? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Volunteer Work Plan Volunteer work is becoming more and more important in our growth. What’s your volunteer plan for this summer vacation? I am going to do some volunteer work. I will help to clean up the city parks. Of course, I will ask more people to join me. I will call up my friends and ask them to come. We will pick up the litter, the plastic bags and other waste things. I hope our city will be more beautiful. Besides, I am going to visit sick kids in hospital. I love children and enjoy getting along with them. I will sing for the kids at the city hospital to cheer them up. I hope they can be better soon. Not only do I feel good about helping other people, but also I get to spend time doing what I love to do. All in all, I will enjoy myself during the summer holiday. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，写出假期计划是做志愿工作； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“清理城市公园”、“在医院做志愿者”等展开，适当补充，丰富细节； 第三步，书写结语，表达做志愿工作的收获和感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be going to do sth.打算做某事 ②help to do sth.帮助做某事 ③clean up打扫 ④ask sb. to do sth.叫某人去做某事 ⑤call up召集 ⑥pick up捡起 ⑦enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事 ⑧get along with sb.和某人相处 ⑨Not only…but also…不仅……而且…… ⑩enjoy oneself玩得开心 [高分句型] ①I hope our city will be more beautiful.（省略that的宾语从句） ②Not only do I feel good about helping other people, but also I get to spend time doing what I love to do. (倒装句和宾语从句) 3．（22-23八年级下·广东东莞·期中）人的一生当中会经历很多事情，其中有一些事情总是让我们终身难忘。请你从学校、家庭或社会生活方面回忆自己的经历，以“An Unforgettable Event”为题目讲述一件令你难忘的事。 内容包括： 1. 事件发生的时间、地点和涉及的人物； 2. 事件的详细经过； 3. 你从这件事中学到或感悟到了什么。 温馨提示： 词数80左右，看清题目，按要求写作，短文须包括所有内容要点，文章中不能出现真实学校、班级和姓名。 An Unforgettable Event _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 An Unforgettable Event There are many unforgettable events in my life. I would like to share the one when I started my life at middle school. I was nervous and worried at the first English class because I was not good at English at all. However, my new English teacher asked us to make a conversation with our new partner. I felt so nervous that I couldn’t say a word. Luckily, my partner Lily, a friendly girl, taught me patiently and helped me to speak some simple sentences. After that, we became good friends and she often helped me with my English. I was sad at that time. But I also feel that I was lucky. For I met my good friend. And I know that we should help others in need, maybe there will be surprise for us. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，以“想要分享一件难忘的事情”引出写作主题； 第二步，根据要点要求，介绍自己难忘的事情，包括时间地点，人物等信息，注意时态应为过去时，介绍事情的详细经过，应该突出难忘的特点； 第三步，结尾总结，并表明自己的收获和感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to 愿意 ②help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事 ③in need 需要帮助的 ④ask sb to do sth 叫某人做某事 [高分句型] ①I was nervous and worried at the first English class because I was not good at English at all.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②I felt so nervous that I couldn’t say a word.（so...that引导结果状语从句） 4．（23-24八年级下·广西北海·期中）假如你是John，你的好朋友Mike最近与父母的关系不太融洽，学习压力也大，感到很焦虑。请你给他写一封信，提一些建议。 内容要点： 1. 主动和父母交流； 2. 在家主动帮忙做家务，比如倒垃圾……； 3. 学会放松，比如：进行体育运动，和朋友闲逛……； 4. …… 注意： 1. 内容必须包含以上要点； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 4. 词数：80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Mike, I’m sorry to hear that______________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, John 【答案】 Dear Mike, I’m sorry to hear that you can’t get on with your parents and have too much pressure about school recently. Here is some advice for you. Firstly, you should communicate with your parents about your feelings. Secondly, you should offer to help with chores like taking out the rubbish at home so that they will feel happy. I think your relationship will be better. Thirdly, you should learn to relax, such as playing sports and hanging out with friends. I think these activities can help you lower your stress. Finally, you should try your best to study and learn to face your grades bravely. I hope my advice will be helpful.   Yours, John 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作主旨； 第二步，针对Mike的问题提出建议； 第三步，书写结尾，表达期望。 [亮点词汇] ①get on with 与……友好相处 ②communicate with 和……交流 ③offer to do sth. 主动提出做某事 [高分句型] ①Secondly, you should offer to help with chores like taking out the rubbish at home so that they will feel happy.（so that引导目的状语从句） ② I think these activities can help you lower your stress. （宾语从句） 5．（23-24八年级下·海南海口·期中）中国著名导演兼演员贾玲在电影《热辣滚烫》里，通过坚持不懈地体育锻炼和饮食调整，减重50公斤，实现惊人的蜕变。贾玲的经历引发了人们对健康生活方式的讨论，请你以“My healthy life”为题，谈一谈自己的健康问题以及你如何改善健康的经历，呼吁更多的人养成健康的生活方式。 要求： 1. 必须包含所给提示词，并做适当拓展； 2. 语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确，书写规范； 3. 100词左右 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 4. 文中不得出现真实的个人及学校信息。 My healthy life A healthy lifestyle is very important. So if we don’t feel well, we need to change our lifestyle. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My healthy life A healthy lifestyle is very important. So if we don’t feel well, we need to change our lifestyle. In the past, I didn’t feel well because I was too fat. The doctor said I ate too much fast food and I’ve decided to make a change. First of all, I started to get up and go to bed on time every day. I stopped staying up too late, because we teenagers need about eight hours of sleep every day to keep energetic. Then, it’s important to keep a balanced diet. This means I should eat a lot of different kinds of food and plenty of fresh fruit and vegetables. Besides, I began to stay away from junk food. That’s bad for my health. What’s more, not only do I need to eat healthy food, but I also need to exercise in a proper way every day. For example, I can run for 30 minutes every morning or play sports after school. Exercise makes me stronger and helps me relax. Now I feel very fitter and healthier. In a word, health is wealth. Keeping healthy is very important for us. I hope everybody can live a healthy life. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的健康问题； 第二步，具体阐述自己是如何改善健康； 第三步，最后表达总结。 [亮点词汇] ① decide to do sth决定做某事 ② stay up熬夜 ③ in a word总之 [高分句型] ①In the past, I didn’t feel well because I was too fat.（原因状语从句） ②I hope everybody can live a healthy life.（宾语从句） 6．（23-24八年级下·黑龙江哈尔滨·期中）假如你是李华，你在美国的表弟(Peter)最近和他妈妈的关系很紧张。请根据以下提示给他写一封电子邮件，指出他的问题，并告诉他如何和妈妈相处。 写作要点： 1．对他现在的状况表示担心。 2．指出他的问题： (1)不承认(admit)错误。 (2)不听妈妈的建议，不愿意和妈妈沟通。 (3)不理解妈妈，不愿意做家务。 3．告诉他如何和妈妈相处。 写作要求： 1．不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3．字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4．至少80词。 Dear Peter, How are you going? _____________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Peter, How are you going? I’m very worried about you because you had a very bad relation with your mum these days. I know your mistakes and now I want to point them out. You never admit your mistakes when doing something wrong. What’s worse, you don’t want to follow your mum’s advice or communicate with her. In addition, you neither understand her nor are willing to do housework. That’s the reason why you can’t get along well with your mum. To solve your problem, I have several suggestions. First of all, show love to your mum. Mum is the person who is worth our love because she is always putting our needs before hers. Second, listen to her suggestions wisely. She knows more than we know. Her suggestions must be good for us. We must understand her. If you can follow my advice, I believe you and your mum can have a good relation. I’m looking forward to hearing your good news. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，对他现在的状况表示担心； 第二步，指出他的问题； 第三步，给出建议； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①point out指出 ②follow one’s advice听从某人的建议 ③neither…nor既不是……也不是 ④get along well with sb.与某人相处得很好 ⑤wisely明智地 ⑥look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①That’s the reason why you can’t get along well with your mum.(why引导定语从句) ②I believe you and your mum can have a good relation.(省略that的宾语从句) 7．（23-24八年级下·河南新乡·期中）当我们在生活中遇到烦恼的时候，首先应该试着控制自己的情绪，因为情绪可以影响我们生活的方方面面。心情不好时，我们要多与父母、朋友沟通，学会笑对人生。 请根据以上提示，以How to Deal with our Problems 为题写一篇短文，阐述一下我们应该怎样面对生活中的烦恼。100个单词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How to Deal with our Problems It is very common for us to get into trouble. And it often makes us feel bad.___________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How to Deal with our Problems    It is very common for us to get into trouble. And it often makes us feel bad. Do you know what to do at this time? First of all, try to control your feelings because bad feelings can bring you other bad effects. Then believe in yourself. You can speak to yourself,“ I’m the best in the world. I can deal with anything.” You can also do something for others to help you forget your problems. Last, when you have some problems, you’d better talk about them with your parents or friends. They may help you get out of trouble. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我们遇到麻烦是很常见的。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——控制情绪、多沟通、学会笑对人生等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“父母或朋友可能会帮助你走出困境”的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①believe in相信 ②you’d better你最好 ③get out of trouble摆脱困境 [高分句型] ①First of all, try to control your feelings because bad feelings can bring you other bad effects. （because引导的原因状语从句） ②Last, when you have some problems, you’d better talk about them with your parents or friends. (when引导的时间状语从句） 8．（22-23八年级下·湖南怀化·期末）父母是世界上最爱我们的人。作为中学生，我们可以做一些力所能及的事情关爱我们的父母。请你以“How to Care for Our Parents”为题，根据以下提示和要求，联系生活实际，用英语写一篇短文，介绍关爱父母的方式。 提示：     1.和父母一起锻炼，帮助父母做家务； 2.告诉父母吃健康的食物，保持充足的睡眠； 3.分享我们的校园生活，与他们更亲密。 要求： 1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） How to Care for Our Parents As we all know, our parents love us more than anyone else in the world._____________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How to Care for Our Parents As we all know, our parents love us more than anyone else in the world. They try to offer the best life and education to us, so they have too much pressure. As their children, learning to care for our parents is what we should do. Firstly, we can do sports with them to help them keep healthy and do housework as much as possible at home. Secondly, we should tell them to eat healthy food and not to stay up late so that they can get enough sleep. Last but not least, we should share our school life with them and get closer to them. All in all, we should care for our parents and love them as they love us. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍关爱父母的方式，可适当发挥，注意语句通顺，意思连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，表达父母对我们的爱； 第二步，根据提示内容具体介绍我们应该如何关爱自己的父母； 第三步，书写结语，进行总结。 [亮点词汇] ①too much pressure太多压力 ②keep healthy保持健康 ③stay up late熬夜 ④last but not least最后但并非最不重要 [高分句型] ①As their children, learning to care for our parents is what we should do. (what引导表语从句) ②Secondly, we should tell them to eat healthy food and not to stay up late so that they can get enough sleep. (so that引导目的状语从句) 9．（23-24八年级下·江西赣州·期中）昨天下午3点下起了大雨，请你根据下面思维导图的提示，写一篇英语短文，讲述你和你的几位朋友当时正在做什么事情。 注意事项：1. 词数在80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数） 2. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并适当发挥。 It was beginning to rain heavily at 3:00 p.m. yesterday. __________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 It was beginning to rain heavily at 3:00 p.m. yesterday. When the rain came, Helen was shopping in the supermarket. Ben was sweeping the floor at home at the time of the rain. Neither of them got wet. But David wasn’t so lucky. He was making his way home by bike on the street. I hope he wouldn’t catch a cold. As for Jim, things didn’t work out well. He and his father were staying in their car because of the heavy traffic. I think they must have been worried and upset. As for me, I was watching TV at home at that time. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要是一般过去时和过去进行时； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来具体讲述你的几位朋友当时正在做什么事情； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别说明你的几位朋友当时正在做的事情； 第三步，讲述你自己当时正在做的事情。 [亮点词汇] ①neither两者都不 ②catch a cold感冒 ③heavy traffic拥堵的交通 [高分句型] ①When the rain came, Helen was shopping in the supermarket.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②I hope he wouldn’t catch a cold.（省略that的宾语从句） 10．（23-24八年级下·湖北十堰·期中）假如你是李华，上周你们班举行了一次关于“学生要不要在家做家务”的辩论赛，请你根据以下要点写一篇短文。 要点：1.有的学生认为做家务浪费时间，是父母的责任； 2.有的学生则认为每一个人都有义务做家务，做家务也是一种锻炼。 3.说说你的观点，以及你在家做哪些家务。 要求：1. 你的辩论短文至少包含上述3个要点项； 2. 文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名； 3. 80 — 100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数），可适当发挥。 Last week, our class had a discussion about whether to do housework at home. They have different ideas, of course.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Last week, our class had a discussion about whether to do housework at home. They have different ideas, of course. Some students think that doing housework is a waste of time, and it is their parents’ responsibility. Some students believe that everyone has a duty to do housework, and doing housework is also a form of exercise. In my opinion, students should do housework at home. When I have free time at home, I always clean up my bedroom. I also help with some cooking. It is very interesting to cook delicious and special food for my family. Sharing the housework with our parents means showing love to them. So I suggest all of us should take action from now on. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，题干已给出。 第二步，介绍学生的不同意见。 第三步，表达自己的观点，以及自己在家做哪些家务。 第四步，书写结语，倡议大家做家务。 [亮点词汇] ①a waste of time浪费时间 ②In my opinion在我看来 ③take action行动 [高分句型] ①When I have free time at home, I always clean up my bedroom. (when引导时间状语从句) ②It is very interesting to cook delicious and special food for my family. (it作形式主语) / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年八年级下期期中考点大串讲（人教版） 专题09 书面表达（15篇） 同步作文（5篇） 1．假如你是张丽，你的美国笔友Anna近来总感觉不舒服，昨天又得了重感冒，请你写一封电子邮件问候她，并给她提一些建议叫她照顾好自己的身体。 要求：1.至少提出三条建议；2. 80词左右，可以适当发挥；电子邮件的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Anna, I’m sorry to hear that ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, hang Li 2．为了更好地举办冬奥会，市冬奥办现在面向全社会招聘身体健康、热爱体育运动、乐于助人，并能熟练运用英语和外国友人交流的志愿者。假如你叫李华，请根据以下提示和要求，写一封应征冬奥会志愿者的自荐信。 提示:1. Why do you want to be a volunteer? 2. What can you do? 要求: 1. 自荐信须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 信中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名； 3. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam, Thank you for reading my letter. I’d like to be a volunteer for Winter Olympic Games. Because___________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3．假如某报社正在以“We Should Do Chores at Home”为题进行征文比赛活动，请你根据表格中的提示内容用英语写一篇短文参加比赛。 现存现象 你常做的家务 你的体会和看法 许多学生不愿做家务，原因如下： 1. 认为做家务是父母的工作； 2. 做家务占用学习的时间。 ●整理床铺 ●浇花 ●打扫房间 ●倒垃圾 …… …… 要求：1. 表达准确，语句通顺； 2. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 3. 词数80左右。 We Should Do Chores at Home ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．汤姆最近很苦恼，他觉得父母总是忙于工作，很少陪他，所以他上网发帖求助。假设你是玛丽，请根据下面的要点提示，给汤姆回帖提些建议。 提示： (1) 应该理解父母，他们努力工作是为了全家过得更好；(2) 可以和父母谈谈，他们可能会在下个节假日陪你；(3) 帮父母做些家务；(4) 找其他朋友玩，就不会感到孤独。 要求： (1) 语句通顺，表达正确；(2) 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；(3) 70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Tom, I know you are upset these days. Here is some of my advice for you. _________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will have a good time. Mary 5．某英文报以An Unforgettable Day (《难忘的一天》) 为题，面向中学生开展征文活动，请你写一篇短文参加此次活动。 内容包括： 1、哪一天让你感到难忘； 2、什么事（开心的、伤心的或是有特别意义的，……）让你感到那天难忘； 3、那一天你经历了什么； 4、那天的经历对你有什么影响或者你有什么感受。 要求： 1、80-100 词； 2、文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 期中真题（10篇） 1．（23-24八年级下·河北石家庄·期中）学生需要做家务吗？某校针对这个问题对200个学生做了一项调查。请根据下面的调查结果写一篇报道。 有必要（30%） 没有必要（70%） 1.多数学生不会干家务活。 1.学生的任务是学习而不是劳动。 2.做家务可以锻炼吃苦耐劳的精神。 2.学习任务繁重，没有做家务的时间。 3.做家务可以体验父母的艰辛。 3.做家务活是父母的事情。 你的看法：…… ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24八年级下·重庆开州·期中）参加志愿者服务活动可以帮助青少年学习新技能，增强沟通能力和社会责任感。今年暑假，我校将进行社会实践活动。请根据下面表格中的内容提示，以“My Volunteer Work Plan”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你选择的活动项目及活动计划，并谈谈参加志愿者服务活动的意义。 Volunteer Work Help in the city library Clean up the city parks Hold a charity bazaar (义卖) Do volunteer work in a hospital Visit the old people’s home … 要求 1. 可选择表格中的1—2个活动项目，也可自拟活动项目。 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，词数80—100。 My Volunteer Work Plan Volunteer work is becoming more and more important in our growth. What’s your volunteer plan for this summer vacation? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（22-23八年级下·广东东莞·期中）人的一生当中会经历很多事情，其中有一些事情总是让我们终身难忘。请你从学校、家庭或社会生活方面回忆自己的经历，以“An Unforgettable Event”为题目讲述一件令你难忘的事。 内容包括： 1. 事件发生的时间、地点和涉及的人物； 2. 事件的详细经过； 3. 你从这件事中学到或感悟到了什么。 温馨提示： 词数80左右，看清题目，按要求写作，短文须包括所有内容要点，文章中不能出现真实学校、班级和姓名。 An Unforgettable Event _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（23-24八年级下·广西北海·期中）假如你是John，你的好朋友Mike最近与父母的关系不太融洽，学习压力也大，感到很焦虑。请你给他写一封信，提一些建议。 内容要点： 1. 主动和父母交流； 2. 在家主动帮忙做家务，比如倒垃圾……； 3. 学会放松，比如：进行体育运动，和朋友闲逛……； 4. …… 注意： 1. 内容必须包含以上要点； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 4. 词数：80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Mike, I’m sorry to hear that______________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, John 5．（23-24八年级下·海南海口·期中）中国著名导演兼演员贾玲在电影《热辣滚烫》里，通过坚持不懈地体育锻炼和饮食调整，减重50公斤，实现惊人的蜕变。贾玲的经历引发了人们对健康生活方式的讨论，请你以“My healthy life”为题，谈一谈自己的健康问题以及你如何改善健康的经历，呼吁更多的人养成健康的生活方式。 要求： 1. 必须包含所给提示词，并做适当拓展； 2. 语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确，书写规范； 3. 100词左右 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 4. 文中不得出现真实的个人及学校信息。 My healthy life A healthy lifestyle is very important. So if we don’t feel well, we need to change our lifestyle. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（23-24八年级下·黑龙江哈尔滨·期中）假如你是李华，你在美国的表弟(Peter)最近和他妈妈的关系很紧张。请根据以下提示给他写一封电子邮件，指出他的问题，并告诉他如何和妈妈相处。 写作要点： 1．对他现在的状况表示担心。 2．指出他的问题： (1)不承认(admit)错误。 (2)不听妈妈的建议，不愿意和妈妈沟通。 (3)不理解妈妈，不愿意做家务。 3．告诉他如何和妈妈相处。 写作要求： 1．不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3．字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4．至少80词。 Dear Peter, How are you going? _____________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7．（23-24八年级下·河南新乡·期中）当我们在生活中遇到烦恼的时候，首先应该试着控制自己的情绪，因为情绪可以影响我们生活的方方面面。心情不好时，我们要多与父母、朋友沟通，学会笑对人生。 请根据以上提示，以How to Deal with our Problems 为题写一篇短文，阐述一下我们应该怎样面对生活中的烦恼。100个单词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How to Deal with our Problems It is very common for us to get into trouble. And it often makes us feel bad.___________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（22-23八年级下·湖南怀化·期末）父母是世界上最爱我们的人。作为中学生，我们可以做一些力所能及的事情关爱我们的父母。请你以“How to Care for Our Parents”为题，根据以下提示和要求，联系生活实际，用英语写一篇短文，介绍关爱父母的方式。 提示：     1.和父母一起锻炼，帮助父母做家务； 2.告诉父母吃健康的食物，保持充足的睡眠； 3.分享我们的校园生活，与他们更亲密。 要求： 1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） How to Care for Our Parents As we all know, our parents love us more than anyone else in the world._____________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（23-24八年级下·江西赣州·期中）昨天下午3点下起了大雨，请你根据下面思维导图的提示，写一篇英语短文，讲述你和你的几位朋友当时正在做什么事情。 注意事项：1. 词数在80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数） 2. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并适当发挥。 It was beginning to rain heavily at 3:00 p.m. yesterday. __________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（23-24八年级下·湖北十堰·期中）假如你是李华，上周你们班举行了一次关于“学生要不要在家做家务”的辩论赛，请你根据以下要点写一篇短文。 要点：1.有的学生认为做家务浪费时间，是父母的责任； 2.有的学生则认为每一个人都有义务做家务，做家务也是一种锻炼。 3.说说你的观点，以及你在家做哪些家务。 要求：1. 你的辩论短文至少包含上述3个要点项； 2. 文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名； 3. 80 — 100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数），可适当发挥。 Last week, our class had a discussion about whether to do housework at home. They have different ideas, of course.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$